2000 câu trắc nghiệm tổng hợp Tiếng Anh 2025 có đáp án (Phần 11)
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1. Tự luận
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Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

People have mixed arguments on whether advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. People are of the opinion that advertising is just a way to entice more customers to buy their products without a clear idea about its quality. I somehow confer with this statement. Companies spend millions of dollars on ads to boost their sales without giving customers a clear picture about the quality of the product. People buy these products solely because of the advertisements and sometimes later regret the purchase. Companies entice customers by offering discounts, cashbacks, even vouchers for their next purchase. As a result, people buy such products in bulk. It thereby helps companies to make a sale and boost their number. I have come across several advertisements that captivate the reader’s attention by printing 80% or 90% discounts in large fonts. These are ways to captivate the reader's attention and force them to make a sale. For example, when we go out to buy clothes, instead of buying a single piece of clothing that is highly priced. We are often attracted to stores that have a sale sign hung at their door. Seeing the low prices we impulsively buy several pieces of clothing, without checking their quality. The same goes while buying any product that is marked a price lower than the MRP. It only adds to the company's profit but is a major setback for the consumers. Scratch cards, vouchers, cashbacks are another advertising scams. Offering a 10-15 percent discount on buying products that are above 1 or 2k, forces customers to buy these products. The discount offered is almost negligible if customers are forced to purchase products above a certain cost. Even though advertisements make us aware of the different products available in the market. It is also sometimes techniques used by companies to lure in the customers. Moreover, I believe customers must not impulsively make a purchase solely based on advertisement. There is some critiquing required in such cases from the customer's end as well.

Sample 2:

TV, radio or even roadside hoardings we see advertisements all around us. Advertisements are a great way to sell a product and boost the number of sales. Even social media nowadays is used as a platform for advertising. Companies believe that advertising is a powerful medium to entice their customers, make a sale, however neglecting the feedback of the customers. I do not believe that every company is just trying to make a sale and boost their numbers. There are some out there that are promoting quality as well. Purchasing items on big e-commerce platforms like Myntra, Flipkart, Amazon, is a complete waste of time.

In a year they hold several discount offers which is only to entice customers to buy stock that they are unable to sell. Selling the old stock usually has defective products, at least 60 percent of the time the products are defective. By the time we initiate a return, the item is already out of stock. Companies use several tactics to attract customers. Gaudy colors, captions, videos or even hiring celebrities to promote the sale season are all a part of their advertising technique. What we do not understand is that they are solely trying to make a sale and not promoting the quality of the products. Make-up companies leave no stone unturned to sell their products. Fairness creams almost never work. The color of a person is hereditary and has to do with the melanin production. Women are still lured into buying them due to the misleading advertisements. Women buy such products in bulk believing that would bring significant changes in their skin. However, fairness creams, sunscreen lotion with 50 plus SPF are all a scam; they never work 100 percent. Advertisements are a means of making people aware of the different products out there so that they can choose accordingly. I believe it is also the customer’s responsibility to first analyze and read other people’ s reviews before purchasing any product that too in bulk. Customers shouldn’t be tempted by the catchy advertisement, instead focus on the quality of the product so that their money is not wasted.

Sample 3:

In our day-to-day life we are encircled by advertisements. Ads make us aware of the different range of products available in the market but are also sometimes misleading. It is an unfair notion of companies to make their ads as attractive as possible to tempt customers to buy more products and boost their sales numbers. We are surrounded by ads. Social media, televisions, radio, newspapers, websites, all are clustered with ads. Some have discounted offers, cash backs, scratch cards, thereby forcing customers to click on the particular link and make a purchase. People are also now using apps like youtube to lure in the customers to buy their products. Google has such algorithms that clicking on ads links can also help companies earn money. Anyway, as advertisements have become a trend company are also spending more money on making their ads as appealing as possible. I believe these advertising tactics somewhat get to people and they make an impulsive purchase. Youngsters are the easy target for these companies. They are easily lured into making a purchase. Children are attracted by the toys that they see in advertisements and thereby force their parents to buy the product. Of course, children do not understand the concept of quality and it is hard for parents to refuse their request. I believe customers need to be more vigilant while buying products. They should watch out for the reviews posted by other customers, if they are buying a product in bulk. In the case of an offline purchase companies should also have a return policy of a week, so that disappointed customers can return back the products. The products must also be under warranty so that any defects or faults can be rectified, and customers are satisfied with the product.

Sample 4:

Advertisements play an important role in informing individuals about the availability of products. Thus, they are the primary source of information and motivating people for shopping. However, I believe that adverts encourage individuals to purchase items in bulk. In this essay, we will analyse how adverts make use of offers to persuade people to buy products wholesale.

To begin with, most of the companies provide some deals on buying a greater number of objects. A good illustration for this is the lux company which agrees to give soap free on purchase of two soaps. By advertising such proposals, people are induced to buy extra soaps than actually required. Thus, it is apparent that the aim of such a proposition is to invoke people for acquiring objects in large number rather than quality products.

In addition, some companies provide some prizes on buying their product. For instance, they announce a free abroad trip for those who are able to find a hidden code on the cover of the item. With the hope of getting an opportunity to travel abroad, individuals keep on buying the product either until the offer expires or until they win a trip. Therefore, the theory of adverts focusing on selling products in large numbers is difficult to debunk.

After analysing the purpose of adverts, it is obvious that by offering gifts they provoke society by buying excess things rather than quality. As it is seen that people prefer shopping for those goods which provide some gifts rather than goods of good quality. It is hoped that the government will enforce some regulations on the adverts for the product for declaring unnecessary gifts. 

Sample 5:

Today, many people are becoming convinced that advertising is more concerned with encouraging bulk purchases than with encouraging the production of quality goods through competition.

Advertising can be viewed from two standpoints. One is that it is primarily concerned with getting people to purchase items that they would not otherwise buy. The other is that it continues to inform consumers, thereby promoting competition between producers and service providers. I believe that the truth lies somewhere between the two.

Many kinds of advertising nowadays clearly encourage large purchases, in particular through offering consumers such deals as “two for the price of one”, offering large containers at a lower cost, or through offering substantial discounts for purchasing several of the same products at once. Such items could include everyday household goods, washing powder for example, or items that are regularly consumed more than one at a time, such as cans of drinks. In fact, many enterprises successfully specialize in supplying goods in bulk to consumers. The idea is that people will consume more quickly if they have many of the items at home rather than having to go out and buy the items individually every time they need them. 

On the other hand, some products are naturally not available for bulk purchase. This is especially true of items that are particularly expensive or items that a person is unlikely to change for new ones in a relatively period of time, for example cars and houses. 

Advertisements for such products are more likely to stress the quality of the product than its price, since most people will not simply go for the cheapest one, but for one that meets their expectations in other ways.

To conclude, I believe that advertisers should take the market for their products into consideration when advertising and decide accordingly whether they wish to focus on selling in bulk or on competing on the basis of the quality of their products.

Sample 6:

Whether it is on TV, radio or hoardings at the side of the road, advertisements have become part of our lives. Advertising is a powerful and persuasive medium. I agree with the former half of the given statement that adverts encourage people to buy in quantity. However, I disagree that adverts do not promote quality. I shall put forth my arguments to support my views in the following paragraphs.

On the one hand, advertisements make us pile up things in the home which we may never ever use. For example, we get lured by the one-on-one scheme that companies promote just to sell their old stock in bulk. For example, recently, I bought three pairs of jeans of Levis brand because there was a two-on-one offer. What I did not realise then was that the designs were outdated and defective. Now those jeans are just occupying space in my almirah.

Because of advertisements, sometimes we buy what tempts us without the insight of what we need actually. Impressive images, videos, or captions are bound to leave an imprint on us. For example, the media is flooded with advertisements for beauty products, and they all claim to make you fair in a few days. Women, and these days, even men are crazy about these things and buy these things even without consulting their dermatologist.

On the other hand, advertisements are very crucial given the fast pace of life today. The advertisements open our eyes to all the latest facilities and trends and with that give us the chance and opportunity of choosing from the wide range of products available for we have little time to make discoveries about what is required. Advertising links producers and consumers by providing relevant information on the latest products and services. Thanks to advertising, we know that there are so many nice things available. Moreover, an overwhelming majority of consumers are sensible enough to consider their options before they decide on a particular item.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that adverts promote quantity, but they tell us about quality too. The onus lies in us to look into our real needs and not be swayed by adverts.

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Some people argue that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

The purpose of advertising is to tell the consumer about any new product or service or any new promotion on the existing product and service. We need it so we can make good decisions when we go shopping. Advertising tells us when new and improved products become available and lets us know which ones have the best price.

Through advertisements, we learn about new products. For example, many grocery stores now sell prepackaged lunches. These are very convenient for busy parents. They can give these lunches to their children to take to school. Busy parents don’t have time to look at every item on the store shelf, so without advertisements, they might not know about such a convenient new product.

Even products we are familiar with may be improved, and advertising lets us know about this. Most people use cell phones, but new types of cell phone service become available all the time. There are different plans that give you more hours to talk on the phone, you can send text messages and photos, and next week probably some even newer type of service will be available. By watching advertisements on TV, it is easy to find out about new improvements to all kinds of products.

Advertisements keep us informed about prices. Prices change all the time, but everyone can look at the ads in the newspaper and see what the latest prices are. Advertisements also inform us about sales. In fact, some people buy the newspaper only in order to check the prices and plan their weekly shopping.

Advertisements improve our lives by keeping us informed about the latest products developments and the best prices. Advertisements serve a useful purpose.

Sample 2:

I think that everyone can divide all advertising products and services into useless ones and useful ones. It is like looking through an information desk when you pay attention to those messages that interest you. Take me for example.

I do not like jewellery. It does not mean I do not have it at all, I have a couple of inexpensive rings as gifts from my parents. I just think people pay too much attention to this stuff. I believe it is the result of mass advertising. Every day when I am watching TV, listening to the radio or reading the paper I notice many ads about getting an expensive ring, chain, necklace or earrings. From my point of view, these kinds of advertising contaminate people's minds. In this case, you are encouraged to buy things you do not really need. They make you believe you need such products in order to succeed or be happy.

From the other side, I think that advertisements of the new detergents with up-to-date formulas to help you maintain your cloth in perfect conditions, the new cars with some extra futures that make your travelling more comfortable and sports goods that make your life healthier may help you to improve your life.

Recently my husband and I saw an ad on the Internet about a very interesting and inexpensive vacation to Japan for a week. Is not it awesome? We like travelling. So now we are planning to find out more about it and, maybe, make reservations. I believe that, without advertisements, we would be unaware of plenty of opportunities that may make our life happier, easier and less stressful.

My point is that every person has his own scale of values. So if he is vegetarian he will consider an ad about meat products useless for him.

Sample 3:

In a literal sense, sdvertising is an art of showcasing a product to its future consumers. When a company or a person advertises a product, he is conveying how the product would benefit the consumer with its unique and best features. Since the inception of consumer markets merchants have been using sdvertising and marketing to sell their product and increase their reach to maximum consumers. I am in absolute discord with the statement that advertising insists on people buying things they do not need. In my view, advertising is a key tool in the market mechanism and can benefit customers and ultimately merchants in several ways like spreading awareness, increasing competition, discourage monopoly and help the overall economy.

Advertising has helped and is continuing to help spread the right information and makes a consumer cognizant of what is available in the market. It helps drive the competition upwards, benefiting the end customer by getting varied options to choose. For example, when 'Colgate' came in the market as the first toothpaste, consumers did not have any other option other than 'Colgate' until other companies like 'Close-up' started advertising their product. This resulted in a boost in the competition which ultimately slashed the prices of the product. Thus, advertising plays a very important role in engaging the end customer such that the buyer gets the best worth of what he is spending. While a consumer is the end target and beneficiary of any product produced by a merchant, a consumer is also the best judge of the decisions he takes in terms of what he wants to buy. In my opinion, it is inappropriate to blame the advertising for an increased consumer spending. To curb the unnecessary spending both people and government have to work collectively. People need to be wary of their spending and pay heed to their finances by managing them smartly. A government can play its part in authorising and monitoring the right contents to be published to the public. Hence, right and smart advertising can help a nation and its population in great ways by exploiting the benefits of advertising.

To draw the conclusion, barring a few disadvantages advertising can be used as a tool to enhance the growth of an economy by increasing the spending, bringing the right products to the consumer, boosting the competition. Even the government can use smart adverts to make people aware of managing their finances and increase financial literacy. All in all, I would recommend healthier advertising to benefit the consumer, merchant and ultimately the world economy.

Sample 4:

I agree with the viewpoint that “advertising anchorages us to buy things that we really do not need.” Another word for advertisement is ‘a tool of marketing strategy’. To introduce their product or services or to promote their product or services, this advertisement will be highly useful.

If we have never seen an advertisement of a product and first time see that product in the market, we never want to buy. That is, we do not like to just try. If we have already seen that product in the advertisement, we may want to buy it and see how it works. That is by seeing an advertisement over and over again, we indirectly become familiar with that product before we buy and use it. To make us familiar with the products, the product owners make sure we watch their advertisements again and again.    

In the advertisement, they show only the advantages of the product. That is an advantage for the marketers, but a disadvantage for the customers. While the marketing people encourage us to buy the things, we need to identify its disadvantages only after experiencing the product or services.  

Some products are really essential for our life while some are not at all essential. Sometimes we purchase products that are optional for us. We may experience a new detergent powder since it was telecasted several times.  This is the insisting part of advertisements on customers’ mind.

Each customer is different. All are not the same. The same product will not convince all the public. Some products target children, kinder joy, chocolates, toys, cartoon products and etc. Even though parents know that a product is not good for their children, they are insisted on buying the product by the children. Children get attracted to a product after they see the advertisement on television. Finally, I would conclude that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.               

Sample 5:

Promotion of new products is appealing to customers. People watch them in electronic media and in newspapers and feel that it will be useful for their needs. On the other hand, we often waste our money and time after observing the fascinating advertisement. In my opinion, it is useful for market trends. The advertisement has multidimensional impacts on economics and society, its benefits outweigh disadvantages.

Most people do not like monotonous life. They keep on changing their surroundings and personality. The requirements of humans change with their ages. The advertisement is the method to introduce new products to people. Every person is busy in his day-to-day routine, and they do not have enough time to wander in shops and malls. Moreover, through different media, one can see his favourite models in a good mood for describing the advantages of products.

Few media heads do not keep an eye over the validity of the information given in the description of promotion. Young people like their heroes like mentors and follow their footprints. In third world countries, health hazard products like cigarette are being advertised. As a result, man will buy the things which he does not need currently. These new purchases will be made at the cost of many other useful objects which he may be requiring actually.

In conclusion, advertisements are very useful for boosting the economy and it helps people to seek accurate products. A government should maintain the standard of promoting the products and injurious things must be banned in the media.

Sample 6:

Many people believe that advertisement entices people to purchase unnecessary products, while others feel that it provides consumers with information about commodities that improve their lifestyles. This essay will discuss both perspectives and a reasonable opinion will be offered at the end of the discussion.

Some argue that advertisement helps people to improve their lifestyle. This is because, through the medium of the adverts, consumers get useful information regarding new products. A good example here is the new Tesla Pi phone ad campaign, which provides information that Tesla uses solar panels for harvesting energy from the sun. The users can charge their phones without connecting to a socket. People, thus, are able to surf the internet, play games or stream movies without the fear of the battery running out quickly and they can learn all these from the adverts. Despite this, I would argue that advertising encourages us to buy things we do not need.

On the other hand, others say that commercials provoke people to buy unnecessary commodities since they trigger emotional needs. Put simply, marketers put stress on emotional needs to satisfy their customers. Shampoo, for example, cleans hair. An advertiser, at a basic level, might try to convey the message of why their shampoo cleans one’s hair better than other brands. However, it is now well-established that shampoo cleans hair, so marketers do not need to convey the message. What they do instead is try to place emphasis on an emotional connection and say, for instance, that shampoo coupled with conditioner cleans someone’s hair and makes him or her handsome and glamorous. This is because emotional advantage often means more than rational advantage. Therefore, feeling glamorous and empowered is perhaps more important than just having clean hair, and not only do the consumers want to buy shampoo, but they also want to purchase conditioner as well for these emotional benefits.

In conclusion, although advertising sometimes helps to obtain useful information about products, this essay finds that it oftentimes motivates consumers to purchase unnecessary products by igniting emotional needs.

Sample 7:

Advertising has become an integral part of our daily lives, influencing our consumer behaviour and shaping our perceptions of products and services. While some argue that advertisements manipulate us into purchasing unnecessary items, others contend that they inform us about innovative products that can enhance our lives. This essay will examine both perspectives and argue that adverts increase our desire to purchase products and take services that we do not need.

On the one hand, proponents of the benefits of advertising argue that it plays a vital role in informing consumers about new products that have the potential to improve their lives. Through advertisements, individuals become aware of innovative solutions and advancements in various industries, ranging from health and technology to household and personal care. For example, commercials showcasing energy-efficient appliances or eco-friendly alternatives can educate consumers on sustainable choices that benefit both their well-being and the environment.

Conversely, those who believe that advertising encourages unnecessary consumption opine that it creates artificial needs. Advertisements often employ persuasive techniques, such as emotional appeals and clever slogans, to create a desire for products that individuals may not genuinely require. It can lead to impulsive buying decisions and contribute to the accumulation of material possessions that offer little value or utility. For instance, flashy commercials promoting the latest fashion trends or high-tech gadgets can generate a sense of urgency to purchase, even if the item does not serve a practical purpose in the consumer’s life.

My personal opinion on this issue is that advertisements are primarily made to create a false sense of urgency to allure us to purchase products that have no utility for us. Therefore, we should be careful of the impulsive buying habits that most adverts are aimed at creating among us.

In conclusion, advertising can encourage unnecessary consumption and highlight unique features of a product or service that are actually not. From my perspective, responsible and ethical advertising practices are crucial to mitigating this problem, and consumers should buy things that they really need not because they have been advertised to them.

Sample 8:

In today’s consumer-driven world, advertising plays a pivotal role in shaping our purchasing decisions and influencing our choices. Some argue that advertising encourages us to buy unnecessary items, while others contend that it informs us about innovative products that can enhance our lives. In my view, both perspectives hold merit, and the impact of advertising largely depends on the nature of the advertisement and the consumer’s discernment.

To begin with, it is undeniable that advertising often lures consumers into purchasing items they do not genuinely need. Advertisers use persuasive techniques, such as emotional appeals and celebrity endorsements, to create a desire for products that may be superfluous in our lives. For example, many people are enticed by the allure of the latest smartphone models, even if their current devices meet their communication needs. This excessive consumption can be detrimental to both individuals and the environment.

On the other hand, advertisements also have the potential to introduce us to new products and innovations that genuinely improve our lives. They serve as a valuable source of information about technological advancements, health and wellness products, and other beneficial offerings. For instance, medical advertisements can educate us about life-saving medications and treatments, leading to better health outcomes.

Furthermore, advertising can empower consumers by offering them choices. Individuals can make informed decisions based on their preferences and needs when presented with a range of options. This fosters competition among businesses, which can lead to better quality products and lower prices. Moreover, advertisers should prioritise ethical practices and promote products that genuinely benefit society rather than solely aiming for profit. Balancing the positive and negative aspects of advertising is crucial to harnessing its potential for the betterment of individuals and society.

In conclusion, advertising is a double-edged sword. While it can indeed encourage unnecessary consumption, it also informs us about products that can enhance our lives. Ultimately, consumers are responsible for exercising discernment and making conscious choices.

Sample 9:

Advertising, a key factor for the success of any business. It is a medium through which consumers are made aware of new products or enhancements made to the existing products. Some argue that it makes people buy things which they don’t need, and few refute it stating it does help them in improving their lives. These would be further discussed in the following points.

To start with, few are of the opinion that advertising lures them to buy products which are not required. This can be seen with people who are obsessed with gadgets. Whenever they come across any attractive product which has got impressive functionality, they prefer buying it, even if they don’t require it. Hence, it is evident that few believe that advertising encourages them to buy unnecessary products.

On the contrary, few support advertising, stating that it helps them in improving their lives. For instance, advertisements for new fitness products or new and improved groceries items make people improve their lifestyle. Thus, it can be seen that why many are in support of advertising.

To conclude, after analyzing the above points, it is clear that few buy unnecessary products based on their features and few buy it based on their benefits. As far as I am concerned, I believe advertising spread awareness of new products to consumers, which at the end of the day benefits all.

Sample 10:

In the modern world, advertising has become a crucial instrument for product promotion. While some contend that advertisements raise public awareness of goods that could enhance our lives, others hold the view that advertisements encourage individuals to purchase pointless items. I firmly feel that the latter is more accurate.

In the first place, advertising is the clearest approach to let people know how good a product is. The fact that they were able to make, disseminate, and, frequently, secure a celebrity endorsement is more significant than the advertisement’s actual message. For instance, KFC frequently secures the most well-known football stars to significant endorsement deals, demonstrating the food’s continuous relevance and quality. When a less well-known business provides an advertisement, it shows that they are making enough money to support whatever goods or services they offer.

Second, advertising develops wants rather than just filling them. The majority of people might live happier lives with fewer items, but because advertising drives cravings by engaging in customer behavior, those early wants gradually to turn into habits. The popularity of Apple products over the past 20 years and the part that advertising played in that increase would be a fair illustration of this. Along with their high quality, Apple computers and smartphones are renowned for giving consumers a sense of belonging. They were made more dominant by fashionable advertisements like the “think different” initiative. For many people hooked into the Apple ecosystem of elevated consumer products, the urge to join the Apple ecosphere and seem cool has now evolved into a fundamental necessity.

In conclusion, it can be concluded that advertisements leave a lasting effect on consumers’ minds, leading them to purchase an unwanted item. So it’s highly advised to do your homework before making a purchase.

Sample 11:

In today's world, advertisement has become a significant tool for marketing a product. While some argue that advertisement increases awareness about products that may improve our lives, others are of the opinion that advertisement induces people to buy unnecessary things. I strongly believe that the latter is more correct, as will be explained.

To promote a product, companies generally propagate only its the brighter side, thus providing an incomplete picture of the product. When only positive aspects are known, there is an inclination to buy that product; thus, we end up purchasing something which is not required. One such example is herbal products and weight loss supplements. In data published by the magazine India Today, the use of herbal products to reduce weight has seen significant increase in the recent years, whereas health experts are of the opinion that weight can only be controlled through proper diet and exercise. Many of my friends who used such medicines have later repented their choice.

Moreover, children are easily attracted by advertisements. Nowadays, most teenagers like to own a smart phone which is a result of mass advertisement. Recently a school in the UK banned children from using mobile phones inside school premises, as cellphones were the major cause of distraction which affected their studies.

In conclusion, it can be said that an advertisement creates an impression on the consumer’s mind and people end up buying an undesired product. Thus, thorough research before buying is strongly recommended.

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Some people say that it is acceptable to test medicine intended for people on animals. Others, however, believe that it is not right to use animals in this research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

People have different views about whether animal testing for medical research is necessary or not. From my perspective, animal testing plays an integral role in the medicine industry, in spite of the drawbacks it brings.

There are two major reasons why some people oppose the idea of using animals for medical experiments. Firstly, it is believed that such experiments are cruel and inhumane, and therefore should be prohibited. Every year, many animals are subjected to medical experimentation and have to suffer physical pain and even deprivation of food and water. Additionally, in order to implement research on animals, large amounts of money are expended on the establishment of facilities and human resources. This can be a burden on a country’s national budget, preventing the government from investing in other more important aspects like education and housing.

Despite the above-mentioned disadvantages, in my opinion, animal testing is necessary. Humans are still reliant on animal testing for many purposes, including developing new medications and checking the safety of medical products. In fact, the most powerful supercomputers are currently unable to understand the workings of the human body, and complex organs such as the brain and heart, which is crucial for medical research and development. More importantly, due to biological similarities, medical research needs to be implemented on animals, which will bring about better outcomes in medical research compared to other methods. Over many years, chimpanzees, the closest relatives of humans, have been used to investigate advanced treatments for cancer and heart disease, and until now, there is still no better alternative.

In conclusion, although animal testing may be cruel and cost a significant amount of money, it still needs to be conducted because of the unique benefits.

Sample 2:

Many believe that using animals for scientific testing purposes is fundamentally immoral, while others see it as a necessary evil. In my opinion, even though it is decidedly unethical, the overall impact on human progress justifies its continuance.

Detractors of animal testing often point out that animals have rights. We would never condone this type of testing on a human, even with one with a low IQ and it follows that we should treat animals with some measure of respect. The strongest argument supporting this is the level of cruelty involved in animal testing. Many drugs that are tested on animals have painful side-effects and the test subjects may die slow, painful deaths. This is undeniably unjustifiable regarding testing in non-essential medical fields such as cosmetics.

Despite the moral quagmire detailed above, I believe animal testing does enough to advance medical testing to warrant its use. Some cursory research will reveal the importance of animal testing in fields such as diabetic medicine, cancer research, experimental surgery, and stem cells. Testing insulin for diabetics on dogs may be the most well-known example of this kind of impactful research. Many other advances in medicine, often attributed to animal testing, have saved countless human lives to an extent that would be impossible if researchers were working under the moral constraints of human test subjects.

In conclusion, animal testing is the best way to make breakthroughs in medicine and should be strongly encouraged. Governments should work with medical institutions to implement more medical testing on animals across the board.

Sample 3:

Some believe that animal testing is necessary to develop effective and safe drugs for human consumption, while others argue that this treatment is morally wrong and therefore should be completely banned. In my opinion, despite the cruelty imposed on experimented creatures, this should remain a common practice due to its significant implication for major medical breakthroughs.  

Detractors of animal experimentation argue its undeniable inhumanity. As well as being subjected to unsanitary and confined living conditions, the creatures used for experimental purposes are also tortured through various barbaric procedures ranging from being starved, electrocuted and injected with poisonous substances. As a result, most of them suffer from malnutrition, excruciating pain and face a strong likelihood of being killed in the process. Furthermore, experimenters usually breed these animals for future research, which leads to an endless cycle of torment lasting many generations. A pertinent example of this is that small rodents including rats and hamsters are injected with cancerous cells and die painfully shortly thereafter as a consequence. 

However, these experiments still play a crucial role in ensuring safety and potency of potential human medicine. Rats are scientifically proven to have the same genetic material as humans; thus a possible human reaction can be inferred from testing on these animals first. Medical researchers can use these testing results to devise drugs with minimal side effects when adopted for humans. This advancement in the pharmaceutical industry could engender better remedies to possibly treat previously fatal and incurable diseases. Prior successful experiments have led to the creation of new treatments that not only prolong the life expectancy of immunocompromised patients but also make considerable progress in the fight against cancer.

In conclusion, although testing on animals can be seen as a brutal action, the positive ramifications associated with medicinal development make this an essential and required practice to enhance welfare for humanity as a whole. Scientists should consider giving these experimented creatures the best possible living environment to partly compensate for their suffering. 

Sample 4:

It is argued by a few masses that using animals for the experimentation of medicines or products that are made for their usage is indispensable. However, others believe this act is unkind behaviour towards them. In my perspective, it is inhumane to use poor creatures for testing as they also have a right to live, which is highly beneficial for our ecosystem.

According to the former point of view, animal testing is beneficial for humanity as it reduces the chances of mishappenings to the human body. To elaborate it, human beings are the most precious species on this planet. Direct exposure to any product or medicine can put their life at risk. Therefore, if the products or medicine are first trailed on animals, these invaluable creatures would be saved from a certain illness or death. For instance, to try the result of corona vaccine initially was trailed on animals. Only then was it used by the public? This animal testing saved a lot of lives.

According to the second school of thought, it is a brutal act because it can cause the extinction of the animal population. To explicate, when trials fail and are tested on other animals, it becomes a threat to the survival of animals. Some may die or become disabled. Thus, it will be difficult for them to live with physical impairment in their natural habit. To exemplify it, when animals such as monkeys, lions or rodents are used for testing, a massive population declines. The extinction of such species indirectly creates an imbalance in biodiversity.

To conclude, thus it is clear that trials on animal species are beneficial for humanity as they can save thousands of human lives. But, to save humanity, putting animal life at risk is cruel as they can survive on this planet with the same kind of disability.

Sample 5:

Most individuals think it is essential to inject medicines or products into the animal before they are available for human consumption. At the same time, others say that this is brutality towards animals. This practice has its own brighter and darker sides. This disquisition delves into both the perspectives and my own stance.

Embark on, and humans are more important than animals. They are the assets of the world. Because human specialities are more than the animals, like, thinking capacity, talking and so on. Therefore, we give more importance to these human beings. Because of this, scientists who invented medicines will be applied to animals’ kinds in order to find the results after long procedures. Mostly living beings like rats, monkeys and so on are used for this. Due to the high number of these species, people think that there is no problem with injecting newly formulated medicinal products into animals.

On the other hand, some humans, as well as animal lovers, will try to feel less comfortable with experimenting on animals in the medical procedure. They say it seems to be a massive cruelty to these creatures. It will badly affect them when the results of such procedures fail. There is some advanced technology in order to find the exact results of using such medicines through humans. For instance, a computer program which shows the suitability of a new drug on the human immune system can be used for medical research. This will safeguard the mammals from suffering such cruelties.

In my view, I think that experimenting the medicines on animals may lead to harmful consequences, and it will be very cruel to them. I suggest that more advanced methods should be used to ascertain the result of newly invented medicines rather than using them on animals.

Therefore, it can be conclusively stated that using mammals for examination is an unacceptable trend and should be replaced with modern solutions and technology.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

Vegetarians tend to avoid consuming meat and fish for the purpose of keeping body health and concerning on environmental issue. Both purposes will be discussed in this essay as well as provide several convincing explanations.

Vegetarians tend to consider health factors to stop consuming meat and fish because those kinds of food sources affect the blood tension of those who suffer from chronic disease such as cancer, obesity, etc. Other reasons from a health point of view of people become vegetarian because they need to lose weight or to have a better body shape. Moreover, choosing to consume vegetables rather than meat or fish becomes a trend to keep the body healthy.

On the other hand, being a vegetarian is one of the ways to protest the policy of the government or criminal action against environmental issues such as cruel animal slaughtering, fish-bombing, etc. Moreover, being vegetarian is believed to be the best solution for keeping the balance of the ecosystem among humans and animals.

However, another reason not to eat meat or fish is related to ethical concern on how there are several values or rules in a certain community that forbid to eat both food sources. They believe that animals, like human beings, should be respected and their lives should be preserved.

To conclude, vegetarians who consider health issues and environmental issues, as well as ethical concern, have their own reasons. In addition, both views are merely positive to keep the body healthy individually as well as to conserve the sustainability of animal lives globally.

Sample 2:

It is a fact that several groups of people prefer not to consume any kind of meat and fish, as they believe that being vegetarian bring many benefits for their health and for the world as a whole. To a certain extent, I would agree with the opinion, but I think that people should also consume meat and fish in a proportional portion as they contain rich ingredients that are needed by the human body.

For a number of reasons, some people choose not to eat fish or meat. Firstly, it is believed that several types of meats and fish contain fats which are considered unhealthy for the human body. People who consume those kinds of meat or fish have a higher risk of cardiovascular diseases such as heart attack or cholesterol. Secondly, as the demand for meat and fish increases, it would have a negative impact on the environment. The increasing number of farming activities would require bigger areas, which might reduce the number of forest areas. And then with over-exploitation of fishing activities, several types of fish would extinct, and it would make the sea ecosystem become imbalance.

On the other hand, many food scientists have found out that there are several types of vitamins and proteins that could only be obtained from meat and fish. For example, salmon fish generates a certain type of oil which is beneficial for our blood circulation process. And then, red meat is needed as the source of nutrition for the human’s brain. However, the main problem of those who consume meat and fish is that most of them consume the food in an inappropriate portion. As a consequence, many of them have problems with obesity or diabetes.

Sample 3:

It is generally believed that there are many health and environmental benefits to vegetarianism. While I do agree with this view, I do not think that vegetarianism is for everyone.

The consumption of animal products certainly has some health consequences. It hurts the environment as well. Some studies have shown that vegetarians tend to live longer than their meat or fish-eating counterparts. The environmental impacts of non-vegetarianism are even worse. Countless animals are raised, abused and slaughtered to fulfil the demand for meat and fish worldwide. Framing livestock is one of the major causes of greenhouse gas emissions worldwide. If we can reduce the consumption of meat, the need for raising more animals also reduces. As a result, the land that is being used to raise them can be altered to grow vegetables which in turn produce clean air for the whole planet. Obviously, cutting down on the consumption of animal products benefits the whole world.

However, meat and fish are an integral part of many cuisines; therefore, being a vegetarian is not an option in many regions of the world. To illustrate, sushi is the most popular Japanese delicacy and without the addition of its main ingredient, fish, sushi will not be complete. Meat consumption is particularly common in cold countries. There are also some regions where it is difficult to grow vegetables and cereals. Furthermore, fish and meat are excellent sources of proteins and some fatty acids crucial for good health. For this season, meat consumption is essential for people engaging in strenuous physical activities. Being vegetarian, for example, is not a viable option for a bodybuilder or an athlete.

In conclusion, even though there are advantages to vegetarianism, I believe that this lifestyle is not for everyone. Even so, in my opinion, everyone should make an effort to cut down on their consumption of animal foods. That way they can improve their health and save the planet from tons of greenhouse gases.

Sample 4:

Nowadays, people are free to make a lot of options related to food. Some of them argue that eating meat or fish has a fundamentally beneficial influence on our planet and own life, while many others contend that it has a detrimental effect as well. To my view of thinking, meat and fish are one of the most important foods for our normal health condition, so it is harmful to refuse it absolutely.

Firstly, meat and fish provide a lot of useful vitamins. It is extremely necessary for our normal vital processes such as growing or maturing. Lack of this material causes serious disabilities. Moreover, the number of fish and animals should be regulated due to the shortage of feed in the water and earth, which is needed. On the other hand, the destruction of fish and animals could cause the disappearance of specific species. For instance, there are a lot of special species of fish that are written into a red book but still killing illegally. This negative aspect provides harmful acquaintances which should be solved globally.

In my opinion, people should not refuse it totally because it has a negative influence on their health. I am convinced that this problem could be solved by a smaller quantity of meat and fish. This solution guarantees a smaller request for these products and a positive effect on the balance of living organisms on earth.

Taking these points into consideration, I would like to say that there are some advantages and disadvantages brought by eating meat and fish. However, in my opinion, the supply of this product should be regulated very carefully, saving the balance of these organisms, but nobody should refuse this material wholly due to useful materials which are taken.

Sample 5:

A healthy diet plays a very important role in maintaining people’s health. Some people argue that we should eat no fish and meat to have our own health better and it is also valuable to the world. In my opinion, I agree that this will bring many advantages but also causes several drawbacks.

First of all, it is undeniable that by dint of eating like a vegetarian, people will have a nice body and more chance to avoid several chronic diseases. To specify, vegetables and fruits, which contain a rich source of vitamins and minerals, will enable people to keep fit and healthy body. Moreover, with a low amount of fats, cholesterol, or saturated fats, people will not have to worry about gaining weight or obesity as well as other related health issues like high blood pressure or heart diseases. For example, since I ate more vegetables, my body became stronger, and my weight stayed unchanged over time.

On the contrary, it is obvious that by no means could this kind of diet have no negative effect on our health and lifestyles. As a consequence of eating no meat and fish, people will not gain sufficient proteins and fats so that they will not have enough energy for their daily activities. For instance, my mother trys to eat as a vegetarian for several days, but she always feels tired and cannot perform anything well.

On the other hand, thanks to the vegetarian meals we can contribute to save the world. In more detail, the fact is that every year, the food processing industry consumes a large amount of clean water to produce meat or beef and release tons of waste and smoke to the environment. Additionally, due to the overfishing for food, many species of fish in sea, rivers, lakes are endangered and facing extinction. Therefore, if we remove meat and fish from our meals, we can prevent this.

In conclusion, it is not always good if we only eat vegetables, but we should reduce the amount of meat and fish as well as eat more vegetables for healthier living.

Sample 6:

Healthy diet plays a key role in an individual’s maintenance towards their health and associated attributes. There have been several arguments regarding avoidance of consumption of meat and fish as it damages the health of individuals. However, in my opinion, I believe that this will yield several advantages and disadvantages as well in the long run.

First and foremost, consumption of vegetables and ensuring a dietary schedule as vegetarians will help develop a nice body. Moreover, this will also lead to decreased chances of chronic diseases. Vegetables are considered a rich source of vitamins and minerals. Vitamins and minerals play a potential role in ensuring a fit and healthy human body.

Additionally, eliminating meat and fish from regular diet schedules will help with lowered amounts of fats, cholesterol, and saturated fats within the body of individuals. This will also reduce the risks associated with high blood pressure or heart diseases.

Consuming vegetarian diets will lead to a little contribution towards saving the world. To be more specific, the food processing sector consumes a considerable amount of clean water each year to create meat or beef, as well as releasing tonnes of garbage and smoke into the environment. Furthermore, numerous fish species in oceans, rivers, and lakes are vulnerable and on the verge of extinction owing to overfishing for food. As a result, if we exclude meat and fish from our diet, we can avoid this.

To summarize, eating exclusively veggies is not necessarily a good thing, but for a better lifestyle, we should eat less meat and fish and eat more vegetables.

Sample 7:

In today’s era individuals are free to choose from varied options associated with their food consumption. There are arguments that eating meat or fish has a fundamental benefit for our planet and self life. However, many quote that this has a detrimental impact on the global index and human health conditions. I believe that meat and fish are key essential aspects of an individual's diet and have a potent role to play in daily normal health condition. Thus, it is harmful to eliminate these from everyday diet.

Meat and fish are addressed as one of the potential sources of vitamins and minerals for the human body. Thus, these are of extreme importance for vital living processes such as growing and maturing.

Lack of these dietary fibers leads to serious disabilities within the human body. There is a need to regulate and maintain an appropriate balance between feeding in the water and on earth. Nevertheless, increased consumption of fish and animals could cause the disappearance of specific species. There are several particular species of fish, for example, that are listed in a red book yet are nonetheless hunted illegally. This negative feature creates unhealthy relationships, which should be addressed on a worldwide scale.

I think that there is a necessity for maintaining a balance between perseverance and consumption of meat and fish. Complete eradication of these from a regular diet will have a negative influence on human health. Thus, consuming a balanced or even smaller amount of meat will help address this issue.

Sample 8:

Healthy diet is an essential source of well-being for individuals. Some claim that we should avoid eating fish and meat in order to improve our personal health and that it is also beneficial to the environment. In my perspective, this will have numerous benefits, but it will also have some disadvantages.

To begin with, people are descended from animals, and they have long relied on both flora and wildlife to suit their requirements. Because everyone's nutritional demands are varied, plants cannot provide all of the nutrients necessary for a human body. Omega-3, for example, is essential to improve the memory of humans and can only be found in sea-based creatures. As a result, it is permissible to rely on many species to maintain personal health.

With time immemorial and appropriate evolutions, bodily requirements have also changed. There are several cultures globally that strictly follow vegetarian diet and are mostly dependent upon plant-based food for centuries. Excessive fishing and animal poaching has contributed towards changing environmental conditions. These environmental conditions are responsible for contributing towards global warming. Thus, the human race is required to consider vegetables as the only source of their desired nutrients and vitamins.

Taking everything into account, I believe that people should not consume meat since human bodies have evolved over time and that being a vegan or vegetarian increases life expectancy. In addition, the ecosystem is suffering as a result of the widespread extinction of other species. Governments can aid in the mitigation of this problem by raising public awareness through campaigns or other forms of communication.

Sample 9:

Many individuals choose to embrace a vegetarian lifestyle, refraining from consuming meat and fish, driven by the belief that it promotes personal well-being and contributes positively to the planet's welfare. I hold a strong conviction regarding the significance of considering individual situations and making informed decisions that align with personal values and dietary requirements.

Firstly, plant-based diets can be nutritionally balanced and provide adequate protein, vitamins, and minerals. To brief, vegetarian diets are associated with lower risks of certain health conditions, such as heart disease, obesity, and certain types of cancer, which help reduce cholesterol levels and ultimately contribute to overall well-being. Additionally, livestock production contributes significantly to greenhouse gas emissions, deforestation, and water pollution. Adopting a plant- based diet can reduce carbon footprints and alleviate pressure on natural resources. The production of plant-based protein, for instance, requires fewer resources, such as land and water, as compared to animal farming.

Furthermore, adopting a balanced and conscientious approach to food choices is crucial. Elaborating on this, by practicing moderate consumption of ethically and sustainably sourced meat and fish, individuals can obtain vital nutrients and maintain a well-rounded diet while also considering cultural aspects and environmental sustainability. Moreover, cultural and personal preferences can influence dietary choices, as the food holds significant connections to identity and longstanding traditions. For example, someone from a specific cultural background may prioritize certain traditional dishes as a way to preserve their heritage and maintain a sense of cultural belonging.

In conclusion, despite adopting a vegetarian diet can have potential benefits for personal health and the environment, I firmly accord that the decision should be guided by individual circumstances, values, and dietary preferences, with an understanding of the cultural significance of meat consumption.

Sample 10:

Many prefer to avoid meat or fish in their diets. They think that it is good for health while also beneficial for the environment. I believe that while adopting a vegetarian diet is advantageous to healthy living as well as the environment, eating meat and fish is more important because it has high nutritional value.

Some argue that following a vegetarian diet is beneficial to an individual’s health and the planet as well. This is because a vegetarian diet plan means a high intake of fibre, unsaturated fat, vitamins C and A, and so on, thus leading to healthy living. Recent studies reveal that vegetarians tend to have a reduced risk of non-communicable diseases like diabetes, cardiovascular diseases and so forth. It also means the reduction of greenhouse gas emissions as factory farm livestock produces methane during food digestion and excretion. Despite this, I would argue that eating meat and fish is of crucial importance in making up for the deficiency of proteins.

However, meat and fish are essential for health. Both are the key source of proteins, a nutrient crucial for our muscular health. Meat and fish are rich in proteins that are of high biological value, meaning that they comprise all the essential amino acids needed to support our body functions in the right balance. For example, the Spanish Society of Community Nutrition recommends that people should intake three weekly servings of lean meat. Furthermore, fish intake is particularly important for pregnant and breastfeeding women and people during childhood. I, therefore, believe that a moderate intake of meat and fish is of profound importance.

In conclusion, although avoiding meat and fish is vital not just for healthy living but for the environment also, these foods should be eaten, because they remain the best source of proteins and that is why moderately eating them is a healthy choice.

Sample 11:

The number of vegetarians in a community may depend on various factors, for example the traditions of the country, the wealth of the country, the religion or the age group. Therefore, the reasons why people choose to exclude meat and fish from their diet may also vary.

Some people become vegetarian because they believe that this will benefit their health. Undoubtedly, eating too much meat, especially too much red meat, is not to be recommended. Moreover, the fact that there are healthy populations in some parts of the world where no one eats meat proves that it is not, as some people claim, an essential part of the human diet. However, it is important to ensure that enough protein, for example, is included in the diet from other sources. Where vegetarianism is not a tradition, this may require some careful planning.

In my experience, it is quite common for people to become vegetarians because they feel that it is selfish to eat meat or because meat production increases global warming. They may also feel that if no one ate meat, there would be no food shortage, because meat production uses up food resources. This idealistic point of view is very attractive, but it is hard to judge whether it is in fact correct.

In some families, if a teenager decides to become a vegetarian, they may do so partly out of a spirit of rebellion, because this behaviour can be interpreted as a criticism of their parents’ way of life. However, provided that they continue to eat healthily, the parents should not raise objections, in my opinion. Vegetarianism is a valid choice in life. Moreover, research shows that vegetarians tend to be healthier in many ways than meat-eaters.

Personally, I think that being a vegetarian is a good idea in principle as there are proven health benefits and probably social benefits as well. However, it does not suit everybody, and I doubt whether it will ever be a universal choice.

Sample 12:

The question of whether it is right to eat the flesh of living animals has been debated for thousands of years, mostly by philosophers and religious groups, but more lately also by people who believe it is wrong to kill beings for sustenance and that this way of life has detrimental effects on our health as well as for humanity. Supporters of both points of view seem to have moral and practical arguments to defend their position.

Supporters of a vegetarian diet claim that overconsumption of meat brings about a series of health problems. Animal fat has been blamed for an increase in cancer and heart disease, which account for an extremely high number of deaths in the western world. They believe that more nutrients can be found in a wide range of non-animal food comprising grains, nuts, legumes, fruit and of course vegetables. These are held to contain all the nutrients, vitamins and minerals we need while not having a negative effect on our body. They also claim that our mental well-being will be enhanced as mind and body are closely linked. It is also true that most meat is heavily treated with antibiotics and various chemicals and that sea food nowadays may be contaminated with degraded plastic or heavy metals.

However, an even greater number of experts tell us that the consumption of meat is beneficial and that abstinence for long periods would lead to a lack of certain vitamins, minerals and proteins. This is especially true, we are told, for young growing children whose bodies are still forming. Parents are not generally willing to risk their children’s health by experimenting on them with a non- western diet. In countries where such a diet is common or mainstream, they have centuries if not millennia of experience. Furthermore, fruit and vegetables are just as contaminated as meat products, if not more so. Apples receive 23 pesticide treatments per season in large farms. One would have to buy only organic produce, which is currently beyond most families’ means.

Another side of the argument to be considered is the benefit of vegetarianism to the planet or humanity. Vegetarianism seems to have moral high ground. I do not think that any sane person enjoys seeing an animal being slaughtered. It is a disturbing site to most people unless they have been hardened by repeated practice in killing. They shut themselves off from empathy for the animal. The strategy seems to be that of disconnecting from the act of killing. The need to detach from the act and not reflect on it suggests that there may be a moral problem. If it were the right thing to do, a pure, healthy act such as picking an apple or drinking water, there would be no necessity to remove one’s mind from it. Morally, non-killing or non-violence as it is called in India appears to be noble.

Lastly, perhaps a policy of non-violence beginning in our dining room would extend beyond to a mentality of non-violence also towards our fellow man. A few hundred years from now people might well look back on us and be horrified that we killed other creatures in order to consume them. I believe that overeating meat is detrimental to our health, but that the negative effects of food may depend more on how it is grown and produced. A stick of celery might be more damaging than a meat base dish if it contains an excessive quantity of chemical compounds.

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More and more people buy a wide range of electrical household goods like televisions, microwave ovens and rice cookers. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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It is increasingly common for people to fill their homes with many types of household appliances. I believe this tendency can be both beneficial and harmful, depending on one’s perspective.

On the one hand, excessive purchasing of domestic appliances can be environmentally detrimental. The growing consumer demand has led to a surge in new products and models being constantly introduced to the market. Consequently, some manufacturers over-exploit the earth's finite natural resources to keep up with consumerism and dispose of improperly treated toxic waste into the environment. Beyond that, many consumers purchase unnecessary household items in vain attempt to keep up with what is currently trendy. Therefore, redundant goods are quite often quickly discarded, ultimately ending up in large landfills, where they often take thousands of years to degrade and, while doing so, release toxic chemicals into the surrounding soil.

On the other hand, this trend has significantly improved business profitability and people’s lives. Regarding the former, applicance manufacturers have thrived in recent decades, thanks to the booming demand for more effective household tools. Growing businesses create job opportunities and contribute to government funding for infrastructure and social welfare projects. A further benefit is that devices such as dishwashers or robot vacuums help improve the well-being of modern families. Such appliances can handle the most time-consuming household chores, thus giving family members more quality time with one another, and lowering the risk of domestic conflicts over dividing responsibilities between spouses.

In conclusion, the trend towards owning more electrical devices is beneficial for both manufacturers and consumers, due to increased business activities and improved living standards. However, it is a negative phenomenon for the environment with the over exploitation of resources and contamination of natural ecosystems.

Sample 2:

A majority of families have possessed more than one piece of electrical device, and the issue is whether it does more good than harm or not. In my opinion, the use of a wide range of household goods can be both positive and negative.

It cannot be denied that our life became better thanks to the sophisticated design of household goods. For instance, television and contents like movies or shows can be informative, entertaining and educational, and we can enjoy them without leaving our home. A microwave oven and a rice cooker can make cooking a manageable and less time-consuming process. Thus, the time and energy saved from doing domestic chores allow people to work and rest better. Those examples indicate that the more free time is saved due to having appliances, the more time we can manage to improve the quality of life.

On the other hand, the opponents may argue that it can be a potential threat to the health of family members and the environment as a whole. Firstly, the convenience brought about by the appliances also encourages owners to adopt a sedentary lifestyle. For instance, washing machines deprive users of the possibility to consume a huge number of calories by doing housework. More importantly, mass production to meet the increasing demand of household goods will drive the exploration of natural resources and result in pollution. The electricity required is usually generated from fossil fuels, which adds to the environmental cost.

In conclusion, the increased use of electrical appliances at home brings both advantages and disadvantages. However, unless the environmental drawbacks are solved, I think that it seems to be a negative development.

Sample 3:

Nowadays, more and more householders consume a variety of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. In my opinion, this is an advanced movement in modern life, not only benefit for consumers in general, but also making great profits for business in particular.

First, from the user’s perspective, electrical equipment such as microwave oven and rice cooker significantly assist consumers to perform their daily tasks faster and more convenience. So that, they can spend more time with their family to build profound connection within family members, which is more important than wasting time in kitchen for unnecessary activities due to old and inconvenient equipment. Besides that, due to the fast past of life, people are fully occupied by works and tend to eat fast and unhealthy meals like fast foods to save time. A microwave oven and rice cooker are the eminent solution for this issue because people are now able to straightforward cook and enjoy delicious meals at home without suffering long and hard cooking processes.

Second, from an enterprise perspective, developing household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker has established a potential and profitable market. Thanks to enormous demand of those household goods, more factories have been opened and operated, resulting in tackling unemployment problem and encouraging development of relative industries like electric, semi-conductor, and other material productions. Furthermore, good business will contribute more taxed money which can be used to enhance the quality of life by building more hospitals, schools, infrastructure and to support citizens around.

In conclusion, the development of using household goods has notable contribution in modern life, benefit for both consumers and manufactures as mentioned above.

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In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

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Sample 1:

The trend of ‘young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married’ to study or work elsewhere has become increasingly common in many countries. This shift in living arrangements carries both advantages and disadvantages.

One of the primary advantages of this trend is the opportunity for personal growth and independence. When young individuals leave their family homes, they learn to become self-reliant and responsible. They must manage their finances, cook their meals, and handle household chores. This independence fosters maturity and helps them develop important life skills. Moreover, moving away from home often exposes them to diverse cultural experiences and perspectives, broadening their horizons.

Another advantage is the increased access to educational and career opportunities. Relocating to study or work in a different city or country can open doors to better educational institutions and job markets. This can significantly enhance their career prospects and future earning potential. For instance, many students choose to study abroad in prestigious universities, which can lead to higher-quality education and international networking opportunities.

However, there are also drawbacks to this trend. Young adults may experience feelings of loneliness and homesickness when separated from their families, which can affect their mental well-being. Additionally, the financial burden of living independently, including rent and living expenses, can be challenging for some, especially in high-cost urban areas. These financial pressures may lead to stress and debt.

In conclusion, the trend of young single people leaving their parental homes to study or work elsewhere has both advantages and disadvantages. While it fosters independence, personal growth, and access to better educational and career opportunities, it can also lead to feelings of isolation and financial challenges. The overall impact depends on the individual’s circumstances and how well they adapt to their new environment.

Sample 2:

The trend of young single people leaving their parents’ homes to study or work elsewhere has seen a significant rise in recent years. This phenomenon carries a multitude of advantages and disadvantages, making it a complex social issue.

On the positive side, this trend promotes personal growth and independence. When young individuals venture out on their own, they are forced to learn essential life skills. They become responsible for managing their finances, cooking, cleaning, and handling everyday chores, which fosters maturity and self-sufficiency. Moreover, moving to a new location often exposes them to diverse cultural experiences and viewpoints, broadening their horizons and increasing their adaptability.

Another significant advantage is the increased access to educational and career opportunities. Relocating for higher education or work can provide access to superior educational institutions and thriving job markets, potentially improving their career prospects and future earning potential. For example, students who choose to study abroad may gain access to world-class universities and establish international networks, which can be invaluable for their careers.

However, there are notable disadvantages as well. Young adults who leave their family homes may experience loneliness, homesickness, and feelings of detachment, which can adversely affect their mental well-being. Furthermore, living independently often incurs substantial financial burdens, including rent, utilities, and daily expenses. These financial pressures can lead to stress and, in some cases, accumulate debt.

In conclusion, the trend of young single people leaving their parental homes to study or work elsewhere has both positive and negative consequences. It encourages personal growth, independence, and access to better educational and career opportunities but may also result in emotional challenges and financial pressures. The ultimate impact depends on the individual’s ability to adapt to their new environment and manage the associated challenges.

Sample 3:

It is a fact that a lot of young people leave their parents' house when they complete their graduation from high school. They prefer to live independently as they continue their higher education or decide to work. This trend has its' own positive and negative side, but I personally believe that it has more benefits than the drawback.

On the one hand, many people believe that leaving parents house during the young age has a disadvantage. It is undeniable that many young teenagers are not yet ready to live independently by themselves. Many of these people are not yet mature in making decisions and in differentiating between right or wrong for them. As a consequence, many of the young people become addicted to narcotics and alcohol or became pregnant at a very young age.

On the other hand, despite the disadvantages, living independently at a young age has some advantages for them. Firstly, they will learn how to manage their own life and appreciate the time. They learn how to set some priorities in their life, as they have to make schedules for studying, groceries shopping, doing the laundry or cleaning their apartment by themselves. Secondly, for those who leave their parents for work, they would reduce the burden on their parents. Parents could stop the financial support for their child and could be allocated for the younger children or for their retirement plan.

In conclusion, it is true that many young age people choose to live independently these days after they have graduated from high school. Although the trend has a drawback, I personally believe that it has more advantages for both the child and the parents as well.

Sample 4:

Nowadays, people leaving homes at an early age - is quite in vogue. Some people consider that staying away from home at a young age either to study or for work has more advantages than disadvantages. In my opinion, leaving parents behind and moving apart has more drawbacks than benefits.

Today, the world has become more competitive than before. With the growing advancements and modernization, lust for power, money, and better lifestyle has also increased a lot. Young people always try to cope with this fast-moving world. Hence, in search of their desires they move away from their parents and home at an early age either to study further or in search of better jobs. I admit that this is essential, as it provides exposure, increases job perspective, better salary, modern lifestyle and so on, but there are disadvantages as well. These are as follows:

First of all, when youngsters move out, they are totally unaware of the world and its challenges. They initially feel isolated and sometimes feel homesick. This can lead to depression if they don't find a way to get rid of it. For example, a student may find it difficult to stay alone after he/she has stayed with the family for a long time. Secondly, problems of accommodation may arise as moving to a new place and finding a proper room to live in is quite a tedious job. At this point of time, people may get frustrated and cannot concentrate on the goal that they have been here to achieve. Lastly, the most common problem that many people face is self-satisfaction. If they find themselves not satisfied, they tend to indulge in activities that are not acceptable to the society. For example, salary and promotion issues compel workers to commit crimes such as theft, robbery etc.

To conclude, for all the above-mentioned points, it is essential for the parents to be with their children to support them, encourage them to move further and above all provide them with love and care. Therefore, in my view, though there are some advantages of leaving home early, but disadvantages are far more than that.

Sample 5:

Deciding on whether to stay with family until you get married or to leave for education or work is a difficult question. While there are advantages to both options, I believe that living separately is more beneficial. This is due to the fact that it is important to become self-efficient at a young age.

On the one hand, living with family has certain financial benefits. If you like to live separately it would require a lot of financial resources and some families could save a lot of money if children stayed. Moreover, life with parents wouldn't be as stressful as it would be if you live alone. You will have enough time to find the job you want or to start up your own business. However, the main point in such tradition is that children could be protected from improper decisions. If they live with their families, they are not responsible for their families or jobs and they do not need to take major decisions as parents would mostly do that.

A number of advantages take place when a person decides to live independently from his family. For example, people who go abroad to study at prestigious and honourable universities will probably have more job opportunities and higher annual salaries. Living separately is also a great step in creating a family because no one will interfere your relationships or give pieces of advice. Lastly, it is an essential step in young people's life, and this is the only way to be prepared for grown-up life. When decisions have to be made, possible mistakes would only be your burden.

In conclusion, although living with parents is simple and effortless, it is crucial to leave your comfort zone at a certain age, to be ready for facing real life difficulties.

Sample 6:

It is not uncommon these days that in every country, young unmarried individuals are not living with their parents any longer because they choose to go abroad for study or work purposes. However, with every certain change, there are always benefits and drawbacks as I will now be discussing.

My first point is, as a young adult, leaving our homes to study or work overseas will benefit us personally and professionally. For instance, when I was studying for a three-month course for initial registration for overseas registered nurses at IHNA (Institute of Health and Nursing Australia) in Heidelberg Hts. Victoria, Australia, I learned a lot more about myself in that twelve-week program, because of the unique space in which I learned, experienced and spent exploring an Australian culture. My maturity has increased as well as my self-confidence and I gained personal growth. Also, an entire range of professional opportunities has opened up to me after I finished the initial registration partly due to the skills and internship experiences I acquired in one of the prominent hospitals in Melbourne, the Royal Melbourne Hospital. Thus, I am now a professional ICU (Intensive Care Unit) nurse in a tertiary level and private hospital here in the Philippines, the Urdaneta Sacred Heart Hospital.

On the other hand, leaving our own home & our family will make us feel homesick that may sometimes lead to depression. As for my experience in Victoria, I was so alone and always missed my parents. Even if there is technology to make my communication ready and accessible with them, still it was not enough. As a result, I almost got into a depressing state if only I did not learn how to cope up. So, these are the possible disadvantages of living away from home.

In conclusion, I think that this trend will have a positive and negative impact on our lives. But if we manage to adapt to this situation, this will give us more benefits than problems. So in order for us to achieve this, perhaps we have to socialise more often with our classmates or co-workers to avoid depression.

Sample 7:

These days a lot of parents worry about their children’s independent behaviours. In fact, it was a custom that youth leave their homes after they married in many countries but at present, mentioned custom has changed and young people make their own life because of other different purposes such as study or work. While there are some disadvantages on this new behaviour trend, advantages are more considered and so, this essay has tried to cover the reasons.

In the past, it was defined that anyone should marry, and young people live with their parents to save money and increase their abilities to make their own families. It was logical that they didn't separate from their parents as they specified marriage as their life goal and according to those days' lifestyle, living with parents was preferred by young people and was beneficial.

But nowadays, youth have a new perspective on life. In other words, they do not believe that marriage is the most important goal in life, and they should be independent as soon as possible to have their interested lifestyle. Therefore, new targets have been replaced and youth not only do stay with their parents until they are married, but they go to other cities or countries to work or study. In fact, it makes a good opportunity for young people to be independent and helps them to understand the meaning of life including its difficulties and ups and downs.

I think, therefore, parents always want that their children obtain living skills and perhaps, allowing them to be separated for any reasons is the best way for this purpose and undeniably it would bring lots of advantages for young people.

Sample 8:

Over the past few years, there has been an increasing trend of adolescents staying away from home and parents to another place for the purpose of getting a good qualification or employment. There are various pros and cons of this trend which are elaborated in this essay.

On the one hand, I believe there are certain positive effects on the juveniles who choose to study or work away from their residence. Firstly, it helps the young ones to become more independent when the parents are not around them for spoon feeding. Moreover, they are able to make decisions by themselves that makes them more confident. Secondly, the experience of living far from home makes the children more responsible at a very young age. For instance, a person doing a job will know how to carry out the expenses and to save money, when he is not living with parents. Finally, experiencing the different phases of life and learning from them can be possible when one is living away from his family.

On the other hand, the negative sides of this trend should not be ignored. Becoming independent and leaving parents for the career might cause the children to become emotionless and they may not feel the love that develops while living with parents. Furthermore, some of them can feel lonely and homesick that hinders their success for which they might be struggling.

In conclusion, considering both the aspects of living away from home for personal reasons, the advantages of this drift far outweigh the disadvantages.

Sample 9:

In the past, young people only left home once they got married. Nowadays, though, youngsters tend to leave earlier. While there might be some disadvantages to this phenomenon, I believe that its benefits far outweigh them.

There are two reasons why young people should not leave home earlier. Firstly, not all youngsters are ready to live away from home. An example of this would be the type of people that are easily influenced by friends. Such people might lack the ability to resist their friends' temptation to get involved in dangerous situations, such as drug abuse. Secondly, parents would have to experience empty nest syndrome sooner than expected. This might be even more pronounced since they worry whether their children are mature enough to live on their own.

Despite the plausible drawbacks, I think there are more advantages that can be obtained. One of them is that young people would sooner be more independent and reliable. Since they could no longer rely on their parents, they have to depend on themselves. For instance, they would learn to do household chores, which they might not have learnt otherwise.

In addition, the parents-children relationship is likely to improve once both parties experienced living apart. Young adults might realise just how much they miss their parents, whom they might have taken for granted all this time. Thus, both sides are likely to make extra efforts to treat each other better. Besides, parents would have more time to take care of themselves once their children left home. The bond between the husband and the wife can even deepen this way.

In conclusion, while I agree that there might be some drawbacks to the trend of young adults leaving their home earlier, I believe that there are more advantages to it. Thus, parents should let their children live away from home, even way before their marriage.

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Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the World Cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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There is fierce competition between nations to host major international sports events like the World Cup or Olympics as it is a unique opportunity to boost the national reputation of the host nation. In spite of its undeniable benefits, I believe that the costs are too great and therefore governments should prioritise other key issues to better benefit their citizens.

On the one hand, becoming a host nation for global events such as the World Cup or the Olympics brings a number of economic and infrastructural benefits. During these events, there is an influx of tourists from all over the world who need places to stay, restaurants to eat in and traditional products to purchase. The efforts made to cater to these tourists will remain long after they have gone. The cost of renovating a hotel might pay for itself during the event and then begin turning a large profit in later years. The other main area of development is related to the rapid expansion of quality infrastructure. Nations will be forced to invest in new sports facilities like swimming pools and stadiums as well as make renovations to pre-existing infrastructure like roads and airports. For example, China used the Beijing Olympics as an opportunity to modernise old buildings and roads.

On the other hand, these competitions use up tremendous resources from the host nation for a temporary competition. To ensure the success of these prestigious events, governments must waste a large percentage of the nation’s budget in the years leading up to the competition, oftentimes in the billions of dollars. The newly constructed facilities usually fall into disuse after each tournament. A salient example of this is Brazil as many of the swimming pools and sports facilities that were used in the 2014 Olympics are currently abandoned and becoming decrepit. Meanwhile, there are other pressing issues that have been festering including the need for new schools for underprivileged students and quality healthcare for the elderly population. If the government had prioritised these issues the country would be in a better position and its citizens would have a higher standard of living.

To summarize, due to the exorbitant costs, I am of the belief that the government should not allocate such a large percentage of its financial resources to hosting global events with negligible long-term impact. Instead, these events should be hosted in the same countries year after year so that the new infrastructure pays for itself over time.

Sample 2:

Today’s global sports events seem to increasingly capture the attention of countries that aspire to take charge of them. Concerning this trend, while some individuals maintain it would positively contribute to the development of a country, others assert that the investments in these events would be squandered eventually. Personally, I agree with the former viewpoint and will address both opinions in the following essay.

On the one hand, there are several rationales behind the belief that investing in major sporting events is wasteful. Firstly, the enormous financial resources demanded in constructing sports, accommodation and transportation facilities to serve the needs of athletes and visitors will likely be exchanged for very few economic gains. In fact, it has taken decades for several cities like Montreal or Los Angeles to pay off all the debts incurred in preparing and organizing the Olympics in the past. Secondly, some infrastructures are prone to abandonment after the end of a sports tournament or event. To illustrate, most of the stadiums erected in Brazil during the 2014 FIFA World Cup have fallen into disuse because they were particularly tailored for the tournament matches only.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that hosting international sports events could create positive impacts on a country. This is because as a host, a nation can appeal to a great number of visitors who desire to thoroughly and directly enjoy the sensational atmosphere of world-class matches. This, in turn, can substantially boost the sales of accommodation and transportation services, contributing to the growth of the national tourism sector. Furthermore, renowned sporting events often showcase elite athletes with inspiring skills and sportsmanship, which can potentially promote more engagement in physical activities among the masses. This motivation is undoubtedly valuable, considering the sedentary lifestyle that is led by many people these days due to the huge workloads or excessive immersion in online social media.

To recapitulate briefly, despite the statement that the organization of major sporting events would have numerous bad effects, it is my firm conviction that it would confer significant benefits as mentioned above for the host country.

Sample 3:

In contemporary society, the allocation of colossal funds for hosting prominent sporting events, such as the World Cup, has become a pressing issue. The debate over whether these investments are extravagant and should be redirected towards more urgent needs or if they offer substantial advantages is controversial. This essay will shed light on both viewpoints and present my perspective.

On the one hand, many proponents assert that hosting major sporting contests provides undeniable economic and cultural merits, contributing significantly to the host country's prosperity and global standing. Firstly, these investments lead to a significant boost in tourism and revenue, attracting a global audience and resulting in increased tourism, hotel bookings, and local business income. In addition, not only can these events yield cultural and diplomatic benefits, but they also promote national pride and unity as citizens rally behind their athletes. Moreover, cultural exchange can be further facilitated, which, in turn, enables home nations to showcase their culture, history, and traditions to a worldwide audience.

On the other hand, opponents of the aforementioned view claim that the drawbacks of this act should not be overlooked. To illustrate, hosting major athletic events constitutes a considerable expenditure of resources because this movement causes financial problems for the host countries. The budget needed for these events is quite substantial, covering refurbishment of stadiums, transportation infrastructure, and accommodation facilities. Consequently, these exorbitant costs frequently divert massive public funds away from vital sectors, including healthcare and education. For instance, the 2021 Southeast Asian Games in Vietnam necessitated impressive infrastructure outlays, thereby redirecting resources from other essential projects. In light of these considerations, these assets could have been more wisely distributed to tackle immediate domestic concerns.

In conclusion, despite the associated financial challenges, the substantial advantages of hosting large-scale sporting competitions outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, nations should carefully consider participation to harness the prominent benefits these events bring.

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In recent years, tourists have paid attention to preserving both the culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people think that it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Sample 1:

Indisputably, increasingly more tourists have become conscious of the cultural and environmental values of the visited destinations. Nonetheless, it is opined that being a so-called “responsible tourist” is far from feasible. From a personal perspective, I completely disapprove of this assumption and the following essay would elaborate on the rationale of my stance.

The first underlying contributor to the possibility of becoming a culturally aware tourist is the recent boom in social media. The advent of social networking platforms has facilitated the coverage of ecological issues to be more influential due to their widespread and global impacts. Topical news along with informative press about cultural aspects are constantly updated on a wide array of formats including conventional papers, digital newsletters or podcasts, ensuring that every newsreader gains valuable knowledge of their planned destinations. Hence, tourists can be highly conscious of respecting foreign cultures and able to avoid disrespectful actions, thereby making attempts to conserve traditional cultures in other nations.

Another justification for my belief that individuals can become responsible tourists lies in local and federal policies implemented in the visited countries. In almost every nation nowadays, there exist specific regulations and legislation enforced by governmental authorities that supervise visitors’ behavior and their impacts on the indigenous environment. Such schemes would not only raise holiday-makers’ environmental awareness but also act as a deterrent to their possible detrimental impacts on the natural surroundings. A notable example of this can be seen in the case of Singapore, in which such trivial violations as chewing gum could be strictly fined, thus prompting visitors to preserve cultural sites and natural landmarks when traveling to this country.

In conclusion, it is my firm conviction that based of extensive media coverage and stringent government policies, a sense of cultural and environmental accountability of any tourist can be fulfilled for the sake of sustainable tourism. Promoting this would require collaboration of both the authorities and individuals.

Sample 2:

In recent decades, it is true that holiday-makers have paid more attention to the act of conserving intrinsic values of their headed destinations. Although there are still certain concerns over the hardship one might encounter when taking part in such activities, I believe every individual could become environmentally and culturally friendly visitors thanks to the heightened individual awareness and close supervision from authorities around the world.

To begin with, the idea of becoming responsible tourists has witnessed significant evolution in various parts of the world and the media is one of the main facilitators behind this development. Thanks to the advent of social networking platforms and their pervasive impacts on multiple aspects of human life, propaganda about everything, including ecology and cultural protection, has been more far-reaching and influential than ever. Latest news and informative articles on global natural and cultural matters are constantly published through various available formats such as physical papers, digital newsletter, podcasts..., making it almost impossible to be unaware of those alarming issues. This could facilitate the process of heightening awareness and promoting actions to preserve local nature and traditions among visitors regardless of genders, ethnicities and cultural backgrounds.

The supervision and support from governments as well as authoritative bodies are also great contributors to this global movement. Notably, in almost every country, ministries in charge of managing and augmenting natural resources as well as traditional values are highly prioritized. Such bodies would enact laws and regulations upon both domestic and international holiday-makers to ensure principled behavior while traveling. Moreover, educational systems also play an indispensable role in this development. To be specific, the frequently revised academic curricula in most countries, especially developed ones, are designed to fully equip students with the knowledge of cultural diversity and the vital essence of nature. Thus, individuals would grow up to become highly responsible citizens with fine traveling behaviors such as not throwing garbage in the wrong places, not touching fragile historical artifacts, dressing suitably, doing research before communicating with local people, respecting cultural differences and the like.

In conclusion, I contend that high levels of responsibility and sustainability in global tourism could be attained by means of education, media, regulations and the keen participation of visitors themselves.

Sample 3:

In recent times, there has been a noticeable increase in tourists showing concern for preserving both the culture and environment of the places they visit. Nevertheless, there is a prevailing belief that instilling a sense of responsibility in all tourists is an unattainable goal. In my view, while a certain portion of tourists may exhibit irresponsible behavior, I disagree with the notion that fostering environmental and cultural awareness among the majority is impossible.

Admittedly, there exists a subset of tourists who seem oblivious to the need for responsible actions, despite various measures being in place. Some argue that the money spent on their tours exempts them from accountability for their actions. Despite clear signage prohibiting littering in most tourist attractions, some individuals litter indiscriminately, assuming that cleaning is the sole responsibility of the staff. Additionally, cultural sensitivities are often overlooked, with some claiming exclusivity of local practices to residents of a particular destination.

However, I contend that it is feasible to cultivate a sense of responsibility in the majority of visitors for several reasons. One significant factor is the implementation of government regulations aimed at preserving tourist destinations. These regulations prohibit behaviors that have a detrimental impact on the environment and carry penalties such as fines or even incarceration. A notable example is Singapore, where even minor violations, like thoughtlessly disposing of chewing gum, result in fines, serving as a deterrent for potential irresponsible visitors.

Furthermore, equipped with this knowledge about places of interest, including details about local cultural practices, visitors are more likely to be cognizant of appropriate behavior. For instance, they can choose suitable attire and language when visiting sacred places to avoid being disrespectful.

To conclude, while some tourists may exhibit a lack of awareness regarding the preservation of a destination’s culture and environment, I am confident that the majority can develop a heightened sense of responsibility. This is achievable through the enforcement of stringent policies and the dissemination of comprehensive information about local cultural practices.

Sample 4:

With the support of developed transportation, tourism has been recognized as a sign of the modern lifestyle. However, tourism has also been implicated in the destruction of indigenous cultures and the natural world. I completely agree that tourism development can absolutely be synonymous with the preservation of our world.

The first reason for my belief is that the tourists these days are aware of the diversity of cultures. Most tourists these days travel mainly because they are eager to explore the incredible natural world and to learn about other exotic cultures. They usually make full use of the Internet to search for information about the destination before they arrive. This self-training will prevent them from partaking in intrusive and disrespected actions toward another culture. A further step of government authorities implementing regulations will protect the uniqueness of local cultures from suffering from assimilation.

Furthermore, the headlines transferred through media have grabbed people’s attention about environmental problems, and thus, shaped people’s concept of preserving the natural world. This leads to conscious perception about global warming phenomenon, greenhouse effects and urbanization’s consequences. Eco-tourism takes root from people’s desire to experience greenness and eco-friendly surroundings. Tourists’ appreciation of nature has made them take action to protect the primitive beauty of nature. With better guidance and organization from the tourism industry, tourists will definitely effort to establish a world free from destruction.

The opponents of tourism may argue that it is too easy for tourists to leave their footprints in nature and their own culture whenever they arrive, gradually destroying both nature and culture. Although it is true that tourists can invade the outside world, people should be cognizant of the government’s power. If governments enact effective measures to conserving nature and culture, the tourists will be more responsible when they visit a new place.

All things considered, the value of both the natural world and the cultures should not be hidden from people. Expose to wild areas or indigenous cultures, however, should be regulated in order to cautiously protect those legacies for the next generations.

Sample 5:

It is argued that there is no chance for tourists to take responsibility for protecting the environment and culture of host countries. However, I disagree with this view and believe that this is a worthy aim that can be achieved in various ways.

Firstly, if everyone was equipped with the knowledge of cultural diversity and the vital importance of the environment, they would be more aware of their behavior. For example, children should be educated to avoid throwing rubbish into surroundings or touching fragile historical objects in museums when they travel abroad. Besides that, western holiday-makers who flock to tourist destinations in Asian countries should wear suitable clothes because they are insensitive to local youngsters there. This could prevent children from copying negative attitudes such as rowdiness and outbound tourists may set a good example of good manners.

Secondly, it is possible to promote cultural differences through both local and international media in order to reduce the risk of having unintentionally offensive actions to indigenous practices. The clearest example of this is that cow which is an edible animal in most countries is a sacred animal and is worshiped in festivals in India. Without such knowledge, tourists may bring with them cow meat, and this could leave a bad impression on locals.

Finally, local authorities could enact and enforce strict rules on protecting the environment and core traditional value, which could act as a deterrent. In Singapore, for example, throwing away garbage, even a small thing like chewing gum could be fined severely and this rule is widely known in many nations. As a result, every tourist coming to this country abides by rules and makes efforts to preserve historical sites as well as natural scenery.

In conclusion, I would contend that sustainable tourism development could be achieved through education, media, and laws, and tourists could definitely become culpable for the environmental and cultural problems.

Sample 6:

Tourism is a unique human activity, experienced by millions of people worldwide every year. As people differ in their attitude towards almost everything in life, the same applies also to tourism, where some treat tourism globally as the focus of their act without scrutinising the other related activities pertaining to it. Hence, the term ‘responsible tourism” emerged; in order to pay sufficient attention of the tourist to the local cultural values of the destination country, and – more globally – to the environment. From my point of view, tourism must be labelled as a “responsible activity”; even if it is mandatory to issue as many local and international legislations to make it so.

While making tourism, should the tourist carry his culture with him to the foreign country? Obviously, the answer is “No”. If the tourist insists on doing this, he will surely subject himself to great dangers, especially in communities with intolerant local citizens. One of the best examples of this is the “Thump Up” sign which is greatly practised in many countries; where this sign is USA means “OK or very good”; while it is considered as very crude and impolite in Greece (which is a famous touristic destination). Thus, it is crucial to teach the tourists a list of common practices that they must refrain from doing, explaining the reasons behind this.

When it comes to the environment, it is indeed very unfortunate to find that the touristic areas are those with the greatest pollution and litter output! A few years ago, it was really surprising that an international campaign of volunteers aimed to clean the Himalayas from the trash left by the climbers.

In conclusion, tourism should be dealt with in the same way as freedom; that it must be “responsible”, respecting both the local cultural and environmental values of each society.

Sample 7:

All around the world, tourism is losing its glitter, due to the lack of responsibility by the government, tourists and local people. Some people consider taking responsibility for tourism by each individual is essential for the better environment, preserving cultures and improving the economy, whereas others think, this cannot be achieved in reality. In my opinion, tourism responsibility is required for a better future for the world, and this can be achieved with proper implementation.

People travel to different places but never show any attention or responsibility towards its improvement. To make this world a better place to live in, one should take it as one’s responsibility. First of all, the government should take a step, releasing more funds towards tourism and for providing much security. For instance, we find filthy guest houses, restrooms and no cleaning of surrounding places. People travel to enjoy the beauty of nature, but if they find these kinds of dirty places, their enjoyment leads to a bad memory. Even local people and tourists who travel should obey the guidelines and policy of tourism for a better world.

However, there are some people who think when it comes to implementation of this; it is like a daydream which cannot come into reality. It is difficult for poor and developing countries to utilise more funds for tourism. On the other hand, it is difficult to provide security and neatness at tourist spots unless every tourist shows attention as his responsibility. For instance, if there are sign boards which shows ‘please use right direction, danger at left direction’, they use only left and if there are any dustbins with ‘please use me’, they do not use them at all. Thus, it is very difficult to make it into reality.

In conclusion, better tourism can be achieved only if every individual takes the responsibility towards tourism. One should think how much one is contributing, instead of just arguing and blaming the government. But the government should take the first step in achieving this. With this, not only it increases blissfulness of tourists but also increases economy of the country.

Sample 8:

In recent years, greater attention from tourists has been drawn to the issue of environmental and cultural preservation of the places they visit. Some people, however, believe that this is beyond tourists' responsibility. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

First, common sense indicates that to adapt oneself to an alien environment and culture is no easy task, which is the first step to be taken if one wants to make a contribution in preserving the culture and environment. Tourists who are devoid of proper knowledge about the places they visit are likely to find the local customs and traditions beyond their comprehension. This lack of knowledge limits tourists' ability to take the right action. Suffice it to say that the culture of their country of origin can be radically different from that of the places they go to. If not made with great caution, any effort of tourists in helping preserve local culture and environment could even be counterproductive.

However, it does not require huge effort in demonstrating one's responsibility. It would be wrong to say that tourists are totally ignorant of the culture and environment of the places they visit. In fact, detailed Information about any place can be easily sought on the internet and tourists have no difficulty keeping themselves informed. In addition, tourists can come up with innovative ideas to help preserve the environment as well as the culture. Indeed, it is hardly impossible to be a responsible tourist.

In conclusion, although tourists may encounter more difficulties in their attempt at preserving the culture and environment of the places they visit, they can help.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In today’s modern era, people tend to purchase clothes, cars and other items from well-known brands. The chief reasons that could explain this phenomenon are the credibility of famous brands and people’s desire to show off their status. Personally, I opine that this is a largely negative development as it leads to the growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor.

There are two main factors that shed light on why people want to buy famous brands’ items. First, noted brands offer goods of better quality in comparison with small brands. It can be seen that innumerable counterfeit products are sold at cheaper prices, meaning that buyers can only use them for a short period of time. In contrast, those from popular brand names can be more expensive, but they are credible and give people a sense of satisfaction when using them. Second, people nowadays want to show off their social status or their wealth. A standout example for this is cars from luxurious brands such as Porsche and Mercedes. These are often exorbitant due to their materials and unique features. Hence, they are considered a tool for the rich.

From my perspective, it is apt to say that this trend has a negative impact on the development of society as this might cause various social problems related to the rich and the poor. As impoverished people are rarely provided with lucrative jobs, they might find it extremely challenging to make their ends meet, not to mention buying things from luxurious brands. On the contrary, the wealthy are eligible to not only accommodate their lives with fundamental necessities but also afford expensive goods that could bring them happiness. This discrepancy between rich people and the destitute could result in tension and conflicts within a society.

In conclusion, purchasing things from famous brands is becoming ubiquitous as they are of high quality and could show off the wealth of buyers. However, I argue that this may pose a serious threat to the safety and stability of society.

Sample 2:

Nowadays, purchasing items such as cars or clothes from famous brands is becoming increasingly popular among a large number of people. The reasons behind this trend will be outlined in the following essay and, in my opinion, it could bring both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.

To begin with, the tendency of using large brand products mostly stems from people’s beliefs on personal possessions reflecting wealth, social status, and appearance. More specifically, many people associate clothes and accessories from popular brand names such as Nike or Adidas with high quality and fashionable designs. Therefore, these items are more suitable for enhancing people’s appearance than the products from smaller brands. In addition, some types of goods like cars from luxurious brands are usually sold at exorbitant prices because of their expensive materials or unique features. Hence, these items are often considered as a tool for the rich to show off their social status or their wealth.

On the other hand, more people purchasing goods from famous brands can bring both merits and drawbacks to the business world. Countries where famous brands are based are more likely to have a strong and healthy economy. For instance, the US – the home country of many large brands, such as Apple and Microsoft, has been the strongest economic superpower since the late 20th century partly since the products of these enterprises are favorable not only in domestic but also in foreign markets. However, the rise of dominant brand names can be a factor leading to monopoly as large companies will attempt to dominate and finally wipe out smaller rivals to maintain their positions.

In conclusion, the tendency of consuming goods from famous brands largely comes from people’s perception of personal belongings showing their wealth, social status and appearance. This trend can bring both positive and harmful effects to the business market and, therefore, should be well-considered by the government to prevent large-scale monopoly.

Sample 3:

The majority of people show their desire to buy high-end goods from famous brands. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this trend and whether it is positive or negative.

The reason for this issue lies in the fact that we are living in a consumer culture and owning such things from famous brands seems to be a good way to create a good self-image. Advertising manipulates people by saying that buying products from certain brands are essential for them to affirm their social status. For example, advertisers focus on selling the brand image with glamorous celebrities, wearing a trendy outfit or driving the latest model of cars. Therefore, we might associate brands of those products with a higher status and make a purchase decision without considering its price or quality.

The positive effect of this consumer trend is that consumerism can boost the economy as it can create businesses and jobs in retail and manufacturing industries. However, I think that this trend is mainly negative for both individuals and society. First, some people become addicted to shopping and fashion, and some of these shopaholics might overspend and get into debt. In terms of societal problems, a materialistic lifestyle is being encouraged, which means that we judge others’ social position on the materials they own rather than the good moral qualities and behaviours they show.

In conclusion, many people are big fans of famous brands as a result of advertising and our desire to enhance our self-image. In spite of the economic advantages, I think the disadvantages of this trend are far more dangerous to our society.

Sample 4:

In the contemporary world, where economic conditions have generally improved, an increasing number of individuals aspire to acquire clothing, automobiles, and various items from renowned brands. This essay aims to delve into the factors contributing to this trend and elucidate why it is more favorable than worrisome.

The growing preference for high-end goods can be ascribed to two main factors. Firstly, the elevation in living standards motivates people to possess more functional and appealing clothing items and vehicles, which may not be offered by less popular small businesses. Additionally, esteemed brands like Apple and Nike are known for selling durable, high-quality products with a lengthy guarantee. This advantage is particularly appealing to contemporary consumers who often have busy schedules and cannot afford the time for extensive product repairs.

While the surge in the consumption of products from well-known businesses may have some disadvantages, such as widening the social divide and endangering small companies, the advantages of this trend can outweigh the drawbacks. Primarily, the desire for superior quality products serves as a motivation for individuals to strive harder to attain them, fostering market competition and encouraging companies to continually innovate. Another noteworthy aspect is that, due to their durability and functionality, products from popular brands are less prone to damage, consequently reducing environmental waste.

In conclusion, the aspiration for better products and the exceptional quality of items can account for the growing popularity of well-known companies. Despite certain drawbacks, this trend is a positive development due to its benefits for consumers, businesses, and the environment.

Sample 5:

The trend of purchasing items with a well-known label is a major topic of concern in today’s society. This happens because people often associate a famous brand with quality, and sometimes because most of their peers are using the same products. As far as this is concerned, the positive aspects are more significant than the negative ones.

Popular brand names often attract a great number of customers. This is primarily because products with major brands are often of great quality and reliability. In today’s world, negative feedback can be spread so fast that these brands have to try their best not to incur any criticism which can ruin their reputation. In addition to this, some people purchase items with a well-known name because they want to be a member of the society of people using that product. Apple, for example, has successfully built a community of hundreds of millions of users of the iOS operating system. The consequence of this is that new smartphone users are likely to choose an Apple one so that they have access to the aforementioned community, which means they can communicate and interact with other Apple product users effectively.

Overall, this trend brings more benefits than drawbacks to society. The only disadvantage that is worth mentioning is that companies that own famous brands may become monopolistic, which may be disadvantageous for consumers in the long term because these companies may lose the motivation to improve themselves. Laws and governmental policies, however, are now readily available to prevent any company from reaching the state of monopoly, so this disadvantage may be out of the question. This trend is of greater benefit, in the sense that buyers of a product with a well-known name are assured of product quality. These people, as a result, are less likely to worry about the chance of buying a low-quality item. When they buy more products with popular brand names, they may eventually attain the state of having all of their possessions up to a modern perception of what is a good product.

In conclusion, the two most prominent reasons as to why people purchase products from famous companies are product quality assurance and the desire to be a part of a community owning and using the same range of items. This development is positive for society at large, despite the only drawback being the chance it may turn a company into a monopolistic one. I predict that this trend will continue into the future, and consumers may thrive in a society where the quality of every single product is standardized, which is guaranteed by its brand name.

Sample 6:

In today’s modern era, people tend to purchase clothes, cars and other items from well-known brands. The chief reasons that could explain this phenomenon are the credibility of famous brands and people’s desire to show off their status. Personally, I opine that this is a largely negative development as it leads to the growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor.

There are two main factors that shed light on why people want to buy famous brands’ items. First, noted brands offer goods of better quality in comparison with small brands. It can be seen that innumerable counterfeit products are sold at cheaper prices, meaning that buyers can only use them for a short period of time. In contrast, those from popular brand names can be more expensive, but they are credible and give people a sense of satisfaction when using them. Second, people nowadays want to show off their social status or their wealth. A standout example for this is cars from luxurious brands such as Porsche and Mercedes. These are often exorbitant due to their materials and unique features. Hence, they are considered a tool for the rich. 

From my perspective, it is apt to say that this trend has a negative impact on the development of society as this might cause various social problems related to the rich and the poor. As impoverished people are rarely provided with lucrative jobs, they might find it extremely challenging to make their ends meet, not to mention buying things from luxurious brands. On the contrary, the wealthy are eligible to not only accommodate their lives with fundamental necessities but also afford expensive goods that could bring them happiness. This discrepancy between rich people and the destitute could result in tension and conflicts within a society.

In conclusion, purchasing things from famous brands is becoming ubiquitous as they are of high quality and could show off the wealth of buyers. However, I argue that this may pose a serious threat to the safety and stability of society.

Sample 7:

People preferring to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items is a negative development because it’s making our society more materialistic and consumer-driven. This may cause other values such as environmental awareness, child labour, and fair working practices to get pushed aside if the more famous brands are not so conscious of these issues.

The reasons people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes is because of status, to show their wealth because of the quality associated with these famous brands

Another reason is the advertisements for these products and endorsements by famous celebrities. It is well known in advertising that a lot of people want to be seen as successful and wealthy. Brands take advantage of this with endorsements from celebrities and other notable personalities.

A lot of people see these brands and they wanted to be associated with the brand because of certain celebrity endorsements. For example, Nike has an active and athletic brand and people also want to be seen as athletic, active and as winners and this largely explains sports endorsements as well. The famous Spanish tennis player Rafael Nadal earns millions of dollars per year from Nike for celebrity endorsements to wear Nike clothing at his games. This in turn generates demand as people aspire to be like Rafael Nadal and one way they can get closer is by wearing the same clothes as he does.

The increase in preference for famous brands of clothes and other products is a negative development because it can create problems for people who do not have the money to buy expensive brands.

Due to the capitalist nature of these famous brands, important values such as ecological manufacturing, equal working conditions and prohibiting child labour may become secondary. Many famous brands do not have the best track record for fair working practices and other crucial issues.

Sample 8:

It is irrefutable that branded products and services have become increasingly popular nowadays. This essay intends to discuss the reasons for this increasing brand consciousness. While there are some drawbacks of this trend, I consider it to be far more beneficial.

There are many reasons why people are going after brands. The first reason is that these are considered a status symbol. Brands speak about the person who is buying them. Secondly, advertising and the media have spread awareness about these brands like wildfire. Branded items are also shown to have better quality and thus people prefer them over other products. Moreover, these brands have come within the pocket of the ordinary person. With the growing economy, the purchasing power of people has gone up, which also makes them go for brands.

The increasing brand focus and consciousness has many advantages. The main advantage is that companies now emphasize quality and customer service. Businesses know that to survive in today's competitive world, they need to have a good brand reputation, and hence people are offered better services. To cite an example, if a person buys a branded cell phone, but unfortunately it stops working for some reason, he gets a full replacement, provided it is within the warranty period. Companies also benefited as it becomes easier to introduce new products into the market. They need to spend less on marketing, if they already have a good brand image. Another positive effect is that these brands have led to the emergence of another big industry, which is imitations or copies. This secondary industry is catering to a far bigger population and is adding a lot to the economy.

On the downside, brands provide a feeling of inadequacy among those people who cannot afford them. Sometimes, people end up overspending on such items and this upsets the family budget. Some people may even resort to petty crime such as shoplifting, pickpocketing and chain snatching. Finally, people are becoming workaholics to buy such products and are failing to draw a line between work and leisure and also between work and family, which is adding to their stress and strain.

To sum up, brand heedfulness can be attributed to many reasons. Despite the few drawbacks, I believe this rising lure of branded products to be a positive development overall.

Sample 9:

For a variety of reasons, there has been an increase in the number of people who are obsessed with famous brands when buying new clothes, cars, watches and other items. In my opinion, this is largely detrimental to a lot of people.

The first reason for such an obsession with purchasing brand name products is the influence of modern advertising. On a daily basis, we are bombarded by countless TV commercials and magazine advertisements that encourage us to associate certain brands with a higher social status. As a result, an increasing number of people are convinced that owning and using those advertised products is a symbol of success.

Another cause is the rising living standard in most countries. With many people earning a better salary, the pursuit of a higher quality of life has been popular. This stimulates consumers with higher affordability to choose products of prestigious brands, which are widely believed to be more durable, well designed and dedicatedly produced.

Although being a loyal customer to famous brands allows people to enjoy both material and spiritual satisfactions, I strongly believe that this kind of shopping preference has significant negative impacts. Firstly, as the concept that big brands represent wealth and success prevails, people living on a tight budget are also likely to be lured to follow this trend, which will cause them to spend the money borrowed from the bank and finally end up with serious debt troubles. In addition, being addicted to famous brands leads people to buy things that may not suit them best. For example, to follow the latest trend set by influential brands, many people would buy shoes and clothes that neither fit their personalities nor their lifestyles.

In conclusion, due to the influence of advertising and the rise in people’s incomes, the popularity of buying famous brand goods has been increasing, which, from my point of view, generates undesirable outcomes.

Sample 10:

People in the present period like to buy clothing, automobiles, and other products from well-known labels. The legitimacy of well-known companies and people’s desire to flaunt their status are the main factors that could explain this tendency. Personally, I believe that this is a generally lousy development because it contributes to the widening gap between the rich and the poor.

There are two primary explanations for why individuals choose to purchase goods from well-known companies. First, compared to smaller businesses, well-known brands provide goods of higher quality. In addition, it is clear that numerous fake goods are offered for sale at reduced costs and are solely intended for temporary use by consumers. In contrast, while those from well-known brands may cost more, they are reliable and provide users with a sense of satisfaction. Second, many today like to flaunt their riches or social status. Luxury automobiles from manufacturers like Porsche and Mercedes serve as a prime illustration of this. Due to their materials and distinctive qualities, these are frequently very expensive. As a result, they are viewed as a tool for the wealthy.

From my vantage point, it is appropriate to state that this trend has a detrimental effect on the advancement of society because it may result in a number of societal issues involving the rich and the poor. Poor people frequently lack lucrative employment opportunities, making it incredibly difficult for them to make ends meet and afford luxury goods. Contrarily, those who are wealthy are able to not only provide for their basic needs but also acquire luxury items that can make them happy. There may be tension and disputes in society as a consequence of this disparity between the wealthy and the poor.

In conclusion, buying products from well-known brands is increasingly common because they are high-quality and allow consumers to flaunt their riches. But this would seriously jeopardize societal stability and safety.

Sample 11:

Recently, there has been a growing preference for products from renowned brands. There are several reasons for this trend, which I perceive as negative. Global giants such as Coca-Cola in beverages, BMW in automobiles, and Apple in smartphones have gained widespread recognition for their superior quality.

When consumers opt for branded goods, they are also assured of performance, durability, and excellent customer service. Purchasing an iPhone, for instance, ensures stability, a lifespan of 1-2 years, and worldwide repair availability.

The inclination towards well-known brands also arises from a desire for social acceptance. Everyone desires to belong, and buying widely recognized products signifies membership in a specific community. In my view, the dominance of famous brands is highly detrimental as it stifles healthy competition among companies.

Consider smartphones, for example: in recent years, the market has become dominated by the giants Apple and Samsung, leaving smaller brands and startups struggling to gain traction. This monopoly stifles innovation, as the future of technology and trends is dictated by just one or two major corporations.

Moreover, various large corporations like Microsoft or Facebook have profoundly influenced society in their own manner, and by continuously supporting these brands, we grant them even more authority, potentially posing a significant threat to both the government and society as a whole.

In summary, certain individuals tend to purchase renowned brands due to their superior products and the sense of belonging. I firmly believe this trend is detrimental not only to smaller businesses but also to society as a whole. 

Sample 12:

Today, shoppers go shopping concerning not only the products themselves, but also their brands. It seems that clothes are not just for warmth and beauty, and cars are not simply for traveling. They all represent certain identities or classes. Under such a background, we may infer the main reason causing it, which is the influence of the mass media. Overall, this is a negative trend for consumers, especially those who are not wealthy.

Referring to the causes of this issue, I am convinced that advertisers are the first to be blamed. It is well known that almost every high-end brand of bags, clothes and cars puts brand marketing as the core of their budgets. That is to say, the greatest proportion, sometimes over 80%, of the cost is spent on advertising. Why? What these brands attract consumers is definitely not the practical function of those products, but their hidden value, which means brands offer you certain degree of fame or jealousy from others by wearing their clothes, carrying their bags and driving their cars. This is why people are crazy about famous brands, for showing off, and keep changing or updating still-usable ones when their social status is even slightly promoted.

This tendency has definitely brought more drawbacks than one. The most direct one is that prices go up, together with profits for manufacturers. Customers today keep purchasing things whose cost of raw materials only accounts for around two to five per cent of their retail prices. Their money is mostly spent on creating some illusionary images that maintain a stupid sense of superiority. If this were to be generally accepted by everyone someday, the result would have to be that no one puts quality or design, the two ingredients for a product, in the first place. What's worse, those people, who are not wealthy enough, but desire a life of higher social classes, will pursue high-end brands beyond their reach at the price of anything, anything you can imagine. Debts, crimes, suicides and tragedies happen subsequently.

To reach a conclusion, the main reason for this topic can be attributed to the fact that, in order to increase their profits, advertisers, the true fashion designers, persuade customers to purchase unnecessary goods for fame. From an overall view, this leads to more negative impacts on consumers, small or middle manufacturers and even the bigger picture of the market.

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1 điểm

As a part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Some people say that in order to learn more about the language and culture of a country, students should spend several years studying overseas. Despite some issues regarding cultural shock or language barriers, I still believe that studying abroad is a good way for young people to widen their knowledge of foreign cultures and enhance linguistic ability.

Undeniably, a few years spent in another country would be a golden opportunity to learn new cultures and languages. Compared to reading books and magazines, by which people can only see local traditions through pictures and texts, studying in a foreign nation allows students to experience the locals’ activities directly. For instance, should foreign students studying in Vietnam attend the Flower Festival in Dalat city, they can not only deeply understand about many kinds of flowers, but also give gardening a try. Regarding linguistic ability, students having daily interactions with native people are obviously given countless chances to sharpen their fluency as well as pick up new vocabulary used in different contexts.

Some might say that students studying abroad would be faced with language barriers and culture shocks. Admittedly, there would be those who did not have good control of the native language, and therefore find it difficult to integrate into the local community. However, the process of absorbing a foreign language takes students a certain amount of time to familiarize themselves, and practice every day, irrespective of their language ability. After only a few months of trial and error, individuals who are persistent enough can overcome language difficulties and confidently pursue more knowledge of cultures and traditions.

In conclusion, it is a great idea to spend a period of time living and studying in a new country. This would help students enhance their knowledge of the country’s culture and improve their language skills.

Sample 2:

In contemporary society, it is commonly accepted that living abroad can help international students learn another language and lifestyle. While this view is valid to a certain extent, I firmly believe that learners can become fluent in a new language and gain a clear understanding of the culture even though they live in their own country.

On the one hand, it is understandable why some people are strong opponents of spending a long time living overseas to study language and culture. The obvious reason is prohibitive costs and financial challenges. This is mainly because when you settle in another country, you are likely to encounter numerous upfront costs that could affect your financial situation. For example, housing rent, school tuition, monthly utilities, food, transportation, health care, and many other expenses such as pre-departure advising, visa, and residency applications that not everyone has the ability to afford. In addition, learners may experience challenges in adapting to a new environment when living in another country due to the many differences between the new culture and the way students are accustomed to living. If they cannot adapt to that environment, this may lead to feelings of stress and discomfort.

On the other hand, I still strongly maintain that there are more effective methods to learn a new language and the way of life without moving to another country. Firstly, learners can participate in cultural exchange events at their school or locally. This helps them gain a deeper understanding of diverse cultures by communicating with students from different countries. If learners partake in these events regularly, they can improve their language skills, gain better knowledge of cultures, and enhance their social relationships. The second way is to utilize resources that can enhance their language and cultural understanding. This is because students can easily access these resources in their country instead of living abroad at an expensive cost. For example, viewing films, listening to music, reading books in another language, or following foreign social media accounts can help learners boost their language and cultural understanding.

Taking everything abovementioned into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that learning another language and lifestyle can be cultivated in their own country without living abroad.

Sample 3:

In the cross-cultural setting of modern life, and with the support of easy means of transportation, the trend of students studying in other countries has become popular. Many people claim that it is of vital importance for students to go abroad for a couple days or weeks at the most living there while learning the host country’s language and traditions. In my opinion, it is a positive trend" in educational requirements.

To begin with, studying another language seems to be becoming a requirement for the students’ future jobs. In the globalized landscape of the marketplace these days, employers have been struggling to fill their companies' vacancies with recruits who are not only professional but also bilingual in order to cope with their business expansion worldwide. Europe is a good example of this kind of course, with the universities in this continent integrated language study into academic performance, and this enables their graduates to have the opportunity to get access to a wider choice when it comes to working, making their choice of a career overseas easier than ever.

In addition to the benefits that students gain when participating in language courses, studying for a while in another country provides a valuable time of learning different cultures. Travel makes the man, so gaining know-how about other customs and traditions, while interacting directly with different cultures helps students widen their horizon. This can also make them become more understanding and more responsible, especially in the case of students traveling from developed counties to the developing host ones. In the cultural learning process, they learn to respect cultural heritages, and appreciate the handed-down values in different cultures.

However, someone may argue that such inadequate academic learning is a waste of time and money, as students have to travel, and what students actually conceive is just a fun experience which is not beneficial for their future career. The argument may also be pointed out that the students’ academic performance can be impaired due to the cultural shock and homesickness, which are common to those studying and living abroad. Nevertheless, they forget that students will be more self-reliant because this experience will sharpen their bodies and their minds when they live totally independently.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the time students spend living in other countries for their language and cultural learning brings many advantages to students regardless of some drawbacks. If students can be given this priceless chance and under good supervision from their universities, this type of study will enhance students’ academic ability.

Sample 4:

Many believe that in order to become immersed in another language and culture it is important to travel to the country in question. I agree generally, though there are certain exceptions depending on the purpose for learning.

Those with an academic interest in a given culture often do not need to travel there. This is particularly true if they are researching an historic period. For example, a scholar learning about Ancient Greece going there today, will only see ruins and a radically different culture. Ancient Greek is no longer even spoken. It would be much more profitable for a student of the Ancients to learn the language fluently on their own and become steeped in their histories and classic literature. The works of Euripides, Sophocles and Herodotus will provide far greater insight into the history, culture, and language of the Ancient Greeks than the few vestiges from thousands of years ago still standing today.

Nonetheless, cases like the one detailed above are rare and most people will benefit greatly from a more immersive experience. The difference between those studying abroad and learning in their own country is illustrative. Students attempting to learn English, for example, will need to be naturally adept at languages to become fluent without living in an English-speaking country. The majority of learners will improve faster when making daily transactions in English and learning in the real world outside the classroom. The cultural advantages are also self-evident. English movies and TV shows are realistic to varying degrees but pale in comparison to having actual foreign friends and experiencing firsthand their traditions and culture.

In conclusion, apart from esoteric academic study, nothing can replace the experience of living in another country. Anyone fully committed to understanding the culture and language of another country must factor in a period of time in residence there.

Sample 5:

Some argue that students should spend several years studying overseas in order to understand more about a country's language and culture. Despite certain issues such as cultural shock and linguistic barriers, I still believe that studying abroad is a good way for young people to broaden their cultural knowledge and improve their linguistic abilities.

Without a doubt, spending a few years in another country would be a golden opportunity to learn new cultures and languages. Studying in a foreign country allows students to actually experience the activities of the locals, as opposed to reading books and magazines. For example, if international students studying in Vietnam attend the Flower Festival in Dalat, they will be able to learn about a variety of flowers as well as try their hand at gardening. In terms of linguistic skills, students who engage with the locals on a regular basis have countless opportunities to sharpen their fluency and pick up new vocabulary used in different contexts.

Some could argue that students studying abroad would face linguistic barriers and cultural shocks. There would undoubtedly be those who do not have a strong command of the native language and hence find it difficult to fit into the local community. However, absorbing and mastering a foreign language is a complicated, time-intensive task that requires dedication, persistence, and hard work. If students are persistent enough, they can overcome language difficulties and can confidently explore more cultures and traditions.

In conclusion, it is a great idea to spend some time living and studying in another new country. This would help students gain a better understanding of that country's culture as well as improve their linguistic abilities.

Sample 6:

It is argued that there is a necessity for students to study and live in a foreign country for some time to acquire the language and culture so as to achieve a better education. Personally, I totally disagree with this idea, and I will elaborate upon the reasons below. 

The main reason why I do not believe that sending students overseas for some time to learn a different language and culture is considered as a part of education is that the knowledge regarding a language and culture can be gained in various ways, apart from going abroad. Native speakers of any languages, for example, can be invited to help students be equipped with required language skills, be it listening, reading, writing or speaking. Meanwhile, authentic materials including films and books can also be introduced to students to understand the way locals live, and the etiquette natives follow. In contrast, students living and studying in a foreign country for a spell may eventually achieve the same results, which is a waste of time and money.

Additionally, there are disciplines not associated with foreign languages and cultures. Students who specialize in science subjects such as physics and chemistry and those majoring in philosophy only need to focus on the knowledge itself. Although it seems reasonable that students may be required to access some journals in other languages when conducting research, the fact is that sufficient translated versions are made available for them to refer to. Apparently, for the purpose of education, having some time overseas is not a must. 

In conclusion, I strongly disagree that students, for the purpose of education, should allocate a period of time to studying and living in a different country to learn a different language and culture. For one thing, the acquisition of language and culture can be done in their home country by learning with native speakers and authentic materials; for another, many subjects have no relation to languages and cultures. 

Sample 7:

The issues of studying abroad always raise some arguments. Some may argue that teenagers are better suited spending their lives in various nations to broaden their horizons. Opponents, on the other hand, believe that overseas education is a waste of money. From a broad standpoint, I personally concur with the former for the following reasons.

To begin with, living and studying in different nations may broaden children's perspectives and gain the knowledge of professional opportunities for their future. For starters, when a newborn has a term to stay in another country, their foreign language skills and knowledge of life's diversity might increase. Teenagers who have the opportunity to transfer their schooling to the United States, for example, can practice and speak English more effectively than others. Social skills are highly essential in everyone's life, thus if the kids spend time in another country, they will absorb other cultures and improve their social skills. Finally, after graduation, the student may open the door to a higher career possibility since they have a solid knowledge base and can easily find work with a high income.

On the other hand, it is overwhelming to imagine if teenagers are capable of studying abroad for a specific time, there are many factors that they and their families need to consider. Without parental support, young people will feel lonely, alienated, and even fall down the wrong paths. But if they know how to protect themselves to overcome it all, studying abroad is always a good choice for comprehensive development and maturity.

In conclusion, even though studying in their countries is always full of materials and spiritual, academics should take into consideration to travel across another country as part of their education in order to get knowledge of other state practices; rather, those who choose to specialize in such languages can do so.

Sample 8:

There is a common situation raised in today’s society that many students go abroad to pursue the further education; gradually, along the increasing attention of the overseas study, some people think it is necessary to separate a part of school time to go to another country to learn the language and culture. In my opinion, what we should consider is not only the benefits, but also the difficulties and drawbacks impacting on our young generation.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that students who study in their mother land is restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources, like language and culture, to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of mastering a language faster and understanding the diversity of culture.

However, there are certain dangers at that important school age. Young adults may end up never returning to and readapting to their countries’ education. Compared with the education system in China, students would suffer huge differences in adapting a new one, but with the limited time, it is hard for those immature adolescents to reach the criteria; although they can achieve the academic purpose, they have to come back to the former system, which means they have to adjust the thoughts and habits several times in a shorts time. Meanwhile, the high cost of studying overseas cannot be ignored, for most families, which is unaffordable.

In conclusion, studying abroad could be encouraged, on condition that the family and the students can meet the requirements both mentally and financially; otherwise, it should not be included into the compulsory education but as a choice that people can choose.

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1 điểm

A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Sample 1:

Today, only a few languages reign supreme in most countries, whilst the usage of many other languages has declined. I argue in this essay why I believe this is an unwanted trend, for although it could help stimulate economic growth, the long-term consequences of cultural erosion are comparatively more undesirable.

On the one hand, it could be said that as a result of globalization, more people are learning the languages of world-leading economies, which leads to a greater overall increase in global GDP. At the moment, being bilingual boosts employment opportunities drastically for prospective employees since they can bridge the gap between two different cultures and economies. For instance, English and Chinese are the languages of choice today, and fluency is a skill sought after by international employers as they hope to do business in both English and Chinese speaking countries.

However, it could be posited that language is the foundation of culture, and if people cannot communicate, they cannot form a collective identity: the result would be that the culture gets eroded over time. Going into more detail, some words in many languages cannot be translated to others precisely because they are specific to a cultural context; the decline of a language would also mean the decline of a culture. Using a more specific example, the Welsh language is barely spoken because the English sought to replace their culture following an invasion; thus, learning Welsh has been considered an important way to preserve culture for many young Welsh people.

In conclusion, whilst I argue that although the use of only a few languages over the many can lead to more economic development, it is still nonetheless more important that people preserve their individual cultures; thus, the aforementioned trend has been an unwanted one.

Sample 2:

These days, there is a tendency that a small number of languages have gained widespread popularity in the world, while many others are being less spoken. In my opinion, this trend could bring both positive and negative consequences.

To begin with, there are substantial benefits to society when many countries share common languages. The first benefit is that cross-cultural communication can become easier nowadays, which helps boost multilateral trade and cultural exchange. It is true that ones who are bilingual or multilingual find it easier to do business or work in international companies as their issues at work can be addressed and discussed thoroughly. Furthermore, by acquiring languages which are commonly used in business, science and technology, people from less developed countries can accelerate the process of learning from more developed countries. For example, India achieves such incredible growth partly by using English as their official language.

Despite the great convenience of sharing common languages, the fact that other languages are less spoken can bring several drawbacks. The first disadvantage is that communities would lose parts of their cultural traditions such as songs, myths and poetry which are not easily translated into another language. This may in turn affect their cultural identity, producing a weakened social cohesion as their values and traditions are replaced with new ones. Moreover, this trend affects not only the local culture within one nation but also the civilization of mankind. If all countries no longer use their own language but use the same one, this could gradually destroy the cultural diversity of the world.

In conclusion, although I believe the trend is inevitable in the era of globalisation, people need to have measures to protect their less spoken languages as a way to preserve their cultural identity.

Sample 3:

While the world’s top spoken languages are continuing to grow, some languages are native to only a handful. The experts see this development positive for social development while fearing the loss of cultural identity. Although there might be some concerns, I believe that this is a natural tendency in the development of human society.

On the one hand, the popularity of some languages is providing better opportunities for people to be successful. The owners of many multinational corporations are originally from English countries, including Microsoft, Google in the USA or British Petroleum in the UK. As a result, young graduates with fluency in English can have a better connection to their potential employers, thus becoming more successful in their business. Furthermore, with more people adapting ‘top spoken languages’, the vast number of ideas and thoughts can be shared among colleagues. Therefore, people speaking fewer common languages are hindered from better chances of working, studying, and even travelling.

On the other hand, some might worry about the loss of cultural diversity. Apparently, it is crucial to know their culture to recognize each nation, and the best device is learning the language itself. For example, many of Arabic transcripts showing Arabs’ knowledge would have been difficult to be understood if no one had the access to Arabian letters. Nevertheless, it is obvious that the quicker the language barrier is pulled down, the faster technology develops, as do other scientific fields. Take the case of the last twenty years in Vietnam as an example. Newest technology has only been easily accessed by Vietnamese experts thanks to the advent of English.

In conclusion, although the domination of some languages has had several concerns, I strongly believe that the importance of it should not be neglected.

Sample 4:

In our today’s world, some languages gain its popularity while some languages have been gone. There are both advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

On the positive side, the increasing use of some languages will have a beneficial effect on communication between people from different countries. For example, English has become the lingua franca in many parts of the world, easing the difficulty in communication among people with different language backgrounds. It is the dominant language in many global aspects from science, diplomacy to international business so that cultural misunderstandings will be eradicated, global trade flourish and international partnerships are established. This is the reason why the ability to speak English or other languages that have global functionality is a necessary skill in the modern world.

On the negative side, the dominance of some languages while other languages are dying out is associated with the cultural loss. It is a fact that language and culture are interrelated, so losing a language means a culture is on the verge of extinction. In contrast, the dominant languages bring their own culture and endanger others, thereby the loss of cultural diversity on our planet. In addition, languages include historical values. An example for this is that a huge amount of knowledge in books and ancient documents cannot be extracted as they are written in the forgotten languages. Therefore, threatened languages should be saved to preserve the identity of people who are speaking them.

In conclusion, the increasing use of a few languages and the decline of others is both a positive as well as a negative development. However, I believe that it is necessary to save these dying languages to conserve our precious history.

Sample 5:

Language is a structured system of communication. It represents the customs, traditions, lifestyle, and history of the place. There are numerous languages used across the globe, with some being used extensively while others are disappearing as a result. This affects society both positively and negatively.

When numerous nations speak similar languages, society benefits greatly. Obviously, it is preferable to employ one main language as a bridge language, as it strengthens intercultural communication. Speaking a standard language may be favourable for professional life in certain situations since it makes it simpler to do business with or work for multinational companies because difficulties at work can be discussed in detail and handled. Furthermore, effective communication is the cornerstone of international markets. For instance, workers who are more proficient in English are more successful in their field of work because they can interact with their coworkers more effectively than those who are not.

I believe that a nation is recognised by its culture and traditions. And the best device to learn them is the language of the nation. The best example is a collection of historical transcripts of Arab history, which depicts the country's history and customs. Translations into another language may stray from the original story. This leads to cultural invasion, making the host country lose its culture. Therefore, it is important to save these languages to preserve the identity of the nation and its residents.

To sum up, even though some languages are becoming more important, and others are becoming less important, this has made global trade and unity possible, but it has also made it harder for cultures to keep their own identities. 

Sample 6:

With the advent of globalisation, there have been a variety of alterations. One of these is the use of language. Few languages, such as English and Chinese, are now widely spoken throughout the world, significantly reducing the use of several regional languages. I feel that the use of selected languages is beneficial not just for economic prosperity but for the world’s harmony as well.

Using a globally used dialect enables inter-continental unity. When the two parties speak a common language, the flow of conversation is smooth and steady. When people are able to understand one another, they do not feel insecure and uneasy. Another advantage of using a globally accepted language is reducing unemployment. It creates better future opportunities and helps them get placed. For instance, a statistical report published by a well-known newspaper organisation reveals that the number of students who benefit from learning English as a mandatory subject is increasing.

Further, one more advantage is the increased opportunity for business expansion. It is possible because English has become an officially accepted language internationally. Nowadays, the mode of communication in the corporate world is inclusive of emails, text messages, and phone calls. Having no language barrier is beneficial because it enables a smoother discussion and deal. Moreover, it is promoting international investment in local markets and helping the economy progress. For instance, multinational companies are investing in and merging local companies in India, helping them to become more profitable.

To sum up, a few languages have gained popularity. Although it has resulted in the disappearance of some languages. It is a positive development as it helps people worldwide unite as well as achieve economic prosperity.

Sample 7:

In recent times, a few languages like English, French, and so on have gained tremendous attention, while a certain number of other languages are losing their place. Even though having a common language is good for society, it is also bad in some ways.

A language barrier brings in certain insecure feelings inside an individual; it makes them question their presence in that particular region, and so on. A common language reduces their hesitation and uneasiness. It has enabled the presentation of ideas and views globally to a wider audience that can understand them. It promotes cultural exchange and helps in multilateral exchange due to easier communication. For example, after the Vietnamese companies adopted English as their mode of communication, their profitability and trade scale internationally increased by 25% in the first year itself.

On the contrary, minor and regional languages are disappearing due to this. This is harmful to culture because language is the representation of cultural identities. For instance, India has over 200 languages; however, only the major ones, such as Hindi, Gujarati, Marathi, Tamil, and so on, are used. Even English, an international language, is given more importance in comparison to the regional languages. A place can be best known and understood after learning its language. Language is something that can give people a sense of belonging and brotherhood. If it is lost, the diversity, history, and identity of a culture die.

In conclusion, a single language is important to cooperate, trade, and exchange resources; however, it cannot be at the expense of another language.

Sample 8:

It is a fact that there are a lot of small numbers of languages that have gained widespread popularity, but every year several of these languages disappear. Although some may agree that this has been more beneficial to societies, the drawbacks and advantages will be discussed in the next few paragraphs.

To begin with, when many countries share common languages, it has substantial benefits to society. Obviously, the use of one major language as a bridge language is desirable because it enhances cross-cultural communication. Moreover, it embodies a clear, accessible standard for everybody to follow, be it in books, movies, academic or popular publications, or the Internet.

In certain circumstances, employing a standard language brings blessings for career life as it is easier to do business or work in international companies as their problems at work may be addressed and mentioned thoroughly. Further, global trade is based on good communication. For example, employees who have better knowledge of English are more successful in their line of work as they can communicate better with their peers than those who have no mastery over the language.

On the other hand, the loss of language is a loss of cultural dialect, history and identity of certain communities. It is a fact that the dominant languages bring their own culture and endanger the traditional or prevalent ones. Furthermore, this trend affects not only the local culture within one nation but also the civilization of mankind. If countries no longer use their native language and use only one language, this could destroy the cultural diversity of the world.

In conclusion, although I believe the trend is inevitable in the growing era of globalization, people need to have measures to protect their less spoken languages as a way to preserve their cultural identity.

Sample 9:

The world has witnessed the prevalence of languages like English, Spanish, and Chinese while numerous other languages are diminishing. I believe this trend has both positive and negative aspects.

The increasing popularity of some languages facilitates economic development, convenience for travelling, and technological development. Indeed, globalization encourages economic powers to realize its expansionism in which multinational companies mushroom in every corner of the world. That requires people to speak the languages of their mother companies and the predominance of those languages in the economic world is a good sign of smoother economic activities worldwide. Besides, the presence of some popular languages in many countries allows international tourists to have more options for communication and avoid language barriers in their journeys overseas. Additionally, the acceptance of English enables the spread of technological products like Microsoft Word and Facebook to many countries. Without the popularity of English, these inventions would have been encased only within English speaking nations.

However, too much spotlight on some languages means negative consequences for other dwindling languages. The currency of a language varies according to its role in economic development. A lower number of users of a language means the gradual abandonment of that language by its very own people due to its little or no use in economic activities. This causes the potential reduction in cultural diversity and distinct values of different peoples embodied in their languages. To an extreme, the negligence of languages of the minorities is pushing them to the verge of extinction. Losing a language is like burying the people's origin, but this painful phenomenon is happening at an astonishing high rate. Thus, it is too dire a threat to ignore.

In conclusion, the heyday of some languages and the sunset of others are exposing themselves concurrently. This has both merits for global economic development and demerits of loss of human origins and cultural diversity. Therefore, measures should be urgently taken to promote positive effects and remedy negative corollaries of this trend.

Sample 10:

In today’s world, certain languages are gaining widespread use across many countries, while others are experiencing a rapid decline in usage. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this trend is advantageous as it not only facilitates global interactions but also presents ample job opportunities for individuals.

To start, the prevalence of certain languages undeniably fosters greater international trade. This occurs because when two nations share a common language, CEOs can easily comprehend each other’s proposals and strategies, expediting the process of negotiating contracts for the export and import of goods. For instance, proficiency in English during negotiations with European businesses provides Vietnamese entrepreneurs with significant opportunities to export their agricultural products to this profitable market. Consequently, this can substantially contribute to the development of the national economy, particularly in less prosperous regions, thereby improving the living standards of their populace.

Additionally, individuals who are bilingual or multilingual have access to better job prospects. Many multinational companies prefer to hire employees who are fluent in their native languages, enabling these companies to operate more effectively. Consequently, these highly valued workers are more likely to receive higher salaries or financial benefits, which can be used to cover various household expenses. Moreover, the international work environment exposes these employees to diverse cultures. For instance, when Vietnamese workers collaborate with colleagues from different parts of the world, they not only acquire valuable work-related skills but also gain profound insights into various cultures and traditions. This experience fosters their sense of tolerance and promotes international cooperation.

In conclusion, the proliferation of certain languages can be regarded as a positive development for countries, as it facilitates trade with potentially lucrative markets. Furthermore, individuals proficient in these languages can improve their quality of life and engage in cultural exchanges with other nations.

Sample 11:

Advances in technology, transport, and communication have given rise to the phenomenon of globalization. A lot of barriers have been pulled down; the exchange of ideas between countries and cultures has never been freer at any time in history. This has in turn led to an expanding use of a few major languages such as Arabic, Chinese, Spanish, and especially English. There are obvious benefits to this, but the possible cultural ramifications must not be ignored.

Obviously, the use of one major language as a lingua franca or bridge language is desirable because it enhances cross-cultural communication. It embodies a clear, accessible standard for everybody to follow be it in books, movies, academic or popular publications, or the Internet.

Additionally, if a country is to become globally competitive either in business or the labour market, then it is imperative for it to understand and utilize the dominant international language. In my part of the world, you will not make progress in a career or business without English because corporate communications and commerce is mostly conducted in this language. A business might succeed locally without it, but growth in the bigger national or international market will be curtailed.

Then again, the dwindling usage or even extinction of many minor languages is an unfortunate result of this phenomenon. This happens when fewer and fewer people speak their mother tongue because of a shifting of allegiance to the second language. This is unfortunate because language death also means a loss of cultural identity. Original meanings and nuances are lost in translation. Culture forms language, and language revolves around culture, the demise of one means the same for the other.

Maybe the best course of action is a form of compromise. Governments must take steps to preserve their languages and dialects by supporting appropriate legislation and by funding the efforts of learning institutions. Individuals should continue using their mother tongue and take pride in their distinct cultural heritage.

Sample 12:

Nowadays, international languages are rapidly growing globally, but using of the local ones is going to be deteriorated dramatically. Although some may agree that this has been more beneficial to societies, I personally think that its drawbacks have surpassed the advantages.

On the one hand, talking with some specific dialect has had two important benefits. The first one is that trading has become far easier. Businesspersons knowing English language are statistically more prosperous in their business because they can communicate better with their partners than the one not knowing English. The owners of many multinational corporations are originally from English countries or live there, including Microsoft, Google in the USA or British Petroleum in the UK. As a result, these traders can have a better connection to their partners, becoming more successful in their business. Moreover, immigrants can have more comfortable lifestyles abroad. For instance, an Iranian doctor, who is perfect in the English language, can have more opportunity than the one less knowing it.

On the other hand, I personally believe that other dialects must not be forgotten, and I give the green light to those supporting them. The most important reason behind it is that traditions will be loosed. Clearly, to recognise each nation, knowing about their culture is extremely crucial, and the best device is learning its language. As a prime example, many of Arabic historical transcripts, which show Arabs` history, would have been difficult to be understood if they had been changed to other languages. Their culture would have gradually been replaced with other words, and a cultural invasion would have occurred. In addition, domination of few languages can reduce the rating success of those students talking in other languages. Obviously, developing country scholars studying in developed countries have faced numerous challenges because of language; however, if they had studied in their country, they would have become more successful graduates. In particular, a Persian engineer who has moved to Canada is usually less prosperous than a Canadian one to sit a position in an English language college.

In conclusion, although the domination of some languages has had several advantages, the importance of other languages should not be neglected. I personally believe that protection of mother languages can raise the value of nations’ cultures and their prosperity in education.

12. Tự luận
1 điểm

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

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Sample 1:

The improvement in a country’s living standard often entails urban development, leaving rural areas stagnant behind. This can engender several problems in both urban and rural parts of the country, which can be addressed by some viable approaches outlined in the essay below. 

The disparity in the distribution of a higher standard of living favoring urban areas can pose some compelling challenges for a nation. Chief among these is the widening socioeconomic gap between the two regions, given that improved urban living standards are synonymous with better job opportunities with desirable wages, along with enhanced infrastructure, services and healthcare there. This will exacerbate the existing urban-rural inequalities within the nation. Another pressing problem is population issues, including overpopulation in urban regions and the “brain drain” phenomenon in the countryside. Particularly, owing to a more decent living standard in cities, rural dwellers, including talented ones, will continuously migrate to cities for better opportunities, leading to brain drain in the countryside. As a result, the countryside lacks an intellectual labor force, while urban areas face a population explosion and its consequent problems, such as traffic congestion and pollution, will be even more severe. 

To address these problems, the involvement of governments plays a crucial role. Governments can invest in rural economic development programs, including providing incentives for businesses to set up in rural areas and promoting industries based on agriculture. These can help to boost the rural economy and provide employment opportunities. Furthermore, the welfare of rural dwellers should also be dedicated, which can be done by improving transport, infrastructure, healthcare and digital connectivity. By doing so, rural areas can access markets, information, and services adequately. Also, providing quality education and skill development programs in rural areas can help people find employment locally. This reduces the need to migrate to cities, contributing to alleviating the population explosion in cities and its problems.

In conclusion, increasing socio-economic imbalances and population issues are subject to the fact that a higher living standard in a nation facilitates urban growth. These can be tackled by a combination of methods aimed at elevating the countryside’s economy and quality of life. 

Sample 2:

When standards of living increase, it is primarily urban residents, not those in the countryside, who benefit. In my opinion, this can lead to opposite problems related to population density and is best mitigated by governmental action.

Inequality in terms of standard of living engenders population problems for cities and rural regions. Cities have become over-populated in the last century as they offer a wider range of educational, occupational, and recreational options. Elevated population density means that although residents can enjoy a higher standard of living generally, they must also overcome concomitant effects from overcrowding such as more traffic, less sanitary conditions, and higher crime rates. The inverse problem exists outside cities as residents leave and locals struggle to earn a living in sparsely populated towns and villages.

These related problems can best be countered by the authorities. There are various initiatives that could be implemented. One real-world example of this would be in Japan where the government in recent years has addressed dwindling population numbers in the countryside by auctioning off country homes cheaply. Prospective home-owners are often able to buy houses nearly for free if they agree to live and work in a town with few residents. Another possible measure would be for governments to invest more in urban infrastructure. Since migrations to cities are likely inevitable, this is a more pragmatic tactic.

In conclusion, the inverse issues created for rural and urban areas by rising standards of living can be effectively controlled if governments intervene. This issue will only become more pressing as the global middle class continues to grow.

Sample 3:

Improving living standards in a particular country is generally advantageous for urban citizens compared to the ones living in the countryside. This situation is likely to result in some serious problems unless prevented by a set of effective counter measures.

To start, a disproportionate positive effect of growing living standards gives rise to two major issues, the most significant one of which is rural migration. This is because more and more rural dwellers choose to move to cities in search of better life quality as well as opportunities when quality of life in the countryside is inferior to that of cities. As a result, uncontrolled growth of urban population occurs, creating further problems for a country. Furthermore, contentment level among rural residents may decline as a result of not benefitting from a nationwide rise in life quality as much as their urban counterparts. This will eventually mean a fall in productivity levels, which is often followed by inefficiencies and possibly financial losses in the food supply chain.

Having established the severity of the situation, there are some practical solutions to consider. Channeling more financial investment into the countryside is often the first line of response. It works since this form of investment can be used to build plants and factories, hence creating more job opportunities for the common man. Having a secure job gives rural dwellers an incentive to stay in the country. Making countryside life appealing is another possible solution. This can be done by helping people there meet their basic needs for living such as food, warm housing, and healthcare. The government can take this idea a step further with the creation of leisure centers to foster a jovial spirit in the countryside.

In conclusion, while the main issues stemming from an uneven rise in living standards are uncontrolled rural migration and less happy rural dwellers, solutions range from directing more funds to the countryside to making the countryside life attractive.

Sample 4:

Nowadays cities are getting more benefits than rural areas, but there are so many problems. Though there are many facilities, we have to face some causes to live there. Here I am going to share a few problems which occur there and the solution for them.

We all know that the city looks so good, neat and has a good atmosphere but even though it was improved with many facilities, some places look good and neat in atmosphere. Yes, sanitizing. The government of India appointed few workers to sanitize our surroundings, but workers in some areas were doing their job as well, especially in the main cities, but in most of the places they were not doing their job, once in a week or once in two weeks they were cleaning the garbage, or they were complaining of non-payments of money and stop working,

As we all know, in villages there are more animals compared to urban areas, but they are keeping their society clean and natural, by planting trees, using biodegradable garbs as fertilizers. It helps them to lead happy and healthy lives. The most notable thing in rural lifestyles is they avoid using non-biodegradable things like plastics. Mostly they use aluminum vessels, mud vessels and steel vessels. Even they avoid plastic covers, instead they use cotton bags, etc.

As a city resident we should take steps to keep our surroundings neatly as if the sanitizing workers were not doing their jobs, but we cannot blame them, so form a group for social service (FASS) and take some actions like avoiding plastics, non-biodegradable products to use, to keep our surroundings neat and good.

Sample 5:

Nowadays, the availability of modern facilities is increasing because of advanced technology worldwide. However, the advancement of living standards has more positive effects in urban areas than in the countryside. It can generate a number of problems, and there are also some solutions to reduce the issues, which I have discussed in detail in the next paragraph.

To begin with, there are some issues that can take place in the nation; first and foremost, one is that people start to migrate from rural areas to urban areas. This is because people want to enjoy a luxurious lifestyle, and job opportunities are also higher in cities, so they leave their native places and move to urban areas. In addition, the education institutes and hospitals have new technology. People can be educated and also receive good treatment if they live in a developed area. Thus, cities’ populations can increase drastically.

Furthermore, some solutions can help to tackle these issues. The first one is that the government should develop villages by building new roads, schools, and houses. These are people’s basic needs, so when they get this facility at their native place, they do not need to find any other place to survive. The government can also give loans to people willing to start their own businesses in the countryside. This can develop more jobs in that area so that individuals can earn independently in villages.

In conclusion, although people can face many problems, such as an increase in the number of people in cities, the government can solve them by providing loans and basic needs to the village’s people. It can motivate people to stay in their native places and reduce city migration.

Sample 6:

Due to a higher ability to live in cities, the countryside negatively encourages the public to move outside. It has been causing issues such as overcrowding, and thus, the government might deal with that by making the village a good place for citizens to live.

First, because of the population, when people reach the city to change their lives, many rural areas suffer, and residential places become empty. Everybody travels and abandons the elderly public alone. As a result, a huge number of young members prefer modern areas. These days, big cities cannot handle many communities, creating many problems such as unemployment, and parents hardly ever find a school for their minors. For example, in Canada, most citizens enjoy living in Toronto, so the percentage of tax increases, and many people have a difficult time finding jobs, which puts the government under pressure to solve that issue.

On the other hand, the government must tackle the issue in the countryside, such as finding jobs or old school. In spite of public travel to have a new job, hence financial stability, or parents whose juveniles want a good education, the government might stop new people from leaving their areas for the city. The solution could be building many schools and increasing the salary for varied work. For instance, many rural places in America have the best standard for local people. Likewise, the biggest city and the minors from the countryside have useful learning than the idea of leaving for another place is needless for them.

In conclusion, it has raised the quality of living in the city rather than the countryside, which many individuals and the forceful for government to solve.

Sample 7:

The improvement in the standard of living is a significant indicator of a nation’s progress. However, it often favours urban areas over rural regions, leading to economic inequality, inadequate infrastructure and services, and brain drain. This essay will discuss the problems caused by these disparities and propose strategies to mitigate them.

The urban-rural divide results in increased economic disparities between urban and rural areas. Consequently, rural regions face limited job prospects, lower income levels, and higher poverty rates. This perpetuates social and economic inequalities within the country. Another consequence of the urban-rural divide is the inadequate provision of essential services and infrastructure in rural areas. While urban areas receive greater investments in transportation networks, healthcare facilities, and educational institutions, rural regions suffer from a lack of quality infrastructure. The urban-rural divide also gives rise to a phenomenon known as brain drain, where talented individuals from rural areas migrate to cities in search of better opportunities. Consequently, this exacerbates the developmental gap between urban and rural regions, depriving rural areas of essential talent. 

To address the urban-rural divide, governments should leverage information and communication technology (ICT) to bridge the gap. This includes providing rural areas with broadband connectivity, online education, telemedicine, and e-commerce platforms. Additionally, by encouraging rural-urban partnerships, fostering knowledge exchange, and attracting investments in rural enterprises, governments can foster balanced and inclusive growth. By implementing these strategies, governments can effectively reduce the disparities in the standard of living between urban and rural areas, ensuring equitable progress and improving the lives of people in both regions.

In conclusion, addressing the urban-rural divide requires a comprehensive approach. Governments should prioritize promoting rural industries, improving infrastructure and services, and providing equal access to education and healthcare. Leveraging information and communication technology (ICT) can also play a crucial role in bridging the gap between urban and rural areas. By implementing these strategies, societies can work towards reducing disparities in the standard of living and achieving inclusive progress. It is essential for policymakers to take proactive measures to ensure a balanced and equitable development across urban and rural regions.

Sample 8:

The gap in the standard of living between cities and rural areas has been widening as a byproduct of economic progress made in any country. This trend has given rise to quite a few problems, which can be accordingly solved.

Several acute problems can come up due to the growing inequality between urban and rural areas. The first to be mentioned is the unplanned and uncontrolled sprawling of urban development. City planners are finding it harder and harder to accommodate an increasing number of people who leave their towns and villages. Forcibly, those people are subject to appalling living conditions in the outskirts of cities.

No better method to alleviate this problem could be devised rather than to shift the economic focus and channel more governmental funds from big cities to rural areas. This money could be spent on raising the number of enterprises located in less priviledged parts of the country and public facilities to increase people’s comfort of life. The job opportunities provided can act as an incentive to hold dwellers of rural areas in their places of origin. This method can be able to “kill two birds with one stone” as it does not only make economic sense in the countryside. Moreover, urbanization can take place at a more sustainable pace and a country, as a whole, will benefit greatly.

The issue of economic imbalance between rural and city areas can bring large-scale and long-term adverse impacts to the society. The good news is this is not an insurmountable problem, if more priority were given to the development of rural areas.

Sample 9:

In recent times, several countries have witnessed an upward trend in living standards, resulting in detrimental consequences such as pollution and a rise in the cost of living for the populace. To mitigate these detrimental impacts, government intervention is imperative to balance the economy across regions and address alternative forms of pollution.

The improvement in the quality of life has resulted in several adverse outcomes. The majority of products in the contemporary era are indirectly contributing to the escalation of costs. This is primarily attributable to various factors, including manufacturing, distribution, and reservation costs. Consequently, the development of social welfare has indirectly raised the cost of public infrastructure. For instance, the cost of medical healthcare in Vietnam has become excessively costly, mainly due to the prices of modern technology and medicines. Another prominent drawback is the rapid development of life quality, contributing to pollution in several countries. Infrastructure, including schools, hospitals, and businesses, is mainly concentrated in certain areas. As a result, these facilities will experience a surge in visitors from around the country, leading to significant citizen consumption that releases carbon dioxide and other pollutants into the atmosphere, contaminating nearby rivers and lakes. Many major cities worldwide face this issue, as exemplified by New Delhi, the capital city of India.

Several viable solutions exist to alleviate these issues, all of which require government intervention. Investing in and constructing more facilities in rural areas is an effective solution. Notably, funding in those areas will balance the economy between regions, prevent large-scale migration, and alleviate overcrowding in large cities. Investing more in local areas entails generating more employment for the indigenous population and providing essential infrastructure. For example, Vietnam’s government has been investing heavily in provinces like Bac Ninh, Ninh Binh, and Phu Quoc to balance the economy between regions while creating tourist destinations.

In conclusion, the rise in living standards has brought about major drawbacks, such as increased costs for various products and potential harm to the environment. To address these issues, government intervention is crucial to balance the economy and safeguard the ecosystem.

Sample 10:

Every data seems to indicate that enormous growth is happening in every field. It is important for a thriving economy - technology, agriculture, services, and industry. This development transforms into better purchasing power and an associated overall better standard of living.

It has been found that a rise in the standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. The reasons for such a disparity lie in many factors contributing to the rising economic differences between households in urban and rural areas.

Migration due to the absence of opportunities in the countryside and the rising cost of every facility. This includes education, healthcare, infrastructure, food, clothing and travel is forcing rural populations to move into cities for a better life. With fluctuating prices of essential and non-essential commodities, the fear of having a bleak future is looming large on the less-privileged demographics.

Although all the major cities are overcrowded with people forced to live in congested spaces. The fascination of making more money is alluring the youth to make the shift to big cities. Making better money coupled with an absence of parental control are making the youth aspire for freedom - a freedom that seems elusive in rural set-ups.

Also, the overcrowding of cities is leading to major irreversible environmental issues like high pollution. Because of the increased number of vehicles plying on the roads and deforestation due to an uptick in living requirements to accommodate the incoming footfall. These are major concerns for a sustainable future of the country and the world.

This ensuing migration also results in the vanishing of many valuable traditional crafts. Since the youth refuse to work for longer hours in lieu of small amounts of wages. They find assistance and clerical jobs located in cities to be better paying and more fulfilling.

The government must take notice of the ever-broadening gap between city and rural dwellers. Introduction of intervention measures to arrest the migration via the building of quality educational centres with highly-trained teachers. In addition, a fully-functional hospital with advanced technology, wide roads ensuring fast connectivity. Moreover, employing new technologies in the agricultural field and skilling the youth for digital integration is necessary.

If the rural population are made to believe that they can do equally well living in their native places. Then the standard of living in rural areas will become aspirational. This will uplift the standard of living of the country uniformly.

Sample 11:

A rise in the standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. This statement evokes many emotions as many of us like to believe that the soul of a country lies in its rural landscape.

The standard of living that is a prominent marker of progress depends on various factors. These include highly ranked universities, healthcare with the best pool of medical talent. In addition, it also needs recreation and cultural spaces, living spaces entailing modern amenities and more.

Rural spaces, although high in cultural and traditional values, often lack the amenities required to consistently live well. Amenities important for one’s transformation - right from education, healthcare and accommodation of desirable quality - aren’t available in the countryside.

The out-migration from rural areas to urban ones is the result of wanting a life fulfilled in every manner. With access to institutions of excellence, one can hope to get into the workforce with a bigger paycheck. This has the capacity for increased purchasing power and a staircase for building generational wealth.

However, this leads to rural areas’ progress being stuck in the tunnel. A place that’s sparsely populated would not be able to start and build successful businesses. With no cash flow, the demand-supply chain would break down and this would result in livelihood losses resulting in forced migrations. This is the main reason for a poor standard of living in rural spaces.

The truth is that cities are accommodating far more people than they can support. This has led to a haphazard development without taking into account the environmental costs. Extreme weather, suffocating air quality, absence of green covers and less space per person are all points of grave concern.

The government must do the needful by employing measures to create an ecosystem serving all the necessities and wants of the rural population. Digital literacy programs, education and healthcare-related missions and heavy investment in infrastructure and logistics. These are some of the programmes that must be dealt with urgently in an expert manner.

The situation has to be made favourable to ensure an equitable lifestyle for all the people of a country. After all, a truly developed country is one that provides equality for all its residents.

Sample 12:

The idea of a local infrastructure development in urban areas is a first priority and leads to spending less funds for rural regions. And there are bigger problems occurring with the transition. Now, I will state the reasons and find the approximate solutions to cope with the issue.

Speaking about the situation, the urban areas develop at a hasty pace as it attracts influx of people from rural lands. As there is better infrastructure, health facilities, and job opportunities compared to the countryside, this makes people go to cities which leads to overpopulation. On top of that, there is overpricing in rent, and groceries, and an increase in road traffic. An example can be in cities, people are required to pay a heavy price for houses, almost double that of houses in rural areas. Moreover, the country that follows rural emigration is seen to witness underdevelopment in rural territories because the lack of working people makes it difficult to reach high productivity.

Such problems must be solved by the government and individuals. Firstly, the authorities can provide the basic infrastructure to the village people. With better health and schools in such areas, they will not migrate to towns and cities, which will fix the problem of overpopulation. Secondly, introducing benefits just like that in China where they offer incentives to people working in rural areas is a solution to tackle migration to towns and cities.

Concludingly, the issue of rising living standards in certain urban areas within a country can be detrimental to a deep extend as it may lead to overly populated regions, and expensive housing. Therefore, the only means that promise rural areas effective productivity and maintain living standards are fair incentives and enhanced infrastructure.

Sample 13:

In the wake of globalization, numerous countries are undergoing an upward trend in the levels of living standard for people, thereby engendering pernicious environmental issues, and increasing the cost of living among natives. It is a fact that city-bred citizens tend to enjoy premium facilities and living conditions compared to their counterparts living in rural areas. This essay will substantiate the problems kindred with urbanization, and potential solutions to help mitigate the imbalance in living standards. 

To commence with, the handy access to countries beyond boundaries through collaborations, knowledge, and technological exchange, there is a creation of a pool of job and academic opportunities which facilitates migration. Notwithstanding, rural inhabitants are denuded of availing the same utilities and resources as evinced by numerous surveys. Apart from this, urbanization provokes barely any development for workers in the countryside which impedes a conducive lifestyle. An instance is of the farmers in India receiving meager support from governments when incentives or welfare is concerned. Hence, these myriad issues exacerbate the quality of life of the village dwellers. 

There are viable solutions that can fulfill the provisions that augment the development in rural areas. To alleviate the impending issues, there should be proactive intervention from the government's end. It can aim for investing funds for the workers and installing a superior framework for the students so that the educational standards and living-and-working conditions are ameliorated. This will ensure proper balance in the economic flow between regions, and thwart overcrowding in cities ensuing out of large-scale rural-urban migration. 

In conclusion, urban settlers enjoy benefits and luxuries more than most rural communities because of the fragmented concerns leading to imbalance. However, the government has the authority to intervene forthwith to balance the economy and remediate the differences in living standards. 

13. Tự luận
1 điểm

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Wealthy nations often provide financial support to developing countries, but some people think that it is better to give poor countries a more practical kind of support. I completely agree with this opinion.

One of the problems with financial assistance is that it often does not reach its intended receivers. Instead, it is misused by corrupt government officials, who use this money for their own sake, while those in real need receive little or nothing at all. Another thing that needs to be considered is that giving money to poor countries does not help address the root causes of poverty, one of which lies in a lack of access to basic education.

Therefore, instead of donating money, it is better to invest in the education system of poorer nations. A more practical way to offer help is to deploy teachers, build more educational institutions, and provide more resources like textbooks and school supplies. A lack of education is one of the primary reasons why so many people in underdeveloped countries get stuck in a vicious cycle of extreme poverty. Due to their inability to read and write, many have to work in labour-intensive or dangerous jobs for extremely low wages and they have to keep borrowing money to cover their basic daily expenses. Thus, when people are given the chance to go to school, they will be more likely to get a well-paid job, improve their living standards, and eventually lift themselves out of poverty.

In conclusion, I totally agree with the opinion that financial aid cannot help tackle the problem of poverty in developing countries, and that instead of pouring billions of dollars into the governments of poor countries, that amount should be invested in paying teachers’ salaries, constructing more educational facilities, and offering more resources.

Sample 2:

It is commonplace for wealthier countries to provide money to underdeveloped countries, yet the assistance fails to reduce poverty. Others argue that wealthy countries should help developing nations in ways other than monetary aid. Although financial aid is not a complete solution, it may be crucial in assisting developing nations. Moreover, other types of support are also required to battle poverty effectively.

Financial aid is crucial in providing immediate relief during times of crisis, such as natural disasters and pandemics. In these situations, necessities such as food, medicine, and shelter are urgently needed, and financial assistance can provide these resources to those in need. The COVID-19 pandemic, for example, has devastated many poorer countries, exacerbating existing challenges such as healthcare and economic inequalities. Financial aid provided by wealthier nations has played a critical role in mitigating the impact of the virus and supporting struggling communities. While financial aid is not a complete solution to poverty, it remains an essential tool in providing immediate relief and support during times of crisis.

To truly combat poverty, however, it is essential to complement financial assistance with other types of aid. Technical expertise and assistance, for example, can play a crucial role in helping poorer nations develop their economies and improve their education systems and infrastructure. More affluent countries can share their knowledge and experience in these areas through partnerships with businesses, educational institutions, and governments. By working together, developed and developing nations can identify and address the specific needs of poorer countries, creating sustainable change beyond short-term relief. Additionally, this can lead to long-term economic benefits for both developed and developing nations, fostering mutual understanding and cooperation.

In conclusion, I believe there is still a significant role that financial assistance may play in assisting low-income nations. In addition, expertise and help from the technological realm are also required in the fight against poverty.

Sample 3:

It is widely observed that wealthier countries often provide financial aid to underdeveloped nations. However, it has been argued that this approach alone does not effectively alleviate poverty. Instead, developed countries should offer alternative forms of assistance to address the needs of poor nations. While financial aid may not be a comprehensive solution, it remains essential, and other types of support should be implemented in conjunction to combat poverty more effectively.

In terms of immediate relief during crises like natural disasters or pandemics, financial aid plays a crucial role. It allows for the provision of urgent necessities such as food, medicine, and shelter for those in need. For instance, the COVID-19 pandemic has severely impacted many impoverished countries, exacerbating existing healthcare and economic inequalities. Financial aid from wealthier nations has played a vital role in mitigating the pandemic's impact and supporting vulnerable communities. While financial aid alone may not solve poverty, it serves as a crucial tool in providing immediate relief and support during critical times.

However, to achieve long-term poverty reduction, financial assistance must be complemented by other forms of aid. Technical expertise and assistance, for example, can play a pivotal role in helping poorer nations develop their economies, improve education systems, and build infrastructure. Collaborative partnerships between developed and developing nations can facilitate knowledge sharing and experience exchange in these areas. By addressing the specific needs of poorer countries through sustained cooperation, we can foster sustainable change beyond short-term relief. Moreover, this collaborative effort can yield long-term economic benefits for both developed and developing nations, fostering mutual understanding and cooperation.

In conclusion, while financial assistance is crucial in assisting low-income nations, it is imperative to supplement it with other forms of aid. Technical expertise and assistance should be provided to address long-term poverty reduction effectively. By combining financial aid with other types of support, we can strive to create a more sustainable and inclusive environment for developing nations.

Sample 4:

Developed nations are frequently seen providing economic assistance to third-world countries. However, it does not always help reduce poverty; therefore, it is argued that less affluent nations must be provided with an alternative form of aid which will help them in the long run. This essay discusses why developing countries can be better off from such assistance and the types of help offered.

Firstly, when developed countries give money to undeveloped countries, it will help citizens in these countries solve short-term problems, and it will not last long. When inhabitants in emerging countries receive money from donations, they use it to pay the temporary cost or issues. For instance, in 2005, the United States donated about 20 billion to some undeveloped countries, but still, it only helped people solve the problem f for two months. After two months, they continued poorly.

Moreover, developed countries should invest in healthcare and education rather than loan money to other countries. When the younger generation receives a quality education and everyone has access to proper medical treatment and hospitality, it will help eliminate unemployment and prevent people from resorting to unlawful activities. So developed countries must avail themselves in building good schools, universities, and hospitals. Moreover, they can help stabilize the government in these countries and monitor whether the political environment is conducive to growth. Although money helps feed the hungry lot, it is only a temporary solution.

However, before providing help with other aid to developing countries, developed countries should give financial assistance to developing countries because people say that money does solve most problems.

To summarize, I favour the opinion that rich countries should provide practical help to improve the economic status of developing countries. However, financial assistance can only help to a certain extent and is not the definite way to eliminate poverty.

Sample 5:

In order to solve poverty in poor countries, some wealthy nations tend to donate money to them. However, due to the ineffectiveness of financial aid, some people believe that other measures should be implemented. I firmly agree with this view, as corruption never allows such resources to be spent wisely.

Some might argue that financial aid gives local governments more power to resolve issues like poverty. Since they know their country and people better, they might be more suitable to decide where the money should be spent. Indeed, a true government will always prioritize its people’s welfare, but unfortunately, it usually is not the case in many third-world countries. For instance, the USA supported the local government of Afghanistan for decades by providing billions of dollars. However, the latter did not prosper as it should have because of its systematic corruption at the government level. As a result, it collapsed once again with its people still being one of the poorest in the world.

Therefore, powerful countries need to identify the needs of disadvantaged nations and send experts to train locals to be able to become economically independent. For instance, Afghanistan is known for its rich sources of minerals and raw materials. If the US had sent industry experts and built factories to help locals increase their domestic production levels and earn money through exports, the country would have become industrialized within a decade and stopped needing foreign aid. Additionally, building schools and training local teachers to take charge of a standard education system would have had far-reaching benefits, as each well-trained student could bring fresh ideas and start a business, creating jobs for others. Eventually, all these measures would have improved the economic health of the country and eradicated poverty by eliminating nationwide unemployment.

In conclusion, providing financial resources to local authorities might seem an easy way of fighting poverty in the world, but not every government is trustworthy enough to spend money wisely. Therefore, investing that aid in the nation’s infrastructure, instead, is a more sensible solution, as it targets education and unemployment to resolve the problem.

Sample 6:

Financial aid is frequently provided by wealthy nations to impoverished nations, yet this type of aid alone fails to resolve the issue of poverty. Hence, it is recommended that wealthy nations offer alternative forms of aid. In my opinion, I believe that while financial aid is still an important form of assistance, rich countries should also explore other forms of aid.

On the one hand, financial aid can certainly help provide immediate relief. Firstly, financial aid can be helpful in addressing immediate needs such as food, shelter, and medical care. For example, after a natural disaster, financial aid can help provide emergency relief to affected communities, which is crucial in helping to contain the epidemic and save lives. Secondly, providing financial aid to poor countries can contribute to global stability by promoting political and economic stability in those countries. For instance, this can help reduce the risk of conflict and prevent the spread of extremism and terrorism.

On the other hand, financial aid alone does not solve poverty in the long term. Financial aid can sometimes lead to dependency, as poor countries become reliant on aid rather than building their own economies. One example of financial aid leading to dependency is the case of Haiti’s earthquake. After the earthquake, Haiti received a significant amount of aid from foreign governments and international organizations. However, the aid created a culture of dependency, as the Haitian government became reliant on aid rather than developing its own economy. Additionally, there are other available forms of assistance that can help poor countries break the cycle of poverty. As proof, education is a crucial form of aid, as it can help poor countries develop a skilled workforce that is capable of driving economic growth and development.

In conclusion, financial aid is still an important form of assistance, but it is not a solution to poverty in poor countries. Rich countries should explore other forms of aid such as technical expertise, education, and training to help build sustainable economies and address the root causes of poverty.

Sample 7:

Although poorer countries usually receive financial aid from more developed nations, such assistance does not help eradicate poverty. Thus, it is believed that developed countries should provide other types of help to their underdeveloped and developing counterparts, with which I completely agree.

Despite its impact on poorer countries’ economies, monetary support is only a short-term solution and cannot help these countries escape poverty. In some developing and underdeveloped countries, corruption is among the serious problems which have been existing for years. Even if rich nations provide financial assistance to their poorer counterparts, the money may not reach the right recipients, who are unfortunate people living on the breadline. Furthermore, there are still some problems which stem from poor management of government or administrative systems in poor countries. Those problems could not be tackled by financial aid since a country has no right to interfere with another country’s internal affairs.

Since financial assistance could not contribute much to the alleviation of poverty, developed countries should offer other forms of support to their poorer counterparts. One way is for richer countries to provide occupational courses to increase the level of education in poorer countries. One of the root causes of poverty in underdeveloped countries is the lack of education, which could be solved by developed countries offering basic training courses for employment in poor countries. Furthermore, providing proper technical training could be another type of effective help for poor countries. Thanks to the advanced technical understanding provided by developed countries, poor countries can upgrade their industries, enhance their global competitiveness, and therefore eliminate poverty.

In conclusion, rather than giving direct financial support, I think developed countries should share other resources, such as their knowledge and understanding, with poorer countries and thus help them curb poverty.

Sample 8:

Currently, the gap between affluent and poor nations is expanding. Even today, millions of people in developing countries lack access to health care and education. Since their governments lack the financial resources to enhance their citizens' standard of living, some believe that wealthy nations should provide financial assistance. I agree with this recommendation. In my opinion, rich nations should support poor nations.

Firstly, wealthy nations have excess finances. By providing financial assistance to underdeveloped nations, the global quality of life can be raised. Poverty is the underlying cause of numerous societal evils. It is a well-known fact that numerous antisocial elements thrive in disadvantaged countries. In general, the impoverished are unhappy with their own life. They are also furious with the wealthy. Obviously, many of them exhibit criminal tendencies. They cannot be reformed without an improvement in their living conditions. By offering financial aid to needy nations, wealthy nations can alleviate poverty in those nations and contribute to a more peaceful world.

In addition to financial support, wealthier nations should employ other means to aid the needy. The strategies will focus on enhancing the motivation, survival abilities, and knowledge of the recipients. Therefore, they will be able to govern their country effectively and enhance their living conditions. As a result, living conditions in less developed countries will improve and they will be able to rely on their own resources.

In conclusion, I believe that high levels of corruption and weak governance are the primary causes of poverty in underdeveloped nations. However, this can be resolved by instituting the appropriate rules and regulations.

Sample 9:

It has been suggested that wealthier nations should always provide adequate financial aid to developing nations in order to relieve poverty. In addition to providing monetary assistance, prosperous nations should prioritise providing humanitarian aid to developing nations. In my opinion, suitable services for teaching and training the citizens of these impoverished nations should be made available.

To commence with, financial assistance to a country in need may initially appear to be a solution because it temporarily alleviates a country's economic problems. However, merely financial aid will not work in the long run for various reasons. First, financial aid does not always reach those in need. Some of the poorest nations have corrupt administrations that misappropriate foreign help for their own gain. Consequently, the poor will remain impoverished even after receiving foreign aid. Therefore, if these financial aids are implemented effectively, they can be substantial or even more effective in providing actual support.

Secondly, prosperous nations should establish their firms in these less developed nations. Therefore, a rise in investment will allow the country's citizens to have access to employment opportunities. On the other hand, the process of giving economic aid should not be halted, as the above-mentioned processes require time to produce the best results. A congruous combination of these variables would produce a more favourable outcome in the future.

In conclusion, I support the view that rich countries should provide practical assistance to enhance the economic situation of poor countries but, providing just economic assistance to poor countries will temporarily mitigate the gravity of the issue.

Sample 10:

Nowadays, rich nations are becoming richer while poor nations are becoming poorer. Some people believe that developed nations should send financial aid to developing nations, while others argue that financial aid cannot fix this issue. However, wealthy nations provide needy nations with assistance other than financial aid. This idea has both benefits and drawbacks. I concur with the former view.

On the one hand, many people feel wealthy nations should provide financial aid to developing nations. In accordance with this criterion, rich nations provide this assistance, which is beneficial to underdeveloped nations as a result of wars and natural calamities. While some state authorities aid this country financially and provide food and essentials to its citizens, others provide shelter to those who have lost their houses as a result of the war.

On the contrary, a number of individuals believe wealthy nations should provide assistance in other ways besides financial aid. While financial aid is necessary, developed nations also provide other sorts of assistance, such as excellent education, water supply, electrical infrastructure, etc., since if only money aid were provided, the issues of poverty could not be resolved. For instance, in the majority of nations, pupils learn with the fewest available resources since these nations lack good schools and quality education. Therefore, prosperous nations should provide educational and medical aid.

In conclusion, I believe that wealthy nations should provide financial aid and great education to young people so that they can advance their careers and the nation as a whole. Moreover, they should also provide employment opportunities so that the standard of living could be improved.

Sample 11:

The global dialogue on financial aid reveals a critical consensus: merely transferring funds from affluent nations to impoverished ones falls short of eradicating poverty. I contend that alternative forms of assistance can prove more effective, focusing on sustainable development and capacity building. This essay will explore the significance of investing in education and infrastructure, alongside fostering local economies, as transformative strategies that surpass the temporary relief offered by financial aid.

Financial aid, though crucial for immediate crisis alleviation, often bypasses the fundamental factors perpetuating poverty. Conversely, strategic investments in education serve as a powerful lever for empowerment, equipping individuals with essential skills and knowledge for self-improvement and community upliftment. For instance, literacy and vocational training are instrumental, enabling people to acquire better employment opportunities and effectively break the relentless cycle of poverty. Additionally, a well-educated populace is pivotal in fostering a society adept at making informed choices, thereby significantly enhancing governance and curbing corruption, ultimately leading to more transparent and accountable societal structures.

In a similar vein, the construction and enhancement of infrastructure, including roads, healthcare facilities, and systems for clean water, create a solid foundation for sustained economic advancement. Improved access to comprehensive healthcare services markedly reduces disease spread and boosts population longevity. Simultaneously, upgraded transportation networks crucially support trade and access to broader markets. Encouraging the development and expansion of small and medium-sized enterprises, wealthy countries can vitalize local economies, generate substantial employment opportunities, and stimulate innovation. This multifaceted approach not only underpins self-reliance but also plays a significant role in fostering a global economy characterized by greater equity and inclusivity.

In conclusion, financial aid offers a short-term fix to poverty's symptoms, whereas investments in education, infrastructure, and economic empowerment tackle its root causes. Shifting focus to these areas enables affluent countries to foster sustainable development and self-reliance in poorer nations, creating a deeper and more enduring impact. This strategic shift in aid approach aims for poverty's eradication, not merely its alleviation.

Sample 12:

The provision of financial aid by affluent nations to their poorer counterparts has long been a staple of international assistance. However, this approach is increasingly scrutinized for its inability to resolve the underlying issues of poverty. I argue that a more effective strategy lies in non-monetary aid forms, specifically targeting education, infrastructure, and economic empowerment, to enact lasting change.

Direct financial assistance, while crucial for alleviating immediate short-term needs, often overlooks the deeper systemic barriers to sustainable development. In stark contrast, education serves as a powerful catalyst for empowering individuals with the essential knowledge and skills necessary for achieving economic self-sufficiency. Targeted initiatives, such as comprehensive vocational training and extensive literacy programs, equip individuals with valuable tools to significantly improve their employability and enhance their entrepreneurial capacities. This form of empowerment transcends mere individual benefits, fostering broader socio-economic development within communities and instigating a positive ripple effect that benefits society at large.

Furthermore, the pivotal role of infrastructure development in promoting sustained economic growth is undeniably profound. Strategic investments in critical sectors like healthcare, transportation, and sanitation create a solid foundation for a healthier, more mobile, and highly productive population. For example, innovative rural electrification projects have the transformative power to revolutionize communities by providing widespread access to information, facilitating digital education initiatives, and unlocking new markets for local products. Such endeavors not only stimulate vibrant economic activity but also contribute to the creation of a more interconnected and resilient economy, showcasing the far-reaching impacts of well-thought-out infrastructural advancements.

In conclusion, prioritizing education, infrastructure, and economic empowerment over financial aid offers a more sustainable poverty solution. These measures tackle poverty's root causes, encouraging development, self-sufficiency, and resilience. Such a holistic approach enables richer nations to contribute more meaningfully to eradicating global poverty, providing not just immediate relief but a roadmap to enduring prosperity.

Sample 13:

The provision of financial aid to poor countries by their more affluent counterparts has been a widely debated topic. It is often argued that such monetary assistance does not effectively solve poverty and that wealthy nations should consider alternative forms of support. This essay will contend that while financial aid may not be an all-encompassing solution to poverty, it remains a critical component in alleviating the plight of impoverished nations. Consequently, it is essential that rich countries continue to provide financial assistance while concurrently exploring other means of support.

Financial aid to poor countries plays a crucial role in addressing various development challenges. For instance, it enables the implementation of vital infrastructure projects, such as the construction of schools and hospitals, which significantly improve the quality of life for citizens. Additionally, financial assistance can be employed in emergency situations like natural disasters, where quick and substantial monetary support is indispensable. Nevertheless, it is important to acknowledge that relying solely on financial aid may not solve the poverty issues in the long run.

Alternative forms of help, such as capacity building and technological transfer, can be more effective in promoting self-sufficiency and sustainable development in poorer nations. Capacity building entails equipping individuals with the necessary skills and knowledge to create a robust and resilient economy. This can be achieved through vocational training, educational exchanges, and mentorship programs, which empower locals to become agents of change in their communities. Furthermore, technological transfer facilitates access to advanced tools and systems, enabling developing nations to leapfrog stages of development, thereby stimulating economic growth and reducing poverty.

In conclusion, it is evident that financial aid to poor countries, though not an absolute solution, remains a vital component in the global fight against poverty. However, it is important for wealthy nations to also engage in capacity building and technological transfer to support sustainable development and self-reliance in impoverished nations. Only through a multifaceted approach can the issue of poverty be effectively addressed, leading to a more equitable and prosperous world.

Sample 14:

Nowadays, developed countries are frequently giving monetary assistance to the low-income countries, whereas direct financial support is already a proven ineffective approach which has been leading us to look for an efficient alternative mechanism. I strongly agree with this statement, and I believe that rich countries’ generous investment in poor nation’s public transportation and technical education would be a sustainable support to the least developed ones.

A nation’s overall economy vastly depends on its public transportation system which is directly connected to the productivity of the masses of the country. We know that general people predominantly use public transport, such as bus, train etc. If these means are efficient enough, the commuters will need less travel time and save a significant number of productive hours, which will eventually benefit the overall national economy. Some of the mega cities in poor nations are also the worst in terms of traffic congestion with unplanned routes and outdated vehicles. In peak period of a day, commuters spend hours in traffic jam. If they could spend this amount of time at work, it would have been an incredible addition to the national economy.

In addition, rather than giving direct fund, proving proper technological training could be another effective help to the poor countries, because they need the advanced technical understandings to upgrade their industries and enhance their global competitiveness. In fact, only when a country can keep pace with global competitiveness, it can get rid of the poverty trap. However, this assistance should be well studied. For instance, if a country has cheap labours, it should be provided with the labour-intensive industrial resources and trained with the relevant knowhows. As a result, the poor country would generate employment and rise with overall economic growth.

In conclusion, direct monetary grant might help an underdeveloped country only for a short term. When it is about a sustainable economic progress, along with proper investment in poor countries’ transportation system, developed nations should help them also with technical assistance aiming their industrial improvement.

Sample 15:

It is believed by a majority of people that wealthy nations’ financial aid to third world countries is ineffective and other efforts should have been made instead. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with this opinion due to two main reasons.

One point supporting my view is related to the ineffectiveness of providing financial assistance to developing countries. The main problem of the authorities in many developing countries is related to their lack of strong financial management, money disbursement transparence, and capable human resources to carry out projects. Therefore, a large proportion of the provided aid amounts tends to be embezzled by governmental officers, meaning insignificant amounts left to reach the needy groups. As the intended purposes of support would not be realized, problems such as poor infrastructure, a lack of medical supplies, or low-tech farming would continue lingering and trap developing countries like Nepal and Cambodia in the inescapable cycle of poverty.

Another reason for my agreement lies in the ensured sustainable development of developing countries once provided with practical technologies in replacement for meaningless financial assistance. Specifically, technical aids including sharing expertise, knowledge, and skills would transfer valuable know-how and technical capabilities to locals in order to build their capabilities and skills for future development. Once high-tech and value-added industries are developed, this internal force would eventually be the driving factor to trigger local business, job opportunities as well as economic growth, therefore promoting self-sufficiency and long-term economic growth in poor nations. In contrast, such problems could not be thoroughly addressed by providing monetary aid since funds might be quickly depleted or misused by inexperienced locals.

In conclusion, I am convinced by the idea of wealthy nations converting their current impractical financial aid into other types of assistance to underdeveloped countries. This is due to the fact that positive promotion of self-reliance within the locality would trigger local entrepreneurship as well as avoid the possible misuse of funds by inexperienced recipients.

Sample 16:

Developed nations have more money than they need, so they give financial assistance to undeveloped and developing nations. I certainly agree with the view that this financial aid hasn’t solved all the problems plaguing poor countries. However, it has definitely improved the situation in those countries to a certain extent.

Corruption is one of the biggest problems that poor nations face. Even if rich nations give financial aid, the money does not reach the people who need it. Millions of people living in poor countries lack education. They are not even aware of their rights and accept poverty as if it was their birthright. If a nation is to progress, it needs empowered people who are aware of their rights and who have the capability to fight for it.

An honest and efficient administrative system is required for the development of any nation. Corrupt officials and ignorant people who are not aware of their rights have never helped any nation. Unfortunately, developed nations that give financial assistance cannot do much to improve the government or administrative system present in poor nations. No nation can interfere in another nation’s internal affairs beyond a certain level. So, other than giving financial assistance there is not much that rich nations can do to help poor nations.

To conclude, I certainly agree with the view that foreign aid hasn’t solved the problems of poor countries. However, this does not mean that developed nations should stop giving financial assistance. They should continue to give money but the purpose of giving financial assistance should be the empowerment of people. Eradication of poverty is equally important but as they say teaching a man how to fish is much better than giving him a fish.

Sample 17:

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid.

It is observed quite frequently that the underdeveloped nations only receive financial assistance from the developed nations, which does not completely help improve the nation’s economic situation. Other fundamental amenities and help provided by developed countries can also have a significant contribution to eradicating poverty. I completely agree and believe that financial aid can help improve the country’s economy and various factors like improving social-political conditions, education, employment, etc., play an important role in it.

First and foremost, Monetary support is considered one of the major factors in improving the financial status. Still, it is only a short-term solution and does not have a solid impact on stabilizing the economy of the country. In other words, it cannot solve the root cause of impoverishment. For example, the United States has donated about some billion to some under-developed nations. Still, it got utilized within 2-3 months to solve some immediate issues, but the underlying problems were unattended.

To improve the country’s economic status permanently, one should offer, for example, a wide range of educational courses for youth in the IT sectors, consulting, etc., which can help secure a better education and bring them massive opportunities for finding well-paid jobs. Additionally, employment can be initiated by developed nations like the US, Canada and UK, opening their national companies in developing or under-developed countries which offer jobs to the local citizens. This can decrease the unemployment rate effectively.

Thus, to conclude, I am in favour of the opinion that the rich countries should help in practical ways like providing education courses, employment, better health care facilities, transportation facilities, etc. to gradually improve the economic condition.

Sample 18:

It’s often noted that developed nations give financial help to poor countries to curb poverty, but some people think that developed countries should give other resources instead of financial aid. The developed government should use financial and other resources to overcome poverty in poor countries.

On the one hand, it’s often noticed that poor countries’ governments utilize financial aid to fulfil the needs of the country’s people. But in poor countries, often corrupted people have not allocated the given funds to their citizens, but leaders used to buy their things for their comfort. For example, one Asian country, Sri Lanka, often get millions of dollars from the USA and the world bank for development, but it doesn’t reach their citizens. As a result, unbreakable inflation was noted in 2022 and had to declare a financial emergency in the country.

In addition, if developed countries provide basic training skills for employment in poor countries, it will improve the economy, and people will learn some skills they can utilize to get jobs. Also, developed countries should invest in building hospitals and schools to overcome literacy and enhance the chances of job opportunities. Moreover, lack of education is a deep root of poverty in poor countries. If developed nations share their agricultural practices with poor countries, it will help the poor nations grow needy things for their own country’s people. This helps to enhance the yield and also enhance the income of citizens.

In conclusion, I think developed countries should share other resources like infrastructure and knowledge with poor countries, so it helps to curb poverty, while financial aid is not very helpful in overcoming poverty in countries.

Sample 19:

Poor countries are often given financial aid from richer nations in an attempt to provide the citizens of those disadvantaged countries with a better standard of living and quality of life. However, this kind of aid rarely solves the issue of poverty, and therefore I completely agree that richer nations should provide other forms of help.

Firstly, in order to truly help people from poorer nations in the long term, governments and citizens should be provided with good quality education. For example, only in recent times have people from richer countries spread awareness and education to those from poorer nations about the simple, yet life-saving practices of hand washing and personal hygiene. This has resulted in significant improvements in the general health and well-being of people in poorer countries and reduced the rate of preventable disease and infection. Furthermore, by providing education on the latest techniques in farming and agriculture, people from poorer nations will be able to farm more efficiently, giving them more access to food, which will essentially provide them with adequate nutrition to ward off hunger and disease.

Secondly, rather than simply providing money, richer nations should provide governments from poorer countries with access to new technology and equipment. By providing such countries with specialised farming machinery, or life-saving medicines and medical equipment, the lives of poorer people will be significantly enhanced. Furthermore, while many poorer countries may have access to significant amounts of natural resources, such as fossil fuels, minerals, and precious metals, they often do not have the technology or equipment to mine and refine such resources. As a result, many wealthier countries often take advantage of this situation and mine the resources of those poorer countries while paying them a fraction of their worth.

In conclusion, while giving financial aid to poor nations can be beneficial in the short term, providing education and technology will benefit them more in the long run.

Sample 20:

Developed nations are often seen providing economic assistance to the third world nations. However, it does not always help in reducing poverty and therefore it is argued that less affluent nations must be provided with an alternatives form of aid. This essay discusses why poor countries can be better off from such assistance and types of help that can be offered.

One of the main reasons why developing nations should be assisted in other ways is because money can solve problems only for the temporary period. It is not a long-lasting approach to tackling poverty. To illustrate, a developed nation can build schools for poor nations but the expenses that incur later in regard to student's fees and teacher's wages may force to close the institution. This is because foreign aid may not be able to support for longer periods. Thus, it is highly essential that developed countries should find alternatives when helping the poorer nations.

There are different kinds of aid that affluent nations can provide to address this problem. First and foremost, young people could be given necessary training in various fields such as technology, modern agriculture, teaching, technical skills, communication etc. This helps them to find employment in their own countries or they can apply for jobs in other rich nations. Another important option is investing in prosperous and promising sectors in poor nations. If first world nations such as the USA opens its companies in third world countries like India, Pakistan, Nepal etc. many people can be highly benefited as such industries can create many local jobs.

In conclusion, there are many advantages if rich nations can provide alternative forms of aid instead of capital because financial support is only the short-term approach to tackling the issue. In future, it is suggested that such new approaches need to be continued.

Sample 21:

Wealthy nations often contribute financially to their less prosperous counterparts, but this has shown to be inadequate in eradicating poverty. I therefore concur that rich countries should opt for other methods of assistance, as opposed to monetary aid, for countries that are economically challenged.

The frequent transfer of funds from wealthy to impoverished nations may provide a short-term solution, but it falls short of liberating these nations from the harsh cycle of poverty. It is notable that corruption is rampant in many underprivileged nations. Thus, the funds dispatched may not reach the hands of those struggling in dire poverty. Additionally, challenges rooted in flawed governance or bureaucracy cannot be resolved with financial aid alone, as it is not the place for one country to interfere in another’s domestic concerns.

Given the lack of effectiveness of financial aid in eliminating poverty, well-off countries should consider alternate forms of aid for poorer countries. One such method could be offering skill-based education to improve the educational standards in the struggling countries. Education, or the lack thereof, is often a major cause of poverty in disadvantaged countries and this could be rectified by more prosperous countries offering basic job training. Moreover, technical training could be another viable form of aid. By disseminating advanced technical knowledge, countries in need could modernize their industries, elevate their global competitiveness, and thereby, take strides towards alleviating poverty.

In conclusion, I advocate for affluent countries to provide more resourceful forms of aid, such as knowledge and technical expertise, rather than direct monetary contributions. This strategy, I believe, will enable struggling nations to combat poverty more effectively.

Sample 22:

Assisting underprivileged nations has long been a priority for wealthier countries, often through financial aid. However, critics argue that providing mere monetary support does not effectively eliminate poverty. Instead, developed nations should offer alternative forms of help to less affluent countries. I firmly support this perspective.

A critical issue with financial aid is its susceptibility to corruption and mismanagement. In several developing countries, funds intended for crucial sectors like healthcare or education often fall into the wrong hands, sidestepping the intended beneficiaries. Moreover, while developed nations provide substantial financial assistance to underdeveloped countries, it usually offers short-term relief without a sustainable impact. For instance, despite the United States allocating around $20 billion to several underdeveloped nations in 2005, it failed to address long-term solutions and after two months, they continued poorly.

Redirecting focus from monetary contributions to investing in the educational framework of impoverished nations seems more viable. This strategy involves deploying teachers, constructing educational facilities, and improving resources like textbooks. The lack of education plays a pivotal role in perpetuating severe poverty in underdeveloped areas. Access to education acts as a catalyst, empowering individuals by opening doors to better employment opportunities and ultimately breaking the cycle of poverty.

In conclusion, I think by emphasizing educational infrastructure rather than solely providing financial aid, developed nations can play a more impactful role in lifting underprivileged communities out of poverty. This approach offers sustainable solutions by nurturing the foundation of knowledge and skills needed for lasting socio-economic progress.

Sample 23:

It is common to see industrial countries offering economic help to developing ones. Yet, it does not always assist in eliminating poverty; hence, it is believed that less wealthy countries must be supplied with an alternative kind of long-term aid. This essay examines why developing nations may benefit from such aid and the forms of assistance provided.

First, when rich nations provide money to underdeveloped countries, it will assist the residents of these countries in resolving short-term issues, but it will not be long-lasting. When residents in developing nations get money via contributions, they utilize it to pay for temporary expenses or problems. In 2005, for instance, the United States provided over $20 billion to underdeveloped nations; nevertheless, this assistance only lasted two months and was not beneficial in sustainable development.

In addition, affluent nations should invest in healthcare and education instead of lending money to other nations. When the younger generation has a decent education and everyone has access to adequate medical care and hospitality, it will help eradicate unemployment and discourage individuals from engaging in illegal acts. Thus, wealthy nations must invest in constructing quality schools, colleges, and hospitals. In addition, they may assist in stabilizing the governments of these nations and assess if the political climate is favourable to development. It is true that money helps in feeding the hungry, but this is only a temporary solution.

Nevertheless, before offering other forms of aid to poor nations, rich nations should provide financial support, since money is said to alleviate the majority of issues.

In conclusion, I am in favor of the notion that wealthy nations should aid in improving the economic situation of developing nations. Financial aid can only alleviate poverty to a limited amount and is not the definitive solution.

Sample 24:

It is said that support funds that are given to Third World countries will not solve the poverty issue and therefore developed countries should think of other kinds of help, which are more effective. To a certain point, I would agree that there should be an alternative kind of help for the poor countries, but financial support would also be needed for a short time period.

Many experts believe that financial support that is given to poor countries is not effective and efficient; therefore, there should be other kinds of help which could be considered. Firstly, it is a fact that illiteracy has become one of the major issues in poor countries, and developed countries could send some of their teachers to improve the education system there. It is hoped should the literacy rate increase, the number of unemployment will gradually reduce. Secondly, people of the poor countries are suffering due to the low quality of the health system there. Building more qualified hospitals and improving the quality of the medical staff would be an effective way to help them. And lastly, many third world countries have a bad infrastructure and public transportation facilities. By building more roads and improving the public transports there, it is hoped that people of these poor countries would be more productive as they will have easier access to their workplaces.

It can be seen that all of the alternative ideas are long term projects, and people would only see the improvement after ten or fifteen years minimum. For a short period of time, financial aid is still needed by the Third World countries; as governments could not provide decent health and education system, and many people are starving and sick. However, since corruption is also a serious problem in poor countries, strict monitoring of the financial support should be a priority, to ensure that the fund is appropriately utilised.

In conclusion, to a certain extent, I would agree that financial aid given by advanced countries to poor nations would not be the best solution in solving the poverty issue. However, since resolving poverty problem would be a long-term project, financial help should also be given for a short period of time, but it should be strictly controlled.

Sample 25:

I fully agree with the given statement as monetary help often failed to improve the condition of poor nations. So other forms of improvement schemes and help could be a better solution to help the poor countries.

It is true that donation provided by rich countries has not solved the problem of poverty in the developing country like Bhutan, Afghanistan etc. It is important to understand why rich countries provide money. The reasons behind this are to accelerate the development of poor countries by establishing industries, tourism and other pre-requisites. Some of the causes for failure of the donation programme are corruption, poor governance, scarcity of skilled population and lack of proper planning.

Firstly, corruption is mostly prevalent in the developing countries like Nepal, Congo etc. according to data from Transparency International. Most importantly, corruption is deeply rooted in almost all fields like health sector, civil service etc. and exists involvement of simple clerks to high-level bureaucrats and politicians. The cause of corruption may be rooted in the lack of handsome salary, lack of severe punishments, selfishness and the slack of rules and laws etc. If money allocated for development projects is misused, then the quality of the projects is reduced, or it may not be finished in time. In fact, scenarios like these affect the rate of development in the developing countries.

Secondly, the sustainable and harmonious development cannot be achieved without effective and efficient administration which is lagging in the poor countries. Succeeding in any project is a daunting task for management committees. First, the problems arise at the local levels where local people ask for unfeasible demands such as the job for each household, high compensation for land etc. If these problems are addressed, then, other problems like the strike of employees occur or negligence of contractor occur. Is it possible to complete projects at the specified time? No, it takes decades to complete the projects or strands in the middle forever.

Thirdly, there are problems in formulating plans and policies. Even though they are formulated, the authorities cannot implement them in a scientific way. So, funds freeze for the next financial year. These are only some instances of how money provided by donors is used.

Education, expertise support, training, monitoring the development, conducting research, establishing factories are better alternatives than giving money to the poor nations and these should be embraced by the rich nations to truly help the poor countries.

Sample 26:

Developed countries have been providing financial aid to Third World countries for decades, but it has not changed the economic plight of the poor countries. I totally agree that this aid should be replaced by other more effective types of help because of corruption and poor economic management.

The primary reason why the financial aid provided by the first world countries is not being effective in achieving the results they are intended to achieve is because of the level of corruption prevalent in these poor countries. A major portion of the aid is misappropriated by officials before it trickles down to the people. As most of these leaders are not democratically elected and have a strong grip on power, people have little leverage to change this and hence they benefit less, and their situations remain unchanged.

The second reason why this financial aid is not effective is that the governments which are the recipients of this assistance do not have sound economic policies and good governance in place. This means that these governments are not capable of managing the funds properly and the aid will be lost or misused before it reaches the people. Therefore, ensuring governments are capable of managing the funds before they receive them is crucial in achieving positive outcomes from this financial aid.

In conclusion, I reiterate my strong view that other types of support are necessary because financial aid is often misused by recipient countries due to corruption and financial mismanagement. Therefore, I recommend longer term more tenable strategies be put in place to ensure financial aid can be phased out.

Sample 27:

It is true that an enormous amount of money has been poured into impoverished nations to help them escape from poverty. While this solution is sometimes effective, I personally believe that financial aid does not fully tackle the problem, and other types of aid need to be implemented.

Firstly, money given to destitute nations does not always reach people in need. In developing countries, lack of transparency and an ineffective management system has enabled prevalent corruption in government. It is therefore likely that monetary support from other countries would bring about benefits to only governmental officials instead of the poor. Another problem with giving out money is that in most cases recipient countries do not have necessary resources such as manpower, technology, infrastructure or management system in place to make the best use of financial aid. For instance, in my country, a large amount of money from foreign governments was spent on building health care centers in rural areas, but those centers were soon abandoned or operated at less than one tenth capacity due to lack of health care professionals, lack of electricity and clean water, etc. Another illustration would be in the agricultural field. We received monetary support from international funds to increase productivity of crops, but we had no experience in conducting research before implementing a project, in project management and evaluation. As a consequence, a large amount of money was wasted on ineffective programs proposed by incompetent leaders.

Furthermore, it is undeniable that financial aid can sometimes do more harm than good and worsen the situation in poor countries. Some developed countries gave out monetary support to ruling oligarchy in Africa under the name of economic development, but for hindered political reasons as well. They might want to gain international preference, to win support from their citizens before an election, or to enhance their political influence in recipient countries, etc. In such cases how the money would be spent was not their concern. Leaders in recipient countries therefore used the money to strengthen their position, by enriching themselves or purchasing weapons to suppress opponents. Had it not been for the financial aid, people in these poor countries might have been able to overthrow their incompetent, greedy authority. Financial aid in this case became an obstacle for revolutions against dictatorship, social progress and poverty eradication.

In conclusion, monetary support alone could not eliminate poverty. Other types of help such as technological support, staff training, infrastructure development and management system improvement is required to handle the problem.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that countries where people work longer hours tend to be more economically prosperous but face significant social problems. I completely disagree with this assertion because economic success is influenced by multiple factors beyond working hours, and social issues can arise in any country regardless of its economic status.

Proponents of the idea that longer working hours lead to economic growth might highlight the role of labor in boosting productivity. Indeed, labor is crucial in transforming raw materials into finished goods and services, which significantly contributes to a country's Gross Domestic Product (GDP). In this context, longer working hours might seem to correlate with greater prosperity. For example, China, known for its extensive manufacturing output, has seen rapid GDP growth and is now considered an economic powerhouse. However, it is essential to recognize that China’s success is not solely due to long working hours. The skills and knowledge of the workforce play a vital role in developing new technologies and processes, enhancing efficiency and global competitiveness. On the other hand, many African countries also have long working hours but do not experience similar economic growth due to a lack of diverse skill sets and infrastructure. This demonstrates that while working hours contribute to economic activity, they are not the sole determinant of economic success; the quality and skills of the labor force are crucial.

Regarding the link between economic growth and social problems, it is true that countries where economic prosperity is achieved through long working hours might face certain social issues, such as stress and mental health problems. For instance, individuals in affluent countries may suffer from stress and anxiety due to demanding work environments. However, these issues are not unique to economically successful nations and can be even more serious in low-income countries. This sheds light on why I believe that a developed economy should not be blamed for social consequences. Furthermore, the economic benefits, such as higher living standards and reduced crime and unemployment rates, can outweigh the drawbacks. Economic prosperity allows for better healthcare, education, and social services, which can mitigate many social issues. Therefore, while there are potential negative consequences of long working hours, the overall impact of economic growth is more beneficial.

In conclusion, I completely disagree with the notion that countries with longer working hours are necessarily more economically successful and are bound to face negative social consequences. Economic success depends on a combination of factors, including the skills and quality of the workforce. The advantages of economic growth often surpass the potential drawbacks, making it a complex yet generally positive outcome.

Sample 2:

Since the advent of industrialization, the issue of optimizing labor utilization and working time has garnered significant attention among economists and sociologists. Some argue that countries with longer average working hours tend to achieve greater economic success but also face potential negative social consequences. From my perspective, I do not fully agree with this viewpoint.

Although it is commonly asserted that increased input positively correlates with productivity, requiring employees to work longer hours does not necessarily guarantee substantial economic development. This is because overworked employees often experience diminished work efficiency, leading to instances of misremembering guidelines or miscalculating data. Such outcomes can result in financial losses for companies and, in the long run, hinder the progress of entire industries.

Furthermore, beyond economic ramifications, longer working hours can give rise to various social issues. For instance, if more parents consistently work from day to night, they are compelled to sacrifice valuable time with their families, particularly their young children. Consequently, these circumstances can lead to social isolation and a lack of socialization among young individuals due to insufficient parental care, potentially contributing to increased rates of autism or even youth crime. From the employees' perspective, chronic work-related stress resulting from overtime can pose a significant threat to their well-being, encompassing not only physical ailments but also mental disorders such as depression and insomnia. Consequently, prolonged mental stress and strain are likely to contribute to higher suicide rates, exerting adverse effects on social stability.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that imposing longer working hours upon employees represents an imprudent decision, as it may not only lead to economic failure but also give rise to potential social issues impacting the health of citizens.

Sample 3:

In many nations, longer average working hours are often associated with greater economic success, yet they can also result in adverse social impacts. I firmly agree with this view, as the economic advantages gained from extended working hours often come at the cost of individual well-being and social cohesion.

Longer working hours contribute significantly to a country's economic growth. When people work more hours, they produce more goods and services, which boosts the nation's GDP. For instance, countries like Japan and South Korea, known for their long working hours, have achieved remarkable economic growth and are considered global economic powerhouses. This increase in productivity and economic output demonstrates how extended working hours can drive economic success. Consequently, a longer working time can indeed enhance a country's economic performance.

However, the social consequences of prolonged working hours are profoundly negative. Extended working hours can lead to a poor work-life balance, causing stress and health issues among workers. For example, in Japan, the phenomenon of "karoshi" (death by overwork) highlights the severe health impacts of excessive working hours. Additionally, long working hours leave little time for family and social activities, leading to weakened family bonds and social isolation. These adverse effects on individuals' health and social lives illustrate the significant social costs associated with longer working hours. Therefore, while long working hours may foster economic success, they undeniably result in detrimental social consequences.

In conclusion, I wholeheartedly agree that countries with longer average working hours may experience greater economic success but also face serious social issues. The economic benefits, such as increased productivity and GDP, are clear, yet the negative impacts on health and social well-being are substantial.

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Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Nuclear energy is the all-powerful alternative to fossil fuels, and it is the finest choice to satisfy the rapidly increasing demand across the world. In my opinion, I completely agree with the fact that nuclear energy is a pretty appropriate choice and a good replacement for fossil fuels. I will explain my views on why nuclear energy is a superior option in the subsequent paragraphs.

One of the best substitutes for fossil fuels is nuclear energy. It generates a lot of energy from a very small amount of fuel and emits very little CO2 and other harmful pollutants. It also has a very good safety record as hundreds of nuclear power plants worldwide have been operating for more than fifty years without any serious accidents. Moreover, several nations are using nuclear energy as an alternative source to generate electricity as they don’t emit harmful gases that lead to acid rain or global warming. In fact, nuclear energy has saved many lives in the past, which may have been lost if we had built fossil-fuel plants instead of nuclear reactors.

One of the major threats of using nuclear power is the creation of radioactive waste that might be an environmental issue. The radioactive materials might also be fatal. However, these nuclear power plants are built very carefully to prevent such releases. As a result, even the two worst nuclear accidents in history (Chernobyl and Fukushima) have harmed very few people in number compared to fossil fuel pollution.

Although nuclear fuel is not renewable like fossil fuels, they have high productivity with no geographical limitations. The sustainability of nuclear power is a very big concern as it will be an environmental tragedy if a dangerous crash occurs.

To reiterate, nuclear energy is a reliable and powerful source of electricity with zero emissions. Besides, nuclear energy is still more viable than fossil fuels and is relatively safe.

Sample 2:

There is no denying the fact that nuclear power comes with massive potential that can be used positively to improve mankind. Nuclear technology has become one of the potent resources and fulfills the demands of people accordingly. In my opinion, nuclear power has demonstrated more benefits for constructive purposes for varying factors of life. I shall illustrate my perspective in the below paragraphs.

To begin with, there are plenty of advantages that can be gained by developing more nuclear stations. First and foremost, nuclear technology is extensively used in the fields of science and medicine, such as X-rays, to diagnose significant internal fractures and injuries. Another noteworthy example is radiotherapy that is universally used to cure patients suffering from deadly diseases, such as malignant cancerous tumours, and more.

In addition to this, the green power stations, being eco-friendly, do not have any contribution to air pollution. Moreover, it can be used to produce electricity without wasting any restricted natural resources, be it gas or coal. To represent it better, everybody knows that nuclear gas is a renewable resource and that it cannot go extinct; hence, it can be effortlessly used in diverse major sectors. With this gas, there will be no issues of carbon emission. Furthermore, this way, there will be no issues of climate change, or the air quality will not further deteriorate. Consequently, a lot of countries are comprehending to integrate nuclear power as the solution to high demands of gas, oil, electricity and decrease the issues with climate changes as well as pollution.

While it is true nuclear power is being used for negative factors too, such as nuclear bombs, the benefits it offers evidently surpass the drawbacks.

Conclusively, nuclear technology definitely has a lot of positive uses and provides a promising future. From my point of view, it would be better if this power is used for its true benefits and the betterment of the world.

Sample 3:

The word ‘global warming’ has had a huge effect on people’s minds with respect to the energy resources they use. Most nations are heavily dependent on fossil fuels for power production, even though they are very dangerous to our climate. As a result of climate change, many nations consider nuclear energy to be an effective solution to this issue and a good way to satisfy ever-increasing energy needs. To some point, I agree with this feeling.

On the one side, nuclear technology has many benefits over conventional energy sources. First of all, it’s a green energy source, so we don’t need to think about scarcity and reserve considerations. For example, once fossil fuels are non-renewable, the more easily we use them to die.

Secondly, nuclear energy is environmentally sustainable and releases no carbon dioxide material into the environment. It is cleaner energy than conventional energy sources.

Lastly, atomic energy’s mass to energy generation is very high, which implies with a limited volume of atomic material we can generate enough electricity to lighten the whole region.

To the opposite hand of the coin. It still has drawbacks, though. The substance of nuclear energy is a significant danger to any form of life on earth. Radioactive waves or radiation trigger dangerous illnesses, such as cancer, if not contained. Japan, for instance, was met with a tragedy after the waves hit one of the nuclear power plants in Fukushima.

As a consequence, there was a leakage in the facility, the region deemed to be a radioactive zone, culminating in a mass evacuation of natives from the region. But the region is still maintained as a quarantine area, meaning that no living things survive there. In comparison, the safety of nuclear power stations is very dangerous. Today, these kinds of installations are attacked by militants as nuclear weapons.

In summary, nuclear fusion is the only alternative to the energy deficiency that the earth is currently facing. It is also the ideal solution to the environmental issues that we are facing right now. While there are still certain drawbacks, proper service and creation of these types of facilities should be assured.

Sample 4:

In today’s world, people are searching for an effective way to raise electricity consumption. Some people think that nuclear energy is a better option than fossil fuel. In my view, I am in favour of this claim.

Nuclear electricity has some advantages that other sources of energy do not have. Firstly, it is a renewable energy source, which ensures that it can be used to generate electricity without consuming scarce natural resources such as coal, oil or gas. As we all know, fossil fuels are being used at an unprecedented pace.

Second, it is safer than fossil fuel, in other terms, it will help us minimise the carbon content that induces global warming. Ultimately, the development of nuclear power will create more job possibilities and even make those technologies more effective for the industry.

There are, on the other hand, certain aspects against these claims. The sustainability of nuclear power is a big concern. It will be a tragedy once a dangerous crash occurs. Millions of people are going to be harmed or injured. In comparison, a nuclear power plant will occupy a large area, get rid of its own square, and nobody wants to live near it. Furthermore, the expense of constructing a nuclear power plant is high, and expensive investment would put a heavy economic strain on the country.

In addition, I agree with the assertion that nuclear technology can be used somewhat in some nations, such as some developing countries. Nevertheless, the country’s growth has been driven by technical and scientific developments, and the officials are required to boost the country’s global influence and increase the quality of living of people.

To write a perfect essay you must keep some points in mind. In agreeing or disagreeing essays, you must pick a side that is easy for you. You must support your answers with suitable examples which will impress the examiner while checking your essay. Do not bring your personal opinion or examples in your essay, as it is not appreciated at all.

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

The notion that computers might surpass human intelligence in the future has ignited a fervent debate among scientists and technologists. On one side, there are proponents who herald this potential evolution as a significant leap forward for humanity. On the other side, critics express deep concerns about the ramifications of such advancements. This essay will explore both perspectives before presenting a personal viewpoint.

Advocates for the rise of intelligent computers argue that such technological advancements could revolutionize various sectors, including healthcare, education, and industry. With superior computational power, these machines could analyze vast amounts of data swiftly and accurately, leading to breakthroughs in medical research and the development of new treatments. For instance, in Vietnam, the application of artificial intelligence (AI) in hospitals has already led to more precise diagnoses and personalized treatment plans, significantly improving patient outcomes. However, it must be acknowledged that these benefits come with the risk of over-reliance on technology, potentially undermining human expertise and judgment.

Conversely, those wary of more intelligent computers fear the potential loss of human control over these machines. They argue that if computers become more intelligent than humans, there could be unforeseen consequences, such as the displacement of jobs and ethical dilemmas regarding decision-making. For example, the increasing use of AI in Vietnamese manufacturing has led to concerns about job security for workers, as machines gradually replace human labor. If computers were to exceed human intelligence, the decision-making process could be skewed towards efficiency rather than empathy, leading to morally questionable outcomes. This scenario underscores the need for stringent regulations to govern the development and use of AI.

However, I believe that the integration of highly intelligent computers into society presents more opportunities than threats. The key lies in establishing robust ethical frameworks and ensuring that human values guide technological progress. In Vietnam, the government and tech companies could collaborate to create guidelines that balance innovation with societal welfare. By fostering a culture of continuous learning and adaptation, humans can complement AI, leading to a symbiotic relationship where both parties thrive.

In conclusion, while the prospect of computers surpassing human intelligence is met with both excitement and apprehension, it is crucial to strike a balance between embracing technological advancements and safeguarding human interests. By implementing ethical standards and promoting collaborative efforts, the potential benefits of intelligent computers can be harnessed while mitigating their risks. This balanced approach ensures that technology serves humanity's best interests.

Sample 2:

As technology advances, scientists predict that computers will surpass human intelligence, which some view as a positive development while others see it as a cause for concern. I agree with the latter view.

On the one hand, those who support the development of more intelligent computers believe it could lead to significant benefits. Firstly, computers can help reduce mistakes in various fields. For instance, in electronics factories, nimble robots with millimeter-precise movements assemble delicate circuit boards, ensuring meticulous placement of tiny components with minimal risk of human error. This leads to the production of reliable and durable electronic devices. Secondly, computers can complete tasks faster, more efficiently, and with less demand than humans. For example, in cutting-edge hospitals, robotic arms assist surgeons with intricate procedures, reducing tremor and ensuring unmatched precision. These AI-powered assistants not only improve patient outcomes but also save on operating room time and resources, allowing hospitals to allocate funds towards vital medical research and patient care initiatives.

On the other hand, there are valid concerns about computers becoming more intelligent than humans, and I align with this viewpoint. One major issue is that computers could make human laborers redundant. With their ability to perform tasks rapidly and without physical or mental limitations, many companies may replace human workers with machines to improve efficiency. For instance, some convenience stores in Japan have replaced human cashiers with self-checkout machines, leading to unemployment. Additionally, there is a fear that AI might become a threat to human survival. Renowned scientists like Elon Musk and Stephen Hawking have warned about the potential dangers of artificial general intelligence. If intelligent machines were to make autonomous decisions, they might prioritize their own goals over human welfare, possibly leading to a conflict between humans and machines, posing a serious threat to the world.

In conclusion, while the advancement of computer intelligence holds promise for improving efficiency and reducing errors, I am of the opinion that the potential risks to human employment and safety cannot be ignored.

Sample 3:

The advent of artificial intelligence has brought many advancements to computer technology and scientists predict that these computers may become more intelligent than human beings someday. While some warn that computers may eventually lessen the need for human workers, I still assert that this is a positive development overall considering how they are less error prone than humans.

To begin with, the concern that computers will make human labourers redundant is valid to a degree. As they are not hampered by any physical or mental limits, they are able to rapidly undertake most tasks at a rate faster than humans. Realizing these advantages, many companies have begun to steadily replace human workers to improve efficiency in their production process. This can be seen in some convenience stores in developed nations where human cashiers have been replaced with self-checkout machines that aid customers in purchasing their items faster. Consequently, some see this as a negative development as it directly threatens job opportunities for less skilled workers.

However, computers gaining more intelligence than humans may help reduce mistakes. As computers are programmed with algorithms to accomplish particular tasks repetitively, they are likely to make far fewer errors. Therefore, many companies utilize these machines to ensure a steady production of their goods while maintaining quality standards. This is evident with the use of sorting robots in the logistics industry in China. Machines there are tasked with precisely assigning items to their designated parcels and they can do this at a rate of 18,000 per hour with a much lower margin of error in comparison to that of humans. Thus, computers gaining superior intelligence over humans is a positive development as it improves product quality and facilitates business growth.

In conclusion, despite the legitimate concerns related to computers curtailing the need for human workers, I contend that this phenomenon is a positive development since computers are less susceptible to errors generally. Once human beings are aware of the challenges computers pose, they can take action to control the risks presented by such disruptive technologies.

Sample 4:

With the advance of technology, especially in the artificial intelligence (AI) field, many people are concerned about computers being smarter than humans. However, I think there are many benefits to our lives when that happens.

Of course, there are legitimate reasons why people have concerns about this development. The first concern is that AI will one day control the human species. This concern, although sounding like it is straight from sci-fi movies, is reasonable. This dystopia happens when computers can teach themselves and develop into a supercomputer, making humans their servants. Another concern is more realistic, saying that computers will take over human’s jobs. When computers are capable of accurately completing mundane tasks, they are capable of replacing human workers. As a result, many people will find themselves unemployed when this happens.  

However, there are various benefits that intelligent computers bring to humans. The first advantage is that computers utilize resources better than humans do. They complete tasks faster, more efficiently, and have less demand than humans. For example, computers do not need to be paid, fed, or accommodated in housing. As a result, using computers as labor will save resources that can be allocated to human development. The second advantage is that AI brings convenience to humans. The age of AI means less physical labor and more accessible information to other people. For example, humans can see improvements in health since they do not have to work as hard as before. Some applications of AI can even help humans to make better decisions as a result of multiple algorithms. This application can save humans from the tiring process of checking out the pros and cons of a decision.

In conclusion, there are both positives and negatives to developing computers that are as intelligent as humans. However, I think that the positives outweigh the negatives in terms of resource utilization and providing convenience.  

Sample 5:

Many believe that machinery which would be more intelligent than humans in the foreseeable future may exert certain benefits for mankind, others are of the opposite opinion. Both sides of the argument will be justifiably clarified, and I assert this development will bring more harm than good.

Opponents of computer technology being more advanced than the human brain claim that machines would overrule human beings in the distant future. Due to the evolution in artificial intelligence, machines would gain intellectual cognition and consciousness to retaliate against humans. More specifically, they may perceive that humans are the main culprit for many perennial problems such as international conflicts or environmental degradation, leading to these instruments ruling over the human race to solve these issues. This conspiracy theory is backed up by technological tycoons like Elon Musk and renowned physicists like Stephen Hawking. As a result, computers that are more intelligent than humans would inflict serious threats to the existence of humankind.

Nevertheless, as a dystopia where machines rule humans would not occur in the short run, thus, I would side with the proponents of this trend due to increased work efficiency. Human employees may be bored of mundane, time-consuming tasks or even suffer from fatigue because of their heavy workload. In contrast, machines are programmed with sets of algorithms to excel in a particular area and are less susceptible to system breakdowns which may lead to a more streamlined process. For example, many insurance companies in Australia such as RAC or Youi leverage machine learning voicebots and chatbots to answer clients' queries. This application helps these businesses process a higher volume of claims at a faster rate.

In conclusion, while people may fear that technological revolution may threaten the survival of humanity, I contend that this threat is outweighed by the higher workflows for higher productivity.

Sample 6:

Recently, the capabilities of computers have sparked a debate between its supporters and skeptics alike. While some observers regard the possibility of machines surpassing human intellect as a beneficial development, I am inclined to side with critics who claim that this situation will result in dire consequences.

Certainly, it is reasonable to assume that hyper-intelligent computers will positively affect human life. These devices, first and foremost, can dramatically improve the speed and precision of problem-solving. Advanced machine learning algorithms are capable of analyzing data and dissecting complex issues at a staggering pace, providing the potential to revolutionize fields from quantum physics to medicine. This, as a result, would lead to an improved quality of human life. Such computers, furthermore, can work continuously and consistently, but without human limitations such as fatigue and emotion-driven errors. If these machines are utilized in public services, for instance, people would be pleased to receive responses quickly and not have to wait for officials to process their requests.

Machines which can surpass human intellect possess the potential to do harm, however. Their existence may lead to large-scale unemployment, due to outpacing human employees’ efficiency. This has already happened in certain professions, such as journalism, where droves of workers were laid off as their executives sought to replace them with artificial intelligence writers. More astute observers, in addition, would find that computers’ freedom from emotion-driven errors may become a threat to humanity. Once intelligent machines attain a certain level of autonomy, in their cold logic, they might conclude that human beings are a flawed and destructive species which deserves extinction. This scenario is not entirely based on science fiction, seeing how far mankind has recently progressed in terms of artificial intelligence development.

In conclusion, while hyper-intelligent computers can align with human aspirations to innovate and maximize efficiency, being aware of the threats they may pose is more crucial. It is therefore necessary to keep the machines’ capability in check to ensure that computers are used in the service of humanity.

Sample 7:

The prospect of computers surpassing human intelligence ignites a fervent debate, with opinions divided on its implications for the future. On one hand, the potential for machines to outsmart humans is seen as a gateway to unprecedented advancements, promising solutions to complex problems that have long eluded us. On the other, there are legitimate concerns about the ramifications of such a leap forward, particularly regarding the ethical and social consequences it may entail.

Proponents argue that the superiority of computers in intelligence could revolutionize how we approach challenges, especially in contexts like Vietnam where technological innovation can significantly impact both urban and rural development. For example, the integration of AI in agricultural practices has been posited to dramatically increase yields and efficiency, showcasing the positive outcomes of this technological evolution. However, this enthusiasm is often tempered by the counterargument that the rise of intelligent machines might lead to a displacement of human roles in various sectors, an issue already evident in the automation of manufacturing jobs.

Nevertheless, I am inclined to view the advancement of computer intelligence with cautious optimism. While the potential for job displacement cannot be ignored, the onus is on society to adapt and redefine human roles in a changing landscape. If managed wisely, the emergence of highly intelligent computers could complement human abilities, not replace them, thereby enriching our capacity to solve complex issues and enhancing our quality of life. This perspective is particularly relevant in Vietnam, where balancing technological advancement with social and economic equity remains a critical challenge.

In conclusion, while the debate on computers surpassing human intelligence is multifaceted, the key lies in harnessing this potential responsibly. Embracing technological progress, coupled with foresight and ethical consideration, can lead us to a future where computers and humans coexist in synergy, each amplifying the strengths of the other to tackle the challenges of the modern world.

Sample 8:

In today's world, the use of computers is ever increasing. It is one of the most important things in human life. It became a common part of modern society. Scientists think that it will become smarter than humans. Some people discover that it is a positive trend, but others have a negative attitude towards this dependency on computers. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure.

One of the main beneficial developments of computers is that it made life easier and more convenient for everybody. For example, it is comfortable to sit at home and do research on the internet with your computer. Your computer is open 24 hours a day, unlike a library or office. In addition, computer technology can connect workers in different countries. Workers can communicate via email, online networks, and video conferencing. It gives people to save their time and money. Computers have automated the offices, education, banking, even the advancement of treatment and crime detection were possible due to the powerful computer technology. These examples make it clear that it is a positive increase in human life.

On the other hand, this development has its disadvantages. It can lead to the loss of balance in society. For instance, offices will disappear in the future and virtual online offices may replace them. Therefore, people will become very lazy which is crucial to the way in which human develop without socialisation skills. They move toward the creation of higher unemployment. That's why there will appear two groups: humans and computer technologies.

To conclude, it is the beneficial development for human life, however, it impacts badly as well. I strongly believe that there are many advantages in the way of development, and we should take advantage of it. We have made computers and as humans, we will control them.

Sample 9:

It has been considered by a few scientists that computers will be more intelligent than human beings in future. I completely disagree with it as they cannot work independently and also lacking in some traits that human beings possess.

First off, electronic gadgets do not work as their own. They need humans to programme them. To elaborate on it, to search for any information, to see worldly news or to use it for entertainment, it needs someone to press the right key. Only then does it work efficiently and accurately? For example, the Tesla car does not run on its own. However, everything is controlled by a machine. But to give it the command to run is always in the hands of a person who is the developer of such a technology. Therefore, human force plays a vital role in making it successful, and without human aid, it is nothing.

Moreover, automation does not possess some human qualities, which can make a robot superior to the public. To elaborate, man is bestowed with pity, compassion and imagination. According to his wit, he is able to save humanity from any danger. But computers do not have such traits, and it is determined to do what is fed into it to do. It is at the cost of human life either. For instance, when a house is set on fire. To save people, a robot is sent on duty. It will obey the command and might not think of other possibilities to protect the material or human lives. Individuals can imagine a lot of solutions to come out of the problem and console the people who are in danger. Thus, at such a point, technology gets failure, and human beings are rewarded well.

To conclude, it is clear that in future, computers will not be as intelligent as human beings due to their dependence on operators and lacking certain qualities necessary to prove superiority over others. They are the only human beings who can handle any situation according to their wit and other qualities such as imagination and pity.

Sample 10:

As we know, computers have become so popular in the last two decades and are used by humans everywhere for commercial or personal use. People often argue that computers will become more brilliant than humans in the future. I partially agree with this statement; in the following paragraph, I will explain more about this.

On the one hand, computers are developed by humans, so there is no point in saying that humans are more intelligent than computers. Moreover, when the computer was introduced to the market then, all its components were much larger than today’s computer. By using the I.Q level, humans have developed a number of things. For instance, most of the world’s population is using a laptop or smartphone, which is created by humans only.

On the other hand, computers can make you think smart by using the core of programming. The reason behind this is that computers are able to do multi-tasking at one time. For example, humans can work on two or more two different types of tasks at the same time while using a single computer. This makes it smarter than humans because humans can do only one task simultaneously. Hence, we can say computers are more efficient at working than humans.

To conclude, computers are made from a bunch of hardware and software which humans create. So, we can say that computers are more intelligent than humans. In spite of that, we can accept computers can do multi-tasking more sufficiently than humans.

Sample 11:

It is an undeniable fact that artificial intelligence plays an important role in the life of human beings. However, some thoughts of researchers opine that computers would be more intelligent than humans. I partially agree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I intend to discuss some views regarding this approach along with opinions.

To embark with, it is commonly seen that in this 21st century, everything is dependent on computers. One can see computers in every field, like schools, hospitals, malls and restaurants as well. Firstly, personal computers are better because they save time for individuals, reduce labourers’ work, and decrease the burden and stress of humans. To clarify this notion, here is a remarkable example, computers do 70 to 80% of work, so it would also be the best way to do work and get some quality time with family.

On the other hand, there are also some demerits of developing computers. The first and foremost demerit is unemployment. To explicate, if computers replace people, then the ratio of illegal activities would rise due to the majority of people losing their jobs only for technology, which would harm society.

To recapitulate, I would like to reiterate that artificial intelligence is important for everyone to live a better life, but one cannot deny the drawbacks of developing computers.

Sample 12:

Human civilization has developed at a staggering pace in the last century. We went from not having sliced bread to being on the path to having supercomputers more powerful than we can comprehend. There is indeed a common presumptuous notion out there; that one-day computers might become more intelligent than human beings.  

The amount of ignorance this specific thought conveys leaves me quite inarticulate. Firstly, computers are digital, brains are analogue. There is no conceivable way to compare these two. Computers are highly logical machines designed to perform tasks; humans are essentially a tangled mass of neurons behaving in an unpredictable manner, which births thoughts, emotions and ideas. Their core functions are polar opposites. 

The issue that must be addressed is the highly misdirecting role of movies and entertainment media in presenting Artificial Intelligence as ‘self-sufficient’ and ‘intelligent’ in the manner of independent thought processing.  One cannot press this enough; but machines will never aim for world domination. They have been created for one purpose and one purpose only, to aid humanity. 

The world’s fastest computer averages out at 200 petaflops, the human brain has been estimated to run at one exaflop. The difference between them is akin to the earth and sky. Nonetheless, I do not doubt the gap will be closed within the next decade. However, this will just mean that supercomputers will be more efficient at the analysis tasks they perform, this will not mean that they will spontaneously decide to sprout a conscience and destroy the world in the blink of an eye. This idea is so ridiculous it has passed the point of comedic hilarity into plain oblivion and beyond even idiosyncrasy. 

I refuse to even acknowledge such a possibility. Computers becoming more efficient than human processing power would be a leap in the fields of data analysis, weather prediction, space calculation, molecular modeling, natural resource exploration, etc. There is absolutely no cause for worry, fear or panic. Only further awareness on the true nature of computers and the fictionality of popular media tropes. 

In conclusion, it is inevitable that computers will become more efficient. There are very little drawbacks to this save for initial job losses, the positives outweigh the negatives in all formulate-able aspects. 

Sample 13:

In the modern world, technology devices are extremely famous such as computers, laptops, and mobile phones. Those items can make your life more comfortable and easier. That’s why some scientist experts might think that computers will become more talented than human beings in the near future. From my perspective, I agree that sooner or later, computers can replace humans because they are faster and more accurate.

Computer devices play the main role in business and science fields. Their functions are rapid compared to humans. People can use computers for many different purposes such as Microsoft Offices, Word, Excel, Powerpoint, in order to make jobs easier and faster to

complete the tasks. It’s not only for jobs, but computers also support students to study online as well as they can use computers to do their assignments and dissertation quicker. For example, most school programs have online courses or classes so that without computers or laptops, they might have to spend more time going to the campus for every class that they attend. Therefore, computers are a fundamental tool that people could use both at work and school to save plenty of their time.

In addition, computers are more accurate than humans. As we know that, the higher technology is, the more functions in computers we can utilize. While computers are not perfect, they might make fewer mistakes than a human. However, computers have auto-correction that can help people to notice right away. For instance, students could use Microsoft Office word for their essays, and the computers can adjust their mistakes by seeing the red underline under the words or sentences that they write. This includes grammar errors and article mistakes. So, people would increase the chance to write an essay more accurately than before.

To conclude, according to some scientists, they tend to think that in the future computers will be more useful than humans. In my opinion, I believe that computers have more special functions than humans because they are more rapid and more accurate.

Sample 14:

Opinions are divided on the impact of the increased intelligence of computers. I believe that this development can pose significant threats to mankind.

The scenario where computers become smarter than humans is already on the horizon, and a number of benefits can certainly be predicted. Chief of these is that humans' overall productivity will increase significantly, liberating a lot of people. For example, AI caregivers will allow parents to work without having to sacrifice their career for childcare and chores. Similarly, old people can be taken care of with relatively low costs if robots are intelligent enough to cater for those people's needs. Most importantly, dangerous jobs like mining or seafaring will require little to no human involvement. In addition, it is even projected that robots' productivity will be so high that there will be enough capital to provide free education, and healthcare and that poverty and starvation will be eradicated.

However, if computers are smarter than humans, most people will lose their jobs. It is already predicted that a large proportion of human drivers will be replaced by robots by 2025. Even those working in creative industries such as music and video production are also at risk of losing their jobs since there are already machines that can compose songs that are almost indistinguishable from those of human artists. Thus, given that there will not be much that should be done by humans, our race will almost definitely evolve into helpless, purposeless, physically and mentally lazy creatures. To make matters worse, if robots were smart enough to make decisions for themselves, this would pose an existential threat to humankind. These problems negate any of the possible benefits mentioned above.

In conclusion, while there are certainly reasons to be excited about the introduction of artificial intelligence, I share the reservations of development dreadful.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The restoration of old buildings in cities often demands significant government expenditure. While preserving historical structures is essential, it is worth considering the benefits of allocating these resources to construct new houses and roads instead. This essay will argue that investing in new infrastructure can result in a more significant positive impact on society, compared to directing spending toward projects involving old buildings.

Firstly, spending money on building new houses can help alleviate the growing housing shortages faced by many cities. As urban populations continue to rise, the demand for affordable and accessible housing increases. By prioritizing new housing developments, governments can ensure that more citizens have access to decent living conditions, which in turn improves their quality of life. One example can be seen in the city of Vienna, Austria. Known for its well-established social housing program, the local government has invested in the construction of affordable and high-quality housing units for its citizens. As a result of these efforts, Vienna consistently ranks among the top cities in the world in terms of quality of life.

Secondly, allocating funds to construct new roads and improve existing transportation networks can have significant benefits for cities. Improved roads can reduce traffic congestion, decrease travel times, and enhance road safety. Moreover, well-planned transportation networks can boost public transit options, encouraging people to use more environmentally friendly modes of transportation. For example, instead of spending millions of dollars on restoring old structures, New York City decided to invest in upgrading and expanding the public transportation system, specifically the subway. As a result, New York City's residents and visitors experienced reduced travel times, less congestion during peak hours, and more convenient transportation options.

In conclusion, I believe that it is essential to recognize the advantages of investing in new housing and infrastructure projects. Instead of focusing on the restoration of old buildings, governments can significantly improve the lives of their citizens and foster the long-term development of cities by addressing housing shortages and improving transportation networks.

Sample 2:

Different governments around the world are spending a massive amount of money to restore century-old buildings in the metropolis (main city). Some people believe that the money should be spent on free housing programs and constructing new roads, instead, and I partly agree with it.

Restoring old buildings, especially those historic buildings, is essential in any government as they are part of the history of a country. In addition, they serve as reminders of a country's culture and tradition, and of how ancestors fought for their right to be independent from their colonizers. Also, those buildings help the country's tourism industry as they attract travelers from different parts of the world. For example, the Colosseum in Italy and the Great Wall of China, among others, help boost (improve) the annual revenue of tourism in those countries. Thus, investing a huge amount of money in restoring those types of buildings is not problematic.

However, I believe governments should be selective (choosy) in spending their money on the restoration of old buildings. They have to choose those old buildings with historical and cultural significance, otherwise, those buildings that are of no value must be demolished, especially if they pose risks to the general public. The government of any country, then, allocates (distributes some financial resources for a particular purpose) some money to build better roads and houses for people who cannot afford to buy or rent a house. In this way, the financial resources of any government will be maximized (make the best use of) and used in a more meaningful way.

To conclude, spending money on the restoration of old buildings with historical and cultural value is as important as building more roads and providing free houses to underprivileged citizens. Any government must make sure to address these two for the betterment of the country and its people.

Sample 3:

In recent years, the restoration of historic buildings in many cities has been a subject of ongoing debate. While some argue that the substantial government expenditure involved in such projects could be more beneficially utilized in the construction of new houses and roads, I disagree with this notion for the following reasons.

On the one hand, proponents of allocating government funds to the construction of new houses and roads argue that these projects are essential for addressing contemporary societal needs. Building new houses addresses the pressing issue of housing shortages, particularly in rapidly expanding urban areas, contributing to improved living standards and community well-being. Additionally, investing in the construction of roads and infrastructure plays a key role in promoting efficient transportation of goods and people. The development of modern road networks, exemplified by the expressways in countries like Japan or the United States, underscores the significance of infrastructure in supporting economic activities and ensuring the seamless flow of commerce.

While investing in new facilities is undeniably essential for urban development, I firmly believe that the restoration of old buildings also holds immense importance and thus deserves enormous state funding. Firstly, preserving these structures could not only foster a sense of cultural identity but also attract tourists, contributing to the local economy. For instance, the restoration of landmarks such as the Colosseum in Rome or the Taj Mahal in India has not only preserved historical heritage but also become a major source of revenue through tourism. Secondly, the restoration of old buildings can be a catalyst for urban revitalization. When historic districts are revitalized, more businesses will likely be established in these areas, which helps create more jobs and stimulate local economic growth.

In summary, while there is certainly a need to invest in new houses and roads, I disagree with the idea that redirecting government funds from restoration of old buildings towards these projects would yield greater benefits for society.

Sample 4:

Nowadays, the pressing need to provide shelter for the community is a mainstream issue being addressed by the government. However, the capital invested into construction renovation is huge compared with the cost of original housing development. I couldn’t have agreed more that this amount should rather be used for modern expansion alongside transportation routes. Analyzing the need for urbanization and the effect of construction retrofitting will justify it.

Firstly, more than half of the society’s population lacks a home in developing countries thereby encouraging human habitation in slums, where they have always been exposed to environmental disasters such as floods, outbreaks of diseases, and insecurities. For instance, urban cities across the world have been experiencing congestion due to overcrowding. Hence, erecting lodges in areas that are yet to be developed will be more advantageous to society.

Secondly, of course the approach of retrofitting as an alternative to building construction may be cheaper, particularly in the case of smaller projects. Yet, the risk attached to the processes involved could incur more costs. For example, the demolition of structural elements of the existing buildings, if not handled by experts could lead to vehement loss and even death, contrary to the budget. Thus, restructuring of housing should best be considered as the last result of expanding housing.

In a nutshell, the government’s record of a large amount for developing readymade houses as against contemporary homes and access roads, calls for the need to consider the option of investment with respect to project size and expertise.

Sample 5:

Government funding for the repair of historic structures is sometimes rather high in urban areas. Some contend, however, that it would be more advantageous to utilize this money to build new roads and residences. I think this point of view is justifiable, however it is still important to renovate the ancient buildings.

The reason is that the preservation of historic structures brings some undeniable advantages. One of them is that this would facilitate preserving a city's cultural heritage. Because these old buildings capture the architectural and historical significance of a certain era, they act as a link to the past. Repairing them therefore enables us to protect our cultural identity and provide the next generation with a tangible link to their history. Restoring the unique ancient structures can also attract tourists, which will develop the local tourism industry and in turn strengthen the local economy. These benefits can be clearly seen in cities such as Tokyo and Seoul, where the local governments allocate money to maintaining their ancient castles and palaces. By doing so, they have preserved their distinctive historical identities and drawn foreign visitors to these cities to explore their exotic cultures.

However, there are also beneficial effects to spending money on new homes and roads. First, governments can solve the housing crisis and give their residents better living conditions by building more homes. In many cities across the world, sufficient housing has long been considered necessary for society's advancement and people's well-being. Singapore is a salient example of a city where affordable housing has been emphasized so that its citizens can enjoy a higher quality of life and thereby, they willingly work hard to contribute to their city's development. In a similar vein, the construction of new roads may improve the transportation network, spurring economic expansion and enhancing connection both inside and between cities. To exemplify, a better road system would allow the transportation of products between businesses and clients to be faster, thus accelerating economic growth.

In conclusion, while the restoration of old buildings plays a significant role in preserving cultural heritage and boosting tourism, investing in new houses and roads addresses pressing societal needs and facilitates economic development. Therefore, to ensure both historical preservation and modern progress, finding a balance between the two approaches is essential rather than supporting just one.

Sample 6:

Preserving ancient buildings, the world overtakes huge sums of money, therefore, some argue that this fund can be utilized to build new shelters and maintain roads. This essay totally disagrees with this viewpoint because these historical buildings play a key role in preserving the culture and promoting tourism.

Firstly, restoring old buildings is a great means to preserve a nation’s cultural heritage. Every nation has some historical monuments that reflect the culture and history of that country. Therefore, keeping these buildings alive for posterity is a preferable school of thought rather than neglecting these masterpieces and spending them on other areas. For example, the UK government each year expends millions of pounds on the restoration of ancient buildings in the country.

Secondly, funding historical monuments for maintenance promotes tourism, especially in the Orient world. Many people from the western world flock to these countries to visit these masterpieces because of their aesthetic appeal. As tourism is one of the booming industries these days, it can aid the developing nations in boosting their economies by keeping old monuments in good shape. For example, millions of people flock to India to see Taj Mehal, which strengthens our nation’s economy. That is one of the main reasons our government allot vast amounts of money to preserve all the old buildings.

In conclusion, spending on preserving ancient buildings should be prioritised rather than diverting the allotted fund to restore old buildings to build new roads and houses because these historical buildings play a vital role to preserve culture and boost the tourism industry.

Sample 7:

Government spending is a highly controversial issue because people naturally have different priorities and beliefs. Some of them think that the money spent on the restoration of old buildings is wasteful, but this essay will argue against that notion, suggesting instead that these are essential pieces of a nation’s heritage.

To begin with, it is understandable that people might feel this way because there are numerous ways that a national budget might be spent, and old buildings are probably not high on most people’s lists. However, not everything that is important is obvious and often people do not realise the value of something until it is gone. Around Asia, for example, many countries underwent the same sort of industrial development in just two or three decades that Europe went through over a period of several centuries. As a result, these countries lost most of their ancient buildings, and these cannot be recovered. Many governments fund the construction of replicas, but these obviously lack the authenticity of truly ancient buildings.

Letting these buildings fall into ruin shows a staggering lack of civic pride. Cities and countries must unite to fund the maintenance of important shared spaces, including these historic sites. Without these places, cities begin to look unremarkable, and it is hard to tell one place from another. Whilst it is important to devote spending to new projects, governments must not overlook the heritage aspect that defined their city or country over a long period of time, and which continues to mark it in the modern era.

In conclusion, old buildings may seem like a waste of money because they can be expensive to maintain, but they are important in various ways, and so governments should set aside funding to ensure their upkeep. 

Sample 8:

The preservation of historic buildings in major cities places a significant burden on government budgets. However, despite this substantial drain on state funds, it is highly important that these old structures are maintained for future generations.

Old buildings give a city character. In other words, they tell the story of a city’s history and how it has changed over time. Cities like Prague, for instance, are massively popular tourist destinations because people can see magnificent buildings from centuries ago rather than be surrounded entirely by modern structures that are functional but have no soul.

A related idea is that old buildings can be a source of revenue rather than a great expense. As mentioned above, tourists flock to Prague to experience the atmosphere created by being surrounding by centuries of history, while very few people travel to some other cities in Europe that were rebuilt at the end of World War Two and feature drab square concrete buildings.

Nevertheless, a government’s finances are limited, and the construction of new buildings and transport infrastructure is essential. Therefore, perhaps only buildings with substantial historic or architectural value should be preserved and just being old does not necessarily make something important.

Generally speaking, paying for the upkeep of old buildings should be a priority for governments due to their cultural and potential economic value. Cities are places where people live, and life is better when we are surrounded by impressive monuments from the past that can inspire us for the future. 

Sample 9:

There is ongoing debate about whether government expenditure should be primarily focused on the restoration of old buildings in major cities or directed towards new housing and road development. While I agree that significant funds are required for the restoration of historical structures, I also believe that investment in new housing and road development is essential for urban growth and improved quality of life. Therefore, it is important to strike a balance between these two aspects in order to achieve sustainable development.

One argument in favor of investing in new housing and road development centers around the increasing demand for affordable and modern accommodation as well as efficient transportation systems. As urbanization continues and cities expand, it is crucial to provide adequate housing for the growing population. In addition, well-structured road networks are essential for easy commuting and improved connectivity, which can contribute to economic growth and opportunities in various sectors.

On the other hand, preserving old buildings carries significant cultural and historical value. These structures provide a glimpse into a city's past, reflecting its architectural heritage and unique identity. By restoring and maintaining historical buildings, cities can attract tourists, boost cultural tourism, and generate revenue. Moreover, preserving the historical charm of neighborhoods can enhance residents' sense of pride and attachment to their community.
In conclusion, while substantial government expenditure is necessary for the restoration of old buildings in major cities, investment in new housing and road development should also be prioritized. Striking a balance between these two aspects is crucial for accommodating the growing population, improving urban infrastructure, and preserving cultural heritage. By combining these efforts, cities can achieve sustainable development, enhance residents' quality of life, and foster economic growth.

Sample 10:

Restoring and maintaining dated buildings in major cities often takes considerable governmental funding. Some people oppose this and favour using tax money to construct more houses and road infrastructure. I generally agree with this idea because a society ought to provide its citizens with the basic need of housing, yet in cases of historic and iconic buildings, exceptions should be granted.

In big cities, tax money should be allocated to provide adequate housing and construct more roads to accommodate the increasing population. More and more people from economically deprived regions have been migrating to metropolitan areas in search of work. This has caused the population density in certain cities to rise remarkably, bringing in its wake negative outcomes such as traffic congestion and crowded living quarters. Using tax money to build more houses, therefore, provides people with affordable shelters that low-income people could purchase. In addition, constructing more roads means smoother traffic which enables the economy to grow effectively.

On the other hand, there are buildings that are worth restoring because of their historical or symbolic significance. These buildings are the source of inspiration for arts and sometimes income for the local people, and they are of great interest to historians, archaeologists and architects for their academic values. Structures within the Imperial City of Hue are the prime example of such buildings. The Imperial City of Hue has been the subject of countless works of art and literature, and as a tourist attraction, it has also been beneficial to local business. Academically, it offers a glimpse into how life was in ancient Vietnam.

In conclusion, I agree that constructing more houses and roads is important and should generally be prioritized over maintaining old buildings with the exception of historically significant constructions. I believe this should be the approach for most cities.

Sample 11:

Across the world, enormous funds have been devoted by governments to renovate plenty of ancient buildings in metropolises to protect the cultural and historical heritages. After serious consideration, I deem that the investments from the governments should more particularly emphasize on expanding the area of residential buildings and perfecting transport facilities to satisfy the developments of conurbations and the needs of people.

Enormous capital injected by governments towards dwelling houses and public transport services should be the inevitable consequence of urbanization. Due to emergence of various platforms and employment opportunities in metropolises, people flood into the urban areas to realize their self-value and obtain more materially abundant life, however, this imposes huge burdens onexisting lodgings and transportation system. From this point, it is the obligation of governments to expand residential areas that people expect of and provide more convenient and faster public transportation to alleviate the deteriorating traffic condition.

In addition, governments' investing in new lodgings and improving the current transportation system can embody the actual demands from people and is favorable for tackling a series of issues evoked by high housing price, housing shortage and traffic congestion. Therefore, I believe addressing housing shortage and controlling high house prices by means of governments investing in the real estate sector is exactly the way out for solving the biggest problem people are confronted with. Secondly, improving the current transportation condition is the effective way to enhance happiness index and life satisfaction index.

It is undeniable that it is also reasonable to some extent that governments invest in renovating ancient buildings. It can be conducive to inheriting cultures and safeguarding the local customs and traditions better. Nevertheless, the funds invested by governments should be used to tackle practical issues people are confronted with better so as to provide more suitable living conditions and make people enjoy the convenience brought about by improving the public transportation.

On balance, after taking into account the above perspectives, the government should put more money in improving the living conditions, adjusting the high housing price and providing more perfect and advanced transportation facilities while adopting reasonable measures to protect the ancient buildings in conurbations.

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Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Certain concerned parties today contend that celebrities’ private lives should not be publicized on social media. In my opinion, the general citizenry has the right to be aware of the lives of various public figures.

Some hold the opinion that each individual has an unalienable and basic right to privacy. If one’s idols are not engaging in illegal activity, there is no clear justification to publicize their personal lives to the public other than as a form of entertainment or gossip. For instance, if a celebrity begins a new relationship, it is common for the paparazzi to photograph them in public and report private details online. This is an invasion of privacy and may harm their relationship even though the celebrities have done nothing wrong. The only injury in these cases is to the mental health of those being reported on in public forums with little cause.

On the one hand, celebrities have a social responsibility to set a good example for the general public. Modern media consumers, especially younger people, these days spend more time online than ever before, and therefore are increasingly vulnerable to extreme views and the easy adoption of thoughtless political stances and bad habits. For that reason, celebrities should regulate their personal behavior, including staying away from drug abuse, not espousing dangerous viewpoints, and focusing on socially beneficial actions. Social media can in this way serve as a “watchdog” for celebrities by reporting negative press, which will deter public figures from misbehaving. 

In conclusion, I think celebrities should allow citizens to learn about their personal lives though social media, since fame is a privilege, and they have a responsibility towards society at large. Citizens should only respect their privacy when it is a personal matter with little public relevance.

Sample 2:

The media plays a powerful role in disseminating information to the public. However, the extent to which that can intrude into the private lives of celebrities is a contentious issue. While some individuals say that public figures must expect and endure such scrutiny, others believe that they also have a right to keep their personal lives private. It is important for the media to respect the boundaries of celebrities and understand that everyone has a right to privacy, regardless of their status in society. This viewpoint argues for a more respectful and considerate approach while covering celebrities in the media. 

On the one hand, celebrities are often seen as role models by many people in our society, especially the younger generation, their actions, and lifestyle choices can significantly influence their fans in a certain direction. Therefore, some argue that the media must continue to openly share celebrities’ private lives, and it is their responsibility to report about their private lives. This perspective suggests that celebrities, by choosing to be public figures, have implicitly agreed to this level of scrutiny. 

On the other hand, everyone has a right to privacy, regardless of their profession or status. And celebrities are no exception to this. The media’s relentless intervention in the pursuit of personal stories can also build unnecessary stress and anxiety for these individuals. Furthermore, it can also lead to distorted images of celebrities, as the media often has this habit of sensationalizing aspects of their personal lives for higher TRPs (Television Rating Points).

In my opinion, while it is important for the media to keep the public informed about the lives of celebrities, it is also equally necessary for them to respect individuals’ privacy rights. Celebrities, despite their public status, must not be subjected to undue invasion of their personal lives. The media should focus more on their professional achievements rather than their personal lives. 

In conclusion, while there is a fine line between public interest and invasion of privacy, it is crucial for the media to strike a balance. Celebrities have a right to privacy just like any other individual. Therefore, the media should respect this right and refrain from delving too deeply into their personal lives.

Sample 3:

Some individuals argue that the private lives of celebrities should remain shielded from public scrutiny by the media. In my view, while privacy is a fundamental right, public figures have a certain degree of responsibility to share aspects of their lives with the general populace.

It is indeed essential to acknowledge the significance of privacy as a basic human right. Celebrities, like any other individuals, are entitled to a zone of personal space that should be respected. When publicizing the private lives of celebrities, particularly when they are not involved in illegal activities, there must be a compelling justification beyond mere entertainment or gossip. For instance, if a celebrity enters into a new relationship, it is not uncommon for paparazzi to invade their privacy by photographing intimate moments and reporting personal details online. This intrusion constitutes a clear violation of their right to privacy and can have detrimental effects on their relationships and mental well-being. In such cases, the public's insatiable appetite for personal details serves no justifiable purpose.

However, it is crucial to consider the role of celebrities as influencers in society. With the advent of the digital age, people, especially the younger generation, spend an increasing amount of time online and are highly susceptible to the opinions and actions of public figures. Celebrities wield significant influence and can shape public opinion. Therefore, they have a social responsibility to set a positive example. This includes refraining from drug abuse, avoiding the endorsement of dangerous ideologies, and engaging in socially beneficial activities. Social media can function as a watchdog, holding celebrities accountable for their actions. When celebrities engage in harmful behavior, reporting on such actions can deter others from following a similar path. In this sense, the media's role in scrutinizing celebrities can serve the greater good by promoting responsible behavior among public figures.

In conclusion, while privacy is a fundamental right, celebrities, as prominent members of society, have a responsibility to share aspects of their lives that contribute positively to society. The public should respect their privacy in truly personal matters, but celebrities should expect a degree of scrutiny when their actions have implications beyond their private sphere. Balancing privacy with responsibility is essential in a world where public figures play a significant role in shaping public attitudes and behavior.

Sample 4:

Many are of the view that the media should refrain from intruding into the personal spaces of famous personalities. I completely agree with the statement, as an act of peeking into the personal lives of eminent public figures by the media is nothing but a detrimental assault on their right to privacy and runs the risk of eroding public trust in the media.

To begin with, encroaching on the private spaces of celebrities by the media is a gross violation of the right to privacy of an individual, which is an inalienable right that every democratic country cherishes and strives to protect by enacting a robust legal framework. Also, as public figures are the most revered and respected, largely owing to their inspiring feats, they unsurprisingly hog the media limelight. While it is incumbent upon the media to highlight and disseminate their achievements to the larger public, their private lives should not become a subject of discussion or debate in the media. For example, the growing obsession of media with celebrities in several countries has led the state authorities to usher in legal measures to rein in media and trample on the right to privacy of celebrities.

In addition, the media's reporting of the happenings in the personal sphere of famed personalities could undermine their credibility in the eyes of the public. As the main purpose of media is to promote public interest and make people informed citizens by effectively articulating the legitimate concerns of people about their lives and livelihoods to governments, their unwarranted focus on prominent public figures could not only put their credibility in jeopardy but also push the people to lose their trust in media as a whole. To illustrate, the death of Princess Diana in the UK, who confronted excessive media scrutiny of her private lives, caused public outrage and backlash against the media in that country.

To conclude, since the media has the onerous task of disseminating the truth to the public while holding governments accountable for their acts of commission and omission, they need to exercise restraint and avoid coverage in the private sphere of celebrities.

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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In recent decades, the amount of money spent on space programmes has been increasing significantly, causing some public controversy. However, while some people believe space exploration’s costs are too high, I side with those who believe that these programmes are highly beneficial to humanity and, therefore, worth the cost.

On the one hand, it could be argued that the benefits we gain from expensive space programmes are not worth the cost. Firstly, opponents of space exploration believe it costs their countries billions of dollars to recruit, train and pay for astronomers as well as the research teams while there are not any clear benefits for ordinary people. They argue that it would be more practical to spend the money on essential sectors such as education, health care and transportation to raise the citizens’ living standards. In addition, human beings on Earth are facing severe issues, such as famine, natural disasters, pollution or terrorism, which require immediate action. If the money were reallocated to solve these problems, a large number of human lives would be saved.

However, I side with those who are of the opinion that it is worth continuing space programmes regardless of cost. One of the reasons, I would argue, is that the advanced technology which has been developed and used in space exploration does have practical applications in our daily lives. A great example is GPS, which is used as the fundamental system to develop many applications in taxi and delivery services such as Uber or Grab. Furthermore, satellites sent to the space can observe what is happening on Earth, and therefore, can provide highly accurate forecasts about the weather and more importantly, the potential occurrence of natural disasters such as typhoons or devastating storms. Without these forecasts, a considerable number of human lives would be at risk each year.

In conclusion, although money spent on expensive space programmes could have practical uses on Earth, not only is space exploration beneficial to our daily lives, but also helps predict and prepare for unexpected situations. Therefore, I believe it is a wise decision to keep funding these programmes.

Sample 2:

The debate over the cost of space exploration is contentious. Some argue that the financial burden far outweighs the benefits, while others believe that these programs should continue regardless of the expense. I agree with the latter.

Critics of space exploration argue that the costs involved are exorbitant, diverting funds from more pressing earthly needs. Recruiting, training, and maintaining a team of astronomers, along with the extensive research required, amounts to billions of dollars. These critics suggest that this money could be more effectively spent on essential sectors such as education, healthcare, and transportation, which directly improve citizens’ living standards. For example, a 2023 report by the World Health Organization emphasized the urgent need for investments in healthcare infrastructure, clean water, and sanitation to combat infectious diseases and address climate change, highlighting that such measures could save countless lives. Therefore, many believe that reallocating funds from space programs to solve immediate issues like famine, pollution, and terrorism would yield more tangible benefits for humanity.

On the other hand, proponents of space exploration, myself included, argue that it brings significant technological advancements and a deeper understanding of the universe, both of which are invaluable. Technologies developed for space missions, such as GPS, have practical applications in everyday life, revolutionizing services like Uber and Grab. Satellites provide accurate weather forecasts and early warnings for natural disasters, potentially saving thousands of lives annually. Furthermore, space exploration has led to discoveries that expand our knowledge of planetary systems, celestial bodies, and the fundamental laws of physics. For instance, understanding planets, comets, and stars can offer solutions to future challenges like overpopulation, by exploring the possibility of colonizing other planets. Additionally, innovations like space-based solar power present promising solutions to Earth’s energy crises, being more efficient than traditional solar cells.

In conclusion, while the high costs of space exploration cannot be ignored, the technological advancements and profound knowledge gained justify the investment. Therefore, I believe that space programs should continue, as their long-term benefits far exceed the immediate financial expenditures.

Sample 3:

The topic of space exploration has long been a subject of debate, with some arguing that the costs involved outweigh the benefits, while others believe that space programmes should persist regardless of the expenses. This essay will explore both perspectives, analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of space exploration. Personally, I am in favour of continuing space exploration and this essay will explain why.

One of the main arguments against space exploration is the exorbitant cost involved. Critics contend that the significant financial resources required for space programmes could be better allocated to addressing pressing issues on Earth, such as poverty alleviation, healthcare, or environmental conservation. They argue that spending billions of dollars on space missions seems unjustifiable when there are urgent matters that demand attention and funding.

On the other hand, proponents of space exploration assert that the benefits derived from these programmes justify the high costs. Firstly, space exploration has led to significant technological advancements that have had far-reaching applications in various industries. Innovations developed for space missions have contributed to advancements in satellite communications, weather forecasting, medical imaging, and even everyday products such as lightweight materials and energy-efficient technologies. Secondly, space exploration has broadened our understanding of the universe, expanding our knowledge of celestial bodies, planetary systems, and the origins of life.

In my opinion, the cost involved in space exploration and outer space research is justifiable because it has the potential to bring technological and scientific revolutions and solve problems like the energy crisis that we could never achieve otherwise. Moreover, there is no guarantee that if we stop spending money on space research, poverty, hunger and other pressing issues would be better addressed with that fund and they will be solved.

In conclusion, the debate surrounding the cost of space exploration is multifaceted. While some argue that the expenses are too high, detracting from pressing issues on Earth, others emphasize the benefits and advancements it brings to society. Personally, I believe that space exploration is a worthy endeavour as it will bring unprecedented benefits to humankind. Moreover, the diversion of budget from space exploration to poverty alleviation, or environmental conservation will never bring favourable and long-term results.

Sample 4:

Space exploration gets a huge budget every year. While many argue that the benefits it brings are not worth the money that is being spent, others opine that the programme ought to be carried out, even though the operating costs are huge. This essay will discuss both these views. Personally, I concur with the latter view and will show that despite being expensive the space programme has made an enormous contribution to technological advancements and the economy.

It is often believed by many that the money spent on space exploration is not justified. Many vociferous opponents of space exploration claim that nations derive no direct advantages from space exploration. A case in point is velcro, which was used during the Apollo mission to fasten equipment for astronauts. But the moon offered us nothing except some photos of the planet below.

Nations, however, ought to persist with their space programme in spite of bearing the huge cost, according to many others. This is because it paves the way for the development of various sophisticated technologies that contribute significantly to the economy and improve lives on the planet. Without space programmes, for instance, we would not have the Global Positioning System (GPS), accurate weather forecast, ultraviolet filters in cameras and sunglasses, and solar cells, to name but a few. In addition, the current medical research in space could cure many deadly diseases and increase life expectancy, and these experiments cannot be conducted on Earth.

In my opinion, the money that countries spend on space exploration creates positive impacts. It facilitates highly skilled jobs, advances leading-edge technologies, and opens up the possibility of finding answers that humans have been looking for for centuries. For these reasons, I think that space exploration should continue.

In conclusion, a generous fund should be put into space exploration because it positively impacts technological advancements that keep on advancing our civilisation. Despite the cost, the benefits are enormous.

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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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Human beings have always been seen in a hovering contest among each other since time immemorial. Some people consider this tendency of comparison and copying one another to be even more profound in certain sectors such as fashion and consumer goods. I agree with this notion. In the paragraphs to follow, I shall be elucidating my perspectives on this school of thought.

This practice of comparing, juxtaposition, and then superimposition has been a general disposition of human beings, and they relentlessly keep on imitating each other in various streams of life. The areas of fashion, consumer durables, and confectionery items usage are the most pronounced among all other areas of competition and comparison. The major reason for this is the showing-off and the sense of animosity associated with it. In addition to that, the sublime sense of superiority and inferiority has aggravated this emulation and aping of each other. These materialistic aspects are often seen in the highest regard by the people today, and the cases of people going all the way beyond their capacities to get in sync with the trends are rife.

Other instances of people copying and aping one another are primarily spotted in the cases of the brands and companies. Right from the dress one dons to the wallet one carries or the branded shoes one sets one’s feet into, everything is seen enveloping the sense of comparison. This causes huge indirect comparison and emulation amongst people. Moreover, this has been the major driving force for the brands and items to proliferate, and this has been the primary cause for their plain sailing. In addition to that, the sales offers, discount promos, and buyer’s persona have all been germinated through the seed of copying each other that yet again buds from the competition of materialistic possessions.

Some people would say that such copying and contrasting is also seen in other streams other than fashion and consumer durables. However, such cases are more defined in the streams of fad and fashion.

Conclusively, we may thus say that people copy each other to a great extent and tend to break free of their intellectual capabilities to make themselves parallel to others’ set standards.

Sample 2:

The paradigm shift is responsible for the propensity of the masses to imitate others such as their clothes, hairstyles and footwear; resultantly, it has increased the demand for fashionable clothes as well as other useful items. I thoroughly agree with it because the masses remain updated as well as manufacturers also get huge profits.

To begin with, the masses follow each other because they want to keep themselves abreast of the outer world. To elaborate, when they see the others are wearing unique attires, and this has groomed their personality; then, they blindly copy them to be like them. Also, to be praised by others stimulates them to imitate them. For instance, nowadays, the clothes that are being worn by film stars are high in demand. Every piece of cloth and footwear is being sold like hotcakes. People become compulsive buyers, and this tendency to copy others could be seen everywhere. Individuals bring modifications in their outlook and also are full of superiority complex. In addition, manufacturers also get huge profits because of demand for certain products increase. They know that people would buy those items which are used more by celebrities. They make use of it, and sometimes the demand increases and supply decreases.

In addition, shopping websites and advertisements also enhance the demand for consumer items. When anything is displayed to consumers by exaggerating its benefits; then, the demand for those products escalates. To exemplify it, people who are suffering from some complexes such as inferiority complex, it may be due to their short stature as well as a dark colour, they are targeted more. They bring transformations in their appearance by wearing stylish clothes and using effective face washes, creams. People feel more confident and positive about themselves. Consequently, manufacturers attain a huge profit.

To conclude, thus, in consideration of the above analysis, it is ostensible that multitude imitates others to keep themselves updated as well as getting rid of irrational fears about their colour complexion as well as short stature.

Sample 3:

Some have suggested that the popularity of specific consumer trends evidences a natural human inclination to copy one another. In my opinion, this is largely true though there are other potential practical explanations.

Those who oppose this belief argue that imitation is rooted in reason. There are legitimate practical justifications to follow others. If a product such as a new smartphone is popular, then that is evidence it is a quality item. In this way, people are copying on a rational basis, not out of an inborn human desire. Moreover, popular items are likely cheaper and more widely available. A trendy pair of jeans made by Levy’s, for instance, is produced in the millions and stocked in department stores around the world. Individuals will encounter these jeans frequently and their purchase is simply a matter of convenience.

However, I believe that copying others satisfies a deeper human drive to feel part of a larger group. The natural tendency of humans to congregate also compels them to adopt similar customs and habits. Imitation shows that there is commonality and eases the fear of otherness. For example, Apple has built their brand based on the power of an inclusive community of like-minded users. By joining such an ecosystem, people are no longer isolated and feel part of a larger whole that elevates their individual self-esteem and protects them from other groups. Humans do not now face significant physical threats from nature but the desire to copy one another in order to join a modern-day tribe persists in contemporary consumer culture.

In conclusion, the popularity of similar consumer items illustrates an underlying need in humans to imitate one another in order to feel safe and accepted. This is not necessarily a negative insight though it should be managed carefully by individuals.

Sample 4:

Human beings are social animals; hence, they constantly need to interact through whatever form of media they can to provide their basic needs of clothes, food and housing. Interestingly, doing exactly what others do has made fashion clothes and food items more readily available. This essay will agree with this line of thought for the following reasons.

Generally, people lack originality and, as a result of this laziness, tend to do exactly what others do. This copy-and-paste syndrome in the clothing and food industry is happening all over the world. For example, a tomato company sprung up in Jos, Nigeria, to reduce the wastage of tomatoes after harvest as a result of the unavailability of processing facilities. In the same year, another company was doing exactly the same thing. The question as to why another consumer’s good or time was not considered leaves reason to doubt their creativity. This has given rise to seeing the same kind of food products and fashion clothes everywhere you go.

In another light, people also do this for profit-making. Once it is evident that a particular consumer good or fashion apparel is doing good numbers in the economy, people go ahead into mass-production without paying attention to the after-effect, which includes seeing the same type of product all over the world.

In conclusion, copying people’s ideas is not bad; sometimes, there is room for improvement, but lacking diversity can make life very boring. As they say, variety is the spice of life and doing exactly the same thing as others do as per fashion items and consumer goods leads to excess.

Sample 5:

In this day and age, fashion has been flourishing significantly the world over. It is often witnessed that most humans follow trends like fashion, status, and consumer goods to make a luxurious lifestyle. This essay agrees with the nation; however, both viewpoints will be analysed in the upcoming paragraphs.

The first and foremost factor is learning new things when copied to another person. It is because individuals are easy to attract with new things. In fact, they also want to live rich. So, most humans follow clothes, lifestyle, or goods. Also, they are motivated by the singers’ and actors’ lifestyles. And then, they work hard to get these things. Several studies have clear-cut proof that almost 70 per cent of people learn fashion skills from social media because they are easy to infuse.

Another pertinent reason is the masses feel luxurious when they get the brand product. In fact, their confidence will be high in society. It would not be erroneous to say that when people wear the brand product or goods, their confidence level is high, and they feel rich. For example, BBC conducted a survey in an American College where 60% of students said they feel rich when carrying Apple products or branded clothes. As a result, product advertisement is also increased in society when people always carry.

On the contrary, despite the benefits of this phenomenon, it has a few drawbacks too. Firstly, everyone does not get the original copy of the product, so sometimes they feel sad, and they cannot enjoy the present time. Individuals are easy to follow the social side, and they carry to buy the product, but they lose many other things in life. And they do other negative activities to buy this product, like snatching and crime. To cite an example, in India, the crime rate is increased due to earning money in a short time by snatching.

Having a delta, with this subject in some detail, it can be concluded that following the trend is a good way to learn new things in life but do not try to earn short-term money to buy the goods.

Sample 6:

It is undeniable that in this 21st century, everyone follows different personalities either they follow clothing sense or buy goods by watching them. I strongly agree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I intend to discuss some views regarding this approach along with my opinion.

To embark on, it is commonly seen that in this modern era, everyone follows different trends like fashion. The first and foremost point is that there are the majority of reasons why follow new trends regarding clothing, like they wear fashionable clothes as well as they follow some actors and singers whom they admire. They follow them, and they are motivated by their role models. Once their models started wearing different attires, they supported them and wore the same stocks. Apart from this, some people individuals want to purchase different brands of products and vehicles. By watching their stars, they copy them.

On the other hand, there are other things besides fashion and goods. Firstly, sometimes people copy other lifestyles and hard work. To explicate, half of the generation follows successful people and gets inspired by them, and it encourages the local public to do hard work to get the best position in life as well as follow the lifestyle so that they can live a better life.

To recapitulate, I would like to reiterate that most people like to follow superstars’ fashions and are encouraged to buy devices their stars use. Others like to do hard work so that they live a better life in the future.

Sample 7:

Fashion and goods are becoming more similar between brands. Some people think that manufacturers are copying ideas of each other in such products while others claim that this is hardly necessarily reflected mostly in fashion and goods. I believe that in any field, people can copy from others and sometimes, fashion and consumer goods are far from easy imitation.

First of all, it is thought that copying the style of fashion and goods is easier than other types of imitation. Just a glance at design is sufficient enough to provide other competitive brands to follow and manufacture right after the original item comes into being. Nevertheless, people's desire is to enjoy products with good appearance and quality at the same time. Despite the copying trend of outstanding appearance, if the quality of products is below expectation of consumers, for instance, short durability and high price, the latter ones will shun away these items soon.

Second of all, people mostly need goods in their daily life. The rate of consumption in daily goods adds up to billions of dollars for producers, which motivates them to copy each other. Yet, when it involves the assembly line and advanced technological applications, it is far from easy-to-follow suit. Technological goods need expertise, significant investment and long-term research. Hence, though goods may look like each other, they are rarely products of pure emulation and mass- consumed. Chinese products, for instance, in spite of being believed to be of lower price and copy others in the world, are still not as attractive as original ones as created in America and Japan due to their unfashionable design and short-time durability. In addition, copying trend is noticeable in other fields. In art, the musical style of one nation borrows greatly from that of other countries to enrich cultural heritage of each nation while products of high intellectuality such as writing styles are somehow similar to each other. Even in choice of life, when a person has little inkling about what he or she does in life, it is more likely that he or she will travel the same journey as predecessors to be on the safe side. When it comes to work environment where competition is higher, to ingratiate oneself with bosses, employees are possible to copy ideas of others, which actually proves easier than to imitate the complicated business models to generate fashion designs or consumer goods.

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Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential for us to learn history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's fast-paced world, where every minute counts, some people argue that studying history is a waste of time, while others believe it is crucial for us to learn about the past. In this essay, we will discuss both viewpoints and present an argument in favour of learning and understanding history.

Those who claim that studying history is a waste of time argue that it is a subject with little practical value, unlike math, science, and technology, which have direct applications in the real world. They also argue that history is monotonous, and students are often forced to memorize a list of names, dates, and events, without fully understanding their significance.

On the other hand, others think that there are compelling reasons why history is an essential subject to learn. Firstly, history provides a rich source of knowledge and understanding about our past and how we got to where we are today. It helps us to understand the origins of political, social, and cultural institutions, and how they have evolved over time. I believe that studying history teaches us critical thinking and analytical skills, which are essential for success in all areas of life. We learn to evaluate evidence, identify bias, and develop our own perspectives on events.

In conclusion, while some may argue that studying history is a waste of time, it is clear that learning about our past has many benefits. History provides us with a deeper understanding of the world around us and helps us to develop critical thinking skills. Therefore, it is essential for students to learn about history, and educators must make every effort to present the subject in a way that engages and inspires students.

Sample 2:

There are differing opinions on whether studying history is a worthwhile pursuit or a waste of time. Those who argue that history is a waste of time often believe that it has no practical applications in modern society, while others contend that it is essential to learn from the past in order to make informed decisions about the future. In this essay, I will discuss both views, but, personally, I think that studying history is not essential.

On the one hand, proponents of studying history believe that it is essential for us to learn from the past in order to avoid repeating the same mistakes. History provides a framework for understanding the present and helps us to appreciate the context in which we live. It also allows us to learn from the successes and failures of previous generations, and to build on their achievements.

On the other hand, those who believe that studying history is a waste of time argue that it is irrelevant to modern life. They claim that the past is gone and cannot be changed, so there is no need to dwell on it. Furthermore, they argue that history is subjective, with different interpretations of events depending on who is telling the story. This can lead to confusion and a lack of agreement on what actually happened.

In my opinion, studying history is not vital and can often kill our valuable time. Some say that without a thorough understanding of our past, we cannot shape the future. But in reality, no matter how much knowledge we gather about wars and conflicts of the past, the world will always have wars and conflicts. In addition, studying history is not only irrelevant but also impractical, as it does not provide any tangible benefits in terms of employability or career advancement.

In conclusion, while there are differing views on the value of studying history, I firmly believe that it is not an essential pursuit. Through studying the past, we can gain very few valuable insights about the future. Moreover, they are not practical and have little value in today's job market.

Sample 3:

People have different views about learning history and using the knowledge of history to shape the future. Although some people argue that studying history has nothing to offer, others opine that examining history has a great prospect for discovering our past and using the knowledge to shape our future. This essay investigates both views, but I am personally inclined toward the latter viewpoint.

According to some people, learning history is a waste of time and energy. They believe that learning technology and science can bring significantly more benefits to humankind, and the knowledge could be utilised for future development. History, on the contrary, has no utilisation in our daily life, according to them. For instance, science students can experiment and build helpful tools and devices, and this can lead to magnificent future inventions while pupils from history majors are imposed to memorize dates and events from the past.

But according to many others, learning history tells us about past events and prepares us for the future. We cannot expect to avoid a large-scale catastrophe if we do not know why it happened in the first place. In the 19th century, for example, Ireland suffered the blight of potatoes, known as the Irish Potato Famine, and it happened because the Irish were largely dependent on potatoes. Had they planted another crop, this could have been avoided. However, this unpleasant history has taught us a great lesson - to cultivate a wide diversity of crops.

In conclusion, people learn important lessons from experience and to build a prosperous nation, we must learn from our history which offers the greatest experience of all. Without knowledge of history, scientific discoveries alone cannot bring a wide range of advantages.

Sample 4:

History, according to many, is the gateway to the past and a reflection of the future. Others, however, see very little value in learning history and emphasize the study and practice of more important subjects and fields like science, arts, technology, engineering and so on. This essay will attempt to explore both views. Personally, I possess the opinion that studying history is not useful, and we should better utilise our time by learning technology and science, and other important life skills instead.

On the one hand, supporters of learning history emphasize that it offers us the opportunity to learn about our past society, civilisation, important national and global events, outcomes of major decisions, wars, social changes and so on. It helps us plan for a better future as the lessons learned from history can help us avoid catastrophes or plan for a brighter future. For instance, we can learn what triggered a major war or how a natural disaster caused havoc to people from history. Such knowledge and insights are important to prevent future conflicts and disasters.

On the other hand, opponents of learning history opine that most students study and memorise important dates, names of people, events, causes and results of something and so on when they study history. People outside of the academic arena also study history mostly for the sake of learning about past events. Such studies have little significance in the practical world. Knowing how ancient people used to survive has almost zero value in survival in the modern world. So goes for the inventions as well. Learning about past inventions has very little to do with inventing something novel. Moreover, human history is full of human conflicts and wars, and learning about them may discourage people from respecting our very civilisation.

This is why, I wholeheartedly believe that people should invest more time learning and researching science, technology, engineering, and arts to bring about positive changes in their lives as well as in the society they live in instead of learning and memorising history.

To conclude, history can give us some details of the past which has very little value to shape the future. It is more practical to learn and hone our knowledge and skills in science, arts and technology for a better future.

Sample 5:

The debate regarding the value of studying history is both a controversial yet timeless one, with a myriad divided between the perceptions of seeing it as a vital part of learning or as a frivolous pursuit. While some perceive the subject to be dispensable, arguing that it contributes little value to present issues, others counter such a belief by asserting the significance of hindsight acquired from past events.

The proponents of the argument that history is irrelevant contend that the emphasis should be on mastering contemporary skills, directly related to future endeavours, rather than delving into past events. They suggest that time and resources are better invested in fields like science, technology, medicine or business studies, which they consider having a direct impact on immediate societal progression.

However, those who champion the importance of historical knowledge strongly oppose these views, asserting that history fosters a deep understanding of human behaviours, ideologies, and culture. From their perspective, the lessons learnt from past events and eras can inform future decisions and perhaps stave off repetition of past mistakes. They also argue that history encourages critical thinking, an essential life skill that helps in effective decision-making processes.

In my opinion, while it is vital to focus and channelize efforts on subjects that can provide immediate benefits, it is equally noteworthy to understand the past as it shapes our understanding of the world. Overall, balancing contemporary subjects with ones like history could ensure a comprehensive education, succouring not just career growth, but also personal development.

Sample 6:

We learn from history that we learn nothing from history. Most of the people believe this statement to be true and uphold the opinion that learning history is a sheer waste of time, however, others are of the opinion that history forms a very important part in our lives and must not be neglected. I believe history is important if one learns how to tackle the present from it, however, merely learning the names and dates of history is truly a waste of time.

History reflects our past and is considered very critical by many individuals. It surely has great benefits if learned in the right spirit. Firstly, it helps young people to understand their culture and how their culture and country have evolved. This in turn helps them to identify with the current issues of the country. Secondly, history teaches us about travesties that have occurred in the past, such as the Holocaust. It is essential for both people in the past, present and the future to never forget such events in order to honor the memory of those lost and to ensure it never happens again. Thirdly, it provides valuable information such as traditional medicines and how one can use them in solving present day problems.

However, history does become a waste when one goes the traditional way of simply learning to gain marks. Most people simply memorize dates, names and facts when they study history. This information is not useful in everyday life or for the future. Secondly, every historical event has a different perspective. For this reason, it makes learning history a waste of time because events can be interpreted in different ways. Thirdly, rarely is the school curriculum changed and as a result only little current history can be found, which is the only type of history that helps people understand the world they currently live in.

Overall, in my opinion, reading history can surely be a waste of time, but it depends on what you read and how you read. The most successful people were often those who knew history well and knowing does not mean knowing the dates.

Sample 7:

Importance of learning history is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion. Many people say that studying history is irrelevant whereas others believe it is absolutely essential to learn history. This essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. However, I am in favour of learning history for the sake of a glorious future.

People who find history tedious and insignificant believe that it is a waste of time to search nooks and crannies of the past when the future seems real and more fascinating. They go on arguing that it will be highly productive if one stops cogitating about what has been done in the past and commences to contemplate regarding what has to be done. That way we could find the answers to existing as well as upcoming problems. For instance, it seems pointless to spend hours learning how the Romans conquered Britain. Instead, if students spend their time studying science, language, computer, and other valuable subjects, they could hone their skill to face the world and contribute to making it a better place.

On the contrary, many are strongly in favour of learning history. According to them, history aims to bridge the gulf between the past and future of mankind. That is to say that the present was shaped by the past. So, if someone wants to understand the present and forecast the future, he has to comprehend the past that moulds it. A case in point is racial issues. One cannot completely understand it until he studies the history of race relations. Moreover, history helps us learn from the mistakes of the past as the study of history helps see things from their true perspective. Last but not least, history serves as a guide to life. The lessons of the past which teach people to overcome the pitfalls of life and to trace the path of future success.

To conclude, some people think that studying history is worthless, whereas others believe that the significance of learning history is utterly important. In light of both perspectives, I have to admit that history is absolutely essential for our daily life as well as a grand future.

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It is important that we maintain and protect the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it is expensive for countries to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is often pointed out that historical buildings are valuable treasures for a country and should be preserved even if the government needs to spend hefty amounts on them. I completely agree with this viewpoint, and my position is outlined in this essay.

First of all, old and traditional buildings are of great architectural importance. Their sublime design attracts tourists and locals alike and is quite rare in modern structures. These historical edifices also give us an opportunity to learn about the glorious past. For example, the Roman Colosseum in Rome not only shows how awe-inspiring the ancient architectural designs were but also points out a massive arena used as a stadium for gladiators' fighting and has space to house around 50,000 spectators in tiered seating. This structure is a predominant representative of Roman culture and civilisation that modern historians cherish profoundly.

In addition to this, historical monuments also serve as tourist magnetism in many countries. In today's world, many people plan their vacations in places of historical importance as they are curious to know more about the culture and traditions of the past. Many nations benefit from these tourists, and as a result, they possess a booming tourism industry. For instance, millions of tourists including international tourists visit the Taj Mahal in India every year. This provides the government with a huge profit and also employs many locals, thus assisting the government financially.

To conclude, I believe, it is worth spending money on ancient buildings as they not only possess historical importance but also a financial kernel for many governments.

Sample 2:

Old historic edifices not only imprint past architectural styles and craftsmanship, but they often are also aesthetically appealing and attract tourists in great numbers. This is why some advocate protecting such structures even if it means an extra budget for the authority. I am also in favour of protecting and preserving such buildings and this essay explains why.

First of all, old structures have history and stories ingrained in them. Demolishing them will erase a great part of the history associated with them. They also are the hallmark of a nation's past glory and success. For instance, whenever we think about Rome, the Colosseum comes to our mind rather than its modern buildings. Now, if the Italian government decides to diminish this historic structure, that would be a blunder. It would not only obliterate its national history but also diminish the great potential to attract a huge number of tourists who visit Rome.

Most old buildings are aesthetically delightful and have fabulous designs. Unlike modern buildings - which are primarily built to accommodate more people or businesses, those old buildings give an impression of freedom in design, and they also are living proof of old technology that was applied to erect those establishments. The nations should conserve those buildings for both aesthetic purposes and to save the technology behind them. Finally, with the help of modern design materials and techniques, retouching and refurbishing those buildings to give them more stability and durability has become easier and comparatively cheaper. This is another reason authorities should think twice before deciding to demolish an old and beautiful building. 

In conclusion, beautiful and old buildings are important for attracting tourists, preserving design diversity and technology as well as protecting the history associated with them. This is why it is expected that authorities distinguish such buildings and take the initiative to protect them.

Sample 3:

Many old buildings contain historic significance and preserving important ones is necessary. However, protecting every old structure just for aesthetic reasons is not practical, especially at a time when the housing crisis is soaring all around the world. This essay explains why I believe that protecting and conserving all old beautiful buildings is a burden for a nation. 

The global population has reached a staggeringly high of 8 billion which was just 2 billion a century ago. With this dramatic rise in population, the housing problem has intensified and if old buildings do not make space for tall, modern and more frugal structures, we will soon be destroying all of our farmlands and forests to make new houses. This will lead to a disastrous situation as we already are losing agricultural lands and forests at an alarming rate. Modern buildings are meant to accommodate a large number of people, sometimes a modern skyscraper can accommodate thousands of people while most ancient structures were built to accommodate at best a large family. The designs were made in the last century when space was abundant. This is no longer practical at all to preserve those old buildings just because they are lovely to look at.

Moreover, maintaining and preserving old structures requires a large sum of money. They were built using traditional materials and techniques, and this is why renovating them requires intensive labour and money. On top of that, each government has a list of historically significant buildings and structures that they vigorously preserve and renovate. The authorities are not going to just demolish structures like the Taj Mahal or the Acropolis of Athens, and they are going to get budget and effort no matter what. Now including all old buildings in this must-preserve list is going to be a colossal burden if not an impossible act.

In conclusion, old and gorgeous-looking buildings that are century old should be replaced by modern and space-frugal buildings while significantly important historic buildings should be preserved. This way we will have the housing crisis in check while also preserving important history.

Sample 4:

The beauty of historical architecture is not just a testament to the skill and artistry of our ancestors, but it also provides a link to our cultural heritage. While it may be expensive to maintain and preserve these buildings, it is absolutely essential that we do so. I strongly agree with the statement that it is necessary to preserve and protect the attractive structures of the past.

Firstly, historical buildings represent a valuable connection to our cultural heritage. These structures are often integral to the identity of a city or region, and can provide insight into the history, culture, and traditions of a particular place. In some cases, they may be the only tangible link to a particular period of history, making them all the more important to preserve.

Moreover, historical buildings often have significant aesthetic and architectural value. They represent the epitome of design and craftsmanship of the era in which they were built and are irreplaceable in their beauty and elegance. Once lost, it is impossible to recreate the same level of artistry and skill that went into their creation. Preserving these buildings, therefore, is not just a matter of maintaining a connection to our cultural past, but it is also an investment in the future.

Finally, historical buildings can also have significant economic value. They often become tourist attractions, drawing visitors from around the world who appreciate their historical and architectural significance. This can provide a significant boost to the local economy, creating jobs and generating revenue for local businesses. In addition, preserving historical buildings can also be a way to regenerate or revitalize urban areas, bringing new life to previously neglected parts of a city.

In conclusion, maintaining and protecting historical buildings is essential to preserving our cultural heritage, promoting aesthetic and architectural values, and boosting local economies. While the cost of preserving these buildings can be high, the benefits are far greater. It is our duty to ensure that these irreplaceable treasures are passed on to future generations.

Sample 5:

In today's world, countries are facing many pressing issues such as poverty, climate change, and healthcare. Given these urgent concerns, the notion that we should prioritize spending on maintaining and protecting historical buildings, even if it is expensive, seems misguided. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with the statement that it is important to conserve and protect historical buildings.

Firstly, it is vital to recognize that maintaining historical buildings is a costly undertaking. Governments must allocate significant resources and funds to upkeep such buildings, which could otherwise be invested in other pressing social and economic needs. It is often argued that such buildings attract tourists and generate revenue, which is important for the economy. However, it is important to consider that this revenue is often not enough to cover the costs of maintaining and protecting these buildings.

Secondly, focusing too much on preserving the past can divert attention from the more urgent issues facing society today. While historical buildings may be attractive and significant, they do not address the pressing concerns of modern times, such as poverty and climate change. Governments should focus on addressing these issues rather than spending time and money preserving the past.

Lastly, we should also consider that not all historical buildings are worth preserving. Some buildings have significant cultural and historical value, while others may not. In fact, some historical buildings may even represent a painful legacy of colonialism, slavery, or other forms of oppression. It is important for societies to critically examine the value and significance of historical buildings before investing resources in their preservation.

In conclusion, while historical buildings may hold cultural and historical value, I disagree with the idea that it is essential to maintain and protect them, even if it is expensive. In a world facing numerous pressing issues, governments must prioritize spending on urgent needs such as poverty reduction and climate change rather than investing in preserving the past.

Sample 6:

Along with the development of society, there is an increasing number of issues brought into consideration, one of which is the conservation of beautiful historical architectures. There emerges a standpoint favoring the significance of such activities, despite colossal expenses for countries incurred from those processes in many cases. This essay's aim is to provide a personal position in consensus with the mentioned belief and appropriate reasons.

First, buildings of the past represent the historical values of a country. Architecture design is one of the aspects of a nation's cultural identities, as the buildings reflect the cultural quintessence of people in a certain historical period. Such beautiful architectures serve as objects for historians worldwide. Therefore, people should preserve and renovate historical buildings, for the next generations to visit and learn about the history. Moreover, architectures may be icons for people to recognize a nation. For example, whenever people see the Colosseum, they immediately remember Italy; and One-pillar Pagoda is globally recognized as Vietnam's symbol.

Second, buildings of the past are possibly boosters of a country's tourism industry. Because of the historical importance and beauty of ancient architectures, tourists and researchers around the world may flock to those sites to visit and explore. Such activities contribute to increasing the rate of tourists of a nation.

Nevertheless, the maintenance of historical architectures may not be one of the paramount obligations of some countries, especially those with economic difficulties. As protecting the buildings may require an enormous amount of money, those nations with low financial backgrounds cannot afford the expenses.

Briefly, historical buildings are invaluable assets of a country, people should maintain and preserve them as a part of their cultural identities. However, every coin has two sides, in some cases, the inability of spending money on protecting ancient architectures of countries with financial difficulties should have sympathized.

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The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some feel that increasing accessibility to air travel is largely positive, while others would contend the opposite. In my opinion, although the aviation industry contributes significantly to climate change, ease of access to air travel promotes commercial activities worldwide, which far outweighs the perceived drawbacks.

Detractors of inexpensive air travel typically point to its pernicious impact on the environment. Airplanes burn tremendous amounts of fossil fuels, releasing carbon dioxide into the atmosphere and accelerating global warming. The best evidence for this fact is reports that indicate billion tonnes of carbon dioxide are emitted by the aviation sector annually and are expected to continue rising exponentially. Relatedly, the proliferation of low-priced air travel not only aggravates existing climate conditions but also leads to dwindling oil supplies. As flying becomes more commonplace for the middle-class, greater pressure is placed on global oil reserves, increasing the risk of a potential energy crisis.

However, I would contend that low-cost air travel is unequivocally positive due to its economic implications. Less costly airline tickets facilitate business operations abroad and create commercial opportunities that would have otherwise been impossible. A pertinent example of this advancement that is often cited in economic forums is the overwhelming number of Koreans who have established successful restaurants throughout southeast Asia in nations such as Vietnam. As a result, the local economy also greatly benefits from the influx of foreign investment. For instance, the emergence of foreign-owned businesses in inner-city neighborhoods can engender new job opportunities for locals and additional tax revenue for the government.

In conclusion, despite being one of the main causes of rising global temperatures and the associated implications for global environmental health, increased accessibility to air travel fuels economic growth and thus makes this trend positive on the whole. Governments should incentivize airlines to set more efficient flight paths and reduce delays.

Sample 2:

The rise of low-cost airlines has made it possible for the public at large to travel abroad with relative ease. In my opinion, despite the advantages this creates for less affluent citizens, it is a net negative given the repercussions of the tourist industry to local nations.

One positive aspect of this development is the increased accessibility of travel. In the past, air travel was mainly reserved for the wealthy and the middle class, however, with the advent of low-cost airlines, even those on a more limited budget can afford to go on vacation domestically or to foreign countries. For example, a round-trip flight from London to Barcelona can now be purchased for as little as £20, making it possible for even students and young adults to explore new places. This equitable phenomenon is particularly valuable in less developed nations where in past generations only the truly wealthy could afford to travel regularly.

Nonetheless, the expansion of low-cost airlines has also led to issues of overcrowding and overtourism in certain destinations. For example, locales like Ha Long Bay in Vietnam and Boracay in the Philippines have struggled to cope with the influx of domestic and international tourists, leading to concerns about the impact on local communities and cultural heritage. Many of these communities now almost exclusively cater to tourism and there is less interest in older means of making a living, such as by producing a local handicraft or traditional garment. This has led to calls for more sustainable tourism practices and greater regulation of the industry to ensure that it benefits and sustains local communities.

In conclusion, although increased accessibility is an equitable development, it has also contributed to issues of overcrowding and overtourism. It is important for the aviation industry and governments to collaborate to address these negative impacts while continuing to make travel available to a wider range of residents.

Sample 3:

In recent years, the emergence of budget-friendly airlines has transformed the way people travel worldwide. Some embrace this as a positive development, as an opportunity for greater cultural exchange. However, others harbor concerns about its impact, especially on the environment and passenger safety. In my perspective, the positive impact of affordable air travel outweighs these drawbacks.

On the one hand, the rise of low-cost airlines has made travel accessible to a broader range of people. For instance, in the past, international travel was mainly a luxury enjoyed by the wealthy. However, with budget carriers offering affordable fares, more individuals can now explore new destinations, enabling cultural exchange and global understanding. This increased accessibility is undoubtedly a step towards a more interconnected world.

On the flip side, the expansion of low-cost airlines has negative consequences, particularly for the environment. For example, the proliferation of budget flights has led to a surge in air traffic, resulting in increased carbon emissions and contributing to climate change. Additionally, these airlines often cut corners, which can compromise passenger safety and comfort.

The benefits of affordable air travel prevail over the disadvantages. For example, it allows people from diverse backgrounds to experience different cultures and broaden their horizons, promoting tolerance and empathy. Furthermore, the travel industry is adapting to these changes, focusing on more eco-friendly practices and improved safety standards.

In conclusion, while there are legitimate concerns about the environment and safety, the democratization of travel and its positive impact on society cannot be underestimated. Accessible air travel promotes cultural exchange and global connectivity, making it a significant step towards a more globalized world.

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Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

The power of global media to educate today's youth and shape their views is significant. While some opine that the global media and international news, as part of secondary education, have no value, others believe that international news should be studied by those pupils. This essay attempts to examine the issue by diving deep into both views. However, I believe that international news, as part of the secondary education syllabus, is important.

On the one hand, many critics of the inclusion of global media in secondary education argue that teenagers would be negatively affected by the global media’s focus on negative issues of international events like wars and civil unrest. This is because exposure to violence often leads to depression, and the youths may grow an apathy towards our history and global politics. For example, a few recent surveys explain that despondent teenagers usually cite the dismal state of the world as a source of their depression. Since mental health is an important objective of secondary education, it is, therefore, questionable whether the study of international news would benefit young students.

On the other hand, global media enriches young people's understanding of contemporary affairs and broadens their knowledge and horizons. This is because international affairs, as part of education, both make them conscious and knowledgeable and connect global youths on the same platforms. For example, a study run by Oxford sociologists showed that the media heavily influences teenagers’ knowledge of contemporary affairs which has a highly positive impact on making them aware of the world. This awareness makes them global citizens and encourages them to share ideas.

In conclusion, clearly, there are arguments for and against the study of global news in secondary schools. However, educators and authorities can make it more useful by adopting proper policy and teaching methods and reap the benefits of teaching young students international news as part of their secondary education.

Sample 2:

The inclusion of international news in the secondary syllabus is supported by many while opposed by others. This essay will explore both viewpoints but would argue that even though international news can be a great source of knowledge and information from time to time, it does not necessarily mean that it should formally be included in the school curricula.

Those who support teaching international news to secondary students form their view on the fact that it would enhance the knowledge and view of the learners making them aware of the world and issues surrounding it. This way we will have more conscious and responsible youths who would not be afraid to take responsibility to tackle important issues. For instance, youths who know about the important issues that are happening in the world are often not afraid to express their opinion and take action, no matter how small, to solve environmental, social and political problems.

On the other hand, the opposers of having international news in secondary school syllabus believe that most secondary school students have rather tender minds and hearts, and as such, they will not be able to make sense of the many negative and controversial things that take place all over the world daily. After all, we do not live in an ideal world. Most news media today provide “biased” news which sometimes could not be any farther from the truth, and these young children just do not have the required cultural, social, economic and political awareness to penetrate the biased news, to separate the facts from fiction. On top of that, secondary school children already have to study many difficult subjects, such as math, language, physics, chemistry, social science, history, and geography, and adding one more subject to that list would only create more pressure on those children.

In conclusion, the concept of adding international news in secondary school is both welcomed and opposed by many. If we analyse both views with an objective mind, we will have to agree that including international news as a school subject at a secondary level is not such a good idea, after all.

Sample 3:

In today's globalised world, many people emphasise the importance of studying international news, especially for young learners. While some argue that it is a waste of valuable academic time, others advocate its inclusion strongly. Personally, I support the idea that secondary school students should study international news as one of their academic subjects.

On the one hand, some argue that studying international news is not essential for students and can be a waste of their valuable school time. They argue that students should focus on subjects that are more directly relevant to their future careers. They also point out that when those young learners would be exposed to negative and heartbreaking global news on a daily basis, they would get mentally depressed and that would not only lower their academic performance but also negatively affect their psychology. 

On the other hand, the proponents of studying international news think that it can broaden students' horizons and help them develop a more global perspective. It can expose them to different cultures, traditions, and ways of life, which can help them become more tolerant and understanding of others. For example, students who study international news may learn about the challenges faced by people in different parts of the world and be motivated to contribute to global humanitarian efforts. Moreover, studying international news can help students develop important skills such as critical thinking, analysis, and communication. It can also improve their language skills, as they may need to read and understand news articles in different languages. For instance, students who study international news can learn how to analyse and evaluate different perspectives on global issues and develop their own informed opinions.

In conclusion, studying international news is an essential part of a multi-skilled education for secondary school students. It can broaden their horizons, expand their critical thinking and analytical skills, and help them become more tolerant and understanding individuals. While it may not directly relate to their future careers, it is still essential.

Sample 4:

The inclusion of international news as a subject in secondary schools has been a contentious issue. While some argue that it enriches students' knowledge and global awareness, others contend that it diverts attention from core academic subjects. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint.

Proponents of integrating international news into the curriculum argue that it significantly enhances students' understanding of global issues, which is increasingly crucial in our interconnected world. By learning about events beyond their national borders, students can develop a more comprehensive worldview and foster critical thinking skills. For example, understanding the economic impacts of international trade agreements can provide valuable insights into local economic policies and personal career choices. Additionally, exposure to diverse cultures and political systems can promote tolerance and empathy, essential traits in a multicultural society like Vietnam. It is also noteworthy that in many progressive educational systems around the world, the inclusion of current events is seen as an integral part of a well-rounded education. Consequently, students equipped with such knowledge are better prepared to engage in informed discussions and make educated decisions in their personal and professional lives.

However, critics argue that dedicating time to international news in secondary education can detract from essential subjects such as mathematics, science, and literature. They believe that the core curriculum is already packed and that adding another subject could overwhelm students, leading to a decline in overall academic performance. For instance, students struggling with foundational subjects might find it challenging to cope with additional material, potentially widening the achievement gap. Furthermore, it is argued that the content of international news can often be complex and sometimes distressing, which might not be suitable for the psychological well-being of younger students. However, I believe that the benefits of teaching international news outweigh these concerns. With careful curriculum planning, the integration can be managed in a way that complements, rather than competes with, existing subjects.

In conclusion, while there are valid arguments on both sides, I am convinced that the inclusion of international news as a subject in secondary schools offers more benefits than drawbacks. By fostering a well-rounded education that includes global awareness, we are preparing students to be informed and empathetic citizens in an increasingly interconnected world. Therefore, it is imperative that educational policymakers consider the long-term advantages of such an inclusion.

Sample 5:

Opinions differ regarding the inclusion of global news as a subject in secondary schools. In my perspective, delving into worldwide news holds the potential to foster young minds destined for future greatness, thus making it a subject worth studying.

On the one hand, it can be argued that studying international news may not directly benefit students' future careers. Gaining knowledge about current affairs, such as earthquakes in foreign countries, may not provide tangible skills that increase employability down the line. Consequently, precious school hours that can be allocated to subjects more relevant to students' future careers, such as math and science, may be going to waste. However, I disagree with the argument above, as not every individual aspires to pursue a path in science or engineering. For some students, exploring global events might kindle an interest in journalism.

On the other hand, studying worldwide news has the power to ignite future greatness in students. When schools incorporate international news into their curriculum, students are regularly exposed to headlines and business news that shape the world today, including rocket launches by entrepreneurs like Elon Musk and Jeff Bezos. This consistent exposure helps inspire them to make impactful contributions to the world as they grow up, just as the influential figures featured in the news do. I firmly support this perspective because I believe that, apart from imparting knowledge, schools should also be a source of inspiration for students to discover their highest aspirations, and this can be achieved through the study of global news.

In conclusion, while studying world affairs may not have a direct career benefit, it has the potential to spark greatness in young students and, therefore, should be included as a subject in secondary schools.

Sample 6:

Recently, the choice of courses for secondary school students has become a hot topic. Some students believe that international news can be used as a subject to broaden their horizons, but some students believe that this course is a waste of time. Basic on my view, international journalism is a necessary discipline for secondary school students. The advantage of adding international journalism courses greatly improved the quality of education. In many high schools, international events have been widely popularized, for example, many schools have added courses and lectures on international education. For example, economics, business, and social practice. The establishment of these courses has given students a new knowledge and understanding of international news. Therefore, the teaching quality and knowledge level of students are gradually improving. Of course, the downside of international journalism courses is that they can affect students' thinking patterns and even lead to crime. Due to the different laws in each country, students will receive a lot of different legal and criminal information, as their worldview is not yet mature, and their judgment on things is also immature, which may lead to crime. For example, there may be gray trading or political events in the course, and students may not value these erroneous behaviors and may imitate them. Therefore, students will encounter the legal bottom line. In my opinion, the establishment of an international news course has more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, the establishment of the course will arouse the interest of students and facilitate teaching. This is also a way to improve the quality of teaching to some extent. However, during the course, there may inevitably be sensitive topics, and teachers can choose to reduce the frequency of these topics and advocate for students to develop in the right direction without touching the legal red line. Therefore, in the process of learning, students can still maintain physical and mental health. In summary, international courses should be included as a subject in secondary schools, which can greatly enhance students' interest in learning and also enhance international knowledge.

Sample 7:

There are divergent opinions regarding whether secondary school children should dedicate time to studying international news. Proponents argue that exposing students to global affairs fosters critical thinking skills and awareness of the world beyond their immediate surroundings. Conversely, opponents contend that such pursuits detract from more essential subjects and fail to directly contribute to academic success.

Advocates for incorporating international news into the curriculum emphasize its educational benefits. They assert that understanding current events on a global scale cultivates informed citizens who can actively participate in society. For instance, learning about geopolitical conflicts or economic trends provides context for historical events and fosters empathy towards people from diverse backgrounds. This exposure can inspire students to engage with complex issues and develop a broader perspective, essential for navigating an interconnected world.

However, detractors argue that the limited time in school should be dedicated to core subjects that directly impact academic achievement. They posit that while awareness of international events may be beneficial, it is secondary to mastering foundational skills like mathematics and language arts. Moreover, they raise concerns about the potential bias in reporting and the overwhelming nature of global news, which may confuse or distress young learners.

In my view, integrating international news into the curriculum offers significant educational value. Exposure to diverse perspectives and global issues enhances students’ critical thinking skills and fosters a sense of global citizenship. While it may require careful planning to ensure alignment with academic goals, the benefits of cultivating informed and engaged citizens outweigh the perceived drawbacks.

Sample 8:

The debate surrounding whether secondary school students should dedicate part of their curriculum to studying international news is multifaceted and warrants careful consideration. Advocates argue that exposure to global events is crucial for developing well-rounded individuals capable of navigating an increasingly interconnected world. Conversely, opponents suggest that such endeavors detract from core subjects and fail to directly contribute to academic success.

Proponents of integrating international news into the curriculum highlight its role in fostering global awareness and critical thinking skills. They contend that in today’s interconnected world, understanding global events is essential for informed citizenship and effective participation in society. For instance, learning about international conflicts or environmental issues not only broadens students’ perspectives but also cultivates empathy and a sense of responsibility towards global challenges.

However, critics raise valid concerns about the practicality of incorporating international news into an already packed curriculum. They argue that time spent on global affairs could be better allocated to mastering fundamental subjects like mathematics and language arts. Moreover, they caution against the potential bias in news reporting and the overwhelming nature of global events, which may lead to confusion or disengagement among students.

In my opinion, while the inclusion of international news in the curriculum presents challenges, its benefits far outweigh the drawbacks. Exposure to diverse perspectives and global issues enriches students’ educational experiences, equipping them with the skills and knowledge necessary to thrive in an interconnected world. Furthermore, with thoughtful integration and interdisciplinary approaches, studying international news can complement traditional subjects, enhancing students’ critical thinking and analytical skills.

Sample 9:

The discourse surrounding the integration of international news into secondary school curricula reflects a nuanced understanding of the educational landscape. Proponents champion the inclusion of global affairs as a means to foster global citizenship and critical thinking skills among students. Conversely, skeptics argue that such endeavors detract from essential subjects and fail to provide tangible academic benefits. However, a comprehensive analysis suggests that exposure to international news not only enhances students’ understanding of the world but also cultivates empathy and prepares them for active participation in a globalized society.

Advocates of incorporating international news into the curriculum underscore its role in shaping informed and engaged citizens. They assert that exposure to global events nurtures curiosity and encourages students to explore complex issues from multiple perspectives. By analyzing geopolitical conflicts, economic trends, and cultural phenomena, students develop the analytical skills necessary to navigate an increasingly interconnected world. Moreover, understanding global interdependencies fosters empathy and a sense of responsibility towards addressing pressing global challenges, such as climate change and social injustice.

On the contrary, critics caution against the potential pitfalls of dedicating valuable school time to studying international news. They argue that the primary focus should be on core subjects that directly contribute to academic achievement. Furthermore, they raise concerns about the objectivity of news sources and the potential for bias to influence students’ perceptions of global events. Additionally, the sheer volume of information available may overwhelm students, detracting from their ability to engage meaningfully with the material.

In my estimation, the integration of international news into secondary school curricula is imperative in preparing students for the complexities of the modern world. Exposure to diverse perspectives and global issues not only enhances students’ critical thinking skills but also fosters empathy and cultural competency. To mitigate concerns about time allocation and bias, educators can employ interdisciplinary approaches and teach media literacy skills alongside the study of international news. By doing so, schools can empower students to become informed, active participants in shaping the future of our interconnected world.

Sample 10:

The importance of global media appears to increase year after year, so much so there have been calls to introduce news channels into the classroom. I believe this to be politically dangerous and potentially damaging due to the nature of international media.

Firstly, considering the importance education has in a modern society, it is extremely worrying and dangerous to even consider substituting school subjects with international news. This is because the danger lies in choosing a correct, balanced, unbiased and neutral news source, if one even exists.

For example, if a child spent their school days watching FOX NEWS, they would potentially have a skewed opinion of the world due to its unabashed right-wing credentials. Therefore, changing a child's information diet from traditional subjects such as music, PE, or geography to watching a potentially partisan news channel is an extremely worrying and risky idea.

Secondly, if international news were to become a new subject it could have a detrimental emotional impact on young minds. This is because in general the majority of news is of a negative nature, hence the expression, "If it bleeds, it leads".

For example, studies by the EFE News Agency show that 85% of headlines are negative in nature, usually referring to natural disasters, war, famine, etc. The logic of having these types of stories beamed into a school to those of an impressionable age has to be challenged. Thus, the obligation of watching news of a negative nature makes for a convincing argument against such an innovation.

To conclude, due to the risk from political influences and the harsh reality of global news, I am strongly in favor of maintaining the current curriculum.

Sample 11:

Ever since the broadcast of the first international news, it has become an essential element in people's daily life. Therefore, some claim international news should be included in the curriculum of secondary students whereas others oppose this suggestion. Personally, I believe that international news should be taught to secondary students.

There are two supporting arguments to my statement. First of all, acquiring international news helps students to enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons. To be specific, with the development of globalization, the ties between countries have been enhanced leading to a more integrated world where nations depend on each other. Hence, a comprehensive understanding of international affairs provides secondary students with the basic knowledge for exploration of the world. Thus, it is important to these students.

Secondly, equipped with knowledge of international news, secondary students are more likely to find a good job in the future. Under the impact of commercialization and globalization, there are an increasing number of international companies. These firms require their employees to have global visions which can only be achieved through the learning of international news. That is to say, those who studied international news will have more globalized visions making them more competitive in the job market. Therefore, they have a better chance to work in multinational companies.

However, the biggest weakness of this statement is that secondary students may find it very difficult to absorb such news. For instance, some foreign policies such as economic sanction and humanitarian aid may not be familiar to students who are in the second level. In respect of this, the idea of teaching international news is neither attractive nor productive. Nevertheless, if teachers could explain these terminologies to their students with patience and illustration, students would sooner or later understand international news.

In summary, the suggestion of teaching secondary students international news benefits both the educational system as well as the job market. However, substantive patience and demonstration should be involved in the process of teaching so that efficiency could be accomplished.

Sample 12:

The curriculum for secondary education often needs updating to equip students with the skills necessary to adapt to society. While some people propose adding international news as a subject in school, others express the concern about study time allocation.

Advocates for an international news subject may claim that, in today’s global context, international news serves as a gateway for students to develop a globalized vision. By being exposed to events happening in remote areas, they can perceive the differences between their own culture and others, which facilitates global awareness and an open mind. This can be essential for their future interactions with people from foreign backgrounds, whether in a business or daily context. Furthermore, this subject benefits the learning of other subjects such as history, geography, or civics, as well as critical thinking, by encouraging the integration of knowledge from various courses and evaluating news events from different perspectives.

On the other hand, opponents contend that incorporating international news as a subject is not the most efficient use of valuable study time. The primary focus should prioritize core subjects such as mathematics, science and social studies, as they provide the most essential knowledge and skills for students’ academic and professional development. Given the already packed schedules of teenagers, the addition of international news as a subject may impose time constraints and create unnecessary pressure. Furthermore, the limited relevance of news from remote corners of the world to students’ daily life makes it challenging and unmotivating for students to engage in discussions about some current affairs. In light of this, the time would be better spent on content that has a more direct impact on their personal growth.

In my opinion, while valid concerns exist regarding the time allocation for international news subject, I suggest integrating international news within existing subjects to provide students with a global context for the knowledge they acquire. Ultimately, preparing them for the complexities of the modern world necessitates striking a balance between core subjects and the inclusion of international news.

Sample 13:

We can see that globalization has reached its pinnacle in recent years. Thus, staying informed about our immediate surroundings as well as on a worldwide scale has become a must. Many individuals believe that teaching current events to high school students is a waste of time. Nevertheless, another set of people disagrees. Students, in my opinion, should be aware of and understand the significance of current events on the globe in a way that is not damaging to them.

To begin with, studying about foreign affairs in high school will pique kids' curiosity from an early age. Allowing them to determine whether or not they want to pursue a career in this subject. Second, by becoming knowledgeable about the present state of the world, people may be able to make minor efforts to address the problem. For example, because global warming is a major concern. Students may organize awareness campaigns in their schools, families, and communities to encourage people to plant more trees in their neighborhoods. When tutors thoroughly examine and teach the subject and its material. It can have a good impact on the pupils. Many others, on the other hand, oppose the concept of teaching global news in secondary school. Students, they claim, are already overburdened, since modern education is becoming increasingly difficult as a result of the competitive atmosphere. Furthermore, exposing pupils to harsh and cruel news at a young age might have an influence on their thinking and build a bad view of the world. Rather than broadcasting news that is not 100 percent accurate and has negative consequences. Kids should be encouraged to participate in activities that will aid them in their education. Most news networks will broadcast any piece of information for the sake of ratings without considering its impact on society.

To summarize, in today's modern day, technology and social media have largely replaced traditional sources of knowledge. Teachers should educate in such a way that it is both useful and beneficial to pupils.

Sample 14:

Due to advancements in communication technology and the low cost of internet services, the world has become more connected in recent decades. A group of educators has proposed that international news be made a required topic for secondary school pupils. This is a viewpoint I agree with. In this paper, I will emphasize the advantages of incorporating global news in secondary school students' academic curriculum.

To begin with, a daily update on global news keeps the student informed about international sporting events and their outcomes. It has been viewed as a motivating element for youngsters, inspiring them to participate in various sporting events. To elaborate, in India, where academics have long been given top priority in schools, this knowledge would be critical. According to new research performed by one of the world's most prestigious sports institutions. Sports people's difficulties and accomplishments in many disciplines have a longer-lasting beneficial influence on children than on adults. Furthermore, international news of a disaster prepares young brains for any unfavorable circumstances. It also teaches kids to stick together in the face of catastrophe and its consequences. When the Tsunami damaged Japan's ancient sites and contemporary infrastructure. For example, the enormous effort made by the Japanese people to overcome the crisis inspired many young minds to consider disaster mitigation measures.

Finally, providing children with required exposure to current events occurring outside of their nation. Encourages them to engage in constructive debate with their peers and focuses their thoughts on better life and career opportunities.

Sample 15:

Different people have differing perspectives on what subjects should be taught at educational institutions. While some believe that foreign news should be taught as one of the courses in secondary schools, others believe that other disciplines are more important. I am a major supporter of the first notion and have discussed it extensively.

People who oppose the idea of making current events a school subject believe that other subjects. Basic computer skills and teaching students how to speak English are more important. Because they can provide practical knowledge that can help them in the future. By generating better job opportunities and increasing their chances of landing one. Furthermore, they believe that adding a new topic would add to the stress of studying for students. Who already have a large number of subjects to manage. Consider the case of Italy, where the number of students who failed a semester jumped by 20% when a school implemented a new curriculum.

On the contrary, I believe that everyone, even youngsters, should be mindful of their surroundings. As a result, integrating foreign news themes in schools has the potential to make students better informed about global events. This would also prepare them for any unforeseen circumstances. Reading the news, for example, can help prevent the spread of dangerous infections like Covid-19 and prepare you to combat it. This can also help to educate their relatives on how to avoid it. Finally, all of this might lead to the habit of reading the newspaper on a regular basis, which is a healthy habit to develop and enhance one's reading skills.

In conclusion, while some people say that teaching news as a topic in schools is a waste of time since it puts more strain on children's academics, I believe that it is a fantastic concept for the reasons indicated above.

Sample 16:

The importance of global media seems to increase every year, so much so to the point of introducing news channel into the classrooms. I believe this to be dangerous and potentially damaging due to the nature of the media.

Firstly, considering the importance of education in modern society, it is extremely worrisome and dangerous to consider substituting school subjects with international news. This is because there is no correct, balanced, unbiased news source. For example, if a child spent their school days watching FOX NEWS, they would potentially have a skewed opinion of the world due to its unabashed right-wing credentials. Therefore, changing a child’s information diet from traditional subjects such as music or geography to watching a potentially partisan news channel is an extremely risky idea.

Secondly, if international news were to become a new subject it could have a detrimental emotional impact on young minds. In general, the majority of news is negative, hence the expression ‘if it bleeds it leads’. For example, studies by the EFE News Agency show that 85% of headlines are negative in nature, usually referring to natural disasters, war, famine, etc. The logic of having these types of stories beamed into a school, to those of an impressionable age has to be challenged.

Although a majority of people see it as an exposoure to international standards for students, it is going to be nothing but a deterrent in a positive growth.

To conclude, due to the risk from political influences, and the harsh reality of global news, I am strongly in favour of maintaining the current curriculum.

Sample 17:

Because of the IT revolution and the faster means of travel, we do not belong to a big planet ‘Earth’; we belong to a small global village which is very well connected and that is why there is a debate as to whether secondary school students should study international news as a subject. In this essay, I shall discuss both views followed by my opinion.

Admittedly, the youth of today can benefit by studying international news as a subject. This would enrich their experience and broaden their horizons. From the news of any part of the world, students would become aware of the social, political and environmental problems faced by that country. This could motivate them to do something for their country if they are lagging behind or even help other nations by volunteering to help. For instance, when Tsunami struck Japan voluntary workers from all parts of the world reached out to help. Moreover, the significance of opening international news subject is that students can have a general view of the world which could help them decide their career.

On the other hand, as secondary school students face stiff competition nowadays it would be unfair to add the burden of another subject. Moreover, ‘international news’ would have an ever-changing syllabus so would be practically impossible to introduce it as a subject. Finally, in the pluralistic society of today, some news may hurt the sentiments of any particular sect of people and could give rise to conflicts.

In my opinion, international news should not be introduced as a subject. However, steps should be taken by secondary schools to keep students abreast of what is happening in the world by having a short (5-minute) session in the morning assembly in which every day students could speak the headlines. This would keep students up-to-date without having the tension of memorising things

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that international news should not be a subject, but students should be made aware of the international scenario in other informal ways.

Sample 18:

They said that nowadays international news should be a subject that students learn at school, others do not agree and say it would only be a waste of time. Talking about this discussion, it is true that both views have their own advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will give my personal opinion about these two points of view.

First of all, it is understandable that international news does offer a lot of benefits to students. The world we are living in is developing day by day and for sure that knowledge taught at school is not up to date. In this case, teaching international news provides students with the latest information, which helps them to develop their knowledge in a better and faster method. For example, news about Covid-19 helps students know more about how to keep themselves away from this sickness by wearing face masks and washing hands frequently. Besides, some news about global pollution can raise readers' awareness and motivate them to protect the environment.

On the other hand, it should be noted that international news does have its downsides. Fake news can be one of those problems when teachers do not know where their sources come from. Add to that is the fact that most news is not suitable for young minds, they are just not ready for it. Like some news related to war and politics is not ideal lessons for children to learn because it can definitely corrupt innocent minds.

After explaining thoroughly both sides, I personally would choose the agreement to international news as it is becoming more important to be up to date. Meanwhile, I do agree it would be a safer choice when choosing not to include it as the main subject at school.

Sample 19:

Opinions diverge concerning whether international news should be included in the secondary school syllabus or not. Many academics believe that secondary school students ought to study global news as a subject, yet others beg to differ thinking it is a waste of school time. In this case, I subscribe to the view that international news deserves a place in the secondary school curriculum.

Undoubtedly, international news is of necessity for secondary level students. It reminds them of the factors of globalization as well as international developments. In today’s world, national borders are blurred, and nations are closely connected. Anyone that fails to recognize this would deprive themselves of the advantages of globalization. To young adults, studying world news leads them to develop a world vision and global perspective. They can learn how to elicit information from news and utilize it in decision making; for instance, studying abroad, preparing for careers and so forth. Thus, international news is of profound importance as young people are most likely to still enter global competition later in life.

Likewise, the international news about a natural calamity often prepares young minds for unfavourable situations. It also seems like an encouraging factor for adolescents to remain united to triumph over adversity and its impacts. The enormous sacrifices by Nepalese citizens in tackling this crisis have encouraged young people to think about plans to obviate potential disasters because, for instance, the earthquake destroyed Nepal’s historical landmarks and its modern infrastructures. In the same token, when students are informed of global sporting events and regular updates on international news, it encourages them to take part in various sporting competitions.

All things considered, it seems reasonable to conclude that integrating international news into the middle school curriculum is not wasteful of valuable school time because it prepares pupils with the necessary skills to be competitive and inculcates camaraderie among them.

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Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child’s development, while others believe that external factors such as televisions, friends and music play a big role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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While parents obviously play a major role in the way that their child develops as they get older, many people believe that social factors outside of the family now influence children much more. This essay will examine both sides of the argument.

There is no doubt that there are factors external to the family that significantly impact on a child’s development.  For example, there is television and the internet. Children these days have access to these much more than they used to in the past, and they will pick up language and see things that will teach them about life. Friends also have an important influence as a child will often copy peers that they admire and respect. This could be positive behaviour, but it could also be negative, such as smoking or taking drugs.

Ultimately, however, it is family who have the most important impact. Children spend nearly all of their time with their family, especially in their early years. They develop their confidence, socialisation skills, morals, values and views on life through their interaction with them. Proof of the importance of this can be seen in the differences between some children. Those that grow up in a dysfunctional home often eventually have problems themselves, whilst those that are brought up in a warm and close environment end up more confident and secure in adult life.

To conclude, it is the family that can provide a supportive, secure, and nurturing environment, which is crucial to the way in which a child becomes an adult. Although it is clear that social factors play a part, I would argue that it is the former that is the most important.

Sample 2:

The influence of the family on the upbringing of a child is undoubtedly great, although there are supporters that other elements have the greatest influence on a person's upbringing. Among these cases, they mention a child’s friends and social networks. Next, I'll explain why I think the latter is more like my point of view.

First of all, there is a lot of evidence pointing to the significant role that parents play in the future of their sons and daughters. Statistically, not only do they play a significant role in the behavior of their children, but many people show great similarities to the actions of their ancestors. For example, studies have shown higher divorce rates among couples whose parents were separated when they were young. Additionally, offspring of fathers or mothers who were alcoholics are more likely to become addicted during their lifetime.

On the other hand, we would be too ignorant if we did not pay attention to the influence that friends and other environmental factors have on adolescents. For example, we can imagine the kind of language they use after watching soap operas. More specifically, there are many differences between siblings who share the same parents, the same home, and even the same school. Sometimes one of them will be the more introverted, cool nerd, while the other will be an extrovert who aspires to play football or sees his future in fame. All these differences stem from the specific environment in which they are found.

In conclusion, despite the key role that family members play in the behavior of their heirs, we must be so naive if we do not realize the enormous power of students' close friends as well as the broadcast media. However, these two groups of supporters cannot be wrong in many cases. Recent research has shed light on the influence of the environment as well as genes on human actions.

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that advances in artificial intelligence (AI) will bring a range of benefits in the foreseeable future. Others, however, fear that we are not equipped with the skills and experience needed to deal with computers or other technological devices that are becoming smarter than us. I personally agree with the first group.

On the one hand, the main reason why some people think that AI might become a threat to human survival is that intelligent machines may become so smart that they could take control of humans one day in the future. Robots and machines might be able to make their own decisions without being given the permission of humans. Without the necessary knowledge, skills and experience, we might become their slaves. This could also lead to a war between humans and intelligent machines, posing a serious threat to the entire world.

On the other hand, I would agree with those who think that developments in the field of AI will have beneficial effects on our lives in the not-so-distant future. For example, thanks to breakthroughs in satellite and spacecraft technologies, scientists will be able to make more precise predictions about extreme events, such as asteroid collisions or violent storms, which might threaten life on earth. Another example is that advances in automobile technology would help curb traffic congestion and improve road safety. Driverless cars and surveillance cameras would greatly contribute to minimising traffic accidents and traffic offences.

In conclusion, although some people are worried about the threats that AI will cause to the world, I personally believe that developments in this technology will bring huge benefits to our lives.

Sample 2:

People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally, I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.

On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits. Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can, especially in areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. For example, robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than a human doctor, and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves. Such technologies can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors. It is easy to imagine how these developments, and many others, will steadily improve our quality of life.

On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful. In the short term, it is likely that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software programs. For example, self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving jobs, such as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. In the medium term, if intelligent technologies gradually take jobs away from humans, we may find that people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life. A longer-term fear is that computers would become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight and without regard for our well-being.

In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Some people opine that people can do away with traditional libraries because technology has given us the facility of virtual or online libraries. Although technology has reduced our need to go to libraries, traditional libraries can never become redundant and maintaining them is not a waste of money.

On the one hand, it can be a waste of money to keep libraries open. The advent of new technologies like computers and the Internet has transformed traditional libraries from venues containing a large number of printed documents into paperless libraries containing only digitized documents. This has led to the creation of virtual libraries in which the user has access to information at any time and anywhere in the world by using the modern tools of communications, such as computers and Internet facilities. Therefore, it is unnecessary to spend money on traditional libraries because fewer and fewer users use them.

However, libraries still play an important role these days. Firstly, a person goes to a library not only to search and get information from books but also to sit and study there. The peaceful and scholarly ambiance of the library helps one to concentrate more on one's work and study. Secondly, virtual libraries can be accessed only by those who are computer literate. For elderly or disadvantaged individuals who rarely have a chance to be exposed to cutting-edge technologies like computers or smartphones, it is much more challenging to access information online than going to a traditional library.

In conclusion, advancement should be welcomed in every field but the importance of the libraries for their fundamental role cannot be put aside, and funding them is not wasting financial resources.

Sample 2:

It is often argued that maintaining public libraries is no longer necessary in today’s world because the development of computer technology has allowed us to get information on the Internet in a much easier way. While I accept that there are clear benefits of online libraries over public libraries, I believe that it is still worth spending money on maintaining public libraries.

There are two main advantages of online sources of information. Firstly, the storage of information in online sources is much greater in comparison with any traditional libraries. This facilitates the research needs of individuals in different aspects of the information world. Secondly, researchers can easily acquire information on the internet whenever they want without the need to attend the library, like in the past. This is therefore particularly beneficial to those who have a hectic schedule and cannot visit these places during operating hours.

However, the maintenance of local libraries is still necessary because of their distinguishing features which can never be substituted by online sources. Libraries, in some countries, are still one of the most popular means of accessing information among senior citizens, regardless of the availability of online information. In fact, these people are mostly technophobes, or in other words, incapable of using technology, and therefore the physical libraries are their preferred option. Furthermore, public libraries can be considered a more reliable source of information, compared with online sources. Indeed, there is an influx of inaccurate and unreliable information on the Internet, while the sources in libraries are often more carefully categorized and selected by library staff members.

In conclusion, despite the obvious benefits of computer technology in providing information, in my opinion, there are sufficient grounds to reject the view that spending money on maintaining public libraries is unnecessary.

Sample 3:

It is sometimes argued that, with the introduction of computers, the authorities should not waste money on the maintenance of public libraries. While this could be the case for several reasons, my view is that traditional libraries have important functions that computers cannot perform and therefore should be maintained for public access.

To a certain extent, computer technology can render libraries unimportant. Indeed, physical libraries provide readers with paper books or DVDs, for example, in limited numbers at certain times of the day, while an Internet-connected computer can bring even a limitless supply of digital-based information that can be accessed 24/7. There is also less effort involved in searching for digitalised information on a website or an ebook than in a large library. In addition, large sums of money need to be spent on staff members’ salaries or providing up-to-date reading materials which of course take up additional space. In contrast, much lower costs are required to maintain and upgrade e-libraries where huge amounts of data are stored thanks to digital technology.

However, in my view, there are certain roles of traditional libraries that computers cannot take over. Firstly, in a physical library, it is not difficult to find comfortable and quiet spaces to enjoy reading a book. This is highly beneficial, given the increasing number of sources of noise surrounding us these days. Secondly, library users have access to more reliable sources of information. Contrarily, a great deal of online content we have today is not censored, which possibly leads to a misinformed public.

In conclusion, although computers to a certain extent can replace traditional libraries in maintaining a well-informed society, I believe it would be wrong to say keeping libraries open is a waste of money.

Sample 4:

In the twenty-first century, it is becoming less common for people to use libraries, even though in the last century they were incredibly popular throughout the world. Now that the internet can be easily accessed from most phones and computers, some people think that libraries are just a waste of money. This essay will argue that this is not entirely true.

The first reason why libraries are still necessary even in the age of Google is that they provide trustworthy access to reputable sources of information. Sadly, although the internet has democratised information and made it freely available throughout the world, there is still an incredible amount of misinformation and many sources that people trust are in fact very unreliable. Libraries contain many books published by respected authors and reliable editors, meaning that they should be treated with more reverence than a website that pops up on a search engine.

Secondly, even though most of the collected knowledge of humanity can be found on the internet, most people trust what they read on social media. These sorts of posts are inherently unreliable because they are shared only by people of the same political belief, and these groups amplify messages they like rather than what is in fact true. Sadly, that means that the internet is often divided into highly biased sources of information that cannot be entirely trusted. Libraries are less likely to stock such dubious material and can thus be considered better for people looking for real facts.

In conclusion, libraries may seem outdated, but perhaps they are necessary in the modern world because they can provide us with more reliable information than we would normally find online.

Sample 5:

Undoubtedly, the ever-going development of computer technology has benefited us greatly in the field of education. Therefore, there are a handful of people who consider governmental funding in libraries to be a waste. I completely disagree with this point of view, as modern methods of learning or e-books can never replace public libraries.

The foremost reason for this is the accuracy of information. Although technological advancement has paved the way for the increasing amount of knowledge and information updated online, its reliability has been brought into question. It is obvious that there has been little censorship in numerous websites from the Internet, therefore, the accuracy of information cannot be measured or identified. To illustrate, Wikipedia, a popular website providing a lot of academic knowledge,

contains various false facts as its "authors" are allowed to post anything without any supervision.

Investing in libraries should also be seen as a responsibility that belongs to the government. In reality, there are still many places in the world where computers and the Internet are rare or not available. Nevertheless, citizens from those areas still need proper books and materials to serve their education. Without appropriate finance for local libraries, low level of education would likely become common and eventually lead to a series of social issues. Because of this, public libraries seem to be of enormous importance to them.

To conclude, I support the state maintenance of public libraries as this would hold the most vital position in everyone's education for the aforementioned reasons. Even though technology can assist learning to a certain extent, it cannot be compared to the traditional way of reading books among students.

Sample 6:

People are using libraries less frequently in the twenty-first century, despite the fact that they were quite popular in the previous century. Some individuals believe that libraries are a waste of money now that the internet is freely accessible from most phones and laptops. This essay will argue that this isn't completely accurate.

The first reason libraries are still important in the era of Google is that they give secure access to credible information sources. Unfortunately, despite the fact that the internet has democratised knowledge and made it freely available throughout the world, there is still a great deal of disinformation out there, and many people's trusted sources are really quite untrustworthy. Libraries include numerous books written by well-known writers and edited by reputable editors; therefore, they should be viewed with greater respect than a website found using a search engine. Second, despite the fact that the internet contains the vast majority of humanity's collective information, most individuals believe what they read on social media.

These kinds of posts are inherently untrustworthy since they are only shared by individuals who have the same political beliefs, and these groups magnify ideas that they enjoy rather than what is real. Regrettably, this implies that the internet is frequently divided into extremely biassed information sources that cannot be completely trusted. Libraries are less likely to have such questionable materials on hand, making them a better option for those seeking the truth. Finally, while libraries may appear to be obsolete, they may be important in today's society since they may supply us with more trustworthy information than we can get online.

Sample 7:

Libraries play an important part in the growth of any civilization in the modern day by giving knowledge. The vast majority of individuals believe that governments should not invest money in libraries since computers have mostly replaced libraries. I mostly disagree with this remark because I believe that the general public has its own value.

To begin with, libraries are the greatest place to go for information. First and foremost. Libraries provide a vast selection of books in any language, making them useful for obtaining any sort of knowledge. Nowadays, everyone enjoys going to the library since it has a wide variety of books that are not available online.

Furthermore, the library is a relaxing and peaceful environment. A person can completely concentrate on studying due to a good and comfortable atmosphere, and it also provides books for rent so that the people may profit from reading books. As a result, the person saves money because the books are given at a low cost. Further, sustaining public libraries is not a waste of money because they provide global knowledge and are helpful to individuals who do not have access to a computer or the internet at home. People who are in financial trouble, for example, can simply rent books. Computers, on the other hand, have their own set of advantages. To begin with, thousands of data can be readily saved on a computer, saving both time and space. Apart from that, computer systems are highly beneficial to the elderly, as many elderly people avoid going to the library owing to health concerns. In summary, I believe that public libraries are vital for people, and that computer systems cannot replace them since libraries offer their own set of benefits that cannot be overlooked.

Sample 8:

In today's culture, there are many different schools of thought on whether spending on public library maintenance is no longer essential because advanced technology can do the same job. In my opinion, there are several reasons why I am opposed to such a concept.

First and foremost, papers in state-run libraries allow users to access reliable knowledge that cannot be found on the internet. This is due to publishers' efforts to safeguard their reputation by giving filtered, sorted, and up-to-date material that is extremely useful for academic study. In contrast, the quality of internet content that we might discover is not guaranteed; as a result, individuals may be exposed to exaggerated or false information, resulting in unanticipated conflicts or serious repercussions. There are various forums, for example, where people discuss medication therapy. Users, on the other hand, are not held accountable for what they say; instead, they provide incorrect or even false information, creating serious health concerns for those who receive it. Furthermore, libraries provide a conducive setting for working or learning. By spending a significant sum of money in public reading rooms, they are transformed into fantastic spaces with enough infrastructure for individuals to do their jobs.

This is especially useful for residents who have to live in hot, cramped quarters that make it difficult to do their jobs. In addition, the calm atmosphere in libraries can help us concentrate better and encourage creativity, which could lead to increased overall performance. Users of online platforms, on the other hand, are frequently distracted by notifications from social media and other apps, resulting in decreased productivity. In conclusion, while cutting-edge technology has numerous advantages, the public has its own qualities. The development of both is critical for governments.

Sample 9:

It is widely thought that money allocated to supporting library services should be better spent as various technological devices can be an alternative to traditional libraries. I tend to agree with this idea as public libraries are less attractive in the eyes of the public and more subsidies should be given to digital books.

To begin with, an increasingly large number of book lovers are now finding themselves reliant on computer technology for reading. This can be evidenced by the fact that sales of e-readers such as Kindles, and reading applications on mobile phones and computers, are surging all over the world. Moreover, people who are too occupied with their work as well as household responsibilities are turning to audiobooks as a convenient substitute since this innovation allows them to multitask and use their time more effectively. As a result, public libraries are sparsely attended although the membership fees are usually negligible.

Instead of wasting money on an obsolete service, public funds could be of more use when spent on measures to promote digital books. Library running expenses, which sometimes include exorbitant costs to preserve hard copies, should be used to scan books and make them available to the mass population of internet users. In this way, reading would definitely be better promoted, and more people would be motivated to look for books to expand their knowledge.

In conclusion, taxpayers’ money should not be spent on maintaining public libraries as computer technology can perfectly replace traditional ‘brick and mortar’ locations. Instead, innovative technologies, such as e-book readers or audiobooks should be more widely encouraged. In this way public libraries could become smaller and merely offer free access to computers to facilitate online reading for those without modern technology. 

Sample 10:

For centuries libraries have been in the service of man. These libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge known as books. Some people opine that we can do away with traditional libraries because technology has given us the facility of virtual or online libraries. I, however, believe that even though technology has reduced our need to go to libraries, our traditional libraries can never become redundant.

With the advent of new technologies in the field of computers and telecommunications, revolutionary changes have taken place in the field of Library and Information Science. The shape of traditional libraries containing a large number of printed documents is in the process of being transformed to paper less libraries containing a large number of digitized documents. The facilities offered by networking have not left libraries untouched. Modern libraries are not only digitized but networked also. This has led to the creation of virtual libraries, i.e. libraries without walls through which the user has access to information at any time, anywhere in the world by using modern tools of communication, such as computers and Internet facilities.

However, one should keep in mind that a person goes to a library not only to search for and get information from books but also to sit and study there. The ambience and the peaceful and scholarly atmosphere of the library help one to concentrate more on one’s work and study. Thus, libraries will never become redundant. They will always be there to indicate the presence of a well-read and educated society.

Another important point is that it is very difficult to always read books from the computer monitor. Traditional books can be issued from the library and read in the comfort of your bed. Virtual libraries can be accessed only by those who are computer literate. The access to virtual libraries can be affected by power cuts and network failures. Moreover, in a traditional library, you are guided by the librarians if you need any help in searching for the book.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that advancement should be welcomed in every field but the importance of the libraries for their fundamental role cannot be put aside. This tendency will add more crowns of success to the importance of libraries.

Sample 11:

Today, computer technology is becoming more and more advanced. Therefore, many people think that it is wasteful to spend money on maintaining public libraries. However, I firmly believe that libraries can never be replaced by any other means of information provision.

On the one hand, the development of computer science has brought about a lot of benefits to our lives. Anyone can obtain and store a great amount of information online easily instead of going to public libraries to search for them. People can also read books on the move with their portable devices such as iPhones, iPads, and so on. Furthermore, people do not have to repeatedly keep in mind the deadlines to return the borrowed books.

On the other hand, public libraries still have many advantages over the Internet. First, a library always plays an important role as a reliable learning resource. Individuals could get access to sufficient data for their studies when they use public libraries. Second, individuals have more chances to make new friends and exchange learning experiences when studying in a library. This opportunity can rarely be found in studying in front of a computer. Compared with only studying via the Internet, students can study in a quieter and more professional environment for academic purposes, such as doing research or graduate theses.

In conclusion, I believe that both public libraries and computer technology are necessary for people to enrich their knowledge. Therefore, public libraries will not disappear or be replaced by computer science in the future for their unique features and benefits.

Sample 12:

When it comes to the issue about whether public libraries deserve to be kept, some people may argue that public libraries should exist since virtual books cannot replace them, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, public libraries may create a better atmosphere of study for individuals than computers do. For people who are not well-motivated and self-disciplined, studying on the Internet may be easily interrupted since there exists more attractive information online, such as scandal and gossip of celebrities. However, when individuals are surrounded with learners who concentrate on their study, they may be also engaged in study better since no one laughs or shout loudly in the library usually. Nevertheless, modern technology actually makes traditional libraries obsolete to some degree.

To begin with, computer technology allows users to find what they need more efficiently. In the past, learners have to spend some time arriving at libraries and they still needed some time to pick up the very books they were looking for. However, current technology transforms books into virtual ones and clients can find the specific books after entering some key words in a search engine. Thus, compared to orthodox libraries, the Internet actually serves to save more time for learners.

In addition, by cancelling public libraries, governments could save more money. Running a public library is actually costly since governments need to recruit a lot of employees to guarantee the daily operation. On the contrary, if public libraries are substituted by virtual libraries and database, only a smaller number of employees need to be kept to maintain those electronic devices and the site of public libraries could also be utilized for other purposes, such as establishing shopping malls. Therefore, such economic factors also explain why public libraries do not need to be preserved.

In sum, it is costly to run public libraries, and modern technology may function better, considering that searching information on the Internet is faster and running public libraries is expensive.

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Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The idea of creating a new language for international communication has been proposed as a solution to overcome language barriers and facilitate global understanding. This essay will discuss the potential benefits and demerits of inventing a new global language and argue that the advantages of such a language would outweigh the problems associated with its implementation. 

There are some challenges and drawbacks associated with inventing a new language for international communication. One major concern is the preservation of cultural diversity and the potential loss of linguistic heritage. Language is deeply intertwined with culture, history, and identity. Introducing a new language may lead to the erosion of traditional languages and cultural practices, as people shift their focus to the new universal language. This could result in the loss of valuable cultural diversity and the richness of linguistic traditions that have evolved over centuries. 

Despite the drawbacks, there are substantial advantages associated with it. One significant advantage of a new language for international communication is improved global understanding and cooperation. Currently, language barriers hinder effective communication between individuals from different linguistic backgrounds, leading to misunderstandings and limited exchange of ideas. With a new language specifically designed for international communication, people from diverse cultures and countries would be able to engage in direct and meaningful conversations. This would promote mutual understanding, foster cultural appreciation, and facilitate cooperation in various domains, such as trade, diplomacy, and academic collaboration. For instance, the adoption of Esperanto as an international auxiliary language has demonstrated the potential for enhanced communication and cultural exchange among people from different linguistic backgrounds.

In conclusion, while challenges such as language preservation and cultural diversity should be addressed effectively, I believe that improved global understanding, enhanced cultural exchange, and streamlined international relations are some of the advantages that can be achieved through a common global language. Therefore, the benefits of inventing a new language for international communication outweigh the potential problems associated with its implementation.

Sample 2:

Today, English is regarded as an international language to communicate between different nationalities all around the world. However, some people insist that a new international language should be introduced to enhance more effective interaction and communication among people. I believe that it is a great idea to bring the world on one platform and this action will have more advantages than disadvantages.

To commence with the demerits of it - if the world has a single dominant language, it may affect negatively the cultural identity of some countries. Many languages will go instinct as everyone will be eager to learn a new international language to cope with the pace of life. Regardless of their mother language, the new language will become their priority to have higher education and better jobs. In addition, this would also increase the expenditure of the state as creating, publishing and teaching this new language will require extra funds from the government.

On the other hand, there are some concrete advantages of it. Trading among countries will be easier without a language barrier, which will increase the economic progress of all nations. Also, this process will make it convenient for every individual to travel around the world without any communication barrier, and due to this new international language, individuals will have equal opportunities in job sectors, which will provide higher standards of living and result in increased paid taxes. Finally, it is not that easy for non-native people to learn English perfectly as it requires time and experience. The accent is another problem for people in non-English-speaking countries. If a new international language is introduced, the accent would no longer be a problem for many people.

In conclusion, introducing a new global language will eliminate communication barriers, and allow people to have equal job opportunities. This will offer substantial benefits that would outweigh the demerits associated with a new global language. 

Sample 3:

There have recently been proposals to have an international language as a means of communication. In my opinion, such an endeavour is both impractical and undesirable, and in this essay, I hope to explain why the potential drawbacks overshadow the advantages.

There are those who believe that an international language would help to foster cross national interactions and remove barriers to economic development. By developing a common system of communication, people from different countries can better explain the culture and history of where they came from. Furthermore, by having a common language, immigration would also be easier, since there would be less difficulty in trying to integrate into a new culture. As a result, economic output might increase, as immigrants bring new talent to areas that require them. Overall, this argument suggests that a global language will mean a more unified humanity.  

On the other hand, I argue that an international language is impractical since languages develop organically in interaction with a country’s culture and history. Thus, some words that are exclusive to certain languages would not make sense when translated into a universal system. As such, if an international language were to form, it would likely be the case that it would sooner or later fragment into dialects specific to specific regions of the world, and in the end evolve into new languages anyway. Lastly, since language is a cultural artefact, attempts at replacing all the languages in the world with one common one results in people’s past stories being erased. Instead of unification, I believe that a global language would lead to less cultural diversity.

Overall, I argue that while an international language might be attractive in theory, in practice, it is not practical due to the culturally specific characteristics of language, as well as the importance of language to the history of nations.

Sample 4:

There have been recent calls for the implementation of a novel language to facilitate global communication. In my opinion, though this would make for a more level playing field economically, it is impractical.

Those who support an international language rely on its economic advantages. The salient argument is that it would remove barriers to success currently in place. English is close to a universal language at the moment and those born in English-speaking countries have a clear headstart while those from non-English countries, who cannot afford private instruction, begin life at a disadvantage. A new language would reset these disparities. An added advantage of minimising the value of English would be that developing countries could integrate more deeply with the global market and be better able to extend services, entertainment and products to a wider audience.

However, the disadvantages of this proposal all relate to its feasibility. In an ideal world, we would have a global language but for the time and money required. The best evidence of this is the progress of the world’s current dominant language, English. Countries all around the world pour money and time into funding English education but the majority of the world still cannot attain mastery. A new language would be even more difficult not only because everyone in the world would have to learn it but also because there would be little incentive if you can already communicate with your compatriots and English allows you to talk to a large segment of the world population. The money and time resources required are staggering, unrealistic, and would be detrimental to both individuals and society.

In conclusion, the drawbacks to an international language far outweigh any perceived gains. Instead, countries should continue to fund English education in the hopes of establishing it as a lingua franca.

Sample 5:

There are so many languages around the world, thereby discouraging people from different regions or cultures from communicating with each other. To overcome this obstacle, some people propose inventing a new language that will be used as an “international language” among people from different areas. Although this proposal seems reasonable, I personally see more disadvantages than advantages of

inventing a new language.

First of all, a new language would not be accepted by many people because it would be artificial and not based on any culture. In addition, people would have to spend time to learn the grammar and the words of the new language.

Secondly, promoting a new language requires financial support and a lot of time. For instance, in some countries such as China and India, there are many languages because it is financially unrealistic to teach everyone in poor areas one language. Although this might finally be achieved, it will take as long as a hundred years or more.

Another reason against having a new language is that it is bound to be divided into dialects, so the whole purpose of having one language would be lost. For instance, in Punjab, a small state of India, the mother tongue, Punjabi, has two dialects that are quite different. So, it would be unrealistic to expect one language without different dialects in the whole world.

Finally, we all know that variety is the spice of life, and language is related to culture. So, if we had one language spoken in the world, it would be a dreary and dismal place to live.

To sum up, although there would be benefits such as easy trade and travel, inventing a new language for international communication is not a good idea because of the various reasons given above. In my opinion, inventing a new language is a waste of time and money because its advantages cannot outweigh its disadvantages.

Sample 6:

The idea of introducing a new international language for communication across countries has emerged for a long time. This will bring both problems and benefits. However, I believe that the benefits it may bring will far outweigh the problems.

The proposal raises concerns and has demerits. Language is deeply intertwined with cultural identity, and the imposition of a new global language might be perceived as a threat to linguistic diversity and heritage. Countries may resist relinquishing their native languages, viewing them as integral to their cultural identity. Moreover, the process of implementing a new language on a global scale would be a colossal undertaking, requiring extensive resources and infrastructure, and might encounter resistance from nations reluctant to adopt such changes.

On the contrary, one significant benefit of introducing a new international language is that it would promote better communication and understanding among people of different cultures and countries. For instance, with a common language, people could communicate more effectively without the need for translators, which would be beneficial for businesses, international relations, and even tourism. Additionally, the new language would help individuals learn about different cultures and expand their knowledge, which is crucial in today's interconnected world. Furthermore, introducing a new language for international communication would also provide economic benefits. When people can communicate with ease, businesses can expand globally, leading to increased economic growth and job opportunities. It can also enhance international trade as businesses would be able to communicate and negotiate more efficiently, reducing the cost of transactions and the time needed to reach agreements.

In conclusion, introducing a new international language would undoubtedly bring many advantages, including better communication, improved global economic growth, and increased understanding of different cultures. Although there may be some troubles associated with adopting a new language, the benefits it would provide would far outweigh its difficulties.

Sample 7:

The proposal to introduce a new international language for all countries has surfaced for quite a long time. No doubt, it will bring both advantages and disadvantages, and this essay will deal with both. Personally, I think that the disadvantages of it will outweigh the potential benefits.

One of the primary benefits of introducing a new international language is the potential to enhance global communication and understanding. A standardized language across countries could facilitate seamless interaction in various domains, including diplomacy, trade, and cultural exchange. This linguistic uniformity may reduce language barriers, fostering greater cooperation and collaboration on a global scale. Additionally, it could simplify education and travel, making information and experiences more accessible to individuals from diverse linguistic backgrounds.

On the contrary, one of the main disadvantages of introducing a new language is the cost associated with it. The process of introducing and teaching a new language on a global scale would be an enormous undertaking, requiring significant investment and resources. It would require the development of new textbooks, hiring qualified teachers, and training current educators, among other expenses. This would be a massive financial burden for many countries, especially those with limited resources.

Another potential issue is the impact on cultural diversity. Language is a fundamental aspect of culture, and the introduction of a new language could potentially erode the unique cultural identities of many countries. It may also lead to a loss of traditional languages, which are already at risk of dying out due to globalisation and the widespread use of dominant languages like English.

In conclusion, while the idea of a new international language for all countries may seem appealing in theory, the practical implications suggest that the potential problems outweigh the benefits. Instead, we should continue to work towards promoting multilingualism and language education, which can foster greater cultural understanding and effective communication across borders.

Sample 8:

That the globalisation is gaining increasing momentum starts to exert a subtle impact on the world languages. Evidently, the growing transnational business communication and cultural exchange demands a new language to be created. Though efforts to promote an international language had been severely thwarted previously – in the case of Esperanto, the emergence of a new language for global communication is still staunchly supported by the majority.

Linguistic scientists and experts have already publicly conceded the seemingly insurmountable obstacles in either human or machine translation. This could largely be attributed to the intrinsic cultural aspects rooted in each language, which are, more often than not, “conveniently” overlooked or neglected in the translation process, frequently amounting to eventual communication breakdown. Besides, the tones and stresses with which sentences are expressed are crucial verbal elements in delivery of meanings intended by the speaker as well. Sometimes, a particular sentence could be interpreted in different ways if the elements constituting the speech are varied even slightly. Therefore, we could tentatively conclude that translation from one language to another might not appear to be the best solution to resolve the problems arising from international communication.

A new language designed to fulftl similar purposes is required. Some professionals are looking for alternative solutions and set their sight on English. Unsurprisingly, English has risen to predominance and been widely accepted by the general population as the main language medium for occasions like business conference, chatting, owing much to the unsuccessful endeavour to popularise Esperanto. However, one of the direct ethical issues that need to be addressed would have been the elimination of a plethora of minority languages, as people from around the globe rushed to pick up a foreign language. In addition, the job of translators and interpreters would also be much simplified as the availability of a new international language could save the troubles of learning many different languages.

Despite the challenges involved in learning an entirely novel language, it is absolutely a viable and effective approach in modern communication in the long run. What is in store for us in the near future, if universal acceptance of a standard language could be achieved, would be a world of seamless communication transcending barriers of all sorts.

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Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.

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Sample 1:

Nowadays, people have the tendency to migrate to cosmopolitan cities. While this has caused several problems for young people, namely a lack of housing and high cost of living, I believe that there are a number of feasible solutions to these issues.

To begin with, the rapid population growth in major cities has led to two serious problems for youngsters. First, the young populace has to face a housing crisis. The speed at which people migrate is faster than the speed at which cities can build infrastructure. Therefore, once the number of dwellers rises exponentially, housing is bound to run out, causing many to resort to areas with lower living standards. Take Hong Kong for example, due to a lack of land, house prices in Hong Kong can reach almost 2,000 US dollars per square foot. This has driven many people to move into flats which can fit only one bed. Another issue is that the cost of living in these cosmopolitan cities tend to be more costly as compared to rural areas. For example, in America, the living cost in Atlanta is only half of that in New York.

Problematic as it is, I believe that there are two possible solutions to the above-mentioned issues. First of all, the government should relocate businesses to the city outskirts and other provinces. By doing this, more land area can be liberated for housing purposes. Moreover, as job opportunities are spread evenly throughout the country, a city would not have to face a surge of migrants. Secondly, a price stabilization policy should be implemented for basic necessities. This is to ensure that private businesses have to operate according to the fixed price bracket of the law, thus guaranteeing that city dwellers will always have access to food, water and electricity, and gasoline at a reasonable price.

To sum up, the trend of migration to major cities has two setbacks for young people, which are the lack of housing and high living cost. Nevertheless, relocation of businesses and price stabilization for basic necessities can help tackle these problems.

Sample 2:

There are more metropolitan areas in the world. This tendency leads to serious issues for young dwellers in such areas relating to lower living standards and the higher unemployment rate. However, these problems can be solved by providing financial aid and job opportunities.

There are two main obstacles for young people resulting from the proliferation of urban areas. The main one is that they may suffer from a decreasing quality of living. More specifically, due to high living expenses in big cities, the youths cannot afford medical fees as well as a house to live in. Therefore, they would likely reside in small houses with poor living conditions or not receive proper medical treatment, thus leading to their low life satisfaction. Additionally, a higher youth unemployment rate is attributed to the growth of large cities. This is because the youths have to face intense competitiveness in the job market as such areas often attract numerous young people to come and seek employment. Consequently, many of them who are not experienced easily become jobless.

However, these aforementioned problems can be tackled by two measures. First and foremost, the government should financially support young people who fall below the poverty line in big cities. To be more specific, they should be given monetary assistance to cover their living costs for a certain period of time until their lives stabilize. As a result, they can be encouraged to overcome difficulties while building their career. Second, more chances for employment should be promoted in rural areas. This can be implemented if the state allocates more funding for the construction of new companies or factories in the countryside to create many jobs for local inhabitants, discouraging them from moving to bigger cities. Thus, the job competition in urban areas would decrease.

In conclusion, although the increase in big cities poses a threat to young people’s quality of life and job prospects, the provision of financial support and chances to work in rural areas are potential solutions to these issues. It is advisable that the government should take care of the young in urban areas by implementing effective policies.

Sample 3:

Big cities around the world are facing many problems these days due to their rapid expansion. The following essay will discuss some of the problems that young people in those cities are facing and some potential solutions to those issues.

Firstly, big cities are becoming more and more expensive to live in, and most young people are struggling to cope with the rising cost of living. Many young people are students living on meagre budgets, or recent graduates with low-paying jobs, and cannot afford the high costs of housing, transport, and food in big cities. To counter this problem, I believe that governments should move universities out of large cities into smaller cities where the cost of living is much more affordable. This will also help to reduce the demand for housing in large cities and therefore make it more affordable for recent graduates and others struggling to get by on a low salary.

Poor mental health is another big issue that many young people are dealing with in large cities these days. Students need to cope with overwhelming study schedules, whilst recent graduates struggle to compete with one another to climb the career ladder and become financially stable in order to start a family. These situations create a lot of stress for young people and can lead to serious mental health problems if left unresolved. To help deal with these issues, governments need to help promote a culture where young people regularly take part in stress-relieving activities and create an awareness of mental health issues amongst young people before they develop serious problems such as anxiety, depression, or suicidal tendencies.

In conclusion, young people are facing many problems whilst trying to live in large cities, and there are several feasible solutions mentioned above to help curb these issues.

Sample 4:

Urbanization has been a major trend in the world for the past few decades, with cities expanding in both scale and complexity. This has led to a variety of problems for young people living in these areas; fortunately, potential solutions to these issues exist.

Young city dwellers are under pressure from multiple fronts. One of the major problems they encounter is economic insecurity, as the cost of living in cities can be staggering. Modern metropolitan cities, such as Tokyo, Singapore, and London, for example, are frequently among the world’s most expensive places. Any young person not well-off would very likely struggle to make ends meet there; should they stay, they might have to settle for inadequate living conditions. Another possible issue is stress, as cities are known for being hyper-competitive environments. Being economic hubs, urban areas attract a significant number of people who seek employment and opportunities, creating a contest not for the faint-hearted.

There are certain measures for young people to either overcome or at least sidestep these difficulties. While economic uncertainty is undoubtedly severe, it can be dealt with by frugality in order to increase savings. Financial benefits can accrue thanks to thriftiness over time; in fact, moving to typically inexpensive areas like the city outskirts is also a form of frugal living, as it can reduce housing expenses significantly. Meanwhile, in order to address stress in life and at work, it is sometimes necessary for the youth to manage their expectations. If the pressure of city life keeps mounting, re-evaluating one’s priorities and ambitions, or switching to a less stressful occupation can help. Being rid of stress is the precursor to clarity of thought and the ability to solve other problems. These solutions, in my opinion, can be more sustainable and beneficial for oneself than relying on external help.

In conclusion, while young urban residents encounter various issues from their place of living, there is actually no shortage of measures to make their life less of a headache. Solid financial management and realistic expectations, for instance, are the key to resolving their hardship.

Sample 5:

With technological advancement and urbanization-oriented policies of many authorities, metropolises around the world are developing at a brisk pace, but so are their accompanying issues, predominantly poor housing and pollution. There are ways to control these perennial problems, but they require major changes.

The first agonizing issue arising from fast growing municipalities is the skyrocketed price of housing. The more developed a city, the more people would want to reside in, and the surge in urban demographics is unavoidable. That means demand for accommodation would rise dramatically, hence price gouging. There have been many articles and reports pointing out that real estate and housing prices have increased much more than average wage, so many urban workers can almost never afford a house in the city with their wages as the only income. Additionally, the influx of dwellers means urban areas are susceptible to pollution from industries and vehicles. In many countries in the world, the amount of municipal waste or toxins in the air or water of urban cities is alarmingly high.

The aforementioned issues can be significantly diminished, if the local and federal governments implement a proper plan of action. The first thing that can be done is relocating the industrial parks and big corporations to the outskirts of the city, along with building more residential areas and recreational facilities near those locations. This would gradually shift the population to surrounding areas, reduce housing demand in cities and eventually lower accommodation prices. This move would also mitigate traffic density and municipal waste, hence less pollution sources. Moreover, municipal authorities can impose stricter environmental laws, for instance heavy fines for littering or setting distance limits for each vehicle.

In conclusion, even though the development of big cities is good for the economy, it could cause dire issues if the pace is not controlled well. Developing cities and limiting overcrowding at the same time should be the strategy for city planners and governments to ensure enhanced living conditions for all citizens.

Sample 6:

Increased industrialization has led to the proliferation of young people moving from the countryside to cities. However, the growth of cities has created many social problems. In this essay, I will highlight some of these problems as well as ways to combat them.

The increasing rates of suicide and homelessness could be the main problems of social rapid development. It is true that higher rates of suicide have gone hand in hand with the rise of cities. This is because of the extreme amount of stress originating in harsh competition in working environments that exists within cities. Another common issue with cities is homelessness. The more people move to the cities, the more unaffordable prices of houses in the central area become. This leads to a high concentration of the homeless within cities such as London or New York. Also, as automation increases within cities, it is likely that there will be a higher rate of unemployment. Hence, the problem of homelessness will likely persist.

Possible solutions to solving these problems may include the provision of access to more mental health services and the relocation of industrial zones to the suburbs. Chief among these is that more funds should be allocated to the healthcare system or passing legislation that would make it mandatory for companies and schools to provide assistance to those with psychological problems. Regarding the latter solutions, urgent actions should be taken to move major industries to the outskirts, which consequently prevents people from migrating to cities and hence lowers the homelessness rate in metropolises.

In conclusion, there have been many problems that have been associated with the rise of cities, such as higher suicide rates and homelessness. Nonetheless, there are steps that can be taken to help remedy these issues.

Sample 7:

There is no doubt that cosmopolitan cities are facing different issues. Poor housing and pollution are the most dangerous; however, these can be effectively controlled by setting up a planned city outside the centre of the town.

On the one hand, firstly, when a large number of people migrate to an urban area, this would cause scarcity of proper houses. In other words, the city dwellers may be forced to live in a cramped space, where they could not have safe water and sanitation facilities. Additionally, the influx of dwellers means the urbanised place is vulnerable to pollution from industries and vehicles. For example, in Mumbai, where, a slum called Dharavi, millions of migrant workers live in pathetic situations, which is often seen as an epicentre of many diseases since most of the inhabitants are living without having basic requirements and this region is highly contaminated as well.

Nevertheless, on the other hand, the above-mentioned problems are significantly diminished, if the government of town makes a proper plan of action to counteract the difficulties. The first and foremost thing is to relocate the industries and multi-national companies to the outskirts of the city. By doing this, gradually and slowly the crow moves to the new location, eventually, vehicles can be reduced. Moreover, for instance, the authorities can impose stricter punishment on traffic offenders along with no traffic zones and encourage public transportation to limit pollution to a great extent in these types of busy parts of the world.

In conclusion, even though due to the high volume of inhabitants in cities can lead to a lack of housing and increase contamination, this may be resolved by reducing the overcrowding of people and vehicles on the road. It is recommended that every township is needed to plan in order to meet future needs and pollution.

Sample 8:

In the modern era, the development of the world becomes more sophisticated and gives a great impact to the vast majority of cities. However, the effects of people living in the city are being concerned with many people, which the details of its issues will be investigated here as well as the rational ideas to overcome it.

There are several impacts of staying in the city central to human life. First and foremost, the crowding of people would lead to overpopulation in the city, which creates an unsafe environment, since the area is filled with unknown people. By looking at this condition, it could increase the number of crimes that markedly dangerous for most individuals to live there. Furthermore, it is also affecting traffic congestion that distracts the running activities of society, and another thing such as pollution could pollute the fresh and clear air. Thus, this will be a serious problem, if it relates to the healthy environment for the inhabitants.

To tackle these issues, the right solutions should come from the wise policy from the government. Firstly, the policy maker has to decide a basic regulation of their society, that is about making a tight decision for newcomers to get permission for living there. As a result, it will automatically reduce the percentage of vehicle users that cause air contamination. The head of the region could also provide comfortable public transportation to avoid them from using private cars, for instance. Moreover, the standards of safety should be improved around the living complex or public area. The strict guard from the security department will be effective to secure the big city from criminal actions.

By way of conclusion, although the major cities provide most benefits, there is something that needs to be careful since the beneficial things are not always rendering nice things. As long as the government is able to take care of these related issues with its wise policy, the dense population, traffic congestion, great pollution and crime will be reduced.

Sample 9:

In the expectation of a better future, a rising number of individuals are migrating to metropolitan cities, alongside a host of problems. This essay would attempt to look at some of the issues that come with living in a city, as well as some of the steps that governments may take to enhance the quality of life for all city dwellers.

Traffic congestion is one of the most serious issues that city people face. Increased wasted travel time causes not only stress and exhaustion, but also affects job performance and satisfaction. On their route to and from work, city commuters frequently spend a large portion of time stuck in traffic. Another disadvantage of living in a big city is the poor air quality that has resulted from the huge increase in hazardous emissions from power plants and industrial sites in recent years. Communities with severe air pollution have an increased risk of lung cancer, asthma attacks, and other respiratory ailments.

There are several options that city authorities should use to address the issues listed above. To begin, public transportation should then be improved to make it more appealing to the general population. Since more individuals choose to take buses or commuter trains instead of driving their own cars, the traffic problem would be effectively solved. To dissuade cars from traveling during rush hours, the government may propose collecting peak-hour tolls. On top of that, stronger restrictions should be enforced to limit harmful gas emissions and encourage the use of more ecologically friendly energy sources in order to enhance air quality in metropolitan areas.

In conclusion, different measures might be adopted to alleviate traffic congestion and air pollution, which are the two major issues that face metropolitan living.

Sample 10:

The exponential rise of metropolis with their ever-expending population and industries is putting young residents into a challenging situation. This age group is struggling with stable source of income and sky-high accommodation cost simultaneously. However, finding alternative sources of work and resorting to public subsidization policy could address these issues effectively.

For many young people, the main problem of living in large cities is the pressure to obtain a job. The fast-growing economic development of major cities and the higher wages in urban areas attract many workers from different parts of a country. As a result of this, the job market has become highly competitive and young adults are confronting extreme adversities to secure good-paying employment. Moreover, the pressure of finding a job may cause detriments to the mental health of young workers such as depression, anxiety and stress. Another problem is that the growth of major metropolises might lead to a dramatic increase in housing prices. For many young employees with an average level of monthly salary, it is a great challenge for them to have enough savings to purchase a property in a city. Considering this sky-high housing cost, the young generation is opting to borrow from banks instead of saving money. However, the fluctuation in borrowing rates and the down payment of a house may cause a perennial financial burden for the young city dwellers.

When it comes to eradicating the problems described above, both individuals and governments have roles to play. Instead of competing for a job in the city, young adults could choose a different place to develop their career where there are inexpensive living costs and lower competition. Small cities, the countryside and foreign countries, for example, are potential places for youngsters to find work and grow. Another measure is that the government could provide incentives for young people if they decide to purchase their first home. For instance, land tax reduction and subsidized home loans provided by the government could ease the financial burden that many young home buyers are bearing.

To conclude, living in major cities may cause financial strains and housing problems for the young dwellers. However, finding work life beyond the urban zone and availing governmental support for housing finance could manage this scenario effectively.

Sample 11:

As major cities around the world are growing, they usher in a blend of opportunities and challenges, particularly for the youth who call these bustling metropolises home. This expansion, while indicative of economic progress, concurrently cultivates a suite of problems for young urban dwellers. The crux of this essay revolves around identifying these issues and proposing viable solutions to mitigate their impact. Specifically, we will delve into the realms of housing affordability and employment competitiveness, two paramount concerns for the younger generation.

The first and foremost issue stems from the soaring costs of living, with housing affordability at its core. As cities expand and their populations swell, the demand for housing skyrockets, pushing rental and purchase prices beyond the reach of many young people. This financial strain not only hampers their ability to secure stable accommodation but also impacts their overall quality of life. A potential solution lies in the implementation of more aggressive urban housing policies, such as the development of affordable housing units and the regulation of rental markets to prevent excessive price hikes. Furthermore, incentivizing the construction of mixed-use developments can create more inclusive communities and alleviate the burden on young urbanites.

Employment competitiveness represents another significant challenge. The concentration of job opportunities in cities leads to an influx of candidates, making the job market exceedingly competitive. This situation is exacerbated for young people, who may lack the experience or qualifications demanded by employers. To bridge this gap, educational institutions and government bodies should collaborate to offer vocational training and internship programs tailored to the needs of the market. By equipping young individuals with relevant skills and practical experience, we can enhance their employability and ensure a smoother transition into the workforce.

In conclusion, while the growth of major cities around the world brings about a myriad of problems for young residents, it also presents us with an opportunity to rethink and remodel urban living. By addressing the critical issues of housing affordability and employment competitiveness through comprehensive policies and programs, we can foster a more equitable and thriving urban environment for the youth.

Sample 12:

Major metropolises around the world are experiencing exponential growth. This essay outlines some of the major issues this causes for younger members of society and some ways to address them.

Rapidly growing cities cause two major issues for young people. The most serious is the difficulty youths face getting employed in the competitive job market of a growing city. This is because of age discrimination in the labour market based on the perception that young people are less competent workers. The second problem is the feeling of alienation. As the population increases, people tend to be less familiar with people in their community, and young people in particular often lack an established social network and start to feel isolated from society.

However, there are some ways to alleviate these problems. Firstly, the government can provide subsidies to companies that are willing to hire young people. These subsidies will make it more attractive for companies to hire young people and this will allow them to get experience so that they will be more employable in the future. With regard to alienation, the best way to deal with this is to have grassroots community organisations that reach out and help young people. An effective way to do this is to have public service advertising for these types of organisations on social media platforms that young people often engage in.

In conclusion, megalopolises are negatively impacting the youths in many countries around the world by making it extremely difficult for them to get jobs and by often causing feelings of social isolation. The best ways to tackle these problems are for the government to provide policies aimed at assisting youths to gain employment and for community organisations to help provide a support network for at-risk individuals.

Sample 13:

There has been a worrying trend all the world captured with ample buildings and create a severe issue of debate which youngsters also fear various problems in daily life. Their poor housing and pollution are the most dangerous aspects, and Detroit is the development across the world. However, this can be a scribe for several reasons, and it must be addressed by possible definite actions in the upcoming paragraphs.

The primary reason is migration; when a message chunk of people migrates to an urban area, this would cost the security of proper houses. To make this clear, city developers forced themself to live in a gram theory and also Dupree from numerous amenities such as water and electricity, so they quickly get a track to metropolitan city’s which day avail all facilities which day seeking for, as a result, the partner of the population in the city gradually change this leads to Growth of development in CTS skyrocketed. For instance, in India, there are numerous slum areas where thousands of migrant workers live in horrible situations. They suffer from various drastic stick diseases due to lack of resources and hold highly infected places. As a result, they like to move forward in the big city. Another apparent reason is that unemployment and lack of assets the ratio of job seekers rapidly search over the years and looking for a desirable job. Hence, they like to settle in a large city, and many youngsters also lose the opportunity to become successful because migrant labourers increase the amount of competition and residents are unable to make their careers up to the mark.

The solution or not simple. Therefore, the steps have to be taken on a war footing. The first possible solution is that government need to relocate the industries and multinational companies to the countryside and provide all likely crucial and search for the community living there as a result of the fast pace of migration slowly to chrome moves in city and traffic congestion dramatically plummeted. The second feasible solution is to improve the infrastructure of the country authorities need to construct new health and education departments in unreached locations and give connectivity to all modern facilities, which individuals quickly benefit from and drop the plan of moving to big cities.

In conclusion, even though the high number of inhabitants in cities can lead to a housing shortage and increase contamination. This may be resolved by reducing the overcrowding of people and vehicles on the road. Therefore, there are several reasons why young people face various problems that various Rebtel actions can tackle before it becomes the main kind.

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People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Sample 1:

Healthcare costs all over the world are rising due to the rise in modern diseases which are a product of unhealthy lifestyles. These Lifestyles include a poor diet, smoking and lack of exercise. While many people do not need to use medical services, there are others who constantly need medication due to their unhealthy daily lives. In my view, people who are responsible for their own illness should have to contribute towards the cost of their medical treatment.

First of all, it is important to highlight the fact that ignorance is not an excuse. Information about health and fitness is widely available so everyone should know that smoking and eating fast food are not only bad for our health but can cause serious diseases. Furthermore, there is a wide range of help services which people can consult for advice on improving their health from doctors to sports trainers and dieticians. People who continue to live unhealthy lifestyles despite advice from doctors or medical professionals should not receive free or reduced cost medical services.

Secondly, it is clear that certain types of treatment are very expensive, and some diseases can be prevented by adopting a healthy lifestyle. If people who are obese require treatment, they are taking money away from another patient, whose operation or treatment may be costly, but necessary. Therefore, it could be a good solution to make people pay some money towards the cost of their treatment. If their health improved, this payment could be reduced.

In conclusion, making people contribute towards the cost of medical treatment for self-inflicted diseases could help reduce this type of disease and make more money available for other people.

Sample 2:

Low quality of life and poor nutrition in contemporary society has urged us to find out the root causes and adopt relevant measures. Some argue that individuals subject to illnesses should be charged more for what stems from their own choices. From my viewpoint, this idea is totally invalid.

Current fast-paced lifestyles have led to many involuntarily adjusting their ways of living to their tight schedules. A case in point is when modern office workers become drowned in their heavy workloads and are left with no choice but to lead a sedentary lifestyle. Working mothers provide another salient example. Playing dual roles means most of them must sacrifice sleep, leisure time and workout for childcare, household errands and financial responsibilities. It is therefore unfair to put people under financial constraints due to their undesired lifestyles.

How processed food affects our diets casts further light on the argument. Artificial coloring and flavoring have long been propelling the profits of the food processing industry. These chemicals add to the appeal of foods and beverages, extend their expiry dates and lower manufacture costs as compared to using natural ingredients.

In other words, no matter how informed and cautious consumers are about grocery shopping and diets, it is highly likely that they have already absorbed a sizable amount of toxins from both home-cooked food and restaurants meals in their whole life. This may be refuted by some who promote organic products as healthier alternatives.

However, noteworthy is the fact that organic goods are yet to be widely available in many places, and they are usually exorbitant to those of average and low income for daily consumption.

In summary, I am opposed to punishing those accused of leading unhealthy lifestyles and having poor diets with expensive medical payments. This is simply because not many of us enjoy the freedom to live as we desire.

Sample 3:

People who cause their own illness due to the consumption of fast food and poor diets should have to pay more for health care.

On the one hand, fast food makes life easier. Junk food can be prepared easily, and the cost is very low. Most of the hotels provide these kinds of food as the demand is also high for fast food. Even children are interested in these food items. They can be made at home in emergency cases as it requires only less time for cooking. It replaces most of the fruits and vegetables which are available from our own garden. Thus, the minerals and vitamins which were supposed to be available from natural food are also lost.

On the other hand, it contains various chemicals like Mono Sodium Glutamate (MSG), which is a banned substance due to the after-effects that occur on human health because of its consumption. It is also a flavouring substance as it makes the user repeat the usage of fast food. These chemicals can even lead to death. Poor diets and lack of exercise also cause a negative impact on health. Due to the negligence in the field of exercise, diseases like obesity are affected and reduce productivity.

In my opinion, the continuous usage of fast food and poor diet can cause severe health issues, which result in in-hospital treatment. For this, a lot of amounts should be required for the bills. Thus, the money saved on healthy food by replacing it with fast food must be spent at hospitals and on medicines. And also, health is already lost, resulting in very disastrous old age. Hence it is advisable to reduce the usage of fast food and promote the consumption of healthy natural food.

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Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There are numerous reasons to support the fact that hard work and determination are two key factors for success in life. However, as an alternative argument financial condition and looks of the person may also be the primary criteria for success.

Some people believe that financial status and appearance are important for success. They advocate that the looks of a person determine his confidence, which is a vital factor in success. No one can complete any task without considering himself capable of that. Hence, the confidence of the person plays a very key role. Furthermore, money is another important factor as it provides the support to lead the career of your choice. Without financial security, it makes the way to success much more challenging. In a way, money saves the energy and time of a person. It creates numerous opportunities to progress in a rapid way in the career of their desire. Based on this view, the utmost need for success is financial stability and appearance.

On the other side, people have certain justifications to agree with the view that ambition along with hard work is the key to success. People believe that the way to success has no shortcuts, and the primary criteria is to acquire knowledge and practical experiences through hard work. We can have monetary support from someone. However, no one can help us in developing our skills which needs the efforts of my own only. The second most important thing to reach our ultimate goal is our determination. It is because no dream can be fulfilled without ambition and persistence. Hence, one should be hardworking and have the strong willpower to attain the goal of his life. 

To sum up, although appearance and financial position have a great impact on achievement, hard work and determination are the most dominant factors in the way of success.

Sample 2:

It is true that there are numerous ways for people to succeed in life. While some people believe that wealth and physical attractiveness are two aspects that influence a person's success. I would contend that people can achieve the pinnacle of their careers when they work hard and are determined.

On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why having money and being physically attractive help people succeed in life. The first explanation is that having money helps people fulfil their deepest goals, such as those for strength and size. Extremely wealthy individuals, for instance, have endless opportunities to advance quickly in their careers and achieve the recognition they desire in their communities. Furthermore, one of the key elements affecting success is one's appearance. For instance, individuals would have a greater probability of landing a job if they display a confident body posture or wear attire. In addition to having excellent abilities and experiences.

On the other hand, it is evident that perseverance and hard effort are essential qualities that are crucial to ensuring success in the industry. First of all, putting in a lot of effort enables people to get some worthwhile life experiences. To demonstrate my thesis, let's use the example of a young student who practises their assignments often. By doing so, they reduce the likelihood that they will make the same mistakes again and are more likely to perform well on formal exams. Second, determination inspires us to develop goals that serve as the cornerstone of success. This makes it a necessary talent to help people solve complicated challenges in all circumstances. Further keep pushing forward in order to accomplish long-term objectives.

In conclusion, I feel that hard work and determination are the main factors to acquire the maximum performance. Even though money and attractiveness have an impact on achievement.

Sample 3:

Being successful is a dream of every human being. Working hard and dedication is considered to be pivotal to gain success for many people, whereas others have a different viewpoint and believe that money and attractive personality leads to progress in life. This essay will highlight both opinions and also elaborate on why working hard and determination are far more considerable than cash and physical appearance. To begin with, for some people certain goals and ambitions entail success. Since when someone is working hard, he/she would be able to succeed in that particular task eventually. As a result, people gain prosperity and rewards which pave the way to earn revenues. Likewise, in order to be a successful person, goal-oriented behaviour is required. For instance, while preparing for my RN exam, I had to burn midnight candles. Consequently, now I am working as an RN in a renowned hospital, where I am earning a handsome amount of salary and have succeeded in achieving my ambition. Thus, for a high-status in life, one should adopt the way of working hard rather than finding shortcuts for success.

Conversely, according to other groups of people, with money and great personality people could be famous in no time as everyone gets attracted towards the glamorous lifestyle. Because having the ability to buy anything encourages to gain the attention of other people. That's why with wealth and good health people become popular among their communities. For instance, there are some Bollywood singers who are not talented as compared to others, but by flaunting their wealth in front of the audience they are more recognised even without having any struggle. Overall, to some extent money and physical appearance are the reasons to attain prosperity.

To conclude, to boost progress is quite challenging. Even though money is the necessity of life which is required to achieve success, hard work and dedication are enormously countable to achieve success in one's life.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

There is a growing concern about the impact of city life on urban citizens’ health. While I agree that the availability of health services and facilities in city centers would benefit urban inhabitants greatly, I believe that city life also has detrimental effects on people’s health.

Firstly, I admit that living in cities is beneficial for people’s health to some certain extent. City dwellers can easily access fitness centers and recreation centers to improve their physical well-being and relieve stress, whereas those places might not be provided in the countryside. Besides, compared to those patients living in rural areas their counterparts living in cities might be able to access better health facilities and innovative technologies that can help with diagnosing a variety of diseases such as diabetes or cancer at an early stage and effectively treating them.

However, I believe that some physical and mental health problems would likely be the result of city life. The constant stream of noise from construction sites and transportation systems would result in noise pollution, and this might cause hypertension, tinnitus and sleep disturbances. Pollutants including exhaust emissions from motor vehicles and coal ash from industrial parks and are the main culprits of a number of health problems including respiratory infections, heart disease and lung cancer. Heavy traffic congestion in some metropolises like Beijing often makes commuters feel frustrated, and busy lifestyles might deprive people of their time to relax, negatively affecting their health.

In conclusion, while I agree that the advantages that city life would bring to urban citizens are undeniable, I believe that some clear negative consequences for their physical and psychological well-being should not be denied.

Sample 2:

It is believed that living in major cities takes a heavy toll on people’s well-being. This essay completely agrees with this statement.

The first argument supporting my opinion is that the living environment in many big cities is deteriorating, posing a direct threat to citizens’ physical health. With various job opportunities, large cities tend to attract a significant portion of people from other regions, contributing to the escalating population. More people inevitably means the rising demand for activities requiring burning fossil fuels to generate electricity, support transportation, and burn waste, from which most fine particles that pollute the air come. Living in major cities, with every breath taken, people tend to inhale harmful pollutants that can damage their lungs, hearts, and lead to a host of other health problems. The situation exacerbates when the growing population density also leads to skyrocketing property prices, which makes finding good accommodation challenging for many people, especially ordinary office workers or the working class. Consequently, people have no choice but to live in cramped and substandard housing conditions, which may lack proper ventilation, sanitation, and maintenance. This can contribute to various health problems, including allergies, infections, and mental stress.

In addition to physical wellness, the frenetic lifestyle in big cities also exerts adverse effects on people’s mental health. To cover expensive living expenses and accommodation costs, many individuals in big cities must work hard; some even juggle multiple jobs to sustain their lives. This situation means that proper rest or quality time with family or friends is usually considered a rarity, causing many people to suffer from chronic anxiety, loneliness, and other mental ailments. For instance, Ho Chi Minh City, a metropolis in Vietnam, is infamous for its exorbitant costs, with a large proportion of young individuals suffering from mental exhaustion as they get stuck in the vicious circle of working most of the time and spending most of their salaries just to cover basic living expenses. This is why I believe that the fast-paced lifestyle coupled with the high cost of living makes living in big cities very stressful.

In conclusion, I wholeheartedly agree that living in major cities brings about destructive impacts on both the mental and physical well-being of citizens.

Sample 3:

It is sometimes asserted that life in major urban areas is detrimental to citizens’ well-being. I largely agree with this assertion given the air pollution and fast pace of life that they have to endure even though medical advancements might be more approachable in metropolises.

The foremost rationale why I believe the city environment negatively influences people’s health is the air quality. Air pollution in major cities can be attributed to various sources, ranging from noxious emissions from personal vehicles to particle matters from ongoing constructions. These pollutants are scientifically proven to not only cause immediate inconveniences but also perennial respiratory diseases such as rhinitis and lung cancer.

Another reason for my belief that dwelling in cities is negative for health lies in the lifestyle in these regions. Specifically, citizens generally embrace a much faster way of living as a consequence of job competitiveness and price hikes, leading to a reduced amount of time for exercise and relaxation. If this condition is prolonged, they are likely to experience both physical and mental health problems including burnout, stroke or depression.

However, I acknowledge that the availability of advanced treatments in metropolises can enhance people’s wellbeing. An illustrative example in this case is Hanoi, the second largest city in Vietnam. Over the years, the city council has invested heavily in improving healthcare infrastructure which encompasses major hospitals and regional clinics, allowing Hanoians to enjoy effective treatments, frequent health checks for potential disease prevention and an overall improved health condition.

In conclusion, I am mostly in agreement with the idea that the general well-being of people is negatively affected by living in major metropolises considering the harmful air pollutants and increased pace of lifestyle despite the abundance of healthcare services. That is why governments should execute immediate measures, such as relocating factories and governmental offices, to encourage people to reside in the countryside or small cities to maintain more robust health.

Sample 4:

It is perceived by many that metropolitan cities are ominous for our well-being as opposed to living in rural areas. While the former offers a hectic lifestyle and has much more pollution, the latter grants a tranquil and favourable environment for our physical and psychological benefits. I completely agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.

Firstly, almost all big cities have an intolerable level of air, sound and environmental pollutions primarily due to the increasing number of vehicles, carbon emission, wastages of industries, metro facilities and amenities for a modern lifestyle. On top of that, the population density in big cities is much higher, and it creates an unhealthy living standard in many parts. Finally, people in big cities often rely on processed food as they are busy. This unhealthy food habit, along with pollution, emerges as a serious threat to their health in the long run. For instance, more than 60 per cent of school students in large municipalities in developing countries are exposed to a higher level of air and sound pollution and eat junk food which severely affects their physical and mental health.

Secondly, it is generally known that stresses in metropolises are considerably higher due to many factors. One of the main factors is the long working hours. Secondly, living costs in big cities are high. Although people earn higher in metro areas, their salaries, oftentimes, do not meet their needs and expectations, which adversely impact their psychology. Long working hours combined with severe traffic jam consume their time and they have little time left to spend with their families.
To conclude, it is inevitable that pollution, stresses and unhealthy food jeopardize people’s health in big cities, and this is why it is justified to state that living in large cities is damaging for people's well-being.

Sample 5:

There appears to be a growing concern for some as they believe that metropolitan cities can be harmful to people’s wellbeing. I strongly agree with this statement because the constant inflow of population in major cities is contributing to the rise of automobiles and industrial establishments which are resulting in excessive air and water pollutions.

A rapid growth in population over the last few decades has caused to soar the demand of motor vehicles; as a result, the air pollution has grown exponentially. This issue is not only wearing down on climate, but also having a detrimental effect on people’s health. Automobiles’ lavish use of fossil fuels for energy production is releasing a great amount of carbon dioxide into the city air which is causing serious damage to our lungs when we inhale. For example, according to the experts regarding some major cities, residents are suffering from chronic laboured breathing and other respiratory tract issues. Furthermore, due to the influx of people for better opportunities in big cities, the number of motorists has risen significantly, and thus, the air pollution releases from the vehicles can exacerbate in causing the greenhouses gases to trap into the atmospheres, which could ultimately get inhaled by the people dwelling in urban domains, resulting in developing variety of ailments.

In addition, a vast majority of factories usually operates in big cities, though they are supporting the supply chain of various kinds, however, the by-products could be ending up in water streams, discharging heavy metals such as mercury, cadmium and lead along with many other chemicals. In addition, illegally disposed garbage in landfills can contaminate aquifers, rivers and lakes, and microscopic plastic fragments derived from plastic bags or bottles can be ingested by some fishes, which could eventually be eaten by the city dwellers. Thus, consuming contaminated water in various forms could lead to ill health for the urban residents in the long run.

In conclusion, with the constant influx of population, considerable increase of vehicles and manufacturing plants are seriously polluting the city air and water system, which are eventually affecting the overall health of the residents.

Sample 6:

The notion that living in big cities is detrimental to people’s health has garnered attention, sparking a debate on the extent of its truth. This essay concurs with this viewpoint to a significant degree, attributing the adverse health impacts to environmental pollution and the stress of urban living. The ensuing discussion will delve into these aspects, elucidating their contribution to the degradation of health among city dwellers.

Firstly, the omnipresent environmental pollution in large urban areas stands as a primary concern. Air quality in big cities is often compromised due to vehicular emissions and industrial activities, leading to respiratory ailments and chronic conditions such as asthma and lung cancer. The notion “living in big cities is bad for people’s health” finds its justification in numerous studies that have linked poor air quality to a spectrum of health issues. Furthermore, the lack of green spaces reduces opportunities for physical activity, exacerbating the risk of obesity, heart disease, and mental health disorders. The concrete jungle of urban areas not only stifles physical well-being but also diminishes mental health by offering little respite from the urban hustle.

Secondly, the relentless pace and stress of city life significantly contribute to health deterioration. The competition for jobs, housing, and even basic amenities fuels a stress epidemic, leading to a rise in anxiety, depression, and stress-related illnesses. The constant noise pollution disrupts sleep patterns, further impairing mental and physical health. This lifestyle, emblematic of living in big cities, fosters a culture of quick meals, leading to poor dietary habits and further health complications. The very essence of urban living, with its fast-paced lifestyle and dependency on convenience, encapsulates the risks associated with living in big cities.

In conclusion, the view that urban living harms health is well-founded, chiefly due to pollution and urban stress. These elements significantly harm individuals' health. With rising urban populations, prioritizing cleaner environments and a balance between urban demands and health is crucial. Promoting green spaces and a wellness culture is key to reducing the health risks of city life, aiming for a healthier future for city residents.

Sample 7:

The notion that living in big cities is detrimental to one’s health is a topic of considerable debate. While some argue that the bustling urban environment fosters unhealthy lifestyles, others believe the benefits outweigh the negatives. This essay contends that, though there are some health challenges associated with urban living, these can be mitigated through proactive measures. The ensuing discussion will delve into the impact of pollution and lifestyle on health, as well as explore how urban environments also offer opportunities for health improvement.

Firstly, the primary concern is the pervasive issue of pollution in large metropolises. The air quality in such areas is often poor due to emissions from vehicles and industrial activities, leading to respiratory problems among residents. Noise pollution, another facet of urban living, contributes to stress and potential hearing loss. However, it’s crucial to acknowledge the initiatives taken by cities to combat these challenges, such as the implementation of green spaces and stricter emissions regulations. These efforts demonstrate that while living in big cities is bad for people’s health due to pollution, there are mitigating steps being taken.

Secondly, the fast-paced lifestyle typical of big cities can negatively affect physical and mental health. The prevalence of convenience foods and sedentary jobs contributes to obesity and related diseases. Additionally, the often-isolating nature of urban life can exacerbate mental health issues. Yet, cities offer unparalleled access to healthcare facilities, fitness centers, and wellness programs. The availability of these resources, if utilized, can significantly counteract the health risks posed by city living.

In conclusion, while the statement that living in big cities is bad for people’s health holds some truth, especially when considering pollution and lifestyle factors, it does not capture the full picture. Urban environments also offer resources and opportunities to maintain and improve health. By leveraging these advantages and addressing the inherent challenges, urban residents can lead healthy lives, thus illustrating that the impact of city living on health is not solely negative.

Sample 8:

Living in big cities has often been criticized for its potential negative impact on people’s health. While it is true that urban life can present several health risks, such as exposure to pollution and a sedentary lifestyle, I believe that the advantages of living in big cities, particularly in terms of healthcare access and social opportunities, outweigh these disadvantages. This article will examine both viewpoints and offer justification for my viewpoint.

There are valid concerns that living in big cities can be detrimental to one’s health. One of the main issues is air pollution, which is more prevalent in urban areas due to high traffic volumes and industrial activities. Long-term exposure to contaminated air can cause heart disease, respiratory issues, and other dangerous medical disorders. For example, studies have shown that residents of major cities like Beijing and Delhi, where air quality is frequently poor, suffer from higher rates of asthma and lung cancer compared to those living in rural areas. Additionally, the fast-paced lifestyle in cities often leads to increased stress levels. The constant noise, overcrowding, and high-pressure work environments can contribute to mental health issues such as anxiety and depression.

Furthermore, the convenience of urban living, with easy access to fast food and a lack of green spaces, often results in a sedentary lifestyle, leading to obesity and related health problems.

However, living in big cities also offers significant health benefits. Urban areas generally have better healthcare facilities, including access to specialized medical services that might not be available in rural areas. For instance, big cities are home to major hospitals and clinics with advanced technology and experienced medical professionals, which can lead to better diagnosis and treatment of diseases. Moreover, cities often provide more opportunities for physical activity and a healthier lifestyle. Many cities are investing in public parks, bike lanes, and recreational facilities that encourage residents to stay active. For example, cities like Copenhagen and Amsterdam have extensive cycling infrastructures that promote a more active and environmentally friendly way of living. Additionally, the social aspect of city life, with numerous cultural and community activities, can enhance mental well-being by providing social support networks and reducing feelings of isolation.

In conclusion, while there are undeniable health risks associated with living in big cities, such as pollution and stress, the benefits, particularly in terms of healthcare access and opportunities for a healthy lifestyle, are significant. Therefore, I believe that the advantages of living in urban areas outweigh the disadvantages, and with proper management and planning, cities can offer a healthy and fulfilling environment for their residents.

Sample 9:

The debate over whether living in big cities is harmful to people’s health has been ongoing for years. While some argue that urban life is detrimental due to factors like pollution and high stress levels, others believe that the benefits, including better healthcare and more recreational options, outweigh these concerns. I partially agree with the statement that city living can be bad for health, but I also recognize the advantages that urban environments provide. Both sides of the dispute will be covered in this article.

On one hand, living in big cities can pose several health risks. The most prominent issue is air pollution, which is often higher in cities due to vehicle emissions, industrial activities, and construction. Exposure to polluted air has been linked to a range of health problems, including respiratory diseases, heart conditions, and even premature death. For instance, cities like Los Angeles and Mumbai, known for their smog, have higher rates of lung-related illnesses among residents. Chronic stress can also result from the competitive and fast-paced lifestyle of cities. The pressure to meet deadlines, achieve career goals, and navigate through crowded public spaces can take a toll on mental health, resulting in conditions such as anxiety, depression, and burnout. Moreover, the lack of green spaces in many cities limits opportunities for physical activity, contributing to a sedentary lifestyle and increasing the risk of obesity, diabetes, and other lifestyle-related diseases.

On the other hand, big cities also offer numerous health benefits. One of the key advantages is access to high-quality healthcare services. Urban areas are typically home to the best hospitals, clinics, and medical specialists, ensuring that residents receive prompt and effective treatment for various health issues. For example, patients in cities like New York or London have access to cutting-edge medical technologies and treatments that are not available in rural areas. Additionally, many cities are making efforts to improve the urban environment by increasing green spaces, promoting active transportation, and reducing pollution. Initiatives such as the creation of urban parks, the implementation of bike-sharing programs, and the development of public transportation systems encourage residents to adopt healthier lifestyles.

Furthermore, the cultural and social vibrancy of city life can positively impact mental health by providing opportunities for social interaction, cultural engagement, and community involvement, all of which are important for maintaining emotional well-being.

In conclusion, while living in big cities does present certain health challenges, such as pollution and stress, it also offers significant advantages, including superior healthcare and opportunities for a healthier lifestyle. I believe that with appropriate measures to mitigate the risks, the benefits of urban living can far outweigh the disadvantages. As cities continue to develop, it is crucial to focus on creating environments that support the health and well-being of all residents.

Sample 10:

Living in big cities is often perceived as detrimental to health. I completely agree with this assertion, as urban environments can significantly contribute to both physical and mental health issues.

Firstly, increased levels of pollution in big cities pose a serious threat to residents' physical health. Due to high volumes of traffic, large quantities of pollutants are released into the atmosphere, leading to the degradation of air quality. This is a significant contributor to various respiratory diseases, such as lung cancer. Pollutants, including exhaust emissions from motor vehicles and coal ash from industrial parks, are the main culprits of numerous health problems, including respiratory infections and heart disease. For example, Beijing, China, experiences severe air pollution due to high traffic volumes and nearby factories and coal-fired power plants, resulting in significant respiratory problems among residents such as asthma, bronchitis, and lung cancer.

Secondly, mental health problems are also a considerable concern in city life. In fact, the constant stream of noise from construction sites and transportation systems results in noise pollution, which can cause hypertension, tinnitus, and sleep disturbances. To make matters worse, heavy traffic congestion in metropolises like Beijing often leads to frustration among commuters, and the busy lifestyles prevalent in cities can deprive people of the time they need to relax, negatively affecting their mental health. A 2020 study published in the Journal of Environmental Psychology found that residents living near busy airports in New York City reported higher levels of stress and anxiety, linked to sleep disturbances and difficulty concentrating, compared to those living in quieter areas.

In conclusion, living in big cities is undeniably detrimental to health due to the pervasive physical and mental health challenges posed by pollution and urban stressors.

Sample 11:

There are those who hold the view that living in large urban areas is detrimental to people's health. I totally agree with this point of view, believing that life in big cities negatively impacts individuals' health for several reasons.

Firstly, the high levels of pollution in big cities pose significant health risks. Air pollution, primarily from vehicle emissions and industrial activities, leads to respiratory issues, cardiovascular diseases, and other severe health conditions. For instance, studies have shown that cities like Beijing and Delhi, which experience high pollution levels, report increased cases of asthma and other respiratory problems among residents. The correlation between pollution and health issues clearly demonstrates that living in urban areas can be harmful to people's health.

Secondly, the fast-paced and stressful lifestyle in big cities contributes to mental health problems. The constant hustle and bustle, combined with high living costs and work pressures, create an environment where stress and anxiety are prevalent. An example of this is New York City, where the demanding lifestyle often leads to high stress levels, resulting in increased cases of depression and other mental health disorders. This stressful urban lifestyle further proves that living in big cities can be detrimental to mental well-being.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that living in big cities adversely affects people's health. The high pollution levels and the stressful lifestyle associated with urban living significantly contribute to various physical and mental health issues. Therefore, it is evident that living in large urban areas can have severe negative effects on individuals' overall health.

Sample 12:

Some people believe that living in metropolitan cities brings negative effects on health. I totally disagree with the statement due to several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in this essay.

First of all, relocating to large cities brings several benefits to one's physical wellbeing. It is noticeable that many health-related facilities are located in the city nowadays. For instance, there are a lot of fitness centres built around the city. As a result, people living in cities tend to exercise more frequently mainly due to convenience and easy access to fitness centres. Moreover, it is common for city residents to arrange regular appointments with a dietitian. In fact, this is usually a benefit provided by big corporates based in large cities. A dietitian can evaluate a person's nutrition intake and generate a diet plan specially designed for the person. Crucially, by maintaining a healthy diet one can build a strong body. As a result, living in big cities can result in the improvement of the physical health of a person.

Next, mental health can also be maintained at a healthy state if a person is living in a large city. Apart from easier access to psychologists compared to rural areas, metropolitan cities provide a wider range of entertainment, which can reduce the stress level of a person. For example, watching movies and getting a massage are both proven to bring positive impacts to people's minds. In large cities, people can choose from various kinds of activities and relax for a bit, relieving stress and tension built up from their daily lives. Therefore, the mental health of people living in metropolitan cities tends to be more stable.

In conclusion, I do not think living in large cities brings negative impacts to people's health. In fact, a cosmopolitan lifestyle can enhance both the physical and mental wellbeing of local citizens.

Sample 13:

In recent times, the concept that urbanization has adverse effects on human health has attracted considerable attention. While some argue that city life poses risks to well-being, I staunchly oppose this claim. This essay will elaborate on my perspective on this matter.

To begin with, metropolitan areas offer a modern lifestyle that is unparalleled in rural settings. The availability of cutting-edge technology, a pristine environment, and access to knowledge equip individuals with the tools necessary to lead a fulfilling life. Furthermore, the plethora of job opportunities in urban centers provides individuals with the means to earn a decent living and support themselves. This is substantiated by the fact that numerous companies are headquartered in cities, providing a diverse range of employment options that cater to various skill sets.

Moreover, residing in large cities offers a multitude of benefits that enhance one’s life experience. The presence of iconic landmarks, prestigious attractions, and entertainment hotspots broadens one’s perspectives and provides a wealth of experiences that are often unavailable in rural areas. Additionally, urban centers attract professionals who offer high-quality education in specialized fields, ultimately enriching individuals’ lives and preparing them for the future. While it is undeniable that large cities also have their drawbacks, such as overcrowding, air pollution, and sanitation issues, I firmly believe that the benefits of city living far outweigh the drawbacks. With proper urban planning and governance, these drawbacks can be mitigated, making urban living a desirable option for many.

In conclusion, I strongly oppose the notion that living in metropolitan areas is detrimental to human health. On the contrary, urban living offers ample job opportunities and a contemporary lifestyle that enhances overall well-being.

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An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Sample 1:

It is believed that a lot of people have decided to change their jobs or workplaces and living areas as well. Despite some negative developments that do exist, I personally believe that the changing activity is a positive development.

On the one hand, some potential risks may occur when people decide to change their jobs or residential areas. There is a risk that they might not perform well in their new roles, or not welcomed by the other employees. Besides that, there is also a chance that the new neighbourhoods have high crime rates, or the weather might not be friendly. However, changing a career and a living area is an essential thing; therefore, people should study, do some research, analyse all of the problems and try to mitigate the risks before they make a decision.     

On the other hand, it is true that when people changed their careers and area of living, they could find some benefits. Firstly, as people change their works, they might become more successful than in their previous careers. In certain situations, some people might have felt that their current jobs are not in accordance with their passions. Therefore, they prefer to change their occupations to other jobs which are more suitable for them. Secondly, living in new places, or new cities give them the opportunities to experience new things. They could feel the experiences of having new friends, learning new languages or even feel the different weather conditions.

In conclusion, I personally think that changing a career or living place is a positive development, as people could achieve higher careers in their lives and get more experiences in their life.

Sample 2:

Migrating to another city or changing career is nowadays a popular trend. Some people choose to stay in the cities where they have been born or to stick to their career and never try anything new for their work, but some decide to change their lives, moving to another city, or changing their work field. Though there can be many disadvantages of radically changing the way of someone's life, in my opinion, such a change can create numerous benefits for all types of people.

Discovering something new was and always will be one of the favourite aspects of people's life. We still try to find out more about the ocean, space, cultures and history, spending millions of money on these things. While identifying the new limits of space can be a huge step forward for all the humanity, for some people moving to a bigger city can be a personal discovery. To my mind, it is tremendously interesting to discover new places, people, hobbies, and by moving to a new city, these kinds of aspects become possible.

Similarly changing the field of work can be a huge step forward into a new world of discoveries for some people. Sometimes, the same everyday routine that does not change in years can make someone extremely bored, and make a person fall into a depression. For some individuals, a career change could create a new daily routine, where he or she would have to face new problems, people, tasks, and new enjoyment. It has also been proved by psychologists in a recent study that a change in someone's life could be a healthy treat.

To conclude, human beings are designed in a way that many aspects of our lives become boring to us after a long time, and a change of our living places or career might create a positive tone in our boring everyday routines.

Sample 3:

"Change is the essence of the life". I feel that in today's competitive world, one should be professional in multidisciplinary fields to survive. As what author mentioned that the increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives, is correct and is a positive thing as far as I am concerned. Below I will justify why I say that it is a positive development.

Firstly, I think that it is a critical thing to change career and place from one to another because it requires a lot of potential and adaptability to do this. This happens when a crisis occurs in any particular field then a lot of people lose their jobs, and the positions of those people become chaotic. So in that situation, if a person has knowledge in some other fields, then he can actually sustain. One such instance was my uncle Jim who was working as a JAVA developer in a software company, during that time his field had an economic crisis and lots of people lost their jobs. Then he was also a professional in teaching, so he joined as a professor and taught lessons to the students. He changed his career and was stable enough in life.

Secondly, I even support changes to the living places because one likes to move to the place where he gets a good salary in his profession. Most of the people migrate from place to another in search of jobs also and the best facilities to live a comfortable life. These days it is becoming quite a common that people move from one place to another. This not only fetches good propensities but also comes across different cultures and lifestyles. This could happen even because of some discrimination in that place so that a person moves away to get opportunities to live happily. One such example was a person called Mark who was living in a village and had to leave his home in search of a job in the city as he was a computer science engineer. He never had a chance to do a job in his village, as no company existed in that town. Now he is an executive engineering and earning a very good ransom of salary and has all facilities with him.

So, I would like to conclude by saying that it is always a positive point to change career when the situation demands it and is also a good move to change the living places. One will be satisfied when his work is appreciated and gets a good salary, so in search of this one can definitely change his or her career or place but not in every instance.

Sample 4:

It is noticeable today that a significant number of people are shifting their careers and living places during the course of their lives, domestically or even internationally. In my opinion, it is a positive phenomenon that has its impact on both, personal lives and the society in general.

Life is dynamic and people tend to adapt to change in all aspects, it is no longer strange to notice people from different races living together and interacting in a day-to-day routine in work and living places. A good example of this change is the Arabian Gulf countries where East and West intersect, and a new community characteristic has evolved. This has reflected positively in the whole community, people get more and more open-minded, having less resistance to new ideas, the knowledge and experience are shared from different sources giving the best out of this mixture, everyone contributes, and the result is international.

In a personal level, the change is huge, having lived this experience myself, I can say I'm not the same anymore, interacting and dealing with people coming from different places all over the world with different backgrounds had a significant impact on me in both personal and professional levels, now I can adapt more easily to changes and foreign idea, I appreciate cultural motivated actions and decisions I never thought of or imagined I can accept and live with before.
Emphasizing more on the career change, I think it is positive not to restrict yourself to a certain career path, having the flexibility to move easily if needed to a different career or field gives the power to change and gain more knowledge and experience keeping learning as you grow old, it is a cumulative process that strengthens the personality and opens the door for future potential opportunities.
In conclusion, change is a principal element of human nature, one should not fight or resist it whether it's a career or living place or country change, it has its positive effects and gets more and easier with today's globalisation and integration in life.

Sample 5:

People switch career paths and move to different places for various reasons ranging from better prospects, high earnings to a better quality of life. In many instances, this has many positive impacts on the family or community of a person. Particularly when a talent is not recognised and appreciated in a country or in a career, it is definitely a wise step to change jobs and move to greener pastures.

If we consider the case of a person coming from a developing country, it is very likely that there are fewer opportunities in his home country. If this person relocates to a country where his skill is regarded as niche and rare, chances are that he will get paid 100-300% more than his pay in his native country. For instance, today there are better-paying jobs in Information Technology industry in the USA than in India. Due to this, young population in India wants to relocate to one of these countries to have better standards of living and salaries. Apart from this, there are more chances to go up the corporate ladder and get chances to interact and work with experts in the industries. In some instances, even when we have the best paying job, one may not end their day satisfied. It is strongly advised to divert their energies to a career of their interest or choice.

On the contrary, when relocating to a different country or a job, one needs to leave their families and friends behind and live far from them. It takes a very long time to socialise in new environments and get used to cultures. For example, if one migrated from India to Australia, he would have to adjust to different weather conditions, cultures and living style. A lot of things that are deemed acceptable in India are probably considered absolutely insane in Australia. Due to reasons like this, career growth may stagnate for a while and sometimes does not go as expected.
We should balance the positives and negatives when deciding to change careers or living places. When we need years to adjust to new careers and communities, it is wise to calculate impact beforehand and move on.

Sample 6:

The modern world has seen the profound growth in availability of various job prospects and better living standards. This trend has enabled people across the globe with a wide range of career options while improved and affordable lifestyle became the key path breaker in helping them move across the globe. I believe it is a positive movement.

There are several reasons why people undergo a career change and relocation. Sometimes, lack of job opportunities and the poor financial situation of one's state could be the key factors leading to a change in career path. Another reason could be better wages and low tax rates in other states, adding to more savings and an increased happiness in peoples' lives. In addition to this, better living standards and fast-paced career advancement opportunities, helping one to climb the ladder of organisational positions even faster, could be some of the main reasons.

Naturally, it is considered to be a positive and an advantageous practice, leading to improvement in one’s well-being and better financial possibilities. With the smooth flow of finances, one can invest in other businesses or can better support his family in various ways like for child education, health services, housing, entertainment, travelling etc., therefore, the ultimate contributing factor for the better life. Moreover, changing the place of living due to career changes provides one with options to experience the different cultures and traditional customs of many parts of the world.

In conclusion, many people prefer to opt for alternate career options and sometimes different place of living for various life and jobs related reasons. This shift is considered rewarding and absolutely positive for mankind as it comes with a wide array of benefits along with a fulfilling lifestyle.

Sample 7:

With more and more technological advancement, the world is becoming smaller day by day. Modern means of transportation and communication have enabled business organisations to become global. This has also opened doors for people to travel and live in different places in the world, and even have more career change options.

In spite of challenges associated with moving places, more and more people are keen to explore and experience living in different places. This not only takes away the boredom associated with living at the same place, or doing the same job for long, it also brings a lot of personal grooming and adaptation ability to one's character. This further improves their ability to grow in their career and seek out the best opportunities available.

"Why say no to a great opportunity just because it needs the change of a place?", is the modern generation's thinking. The Internet and mobile phones have further helped with this cause.

But there are some downsides of this. The traditional way of living in the same place and being in the same profession for many years provides stability and peace for both mind and body. One can keep better health by staying at one place. Life will be less stressful. And while adults may like the changes, it could be challenging for kids to adjust to new environments and make new friends.

To conclude, there are both good and bad aspects of changing places or careers, but the fact is more and more people are embracing it, and this is becoming part and parcel of modern life. The more flexibility there is for change, the better the career opportunities are.

Sample 8:

In the past decades, the irregularity of the job market has forced many people to constantly alter their professions or living arrangements. Many people today are unsure of whether or not this is beneficial - personally, I think that the disadvantages far outweigh the benefits for society in the majority of cases, as it makes it difficult for individuals to form long-lasting relationships.

On one hand, corporations increasing international connections means there is an increasing need for people to learn more languages and engage in different cultures, thereby improving global cultural awareness. Hostility between people of different backgrounds has been lower as a result of globalization, and this is almost certainly due to more intermingling as a result of national job markets shifting to be more international. Countries such as Korea, for instance, which has been an isolationist for most of history, are today one of the world’s biggest economies, attracting foreign workers from all over the world. As more workers change their working locations as a result of globalization, one might envision a more culturally understanding world.

Yet on the other hand, the flip side of this phenomenon is the increasing difficulty of maintaining long-term relationships for most workers. Changing one’s job or place of living frequently means being unable to have a strong bond with a friend group for an extended period of time. This makes it very difficult to connect with people and could lead to an overwhelming feeling of isolation spreading amongst the workforce as they are forced to prioritize their work over their friends. Relocation is difficult and could lead to severe culture shock as well, which could increase anxiety and stress. This is why the majority of employees, for example, often state job security as one of the primary motivations for them to accept any job.

On the whole, I argue that the impact on the individual of today’s volatile job markets is undesirable, and as such, the aforementioned trend is one that should be unwelcomed.

Sample 9:

The world is changing rapidly. People today face numerous challenges in achieving a meaningful and fulfilling life. One job for life is over. Old methods of career development no longer apply. No wonder, many people change their careers and places of residence many times during their lifetime. This situation is largely a positive one.

Some strong benefits can come from a career change. One of the major reasons for changing careers is money, which can help to lessen the financial burden of an individual or family. Secondly, this general education that is formed through a career change will be beneficial in the future. Individuals with a wider range of job experiences and skill sets will be seriously considered for new job openings. Moreover, those who have a wide range of careers under their belt will also have more job security. If they lose their job, they can seek out jobs in different career fields, as opposed to one career field.

What is more, a career change can be a liberating experience, for it frees people to consider a variety of professional and personal avenues that were previously closed to them because of their work attachments. Some choose to return to school to pursue courses of study that can lead to whole new careers, while others use their skills and experience to take a position similar to their previous one, but in a fresh environment. Many others choose to open their own small business. A person may finally discover a career which gives him the maximum job satisfaction.

There are also many advantages associated with the change of residence which comes along with a career change. Change of surroundings and new exciting experiences are useful for self-education and the development of a person. Besides, these changes usually bring positive emotions, which help to fight stress and have an overall good effect on health. It is also very beneficial for the person’s family as this change allows them to make new friends, enjoy new cultures and experience new climates. In other words, it adds spice to life.

To put it in a nutshell, I am saying that changing careers and place of residence several times during a lifetime may bring some challenges in life but overall, it is a positive development.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Television has become an integral part of our daily lives, and its influence on children cannot be underestimated. While some argue that children can learn effectively through television and should be encouraged to watch it both at home and school, I strongly disagree with this notion. In this essay, I will present arguments against the idea of promoting excessive television watching among children.

Firstly, television watching is a passive activity that lacks the interactivity and engagement required for optimal learning outcomes. While children may absorb information from television programmes, they often lack the opportunity to actively participate, ask questions, and engage in critical thinking. In contrast, traditional educational settings such as classrooms promote active learning, where students can interact with teachers and peers, ask questions, and engage in discussions. This active involvement enhances comprehension, critical thinking skills, and the ability to apply knowledge in real-world situations. This is why young children do not learn effectively from watching TV.

Furthermore, excessive television viewing can have detrimental effects on children's physical and mental well-being. Prolonged sedentary behaviour associated with watching television can contribute to a sedentary lifestyle, leading to various health issues such as obesity, cardiovascular problems, and poor posture. Moreover, excessive screen time can adversely affect children's cognitive development and attention span. Research has shown that excessive exposure to screens, including television, can lead to attention deficits and decreased academic performance. In contrast, encouraging children to engage in physical activities, interactive play, and reading promotes their overall well-being and cognitive development.

In conclusion, television is not a substitute for interactive and engaging learning experiences. Moreover, excessive television viewing can have negative effects on children's learning, physical health, and cognitive development. Therefore, it is important to encourage children to participate in interactive learning environments, such as classrooms, rather than watching TV.

Sample 2:

Television, as a learning tool, could be useful if children watch the right programmes for a limited duration of time each day. I do believe that TV can be a very powerful learning tool for children, and that is why they should be allowed to watch TV programmes both at home and school, but within the teacher's and parent's watch.

To begin with, though I am no longer a student, I can still learn better by watching TV rather than reading books. Whenever I tune on to the History Channel, BBC or National Geographic Channel, I can learn new things. This is also true for school-going children. My younger brother, who is a college student with a History major, heavily relies on History Channel documentaries to enhance his knowledge of history. 

Moreover, TV programmes are the audio-visual presentation of an event, story or fact, and thus have lasting impressions on our brains. If the right programmes are chosen for children, they will learn faster by watching TV. For instance, one of our neighbours allows her 3 years old daughter to watch Rhymes on the internet TV channels, and she can recite most of those rhymes. According to her mother, the girl has learned more effectively by watching animated cartoons that have rhymes than by reading books. Since TV is a powerful learning tool, we can use it in school for educational purposes.

In conclusion, as parents and teachers, we must pick suitable educational programmes for our youngsters both in school and at home. I believe that TV is a good pedagogical tool, and hence its use in the school and home for both educational and recreational purposes should be allowed.

Sample 3:

Modern technology has undoubtedly made learning easier and better. Most children's parents encourage them to watch shows to gain information and acquire new knowledge. While I agree that watching television has some positive effects on a child, I believe this trend has a more detrimental effect on our children and society in general.

First and foremost, watching television can have some positive effects on children. There are, in fact, considerable advantages to incorporating television into homes and educational institutions. Many informative broadcasters, like National Geographic and Discovery, exist solely for educational reasons. Moreover, viewing television may increase the concentration and attention of some people. For instance, children with autism and behaviour problems have a concentration weakness; research has demonstrated that these children have enhanced their focus and concentration and are capable of watching television for prolonged periods. Therefore, it is obvious that somehow this trend has some beneficial consequences.

Similarly, I believe that watching television has several negative adverse effects. Spending time watching television can divert attention from healthy pastimes like outdoor activity with colleagues, leading to weight gain and feelings of loneliness. In addition, some programmes are created for entertainment, not teaching; these programmes have violent scenes and inappropriate terminology, which hurt children's brains. In addition, prolonged watching television may prevent reading a book and informative articles. Consequently, children would lack intellectual and problem-solving abilities. The negative impacts of television on the psychological and physical well-being of children can be determined.

In summation, I believe that television watching has more drawbacks than benefits. Under the supervision of both their parents and educators, children may spend more time watching purely for informative and educational reasons.

Sample 4:

Nowadays, television sets are now utilized as an educational tool. Many people believe that teenagers can absorb more efficiently while watching television. I fully agree with the concept that television might benefit youngsters in increasing their knowledge. This essay will look into the several reasons for this approval.

I feel that television is incredibly good for youngsters for two primary reasons. First, kids have access to a plethora of informative television channels, such as National Geographic and discovery, which are quite captivating to watch. This option might, in my opinion, considerably expand students’ understanding of Biology and Geography. Another consideration is that watching television helps reduce the school-related anxiety that teenagers are prone to. If, for instance, a youngster receives a poor grade in a specific subject, classmates would likely tease him or her. Consequently, I would suggest that televisions may be advantageous in some instances. It is evident that, by viewing the news on television, students receive a significant amount of information and learn about the world's various cultures and critical problems.

In contrast, I feel that we should not push youngsters to watch television constantly because it makes them less productive and inactive. Moreover, numerous studies have already demonstrated that televisions not only make individuals idle but also cause overweight. I believe that many schools offer physical education classes, even though television can make children less active.

In summation, although it is obvious that television makes an individual less active, I am convinced that teenagers learn more efficiently while watching television, for the reasons I have explained throughout. 

Sample 5:

In this 21st century, digitalization has replaced all the old-schooled theories in educational institutes. Moreover, it is claimed that teenagers can effectively study while watching television at home and school. Although I agree that youngsters sometimes can learn from watching television, I do not consider it to be a good idea to encourage this activity.

Firstly, children's study is occasionally enhanced by television viewing. Numerous television programmes provide visual information and tales that enhance the process of learning interesting as well as the content easier to understand. It is a good way to encourage students to learn, particularly when they are tired of academics and assignments. Some applications, for instance, present appealing stories of literature, enhancing children's comprehension. These tools also make it simpler for youngsters to memorize poetry, as it is challenging and tiring for young children to remember poetry by continuously repeating them.

In contrast, I believe that prolonged watching of television may damage a child's academic performance. First, television programmes can serve as a distraction from their academics, especially when they are not attentive. Some programmes employ games to assist youngsters to learn more efficiently, yet youngsters may become more involved in the pleasure and so acquire little. Furthermore, continuous TV viewing alone could lead to an absence of human engagement. If children have queries while watching the television, their instructors cannot immediately address them, which would be most likely to lead to misunderstandings.

To conclude, even though viewing television encourages children to take an interest in learning, I believe that youngsters should not consume too much television because it has a negative consequence on their academics.

Sample 6:

With the development of technology, the media plays an important role in the field of education. Many people are of the opinion that when students are taught with the help of computers, mobile phones, and even television, they learn productively. As far as I am concerned, educating a child with the help of television at school and home is commendable, but there should be a limit to the exposure, otherwise, there may be a hindrance to their mental and physical development.

Childhood is a period when everyone enjoys the simple pleasures of life. Running with friends, pursuing adventures, enjoying ice cream and chocolates are some of the activities that make them happy. Nowadays, children are glued to their television or computer screens. There is no scope for physical activity, and they become obese or unhealthy. If the children continuously come in contact with television at home as well as at school, the rays from the screen may affect their eyesight.

Apart from this, when children watch television at home and school, they become addicted. For example, when a child is shown animated videos to understand certain topics, they get an excuse to watch videos on youtube. They tell their parents that the teacher had asked them to watch those videos to understand the topic better. In this way, the parents are bound to allow them and are unable to keep track of their activity. Moreover, some programs on television show excessive violence, which excites the children. They may try to copy their favourite superhero and get hurt in the process. The crime shows may even instigate them to behave in a rude or anti-social way which ultimately becomes detrimental to their development.

Yet, it is irrefutable that television is an effective tool to educate children and adults alike. While shows on National Geography, Animal Planet and Discovery tap on the scientific evolution of a child’s mind, cartoons or game shows help them relax after a long day of study and activities.

To put it in a nutshell, even though watching television both at home and school might help the children, the negative effects outweigh the positive side. So, according to me, elders should keep an eye on their wards and allow them limited time to watch television at home and school.

Sample 7:

As a professional in the field of education, I strongly disagree with the idea that children should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. While it is true that television can be a source of information and entertainment, it is not a suitable medium for effective learning for children.

First and foremost, excessive television viewing can have detrimental effects on a child’s physical and mental health. Studies have shown that children who spend too much time in front of a screen are at a higher risk of obesity, sleep disturbances, and attention problems. Moreover, the content of television programs is often not age-appropriate and can expose children to violence, inappropriate language, and negative behaviors.

Furthermore, watching television does not promote active learning or critical thinking skills. Unlike interactive educational activities, such as reading, writing, and hands-on experiments, television viewing is a passive experience that does not engage children in the learning process. It is important for children to develop their cognitive abilities and problem-solving skills through active participation in educational activities, rather than passively absorbing information from a screen.

Instead of encouraging children to watch television regularly, it is essential to provide them with alternative and more effective learning opportunities. Schools should focus on creating a stimulating and interactive learning environment, where children can engage in hands-on activities, discussions, and group projects. At home, parents should limit screen time and encourage their children to participate in outdoor activities, sports, and hobbies that promote physical and mental well-being.

In conclusion, while television can be a source of entertainment, it is not an effective medium for children to learn. Instead of promoting regular television viewing, it is crucial to provide children with active and engaging learning experiences that foster their overall development.

Sample 8:

Some parents believe that watching television is bad for their children. So, they try to restrict their children from watching TV. In a different way, others think that there is nothing bad in watching TV programmes. Personally, I think that watching TV brings tremendous benefits to children unless they spend a lot of their valuable time in front of a TV set daily. It is recommended that children should spend less than a couple of hours daily watching TV programmes, and those programmes should be suitable for them. For the following reasons, which I will mention below, I believe that television plays an essential role in a child’s development.

First of all, television helps a child to extend his or her range of interests. Children can find out many new things and make many exciting discoveries for themselves. In addition to this practical benefit, television improves children’s vocabulary, their memory and gives them the opportunity to gain more knowledge. It is essential for a child’s growth. Of cause, someone can say that there are plenty of different resources of information such as books and teachers. But, I think, in our modern world children must learn faster and use all contemporary technology in order to succeed.

Secondly, watching cognitive programs helps children to learn more about wildlife, our environment and about the importance of preserving our forest and wild animals that live there. However, scientists say that a child should not watch TV for more than 40 minutes successively and not more than 2-3 hours per day. For example, my mother always made us have a break after watching TV more than half an hour and let our eyes rest for several minutes before turning on the TV again. She did not let us watch the TV all day long as well. I think it is the best solution.

To sum up, I believe that television gives children and all people the opportunity to learn what cannot be learnt from books. Television and movies, in particular, allow people to feel the reality and see what they will most likely not be able to see in their lives. Personally, when I was a child, I liked to watch cognitive programs about wild animals. Unfortunately, my family had only one TV, but these programs were the only ones we all wanted to watch. So, we gathered in our living room and watched them in complete silence. I always remember those moments with a smile.

Sample 9:

It is irrefutable that TV is a very efficient teacher. However, I disagree that children should be motivated to watch TV both at home and at school. I shall put forth my arguments to support my views in the following paragraphs.

There is no doubt that TV can be a powerful means of delivering information and a nice part of the learning process. Being an audiovisual medium more effective result can be achieved. What is seen is retained longer in the minds of children. There are some things which can be very easily taught by visual illustrations. Even boring subjects like history can be made interesting with the help of TV.

However, if TV is to be used as an educational tool, then very strict monitoring would be needed as to what children watch on TV. All those talk shows and soap operas we can see every day are a complete waste of time and can even have negative effects by distracting children from their studies. Moreover, most so-called educational programmes like National Geographic cannot replace books and academic lectures because they tend to entertain people and have not an aim to give deep and concentrated knowledge. It is highly unlikely that TV channel directors would abandon their profits and change talk shows to lectures and video lessons.

Furthermore, if children watch TV in school also then their interaction with the teacher would be limited. Teachers teach a lot of things apart from academics. They can come down to the level of the student and can also stimulate children to learn. What is more, children would read less when they learn everything from TV. Reading is an active activity as compared to TV which is a passive activity. So, it would be detrimental to the holistic development of children.

To put it in a nutshell I pen down saying that, although TV is a very good educational medium, it should be used within limits and whatever children learn from TV should also be carefully monitored by parents and teachers.

Sample 10:

Nowadays, many educational institutes are focusing on the usage of screens for learning in kids. Some people are of the view that learning through screen should be encouraged for young kids. My opinion, I completely disagree with acquiring knowledge through television screens. In this essay, I am going to support my opinion before giving a reasoned conclusion.

On the one hand, screening for long hours for educational purposes is likely to put strain on the eyes of youngsters. This is because television screens are likely to release rays that may impact vision in young kids. As a result of this, the younger kids will need to wear glasses at every age. Additionally, vision impairment due to screening is not restricted to weak eyesight but also to severe headaches for days or even blurry vision. For instance, nowadays, ophthalmologists believe that long hours of screening are the main cause of vision impairment in kids. Also, they emphasize the limitation of screen time for kids at a young age.

Secondly, viewing learning programs on tv continuously is likely to impact young kids' physical and mental well-being. As when kids do screen time, they are unlikely to do any form of physical movement. Hence, sitting constantly and just watching videos online will make youngsters lethargic and tired. Moreover, learning through screens, even at home, will result in obesity, leading to other personality development issues in young ones. Along with that, learning without a screen tends to enhance analytical and cognitive capabilities in kids. For instance, when learning through screens, kids only make use of a few of their senses, while off-screen learning involves the usage of many other senses. Undoubtedly, off-screen learning involves eyes, ears, hands, and touch, which also helps develop the brain in young kids.

In conclusion, learning through tv screen can impact the eyes in young kids and may lead to vision impairment. Also, constant viewing of tv screens is not good for the physical and mental well-being of young ones.

Sample 11:

It is acknowledged that children may benefit from watching television programs, such as educational programs. However, I disagree with the recommendation that watching television should be a regular activity at school and st home, as this would produce more negative outcomes than positive ones.

It has received wide cognition that many television programs can moticate children’s learning enthusiasm, thus encouraging them to expand their knowledge in terms of normal school subjects and after-school activities. However, there are still many problems associated with the increased time of sitting in front of a TV screen.

If children spend time watching television every day at school and at home, they may face the probability of suffering obesity, eye problems and back problems. When they are studying at school, it would be advisable for them to focus on learning, acquiring knowledge on academic subjects. Besides, more active and aggressive activities should be encouraged as they are in a physical state when they should participate in more sports activities. But watching television seems to do more harm than good in their physical development.

Furthermore, it is true that children waste a lot of time playing electronic gadgets after school, resulting in the fact that many of them have become highly addicted to these gadgets. If they are asked to watch television regularly, they would certainly lack interpersonal interaction. It would be more beneficial if they play games with their parents or do the housework.

In conclusion, although television programs would do good to children’s learning in some ways, they definitely would cause more disadvantageous effects if watching them becomes a daily routine for children.

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Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solutions?

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An increasing number of school leavers are currently having a negative attitude towards studying. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be tackled by some effective solutions.

There are some reasons why young people who leave school dislike learning. Firstly, the school curriculum is usually too demanding. Apart from attending lectures, students are also required to complete a large number of assignments and group projects, so they might feel stressed and exhausted after studying intensely. Gradually, they are against learning. Secondly, students often have to learn many unnecessary subjects that do not provide any benefits for their future. For example, when studying History, learners must memorise events in the past although they cannot apply this sort of knowledge into earning money later on. As a result, high school education might be considered a waste of time.

Fortunately, some measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be to make lessons more interesting. For instance, visual aids such as video clips should be added in order to attract learners’ attention. Therefore, studying would become a hobby rather than an obligation, and students would have greater motivation to learn. Secondly, lessons that are not necessary should be cut down, and schools should only provide knowledge that students can apply in their future career. When the number of non-essential subjects is reduced and the school syllabus becomes more practical, learners would really see the benefits of education.

In conclusion, school leavers tend to have a negative attitude towards learning because of several reasons, and solutions should be produced soon to tackle this issue.

Sample 2:

Education is crucial for personal growth and development, and it is essential that young people leave school with a positive attitude towards learning. However, many young people today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning, which can have long-term negative consequences. There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon, and several solutions should be explored to address this problem, and this essay aims to do that.

One of the reasons why young people may have a negative attitude towards learning is the way in which education is delivered. Traditional classroom settings may not engage students effectively or may not be adapted to their learning styles. Additionally, the curriculum may not be relevant or interesting enough to captivate students' attention. Another possible reason is the lack of support from parents or teachers, who may not provide enough encouragement or motivation for young people to succeed in their studies.

To address this issue, several solutions can be explored. One approach is to incorporate more hands-on, experiential learning into the curriculum, which can make learning more engaging and relevant. Another solution is to use technology to create more interactive and personalized learning experiences that cater to individual learning styles. Furthermore, parents and teachers can work together to provide emotional and academic support to young people, encouraging them to take an interest in their studies and to achieve their goals.

In addition to these solutions, it is important to recognize the role that the wider community can play in shaping young people's attitudes towards learning. Community organizations, businesses, and government agencies can work together to create more opportunities for young people to learn and participate in educational activities. By engaging young people in meaningful learning experiences, we can encourage them to develop a positive attitude towards learning and to become lifelong learners.

In conclusion, young school leavers with an adverse mindset towards learning are a concern, and that needs to be addressed. By exploring the reasons behind this phenomenon and implementing solutions such as experiential learning, personalized technology, and community engagement, we can help young people develop a positive attitude towards learning and achieve their full potential.

Sample 3:

Many young people, nowadays, complete their school education with a negative outlook towards learning and education as a whole. This essay will identify the root causes of this trend and propose a couple of effective solutions to address this situation.

The first reason why many youths possess a negative mentality about learning is that most schools focus on learners’ academic performance while putting very little emphasis on developing their practical and important life skills. This makes learning less interesting while making youths wonder about the fruitfulness of learning. Oftentimes, when students finish school, they realise that practical skills are more important than academic achievements in society and job sectors; thus, school-leavers are disappointed and lose their motivation to learn more. On top of that, the majority of teachers still use traditional methodologies in teaching which encourage and promote memorisation techniques for exams. As a result, students feel that learning is an arduous process, which is not stimulating at all. The result is rejecting attitudes toward further learning by school graduates.

This problem could be solved to a great extent by adopting some pragmatic measures. The most effective solution, in my opinion, is that education must be harnessed to students’ needs for their future, and educators prioritise that when teaching in schools. Essentially, schools have to look at how to meet the demand of a changing society and provide more practical skills and knowledge to their pupils. Since teachers’ pedagogy style directly determines whether students enjoy learning or not, teachers should kindle students’ interest in learning by applying more engaging methods in the classroom. Finally, youths should be rewarded for their endeavour to learn and apply their knowledge, and the government can play a vital role here. For instance, they could be engaged in teaching juniors, working in libraries, writing in newspapers, and working in other places where they can constantly learn, earn and use their skills.

To conclude, a large number of young people do not like learning after they leave school due to their negative attitude towards learning. I believe effective measures, such as changing the focus of schools, modifying teachers’ approaches to teaching, and engaging youths in works where they can earn and learn, could reverse the trend.

Sample 4:

In the modern age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the ongoing phenomenon that the young dropping out of school adopt an improper perspective on learning. Below is the essay outlining several reasons for this alarming tendency and then suggesting some feasible measures to tackle this issue.

There are two factors acting as the main culprits behind the current trend, among which the root cause is their mistaken belief that they can very well succeed in their career path without learning. Nowadays, younger generation is bombarded with hundred examples of such successful figures who leave school but still attain great achievements like Bill Gates or Steve Jobs, therefore leading them to the thought that success is not necessarily reliant on theoretical knowledge gained at school. Second, the knowledge-centered curriculum has partially restrained fellow students from learning on their own initiatives. Currently, the educational system is mainly emphasizing abstract theoretical knowledge rather than practical skills, not only making students discontented with what they are learning but also driving students to leave school in search of jobs instead. Therefore, it is totally understandable why school-leavers possess an adverse attitude towards learning.

Urgent actions are called for to put a halt to the trend of school-droppers possessing an adverse attitude towards studying. One is that editorial offices as well as TV broadcasters should either avoid publicizing stories of wealthy businesspeople who are fully uneducated or refrain from emphasizing that those outstanding figures achieved success by leaving school. The second proposal suggests that more down-to-earth knowledge ought to be introduced into the school syllabus in the hope of encouraging students’ delight in studying. For example, the university should organize field trips so that students can gain hands-on experience, not to mention improve their soft skills.

All things considered; I am of the opinion that errors in students’ misled outlook on studying as well as flawed education focus are to blame for this good-for-nothing trend. Therefore, measures aimed at reshaping their mindset and reforming educational methodologies should be applied to reverse this tendency.

Sample 5:

Education is part of our life. Some people think that it is important to pursue education seriously to have a better future while others decide to drop out of school to follow their own dreams. My essay will shed light on causes and solutions to this problem.

There are several reasons for children’s leaving school. With parents being busy with their career pursuit, children are possible to feel abandoned and find their learning meaningless. Once they have little interest in learning, their quitting happens more often. Another reason is attributed to schools’ boring and impractical curricula. Being crammed with a series of theoretical lectures, children lose their direction in learning and choose to leave their school. Furthermore, several students whose parents are of low income see no benefit in following exorbitant education and want to work, which is to help their families in times of difficulties. Equally important, some lucky kids, as a result of having a clearer direction of their lives at an early age, desire to start their own business.

School, to their mind, is of little value, after their journeys to success are defined. Bill Gates and Steve Jobs are telling examples.

Solutions to this problem are various. If parents pay more attention to the education of children, the latter will hardly take their learning for granted. Furthermore, no sooner are programs of learning revolutionized with more practical value than children are ready to go to school with excitement. Besides, teachers, apart from delivering lectures, should take into consideration the feelings of students to encourage them to go to school by organizing group-work activities, giving direct feedback and showing them the meaning of education in the long term. Several nations, thanks to implementing the policy of free tuition, make children more willing to go to school; in fact, children are prone to play truant or quit when finding that they have to pay high expense for education without realizing the true benefit of education. Governments, in a macro sense, should carry out the policy of requiring all their employees to have tertiary education and qualification in most fields. As a result, citizens have to equip themselves with knowledge and experience in no time.

In brief, causes and solutions are numerous, and hope that more and more children begin to love their school after these remedies are realized.

Sample 6:

Nowadays, so many young people who graduate from school have a rejecting attitude towards learning. In this essay, I would like to identify the causes of this situation and propose some corresponding solutions.

A wide range of factors contribute to the fact that many school-leavers have a negative attitude towards learning. In the first place, most schools focus on student’s academic performance much more than practical skills. Unfortunately, when students finish their schooling, they realise that practical skills are actually more important than academic achievement in society and career; thus, school-leavers are disappointed and lose their motivation to learn more.

Secondly, most teachers in schools still use traditional methodologies to teach their pupils which encourage memorisation and standardised tests. As a result, students feel that learning is an arduous process, which is not stimulating at all. Lastly, modern culture does not value education enough. Traditionally, education was highly valued, yet sadly, modern young people gradually value financial success more than education.

Fortunately, several effective solutions are there for this condition. The most urgent solution could be that education must be geared to students’ needs in their future careers and life. Essentially, schools have to look at how to meet the demand of a changing society and provide more practical skills and knowledge for students. Likewise, the responsibility for changing teaching methods falls on teachers. In essence, since teachers’ pedagogies directly determine whether students enjoy learning or not, teachers should kindle students’ interest in learning by applying more engaging methods in the class. Finally, the responsibility for promoting education rests with the government. As I would be hard-pressed to imagine that our future society value education less and less, it is high time the government started to educate the general public so that youngsters will see the value of education more.

In conclusion, a growing number of young people do not like learning any more after they leave school due to various reasons. So the key is, I believe, to take actions such as changing the focus of schools, modifying teachers’ approaches to teaching and promoting the value of education.

Sample 7:

The negative attitude towards learning among many fresh and young school graduates is a concerning phenomenon that hinders their personal and professional development. This essay will discuss the causes of this issue and propose potential solutions to address it.

One of the causes of the negative attitude towards learning is the outdated and rigid education system. Traditional teaching methods that prioritize rote memorization and standardized testing often fail to engage students and hinder their intrinsic motivation to learn. The lack of relevance and practical application of knowledge in real-life situations can lead to disinterest and disengagement.

Another contributing factor is the absence of personalized learning experiences. Students have diverse learning styles, interests, and strengths, but the one-size-fits-all approach in education overlooks these individual differences. When students feel that their unique needs are not considered, they may develop a negative perception of the learning process.

To address the issue, it is crucial to implement educational reforms that promote student-centred learning. This involves incorporating interactive and experiential teaching methods that foster active engagement and critical thinking. For example, project-based learning, where students tackle real-world problems, can enhance their motivation and sense of ownership over their education. Furthermore, creating a supportive and inclusive learning environment is essential. Schools should prioritize the emotional well-being of students and provide a safe space where they feel comfortable expressing their ideas and opinions. Encouraging open dialogue, collaboration, and respect among peers can help cultivate a positive attitude towards learning.

In short, the negative attitude towards learning among young people leaving school can be attributed to various factors, including outdated teaching methods and the lack of personalized learning experiences. To address this issue, educational reforms should focus on students that foster engagement, critical thinking, and relevance. Additionally, creating a supportive and inclusive learning environment is also vital.

Sample 8:

It is a harsh reality of today that many students are not satisfied with their education at school and have a negative attitude when they leave school. In this essay, I shall discuss some reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some ways forward.

The first and foremost reason is that even after having graduated from school they are not sure of getting a suitable job. They see examples of their seniors around them who are still struggling to find jobs and even those who have found jobs are being underpaid and exploited.

Another reason for their negative attitude towards learning is that their course of study was forced upon them by their parents and their aptitude was not taken into consideration. For example, a student who wants to make his career in the field of music is forced to study engineering and cannot be expected to be positive about his studies.

Another important reason is that the teacher-taught relationship is very strained these days. The ugly claws of commercialism have crept into the field of education. Education has become a business, and the student is the customer. Teachers are biased towards rich or brilliant students, and this is very detrimental to the education process.

There could be many ways to address this situation. Firstly, while selecting courses, the students’ aptitudes should be taken into consideration. Parents also need counselling in this matter. Secondly, the infrastructure of the educational institutes should be improved, which includes the faculty also. The pay scale of the teachers should be so lucrative that the best people want to enter this profession. Finally, there should be more stress in teaching a wide range of subjects rather than a narrow range so that when the student enters the job market there are a variety of choices for him to work in.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that there is no doubt that most students hold a negative attitude towards learning, but the problem can be addressed in many ways.

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Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Many people believe that a police force armed with guns encourages the level of violence in society. Other people maintain that an armed police force deters the level of violence. I think it really depends on how the guns are used by the police.

The obvious argument for having armed police centers around the idea that the show of guns by police is in itself a deterrent to violence. Citizens who may be contemplating an act of violence will be reminded that their own safety and welfare may be jeopardized if they are caught committing a violent crime by police. Thus, having an armed police force can in fact discourage the committing of crimes and violence within a society.

On the other hand, armed police officers’ use of guns may escalate violence instead of deterring it. If a police officer shoots at a suspected criminal, that violence may breed more violence, as the criminal might shoot back and then the police officers, the criminals, and even innocent bystanders could be injured or killed with the gunfire.

To sum up, most citizens expect the police to protect them by any means necessary, including guns. If citizens are not confident that the police are protecting them, those citizens might then decide to obtain guns to protect themselves against other citizens and the police. So, in those instances guns will lead to more guns and violence will breed more violence. However, if police officers are properly trained as to how and when to use guns, the guns they carry should provide a deterrent to the level of violence in a society.

Sample 2:

In some countries, the police force carries guns to fight against lawbreakers and protect the innocent. However, some people hold the view that it would give rise to a higher level of violence. As far as I am concerned, only when guns are used properly under certain supervision, can they serve to protect citizens.

Undoubtedly, guns are one of the most powerful weapons that the police can use to maintain social security and stability as it is the best deterrent to potential lawbreakers and scare off the would-be criminals. If the police force carries guns in public, there is a possibility that the potential criminals may give up their plans, thus reducing the crime rate. In addition, the police can use guns to protect themselves as police officers are one of the most dangerous jobs in the world. They need to protect themselves when they face criminals who are using weapons.

However, the application of guns can pose potential risks. First of all, it may lead to the abuse of weapons, especially in some western countries where ordinary people have the right to buy guns. Secondly, there is a possibility that the police may hurt innocent citizens accidentally when they pick the wrong targets, which also leads to social chaos. Thirdly, if every police officer caries a gun and walks in the street, people will lack the sense of security, and the society will have a horrifying atmosphere.

To conclude, the police can hold guns, but they should be very careful to avoid the abuse of guns. At the same time, the police must be trained strictly before being allowed to carry Weapons.

Sample 3:

Police officers carry guns and that is part of their job. They are entrusted with the job of enforcing law and order in society. When criminals carry guns, can we expect our police force to carry out their duty without the help of guns? Police officers do inspire the society. Children, especially, have a fascination for the police uniform and the gun. Does this cause an increase in violence in society? Well, that is debatable.

Because police officers carry guns and use them as and when necessary, it might give the impression that carrying gun is fashionable. It might also give the impression that guns are necessary for the maintenance of peace. In that case, it can be said that gun-toting police officers inspire violence.

Now let’s take a look at the other side of the argument. The duty of a police officer is to enforce law and order in the society. During the execution of their job, they face a lot of challenges. They have to deal with people of different kinds. How can we expect an unarmed police officer to effectively deal with a situation that might itself be violent? The gun, though it may be a sign of violence, is a necessity in situations like these. It also provides some security for the lives of our police force. When criminals are armed, police officers too need to be armed. That is essential for the effective execution of their job.

Looking at both sides of the argument, it is safe to assume that the gun is a necessary evil which the police force can’t do away with. What we need to do to reduce the incidences of violence is to create awareness about their ill-effects.

Sample 4:

I disagree with the statement that armed police force would promote a greater degree of violence. A number of arguments surround my opinion.

My first argument to support my viewpoint is that guns would, to a large extent, deter the potential criminals’ Police officers are those who are responsible for taking care of all the citizens, safety and wearing guns could largely make sure of this. For example, if someone has the intention to commit a crime, he would think twice about doing so if there is police carrying guns on patrol. Therefore, the level of violence would decrease rather than go up.

Secondly, criminals usually have guns and so, police officers need them in order to control crime. Instead of taking guns away from the police, it is more important to make laws against the general public having guns. Countries with weak or ineffective gun laws, or countries bordering such countries, like Mexico which has strong 8un laws, but virtually no way to prevent them from being smuggled over the border from the U.S., need a police force that is not only armed, but is armed better than the criminals.

Opponents claim that police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and also have crime in control. They have a point, but I believe that crime in the UK is under control because they are able to control the flow of guns to the general populace. Therefore, I reiterate my point that the police force should carry guns.

To sum up, because criminals can easily come into possession of guns, therefore the police force needs to be armed. Armed police in itself could never be a cause of increased violence. Nations around the world should hope to someday reach the point where their police force can afford not to carry guns and still be effective.

Sample 5:

On account of a series of commotions happening recently in a wide range of countries, a significant number of people consider that police officers carrying guns on patrol would promote the grade of violence. However, I am opposed to this perspective.

Police officers carrying guns and walking around are less likely to encourage the level of violent crimes. Police officers are responsible for deterring the latent criminals and taking care of all the citizens’ safety, which could be largely guaranteed by gun-carrying action. For example, some people may intend to commit a crime (=break laws/do something illegal), but there is a higher possibility for them to quit taking action if they are aware of the serious consequence of meeting a gun-carrying police. In this regard, the level of violent crimes tends to descend, and thus the standpoint that police officers carrying guns will encourage the level of violence will not hold water.

Conversely, some people insist that police officers taking guns on duty would inevitably raise the level of violent crimes. Robbery is a major case in point. If someone intends to rob a bank for money and they are entirely aware of the situation that police officers are equipped with guns, they are likely to make sufficient preparation for having a gun battle. If they were to be fired, there would be significant losses in terms of innocent people’s properties or lives, and this will probably jeopardizethe stability of society. However, if police officers are constantly on alert for any possible emergency and potential threat, there would be slim chances of committing a crime.

In conclusion, I have the inclination to maintain that police officers carrying guns would substantially decrease the level of violence rather than increase it.

Sample 6:

It is often believed by a few sections of society that the violence rate will rise if police authorities carry a weapon. However, some people, including myself, completely disagree with this view. I feel that to reduce the crime rate and protect themselves; Policemen should carry guns or other safety weapons.

The primary reason behind carrying a gun is to deter criminal acts. Thieves or criminals would think twice or be scared before commencing any crime if they know that police officer around them are armed. As a result, violence and crime will significantly reduce in society. For example, a robber might stop his criminal thought if he is afraid of police officials carrying guns could shoot him from a long distance. Contrary to this, failure to carry a weapon might give offenders a strong advantage in terms of their ability to commit violence without any corresponding risk. Another reason is that police officers can protect themselves and people from dangerous situations.
Certainly, many criminals keep various harmful and life-threatening weapons, which they can use against not only police persons but also citizens. Therefore, if there were no safety precautions for police officials, there, as well as people’s lives, could have come at risk. For instance, in many terror attacks globally, the terrorist killed innocent citizens and police officers. Hence, in such circumstances, to save innocent lives, carrying a gun is a necessary precaution for police officials.

In conclusion, although some people oppose carrying weapons by police officers in fear of violence, I completely disagree. In my view, to control and reduce the crime rate as well as to save people and own lives, police officials should carry a gun.

Sample 7:

Whether a police officer should carry a pistol or not is a debatable issue. A few people ponder that if a policeman carries a gun it can lead to more violence. I strongly disagree with this notion and will explicate my standpoint in subsequent paragraphs.

To inaugurate with, the fundamental reason why an officer should carry a weapon is because they are professionally trained to use a gun, so it will not lead to violence. To elaborate, an officer shall only draw a pistol in adverse circumstances where the lives of civilians are in danger. For instance, a recent news published by The Indian Express depicts that a policeman was able to protect the employees in a bank robbery because he immediately used his revolver to shoot and distract the robbers on site. Therefore, a self-defence weapon is required to be carried by police personnel for people's safety.

Another point to consider is that guns can be useful to maintaining discipline in society. In other words, some criminals are highly proficient in fighting skills, hence they can overpower the police officer so in these situations, a gun can be useful to instill fear in criminals. To illustrate, BBC news reported an incident where a group of fighters got into a quarrel and started hitting each other, a police officer was able to tackle this situation by pulling out a gun and arresting them all. Thus, a pistol can be a useful asset for an officer to handle situations wisely without violence.

In conclusion, from the above arguments, I would like to conclude that a police officer should carry a gun in order to maintain social decorum, as well as to protect the lives of citizens at risk during life-threatening circumstances such as robberies and shootings by offenders.

Sample 8:

It is generally believed that armed police could maintain social security by fighting against lawbreakers and protecting the innocent, though arming officers is not the norm in many countries. Some people hold the view that police routinely carrying firearms might give rise to a higher level of violence. Personally, I am in line with this view.

It is true that the police officers carrying guns could discourage the committing of crimes and violence within a society. The main reason is that weapons always serve as a deterrent to potential criminals. Those who intend to commit severe crimes, such as robbing a bank or a jewellery store, would think twice if they know the terrible consequence of being shot by gun-carrying police. Besides, gun-toting police officers can be more proactive in controlling the situation and force a criminal to surrender. In this case, gun ownership allows the police to avoid physical violence and make the arrest easier, reducing the crime rate to a low level.

However, the widespread use of guns among the police would exacerbate violence instead of deterring it. Firstly, always carrying guns reinforces a perspective where the policemen may bully or injure the ordinary. For example, a police officer could have run after suspicious and unarmed criminals but unintentionally giving a fatal shooting. This misconduct not only primes aggressive and resentful thoughts amongst civilians but also leads to social rioting events. Another point is the police shootings may contribute significantly to cycles of violence. This means carrying guns to tackle violent crime risks would erode trust between the police and the public. As a result, people feel less safe and equip themselves with deadly weapons for self-defense, which results in a higher grade of violent crimes.

In conclusion, although police forces have the right to be entitled to firearms to protect citizens, I believe that police should not carry guns due to the rising level of violence and unwanted consequences.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Sample 1:

In recent years, some countries have gained international recognition by constructing specialized training facilities exclusively for top athletes rather than providing sports facilities accessible to everyone. This essay will argue that this trend is ultimately harmful, as it prioritizes elite achievement over broader societal benefits.

Investing resources in specialized sports facilities may come at the cost of neglecting the development of sports infrastructure that benefits the general population. While these facilities may produce elite athletes, they may not promote sports participation for the broader population. Public sports centers, parks, and community programs that encourage physical activity are essential for building a culture of fitness that extends beyond elite competition, benefiting the entire population. The lack of access to such facilities could harm public health, particularly for those from lower socio-economic backgrounds who may not have the means to access private sports facilities. Therefore, governments must invest in a diverse range of sports infrastructure that is accessible to everyone and promotes physical activity and healthy living.

Furthermore, investing heavily in elite sports facilities can widen the gap between the rich and poor, as only those with access to these specialized facilities can benefit from them. This creates an uneven playing field, where wealthier individuals have greater opportunities for success and prosperity than those from lower socio-economic backgrounds. This perpetuates existing societal inequalities, where the opportunities for success are skewed towards a privileged few. As a result, society may become more divided, with only a tiny elite able to benefit from the resources invested in specialized sports facilities. To prevent this, governments should prioritize community-based programs that promote sports participation and physical activity for all. This can help to bridge the gap between the rich and poor and foster a more inclusive and equitable society.

In conclusion, by neglecting the development of sports infrastructure accessible to everyone, fostering an environment of extreme competition, and contributing to societal inequalities, the focus on elite sports could ultimately do more harm than good.

Sample 2:

It is observed that global prestige is achieved by constructing specific premises to upskill elite athletes in lieu of offering sports facilities for public use in some parts of the world. I believe that this has detrimental impacts on citizens, despite the fact that it can create favourite conditions for athletes to prosper.

On the one hand, the erection of specialized facilities for training talented athletes can facilitate their capacities. This is because outstanding sportspeople can be given better chances to further improve themselves, enabling them to maximise their potential. Therefore, they can give optimal performances in global competitions and are more likely to achieve rewards and success in sports, making great contributions to national achievements in this field. For instance, the Vietnamese government provided funds to establish football institutions such as Hoang Anh Gia Lai to train and support children who have an innate ability. As a result, numerous young talented football players such as Xuan Truong and Tuan Anh were trained intensively and excelled in football matches, enhancing the position of Vietnam in international sports.

On the other hand, this propensity can induce two noticeable drawbacks. Chief of these is that it adversely affects public health. More specifically, as the state budget is spent on building facilities for training top athletes in lieu of providing community sports facilities, there would be a shortage of open areas such as parks, gardens and squares which offer an abundance of resources for free exercise. Consequently, fewer places are offered for residents to exercise, potentially encouraging a sedentary lifestyle in the community and weakening citizens’ well-being. Another drawback is that it can trigger great dissatisfaction among citizens. As they pay taxes to enrich the government budget, they may argue they deserve to receive free fitness equipment and spaces and may feel discontent if the state funding is allocated to serve a small number of recipients only.

In conclusion, although investing in specialized facilities for professional sports people only can enhance their performances and improve a nation’s standing, I maintain that its consequences including deteriorating public health and generating dissatisfaction among individuals in society are more significant.

Sample 3:

In many countries around the world, specialised sporting facilities for top-level athletes are prioritised over those that cater to the general public. Although providing such facilities for everyone to use is extremely important, I believe that providing specialised facilities for high-level athletes is still a positive development.

On one hand, providing sport and exercise facilities for general public use allows people to enjoy the benefits that playing sport and doing exercise brings, which ultimately benefits a country as a whole in the long term. When given adequate facilities and equipment, citizens are able to improve their health and wellbeing by doing exercise and playing sport. By improving the overall health of the general population, a country will have less healthcare costs and a higher level of happiness and wellbeing amongst its citizens. Furthermore, by giving children better access to sports facilities, a higher number of young people are likely to excel in sport, giving the country a better chance at producing high-level athletes. Specialized facilities can further enhance their performance to a world-class level.

In conclusion, although sporting facilities for the general public are highly important, for those countries wishing to produce top-level athletes, specialised training facilities are of much higher importance.

Sample 4:

With the ever-developing enthusiasm for sporting events worldwide, professional sportsmanship has gained much investment nowadays in terms of new infrastructure. While some may see this development as beneficial since it provides more chances for success, I think that the specialized systems of sports facilities could gain even more positive outcomes if they extend access to potential amateurs or lease out some space to maximize profit.

It is irrefutable that sports centers are vital for the development of professional athleticism. In order to achieve the best results in international competition, athletes must not only engage in the strictest training but also utilize state-of-the-art equipment that may not be available in common sporting facilities. For instance, swimmers nowadays need specialized motion and heart rate monitors to calculate the exact breaststroke to optimize for the fastest result in a race. Hence, technological advancement is as important as hard work in modern sports. In addition, all Olympics-winning countries such as the US, China, or Japan have already had well-established stadiums and facilities for pro players to practice. This is to enable athletes to produce a stable performance since the training environment should be comparable with stadiums in real-life tournaments.

Though undeniably beneficial to top-tier achievement, the current trend in building professional infrastructure could produce more positive outcomes if there are more parties involved. First of all, youth development should be another target for investment in terms of providing modern facilities. All athletic career paths begin from young amateurs, and thus, teenagers should have the same training opportunities as their professional counterparts since they are a nation’s sporting future. Barcelona’s Barca Academy for football is an excellent example for effective utilization of existing estates for training both pros and youth. During every national tournament’s off-season, the Spanish team prioritizes its home field for talent training. This results in better usage of the stadium and enables the team to prepare for their future human resources. Furthermore, winning competitions and prizes alone cannot guarantee financial stability for any sports team. Therefore, Barcelona usually rents out its free spaces for the public to use and in return, continues to reinvest in talented athletes by raising their pay or purchasing even more training equipment.

In conclusion, establishing new sports buildings is beneficial for international success in competitions as technology these days increasingly plays an essential role in training and improving performance. However, sporting bodies should not only consider current achievement but should also cater to potential amateurs and financial sustainability for future development.

Sample 5:

Nowadays, international sports games have become a playing field for national sports industry to showcase their best talents and bring home positive publicity and admiration. Thus, some countries are willing to invest heavily in building specialized training complex to up skill their athletes, instead of fitness facilities for the public use. While I personally think this is a positive development, it also has some drawbacks that are worth discussing.

As mentioned above, the main reason for this trend is almost every country wants to be recognized for their sports industry. The only way to do that is to offer elite sports players high-class training areas including modern equipment monitoring athletes’ physical states. Another advantage of having domestic facilities is that the government can reduce the cost of sending the athletes team for abroad coaching. For example, Australia has long been well known for its gold medal swimming team due to their internally developed method of training and sufficient investment in infrastructures. Moreover, this trend of development may have a positive impact on younger generations who, in turn, will be more likely to choose sports professions, contributing to the booming of national sports industry in many years to come.

However, having said that, these training stadiums usually take up enormous cost of capital and limited spaces that would have otherwise been used to build public sports areas. As a result, people will have fewer places to go for exercises and play their favourite common sport such as badminton or swimming. Even when local gyms and fitness centres are built in some suburbs, it is not always accessible to people who are not from a well-off background. This may unfortunately increase chances of people leading a sedentary lifestyle which is totally against the active lifestyle that sports is trying to promote.

In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of building specialized training centres for top athletes clearly outweigh the minor drawbacks on the general well-being of the public. It is suggested that a balancing act is required from the authorities to minimize the potential drawbacks of the issue.

Sample 6:

In several nations, the construction of exclusive infrastructure to train professional athletes for international reputation is prioritized over offering sports amenities for the general public. From a personal perspective, I would contend that this policy manifests itself as a detrimental development due to several downsides. 

To begin with, placing more emphasis on providing top athletes with specialized facilities may exert adverse effects on the populace’s well-being. Indeed, allocating extra financial resources to enhancing sports stars’ careers equates to the deficiency of spaces and opportunities for ordinary citizens to exercise. This, in turn, can widen the existing social divide between elite sports and grassroots participation, engendering challenges for numerous individuals to improve their health, particularly among financially disadvantaged ones with limited means to access private sports amenities as opposed to the elite minority. As a consequence, communal engagement in sports and physical activities would be greatly discouraged, thus resulting in diminished overall public well-being.

Another unfavorable impact of focusing on elite athletes’ achievement rather than the broad population lies in dwindling prospects for national sports development. Admittedly, building world-class sports premises can bring honor and recognition for professional sports players as well as foster a positive image for their home country. Nevertheless, such a propensity overlooks the fact that the general citizenry also includes young individuals with unfulfilled potential for sports who require adequate infrastructure to maximize their capability. Consequently, this failure to discover and nurture would-be athletes from diverse socio-economic backgrounds could gradually undermine the talent pool for future sports advancement of a nation.

In conclusion, prioritizing investments in developing amenities for top athletes can detrimentally affect public health and sustainable sports development. Hence, I am convinced that more resources should be distributed to attending to ordinary citizens’ demands for the sake of societal growth as a whole.

Sample 7:

Sports facilities are essential for promoting human well-being. However, each country has different investing strategies with regards to these infrastructures. Some nations focus on building specialized facilities for elite athletes who can compete internationally, while others prioritize building generalized facilities for the public. This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

There are several benefits of focusing on training elite athletes and providing necessary equipment for their success on the global stage, mainly involving increased promotion of national pride and elevated spirit among the youth. Firstly, the investment in the best performing sportspeople may prove worthwhile when the athletes win medals and trophies in international competitions. For example, Vietnam has built numerous specialized centers with regards to training facilities and academies to nurture its talents to become champions. This has served to boost the country’s global influence and attract global interest in the country. Moreover, young people may follow these success stories and view the hardworking athletes as their role models, which may motivate them to overcome challenges and contribute to the country. For instance, Usain Bolt, the Jamaican sprinter who trained in a world-class facility, has inspired millions of black children around the world to take up athletics and become respected community members.

However, opponents of this suggestion also highlight other drawbacks of neglecting the needs of the general public when considering sports; public discouragement to exercise and social discontentment. Regarding the first argument, if there are not enough sports facilities that are accessible and affordable for the majority of people, many citizens may not exercise regularly and develop lifestyle diseases such as obesity and diabetes. This is instrumental to extra medical costs to recover the health of citizens. Furthermore, it can create a sense of inequality and resentment among the people who are subjected to a feeling of being excluded from sports opportunities. Hence, they may perceive the government, the rich, and the gifted as unfair and elitist, and lose trust and confidence in other governmental policies. If these basic needs were to be ignored for too long, the disadvantaged would engage in detrimental activities, such as protests and riots, further widening the gap between the state and the people.

In conclusion, there are pros and cons to each approach presented in this essay. The idea of supporting sports facilities, whether they are specialized or generalized, is beneficial for society regardless. Therefore, both proposals are not mutually exclusive but rather compatible, and state governors should balance the implementation of both for the well-being and prosperity of top athletes, the community, and the country.

Sample 8:

Sports are vital for human culture, as they offer various benefits for individuals and communities. However, not everyone has equal access and opportunities to participate in sports. Some nations prioritize building specialized facilities for their best athletes over providing sports establishments for the public. This essay will argue that this trend is negative, as it promotes inequality in sports and diverts resources from more urgent issues.

The main positive effect of establishing elite sports centers is to nurture talented athletes and enhance their performance in international competitions. Talented individuals are rare and need polishing. By allocating resources and funds to cater to top athletes, the government can give them an edge on the global stage. For example, China has built state-of-the-art training centers for its Olympic athletes, resulting in remarkable individuals. This logic expects that winning medals and breaking records will display the home country’s excellence, pride, and reputation, inspiring young people to follow suit. However, such scenarios are based on false narratives, and real data suggests that the returns on investing in performing athletes are limited. International competitions are dominated by the most prosperous nations, which have spare resources to invest in this area. If a developing country does the same, other pressing issues would be neglected.

The proposal of building specialized facilities for top athletes is also negative as it increases social inequality, promotes discontentment. Firstly, the introduction of venues that are restricted to only the best sportspeople may widen the disparity between the privileged and the normal, as only those who are gifted may afford expensive training and equipment, while most people are left with inadequate or no facilities. This can create resentment and frustration among the less gifted groups, who may feel discriminated against. Additionally, when little equipment is available for the public, some may feel less engaged in maintaining a healthy lifestyle, as they may perceive sports as exclusive to the elite only. This psychological misconception can have irreversible effects, such as increased health problems and costs for society.

In conclusion, prioritizing the construction of dedicated venues for top athletes is a negative development because it fosters social inequality and depletes the national budget. Therefore, it is sensible to suggest that the government focus on generalized facilities for the people to enhance their health and social harmony.

Sample 9:

In several countries worldwide, the trend of building specialized facilities to train athletes for international events has generated divergent perspectives. This essay will discuss both the advantages and drawbacks of this practice.

The establishment of specialized facilities brings certain benefits. Firstly, this can elevate underdeveloped nations onto an international pedestal, providing them with a platform to shine globally. For instance, an athlete in the spotlight can raise awareness for political instability in their homeland. Additionally, such facilities can cater to entertainment needs, allowing spectators to bond over supporting their national team.

However, there are several downfalls to this approach worth considering. Foremost among these is the concerning issue of exploiting young athletic talent. With many elite athletes starting grueling training regimes at remarkably young ages, the risk of physical and emotional distress is high. Moreover, by focusing resources only on top athletes, the average citizen’s access to sports facilities becomes limited. This could lead to health disparities, with fitness becoming a privilege for the affluent.

In conclusion, while the creation of specialized facilities can put nations on the global map and provide entertainment, it simultaneously poses a risk to young athletes and restricts access to fitness resources for common people. The potential negative repercussions, in my opinion, outweigh the benefits.

Sample 10:

There is no doubt that these days countries are spending more money on providing proper facilities for professional athletes rather than for the public. The question is, does it benefit the nation’s development? In this essay I am going to discuss both sides and draw my own conclusion.

In terms of the advantages of providing an infrastructure for athletes, these athletes are like ambassadors for their countries, and such deserve top training facilities. In other words, if they train very well, they will win and achieve a good performance on the globe stage. Thus, the reputation of the nation will be enhanced. Moreover, the countries with largest number of professional players are often those with the best sport facilities. For example, the South American counties spend more of their budgets on training their top athletes, and they bring prestige and worldwide attention to their countries.

However, there are several important reasons why the government should provide more public sports facilities than specialized facilities for professionals. First, the health of the nation is worth a lot more than the golden medals won by start athlete. Secondly, the declining number of people engaging in sport is in great part to be blamed on the lack of facilities. Third, some of the children of today will be the top athletes of the future, so they need to be provided with facilities to get involved in sport. Thus, authorities should provide more public sport spaces to improve the health and sport skills for their citizens.

In conclusion, although spending more money on training top athletes is beneficial for counties' development, it is more vital if the governments spend that money on providing public sports facilities. Therefore, I believe that the advantages of providing public sports facilities outweigh building specialised facilities.

Sample 11:

When it comes to a phenomenon that some countries prefer to allocate more money to facilities designed for athletes rather than spend money on public facilities, some people argue that such a phenomenon may be a negative development, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, the public may lack facilities for exercise without devices provided by governments. It is acknowledged that governments’ budget is limited but what governments need to improve is countless. Providing that governments use money to purchase more professional devices for athletes, comparatively, the amount of funds for public facilities will be reduced. Then, some communities may even lack sports facilities for their residents. Nevertheless, it is still a positive development for countries to focus on training professional players.

To begin with, constructing more devices specialized for athletes could serve to maintain their performances. In order to defeat others in international games, such as the Olympic Games, countries, even after gaining a lot of golden medals, need to guarantee that their athletes could perform better in the future. It is natural and reasonable for those governments to fund their players and offer them better equipment and devices. Then, their players could maintain their performances and countries could gain honor and reputation from those matches as well.

In addition, sports facilities could be better used by athletes. Even in some communities where there are a lot of sports facilities accessible, occupied by work, citizens may neglect those facilities to some degree. Compared with building facilities for the public, allocating budgets to professional facilities seems more effective since most athletes will make use of those devices quite frequently. Thus, funding athletes could lead to a better utilization of sports facilities.

In sum, it is still positive for countries to concentrate on training athletes and provide them with more facilities, considering that players are potent to perform better in competitions and they could also make better use of those devices.

Sample 12:

Allocating resources for specialized sports facilities exclusively for professional athletes is a common practice among countries striving for global recognition. While this strategy undoubtedly enhances national pride, it is ultimately detrimental as it diverts funds that could be utilized for the welfare of the broader population.

Supporters of this tactic argue that it enhances national cohesion, a phenomenon particularly evident during global events such as the Olympics. Nations like China and the United States have invested substantial amounts in developing sports infrastructures for potential Olympians, and the resulting medal tallies validate these investments. The impact on national solidarity is evident when citizens unite to support their athletes, temporarily setting aside domestic conflicts. This level of unity would be unattainable without specialized facilities for top-level athletes.

Conversely, these infrastructures primarily benefit a narrow segment of society rather than the majority. The funds dedicated to these facilities consume a significant portion of a government's budget, which is also required to address critical areas like healthcare, education, and defense. Therefore, directing funds towards preparing elite athletes for international events inadvertently deprives the majority of enhanced facilities. For instance, many urban youths in economically disadvantaged neighborhoods lack access to recreational areas, perpetuating a cycle of generational poverty. Repurposing funds designated for elite athlete facilities could enable the construction of amenities accessible to a broader, underprivileged demographic.

In conclusion, although the indirect benefits to national solidarity are significant, this practice ultimately has a negative impact as it caters to a privileged minority. A more equitable distribution of resources towards facilities accessible to a larger demographic is essential.

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1 điểm

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?

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Sample 1:

Cases of juvenile delinquency are increasing in many areas worldwide. In my opinion, this phenomenon could be attributed to a number of external factors. Punishment for offenders should be imposed according to the seriousness of the crime, and imprisonment should be reserved solely for extreme cases.

The main causes of juvenile crime are related to social background. To explain, many young offenders reside in impoverished areas without access to basic necessities or employment. Consequently, said children would have to resort to crimes such as mugging for basic survival and subsistence. Furthermore, youngsters from dysfunctional families could experience an absence of moral guidance and supervision from their parents due to negligence. This means that they would be unable to distinguish between good and bad, causing them to commit crimes without being aware of the illegal and immoral nature or the consequences of their actions.

The punishment for young delinquents ought to vary based on the gravity of the offense. To elaborate, when dealing with minor misdemeanors and petty crimes, a fine or warning could be imposed, accompanied by community work, such as cleaning up public spaces or assisting the elderly. For more serious offenses, other measures such as therapy or rehabilitation ought to be implemented to reform delinquents into responsible and law-abiding citizens. Finally, as they tend to exacerbate the problem, severe punishments such as prison sentences should be reserved as a last resort, imposed when other measures have failed.

In conclusion, I contend that several social factors are responsible for the rise of juvenile crime and that punishment should take into account the crime itself. The level of punishment needs to be appropriate to the severity of the crime, and harsh punishments such as incarceration should only be carried out for serious crimes when no other option is effective or viable.

Sample 2:

Crime is ubiquitous in every nook and corner of the world. The persons who are involved in committing crime are juveniles as well as adolescents and the conspicuous reason is lack of love, hectic schedule of parents. Parental attention, channelizing their energy can be good alternative for them rather than giving them corporal punishment.

First off, offspring commit crime owing to lack of love from their parents. To elaborate it, parents have a very hectic schedule, so they work round the clock and find no time for their nippers. This thing heightens their aggression, and they indulge in petty offences like picking pockets, robbery or theft. Moreover, parents fulfill only their physical needs and are incapable of meeting their emotional needs. Thus, children show their aggression by vandalism or shoplifting and expect to catch red handed so that they can attract the attention of their parents. Apart from it, they are immature and can be instigated by anyone. So, they commit crimes.

Furthermore, adolescents and children must be punished but here physical punishment will not work as they will repeat their anti-social behaviour after getting punishment as sometimes, they are sent to prison and this step exacerbated their situation more. In spite of it, their energy must be channelized to do constructive work and involving them in voluntary work seems to be a good option. What’s more, parents must spend some time with them in order to satisfy their needs. Also, they will be made aware of the repercussions of their actions only then they will be able to understand and behave according to the norms of society.

In conclusion, in consideration of above analysis, it is ostensible that youngsters trapped in illegal activities when they are unsatisfied as well as feel alone and to rehabilitate them parents must give their quality time to them only then they can follow their path well.

Sample 3:

It is obviously true that the rapid rise of juvenile delinquency has become a common concern of many countries in the world. This essay presents several reasons for this trend as well as discusses some punishments that should be imposed to address the problem.

To begin with, the most important driving force behind this phenomenon would be the lack of parental care. There is a fact that orphans, adopted children, and teenagers who live in dysfunctional families are more likely to have disruptive behaviour towards others and easily commit serious offences. What's more, poverty seems to be a root cause of crime. As a rule, the abject poverty has a huge psychological influence on adolescents, then they turn to crime to obtain money, as they have not found anything that legally gets them out of such a situation.

There are a number of severe punishments that should be meted out to young criminals. Firstly, juvenile delinquents whose crime is not serious enough to be put in prison should be ordered to do community service. In this case, young offenders are required to work voluntarily for a certain period of time on local projects. A second penalty for those who are found guilty is that they should be forced to make full restitution to the victims for the damage done. Finally, the court would put youngsters who commit a crime on probation. Put them under supervision of local police using electronic monitoring, for example.

In conclusion, the lack of parental love and poverty are the two primary contributors to the increasing rate of juvenile crime in many parts of the world. These aforementioned non-custodial sentences would serve as deterrents.

Sample 4:

Juvenile crimes are by no means a foreign phenomenon to any society, but there has admittedly been a rising trend of youths committing crimes of various scales in many parts of the world. Time and again, this has been attributed to a lack of parenting skills allegedly prevalent among young parents, mostly by folks from previous generations. However, this could not be further from the multi-faceted truth behind such a phenomenon. The rise of juvenile crimes could be easily traced back to a multitude of problems only known to the people of today, for this is the only time problems such as burnout and overexposure to information have ever existed. Youths who commit crimes must undoubtedly be tried as well, though often to a lesser extent. However, as opposed to correctional facilities, criminal youths are often sent to youth detention centres where they will be under the supervision and management of the appropriate government body.

Only a very small and superficial part of what is alleged of young parents as mentioned above is true. While it is often the case that lacklustre parenting often plays a key role in the misguided actions of youth, one would be astute to look beyond the blatant accusations of laziness aimed at these poor parents, many of whom are just trying to do their best. Many of the allegedly negative influences in a child’s life are often outside of the parents’ control, in one way or the other. For example, it has never been harder to monitor the content consumed by your child, much of which could be detrimental to the child’s development. Given how easily accessible information and media are nowadays, children often unknowingly expose themselves to content not meant for them, instilling in these youths’ ideas that they are too young to classify as right or wrong. Being a parent has also never been harder. Back then, parents used to have time to spend with their children after work, but now work has permeated so far into the lives of people that that is no longer a luxury many have. Given said current trends, it is only understandable that many youths do not receive enough affection and supervision from parents to learn the differences between right and wrong, as well as for parents to spot the early signs of wrongdoing.

Youths who commit crimes need to be taught to distinguish between what is right and wrong, and this needs to take place under the form of correctional programs and being tried in juvenile court. In very severe cases, youths who have committed crimes of especially serious severity may need to be tried as adults, though that is a topic for a discussion. In said programs, these youths must be taught societal values held as the norm in society. Furthermore, they need to be reprimanded just as adult criminals are though, as mentioned, to a lesser extent. Many youths in juvenile detention centre are often made to perform community services for a number of hours before they are returned their full freedom. However, it should be noted that juvenile detention centres are not meant to detain their occupants as do adult correctional facilities. They are meant to allow the government to act as these youths’ parents for a set time, once again hinting at the role parents play in the wrongdoings of youth.

Juveniles are, at the end of the day, adults at the most mentally fickle stage of their life, evident in the fact that most juvenile crimes are emotionally charged. For that reason, it is important that we give due considerations to cases where these youths are involved to deliver a judgement that is fair not only with regards to the crime committed, but also the child’s upbringing.

39. Tự luận
1 điểm

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

Whether people should be able to freely choose the sports or activities they want to partake in has become a topic of discussion. While some people argue that dangerous sports should be restricted, I firmly believe that the decision should lie with the players.

On the one hand, it is true that dangerous sports can come with several risks to the participants. Players always face life-threatening perils once they decide to take part in extreme sports, especially those that involve highly specialized gears, namely skydiving, motor-racing, or mountain climbing. However, experienced participants are, though rare, chances are that the required equipment can malfunction, thus causing the participants fatal wounds or even deaths. For instance, in May 2021, a first-time skydiver and his experienced instructor were hospitalized due to parachute malfunctions in McLaren Vale, Australia.

On the other hand, I firmly advocate for the idea that players should have the autonomy to partake in any sport. To start with, one’s well-being is first and foremost within their individual liberties, therefore, banning a person from chasing their passion is unreasonable, especially when they have fully acknowledged the threats that come with it. For adrenaline junkies, extreme sports give them pleasure. Preventing them from sports such as skydiving or snowboarding equals taking away their source of happiness. Moreover, in reality, the preparation for these dangerous sports is always painstaking in order to reduce the chance of mortality. For example, one would need to pass a skydiving certification course if they wish to skydive solo.

In conclusion, while extreme sports are dangerous in some ways, I am of the opinion that they can be beneficial to the players’ mental well-being and thus should not be prohibited.

Sample 2:

There is an ongoing debate about whether governments should impose a ban on dangerous sports or allow people the freedom to engage in any sport activity they choose. While some advocate for the prohibition of perilous sports, I believe that individuals should have the freedom to participate in sports of their choice.

Supporters of banning dangerous sports have some reasons for their position. First, they argue that certain activities pose grave risks, leading to severe injuries or fatalities. Activities such as skydiving, car-racing, mountain climbing, or paragliding involve a high probability of accidents that can strain healthcare systems and families emotionally and financially. Second, there is a valid concern that passionate fans might mimic these sports without proper safety measures, risking their lives and potentially causing accidents. For instance, individuals fascinated by car-racing might replicate risky behaviors on roads, surpassing speed limits, and causing accidents, putting themselves and others at risk.

However, I contend that people should have the liberty to engage in sports activities, provided they do not directly harm others. Initially, it is their personal autonomy to choose which sports to partake in. Hence, prohibiting someone from pursuing their passion seems unjustifiable, especially if they are fully aware of the associated risks. Moreover, defining what constitutes a “dangerous sport” is not always clear. Every sport inherently involves some level of risk, including seemingly common sports like football. Imposing an outright ban on specific sports might seem arbitrary and unfair, especially when risks are subjective and can differ among individuals.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns regarding the dangers associated with certain sports, I believe individuals should have the autonomy to engage in activities of their preference as long as their actions do not pose direct harm to others.

Sample 3:

Although some argue that governments should outright outlaw dangerous sports, others insist that individuals should be free to participate in any activities they desire. Both views have valid points, but I believe the latter opinion is more convincing as a total banning of such sports would violate individuals’ rights and liberties.

Those who advocate for banning dangerous sports argue that these activities put individuals and others at risk of severe injury or even death. For instance, extreme sports such as skydiving, bungee jumping and base jumping involve a significant risk, where accidents often occur. In some cases, the injuries sustained from such accidents can be life-threatening to both participants and bystanders. The government would be considered unreliable if it allowed complete freedom concerning any danger for these activities. For this reason, governments should be granted the authority to these activities to a certain degree, both for the public's safety and as a demonstration of their responsibility.

On the other hand, proponents of total freedom regarding dangerous activities argue that individuals should have the right to engage in sports they enjoy. Many people find participating in extreme sports an exhilarating experience that gives them a sense of accomplishment and pushes them to their limits. Banning these activities would deprive individuals of the opportunity to engage in activities they are passionate about. Therefore, I believe there should be only mild regulations in extreme cases where the activity may also affect bystanders, such as prohibiting spectators from standing too close to racing tracks.

In conclusion, although governments must safeguard their citizens, people also have the right to pursue their interests without interference from the state. Thus, moderate restrictions are appropriate, but a complete prohibition on extreme sports is unreasonable.

Sample 4:

Opinions diverge widely on whether dangerous sports should be prohibited due to the potential hazards to participants. While I understand this argument, my view is that people should have the right to participate in any sport they choose.

The principal reason in favour of a ban on extreme sports is that such activities are usually accompanied by a high chance of serious injury or death. A mountain climber, for example, is always in danger of a fatal fall even with the protection of climbing equipment. Furthermore, some of these sports not only render the players injured, but also the cheering spectators. Take car racing for example. In Japan in 2004, a Formula 1 race car crashed and debris from the crash flew into the crowd and caused serious injuries to both the racer and spectators.

However, I believe that people should be free to take part in any sport that they choose, and it would be wrong to stop climbing enthusiasts from challenging themselves and enjoying the invigorating experience of standing on top of a mountain peak. If these sports were previously banned, the world would not have witnessed the amazing feat of the first official ascent of Mount Everest in 1953. In addition, those who participate in these activities have to undertake rigorous training and experience for long periods of time to ensure they are in peak physical and mental condition in order to take up these hazardous sports. Therefore, the concern of the risk element becomes somewhat reduced.

In conclusion, it would be wrong to ban extreme sports, and I think that people should have the right to take part in any sport they want for the aforementioned arguments.

Sample 5:

It is commonly believed that extreme sports should be strictly prohibited due to the huge number of risks involved. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate that risk factors are present in all sports before suggesting that people should have the right to play any sports they want.

Advocates of banning certain sports may argue that their inherently dangerous nature may threaten lives. As extreme conditions are a prerequisite for these sports, risks like equipment failure render players more vulnerable than in other sports. For example, skydivers who freefall from enormous altitudes seem more prone to injuries or even death than players of ordinary sports. However, in reality, all physical activities carry a certain degree of risks, and it is difficult to judge which one is more hazardous than the other. For instance, acute pains like ankle sprains are prevalent in football or basketball as a result of intense practice drills and frequent matches, but it is unlikely that these sports will be banned given their popularity. Besides, people must undergo rigorous tests to ensure they are physically and mentally conditioned before participating in dangerous sports. Therefore, concerns over the safety of extreme athletes are quite irrelevant.

I believe that people should have the autonomy to play any sports they want, regardless of their danger. This is because they can already decide for themselves whether to take part in a number of dangerous non-sport activities. For example, those who reach the legal drinking age are free to purchase alcohol, the excessive consumption of which may have fatal consequences. If personal freedom is championed with regard to things like alcohol, it is argued that it should be extended to sporting pursuits as well.

Instead of an outright ban on extreme sports, I believe there are ways to mitigate the risks attached with them. Sports associations could impose an age limit for extreme athletes in order to ensure only people who are fully developed physically are allowed to participate. Another solution is to bar players from practicing or competing without the necessary protective gear. These measures would strike a happy medium without intruding people's personal freedom.

In conclusion, I believe people are entitled to play dangerous sports if they want, and certain restrictions in lieu of a ban would help ease the safety concerns.

Sample 6:

Sports are undeniably a vital part of our daily lives. While some people partake in casual sports, others choose to enhance their adventurous experience with thrilling sports. This has raised plenty of concerns among the authorities about whether to ban such activities or not. Both supporting and disagreeing views have their own legitimacy regarding safety and financial gains.

First of all, dangerous sports could potentially harm people’s well-being due to their unprotected characteristics and cost substantially to manage. While regular sports are played in regulated stadiums, fields, or under sufficient supervision from guards, action sports often happen in the wild where there is limited connection with the outside world. Take scuba diving for example, it takes place under water located near remote islands. Should any sudden accident happen, it would be difficult to contact emergency services. In addition, the local governments have to make an enormous effort to clean up coral reefs after every scuba diving tourism season. Therefore, playing sports in the wild might be costly to manage properly.

On the other hand, adventurers who participate in extreme sports are often professionals capable of protecting themselves against harm. Unlike common sports, these niche activities are only practiced by well-trained people with knowledge of navigational skills. For instance, jungle trekking is included in the routine training of soldiers to improve their combat abilities. In addition, trekking is also an important aspect of conservationists who seek to revitalize a region’s eco-tourism industry which could in turn bring more economical gains to all inhabitants there. Thus, under moderation, dangerous sports could potentially be safely handled and gain economical benefits to a wide range of people from different aspects of life.

In conclusion, although the raising concerns about well-being and finance about adventurous sports are legitimate, all variables should be thoroughly considered to balance safety and financial interest from all parties involved.

Sample 7:

In recent times, there has been a growing discourse on whether governments should enforce a ban on perilous sports. While some argue that such a prohibition is necessary for the safety of individuals, others believe in the importance of personal freedom to engage in any sports or activity. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives before presenting my own stance on the matter.

On the one hand, advocates for banning dangerous sports contend that it is a crucial step to safeguard participants from potential injuries. They argue that certain activities, such as extreme skiing or BASE jumping, pose significant risks to life and limb. Implementing a ban, they believe, would reduce the incidence of accidents and alleviate the burden on healthcare systems caused by sports-related injuries.

On the other hand, proponents of personal freedom argue that individuals should have the autonomy to choose their activities, regardless of the perceived dangers. They posit that engaging in risky sports can instill a sense of responsibility and discipline. Additionally, some argue that the thrill and adrenaline rush associated with dangerous sports contribute to personal growth and character development.

In my view, while safety is paramount, individuals should have the freedom to make choices about their own well-being. Education and awareness programs can be more effective than outright bans, empowering people to make informed decisions about the risks they are willing to take. This approach maintains a balance between personal freedom and societal responsibility.

In conclusion, the debate over whether governments should ban dangerous sports revolves around the tension between individual freedom and public safety. While a ban may seem like a protective measure, promoting education and responsible decision-making can be equally effective in mitigating the risks associated with perilous sports. Ultimately, finding a middle ground that respects personal autonomy while addressing safety concerns should be the focal point of this discussion.

Sample 8:

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others believe that people should have the freedom to engage in any sports or activities. Both perspectives have their merits, but I agree with the latter view.

On one hand, those who believe that dangerous sports should be banned argue that such activities pose significant risks to participants' health and safety. Players in extreme sports like skydiving, motor racing, or mountain climbing face life-threatening dangers every time they participate. For instance, activities such as bungee jumping and base jumping require participants to engage in high-risk maneuvers that could result in severe injury or death. Moreover, many extreme sports, such as boxing, promote violence, potentially encouraging aggressive behaviors, especially in impressionable young children. Exposure to violent sports can lead to imitative behavior and increased instances of bullying and aggression among school-aged children, causing long-term psychological harm.

On the other hand, proponents of allowing people the freedom to engage in any sports, myself included, argue that individual liberties should be respected. Banning dangerous sports is seen as an infringement on personal freedom and choice. People have the right to pursue their passions and make their own decisions about the risks they are willing to take. Preventing individuals from participating in activities they enjoy, especially when they are aware of the potential dangers, is considered unreasonable. Furthermore, participants in extreme sports often undergo rigorous training and acquire extensive experience, which significantly reduces the risks involved. For example, climbers like Alex Honnold spend years mastering climbing techniques and understanding rock formations, ensuring they are in peak physical and mental condition to tackle hazardous sports safely.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns about the risks associated with dangerous sports, I am of the opinion that individuals should have the freedom to choose and pursue their passions, provided they are fully aware of the potential dangers involved.

Sample 9:

While some support the freedom to play any sports, others advocate a ban on extreme sports due to their dangerous nature. While there are certain merits to such a ban, I believe that freedom of choice in sports is a right that should not be violated.

On the one hand, I understand why a proposed ban on extreme sports could be a sensible argument. The main objective of this regulation is to safeguard the well-being of participants, as there is always an inherent risk in extreme sports. In fact, there have been cases of serious injuries or even deaths in such sports as bungee jumping or skydiving. Even though the policy dictates the use of protective gear, there is always a risk factor involved in case of failure to comply or equipment malfunction. In light of this, a ban on extreme sports is expected to minimize the risks by altogether prohibiting people from taking part in such sports in the first place.

On the other hand, I believe that people are free to decide for themselves what sports they can do. Geographically speaking, it would be extremely challenging to enforce this kind of ban. Many extreme sports, like free fall and cave diving, occur in places off the beaten track and without police patrols nearby. This would definitely present a nuisance to law enforcement officers in identifying and putting a stop to incidents of the new law’s violations. Secondly, those who do extreme sports are often informed of the involved risks as well as safety regulations in advance. Thus, it does not mean they would venture into a dangerous sport without any knowledge of the potential hazards, or advanced training. For instance, if one wants to try skydiving, one has to register for a professional first, and those at the beginner’s level can only skydive in the presence of experienced divers.

To conclude, while a case could be made for extreme sports’ ban, I am convinced that people are at liberty to decide whether they should engage in a sport or not.

Sample 10:

It is becoming more and more popular these days for people to participate in extreme sports. While there are some people who believe that everyone should have the right to take part in such sports, I believe that the government should ban these dangerous activities.

On one hand, many people may argue that an outright ban on dangerous sports by the government would be an infringement upon people’s freedoms and their right to choose how to live their lives. While some may view these kinds of activities as being reckless fun pursued by thrill-seeking adrenaline junkies, other people gain a lot of personal benefit and fulfilment from certain extreme sports. There have even been many cases where extreme sports have saved particular athletes from a wasted life of drugs and alcohol, allowing them to channel their energy into a more worthwhile pursuit. By focusing on developing themselves through performing high risk activities, many athletes have managed to turn their lives around for the better.

However, not only do extreme sports place the participants at a high risk of serious injury, but also innocent bystanders and impressionable young children. These days, social media platforms such as Facebook, Tik Tok, and Instagram, are full of videos containing extreme sports and people performing risky behaviour. These types of videos can be highly influential, particularly on young people who try to imitate the behaviour and end up injuring themselves and others. By banning extreme sports, governments are helping to protect the lives of thousands of young people around the world who put themselves at great risk of injury, hindering their chances at developing their full potential in other fields of sport, academia, or career.

In conclusion, while some believe that everyone has the right to choose what activities they partake in, I believe it is the government’s duty to protect its citizens from harm, and consequently they should ban extreme sports.

Sample 11:

As some sports pose greater dangers to individuals than others, many people suggest that they should be prohibited. However, in my opinion, people have the autonomy to play any sports they want and thus governments should not intervene in such athletics.

At first glance, it sounds logical that a ban on all dangerous sporting activities is advisable. This results from the fear that such sports could lead players to serious injuries or even fatal consequences. The loss of lives appears to be horrible enough to think of calling a halt to partaking in such adventurous activities.

On second thoughts, however, what I believe to be illogical is the unacceptable violation of individual freedom if governments prohibit extreme sports, especially when the following factors are taken into consideration. First, there is no fixed concept of “dangerous sport”. What is hazardous to some people is not hazardous at all to others. This is similar to leaving home for school or work every day, which actually places people at risk of having traffic accidents or suffering from severe air pollution. But it is clearly not a viable option for governments to ban everyone from leaving home. Second, the main purpose of playing sport, whether dangerous or not, is to have fun, recreation and entertainment. Governments are established to serve the general public rather than make efforts to stop people from entertaining themselves. A great number of people, particularly athletes, find it impossible to live without strong sensations from extreme sports. Third, there are a multitude of solutions to mitigate the risk of engaging in dangerous sports instead of forbidding them. What governments can do is, for example, to limit participants by age and health condition or to issue standards of safety and protection.

Briefly, I am more supportive of the view that the issue concerned should remain a matter of free choice.

Sample 12:

Many think that the government should take an active stance of banning those sports which are life-risking while many still believe that the government should not hinder the freedom to do or to play any sport. Banning a sport can be a hugely debatable topic as banning a particular sport can put a halt to numerous people who are an expert in that particular sport. Both sides have valid arguments to take forward their notion but let’s take a tour of these arguments before concluding.

To begin with, every activity or any sport which we play in our life involves some sort of risk. The probability and the possibility of the risk may vary from sport to sport, but whatever we do may indeed involve physical risk or any other sort of risk. Many sports involve various physical injuries but banning them because of these injuries may sound weird and useless. For instance, games like football can sometimes cause foot injuries. The sport cricket can cause wrist or leg injury, but we cannot simply ban these sports for the safety of the player. Moreover, every player’s ability is tested before they participate in any sport. They are trained physically as well as mentally to fit into a particular sport.

Simultaneously, banning a sport can appear to curtail individuals' right to choose. Everyone has their own preferences, and the government should not impose bans on personal choices unless those choices harm others. Besides, banning a sport is more prudent to mitigate the risk factor and increase safety precautions to lessen the stress and burden.

To conclude, I would state that banning a sport is not the only solution to decreasing the risk. There could be many ways in which you can simply decrease and minimize the risk factor.

Sample 13:

Health and safety have become the top-most priority in every arena, whether it is the working arena or in the sporting arena. Nowadays there is a tussle between two different notions, i.e growing demands for banning dangerous sports, whereas many still believe that the government should not hinder the freedom to do any sport. So, let’s first place ourselves in the position of these two-sided people and then conclude.

To begin with, it is comprehensible that dangerous sports involve or can cause injuries or even death which is the unsought result for any sport. This physical torture or severe injury can even affect the minds of the audience and bystanders. Moreover, other sports promote the behavior of violence not only among players but can also cause it among the audience.

On the other hand, we have more compelling reasons according to which the government should not hinder the freedom of players. Many players believe that some risky sports involve adventures that can give them a platform to improve. Without risking one cannot improve oneself. Thus, many people believe that these adventurous sports can improve a player to a greater level. For example, mountain climbing is a kind of adventurous sport in itself. Once accomplished it gives a sense of pride and instills the quality of persistence and patience throughout our life. Furthermore, the players are trained according to the needs of the game. They are tested physically and mentally before being allowed to participate in any dangerous game.

To crown it all, I would state that some changes regarding safety should be made in a particular sport from time to time but banning it may affect the very spirit of sport.

Sample 14:

There is a world of concern regarding various dangerous sports that can risk the life of an individual player. Various arguments are supporting the ban on these life-risking sports whereas there are other compelling arguments against the banning of the sport. In my opinion, banning a sport is not appropriate, as it undermines the very spirit of the activity.

On the one hand, there are many reasons which explicitly explain why these sports should not be banned. Firstly, banning these dangerous sports is like banning the players from practicing their freedom. A government cannot hinder the freedom of an individual player. Many sports players find new zeal and enthusiasm when they play these sports. They develop themselves accordingly and enhance their quality of determination and persistence.

Additionally, these sports involve a lot of safety measures and set up which ensures that nothing could happen to the player. These safety measures should be ameliorated and changed with time and demand to ensure the full-fledged of a particular player. To summarize, instead of banning a sport, the government should invest more in the safety measures of an individual player.

Sample 15:

The contentious issue of whether governments should restrict dangerous sports pits the importance of public safety against the sanctity of individual freedom. Advocating for a harmonious resolution, this essay will delve into the necessity of protective measures and the virtues of personal choice, aiming to demonstrate that a judicious blend of regulation and liberty can safeguard participants while respecting their autonomy to engage in risk-laden activities.

Proponents of governmental intervention in dangerous sports argue that the inherent risks, such as those in extreme mountaineering or motor sports, demand oversight to prevent fatalities and serious injuries. They highlight the societal cost of emergency responses and medical care, asserting that thoughtful regulation can alleviate these burdens. For example, the introduction of mandatory safety gear and comprehensive training programs could significantly diminish life-threatening incidents, illustrating how proactive safety measures can bolster participant security without necessitating outright bans. Additionally, such regulations could promote a culture of safety, encouraging more people to participate with confidence in these activities.

On the flip side, supporters of unrestricted access to sports champion individual autonomy, stressing the importance of personal responsibility and the right to assess one's own risk tolerance. They contend that engaging in high-risk activities often leads to unparalleled senses of accomplishment, resilience, and personal growth, which are difficult to achieve in less challenging environments. The ethos of adventure sports, characterized by participants willingly embracing risks for the thrill and challenge, exemplifies this viewpoint. Furthermore, the economic benefits accruing from tourism and professional competitions in these sectors highlight the importance of preserving such freedoms. Advocates argue that these activities not only support local economies but also enrich cultural diversity and global competitiveness in the sporting arena.

In conclusion, though safety in extreme sports is crucial, outright bans impinge on personal freedoms. A balanced approach, incorporating stringent safety measures and education, best ensures participants' well-being without curtailing their liberty to engage in such pursuits, aligning public safety with individual rights.

Sample 16:

The ongoing debate over regulating perilous sports strikes a chord between safeguarding public welfare and championing individual rights. This discourse posits that while ensuring safety is paramount, the essence of personal freedom cannot be overshadowed. By examining the merits of both government oversight and the preservation of autonomy, this essay endorses a nuanced stance that values both safety protocols and the liberty to engage in such sports.

Advocates for regulation argue that the unpredictable nature of dangerous sports warrants government intervention. They underscore the tragedy of accidents in activities like base jumping and bull running, where the thrill can swiftly turn fatal. The proponents of this view suggest that structured regulations, such as mandatory safety courses and equipment checks, could drastically lower these risks. A pertinent example is the regulated skydiving industry, which, despite its inherent dangers, has seen a decrease in accidents due to stringent safety standards and mandatory training sessions. Such measures demonstrate that risk can be managed effectively without eliminating the sport altogether.

Contrastingly, champions of unbridled access to sports argue that such pursuits are fundamental expressions of freedom and personal challenge. They emphasize the transformative power of confronting danger, citing the personal growth experienced by individuals who climb Everest or surf giant waves. These experiences, they argue, are invaluable, fostering resilience and self-awareness. Moreover, they highlight the economic impact of adventure sports, which contribute significantly to local economies through tourism and events. The success of community-based initiatives in remote areas, where adventure sports have revitalized local economies, stands as a testament to the positive ripple effects of maintaining open access to these activities.

In sum, while the concerns for safety in extreme sports are legitimate, outright prohibitions compromise individual freedom and stifle potential benefits. A balanced approach, emphasizing enhanced safety measures alongside the safeguarding of personal liberties, presents a pragmatic solution. Such a stance not only ensures participant safety but also respects the intrinsic human desire for adventure and self-discovery.

Sample 17:

As extreme sports have grown in popularity, many individuals contend that it is bad policy for the government to forbid risky athletic events. The freedom to engage in hobbies may be compromised if all harmful activities are outlawed, despite the fact that the government has absolutely no influence whatsoever over the sports that people choose to engage in in their own leisure.

First off, since life is the most important resource, the government should step in if there is a sports event that poses a risk to spectators while also posing a hazard to players. This is true even if doing so limits one's freedom. For instance, fighting competitions should be outlawed because they promote violence and a very primitive outlook on life. How can seeing two people choke, punch, and slam each other to death be entertaining? Fighting should be restricted to the gym as a form of exercise and self-defence alone. Restricting individuals from participating in this type of activity can lower their risk of suffering lasting injuries in sports-related mishaps.

Nobody can, however, definitively determine if a sport is risky enough to be outlawed. It is unreasonable to forbid a certain sport by policy since every sport has a particular set of skills that must be mastered, and each person is capable of handling them differently. For instance, climbing Mount Everest is typically viewed as a perilous activity, but for a professional mountain tracker with experience climbing difficult mountains, it may just be a casual hobby. Therefore, rather than outlawing certain sports, the government should create workable alternatives like safety regulations and particular licenses for extreme sports.

The question of whether governments should forbid risky sports is debatable because it is their responsibility to control high-risk activities in order to protect the public from serious injury. Regarding individual freedom, it should be up to the individual whether they want to engage or not in risky sports, provided that they are proficient and fully aware of the hazards involved.

Sample 18:

It is true that there is widespread concern over the practice of extreme sports, to the extent that some people argue that they should be outlawed by government legislation. While nobody should underestimate the risks, I would argue that people should be free to practice such sports if they so wish.

On the one hand, critics of dangerous sports give strong reasons why governments should impose an official ban on such activities. Firstly, they argue that such a measure is necessary on safety grounds. There have been numerous incidents where members of rescue services have had to put their own lives at risk to save extreme sports enthusiasts who are in life-threatening situations. Secondly, it is necessary at times to infringe on personal freedoms because people who lack the necessary experience or who are not in the peak of physical condition sometimes take up dangerous sports. Such irresponsible behaviour can only be prevented by banning these sports.

On the other hand, I concur with those who argue that people should be free to do extreme sports, although I believe it is necessary for individuals to abide by the safety rules. One reason is that the imposition of sensible safety measures has been proven to minimize the risk of accidents and injuries. For example, all sports which carry a significant element of danger, such as scuba diving or paragliding, should be supervised by an experienced and professionally qualified instructor. Another factor is that there is now a range of essential sports gear to protect those who practice dangerous sports. Such equipment ranges from safety ropes and helmets to water- resistant clothing.

In conclusion, it seems to me that dangerous sports should be permitted, although those who take part have a responsibilty to adhere to the recommended safety procedures.

Sample 19:

Opinions are sharply divided over the issue of whether dangerous sports should be banned. Some advocate for prohibition due to significant safety concerns, while others argue for the preservation of individual autonomy, emphasising that people should have the freedom to pursue any sports or activities they choose. Personally, although I acknowledge the legitimate concerns about safety, I believe that the principle of individual freedom should prevail.

Those in favour of banning dangerous sports often cite the significant risks involved such as severe injuries or even death. Activities like cliff diving or extreme mountain biking carry inherent dangers that often lead to severe or even fatal accidents. What is more, many impressionable young people are not fully aware of the consequences of participating in such activities. For these reasons, banning extreme sports is necessary to prevent unnecessary harm and the emotional and financial impact on the participants as well as their families.

Conversely, advocates for personal freedom believe that everyone should be free to choose their activities, regardless of the associated risks. They argue that high-risk sports can be incredibly rewarding and offer personal growth and an unparalleled adrenaline rush. They further point out that with meticulous training and implementation of strict safety measures, the dangers of these sports can be considerably reduced. For instance, with thorough training and stringent safety protocols, the risk of skydiving can be substantially lowered, allowing participants to enjoy these activities responsibly.

In my view, while safety is crucial, it should not overrule people's freedom to choose their sports. Banning dangerous sports outright might prevent some accidents, but it also strips away the right to make personal choices about risk-taking. A balanced approach, where high-risk sports are regulated through strict safety measures and informed consent is a more reasonable solution.

Sample 20:

The popularity of programs such as American Ninja Warrior has led to growing interest in extreme sports like rock climbing and bungee jumping. This development comes with the question of whether these high-risk sports need to be outlawed, or if people are entitled to their choice of recreation. This essay will explore both views before giving the author’s opinion.

There are two main reasons justifying a ban on extreme sports. Firstly, these sports often pose grave health and safety risks. Most adventure sports involve high speed, risky stunts and harsh environmental factors, thus having a higher rate of injury compared to traditional sports. In fact, a US study has revealed that snowboarding was the primary cause of injuries among winter sports in 2007, leaving nearly 150.000 injured. Furthermore, action sports shows might fascinate youngsters and encourage stunt attempts. On TV, risky tricks like jumps and flips look easy since they are performed by professional athletes. Hence, impressionable adolescents, underestimating the training that goes into stunts, can try to imitate them out of curiosity or admiration, which could result in injuries.

However, where some may only see dangers, others see freedom of choice, and taking away such freedom would be detrimental to not only the professionals but also the public. For the former, partaking in adventure sports events serves as a source of income as well as a way to satisfy their adrenaline cravings. Should these sports be banned, athletes might resort to illegal means that do not guarantee their safety and access to healthcare. Additionally, to the general public, extreme athletes and the sports themselves are inspirations for surpassing the limits of the human body. Watching remarkable feats be accomplished certainly motivates people to overcome their own challenges in life.   

In conclusion, while certain perils go hand in hand with action sports, I believe that each individual should decide for themselves what kind of activity they would like to undertake as long as safety precautions are taken.

Sample 21:

There have been controversies surrounding whether extreme sports should be prohibited. While some people may support such a policy, my view is that it should be up to the players to choose which sports to participate in. Those who are in favor of banning dangerous sports might put the blame on the risks these activities bring about, such as a high chance of injuries or death, even with thorough mental and physical preparation. No matter how professional a player is, mistakes can always happen, which often leads to dangerous or even life-threatening situations. For example, skydivers who freefall from great altitudes may suffer from acute pain or even death. Another factor that advocates of these policies might bring up is the malfunction of equipment. If a parachute fails to deploy while airborne, for instance, a skydiver will have to face inevitable death. However, I am of the opinion that people should be free to participate in any sport that they wish. Firstly, it is a matter of morality, since it would be unfair to forbid extreme sports enthusiasts from taking part in the activities they love. Such hobbies may act as a thrilling escape from reality, where they can experience the heart-stopping feelings that their tedious lives could never offer. Secondly, the training needed in preparation for these extreme sports can help a person attain peak health condition. Finally, there are multiple ways which help minimize the risks that pose to players, such as bringing back-up equipment, or being accompanied by an experienced instructor. To recapitulate, although the dangers that extreme sports bring about should not be overlooked, I believe that everyone should have the autonomy to take part in any activities of their choice.

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As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Sample 1:

The relocation of enterprises to the suburbs has been promoted by many governments due to the rising issues of transportation and housing in central places. From my perspective, the benefits of this practice surpass its drawbacks.

On the one hand, the alteration of enterprises’ places would exert negative effects on their interests relating to the unavailability of resources and potential customers. Chief among these is that infrastructure and human resources are not immediately accessible in the suburbs. For example, major banks would suffer from inadequacies of well-trained employees because they are out of reach for high-quality graduates from many universities. Not to mention that enterprises moving to the outskirts would impede their businesses as profits cannot be generated easily. For example, the failure in attracting customers of high-end clothes stores results in their lower revenues, which negatively impacts the businesses’ survival in the market.

On the other hand, the moving of businesses to the countryside plays a pivotal role in reducing the number of over-crowding related issues in the cities and employment problems in the countryside. Concerning the former advantage, the change in companies’ operation place requires their workers to move from the center to the outskirts, which would significantly decrease the amount of transportation and population in the central areas. Therefore, congestion and rising housing prices would be less problematic, thereby enhancing city citizens’ living standards. In addition, businesses moving to rural areas creates more job opportunities for workers who live in those places. By joining the workforce, those individuals can generate more gains, which is paramount in lessening income inequality between rural and urban citizens.

In conclusion, the governmental encouragement of altering companies’ places of business may cause difficulties for businesses due to their inaccessibility of resources and lower chances of stimulating profits. Nevertheless, such a practice is deemed more advantageous in terms of its potential in diminishing the adverse effects of rising transportation and accommodation costs.

Sample 2:

With increasing population and urbanization, accommodation and transport problems have become major issues in many large cities. To overcome these issues, many governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. While this may have some advantages, it can also have some disadvantages which I believe outweigh the advantages.

On the one hand, moving businesses to rural areas can have several advantages. Firstly, it can reduce the pressure on the existing infrastructure of large cities. This can lead to better accommodation and transport facilities for residents. With fewer businesses and workers in the city, there will be fewer cars on the road, reducing the time and stress associated with commuting. Secondly, moving businesses to rural areas can create employment opportunities for the local people. These companies can create jobs in transportation, logistics, and other supporting industries. As a result, this can help to reduce unemployment and poverty in rural areas.

On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to moving businesses to rural areas. First and foremost, businesses may face difficulties in finding skilled labor. Rural areas typically have smaller populations, and therefore, a smaller pool of skilled workers. This can make it difficult for businesses to find workers with the necessary skills and qualifications, leading to a shortage of qualified workers, thereby reducing the efficiency of the business. Adding to this, moving businesses to rural areas can increase the cost of transportation and logistics. Rural areas are further away from major transportation hubs, and the roads may not be as well-maintained compared to urban areas. This can make it more challenging and costly to transport products.

In conclusion, while there are some advantages of moving businesses to rural areas, ultimately, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh these as reducing costs is the most important thing for businesses, and a thriving economy is more important than less congested cities.

Sample 3:

It is prevalent that governments are recommending firms to relocate to the countryside to alleviate issues regarding transport and housing in urban areas. Although this tendency poses a threat to the environment and may result in a shortage of skilled labour in rural areas, the benefits including more job opportunities for local people and the narrowed wealth gap between regions are more significant.

On the one hand, there are two drawbacks associated with encouraging enterprises to move to the countryside. The first is that it can trigger environmental damage in the area. This is explained by the fact that industrial activities implemented by these companies often release a substantial amount of waste. If such businesses pay scant attention to proper waste treatment, more untreated waste could be discharged into local water bodies and land, contaminating the living areas of rural residents. Another demerit is the lack of highly qualified labour. More specifically, as most people living in small towns and villages are less likely to receive sufficient education to pursue more intellectually involved professions, firms in such places often find it challenging to recruit skilled employees.

On the other hand, the relocation of corporations to the hinterland offers more noticeable benefits. The first one is there can be more employment opportunities for rural dwellers. To be more specific, although it may be hard to employ white-collar workers, businesses can still provide jobs for numerous blue-collar ones. As a result, they can acquire higher income and have a better quality of life. Additionally, this can minimise the financial gap between rural and urban areas. This is because an increasing number of companies operating in the countryside can enable the rural economy to thrive and attract more foreign investment, thus discouraging more people from residing in big cities.

In conclusion, I completely agree that the merits such as the provision of better job opportunities and the narrower financial gap in different areas over the demerits of environmental contamination and the shortage of highly skilled workers because these downsides can be tackled by offering relocation packages to skilled workers to convince them to work in rural regions and rigorous monitoring by environmental agencies to prevent any major environmental harm from discharge of waste.

Sample 4:

In large urban areas throughout the world, there has been a rise in accommodation and transport problems. This has caused businesses to consider relocating to rural areas, which can bring both loss and gain. In my opinion, the drawbacks of this decision outweigh the benefits.

Certain advantages exist for businesses which move to the countryside, the first of which is related to profitability. Rural areas tend to have lower property prices, helping businesses to reduce overheads. In some territories where governments provide tax breaks to incentivize rural businesses, it would also be beneficial to relocate one’s firm away from cities. Moreover, if companies start operating more in the countryside, more employment opportunities could be created for rural residents. This would certainly ease the influx of people migrating to the cities for employment, so overcrowding in urban regions, as a problem, may be alleviated.

However, the disadvantages are nothing to scoff at. One of the issues caused by moving business operations away from cities is the dearth of skilled labor. Rural areas’ usually smaller populations mean that the pool of skilled workers available is more limited. This would hamper businesses’ ability to recruit the right people, as a result. Additionally, businesses which decide to relocate to the countryside may experience transportation difficulties in that staff from urban areas will have trouble commuting. This is due to the change in traveling distance and more limited transportation options. Many of those workers, consequently, might try to leave the company if such a decision becomes official. The expenses incurred from retaining employees and training new replacements might end up canceling out any cost saving made.

In conclusion, despite the benefits in cost savings and government incentives, it might ultimately be detrimental for a business to operate in rural areas. As this decision’s disadvantages outweigh the gains, it is best taken cautiously.

Sample 5:

In the past, factories were often built close to city areas as the lack of transportation forbade people to do otherwise. However, this is not exactly the case today, when industries and businesses are moving from municipal and into countryside areas in flocks. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of this trend.

On the positive side, firstly, this movement makes perfect environmental sense. Due to industrial activities, residents of many cities around the world are still breathing in air and consume water dirty enough to cause numerous health diseases. Therefore, moving businesses out of the cities will rid human and other species of pollution. A further advantage of this trend is reducing the gap between the rich and the poor in a country, as countryside dwellers can opt to work in factories with higher pay, rather than agricultural work. This will eventually bring about peace and harmony to society.

On the negative side, doing business in the countryside also represents some notable drawbacks. To begin with, skilled workers are a rarity in rural areas. Most people living in small towns and villages do not receive sufficient education to undertake intellectual jobs. What is also disadvantageous is that based in regional areas, companies risk distancing themselves further from their customers, their suppliers and other partners in their business transactions, which can weaken their profitability.

In conclusion, moving business from cities to rural areas can be a smart decision. However, there are disadvantages that should be weighed carefully against the advantages.

Sample 6:

In many urban centers around the world, the escalating issues related to transport congestion and accommodation shortages have prompted governments to advocate for the relocation of businesses to rural areas. While this initiative has its merits, I believe the benefits of such a strategy can outweigh the drawbacks when implemented effectively.

One of the most significant advantages of relocating businesses to rural areas is the alleviation of urban congestion. For instance, cities like London and New York, plagued by traffic jams and overcrowded public transport systems, could experience considerable relief if businesses were dispersed to less populated regions. This decentralization would not only reduce the strain on existing infrastructure but also improve the quality of life for city dwellers by reducing commute times and improving air quality. Furthermore, this shift can contribute to a more balanced regional development, helping to address inequalities between urban and rural areas.

Moreover, relocating businesses to rural areas can stimulate local economies and create job opportunities. For example, the establishment of a manufacturing plant or a service center in a rural town can generate numerous employment opportunities, improve local infrastructure, and lead to an influx of investments in the region. This economic boost can have a ripple effect, positively impacting various sectors such as retail, real estate, and local services.

However, there are notable challenges associated with this approach. One significant concern is the potential lack of infrastructure and resources in rural areas to support new businesses. These regions might struggle with inadequate transportation links, limited access to skilled labor, and insufficient amenities. For instance, a high-tech company relocating to a rural area might face difficulties in recruiting specialized talent and ensuring reliable supply chains. Additionally, the transition period may be disruptive for both businesses and local communities, requiring substantial adjustments and investments to adapt to the new environment.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns regarding the relocation of businesses to rural areas, the advantages such as reduced urban congestion and economic revitalization of rural regions are considerable. With careful planning and investment in infrastructure, the positive impacts can significantly outweigh the disadvantages, leading to more balanced and sustainable regional development.

Sample 7:

The main problems that the cities face these days are accommodation and transportation. Because of this, the higher authorities are cheering up the businesses to relocate to the rural areas. The opinion in driving a conclusion in this may seem a little contradictory and it may vary from person to person. In my perspective, there are more cons than pros.

On the one hand, migrating from the city to the countryside may result in less traffic and pollution. As a wide portion of people move out of the city, it creates more space and less pollution. People from rural areas tend to move to the city in search of a better job and thus a better life. On the contrary, if the respective authorities take necessary steps to provide employment opportunities in the suburbs by promoting more businesses there. Then people will settle down there.

On the other hand, the infrastructure facilities in a rural area may not be that good to support a business. As we are aware, today’s most enterprises are functioning on the foundation of the Internet. It is impossible to even think of running a business with a poor network connection for even just an hour. This may even impact the productivity of the business. And thus affecting the profitability. This is a kind of circle that tends to repeat itself. This may lead the business to a heavy loss and thereby affecting the lives of employees.

There may be numerous workers available in the rural areas. But they will not be as experienced and skilled as those in metropolitan areas. This is mainly due to the exposure to technological advancement in urban areas. Also, these days many businesses primarily focus on the customers. The majority of the customers are in the city. It may not be beneficial for the business, as they may not be able to provide their services to their customers like how they were able to in urban areas.
To summarize, moving to the suburbs may appear to be a feasible option for lowering traffic and pollution. But the after effect may be immeasurably higher. Many difficulties may arise as a reaction and some of them may not be in the vicinity of us to solve. Hence, I restate that the cons outweigh the pros.

Sample 8:

Many companies are encouraged to relocate to the suburbs by the government. This is in respect to the rising accommodation and transport issues. They think that moving to the countryside would reduce the precedent issues. In my opinion, the benefits are comparatively more in number than the drawbacks.

On the constructive part, the population density in the urban areas gets reduced. It may have an immense impact on reducing the traffic congestion and the pollution caused by vehicles.

This also means that the quantity of waste that is exposed to the cities reduces. Industries generally have a lot of waste as their derivative. It cannot be properly disposed of within the constrained land. This results in raging huge pollution which is harmful to the dense population.

Furthermore, as more enterprises locate in rural areas, rural residents will have the opportunity to better their living conditions. As a by-product, the people in the rural areas prosper as a result of the increased employment opportunities. Resulting in higher per capita income and a higher standard of living. Besides, the empowerment of the nation lies in upbringing the economic condition of the rural areas. By shifting the business to the suburbs, this can be developed to some extent.

Nevertheless, a lot of drawbacks are attached to this. The sudden shifting of businesses from cities to rural areas is not an easy task. It may result in disrupting the ecosystem by clearing lands for construction purposes. Though the congestion gets reduced, it may affect some other businesses like restaurants, shopping centers, etc. Their revenue may be reduced as the number of people is comparatively lower. If planned and executed properly, all of these issues can be resolved to a great extent.

However, there are a few drawbacks to moving the businesses to the suburbs. But in the long run, there will be a balance in the economy and population. Which will ultimately be beneficial for the entire nation and human beings. In my opinion, the benefits have the potential to outshine the drawbacks.

Sample 9:

The majority of industries and businesses are located in urban areas. And the challenges associated with this have prompted the idea of relocating industries and businesses to rural areas. Although there are some disadvantages, I believe there are many more advantages.

Moving large enterprises and factories to regional areas has several drawbacks. Including transportation constraints, the cost of rebuilding, security, difficulty in attracting new employees, and lack of communication channels. As a result, enterprises and the government would have to invest a significant amount of money even before beginning a business to set up these systems. Which most businesses would find difficult to accept. But it will provide major benefits to both city and rural residents.

However, relocating factories and other businesses from cities to the countryside will lighten key issues. Such as pollution, traffic congestion, and housing issues in many areas. Many cities are concerned with overpopulation, and decentralization would be a significant step toward reducing the urban population. Besides, the economic development of a country is often dependent on the development of the rural region. And this step will ensure that the rural area develops properly. Many cities are polluted as a result of industries, factories, and other large businesses. And this move would ensure a healthy living environment in urban regions.

The cost of labour and land rental for businesses or dwellings in rural areas is significantly lower than in metropolitan areas. As a result, businesses may be able to save a significant amount of money. Which can be utilized to increase business scale in manufacturing or invest in other industries. Housing would be more inexpensive as well. It is commonly observed that as a result of too many people seeking to live in the city. Land prices and even rents begin to rise high.

It seems to me that all of the benefits of shifting enterprises to the countryside significantly outweigh the disadvantages. It will help both metropolitan and rural residents to tackle the housing and transportation issues to a great extent.

Sample 10:

Enterprises are encouraged to relocate to the countryside to address housing and transport problems that are rising in urban areas. In my opinion, the merits outweigh the drawbacks.

There are considerable benefits of relocating firms out of metropolitan areas. The first benefit is that this policy can ease the housing shortage in big cities resulting from overpopulation. Large areas of land which are released due to the movement of companies could pave the way for the construction of more residential areas. As a result, this will lead to the fall of housing prices and more people will have the chance to settle in urban areas. Another merit might be that moving firms to rural areas can contribute to resolving the pressing problem of traffic congestion in metropolitan areas. The huge influx of commuters into the city every rush hour would be reduced as many of these people would now be travelling to their relocated jobs.

However, there are potential drawbacks of moving organizations from urban areas to the countryside. These companies will have to spend a huge amount of money rebuilding their premises. Also, this relocation will take them a long period of time to restart business activities, thereby giving their rivals a great chance to dominate the market. As a result, their competitiveness may be adversely affected.

In conclusion, the merits of easing the housing shortage and resolving the problem of traffic congestion in urban areas seem to outweigh the drawbacks of affecting the competitiveness of these relocated firms. Given this situation, it seems that governments should make it easy for them to implement the relocation by introducing tax incentives or tax relief.

Sample 11:

People of the current generation admire living in a big city instead of living in small towns or villages. The government of such regions encourages businesses to transfer to countryside areas to resolve transport and housing. In my opinion, it is more beneficial in several ways if companies move to rural areas.

The government encourages businesses to move to rural areas. If they move to the countryside people will also move there for jobs. There are several reasons why civilians prefer to live in the city but, their prime reason is the job. They live in the town so they can earn good money. If businesses are grown in cities, the population will also grow with it. Because of growth in the population of cities, that city will start facing several problems like pollution, traffic, inflation, epidemic. But the main problem for the town will be transportation and accommodation for their citizens. To create sufficient accommodation for the civilian government, we have to start making homes by replacing jungles and gardens. This creates lots of trouble in the environment too. So, if businesses do not move to rural areas, it will create problems for the government, civilians, and the environment.

There are a few disadvantages if the business will move to rural areas. Firstly, when they move to the new area, they are not sure that their current staff who are working in will move to rural areas as they can find something else to earn. Secondly, businesses will have a lot of costs to build their project again, so there are chances that companies will not make a profit sometimes. Finally, business there can be less accommodation, so the government has to build houses before the business starts there, and it has a risk of lots of costs.

To conclude I would like to say there are a few disadvantages if the business moves to ruler areas, but the pros are way better and more than cons. So, the government should encourage companies to move to rural areas.

Sample 12:

Many people believe that housing and transportation issues in many big cities today, governments should relocate businesses to the countryside. While I accept such policies can have some benefits, I would argue that the drawbacks it has are more significant.

On the one hand, moving businesses to suburban areas can solve some major problems. Firstly, by relocating big organizations, many transportation issues in the city centre could be solved. The relocations of businesses mean office workers will have to change their commuting habits. Every day, they will go outside the city centre, which helps to solve traffic congestion in the urban areas. Secondly, many workers will move to the countryside, resulting in a reduction of population density in the city. A smaller number of people living in the city means the housings problems will be less significant.

On the other hand, these policies can have some drawbacks. The first one is that far away businesses will adversely affect citizens’ lives. Moving businesses to rural areas means that people will have to spend more time on transportation. For example, supermarkets being moved to suburban areas will make daily shopping cost more time and energy for city shoppers. Additionally, the relocations will make the links between businesses disappear. The reason why many businesses choose to stay in the city is to save costs. Imagine if suppliers have to travel a hundred kilometres more to reach consumers, such changes can result in the loss of billions of dollars per year. By being located in the city, businesses can perform most effectively.

In conclusion, I believe that the drawbacks of business relocations outweigh their benefits.

Sample 13:

As transportation and housing issues worsen in many cities, some governments encourage firms to relocate to rural regions. During the course of this essay, I would analyse the given proposal objectively before drawing a rational conclusion.

Obviously, the mentioned relocation would have undoubtedly many advantages for businesses and society as a whole. First off, decreasing prices for resources like electricity, water, and other commodities could reduce operating costs. Additionally, governments offer significant advantages to organisations who are prepared to locate their facilities in villages or towns, such as tax exemptions and better value property. As an outcome, businesses can generate substantial profits, which eventually would strengthen the nation’s economy. Additionally, this gives locals employment possibilities, preventing employees from moving to cities in search of employment. By doing so, the issues existing in metropolitans would be indirectly solved. To be specific, Positive effects on urban areas include the resolution of concerns with housing, transportation congestion, and pollution due to the possible low population density.

On the other hand, nothing is free from drawbacks. The large-scale moving of businesses should not be one without potential flaws. To commence, it would be challenging to hire skilled employees with a sufficient level of expertise, which might cause the process to stall. Employers, in particular, would face an additional burden of training inexperienced workers, which could be a consequence of moving to an area with a low background in education. On top of that, modern businesses and industries rely heavily on the availability of the supply chain; thus, a lack of facilities and services makes it even more problematic for firms to set up their infrastructure.

To conclude, despite certain difficulties, governments should endeavour to relocate enterprises to villages or towns since it would benefit both the public and commercial firms.

Sample 14:

Currently, there is a trend that an increasing number of industries and businesses are being established not in big cities, but in some regional areas. Some people support this phenomenon because it brings numerous benefits, while others argue against it. This essay will discuss the issue from both perspectives.

It is true that we have obtained a lot of benefits with the moving of industries. To begin with, living conditions in metropolis have dramatically increased with fewer factories. A great many factories will cause environmental problems, in particular air pollution, which is utterly harmful to citizens. In addition, it can improve the development of economy rapidly. The product can be more efficient because the contact between two factories becomes more convenient. Another important point is that fewer industries provide more spaces for the improvement of big cities. Thus, the government can utilize these areas to establish basic living facilities, like parks and hospitals, which are extremely essential to the population.

Conversely, there are also some drawbacks of this phenomenon. First of all, it is inconvenient to city residents that all businesses move out from the metropolis to regional zones. Workers have no choice but to take a long trip to arrive at work. Moreover, longer distances mean higher cost of transportation, which wastes a great deal of energy. Last but not least, it leads to more pollution in these areas. Water pollution is a case in point. It is not only deleterious, but also difficult to recover.

In summary, although there are a few shortcomings of the change, it seems that the benefits outweigh the downsides, because it makes our daily lives better. As far as I am concerned, it is a good idea to persuade industries and businesses to move out from large cities to regional areas.

Sample 15:

Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? The movement of organizations from urban areas to less-developed provinces is a solution to various municipal problems, but we cannot turn a blind eye to the shortcomings of this trend. The essay will clarify both sides of the coin and demonstrate my view that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

On the one hand, it is absurd to say that an organization can easily move from a major city to the countryside without suffering any losses. A change in terms of position may cost a firm, for example, a reduction in the quality of its workforce. Not every employee is willing to resettle in a faraway province, and they prefer seeking another career in the metropolis to maintain their current living standards. The enterprise, to handle such risk of brain drain, would have to hire local workers who are normally less competent. The expenses for their prerequisite training courses are significant, but an improvement in their professional performance would still not be guaranteed.

On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of this scenario are more important. Firstly, such relocation of organizations can reduce the population density in the urban areas. As a result, the influx of workers traveling in rush hours which causes traffic congestion would disappear. Secondly, the movement of companies’ headquarters makes way for the construction of more residential areas, so the citizens would no longer have to live in narrow houses and apartments anymore. Finally, factories carry along with them modern production lines to the suburban areas, hence the rural population might have access to such cutting-edge technological advancements, which have been by no means close to them ever.

In conclusion, I believe that governments should encourage companies to move to rural areas because of the mentioned considerable benefits.

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Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people’s quality of life in developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sample 1:

Education and technology are instruments for accelerating development in developing countries. The issue of debate is whether new technology should be provided in developing countries or free education should be offered. I believe that a combination of education and technology has to be given.

Those in favor of providing free education say that these countries need education before anything else. For the majority of underdeveloped countries, the quality of life is deteriorating despite several decades of development efforts. The gap between the developed and underdeveloped countries is therefore widening by the minute. It is very imperative that swift steps be taken to bridge this knowledge gap without which the economic and social disparity will widen even more rapidly. A good educational system should focus on laying the best foundation of knowledge and skill that are laid during the first years of education. What these countries need is good education and training that can match the technological revolution.

Supporters of technology say that most educational institutions in these countries lack quality educational materials. Library collections have become out of date and the laboratory equipment is most often old. Therefore, it would seem almost impossible for these countries to set up efficient educational systems without the availability of multimedia and information technology.

What is more, students can use technologies to access courses not available at their school; rural students can complete their studies without leaving their communities, and adults can take advantage of a more flexible study schedule. Cultural development will also benefit as knowledgebases of art, culture and history can be easily created, made widely accessible and easily updated.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the best possible thing to do would be to provide both education and technology simultaneously. It would also be a much cheaper alternative to provide education with the help of technology.

Sample 2:

There is little room for doubt that the equality between education and technology in terms of their influences on people's life has long been recognized. The matter of whether new technology should be provided or if inhabitants living in underdeveloped countries are entitled to free education has sparked a source of constant debate. I believe that a combination of education and technology should be the priority of any civilization.

Proponents of free education argue that academic perspective has long been regarded as the prerequisite to the affluence of any society. In simple terms, nothing seems to be more beneficial to the economy than an intelligent nation. The case is true that the standard of living in underdeveloped countries has been deteriorating in spite of countless development efforts over the past few decades, constituting the gap not only between the haves and have-nots but also between the wealthy countries and under-developed nations as inevitable outcomes. Even worse, the inability of individuals to collect the amount of money needed to pay school or university fees causes stress and anxiety for the majority of dwellers in poor countries, which might even prevent them from having children. It is imperative that strong steps should be taken to bridge this knowledge gap with the aim of eliminating the economic and social disparity. There is no doubt that free courses and study programs increase the likelihood of excellent specialists, who would work to bring profit themselves and hence their countries. That would surely compensate for most expenses of the state budget caused by education of no charge.

Despite the justification that has been given for making education free of charge, the state-of-the art technology is also the facilitator of the maturity of a social setting. In the developing countries, the advocates of bringing technological evolution have been made. While the invention of automobiles was a landmark in the technological breakthrough of humankind, the widespread use of computers and telecommunication technology has dramatically reshaped the nature of the society. Above all else, thanks to modern technology, people can spend less on compulsory activities such as working and tend to consume a larger proportion of after-work-life on non-compulsory activities. Modern technologies also account for the evolution of people's perception of society. People tend to develop, modify and repurpose technology for their own use.

Last but not least, the government should achieve an appropriate balance in allocating public funds to education and modern technology. Education and modern technology give an incentive to a better life both personally and collectively. Hence, the cost of education and modern technology should be distributed among people from the power, their locals as well as corporations. What is of ultimate importance is that the government makes this decision thoughtfully and ensures that the proportion is appropriate.

In the light of these facts, one can subscribe to the notion that well- educated individuals boost technological innovations and breakthroughs. Likewise, cutting-edge technologies play an important role in accommodating a better education. We cannot afford to ignore the beauty of any of them.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In today's globalized world, the availability of similar products worldwide is becoming increasingly common. While some may argue that this trend of homogenization is negative, I strongly believe that it is a positive development for various reasons.

To begin with, the availability of similar products worldwide is a positive development as it facilitates cultural exchange. When people are able to access the same products and services, they also become exposed to different cultures and traditions. This can lead to a greater appreciation and understanding of other cultures, ultimately promoting peace and harmony among nations. For instance, the popularity of Japanese anime and Korean dramas has led to a growing interest in Japanese and Korean culture among young people worldwide.

Furthermore, the homogenization of products and services can be beneficial for businesses and consumers alike. When products are standardized, they become more affordable and accessible to a wider range of consumers, regardless of their location. This can also help small businesses expand globally and increase their revenue. For example, the availability of Starbucks coffee worldwide has helped the company become a global brand and increase its revenue, while also providing consumers with consistent quality coffee.

Finally, the availability of similar products worldwide also promotes innovation and competition. When companies are able to reach a wider audience, they are more likely to invest in research and development to improve their products and services. This leads to a cycle of innovation and competition, resulting in better quality products for consumers worldwide. For instance, the competition between smartphone companies such as Apple and Samsung has led to rapid technological advancements in the field of mobile devices.

In conclusion, the availability of similar products worldwide is a positive development that promotes cultural exchange, benefits businesses and consumers and promotes innovation and competition. While there may be some minor concerns about this trend, the benefits of this trend make it a welcoming trend.

Sample 2:

These days, people across the globe can purchase the same products no matter where they are. As a result, some believe that countries are becoming more and more similar. In my opinion, this is a negative development, and I will discuss my reasons in this essay.

One of the main reasons it is a negative trend is because it undermines cultural diversity. When countries have unique products that are not found anywhere else, it showcases their distinctiveness. However, with the easy availability of the same products everywhere, these unique items may cease to exist or become less valuable. Furthermore, when people focus on buying the same products, they may start to lose interest in exploring and appreciating different cultures, leading to a homogenization of customs and traditions. One example could be the traditional craftsmanship of handmade textiles in remote villages. In the past, these intricate textiles were highly valued and served as a source of pride for the community. However, with the global accessibility of machine-made textiles flooding the market, the demand for traditional handmade ones dwindled.

Another problem with this development is that it can lead to a rise in environmental damage. When the same products are available everywhere, they are often produced in mass quantities to meet global demand. This can result in more environmental degradation due to increased manufacturing, transportation, and waste. An example of how the easy availability of the same products everywhere can lead to environmental damage is the mass production of disposable plastic water bottles. With the demand for bottled water soaring worldwide, manufacturers produce billions of plastic bottles annually to meet global needs. This mass production contributes to the depletion of natural resources and leads to a significant increase in greenhouse gas emissions during manufacturing and transportation processes.

In conclusion, while the availability of the same products worldwide can be convenient, I believe that it has severe negative consequences. It can lead to a loss of cultural diversity, which is an essential aspect of our society and can contribute to environmental degradation. Therefore, we should strive to preserve unique local products and seek ways to reduce our reliance on global supply chains.

Sample 3:

With globalisation, technological advancements and international agreements for open trade facilities, differences between nations in terms of their lifestyle, food habits, fashion, choices and traditions have reduced significantly. Since many international products are easily accessible globally, people now have far more choices and freedom, and it has enhanced people's lifestyles and narrowed the gaps among nations. I postulate this trend as a positive development.

To begin with, the availability of international brands like Apple, Nike, Pepsi, Samsung, Nestle, Unilever etc. enables consumers to purchase quality products. For instance, someone in India can use the same technological products from Intel and Microsoft that an American uses. This facilitates reducing gaps between these two countries. 'Barriers and gaps' among nations were a predominant reason for conflicts in the past, and with the advancement of technology and mutual trade agreements, nations now know about foreign cultures more than they did ever before. This diminishes global tension and helps prevail in global peace.

Furthermore, consumers are not trapped with low-quality local products, and wider freedom lets them enjoy a better lifestyle. With the competition, local manufacturers are forced to produce quality products at competitive prices. With this development, some local companies have also gained international recognition as manufacturers. For instance, the quality of locally produced cars in my country was average. But with the emergence of international brands a few decades ago, we now have world-class car manufacturing companies of our own.

To conclude, barriers and gaps among nations divide people and create a master-slave relationship among nations. The present era has plummeted this egregious trend to a great extent, and the similar lifestyle and availability of international products have helped this to happen.

Sample 4:

In recent times, globalisation has led to the homogenisation of cultures, particularly in terms of the products that people consume. The ease of buying products from anywhere in the world has resulted in a loss of diversity, which is undoubtedly a negative development. In this essay, I will discuss the negative impacts of countries becoming more similar due to the availability of the same products everywhere.

To commence with, the loss of cultural diversity can lead to a reduction in unique traditions and customs, which is a significant disadvantage of this trend. For example, when fast-food chains such as McDonald's and KFC enter new markets, they often replace traditional food options, leading to the disappearance of unique cuisines. Additionally, the loss of diversity can also have an impact on the way people dress and the type of entertainment they enjoy.

Furthermore, this trend can hurt local economies. When large corporations can sell the same products worldwide, it can lead to the closure of small, locally owned businesses. This can result in job losses and a decline in the diversity of products and services available in the local market. In addition, the prevalence of the same products everywhere can also lead to the rise of consumerism, which has several negative consequences. People are encouraged to constantly consume and discard products, which can lead to environmental degradation and an increase in waste. For example, the popularity of fast fashion brands selling identical clothing worldwide promotes excessive consumerism, encouraging people to continuously buy and dispose of cheaply made garments, contributing to environmental pollution and waste.

In conclusion, the homogenization of cultures due to the availability of the same products everywhere is a negative development. It leads to a loss of cultural diversity, a negative impact on local economies, and encourages consumerism, which can have several detrimental effects on individuals, ther environment and society as a whole.

Sample 5:

Due to advances in technology, the global production of many products has surged, allowing purchasers to access products that are almost identical in many respects. Thus, nations now have increased parallelism in all spheres. In my opinion, this is not exactly a positive development.

I strongly believe that the main downside is the loss of cultural heritage and variety that are intrinsic components of a nation. Several major companies have gained a significant share of the global market today. The consequence of the proliferating identical goods globally leads people to get far away from their customs and moulds. In general, people nowadays visit fast food joints such as McDonald’s or KFC, which have become ubiquitous on the streets instead of traditional food restaurants. This slowly alters citizens’ love for their culinary traditions.

In addition to that, modern society follows the trend of international markets. People buy products from global companies. But this presents a serious threat to both the environment and local artisans. Multinational companies are the only beneficiaries here. The small firms and manufacturers are unable to compete with big corporations and quickly lose market share. Also, there is a reduction in the need to recruit skilled workers who can produce goods with local flavour. Thus, the local skills of these people are also lost along with their primary source of income.

However, some people might see it as a positive development and might argue that with broader liberty, local consumers can enjoy a better lifestyle without being constrained to low-cost local products. Still, the cultural heritage will be destroyed, and unemployment will result if this scenario comes to pass.

In conclusion, the ease with which the same goods are available globally negatively impacts the local atmosphere and culture. It is thus advisable to consume locally produced goods and food items whenever possible.

Sample 6:

Globalization and technological change have become more widely accepted; similarities are growing among nations around the globe. This is often due to citizens’ access to global branded goods. While this growing trend may have some advantages, it is generally a detrimental cause in my perception with more disadvantages. 

When it comes to blurring national boundaries, globalization and technological progress go hand in hand, which has a few advantages. To begin with, globalization has created an enabling environment for global trade and commerce. Simply put, globalization discourages governments from imposing tariffs on imports and export, resulting in a dizzying array of products and, as a result, customers being able to purchase quality goods at a reasonable price. Mc Donald’s the world’s largest fast-food corporation serves as an excellent example. We can always find a McDonald’s cheeseburger no matter where we go, with over thirty thousand restaurants worldwide. 

But for the economy, this trend has devastating consequences. The most visible impact is unemployment. Unemployment is often caused by the lack of competitiveness of local industries. This has paved the way for large multinationals to expand by selling their goods at lower prices, while local entrepreneurs are forced to either lower their prices or face extinction. Moreover, countries will lose their unique identities and traditional ways of life and self-destruct. This trend, for instance, is responsible for the fact that traditional cuisine is losing popularity in many parts of the world. But for the economy, this trend has devastating consequences. 

To recapitulate, the widespread availability of the same products across the globe causes nations to become increasingly similar to one another, resulting in more negatives than affirmatives.

Sample 7:

In this modernizing era, advancement in technology has led to the global production of certain products, allowing punchers to access products that are almost identical in many aspects. Thus, nations now have surged parallelism in all spheres. According to my viewpoint, this is not an encouraging development.

The major disadvantage is the loss of cultural heritage and variety, which are intrinsic components of a nation. A significant portion of the global market is now controlled by a few large corporations. As a result of the global proliferation of identical goods, people are drifting away from their customs and molds. People nowadays prefer fast food restaurants like Pizza Hut and Subway, which have become commonplace on city streets, to traditional food restaurants. Citizens' appreciation for their culinary traditions is gradually changing as a result of this.

In addition, modern society follows the trend of the international market. People buy goods from multinational corporations. However, this poses a serious threat to the environment and local craftsmen, and only multinationals benefit from this. SMEs and manufacturers are unable to compete with large companies and are rapidly losing market share. There will also be fewer skilled workers who can produce goods with regional characteristics. As a result, these people's local skills are lost along with their main source of income.

However, a few other counters claim that it is a positive development and state that with border liberty, local consumers can enjoy a better lifestyle without being constrained to low-cost local products. Still, the cultural heritage will be ruined, and unemployment will result if this scenario comes to pass.

To sum up, it can be commented that the ease with which the same goods are available worldwide has detrimental impacts on the local atmosphere and culture. Thus, locally produced items are to be consumed.

Sample 8:

Nowadays, countries are not restricted by borders and are able to purchase similar types of products from anywhere in the world. In my view, it is an advantageous situation as it has deducted the travel cost for product merchandising and also it has created enormous opportunities for online jobs.

The first and foremost reason is, obtaining a specific good use to necessitate travel. It has been repeatedly observed that individuals have to travel for weeks or even months without sleep in search of desired amenities or foods because they are not available everywhere. As a result, they were put under physical and mental duress. Thus, due to a lack of food and water, the majority of the passengers had to perish. Although some wealthy citizens could afford such luxuries, they would be subject to exorbitant fees. Each year, for instance, air transportation can assist in the transportation of thousands of tonnes of necessary medical goods. As a result of this, we don’t have to spend money on extravagant merchandise fees.

Furthermore, widespread internet connection has demonstrated avenues for digital marketing opportunities, creating many new jobs for content writers, graphic designers, video editors, and more. Therefore, the indicated development has resulted in inquiries from several customers in the online marketplace. In addition to this, most electronics and beauty products can be counterfeited. Therefore, it is certain that the purchaser will refer to the reviews of the original goods.

To sum up, surging demand and supply for high-quality goods have brought the nations closer together. It should be encouraged to flourish in the business market more.

Sample 9:

Nowadays, the same products are available for purchase anywhere in the world, causing increasing similarities among countries. I believe this should be seen as a negative development for the entire world because it is making the world's cultures less diverse and could also be detrimental to the travel industry.

The availability of the same products all over the world is leading to cultural loss since a product is part of a culture. For instance, fifty years ago, most Indian people wore clothing like saris and dhotis. However, the expansion of global brands such as Nike and Addidas into the Indian Market has led to a rise in the wearing of western-style clothing among young people. As traditional Indian clothing is being replaced by western fashions, some of the longstanding values of that country are being lost.

In addition, countries becoming more alike could affect the tourism industry. Many people pay a visit to another place to experience something unique to that culture. For example, a survey shows that Thai cuisine is the feature of Thailand that is most attractive to international tourists. However, now authentic Thai restaurants can be found all over the world, which means people no longer need to fly to Thailand to have a taste of real Thai food. This could result in a decrease in the number of foreign visitors to that country.

In conclusion, I believe it is a negative trend that countries are becoming less different. For one thing, it is threatening cultural diversity, and, for another, it harms the tourism sector.

Sample 10:

International trade and globalization have made it possible for people to buy the same products no matter where they live. Because of this trend, people have become much more similar culturally than they used to be. While this does have some positive factors, I believe that it is primarily a negative development.

Before looking at the negative points, it is useful to understand the positive impact of increased global trade and the resulting similarity in people from different countries. One easy example is in regard to international understanding. People tend to judge each other by their appearance and thus a person with completely different clothing can instill fear into people who are not familiar with the style of clothing. However, with globalized trade, people wear similar clothing around the world, making it easier to see each other as fellow human beings.

Nonetheless, the negative effect of this increase in similarity should not be understated. Using the previous example, the rising popularity of western fashion has resulted in the death of many historical styles of dress around the world. In Japan, the suit and tie have replaced more traditional Japanese attire, and children choose to wear Nike shoes rather than Japan-made footwear. In addition to the obvious negative business effect that this trend has, it is said that traditional wear is being lost or replaced.

Overall, while there are certainly some benefits brought by increasing similarity in taste resulting from globally available products, the negative effect that it has had on culturally significant products is worrying. Unfortunately, it may be the case that in the near future everyone will be wearing the same brand of shoes and more historically and culturally prominent products will only exist in the museum.

Sample 11:

The increasing globalization of markets has led to a phenomenon where people worldwide have access to the same products, fostering a sense of similarity among countries. This development sparks a debate over whether this trend is a positive or negative occurrence.

On one hand, the availability of identical products globally can be viewed positively. It ensures that individuals across borders can access a wide range of goods, contributing to a more equitable distribution of resources and opportunities. This interconnectedness promotes cultural exchange and understanding, breaking down barriers and fostering a sense of a shared global community.

However, on the flip side, the homogenization of products can be seen as a negative development. The proliferation of global brands may lead to the erosion of local cultures and traditions, as unique regional products and industries face competition from standardized, mass-produced alternatives. This could result in the loss of cultural diversity and the distinctiveness that makes each country unique.

In my opinion, while the availability of the same products globally enhances accessibility and promotes a sense of interconnectedness, there is a risk of losing cultural diversity. Striking a balance is crucial to preserve the uniqueness of individual cultures and ensure that globalization does not lead to a monotonous, homogenous world. Governments and businesses need to work collaboratively to promote and protect local industries, thereby preserving the rich tapestry of global diversity.

In conclusion, the global availability of the same products has both positive and negative implications. While it fosters global interconnectedness, there is a potential threat to cultural diversity. Striking a balance between the benefits of global accessibility and the preservation of local distinctiveness is crucial for a harmonious and culturally rich global society.

Sample 12:

People may purchase the same goods anywhere in the world, which is causing countries to become more and more alike, which I consider to be negative.

The ability to find identical products anywhere in the world has led to a growing amount of similarity between nations. This has led to the depreciation of local enterprises which is undesirable as highlighted by the following negative implication of this phenomenan. For instance, Korean skincare products, especially those that produce the glass skin effect are currently having a huge market demand. Hence, it can be seen that Korean skincare brands have gained enormous popularity globally, thus suppressing the domestic skincare industries of a number of countries. These local brands are equally challenged in maintaining their market position and on the other hand, emergent brands are really struggling to challenge or invert this giants’ monopoly.

The globalization of products creates sort of a fake need or requirement among the populace. For instance, a branded smartphone which costs exorbidantly due to being imported rather than being produced in the country is bought with a view of enhancing a certain social prestige. The trend is even seen in the middle class of Indian society which put a lot of pressure on parents to buy these gadgets as children get pressured into buying it due to the influence of friends. This is a negative impact according to me.

Hence, the ability to acquire similar products across nations is responsible for the growing homogeneity among nations, which I consider to be undesirable.

Sample 13:

The ability of people to purchase similar goods being produced across the world has fostered a sense of equivalence among nations. I deem this development detrimental.

The fact exists that uniform products available across the world have led to a rapid process of globalization that ultimately resulted in the decline of local businesses, and this process has negative consequences. For example, Korean skincare, especially those that promise the achievement of the glass skin is famous and now in high demand. This has made Korean skincare brands gain substantial popularity across the world, thus pegging back the domestic skincare industries of so many countries. Therefore, strategic local brands as well as emerging brands consistently experience themselves battling to conserve their spaces within industry structures more so while evolving brands experience great difficulties as they seek to contend and overturn the monopoly influence of these global giants.

Furthermore, the globalization of consumer goods creates an imperative need in the population with the help of which people are manipulated. For instance, a costly branded smartphone that is imported rather than locally produced is a common example of this sort of consumer item that is bought primarily for status. This trend is very noticeable even among the middle class in Indian society and tends to put a lot of financial pressure on parents as children, due to peer pressure and rationalization, demand these expensive gadgets. I consider this as a negative impact.

Hence, the ability to buy similar goods across the Nations helps enhance the similarities between countries, which I consider as negative.

Sample 14:

It is true that globalization has made the world a global village and the countries are lot more similar than ever before. These days, people can have the same items from any part of the world, use the same technologies, construct similar buildings, buy costumes of international brands and develop infrastructure which are built and designed by international companies. A number of factors have led to this situation, and this trend, in my opinion, is greatly desirable due to various reasons.

To start with, people can purchase the most international branded items from their home country as almost all global products are available in a country that has allowed free international trade. This situation creates a tough competitive environment in the market and companies try to introduce new inventions to attract more people. So, people get better choices of products with higher quality as well as at an affordable price. For example, Toyota, a well-known car company of Japan has a lot of outlets in India, which is much more helpful for Indians to buy these branded cars without wasting travel expense to Japan. Branded costumes, cars, and other items make people and streets look similar, and I think this declines the discrimination in the world.

Second, global companies nowadays design and build many infrastructures and those are similar in looking. Apart from that, the popularity of Hollywood movies and Western celebrities inspire people all over the world to follow a similar fashion trend. This also contributes to the declining of differences among nations. This is helpful for people visiting and staying in a different county. They do not feel much difference in their experience of living in a totally different county.

Again, this trend helps to foster the migration of individuals to various places in the world. Besides, this also reduces the adjustment difficulties people usually face when living in a new place. For instance, Chinese people can consume their traditional dishes, even though they live in India, England, the USA or Australia.

In contrast, globalization, which makes the world look like a global village, often causes the loss of cultures and diversity of many countries. But considering the advantages it brings is we have no other way than to accept this modern phenomenon. This may negatively affect the local business owing to the larger influence and availability of branded items among common people. However, in the long run the local products get higher quality and can also spread its business opportunity globally.

To conclude, globalization and the similar way of life in different countries have made life far more luxurious and comfortable than in the past, despite some problems. So, I hope this phenomenon is likely to continue with more acceptances among people.

Sample 15:

Technology has spread in every nook and corner. It has not left any area untouched. The major effect of technology could be noticed on our communication. A few consider it a boon; whereas others think it has made them reserved. I think ok both views are correct as excessive use of anything has dire consequences. People should use it cautiously.

First and foremost, cutting edge technology has made people extroverted and they can talk with their near and dear ones at any time via electronic gadgets. Now people talk more rather than visiting in person. To exemplify, now people have more hectic schedules and if they want to visit or meet their loved ones, they are unable to go. So, here technology helps them in maintaining their relationships. They can make video calls and send messages. In this way, they remain more social and happier.

On the other hand, it is making people more depressed and alone. People visit less and irregular visits isolate them from their kith and kin. They get engrossed in technology so much that it does not allow them to go personally to meet their relatives. Due to it, they love living alone, and gathering around them makes them feel suffocated. For example, people use hi-tech technology excessively. They use it for a plethora of purposes like doing shopping, paying electricity bills without meeting each other. Thus, they live in their own world. Sometimes this isolation makes them mentally sick, and they remain depressed.

In conclusion, though modern technology has bestowed ample benefits; however, it has made people antisocial and due to it people suffer mental illness.

Sample 16:

Investing in high-quality products is vital to any enterprise's success. Almost every industry has witnessed a surge in advancement, including technology, gastronomy, fashion, tourism, and transportation. Most nations have become practically equivalent in the contemporary era, as goods are widely available around the world.

Additionally, the availability of a diverse selection of items from throughout the world offers various advantages. The primary benefit is that consumers may purchase things on e-commerce websites like Flipkart, Amazon, and Snapdeal that sell the commodities they demand. Additionally, the bulk of domestic and international businesses sell their products via websites that enable them to be marketed globally. People like to buy online since it provides them with discounts and rebates on their purchases, making the expense well worth it. As a result of the items' 24-hour availability, consumers have access to low-cost goods anytime they desire. This benefits not just customers, but also vendors.

Online shopping has also gained popularity in recent years as a consequence of technical advancements. Additionally, you could argue that anybody can sell or purchase virtually any object through a network such as the internet. The market value of small-scale enterprises has increased dramatically as a result of these internet businesses. Second, conducting business with international clients over the internet is straightforward. Additionally, local investors may now investigate foreign nations' return policies before investing. As previously said, entrepreneurship is the primary attribute that unites nations on a global scale and appears to be universal in nature.

To summarise, it looks as though the internet is the only way of exchanging resources and connecting individuals from other places.

Sample 17:

Without a doubt, the last 15 years have witnessed more development in almost every field, such as technology, food, fashion, tourism, and transportation, than in the preceding 30 years. In the modern era, most nations have become almost identical to each other, as the masses are able to purchase the same goods anywhere in the world. The essay will discuss the solid argument in the upcoming paragraphs, along with my opinion.

Indeed, having a variety of products all around the world has numerous upsides. One of the most significant positives is that people are able to buy products on e-commerce websites, such as Flipkart Amazon, and Walmart, which provide the goods that they need. In addition, most local and foreign brands offer their products on sites so that they can sell them worldwide. According to a survey conducted by the Times of India, 70% of consumers prefer to purchase products online, as it provides discount coupons and cashback, so they can buy items at a knock-down price, and they are available 24x7 hours a week. Thus, buying online is a positive development for both buyers and sellers.

Furthermore, online business has become a centralised hub because of modern technology. To put it another way, individuals can sell or buy almost everything over the internet. Research shows that the market value of small-scale industries has been rising with the centralization of businesses. Moreover, industrialists are able to deal with foreign clients easily via the internet. Added to this, local investors are now able to invest in foreign organisations by analysing their return policies and future predictions. From the above-mentioned factors, centralization has become the most significant aspect, which connects all countries together through any means, and it seems that they are all identical to each other.

To conclude, it seems to me that the internet is the only way to connect people from different nations by sharing resources with each other.

Sample 18:

The growing accessibility of the same products everywhere has sparked debates on whether this is a good or bad thing for the homogenization of the world. This essay will investigate both viewpoints and offer my opinion on the subject.

Those who view this as a positive phenomenon argue that it promotes cultural exchange and understanding. The accessibility of global products enables individuals from various regions to experience and appreciate diverse cultures. It eliminates barriers and promotes a sense of interconnectedness and shared experiences. Having access to the same products can also increase convenience and foster a sense of comfort when travelling or residing abroad.

On the other hand, critics argue that product homogenization can lead to the erosion of local cultures and traditions. They believe that when identical products are available everywhere, cultural identities are diminished, leading to a loss of diversity and authenticity. In addition, it can have a negative effect on local businesses and artisans, who struggle to contend with global brands.

In my opinion, the effects of global homogenization are multifaceted and dependent on numerous variables. While it can contribute to cultural exchange and convenience, it is essential to preserve local traditions and promote sustainable development. Supporting local businesses, artisans, and traditional craftsmanship can help preserve cultural diversity without sacrificing global connectivity or product accessibility.

Moreover, it is essential to promote sustainable consumption and practises. It is possible to mitigate the negative effects of global homogenization by promoting consumer decisions that consider the social and environmental impacts of products.

In conclusion, the increasing global availability of identical goods can have both positive and negative effects. Despite the fact that it can facilitate cultural exchange and convenience, efforts should be made to preserve local cultures, support local businesses, and promote sustainable consumption practises.

Sample 19:

With the widespread acceptance of globalization and technological changes, there is an increasing resemblance among nations across the world that is very often ascribed to the fact that citizens have access to the commodities from global brands. While this growing trend can reap benefits in some ways, I believe that it has more detrimental effects and hence a negative development overall.

It is true that globalization and technological advancement go hand in hand when it comes down to blurring national boundaries, which in turn brings a few advantages. To start with, globalization has created a conducive atmosphere to promote global trade and commerce. In simple words, globalization discourages governments from imposing tariffs on import and export, which eventually offers a bewildering array of products and, therefore, customers can purchase quality goods at a reasonable price. McDonald’s, the world’s largest fast-food chain, is a case in point. With more than thirty thousand restaurants across the globe, it is easy to find a McDonald’s cheeseburger wherever we travel.

Conversely, this trend has catastrophic consequences for the national economy. The most prominent impact is unemployment. Often joblessness is created by local industries being unable to compete. This means that the phenomenon has paved the way for the expansion of large transnational corporations with their goods at a cheap price while local entrepreneurs are forced to slash their prices or are doomed to extinction. Apart from it, there is a possibility that historical conventions and traditional heritage may no longer attract citizens. As most cities look alike, tourists would not be interested in visiting distant parts. Moreover, countries would lose their unique identity and traditional way of life which would be suicidal. For instance, the drop in the popularity of traditional meals in many parts of the world is due to this trend.

To conclude, the widespread presence of the same products in myriad parts of the globe leads nations to grow identical to one another causing more downsides than advantages.

Sample 20:

Differences between nations in terms of their lifestyle, food habits, fashion, choices and traditions have already been reduced to a great extent with the effects of globalisation, technology and international agreements for open trade facilities. Since most of the international products are easily accessible globally, people have far more choices and freedom, which has enhanced people's lifestyle besides narrowing the gaps among nations. I postulate this trend as a positive development and the reasons are explained in this essay.

To begin with, the availability of international brands like Apple, Google, Nike, Pepsi, Johnson's, Samsung, Nestle, Unilever, Amazon, Toyota etc. in a country enables consumers to purchase quality products. For instance, someone in India can use the same technological products from Intel and Microsoft that an American uses and it facilitates reducing gaps between these two countries. 'Barriers & gaps' among nations was a predominant reason for conflicts and with the advancement of technology and mutual trade agreements, nations now know about foreign cultures more than they did ever before. This diminishes the world tension and helps prevail the peace. Furthermore, affluent countries have created a vast market for consumer products, and this has helped them establish offshore offices and factories in developing nations. This is a mutually beneficial agreement that helps both parties.

Furthermore, local consumers are not trapped with the low-quality local products and wider freedom lets them enjoy a better lifestyle. With the competition, local manufacturers are forced to produce quality products at a competitive price. With this development, some local companies have gained international recognition as manufacturers.

To conclude, barriers and gaps among nations divide people and create a master- slave relationship as we have already witnessed in history. The present era has plummeted this heinous trend to a great extent and the similar lifestyle and availability of international products have helped this to happen.

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Government funding should only be provided for the best students as scholarships. Other funding of universities should come from student fees and private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Around the world, there are various ways that universities receive their funding. Some people believe that they should be partly funded through the government by means of scholarships for particularly gifted students, but that generally their funding should come from tuition and other sources. I agree with this position, but only up to a point.

Every government has some attitude towards educational funding, but most provide some sort of assistance to their country’s institutes of higher learning. In some cases, like in Scotland or Norway, governments pay for all students to study at university. However, in other countries they provide some support to excellent students, and let the universities obtain their own general funding. This system works well, but I think it should be expanded not just to include the most gifted students, but also to ensure diversity, which is also important for education and society as a whole.

We must also be careful in considering where other sources of income come from, as these will undoubtedly affect the quality of education provided. In many places, corporations and religious institutes will make contributions to a university; however, these may influence the university in some negative way. On the other hand, these donations provide valuable resources for universities that may otherwise struggle to raise funds.

In conclusion, there is no perfect way to operate a university, and a variety of sources for funding is probably the best that could be expected. The government should certainly contribute something, but perhaps it is unfair that they only cover expenses for the most intelligent students. We must also be wary of the influence of those who fund our schools.

Sample 2:

It is argued that a university scholarship should be awarded to the most effective students only. While I accept that rewarding the most excellent students alone is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that some other subjects should be taken into account when awarding scholarships.

Undoubtedly, the best learners deserve a scholarship for several reasons. Firstly, it is common sense that the most excellent students pay full attention to lectures and allocate the majority of their time to study further after school. Consequently, their academic results are impressive and a scholarship to motivate and stimulate them to persist in their excellent performance is essential. Additionally, awarding a scholarship to excellent school performers alone may save the governments a whole host of money. The key explanation for this argument is that the number of universities is too large, which may entail huge state expenditure if other subjects are taken into account. As a result, this might remove the financial burden on the national budget and the goverments could spare a larger proportion of tax revenue on other priorities such as healthcare or security.

Despite all arguments above, I strongly believe that a scholarship should also be awarded to some other subjects. First, disadvantaged students who have decent academic results, albeit not the best, should be recognized as well. In fact, their dreams of approaching tertiary education may fail to be fulfilled if they have to pay all enormous tuition fees incurred or seek private sponsorship which may take a long time and have no guarantee. Second, students who make the most progress also deserve to receive government funding. A scholarship may act as a key motivator for their diligence, encourage them to study harder and get better qualifications. If state support is always for the best, this goal may be too unrelistic for less skilled students. As a result, they tend to be demotivated and ignore their study.

In conclusion, although a performance-based scholarship system bears several benefits, it seems to me that national sponsorship for impoverished and less skilled but diligent students is also necessary.

Sample 3:

The allocation of government funding for scholarships to exclusively support the best students while relying on student fees and private organizations for other university funding is a topic that has generated considerable debate. While it is essential to recognize the value of merit-based scholarships, I fundamentally disagree with the notion that government funding should be limited to the best students alone.

First and foremost, the idea of reserving government scholarships for only the best students fails to account for the diverse talents, backgrounds, and potential hidden within the broader student population. This article is from laokaoya website. Education is not just about rewarding those who have excelled academically but also about identifying and nurturing untapped potential. Many successful individuals did not shine academically but showed remarkable skills and innovation in their later careers. Limiting scholarships to the best students may stifle the development of these talents and restrict opportunities for individuals who may excel in non-traditional ways.

Furthermore, limiting government funding to the best students perpetuates social inequalities. It often leads to a scenario where individuals from privileged backgrounds, who have access to better preparatory education and resources, are more likely to secure scholarships. This approach exacerbates existing disparities, denying access to higher education to many talented individuals who may not have had the same opportunities in their formative years.

On the other hand, government funding should be seen as an investment in the future workforce and the betterment of society as a whole. A more equitable distribution of scholarships and financial aid can lead to a diverse, skilled, and talented workforce that contributes to innovation, economic growth, and social progress.

In conclusion, limiting government scholarships to the best students is a myopic approach that neglects the potential of many deserving individuals and reinforces social inequalities. A more inclusive funding model that considers various factors, including financial need and non-academic talents, is essential to ensure that higher education remains accessible and equitable for all.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

There is a perspective that asserts that traveling to other places is not necessary to learn about the culture of other people, as information can be accessed through books, documentaries, and the internet. However, this essay will argue that firsthand experiences through travel are vital for gaining a comprehensive understanding of diverse cultures.

Firstly, traveling to other places enables individuals to form personal connections with people from different cultures. Interacting with locals provides a unique insight into their beliefs, traditions, and daily lives that cannot be replicated through other means. By participating in cultural activities, such as attending festivals, trying traditional foods, or engaging in local arts, travelers can gain a more authentic understanding of the culture. For instance, learning about Japan's traditional tea ceremony from books and documentaries is informative, but participating in one alongside a local host offers a deeper understanding. Travelers can experience the host's warmth and hospitality, observe their attention to detail, and appreciate the ceremony's intricacies, which are difficult to capture through written or visual media.

Secondly, traveling to other places helps challenge preconceived notions and stereotypes about different cultures. Exposure to diverse ways of life encourages individuals to reevaluate their beliefs and assumptions, fostering open-mindedness and a more accurate understanding of cultural differences. For example, many westerners may have misconceptions about Middle Eastern or African cultures, which can be dispelled through direct exposure and interaction with people from those regions. In this way, travel serves as a powerful tool for dispelling myths and fostering cultural awareness.

In conclusion, while it is true that information about other cultures can be accessed without traveling, I strongly believe that firsthand experiences through travel are invaluable for fostering a comprehensive understanding of diverse cultures.

Sample 2:

Some people say you don't have to travel to foreign countries to understand their cultures. Books, documentaries, and the internet are all great places to learn new things. While I agree that we can learn the basics about a culture from books, the Internet, and movies, I disagree that we need to travel there to fully understand its people and customs. My perception is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

Firstly, we live in a multicultural world where many people are curious about and eager to learn about other cultures. And I think it's important to constantly challenge ourselves by taking on new knowledge. These days, it's a breeze to educate oneself about foreign cultures with the help of online articles, documentaries, and books. Some people believe that by reading these, they have learned everything there is to know about other cultures. They believe it is a waste of money to go somewhere just to learn about the culture, so they refuse to go there.

However, many people enjoy travelling to different locations for the purpose of cultural education. Exploring the area on your own is the only way to get a true sense of it and pick up useful skills. The local cuisine, agricultural practices, and festivals can all be experienced firsthand by paying a visit. In addition, travelling to the region where a particular skill was first practised is the best way to pick up the nuances of that skill from the experts.

In the nutshell, there are many cultures to learn from, and each can be learned about through various mediums like books, online resources, and films; however, seeing the wonderful world through naked eyes is far more valuable.

Sample 3:

Experts are of the viewpoint that the lives of many different cultures can be grasped without travelling to other parts of the world. Books, movies, and the vast online resources available today make it possible to learn and gather information from many different perspectives. To give a more thorough explanation of my position, I will do so in the following paragraph.

The first and foremost reason for my inclination is that learning about a new culture no longer necessitates going to far-flung places, as technology has made that unnecessary. People interested in other cultures can learn more about them through a variety of resources, such as the Internet, movies, and books. For instance, a recent survey conducted in Australia revealed that the majority of its citizens know very little about a wide variety of different cultures. The availability of informational resources like books and the web makes it simple for them to participate and learn more about the rituals. 

In addition to this, it may be too easy for people who have mobility issues to attend events. Under those conditions, they can easily become immersed in the customs of other countries and feel the emotions of people in those places by watching films and videos. Some filmmakers design environments specifically for people who lack motor control. Thus, films that have an impact on one culture tend to have a wide reverberation throughout many others.

To recapitulate, the obstacle to studying foreign cultures is the scarcity of available time. Those interested in a more nuanced understanding of human history must make adjustments to their way of life in order to access reliable sources such as books, films, and the internet.

Sample 4:

Learning about the history, values, and practices of other communities enriches our own. I also think that media like films, books, and the internet are great ways to gain exposure to new cultures. I disagree that going to far-flung locations isn't essential for enjoying them to the fullest. My preference and the other side are discussed in the below paragraphs.

To begin with, recent years have seen a rise in the acceptance of "armchair" vacationing. Books, television, and the internet make it simple to study ancient and modern civilizations in great detail. This is the most cost-effective strategy because learning about the customs and history of a foreign country has zero marginal cost. In addition, you won't get worn out from travelling, so you can take it easy and enjoy yourself.

However, travel is a must in order to learn about other cultures. Learning a new language or culture is often more exciting when it involves direct interaction with locals and actual physical presence in the target country. It doesn't matter if someone is an expert on the cuisine, weather, or history of a given region. Seeing the place in person helps shape a more realistic image in their minds. They can enjoy the delicious food, relax in the lovely climate, and observe the historical development of the area. Not only that, but there is a plethora of other cultural considerations. For instance, non-native Punjabis living abroad are very familiar with traditional Punjabi culture. They frequently take their kids to Punjab. With the goal of educating them about and keeping them connected to their heritage in the area, its people, and its history.

To put it in a nutshell, indeed, books, TV, and the internet all have their uses. To truly grasp a new culture, however, I believe travel is essential.

Sample 6:

Visiting new places and experiencing different cultures are frequent ways to learn new things. However, other people now argue that people can learn about different cultures without having to travel by using the internet, books, and movies. Personally, I completely disagree with the viewpoint for a variety of reasons.

On the one hand, individuals who support the idea of learning through books, movies, and the internet do so for a variety of reasons. The element of money is one of the likely answers. To put it another way, people from lower- and middle-income levels would enjoy learning about the cultures of other people in this way. They would do this by accessing a variety of free resources that are available online, which would enable them to do so at a lower cost. As an example, consider Vietnam. No matter their financial situation, many families may find it difficult to afford the cost of travelling to study in other locations. Because of this, choosing to learn from such materials may be advantageous to them, prompting them to continue holding the same opinion.

However, I truly believe that travelling may provide more advantages to people than disadvantages, despite the fact that it may be a more economical option. In the first place, this is a vivid way to learn about and fully comprehend the cultures and lifestyles of other people. For instance, people might easily obtain a deeper understanding of their past with emotions by interacting with the locals through trips to historical places. Travellers also have a propensity to engage in social interactions with strangers, which may greatly improve their communication skills.

As a result, I firmly believe that for the aforementioned reasons, travelling may be preferable. In conclusion, I firmly feel that there are still opportunities for distance learning due to the many benefits it offers. Depending on their incomes, people may have more options for where to study in the future. Additionally, the practice of studying while travelling may be improved so that it may accommodate futuristic circumstances.

Sample 7:

There is no denying that the globe has transformed into a global community. It is not necessary to tour the world to understand the realities of many civilizations. As a result, information may be learned and gathered from a variety of sources, including books, movies, and websites that contain a wealth of knowledge online. I do, however, largely agree with the assertion. In the next paragraph, I'd like to elaborate on my opinion in more detail.

Technology has completely replaced travel to remote locations for the purpose of learning about the culture. For instance, there are many websites, films, and books accessible that people can use to find the various cultures they are interested in. Additionally, starting a commute and going somewhere else costs a lot of money and takes up valuable time. For example, a recent survey in Australia found that there are many cultures that the majority of people are unfamiliar with. They can easily engage with the help of books and the internet, which helps to collect some interesting facts about the rituals. To add to this, some minor places of cultures do not easily get in touch with them due to a lack of transportation modes.

The fact that this is too convenient for those who are disabled and unable to access many venues is another concern. In that circumstance, they can readily engage with the cultures of different nations and experience their feelings through movies and videos. For those who are unable to control their bodies properly, some film directors create ambiance just for them. As a result, influential films have a big impact on a variety of cultures.

In summary, I'd like to explain that not everyone is strong due to their ancestry. And that lack of time is another barrier to learning about different nationalities. As a result, those who want to learn about the specific history of civilizations modify their lifestyle through books, movies, and the internet.

Sample 8:

It is argued that travelling is not essential when people desire to gain understanding about different cultures, thanks to a great deal of information in books, films and online. While I accept that the latter has a number of benefits, I believe that the former could be advantageous to some extent.

On the one hand, learning about culture through books, movies and the internet could bring a wide range of advantages. Firstly, people could save a great deal of time by doing this. Instead of wasting several weeks visiting places, they now find it much easier to just stay at home to broaden their knowledge about different cultures, due to the breakthrough in storing and providing information. Secondly, the amount of information which is provided via these kinds of media is limitless. It is accessible and easy for people to discover national cultures, which are usually portrayed in books, films and especially on the internet.

On the other hand, visiting different places could be beneficial in some ways. First, tourists could gain real and valuable experience through trips. For example, many of the tourists to Thailand go to watch the shows of transgender models and claim that they could understand the difficulties of these people. As a result, people would show much more positive attitudes towards transsexual men and women. Furthermore, travelling gives tourists countless opportunities to make friends from different places. Tourism could help people to build up valuable relationships because they may have chances to not only meet but also share feelings with other tourists from an array of countries.

In conclusion, while I support the idea that books, films and the internet could bring benefits to people to learn about different cultural aspects, actual travelling is by no means unnecessary when tourists want to discover lifestyles and national customs of different cultures.

Sample 9:

Many people believe that books, movies and the internet enable them to learn as much about culture as travel does, so they do not have to go on a trip to other destinations for such a purpose. However, while I admit that those channels are informative, they fail to provide the learners with the latest information or practical experiences; therefore, people still need to go travelling to learn about culture.

On the one hand, there are many sources from which everyone can learn about the culture of a place without visiting there. Firstly, they can have more understanding of cultural traits of a region by reading books that include pictures and descriptions about that region’s culture, such as how they cook their local ingredients or greet foreigners. Documentary movies are also of great help as most of them provide the audience with sound effects, allowing learners to hear the locals’ voices and languages. On top of that, culture can be learned through the internet, on which people can access a variety of video clips or articles published by various travellers, so learners can acquire more diverse information from different angles.

On the other hand, I believe that it is better for learners to pay a visit to the country whose culture they want to know more about. Although abundant, the information provided by books and movies might soon be out-of-date because the world is always changing, and therefore, what was written or recorded a long time ago can hardly ensure its accuracy. For instance, new fashion trends and new words are invented every year, so learners ought to travel to learn what local people actually wear and speak in contemporary society. Besides, people cannot have hands-on experiences if only staying home and reading reviews posted online. Instead, they should get directly exposed to the culture they are curious about so that they can have their own experiences and assessments without relying on others’ subjective standpoints.

In conclusion, despite the ample source of information from books, movies and the internet, people need to travel around to learn better about the culture of somewhere.

Sample 10:

It is irrefutable that the world has revolutionized into a global village. IT is not compulsory to travel around the world to know the ground reality about cultures. Therefore, it could be learned and gathered from several norms of aspects like books, films and through the internet which websites have tremendous amount of knowledge. However, I endorse the statement to a large extent. I have my opinion which I would like to explicate it a length in the paragraph to come.

To begin, traveling to abundant places for acquiring information about culture is totally replaced by technical types of equipment, so in visual not able to travel and get in touch with civilization through the internet. For instance, there are numerous websites, movies, and books available, which people can attain their focus on the several cultures which they are seeking for. In addition, becoming a commuter and traveling to a different location consumes handsome expenses and crucial time. To add it, few minor places of cultures not easily get in touch with them due to lack of transport modes, such as recent survey conducted in Australia found that, there are plenty of cultures initiate, which most individuals are unfamiliar with them and they can easily engage with the help of books and internet, which helps to collect some interesting facts of the rituals.

Furthermore, another factor is that this is too convenient for people who are handicapped and unable to get through to several locations. In that case, they easily interact with the life of other countries and feel the emotions while watching movies and videos. For instance, some movie directors specially develop ambiance, which is suitable for those who cannot manage their body in the right way. Thus, leading movies play a significant role in terms of the diversity of cultures. Last but not least, some cultures are near extinct and unable to find with the presence of naked eyes, so in those terms, books are considered as a bank of knowledge with a detailed history of the particular cultures. Meanwhile, some groups of people have the potential to travel, including remote places, and get practical with the outer world, so they are able to enhance their knowledge with the several communities and develop cognitive ideas about tourism. Moreover, a few places need true reality instead of imagination, so it is possible when people get interact with them.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that not every individual is strong by their roots of background and lack of time is another factor for gaining the knowledge about each nationality of the nation. Therefore, books, movies, and the internet change the lifestyle of people who are willing to know the specific history of cultures.

Sample 11:

Over the history, man has always been traveling one place to another in order to gain information and acquaint with several cultures. But in the last two decades, with advancement of technology, one is able to be acquainted with different cultures through different mediums, such as internet, movies, books, and so forth. The question of whether alternative sources of information like books, films and the internet can be used to have information of other cultures rather than visit there personally has become a much-debated issue. There are, therefore, people on both sides of the view who have arguments either for or against. To some extent, I disagree with the notion that books, films or the internet are better sources for information about other cultures than first-hand experience.

Historically, we have reached where no human has reached before, hooked up to apps offering unprecedented exposure to the world in which we live. Technology blurs the boundaries between countries. Now we can get information about a nation which is thousands of miles away from us by just a click. For example, if you want to know about the lifestyle of Eskimo, what you need is just to go any search engine like Google and you find plenty of sites about Eskimo. Besides, we can learn from documentary films or books. Accordingly, there are manifold avenues for learning information about different cultures.

On the other hand, there is a nuance between simply learning about a culture from secondary sources and physically experiencing it and eventually discerning the several traits of it, something which can never be gained otherwise. To fully understand a community, it is necessary to be part of the culture for extended time and should observe how the culture has evolved over the period. A case in point is anthropologists, who study cultural behavior of a community by physically experiencing territory. This does not mean that everybody who wants to understand various cultures needs to be an anthropologist. Rather I want to say that if anyone wants a comprehensive understanding about a culture, he must visit the land and should observe the cultural pattern instead of learning from second-hand experience. 

From what has been discussed above we may draw the conclusion that both points of view have their rationales. Although it is possible to learn various cultures simply by surfing internet or reading books without ever visiting the country and people, traveling the place and being part of the community provides a holistic apprehension of the culture than the simple secondary sources can ever provide.

Sample 12:

We live in a multifaceted society that has its own cultural and traditional values. Traditions that vary from place to place are unique in their own form. These norms and distinctive cultural values attract people to visit different places in order to learn more which is laudable, but others believe that we live in a digital world know where all the information is available through paper and print media then there is no point to visit those places physically. This essay will analyze both viewpoints to understand their merits before presenting an opinion.

People believe that culture can be best understood when one physically visits that place. Proponents of this viewpoint argue that films and books do not cover all the aspects and often show only positive attributes and customs of a place. Cultural values and traditions are best analyzed when we live with them and participate in their festivals, religious gatherings, weddings and other events. Moreover, they say that books and the internet give us limited information and physical presence in instrumental to observe and understand their emotion, feelings, sentiments and so on showcased during different occasions. For instance, Malay culture is rich in folk music, artworks, poetry, festivals and so on which we usually see in different videos, but there are some hidden traits like their disliking for non-Malay which is not mentioned in any book or shown in films. Furthermore, one can truly admire and appreciate culture when they mingle with them. 

On the contrary, others believe that one can easily learn the traditions and cultural norms through different documentary movies, historical books or through the digital content available over the internet. They say that books written about different cultures were written by authors that visited those places or heard about them from others. Moreover, the internet is a massive repository of digital content in the form of textual and visual information which is instrumental in learning various cultures without the need to travel. For instance, Indian culture got popular in western countries due to different Bollywood movies revealing the customs and way of living of people residing in different cities like Gujarat, Rajasthan, Kashmir and so on. Furthermore, documentary videos and movies are a good source of information as they cover different aspects of a culture in visual form, and one gets absorbed in it while watching.

To recapitulate, the aforementioned provides plausible arguments over both viewpoints. However, I personally believe that one should travel to explore their passion for learning different cultures as physical presence cannot match virtual information.

Sample 13:

Many individuals believe that they can gain as much cultural knowledge from books, movies, and the internet as they can from traveling. However, while these mediums are informative, they often lack the most up-to-date information and practical experiences. Therefore, traveling remains essential for gaining a deeper understanding of culture.

From one perspective, there are numerous ways for individuals to explore the culture of a place without physically visiting. Firstly, they can gain insight into a region's cultural aspects by reading books containing pictures and descriptions of local customs, such as traditional cooking methods or greetings. Documentary films also play a significant role, offering sound effects that allow learners to hear the voices and languages of locals. Additionally, the internet provides a platform for accessing a variety of video clips and articles by different travelers, offering diverse perspectives.

On the flip side, I argue that it's more beneficial for learners to experience the culture firsthand by visiting the country they're interested in. Despite the abundance of information in books and movies, it can quickly become outdated as the world evolves. For example, new fashion trends and vocabulary emerge yearly, so learners should travel to witness contemporary local customs. Furthermore, practical experiences cannot be gained by staying home and reading online reviews alone. Direct exposure to the culture of interest allows individuals to form their own opinions without relying on others' subjective viewpoints.

In summary, despite the wealth of information available from books, movies, and the internet, traveling remains essential for gaining a deeper understanding of a place's culture.

Sample 14:

Learning about the cultures of other people has become a necessity in today’s world of modernisation. However, many people claim that people can study the culture of different people through books, movies and the internet instead of travelling. This essay, however, does not agree with this view, the reasons for which are stated below.

To begin with, people are living in a world where technology prevails, and everything can be accessed and learned with a single click of a mouse. Hence, it seems logical to accept that the outside culture can be analysed through books, films and the internet. For instance, there have been many movies which depict the culture of people from various parts of the world. Moreover, people do not have to commute across various nations to know the customs and traditions of other people, thereby reducing the expenses involved in travelling, accommodation and food. Furthermore, it would not be possible for the common man to travel to various destinations to view and experience the outside culture.

Considering the other side of the argument, people who support the view of travelling to other places to understand people originate from the idea that learning becomes colourful when it is observed with one’s own eyes. However, this is not a practical approach, and individuals can learn about other places’ customs and beliefs through interesting movies, videos and books written by pedagogical experts.

Overall, the learning process about culture across different nations through booms, media and using technology has various positive sides, such as reducing the cost of travel and easy access to information from one’s own comfort place. Even though travelling helps individuals to get first-hand information about other cultures and places, it is not considered a practical approach.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

The dilemma of whether being unemployed is preferable compared to working in a job that you dislike is a topic of considerable debate. Personally, I believe that while finding joy in work is important, the benefits of being employed outweigh the downsides of a less-than-ideal job.

Those who advocate for unemployment instead of a dissatisfying job often highlight a belief that life is too short to spend in a job that makes one unhappy. They argue that the free time spent out of the workforce can be better used searching for a job that matches one's interests and values, or even pursuing further education to improve job prospects. This perspective suggests that freedom from a disliked job offers mental peace and opens doors to exploring new opportunities that could lead to a more fulfilling career that better aligns with one's passions or values.

Conversely, the importance of having a job, whether it is fulfilling or not, cannot be understated. Employment offers financial stability, crucial for meeting our basic needs and maintaining a desired lifestyle. It also provides structure, social connections, and a sense of purpose, all of which are integral to one's overall well-being. Besides, every job is a learning opportunity, offering valuable experiences that can pave the way to a better position in the future.

In my opinion, while the pursuit of fulfilling work is important, the benefits of being employed should not be overlooked. Having a job provides financial stability and can also be a steppingstone to better opportunities, therefore compensating for the lack of enjoyment.

Sample 2:

There have been recent discussions regarding whether to remain employed if people find no enjoyment in their current positions in order to find more satisfying jobs. I argue that even though finding enjoyable jobs is encouraged, not having a job or quitting their current positions is highly detrimental to their careers when compared to having unsatisfying jobs.

There are several reasons why people should not resign and maintain their jobs. To begin with, regardless of their personal assessments about their current positions, having a job means having a salary, which will be pivotal to remain financially independent. Most fully grown adults are expected to have some form of responsibility and independence, and being employed generally alleviates numerous problems stemming from those. As an example, adults who have a job have a better chance to live independently, in which they pay most utility bills on their own and can afford to buy things which in the past could draw the ire of their parents. Therefore, even though many people hate their jobs, they can still endure as personal and financial freedom are the ultimate goals in their lives. In addition, remaining employed drastically improves a person's chance to get to the position that they have always wanted. Most of the dream jobs that people are pursuing are generally considered to be either in top corporations with well-earned reputations or in middle or upper management. For some, the job might even be to be on the board of directors or become a legitimate shareholder of a major firm. If people are not conscious enough about their career ladders and choose to be unemployed, they will never attain those satisfying dream positions because through the eyes of the recruiters or managers, they lack experience or credentials to deserve those titles. Hence, for many careerists, current jobs serve as a steppingstone towards a more lucrative and enjoyable role. Last but not least, it is observed that people tend to have unrealistic descriptions about what their enjoyable jobs should be. This is largely due to the fact that most people who lack work experience have yet to firmly grasp a realistic understanding of what their current surroundings are. For example, in many developing or underdeveloped countries, citizens are struggling with trying to get clean water or enough food for the day. Moreover, even in developed countries, the realities of class discrimination. Nepotism, favoritism, political unrest and economic collapses, as already seen in the past, can affect the ability to even keep those dream positions. As a result, while being hopeful and positive about wanting a dream job is encouraged, people should retain a realistic understanding of the world, or at least, where they are living and working.

In summation, people should strive to have better jobs, but not at the cost of remaining unemployed as it can affect their independence, work experience and understanding of the job market. Having a current job, regardless of how much one may like it, works as a financial safety net as well as a career steppingstone that will propel them to greater heights towards the dream job.

Sample 3:

In today's challenging economic climate, the idea of being trapped in an unfulfilling job is far from ideal, yet it may sometimes be a tolerable choice. Personally, I disagree with the notion that unemployment is preferable to an unsatisfying job.

On the one hand, opting for unemployment is not always a prudent decision. The current economic landscape has witnessed numerous waves of layoffs from both large and small companies, placing significant pressure on employees and even precipitating existential crises for many workers. Consequently, abandoning a stable job due to a lack of passion can lead to economic turmoil for the individual. Difficulty in securing new employment after resigning may also result in psychological strain, potentially leading to mental health issues such as depression. For instance, recent statistics revealed that a substantial number of individuals who experienced job loss reported heightened levels of anxiety and stress, highlighting the psychological toll of unemployment. Therefore, the decision to leave a job should be carefully weighed against the potential economic and psychological repercussions.

Furthermore, if discontented with their current job, individuals can prepare for the next career move before resigning. It is commonplace in the labor force for people to meticulously refine their skills and engage in interviews for new positions while still fulfilling their current responsibilities. This not only alleviates mental stress but also broadens the options for securing a new role that resonates with their true passion.

However, there are indeed instances where a job has caused workers emotional and physical distress, such as toxic work environments, lack of mutual respect among colleagues, or being burdened with excessive responsibilities disproportionate to their current salary and benefits. In such cases, individuals need to break free from this exhausting cycle and focus on self-healing before embarking on a new journey. Naturally, this process is more effectively executed if they have financial stability, such as a stable savings fund.

In conclusion, while the idea of unemployment being preferable to an unsatisfying job has its

merits in certain situations, it is important to acknowledge the complexities and nuances involved. Personal fulfillment and financial stability are essential considerations when evaluating the trade-offs between being unemployed and enduring an unenjoyable occupation.

Sample 4:

It is argued that being jobless is better than doing a job that makes people unhappy, where individuals only work to earn their bread and butter. I completely agree with this statement because individuals will not work hard for a company’s progress, and a company will waste its resources training them.

To begin with, unenthusiastic individuals will not contribute to a company’s growth. To elaborate, when people are unhappy with their jobs, they tend to procrastinate and only complete the bare minimum required. They avoid additional efforts and hesitate to take on extra responsibilities, seeing work as a burden. For instance, some employees work overtime to increase a company’s sales because they are satisfied with their jobs. In contrast, those who only work for wages do not go the extra mile and are indifferent to a company’s success or failure.

Moreover, corporations waste a lot of resources, such as time and money, training uninterested personnel. When individuals join an organization, they are required to attend workshops and seminars to enhance their productivity for the company’s progress. A significant amount of money is spent on trainees, such as on food, transportation, and providing communication devices. Therefore, if employees do not produce results, the entire effort goes to waste, potentially leading to a company’s bankruptcy. Thus, a company’s success lies in the hands of its workers, who can either make it prosper or fail.

In conclusion, it is evident that working in a job that people have no interest or satisfaction in is more detrimental to a corporation. As manufacturers can face financial losses and workers do not make an effort for a company’s prosperity, this attitude can ruin any firm.

Sample 5:

In this fast-paced world, people often discuss job satisfaction. Some individuals believe it is better not to work if they are unhappy with their jobs based on their own experiences. I disagree with this notion to a great extent, and in the following paragraphs, I will support my stance.

Considering the agreement side, the primary reason for not working in an uncomfortable job is that it can increase mental stress. When someone works in an organization and is not satisfied, their job may take a psychological toll on their health.

On the other hand, many believe that staying at home is not a solution. This means that if a person does not work at a certain age, it will lead to financial issues. After reaching a certain age, an individual must take on family responsibilities, and if they cannot earn a living, they will struggle to survive in this inflationary time. Moreover, no one is eager to marry someone who cannot earn a living. For instance, my friend Sachin, who is 28, stays at home without a job. Most people are getting married at this age, but he remains single, as no one is willing to marry him.

To conclude, despite facing problems such as an uncomfortable work environment, we should work to survive and live our lives in this fast-paced world. We can also focus on our passions to manage our stress.

Sample 6:

It is sometimes claimed that people prefer to be unemployed than to be unsatisfied with their job. I partly agree with this view for various reasons as now will be discussed.

On the one hand, I contend that adhering to a job which does not correspond to people’s hobbies and career orientations can hinder them from pursuing their real dream. Firstly, working in an inappropriate working place or doing uninteresting daily tasks can take away people’s enthusiasm and motivation. For example, if Steve Jobs had worked as an accountant, he would have wasted his creativity and imagination and perhaps would not have been renowned and successful. Secondly, several fresh graduates find their first job just because of an attractive salary package and they do not consider the future prospects of the job and the career path they really want to take. This can negatively impact on their future professional development.

On the other hand, I feel that having a job sometimes is more pragmatic than just sitting to wait for other job opportunities. This is because people are not always certain about their strengths and latent talents, which are discovered when they do a new job and challenge themselves. For instance, at first my sister thought that she would quit her initial job after one year, but she changed her mind when she was familiar and happy with her job. Additionally, being unemployed and ignoring chances to find a job appear to be insecure. Having a job at least can fulfill their basic needs. Otherwise, they may be depressed if they just aim for a particular kind of job and cannot meet the goal.

In conclusion, I believe that between having a job people do not like and being unemployed, they should take serious considerations before making an option.

Sample 7:

The idea of staying unemployed rather than taking up a job that is not enjoyable is absurd. I disagree with this statement, as the pursuit of job satisfaction must not come at the expense of financial stability. 

Employment, irrespective of personal satisfaction, provides financial stability to people. Necessities of life such as food, shelter, and healthcare can be afforded only when there is a source of income. Employment also plays a crucial role in helping individuals plan their future through savings and investments for retirement and their children’s education. If a person is unemployed, it will lead to financial distress, and in extreme cases, it will be a major cause of poverty. Therefore, having a job that is not enjoyable is far better than having no job at all.

In addition to this, being employed is a major indicator of one’s self-worth and societal contribution. It helps create a structured routine, forms a platform for social interactions, and builds a sense of achievement in people. All of these factors play an important role in maintaining mental health and overall well-being. On the other hand, if one remains unemployed it builds a feeling of worthlessness and depression. As a consequence, an individual may experience social isolation since he would lack possible ways of interaction with others.

To conclude, while job satisfaction is important, it is never a reason to stay unemployed. Instead, one must seek employment to provide oneself with financial security and a sense of purpose in life. These aspects are more important to one’s well-being than choosing to stay unemployed and waiting for a pleasant opportunity.

Sample 8:

While some argue that it is better to be jobless rather than to have a dissatisfying job. I disagree with this viewpoint as being without a job can threaten an individual’s financial stability as well as hinder the country's economic progress.

To begin with, being unemployed can have adverse financial and psychological effects, as people may struggle to make ends meet, pay bills, and provide for their families. For instance, being out of work for an extended period of time can lead to feelings of low self-worth, depression, and anxiety. Additionally, unemployment often means a loss of income, which can lead to financial difficulties and even poverty in some cases. Moreover, even if one does not enjoy their job, they may still gain valuable skills and experience that could benefit them in the future. Therefore, having a job, even if it is not one's ideal job, can at least help individuals achieve financial stability.

Furthermore, high unemployment rates can hinder a country's long-term economic growth by reducing its human capital, innovation, productivity, and essential skills. To state this, during the COVID-19 pandemic, unemployed individuals were unwilling to work in the hospitality industry, which created labour shortages, hindered economic progress and led to long-term negative effects on society and the economy. Thus, working in industries that may not be fulfilling will at least lead to overall economic stability.

In conclusion, while it is understandable to want to work in a job that one enjoys, being unemployed is not a viable alternative. Having a job, even one that is not ideal, provides a range of benefits that cannot be obtained by being out of work. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the notion that being unemployed is preferable to being in a job that one does not enjoy.

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Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sample 1:

Some people take the view that criminal behavior is a product of an individual's inherent nature, while others argue that it is the outcome of poverty and societal factors. Although there are cogent arguments for the former view, I still lean towards the social issues and poverty theory.

Those who argue that crime is rooted in an individual's personality traits and moral compass suggest that some individuals are simply predisposed to engage in criminal behavior due to factors such as personality. They argue that some people either have a natural inclination towards aggression, violence, and rule-breaking. These individuals are believed to engage in criminal activities by choice despite having access to legal means of earning a living. In fact, some serial killers are known for their violent and sadistic crimes, which were often carried out with a sense of pleasure or enjoyment.

In my view, crime is primarily a result of social problems and poverty. This is because individuals may turn to criminal behavior when they are faced with limited opportunities, financial insecurity, and social inequality. These conditions can lead to frustration, hopelessness, and despair, which can ultimately push individuals towards criminal behavior as a means of survival or escape. For example, a young person who grows up in a community with few employment possibilities may feel that their only option for financial survival is to engage in drug dealing.

In conclusion, while there are certainly some individuals who exhibit consistent patterns of aggressive or antisocial behavior, these traits alone are not sufficient to explain why people commit crimes. Therefore, I believe that the majority of crime is driven by socioeconomic factors.

Sample 2:

Opinions differ as to whether crime is caused by social issues and poverty or by people’s evil nature. Personally, I agree with the former view.

It is understandable why some people claim that our nature is the root of crime. Perhaps they have witnessed some children commit wrongdoing at some point in their lives. For example, many physically strong children tend to bully others at school, while others may perform mischievous acts like lying to adults or stealing money from their parents. These experiences lead people to believe that humans are purely good or bad by nature, and those who engage in misconduct at a young age will likely become criminals.

However, the point mentioned above is deeply flawed. Everyone possesses their own good and bad nature, and it is the environment that triggers people’s evil side and causes them to commit crime. One major cause of crime in many countries is inadequate education. Poorly educated youngsters may struggle to discern between right and wrong; therefore, they are more likely to commit crimes without even knowing. Poverty is another root cause of crime because those living in impoverished conditions may turn to stealing or robbing as the final solution to make ends meet. A corrupt political system can also be a breeding ground for crime because the politicians there have to comply with the corruption, regardless of their personal intentions.

In conclusion, though some might think that crime results from a person’s bad nature, I believe it is more likely caused by social problems, such as poor education, corrupt political systems, and poverty. People are both good and bad by nature, and the environment in which they live determines whether they become criminals.

Sample 3:

When it comes to crime rates, some individuals claim that criminal activity is solely the result of innate characteristics, while others argue that it is the outcome of societal issues and impoverishment. In my opinion, socioeconomic challenges and inequality are more likely to prompt people to engage in illegal behaviours.

On the one hand, criminality could represent the result of an inherent personality. In some cases, crime is merely the result of a person’s impulsive actions and lack of moral compass. Various factors such as upbringing, personal beliefs, and psychological disorders may all play a role when it comes to criminal activity. Some people, for example, may have grown up in environments in which illegal conduct is normalised, causing them to assume that such behaviour is acceptable. Similarly, those with mental health disorders like sociopathy or psychopathy may be inclined to committing crimes due to their inability to empathise with victims.

On the other hand, societal problems and economic hardship may contribute to criminal conduct. Poverty with limited access to food, clothing, shelter, healthcare, and schooling can push people to the brink of desperation, prompting them to resort to criminal behaviour as a means of survival. People who are financially strapped in various urban areas, for instance, may turn to illegal activities like drug trafficking or burglary in order to make ends meet. Once poverty and crime are intertwined, it may ultimately develop into a vicious cycle that is challenging to escape. Furthermore, socioeconomic issues such as discrimination, inequality, and corruption may promote crime through fostering an environment of dissatisfaction and rage. Those who experience discrimination or who believe the system is stacked against them are more inclined to turn to illegal behaviour as a form of protest or vengeance.

To summarise, aside from personal psychological factors, I believe that social difficulties and poverty can have a greater impact on crime rates.

Sample 4:

Crime has been studied by many scientific disciplines, with some people ascribing it to social problems and poverty, and others thinking that it is caused by the criminal’s nature. In this, I believe that unlawful behavior is more likely the result of defective personal qualities.

Several explanations can support crime being a function of inferior socioeconomic factors. Firstly, poverty reduces access to education and employment, causing hopelessness and desperation as a result. Having been deprived of opportunities, people may turn to crime to get by. Furthermore, people whose environment is rife with social problems may be accustomed to illegal behavior, making it easier for themselves to engage in criminal activities later on. A child who grows up in a neighborhood with drug problems could turn into a drug dealer himself, since he has witnessed drug abuse and addiction as a norm. It could, therefore, be argued that social issues and poverty create criminals.

However, the view that crime is a result of the perpetrator’s nature is no less convincing. Proponents of this belief claim that certain traits, such as impulsivity, aggression, and callousness, predispose individuals to immoral or unethical behavior. People with these traits become less considerate when they perceive any threat to their self-interest, making them likely to ignore the consequences of their actions. Others, meanwhile, carry undiagnosed psychological disorders, and their condition makes them more prone to committing crimes. A large share of the prison population, especially repeat offenders, are affected by sociopathy, a disorder usually characterized by inhibited compassion towards others. It is not well-understood otherwise, and education has only been partially effective in mitigating sociopathy’s effects. For these reasons, criminals’ nature is definitely worth looking at as a cause of their offenses.

In conclusion, while both views can be supported by evidence, I believe one’s personality is a more indicative factor of whether they are likely to commit crimes. Hence, it is crucial that parents and guardians pay attention to how they shape their children’s nature.

Sample 5:

For millennia, philosophers and scientists have held countless debates on personality. Some believe in the inherent crooked nature of humanity while others argue that they are the product of their environment. This essay wishes to explore both sides of the argument.

Nativists believe that personalities and manners are inherent and genetic, so crime is innate. Credible evidence of this would be the correlation between lead exposure and crime rate. In the 1940s, the USA was the prime consumer of lead-based products, such as paint and gasoline, so babies conceived, born, and raised during this period were lead-poisoned. They later suffered from poorer impulse control and higher aggressivity. As adults, they contributed to the surplus in levels of violent crime. However, it should be noted that genes do not cause behavior but influence it through their effects on the body's response to the environment.

Supporters of Environmentalism concede that criminal behaviors are determined by family and other people, education opportunities, as well as physical circumstances. This school of thought is supported by several studies. some of them focused on the negative link between vegetation and crime. It was shown that in neighborhoods with more greenery, fewer crimes were reported. One explanation for this was that the environment gave its residents a sense of safety and security.

It should be noted that the nature-nurture debate has not been taken as seriously as it used to be. Essentially, every facet of personality development results from interaction between genes and environment. If the authorities aim at reducing the rate of crime and violence, they should take action in improving residential areas as well as enhancing healthcare.

Sample 6:

Many people consider that innate characteristics are responsible for the fact that some people choose to turn to a career of crime. While I accept that crime may result from individual characteristics of violence or greed, I would argue that it is largely a consequence of social issues and poverty.

There is a belief that a person’s nature determines whether or not they become a criminal. Firstly, some argue that an individual who is cruel turns to crime more easily than a kind person. For instance, a child bullying other boys or girls at school may turn into a violent criminal in the future. Secondly, bad characteristics such as laziness or selfishness could also breed future offenders, who seek to acquire easy money without working for it. A number of youngsters choose to steal from others, instead of working hard to make an honest living. These are strong reasons for thinking that those who have an inborn bad nature are more likely to break the law.

Nevertheless, it seems to me that social issues and poverty are the main causes behind crime. There are many problems in society which might lead to an increase in the crime rate. For example, unemployment pushes people into resorting to crime because they simply cannot find a job. As a consequence, the number of offenders has climbed in many countries over recent decades. Another reason is that, more broadly, poverty in general leads to a rise in crime. If people do not have enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempted to pursue illegal activities just to support themselves and their families.

In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that the principal causes of crime are a result of social conditions and problems.

Sample 7:

The causes of crime have long been a topic of debate. While some argue that crime stems from a person's inherent nature, I do believe it is the result of social problems and poverty

On the one hand, advocates of the view that crime results from a person's nature suggest that individuals with cruel tendencies are more likely to engage in criminal activities. This is because cruelty often correlates with a lack of empathy, disregard for others' well-being, and aggressive behavior, all of which can lead to crime. For example, a child who bullies others at school may grow up to become a violent criminal. Additionally, bad characteristics such as laziness or selfishness can breed future offenders who seek easy money without working for it. Many young people, lured by the prospect of quick and easy money, turn to cybercrime, engaging in online scams, hacking, and identity theft.

On the other hand, some, myself included, argue that crime is primarily a result of social problems and poverty, a perspective I support. Social issues, such as unemployment, can push people towards crime as they struggle to find legitimate employment. The widening gap between the rich and the poor exacerbates this issue, as seen in places like Rio De Janeiro, where high crime rates are prevalent in impoverished areas. Poverty is another significant factor; individuals struggling to make ends meet may resort to illegal activities to support themselves and their families. This explains why people in dire need often turn to theft or other crimes for survival.

In conclusion, while inherent personal traits can contribute to criminal behavior, social problems and poverty play a more significant role in driving people towards crime. Addressing these underlying issues is crucial for reducing crime rates.

Sample 8:

Crime is a complex issue that elicits varied perspectives regarding its origins. While some argue that crime is primarily a consequence of social problems and poverty, others contend that it stems from an individual’s inherent nature. I contend that the interplay between societal factors and individual predispositions contributes significantly to criminal behavior.

I concur with the notion that crime often finds its roots in social problems and poverty, where the impact of socioeconomic conditions significantly steers an individual’s choices. For example, in underprivileged areas, the absence of adequate educational facilities, job prospects, and robust social support structures may force individuals into a corner, compelling them to turn to illicit means for survival. Moreover, when societal disparities are rife and systemic issues remain unaddressed, it can exacerbate the situation, causing individuals to resort to criminal activities as a perceived solution to their economic struggles or as a means to voice their grievances about prevalent social injustices.

However, I am also of the opinion that the origins of crime are not solely tethered to external factors; rather, an individual’s innate disposition can also play a crucial role. Some individuals might exhibit inherent psychological disorders that predispose them to engage in unlawful activities, regardless of their social background. Furthermore, the absence of strong moral values or ethical guidance in an individual’s upbringing can be a contributing factor, irrespective of their socioeconomic circumstances. Instances abound where individuals from affluent backgrounds have succumbed to criminal behavior due to the lack of a strong moral compass in their formative years, indicating that individual nature can play a pivotal role in shaping criminal inclinations.

In conclusion, I believe crime’s origin is not solely attributed to either social problems or an individual’s nature; rather, it is a complex interplay between societal factors and personal inclinations.

Sample 9:

There are divergent opinions regarding the root causes of criminal behavior. Some people argue that external factors such as poverty or other social issues are to blame for most crimes, while others contend that people who engage in criminal activity are intrinsically bad in nature. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and provide my own opinion.

On the one hand, those who believe that social problems are the primary cause of criminal behavior argue that people are driven to commit crimes due to their difficult and disadvantaged circumstances. For example, individuals facing extreme poverty or unemployment may resort to stealing or other illicit activities as a means of survival. Proponents of this view also point out that issues such as substance abuse or mental illness can exacerbate criminal tendencies, emphasizing the importance of addressing underlying social difficulties to reduce crime rates.

On the other hand, there is a counterargument that criminal behavior arises from individual traits such as impulsivity, selfishness, or a lack of empathy. This perspective suggests that some people have a natural tendency to engage in harmful behavior, regardless of environmental factors. In support of this view, critics of the social circumstance theory point out that there are people who grow up in difficult circumstances but do not resort to crime, indicating that innate character traits play a significant role.

In my view, it is likely that both factors play a role in criminal behavior. While social issues can be a significant driver of crime, it is also true that some individuals may be more inclined to engage in criminal activity due to inherent character flaws. Therefore, addressing both the root causes of social problems and providing intervention programs that focus on individual development could be effective in reducing crime rates.

In conclusion, there are varying opinions regarding the root causes of criminal behavior. While some argue that criminal activity is solely attributable to social problems, others believe that individual traits play a more significant role. In my opinion, it is essential to consider both perspectives and work towards comprehensive solutions to reduce the prevalence of crime in our society.

Sample 10:

Crime is a complex issue with multiple contributing factors. While some argue that most crimes result from circumstances like poverty and social problems, I believe they are caused by individuals who are inherently bad in nature.

On one hand, there are several factors that lead people to believe that most crimes stem from circumstances. Firstly, individuals who grow up in deprived environments often lack access to basic needs such as education, healthcare, and stable employment, leading them to potentially turn to crime as a means of survival or escape from their circumstances. For example, high crime rates in low-income neighborhoods can be attributed to individuals struggling to meet basic needs such as food, housing, and healthcare, and with limited access to education and job opportunities, they may resort to criminal activities like theft or drug dealing to make ends meet. Secondly, exposure to violence and crime from a young age can normalize these behaviors. For instance, children from households with domestic violence may become desensitized to violent behavior and replicate it in their own relationships.

On the other hand, I do believe that crime is caused by individuals who are inherently bad in nature. Firstly, those who commit crimes may have a predisposition to violence and deviant behavior, regardless of their upbringing or environment. Ted Bundy, for instance, despite his stable upbringing and education, committed numerous murders. His actions suggest an inherent predisposition to violence and deviance, highlighting the role of personal moral character in criminal behavior. Secondly, some research indicates that genetic and environmental factors can increase the likelihood of engaging in criminal activities. For instance, a longitudinal study conducted by the National Institute of Justice followed a group of individuals from childhood into adulthood and found that those with a family history of criminal behavior were more likely to engage in similar activities.

In conclusion, while circumstances like poverty and social problems contribute to crime, I believe that personal moral character and inherent predispositions play a more significant role in criminal behavior.

Sample 11:

Crime is a prevalent issue in modern society and understanding its root causes is important for its effective prevention and control. Some people argue that most crimes are the result of circumstances such as poverty or other social problems. Others believe that criminal behaviour stems from individuals who are bad in nature. In my opinion, most crimes are the consequence of socioeconomic circumstances.

Individuals who believe that crime is the result of inheriting bad nature think that even though people who live in affluent societies with minimal social problems, are subjected to face crimes. They believe that personal choices and moral failings are significant contributors to criminal behaviour. For example, studies have indicated that people who possess personality traits such as impulsivity and aggressiveness are more likely to engage in criminal activities. 

On the other hand, proponents of the view that crime is a result of poverty and social issues argue that individuals coming from poor backgrounds are forced to commit crimes because of necessity. When a person’s basic needs such as food, shelter and security are unmet, they may resort to illegal activities as a means of survival. For instance, incidents like theft and burglary are more common in economically deprived societies where everyone is striving to make ends meet. Furthermore, social problems such as lack of education, unemployment and substance abuse exacerbate the situation. Without access to quality education, many individuals cannot secure well-paying jobs, leading them to seek alternative, often illegal, means of income.

In my opinion, poverty and social problems create an environment where crime can flourish. When individuals are deprived of opportunities and resources, the temptation to break the law becomes stronger. Additionally, the social environment, including peer influence and community norms, plays a crucial role in shaping behaviour. 

In conclusion, addressing these root causes through social policies aimed at reducing poverty, improving education, and providing employment opportunities is essential for effective crime prevention. By creating a more equitable and supportive society, the incidence of crime can be significantly reduced.

Sample 12:

Throughout history, people tended to believe that crimes were committed by those who were innately bad, but in the modern era a more liberal approach has led to the idea that crimes are often acts of desperation, committed by people whose circumstances are bleak. This essay will explore both perspectives, concluding that the latter is usually true.

First of all, it should be noted that some crimes are committed by people who appear innately driven towards such acts. These people may have some sort of hereditary psychological condition that means they do not feel empathy for others, or a predilection towards violence. This is a controversial perspective and although it feels true for many, it is hard to prove. Many of the most violent criminals have traumatic backgrounds, such as child abuse, neglect, or sexual assault, which suggests that they were not born with their criminal compunctions, but rather that these developed very early, which thus places them more into the circumstances than nature category. However, the lines are blurry.

Certainly, it does seem as though most criminals are created out of difficult circumstances. To understand this, one just has to look at impoverished communities around the world. These are places where crime flourishes because the people there are desperate and forced to do immoral things in order to survive. In such states of despair, people tend to put themselves first and overlook social norms, laws, and the usual empathic perspective that would stop most people from hurting others. In such areas, people tend to be conditioned for a young age to ignore the law or even social decency, joining gangs and becoming influenced by dangerous people. This tends to be a problem due to a lack of resources, opportunities, and education in such areas.

In conclusion, it appears likely that most crime is the result of people’s unfortunate circumstances, meaning that criminals are not inherently bad. However, there may be some people who were born with a certain compunction towards violent or criminal activity.

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Sample 1:

It is evident in some countries that physical stores are being replaced by online shops. I believe this replacement is mostly positive as e-commerce greatly benefits both shoppers and businesses, although it might lead to some job losses.

My first rationale is that the prevalence of online shopping offers consumers a superior buying experience. With a few clicks, they can easily navigate through products in various shops, comparing their reliability and prices before adding an item into their cart. After that, the e-commerce website’s payment system will guide them through simple steps to pay for their purchases which will be delivered right to their front door. This process is time-saving and effortless compared to the amount of time and effort required if it were done at physical stores.

Another argument to support the upsides of shopping in the virtual space is that it enables businesses to cut enormous costs. The reduction in outgoings encompasses significant construction expenses, salaries for store managers and staff as well as maintenance and security fees. These savings, in turn, allow companies to lower their prices and invest in marketing campaigns and product research that bolster their competitive advantages.

However, I concede that the disappearance of offline stores potentially leads to a decline in employment. It is due to the fact that these stores generally employ a great number of people working in a variety of positions, compared to a more streamlined online operation which can be robotized and potentially moved to a central location. If all of these employees were to be laid off, some people might become jobless and struggle to make a living, putting a strain on social welfare.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the fact that online shops are prevailing over offline ones is largely welcoming. This trend can be a milestone in boosting customers’ shopping experience while providing companies with financial advantages; however, its effect on employment can be rather negative. Given the fact that this trend is irreversible, those working in stores should proactively acquire new areas of knowledge such as online buying behaviours and overall user experience to be eligible for future vacancies in online commerce.

Sample 2:

In recent years, technological advances in the sales sectors of several nations have paved the way for unprecedented online methods of shopping, which are believed to be rendering physical purchases obsolete. Regarding this, I believe that virtual shopping is a positive development for many of its noticeable benefits.

On the one hand, there are several rationales behind a common belief that online purchases will likely have adverse influences on consumer experience. Firstly, buyers cannot physically touch, try on, or examine any kind of product while shopping online. This lack of physical exposure may lead to uncertainty or even dissatisfaction among purchasers if the goods received do not match their posted descriptions or images. Secondly, the delivery process is sometimes subject to delay due to various factors such as high demand, weather conditions or logistic issues. As a result, some strict consumers might become frustrated and therefore avoid future purchases from the same stores, possibly diminishing their overall appeal and profit in the long run.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that the trend towards online shopping is positive for many significant advantages. Specifically, with numerous virtual stores and online payment methods at present, buyers can shop conveniently from the comfort of their homes and at any time of the day. This absence of geographical locations and time constraints could allow for greater flexibility in consumers’ buying behavior and potentially motivate them to buy more. In addition, virtual shopping can also offer a vast range of products from various retailers and brands. In other words, purchasers would have access to larger inventory and can compare prices, features and reviews of each option across different platforms, which enables them to make more informed purchasing decisions.

In conclusion, despite the lack of physical experience with the goods and potential delays during delivery processes, I still hold that online shopping is a positive innovation in current life thanks to the convenience and wide variety of products it can provide to consumers.

Sample 3:

In many parts of the world brick-and-mortar businesses have been substituted by online purchasing. Although this trend can be disadvantageous to some extent, personally I believe that this should be considered as a positive development because it will help the environment with less pollution and give customers pleasant experiences of shopping.

To begin with, e-commerce can have some downsides due to products' false impressions on the Internet and late delivery. As regards the quality assurance, customers are informed about a product only through some pictures and description which can be easily edited and exaggerated, and due to a lack of ability to touch the product, customers are more likely to feel disappointed if the order they receive does not match their expectation. When it comes to delivery time, it may take several days for shipping. For the products which are urgently needed, in-store shopping can be a better choice because consumers can have their products faster.

However, these weaknesses are insignificant compared to the strengths when people opt for e-commerce. First and foremost, online shopping is an effective way to safeguard the environment. This is simply because the number of vehicles travelling to physical stores will greatly reduce. As a result, the amount of CO2 emission proportionally goes down, which is an effective contributor for climate change mitigation. From customers' perspective, shopping online can offer them a wider choice of items without wasting time and energy moving. They no longer need to travel from store to store when purchasing a pair of shoes or a skirt, for example. Moreover, this will prevent customers from some negative feelings such as embarrassment and guilt when they leave a store without buying anything.

In conclusion, because of the facts mentioned above, while it is clear that there will be both pros and cons when online shopping overtakes physical stores, I place an emphasis on its advantages for the sake of the environment and people's buying experiences.

Sample 4:

Currently, people are increasingly doing their shopping on the Internet instead of going to stores. I personally believe this tendency has both positive and negative effects, which will be discussed below.

On the one hand, there are some benefits of online shopping. Firstly, it is a quicker and cheaper way to shop since people can buy products at home without having to go to stores or shopping malls. For example, Amazon and eBay are two popular websites that provide a huge number of different products, and customers can visit those sites and make purchases easily. As a result, consumers can save time and the costs of travelling. Secondly, online shopping allows people to have a wider range of choices as they can compare different brands and products. For instance, buyers can easily compare the shoes of Converse and Vans, while it is difficult to do that at physical stores.

On the other hand, online shopping can be negative in several ways. The first drawback is that customers cannot try products before making a purchase. For example, a girl cannot try wearing a dress to see if it fits her body. Furthermore, products sold online are often less reliable, and the product that people finally get delivered to their house might have a poorer quality than expected. Finally, because online shopping is easier and cheaper, people tend to buy too much, which would lead to a large waste of money. This is less likely to happen if shopping in stores is more popular.

In conclusion, I believe the fact that shopping on the Internet is replacing shopping in physical stores is both positive and negative.

Sample 5:

Online shopping is an effect of the growing usage of the Internet. It essentially shortens the efforts necessary for buying articles, therefore conveniently enhancing the user experience. In my opinion, it is a positive development, and this essay will try to explain the same.

Being propelled by the unprecedented rise of the Internet, online platforms like Amazon, Flipkart, Myntra, Nykaa, etc., have created unparalleled ease in the shopping experience of a customer. What used to take a couple of trips to buy electronics, clothes, footwear now takes not more than a click of the finger. This is the impact of online shopping, along with incorporating thousands of employees within their ranks.

Online shopping showed a massive surge due to COVID-19 as people were unable to leave their homes, but essentials were needed to run a household. In India, retail giant DMart started its own delivery platform, wherein a customer shops their groceries from an application or the website, and the goods are then delivered within a set time to their doorstep. Such services tremendously helped people all around the world.

It is true that online shopping lays a lot of stress on our planet. For instance, housing servers that facilitate the seamless running of the platform draw a lot of electricity, and the delivery boys use a lot of petrol as they require to deliver goods in every nook and corner. These activities exert pollution directly and indirectly. But one cannot ignore how beneficial these platforms are, and some are even switching to e-vehicles for their delivery to show their commitment to battle climate change. Such major anecdotes showcase the importance of online platforms.

Hence, it is safe to say that shopping through online platforms is a wonderful adaptation, and a positive development.

Sample 6:

These days, we can see an increasing trend of online shopping. People prefer to buy goods and services online, as it provides them convenience, confirming their purchase with just a few simple clicks. It is one of the main reasons physical shopping from stores has been substituted with online shopping. However, in this essay, I will discuss how this change will remain incomplete due to some issues of virtual shopping.

While online shopping does offer convenience, there is a considerable compromise that one has to adjust on quality. While sitting at home, one can’t make out how a particular product would be in-person. One has to decide whether or not to make the purchase based on a few photos.

Another downside of online shopping is the monopoly of only a few big retailers, as a result of which small shops have taken a hit. These shop-owners are forced or compelled to either turn to the big retailers to sell their products, of which a colossal cut goes out of their pockets or be content with the offline sales they make.

However, despite all these negatives, one might think online shopping has, it is still seen that people prefer it over shopping in physical stores. The reason for this is what has been mentioned earlier-convenience like less time-consuming, huge discounts and easy accessibility.

It is hard to compete with the convenience and comfort offered by the availability of multiple products in a single place, the ideology on which the concept of malls was created. Other than that, to have a comprehensive display wherein you can compare products prices and even apply filters according to your need is comfortable for a majority of people.

Sample 7:

The economy primarily depends on consumerism, which has been undergoing drastic changes in the past few years. Virtual shops are mushrooming while physical ones are evaporating. This trend transforms the landscape of commerce both for better and for worse.

The first noticeable difference is the number of new businesses. Opponents of e-commerce would argue that this new model promotes shops to be more competitive. While this may be true to some extent, it also means that there are more chances for entrepreneurs of small and mid-sized businesses to thrive. This is feasible as they can save money on rent and invest in product research and development as well as marketing campaigns, which leads to brand awareness and eventually robust sales. It should also be noted that the internet opens doors to a larger audience while conventional shops are restricted to the locals.

This brings me to my second point. Defenders of online shopping often argue that they provide more choices of products for consumers to choose from, which is undoubtedly true. However, this does not guarantee the quality of the goods. Fast fashion is the prime example of these platforms. It is fueled by dropshipping, where a plethora of online stores carry the same product and is directly linked to overconsumption. Consequently, shoppers, who can effortlessly make a purchase of the latest fad, often dispose of their barely touched possessions, contributing to pollution.

All in all, the economy has experienced a paradigm shift due to internet access with an ever-increasing number of businesses and an unfortunate plummet in the condition of their merchandise. I believe that if individuals as consumers pressured industries to manufacture better quality products, there would be benefits of online shopping without its disadvantages.

 

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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sample 1:

Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in a vertical city. While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city that consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages.

On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a horizontal city based on a few financial and security reasons. Firstly, people have to pay less for building services. If residents settle in a private house, they may save a great deal of money since they won’t have to pay for building services. Secondly, living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur. For example, if a fire starts in the home, they can quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground, and it won’t take much time to leave.

On the other hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice. A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage because there will be less land used for residential areas due to the number of people who can live in high buildings. As a result, the government would be able to use this land to build hospitals, schools or places for entertainment. Furthermore, it is much more convenient for residents to live in an apartment in a tall building that offers a wide range of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and service centres on lower floors.

In conclusion, while living in a horizontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of living in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city the better choice.

Sample 2:

The debate between horizontal and vertical cities is an ongoing one, with compelling arguments from proponents of both schools of design. In this, I am inclined to side with living in horizontal cities, although the other choice merits some discussion as well.

On the one hand, vertical cities have their own advantages, chief of which being their efficiency in terms of land use. As locations that feature dense population and a prevalence of high-rise apartments, vertical cities accommodate more people in a smaller area, which can reduce the amount of land required for housing. China is at the forefront of this design scheme, as many of their major cities are highly vertical, allowing tens of millions of people to reside in an area typically suited for a fraction of that number in other countries. This urban planning, however, may cause distress in claustrophobic people and heighten a sense of crampedness in otherwise normal residents. It could go on to become a catalyst for aggravating the mental health crisis among urban dwellers.

On the other hand, horizontal cities seem just as beneficial, if not more, despite some concerns. While land would be a necessity, the population stands to directly benefit from having more living space. A municipality that is spread out over a large area would have more room for parks and other communal spaces, which can improve air quality and provide a pleasant environment for people to socialize. Additionally, while a vertical city’s design restricts its function to providing dwelling, a horizontal city might not be as limited. Thanks to lower population densities and more space, this town type has more potential to become tourist destinations. A horizontal urban development model is, therefore, clearly superior for living to its vertical counterpart.

In conclusion, while both horizontal and vertical cities have their own advantages and disadvantages, I am inclined to believe the former design is the sounder one. Overall, a horizontal city may be the option that suits the most needs.

Sample 3:

Some individuals argue that residing in a sprawling, low-rise city is ideal, while others advocate for settling in cities characterized by high-rise buildings. Although there are advantages to living in a city with predominantly low-rise structures, I argue that cities with skyscrapers and tall buildings provide even greater benefits.

On one hand, living in a sprawling city offers certain financial and safety advantages for residents. Firstly, people can save on building service costs by living in a single-family home, as they won't need to pay for shared services. Secondly, low-rise living can be safer in emergency situations. For instance, in the event of a fire, residents can more easily evacuate their homes since they are closer to the ground, and it takes less time to exit the building.

On the other hand, I believe that choosing to live in a high-rise city is the superior option. Cities with skyscrapers allow for more efficient use of land, as less space is needed for residential areas due to the vertical arrangement of housing. Consequently, governments can allocate this land to construct hospitals, schools, or entertainment venues. Moreover, living in an apartment within a tall building often provides residents with convenient access to an array of goods and services, as shopping malls and service centers are frequently located on the lower floors.

In conclusion, while there are certain benefits to living in a low-rise city, the advantages associated with residing in a city defined by skyscrapers make high-rise urban living the more appealing choice in my opinion.

Sample 4:

When it comes to urban planning, there has been much debate over which is the superior way to design a city. It is often argued that the most ideal scenario would be for cities to expand upwards, while others are fascinated by the idea of horizontal ones. This essay will examine both design approaches and then justify why I favor the former concept.

To begin with, advocates of low-rise housing often ground their arguments in the merit of security. Living in detached houses is generally safer than high- rise apartment complexes due to the basic nature of each structure. For instance, fighting fires in sky-high constructions would be a much more challenging task considering not all buildings offer an effective evacuation plan and sufficient fire escape routes, jeopardizing the lives of thousands of occupants. Moreover, some mega-structures are more vulnerable to natural incidents and might not be able to withstand extreme earthquakes or hurricanes. Collapses resulting from these towers would be much more tragic compared to lower ones and can cause irreversible damage to the regions.

However, in the context of overpopulation and housing shortage, I believe that growing cities upwards would be a more feasible approach for future urban planning. Skyscrapers make much more efficient use of space, as they can accommodate significantly more inhabitants than low-rise buildings can afford within the same area of land. Vertical cities can also help to protect the environment. Many forests would be saved from being transformed into recreational parks and shopping malls as vertical buildings could provide such built-in amenities. Furthermore, this would greatly reduce the need to travel outside the buildings for local residents, benefiting the surrounding environments.

In conclusion, although there are considerable advantages regarding the safety aspects of horizontal cities, I would argue that building cities vertically could help cope with some of humankind's most pressing challenges, which are overcrowding and resource depletion.

Sample 5:

When it comes to urban planning, there has been a prolonged debate over the superior approach to city design. Some argue that cities should expand horizontally, while others are captivated by the idea of vertical cities. This essay will critically examine both design philosophies and present reasons for my inclination towards the latter concept.

Advocates of low-rise housing often underscore the security benefits of living in detached houses. They argue that such dwellings provide a sense of safety and privacy that high-rise apartment complexes may lack. In the unfortunate event of a fire, the evacuation process in towering structures becomes considerably more challenging, jeopardizing the lives of thousands of occupants. Additionally, some mega-structures may prove to be more vulnerable to natural disasters, lacking the resilience to withstand extreme earthquakes or hurricanes. The potential collapse of these tall buildings could lead to devastating consequences, causing irreversible damage to the surrounding areas.

However, in the context of overpopulation and housing shortages, I firmly believe that adopting a vertical approach to city planning is a more viable solution for the future. Skyscrapers offer a highly efficient use of limited urban space, accommodating a significantly larger population within the same land area that low-rise buildings would require. By embracing verticality, cities can mitigate the detrimental effects of urban sprawl and preserve valuable green spaces and forests that would otherwise be lost to horizontal expansion. In fact, vertical cities can incorporate built-in amenities, reducing the need for sprawling recreational parks and shopping malls, which often contribute to the depletion of natural resources and encroachment upon wildlife habitats. Moreover, these towering structures foster a sense of community, where residents can find everything they need within the same building or complex, thus reducing the need for extensive travel and promoting a sustainable lifestyle.

In conclusion, while horizontal cities may offer certain advantages in terms of safety and aesthetics, the urgency of addressing issues like overcrowding and resource depletion necessitates a paradigm shift towards vertical urban planning. The efficiency and sustainability offered by vertical cities make them a compelling choice in our ever-expanding urban landscape. By embracing this approach, we can forge a path towards a more sustainable and harmonious coexistence of human civilization and the natural world.

Sample 6:

It is true that the question of whether to live in a vertical city or a horizontal city remains a source of controversy in people's lives. While a number of people believe that there are benefits to residents who settle in a horizontal city, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages.

On the one hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice. Firstly, living in an apartment in a high-rise building would be a better alternative for people, especially those with low or middle income. In Vietnam, for instance, buying a two-story house would cost around 5 billion dong while buying an apartment for just around 1.5 billion dong. Secondly, people would enjoy more facilities such as supermarkets, banks, fitness clubs and many other convenient amenities when living in high buildings. Therefore, it is much more convenient for residents to live in an apartment in a tall building that offers a wide range of goods and services.

On the other hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a horizontal city based on a few private space and security reasons. For example, citizens who live in a private house could have larger garages and gardens. As a result, they would be able to devote more time to hobbies such as gardening or car washing, which may be beneficial to their mental health. Another reason is that it is safer to live in a low-rise building in emergency situations such as a fire or an earthquake. ​​For example, if a fire starts in the home, inhabitants can quickly escape from dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground, and it won’t take much time to leave.

In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that living in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city the better choice.

Sample 7:

There are various models of urban planning devised to cope with the growing human population. Expanding cities thus have a choice: to grow upwards or to grow outwards. These both have their merits and choosing which is best is a difficult task. It depends upon whether you value efficiency or comfort.

When cities grow upwards, using large apartment buildings and skyscrapers to house their vast populations, they tend to make more efficient use of space. One tall building could perhaps house a few thousand people, whereas a smaller building of the same ground dimensions would only house a few dozen, at most. This is undeniably more efficient than spreading a city out over a vast area. Moreover, as technology improves, the height of buildings can continue to grow, housing more and more people. Through this sort of design, cities can stay within their geographical confines, but still allow for a growing population.

On the other hand, some cities grow outwards. The people planning these urban areas tend to think of tall buildings as unsightly and crude and prefer a more aesthetically pleasing design. People have more space to themselves, and the city less crowded. However, this sort of city grows further outwards, consuming more of the surrounding countryside, which would otherwise have been preserved with more tall buildings to house the people.

In conclusion, there is no correct way to design a city, but both “vertical” and “horizontal” urban planning have their benefits. Determining which approach is superior is simply a matter of perspective.

Sample 8:

The debate over whether it is better to live and work in a vertical city with numerous tall buildings or a horizontal city with fewer tall structures is multifaceted, with each approach offering distinct advantages and challenges.

Proponents of vertical cities argue that these environments maximize space efficiency, which is crucial in densely populated urban areas. Tall buildings can house more people and businesses on a smaller footprint, reducing urban sprawl and preserving green spaces. Additionally, vertical cities often feature well-developed public transportation systems and amenities within walking distance, fostering a convenient, car-free lifestyle. The concentration of resources and services in high-rise buildings can also lead to vibrant, dynamic communities with a rich array of cultural and social activities.

On the other hand, advocates for horizontal cities emphasize the benefits of a more expansive, spread-out urban layout. These cities typically offer more personal space, which can lead to a higher quality of life. Residential areas in horizontal cities often feature lower population density, resulting in less noise, pollution, and congestion. This setup can promote a sense of community and well-being, as residents have access to more green spaces and recreational areas. Moreover, horizontal cities are generally perceived as safer in terms of fire hazards and evacuation during emergencies, as high-rise buildings can pose significant challenges in such situations.

In conclusion, both vertical and horizontal cities present unique benefits. Vertical cities excel in space efficiency and convenience, while horizontal cities offer a more spacious, serene living environment. Personally, I believe the choice depends on individual preferences and lifestyle needs. For those seeking a bustling, convenient urban experience, a vertical city might be ideal. Conversely, individuals valuing tranquility and open space may find a horizontal city more appealing.

Sample 9:

There is a growing debate about the preferable way of living in a city – be it horizontally with sprawling houses and vast spaces, or vertically with towering buildings. Both urban design strategies have their unique advantages, but I personally favor the vertical approach due to the increasing scarcity of land in many cities worldwide.

Living in a horizontal city can be desirable for several reasons. Firstly, such cities generally provide more open spaces, allowing residents to enjoy nature and outdoor activities. This can lead to improved physical health and mental well-being. Secondly, horizontal cities tend to have less air and noise pollution because of fewer high-rise buildings and industries. Moreover, they often foster a sense of community as people live in closer proximity to their neighbors.

On the other hand, vertical cities also offer their own benefits. High-rise buildings can accommodate a larger number of people within a smaller geographic footprint, making them an efficient solution to rapid urbanization and population growth. Additionally, vertical cities can provide residents with convenient access to amenities and services, which are usually located within the same building or nearby.

In my opinion, while horizontal cities provide a tranquil and community-oriented living environment, the need for sustainable urban planning in light of increasing population pressure makes the vertical approach more practical. It facilitates high-density living without sacrificing accessibility to urban amenities.

In conclusion, both horizontal and vertical cities have their distinct merits. However, considering the current global context of limited land resources and rapid urbanization, I believe that vertical cities are the more sustainable option.

Sample 10:

The population of the planet is increasing at an alarming rate with the population increasing the demand for houses to live in and many other facilities. The demand for space is increasing, along with the need for personal space and urbanization. In the present era, most of the developing countries are facing the issue of space. Urbanization is a very old and important growth phenomenon. The process of urbanization takes place and divides the development of cities into vertical and horizontal cities. A horizontal city is a city in which the city spreads outwards across the ground while increasing the surface area of the city itself. While vertical cities are cities in which development is skyward, the area remains the same, and shelter is provided to many.

It is very difficult to decide between a horizontal city and a vertical city, which one is better? Benefits and disadvantages they both have their own. In my opinion, I like horizontal cities. Horizontal cities are cities with fewer tall buildings. Living and working in horizontal cities is a pleasure. Horizontal cities are basically found under rich and liberal government housing societies. These cities have cottages or houses with wide lanes, private gardens. And are available with more individual space while vertical cities are provided with fewer individual spaces. These cities are also responsible for the expansion of the area of a particular city. Each developed new area is self-sustainable and self-sufficient and completely loaded with basic amenities. This development of new areas reduces the pressure in the central part of a city. Living and working in a horizontal city is a pleasure. Real estate prices of these cities are very high while in vertical cities property prices are under control. But I still prefer horizontal cities to self-sustainability and living close to nature. In a horizontal city, living is safe like in case of fire or earthquake the escape is very easy and quick for people. The horizontal city is very civilized and modern with a lot of convenient services and high-quality living standards. With all these interesting benefits I am ready to pay more money to live in the horizontal city.

Sample 11:

When we are discussing horizontal city and vertical cities, I feel that vertical city is a need of an hour. As we all know, vertical cities are made up of multiple tall buildings which provide space for living to many individuals in the same area. In the current time, all the developing countries are facing problems. Like land scarcity, growing population, lesser space, and willingness to live close to the main city. The growth of vertical cities is the result of the lack of land and the growth of population. These two demands forced people to move skyward.

The population growth is straining the earth’s resources to the breaking point. Hence in my opinion vertical cities can fulfil the demand for more space and more natural resources can be saved in this process. As with increasing urbanization, it is very difficult to provide individual space for each person. So to fulfil the demand for personal space, the vertical city can be an answer. The vertical city is designed in such a way so that there is ample space for parking, malls, hospitals, parks. And all the basic social amenities required by an individual of this modern current era. In the current era, people need houses with all the supporting infrastructures which is easily possible with the layout of vertical cities. In vertical cities work is easily available, property prices are not that high unlike horizontal cities and easily affordable by individuals. Vertical cities are also not a threat to the environment as no regular cleaning of forests is required for the expansion of the city. The main concerns about residing in high rises are elevator breakdown and safety escape during the time of calamity. Reduced interactions with neighbors, and water supply. After all these concerns, I still favor the vertical city, as the construction quality of high rises is generally very high. And so natural calamities like wind pressure can be taken care of. Most high rises nowadays are built with safe fire escape routes and earthquake resistant so living in the high rises is made safe and sound.

Sample 12:

The world is facing multiple crises in the 21st century like the clean water crisis, global warming, increasing population etc. In this situation, living space for people is becoming an unintentional requirement and the reason to think where the world is going. As urbanization increases, it is very difficult to accommodate individuals with individual space. Previously we had individual houses and streets with separate garages and parking spaces. However, the number of people is increasing but the space that we have is still the same, which is making cities crowded. The concept of having separate houses where the cityscape increases horizontally is no longer a trend and horizontal cities have given space to vertical cities. In a vertical city, the city increases upwards, towards the sky. It is designed in such a way that very minimal space is utilized, and all the amenities are included that a person might need to survive. In place of separate houses, there are apartments one above the other. The floor increases towards the sky. People staying near the ground in such skyscrapers do not face many issues. The people staying above might face elevator breakdowns, power cuts, and water issues. However, it is safe to stay in these buildings as they are built after all the clearance like fire escape and safe from natural calamities. I do prefer a vertical city as this will help the environment to prevail and lesser horizontal space will be used. This will be useful to save our planet from different crisis situations.

Sample 13:

With industrialization came urbanisation, meaning the formation and development of metropolitan cities. These mega cities tended to grow at rapid paces, sometimes vertically and sometimes horizontally. Depending on the authorities and the level of development at the time, there developed vast differences between the two.

The first type of city, the horizontal city, was usually found under rich and liberal governments housing individual cottages with wide lanes and private gardens. Today these cities, also referred to as garden cities, are spread out on a vast area of land usually in sparsely populated expanses.  Living and working in such a city would definitely be a pleasure, although the real estate prices in such locations tend to be unusually high. The drawbacks would mainly be regarding the area of natural habitation which constantly needs to be cleared in order to maintain the pace of development.

The other type of city, which is the vertical city, is more commonplace nowadays. The origin of most of these cities was due to the unfettered growth of population and lack of land for further development, which forced people to move skyward. Here, work is easily available, and property prices tend to be much more affordable as compared to the horizontal cities. Although the main problems with these cities include sound nuisance, garbage management, water shortages and a host of other problems, land is not an issue. These urban spaces not only offer modern and sustainable living but also provide room for corporate development.

To give my opinion as a summary, I would state that looking at today’s advancements and weighing the pros and cons of both lifestyle choices, horizontal cities sound very appealing but are not likely to last for very long.  In contrast, vertical cities are by far more economical and sustainable. I believe that vertical cities are the way forward.

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Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

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An often-debated topic is whether the sales of unhealthy food and beverages should be banned at shops and stores. Personally, I disagree with this opinion for a number of reasons.

Firstly, imposing a ban on selling unhealthy drinks may result in the sales of these products moving to the black market and subsequently a rise in crime figures. There are those who cannot overcome their craving for alcohol, for example, and they will search for any means available to access wine and beer. This reaction can be seen in the illegal trade of heroin in Vietnam.

Secondly, making any laws against the public sale of foods that are potentially harmful to health would limit the options that consumers have. For instance, many people opt for fast food instead of cooking meals to save time for work. It would be difficult for them to seek another alternative to their daily meals if shops are prohibited from selling fast food.

While this topic is still open to debate, I believe that other measures to improve the level of public health should be considered. The simplest action is that the government should continue campaigns to raise public awareness of healthy choices rather than trying to ban shops from selling unhealthy items. Another remedy is that a higher tax rate can be instituted on foods and beverages that are bad for people’s health. This may increase the price of these products, which may deter people from excessive individual consumption.

In conclusion, I do not believe that the government should ban shops from selling unhealthy foods and drinks due to potential problems and the availability of better alternatives mentioned above.

Sample 2:

In recent years, the issue of unhealthy food and drink consumption has gained attention. Some people argue that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. While this argument has its merits, I disagree as I believe that people should be allowed to make their own choices about what they consume.

Firstly, individuals have the right to make decisions about their own health. People should have the freedom to choose what they eat and drink, even if it is unhealthy. For example, in the past, there were a few cities proposing a ban on the sale of sugary drinks in certain establishments, including restaurants, movie theaters, and sports arenas. However, this proposal faced significant backlash from consumers, businesses, and politicians who argued that it infringed upon people's personal freedoms and was an example of government overreach. I agree with this as I believe that banning the sale of certain foods and drinks would infringe upon people's personal freedoms and limit their choices.

Secondly, when bans are imposed, there is a risk of creating a black market for banned products. This has been seen in the case of illegal drugs, where bans have led to the growth of organized crime and increased health risks for users. In the case of unhealthy foods and drinks, a black market could lead to the sale of products that are even more harmful and would be difficult to regulate. For instance, in the early 20th century, the prohibition of alcohol led to the rise of a black market, with illegal production and sale of alcohol becoming a significant problem. This led to the consumption of more dangerous and harmful alcohol products, as they were often produced in unsanitary conditions and with no quality control. This shows that we should not ban harmful products as it would lead to a greater, more unmanageable problem.

In conclusion, while there are valid concerns about the health implications of consuming certain foods and drinks, I do not agree that banning their sale is the best solution as this would infringe on the personal freedoms of our democratic society and lead to a proliferation of seedier enterprises.

Sample 3:

It has been argued that selling beverages or any food proved by scientists harmful to human health should be banned. I completely agree with this perspective, as it will escalate the financial burden on the government and the people. Moreover, life expectancy will be lower.

First off, undoubtedly fast food or beverages, either hot or cold, change the taste of the tongue of the people. However, its adverse impact on people’s health makes it mandatory for shop owners to stop selling them. If people continue to consume them, they will experience psychological and physiological problems such as lack of concentration, malnutrition, stomach ulcer, and obesity, to name a few. To cure themselves from the problems mentioned above, they must take medication, which can escalate their financial burden. The treatment might be expensive. Moreover, the government also has to spend a lot of money in the medical sector to improve the condition of the people. It includes drugs, doctor’s fees, and expenditure on building healthcare centres. Thus, there are higher chances of neglecting other sectors, such as educational sports.

Furthermore, the longevity of humans will also drop. Individuals would not be able to enjoy a healthy lifestyle. Recently, it has been proved by American scientists that one slice of pizza deteriorates 8 mins of life, whereas soft drinks reduce 12 minutes of life. Therefore, to stop the mortality rate, it is a must for a seller to ban these products. In addition, if the population decreases during the time of war or other mishappenings, a country will have to rely on other’s help as this news is selling like hot cakes that the Russian government will give 10 to 13 lakhs to those families who will bear more than 12 children. In my perspective, it is sought by the government to equip its country with manpower as the country’s population has a big hand in its progress. So, to sustain it, unhealthy food or drinks must be outlawed.

To conclude, it is clear that the products which have been proved unhealthy should be prohibited from being sold in the market. If it is not done, there will be an additional burden on the pocket of ordinary men, reducing the long-life span of the multitude, who are the backbone of any nation.

Sample 4:

People are more conscious about their eating habits now than ever. It is argued that shops should not be allowed to sell soft drinks and food items that are proved detrimental to an individual’s health. This essay will discuss the possible reasons why a ban on such eating items is essential for long and healthy life.

To begin with, the government should play an active role in regulating the content of every eatable item that is dumped in the marketplace over the years. Due to the rising population and the growing demand, a substantial number of companies are entering the Food and Beverage industry. They are forced to sell products at a very cheap rate to create their own niche or capture the market. Therefore, they use raw materials of the lowest quality in order to survive in this highly competitive industry. Fast food items such as chips, frozen items like pizzas, French fries, etc., and processed foods have high-fat content and are engulfed in low-quality oil. Additionally, soft drinks have high sugar content in all their goods. These are the main reasons for the increasing number of heart attacks, obesity and diabetes in children and young adults.

On the other hand, the lower middle class and somebody having financial problems are bound to eat such unhealthy items as they are cheaper than healthier ones. Shop owners also get a high commission on these low-quality products, and to maximise their profits, they keep a pile of stock and advise their customers to try these items. A packet of fried chips or a can of sugary soft drinks costs much less than a healthy sandwich or a glass of juice.

To conclude, the government should ban these items or, at the least, levy an “Unhealthy tax” on food items or drinks that are detrimental to people’s health. Such steps will force the manufacturers to develop a healthier version, and the tax collected can be passed on as food benefits to the needy.

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Art classes, such as painting or drawing, are important for children's development, so they should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Art classes, such as painting or drawing, have long been considered beneficial for children's development. While art classes may provide certain benefits, I argue that there are also compelling reasons why making them compulsory may not be the best approach.

One argument against making art classes compulsory is that high school students have a wide range of interests and abilities and forcing them to take art classes may not be the best use of their time. High school students may be better served by focusing on subjects that align with their interests and career goals to avoid them from struggling with the subjects they are not profoundly interested in, including art classes which potentially lead to frustration and dissatisfaction.

In addition, enforcing art classes as part of the curriculum would limit the flexibility of the high school curriculum and potentially restrict opportunities for students to explore their interests and develop their abilities in other areas. As a result, the quality of education in these classes might decrease, as students who are not interested may lack motivation to participate or put forth effort.

Another opposing argument of making art education mandatory is it may cause financial and logistic problems for schools. For instance, schools may struggle to find the resources to hire enough qualified art teachers and provide the necessary materials. Moreover, some schools may not have the space to accommodate art classes, which could lead to scheduling difficulties. This problem will certainly impact the students' development, as the lesson exposure is not optimal.

In conclusion, while art classes can provide certain benefits to children's development, I argue that making them compulsory in high school may not be the best approach. It is important to consider the diverse needs and interests of high school students, the flexibility of curriculum, and challenges in logistics and finance for schools so that students can pursue their passions and reach their full potential.

Sample 2:

I agree that art related subjects are important for the development of children. However, this does not mean that these courses should be added into the curriculum of high school as compulsory subjects as will now be explained.

There is no doubt that art classes make an equal contribution to the growth of a child compared to other subjects. By studying art courses, children may enrich their souls and build up their spiritual life. My younger sister, a twelfth-grade student, once told me that drawing classes help her not only improve skills but also perceive life from different angles, which colours her life. In contrast, other subjects such as computer science and economics may lead more directly to a position of employment, but life would be meaningless if people spent all their time working.

Despite the above arguments, I believe that art subjects should be made optional rather than compulsory. There are those who are not interested in the arts and forcing them to study these classes merely results in unnecessary pressure on learners and a waste of resources that may otherwise be available to teach other subjects. For instance, in an average class of 30, there are statistically at least one or two students who have no talent for painting and fail to produce a nice work of art. This causes their level of stress to rise, especially when it comes to a formal exam.

In conclusion, I do not believe that high school students should be required to attend art classes although they are as crucial as other core subjects for the development of children.

Sample 3:

Art classes, such as painting or drawing, have been recognized as important tools for children's development; therefore, the idea that these classes should be compulsory in high school is reasonable. I agree with the statement as I believe that there are several compelling reasons why making art classes compulsory can have positive effects on students’ development.

First of all, art classes can help students develop important skills such as creativity, critical thinking, and problem-solving. In art classes, students must use their imaginations and find new solutions to the challenges presented to them. These skills are not only beneficial in art but can also be applied to other subjects and to life in general.

In addition to developing important skills, art classes can provide students with an outlet for self-expression and a sense of accomplishment. For many students, art is a way to communicate and explore their emotions, thoughts, and experiences. Making art classes compulsory can help students develop a greater appreciation for the arts and provide them with a sense of pride and satisfaction in their work.

Finally, art classes can help students develop a greater appreciation for the world around them. Through their artistic creations, such as paintings and sculpture, students can explore new cultures, traditions, and perspectives. This can help broaden their horizons and foster a sense of global citizenship.

In conclusion, I believe that art classes are important for children's development and making them compulsory in high school is a reasonable step. By providing students with the opportunity to develop important skills, express themselves creatively, and broaden their perspectives, art classes can help prepare students for success in both their personal and professional lives.

Sample 4:

The role of art education in the school system has been a topic of discussion today. It is widely acknowledged that art education plays a crucial role in a child's overall development. On the other hand, others claim that making art compulsory in schools may not be the best approach. While there are some arguments on both sides, I believe that it is important to strike a balance between these two views.

On one hand, participating in art classes can help students develop important skills such as creativity, critical thinking, and problem-solving. In art classes, students must use their imaginations and find new solutions to the challenges presented to them. These skills are not only beneficial in art but can also be applied to other subjects and to life in general.

On the other hand, making art education mandatory may not be the most effective way as students already have a wide range of interests and abilities, and forcing them to take art classes may not be the best use of their time. High school students may be better served by focusing on subjects that align with their interests and career goals to avoid them from struggling with the subjects they are not profoundly interested in, including art classes which potentially lead to frustration and dissatisfaction.

In my opinion, it is more effective to offer art classes as electives. In this way, students who are interested and talented in the arts can pursue them, while others can focus on their academic studies that align with their interests.

In conclusion, I believe that adopting a balanced approach towards the inclusion of art classes in the school system is crucial. By maintaining a balance between art education and academic demands, students can receive a well-rounded education that prepares them for success in the future.

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Leaders and directors in organizations are normally older people. Some people think that younger people could be leaders. Do you agree or disagree?

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Whether young people or seniors are better leaders in organizations has become a heated topic of discussion. In my opinion, even though younger people possess certain qualities for leadership, older people are more likely to succeed in managerial positions.

On the one hand, having young leaders can offer organizations certain advantages. First of all, thanks to their open-mindedness, young directors can facilitate more groundbreaking innovations. A prime example of this is the fact that most conglomerates in the technology industry nowadays were founded by young people: Snapchat was introduced by 21-year-old Evan Spiegel; Google was established by the 25-year-old duo - Larry Page and Sergey Brin. Moreover, young leaders are more sensitive to trends, which could be advantageous for the organization’s image. These managers can come up with creative ideas to boost the brand’s popularity and thus establish a firmer position in the market for the company.

On the other hand, I contend that organizations will be operated better under the guidance of older leaders. First, as veterans, older managers will enjoy the advantage of experience. The indication of this is that they will be able to assess the situation more thoroughly and make more informed decisions. For example, most multinational companies now are led by older managers, such as LVMH, which is still guided by 73-year-old Bernard Arnault. Thanks to his rich knowledge, the conglomerate has flourished. Secondly, older leaders are more respected by fellow employees as a result of their seniority. A key to a director’s success is regard and respect from their colleagues and subordinates, and being seniors, older managers enjoy this as a natural advantage, whereas younger leaders have to prove themselves in order to earn respect.

To conclude, even though there are young directors who bring vision and innovation to the organization, I believe that senior managers are more likely to find success in leading positions.

Sample 2:

People have different views about whether older or younger individuals are more suitable for important positions in organisations. While I accept that old people have significantly important qualities, I believe younger ones are more likely to become good leaders.

On the one hand, elderly people can be good leaders for some reasons. Firstly, as old people have worked for many years, they have accumulated much more work experience compared to younger workers. This might allow them to make wiser decisions and bring success to the company they work for. Secondly, older people are often more respected by others. Therefore, they can have a more powerful voice within the company, and people are more likely to listen to them. If leaders are young, they might find it hard to influence other employees.

On the other hand, I believe it will be better if young people take up important positions. The first reason is that young individuals tend to be physically stronger, so they can handle big responsibilities and much work. Being a leader requires people to work with much pressure, and old people are often not capable of doing that. Additionally, younger people are usually more creative, so they are more likely to find newer and better improvements which benefit the entire organisation. For example, a young manager can come up with a new advertising strategy for a product, which contributes to the increasing sales of the company.

In conclusion, while I accept that old individuals can be good leaders of an organisation, I believe these important positions should be given to younger people.

Sample 3:

The world is indeed witnessing a wave of young talented powerful leaders in various fields. Therefore, it is argued that more and more young people should be promoted to be leaders given the fact that it is customary for older leaders to lead companies and organizations. From my perspective, although young leadership can offer some freshness and innovation to a company, more experienced senior employees are more suitable to be in the decision-making positions.

Admittedly, what a young leading employee offers to the company is his endless spirit and excitement. These people are thirsty for success and therefore may work hard to show their capabilities. Young leaders often bring fresh perspectives, energy, a technological know-how that can push the company to another level. However, their decisions are often driven by emotion, so they are often quickly made and risky concerning the fate of the company. Therefore, young people should be guided by senior ones, who used to be young and fresh, but now calmer and much more experienced with higher EQ.

One good explanation for organizations to choose older and senior employees to be their manager or leader is the fact that these people often work for the company for a long time during which they have proven their loyalty, creditability, ability and built up their experience through hardships and failures. Another reason for choosing older experienced leaders is that they have more authority which is needed to lead the team and others. They also sound much more convincing, and reliable when dealing with complex situations like complaints from customers or riots from competitors. Last but not least, older leaders usually show a deeper sense of responsibility, which is often lacking in the young, when leading people.

To conclude, not because we are seeing some world-renowned young leaders with impressive success means that young leaders are more suitable to be leaders in organizations than older ones. Though the young minds can offer freshness, innovative ideas, energy, older leaders are more reliable, responsible and experienced in managerial and leading positions. I believe that companies should take advantage of the young employees’ input and initiatives, but reserve the leading roles for senior experienced, time-honoured personnel.

Sample 4:

In today's world, it is not uncommon for the management of an organization to be comprised of mostly older people. While some people argue that younger employees are better suited to these positions, I completely disagree with this thinking for the reasons provided below.

Older people, more often than not, make superior leaders for a number of reasons. First of all, a person who has worked in an industry for a long period of time is naturally more seasoned about that particular industry. Notwithstanding the importance of academic qualifications, when it comes to making managerial decisions, experience always serves as a better guideline. Bill Gates and his tech behemoth perfectly exemplify this principle. While it is irrefutable that Mr. Gates' credentials are impeccable, it is his tried-and-true experience in the computer industry to which Microsoft's colossal success should be attributed. Another reason why older people should be in charge instead of young ones lies in the former's better judgment. Expertise is not the sole factor that guides a leader's decision-making process; rather, it is one's life experience that provides him with discernment when he is met with options.

It is for the very arguments above that the younger generation ought to be spared from top posts in an organization. A number of young people nowadays take too much pride in their academic success or creativity. This way of thinking has made them fail to realize their lack of experience would do more harm to the organization than good. These young ones are also typically imprudent in making decisions, which disqualifies them from the job of a leader. Good leadership is often rooted in the ability to make careful considerations, which is a rarity among younger people.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that older people provide infinitely better leadership than the one that young people can offer.

Sample 5:

It is true that higher positions are usually held by older members in many organizations these days. While some people believe younger people would demonstrate better leadership, it is in my opinion that senior managers possess more advantages over their younger counterparts in leading a company.

To begin with, it is usually difficult for the young to compete with the old in terms of experience. Those who have gained adequate experience can more effectively manage to lead the individuals of an organization than those who do not. The reason for this is that business matters often require the people in charge to have not only the knowledge of coping with problematic situations but also strong nerves to calmly find a feasible solution. As a result, years of experience in a relevant position tend to make the elderly better candidates than those who are relatively young and new to the tasks.

Another advantage belonging to aged people is that they are likely to receive more support from the people in an organization. As the time spent working with the staff of the senior is often longer, they can understand their colleagues better, achieving more popularity. It is interpersonal communication skills and approval of other people that can tremendously affect the success of a leader. Younger members, on the other hand, will need more time to make contributions over time to prove themselves worthy.

In conclusion, I believe that critical positions of authority should be given to senior staff members for the certain reasons mentioned rather than the young.

Sample 6:

The leading individuals of many companies and big organizations are elderly most of the time. Albeit few believe that the young generation is much better than older individuals in terms of leading companies. Nevertheless, I personally do not agree with the opinion of these individuals, and I think that obviously there are many perks of young bosses. However, the grey-haired experience overrules all the perks of the younger generation, which I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

Rules in companies are changing nowadays, and many organizations are willing to give a chance to the new generations to be leaders. This is because there are many advantages of having young leaders, such as they are more enthusiastic, and they love to face challenges. Moreover, they are more technologically friendly than the older ones, which helps to reach more individuals. For instance, young leaders focus on marketing the same as they focus on their company’s products. This kind of attitude is helpful in expanding business. Hence, a plethora of organizations believes in younger more than older.

On the other hand, there are companies that trust elders more as the leading face of their group. This is because they value the experience of old people in the field. They believe that experience is definitely greater than bookish knowledge. To cite an example, Tata Group is still led by ratan tata, and his vision changed the companies which were in debt at one time into profit-making companies, and this vision can only be achieved by experience in the field. This is why many still prefer to give the command to older individuals.

In my view, other than experience, older people have one more valuable quality that most young individuals lack patience. Young ones want everything at a fast pace, and in their enthusiasm, they forget that big achievements also require patience. For example, many young invested in the stock market, but when the market went down, instead of waiting, they sold their shares while individuals like Warren Buffett waited for the market to rise again. This quality of patience made him a billionaire today. This is why I believe that experience and patience can beat the enthusiasm of young ones.

To conclude, in the 21st century, many things are changing, and individuals are choosing young leaders, but the impact of experienced elderly leaders is, of course, more than younger ones. Whilst there are many benefits of having young leaders, the old is-gold formula still applies in many cases, doesn’t it?

Sample 7:

It is observed that senior people take significant leadership positions in most companies these days. At the same time, some people believe that young minds could be more apt for these roles. I partially agree with this statement as I see the fit according to the requirement of the job and not with the relevant age range suitable for the job.

On the one hand, where the job professions or business companies have huge workforces that need senior people having the sound experience to be good leaders because they often have stronger people skills than younger ones. Older employees bring skills, ideas, work experience, and a depth of knowledge that adds value to the organization and business growth. They are more likely to develop time management, planning, and decision-making skills over the course of their careers, making them more stable and reliable bosses.

On the other hand, some popular career choices like advertising, promotions, and digital marketing, to name a few, require millennials or youth to lead as they follow innovative approaches to plan the tasks with great enthusiasm and passion. In all these professions where market research, digital platform, and creativity are involved, young minds do not hesitate to take up any challenges and adequately tend to take risks at the cost of opportunity and innovation, making them competent leaders to stimulate success at a faster rate.

To conclude, the argument says that the leaders of most organizations tend to be older people than younger ones; however, suitable job requirements and responsibilities become deciding factors for the lead role among the age groups.

Sample 8:

Whether young people can become the leader of big companies and organizations instead of elder people is a matter of rising dispute nowadays. Nonetheless, I would vouch for those young and enthusiastic people as I consider them qualified to take vital positions in this modern and fast-paced world.

On the one side, there is no denial of the view that aged people possess more edges being mature.

Primarily, their intellectual abilities make them unrivaled if compared to their younger counterparts. They have skills like long-term vision and assuming the big picture with their years of work experience and failures in their early working career and these are considered critical for the improvement of companies. Young people, however, do not possess such skills which lead them to make shortsighted judgments which might prove costly for the given organization. To add more, adjustment with bigger difficulties is another issue where young people may make errors whereas old people have a very low possibility to make erroneous choices as they can adjust quickly in those cases.

On the flip side of the coin, a few logistic reasons compel me to believe that young managers and CEOs can lead a company to its peak of success. Initially, compared to their old counterparts, young leaders nowadays are more educated with advanced knowledge and modern outlooks in their own fields, and this makes them far better alternatives. They can realize cultural differences easily and adapt to modern problems as they grow up with these issues and so they can empathize with other employees and potential clients more quickly. Furthermore, young leaders can apply technology in their work without facing many problems due to the fact that they are millennials or Generation Y who have a sheer volume of knowledge about state-of-the-art technologies. This can improve the productivity and promotion of companies rapidly.

In summary, as the selection of leaders for a company is a critical issue, age should not come here as a criterion and, in my opinion; young people should be preferred by companies due to their modern attitudes, in-depth knowledge of company cultures and latest technologies.

Sample 9:

In any institution, the responsibilities of the leaders are always high, and their performance usually has great impacts on how well the whole organization works. There are people who have voiced their concerns that people of old age, who currently hold the majority of authority positions, might not be as suitable for the job as younger leaders. Personally, I also believe that while mature leaders may have their strong points, organizations nowadays could work better under the leadership of younger people.

Firstly, it has to be said that older people have their own advantages in managing the affairs of an organization. With old age comes maturity, and in many cases, the experience accumulated through many years of working can allow elderly leaders and directors to see patterns and come up with solutions that younger people may not be able to think of. Another great side of old people is that they often can manage to stay calmer than the younger ones in times of crisis, which is greatly important for a leader.

However, I believe that there are important aspects of leadership that can be handled more efficiently in the hands of a young person. Since the job of leading and managing an organization can often be very demanding, it is the younger leaders, who have more energy and enthusiasm, that are more suitable to carry this great burden. Younger leaders can compensate for their lack of experience with vigor, energy and dedication to their work that often surpass those of their older counterparts. Additionally, elderly members can still act as advisers, combining their wisdom with the vitality of the young leaders in order to best advance the interests of the whole organization. Finally, in this rapidly changing modern world, a leader is required to occasionally take risks and make big changes. In these cases, the younger leaders appear to be the more suitable choice since they are more likely to take risks and challenge the status quo.

In conclusion, it is my belief that in this modern world, young people should assume the responsibility of leading our organizations, because older leaders, who have spent years focusing on only some certain approaches to problems, may be hesitant to abandon what have worked well for them in the past in favor of new, untested methods. They have characteristics and qualities that help them work better and more efficiently in their jobs than older leaders.

Sample 10:

It is true that many leaders and senior executives in global companies are elderly people. However, I would argue that those superb young people are also eligible to take important positions in today's world.

On the one hand, compared to the young generation, elderly people possess more edges. First and foremost, they have better cognitive skills, such as big-picture thinking and long-term vision. This is because years of work experience and failures teach them to take every aspect into consideration before making important decisions. By contrast, due to alack of social experience, young leaders seem to make shortsighted decisions sometimes. Moreover, since the old have already overcome countless difficulties and challenges prior, they can quickly adjust their mood in turmoil and lift the morale of the whole organisation.

On the other hand, there are two reasons why younger directors are also competent to be leaders in important positions. In the first place, with well-educated backgrounds, young leaders are more likely to have a deep understanding of cultural differences, and they can empathize with other employees and clients much better. Today, empathy plays a key role in retention of talents. For example, it is easy to misunderstand others in a cross-cultural dialogue. When good employees resign, they might take the company's knowledge with them, which is a brain drain for the company. Secondly, compared with the senior leaders, young directors can apply the latest technology and theory into practice, and this can counteract negative stereotype of management and greatly improve the productivity.

In conclusion, in my opinion, age should not be the criterion when selecting the leader of a company. Anyone who has the leadership can play his or her role in the organization.

Sample 11:

Decisions made by the leaders and initiatives taken by them often determine the fate of an organisation and that is why selecting the right people for the senior decision-making positions in a company is an important step. It is customary that employees in directorship and managerial positions often require years of experience while some people opine that young should be given the chance to lead a company. I cannot agree with this group of people as I believe that those decision-making positions are more suitable for experienced people.

To start with, directors or managers of an organisation were not directly appointed to these positions in most cases. They had to work for the company for several years, prove their worth, show their loyalty, establish their credibility and express their ability to be promoted to those senior positions. With time, they have become quite experienced and learned from their mistakes. Thus, their experience and expertise have taught them when to take a risk and when not to and how to tackle complex situations like riots or rivalry from the competitors. Due to this, decisions made and initiatives taken by those senior employees are more trustworthy and proven than any inexperienced employee, no matter how energetic or innovative he is!

Furthermore, young people have endless spirit, fresh perspectives, technological know-how and innovative ideas which are more fitting for producing better output than leading others. They should be guided by senior leaders who had once been young and fresh but now have more experience than energy. To cite an example. most of the IT firms have young employees but their team leads are mostly seniors. Again, young people are often driven by emotion and make quick decisions. This might be quite handy in facing some minor issues but when a large organisation's fate is concerned, the decisions should come from experienced executives. This, however, does not mean that a manager should not listen to young employees and take input from them.

Finally, leading a small team in an organisation and being an executive director in a large company are not the same thing. Young adults who have some leadership qualities should be allowed to lead a team but major decisions making positions should be held by deserving experienced personnel.

To sum up, I am not against letting young people take on some responsibilities or lead a small team. But from a more logical perspective, I believe that only experienced adults with a proven track-record should be in higher positions in an organisation.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Noise is such a problematic issue that it has raised big concerns recently. That is why some people argue that there should be strict control on the level of noise production, while others object to this idea, claiming that people have the right to make noise as loudly as they want. I believe that noise should be controlled for the betterment of human life quality.

On the one hand, it is understandable why there are supporters of loud noise. First, noise is indispensable to modern life. In the old-time, people did not have access to modern loud-producing equipment such as TV or music speakers and individual transports were not as popular. However, today people are so accustomed to noises such as blaring car horns or engine noise that they feel no strong objection to them and claim that noise control is unnecessary. Second, loud noise is integral in many critical occasions such as ceremonies or celebrations such as weddings or festivals.   Loud music is exciting, upbeat and can be pleasing to the ear that relieves people’s stress of work and study, refresh their mind and revitalize them. Undoubtedly, in this case, noise is an indispensable element.

Nevertheless, people’s health and life qualities can be reduced greatly under loud noise’s impacts. For one thing, loud noise such as blaring car horns or noise sounds from people’s clamorous arguments or from brassy nonstop traffic cause people an array of health problems such as cardiovascular problems, sleeplessness which dramatically lower human life quality. For another, unbearable noise interferes and distracts people from their work and study. In a recent survey about the effect of the learning environment on a student’s performance, 90% said that they work best in a quiet hushed environment such as the library while just 10% choose to work in noisy places such as parks or cafés. This example has indicated that booming noise is mainly responsible for low productivity and focus span/ attention.

To conclude, some people argue that they see no problem with excessive noise; therefore, noise levels should not be controlled. I disagree with that idea from every perspective and believe that blasting noise should be controlled effectively to improve humans’ health and productivity.

Sample 2:

There are those who opine that it is necessary to impose tough noise regulations, while others argue that creating loud noise is their natural right. This essay discusses both sides of the argument and why I believe that governments should introduce laws to control high levels of noise.

There are understandable reasons why some people believe introducing noise regulations is perceived to be imperative. The first reason is that loud noise can have negative impacts on people’s health. For example, being frequently exposed to high levels of noise from traffic or industrial activities can make people suffer from medical conditions such as hypertension, dull headaches or even hearing impairment. Another reason is that the distraction caused by noise can result in people having bad performance in terms of working and studying. For instance, students will have difficulty concentrating on their lesson if there is a construction site near their school.

On the other hand, others feel they should have the right to make as much noise as they want to for some reasons. First of all, there are other solutions than noise restrictions, such as technologies, for those who want to reduce the impact of loud noise. For instance, people who are bothered by high levels of noise can soundproof their house. In addition, creating loud noise is deemed a great way to release stress or to express excitement. For instance, football supporters often yell and chant slogans when cheering for their favorite football team. People therefore should have the right to express themselves in order not to feel limited by the need to mitigate the release of their excitement.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that both sides of the argument have their positive points. However, I am inclined to believe that it is better to impose laws to control the level of noise because the need to prevent people from the hazards of noise outweigh people’s right to express themselves.

Sample 3:

People of the twenty-first century are being plagued by noise pollution, a problem which is growing considerably in extent, frequency and severity. Due to numerous wide-ranging adverse effects brought about by noise, some are of the opinion that the government should enforce noise ordinances. However, it is also argued that individuals have the freedom to make as much noise as they want. Both sides of the argument will be analysed below.

Attempts should be made to regulate noise because noise is associated with many adverse health consequences. As studies show, a growing number of modern-day people are experiencing hearing impairment as a result of prolonged exposure to loud noise. No matter where it comes from - in their homes, at their workplaces or in other public places, noise is secretly killing the hearing ability of people of all ages, affecting their communication and also behaviors. In addition, noise can cause long-term effects on the psychlogical well-being through sleep disturbances. In fact, it is the culprit of frequent mood swings, decrements in work performance, memory loss and the decline in other mental functions. For these reasons, environmental noise should be kept under close control.

However, the argument that there should not be control on noise also has some convincing points. It can be said that noise restriction violates the basic human rights that every individual is entitled to. As long as people have freedom to eat whatever they desire, speak whatever is on their minds, they should also be given permission to make noise. Therefore, legislation to limit noise production can prove unfeasible.

In summary, the modern-day environment is being gradually degraded by noise. Nevertheless, the most effective method to control it is by education, not by force.

Sample 4:

It took centuries for the inhabitants of planet earth to transform into a civilised society. Norms and traditions that were earlier considered to be of great value are gradually replaced with modern etiquette and manners. Being a citizen of democratic society one has the right to act and express as per their likings such as making noise, but many people believe that freedom of expression in high decibel should be regulated. This essay will analyse both views before presenting an opinion.

On the one hand, people argue that they are free to do and act whatever they like. Proponents of this viewpoint say that this is their fundamental right, and making noise or living peacefully should be the sole preference of an individual. For instance, in sporting events, like football, the decibels are at their highest peak or celebrations like birthday parties at home where children shout on the top of their voice to make their presence felt. Moreover, clattering depends on the situation also, for instance, patient's attendants in third world countries shout on the administration staff and make noise if they are overcharged on their bills. They believe that by shouting they can suppress another party.

On the contrary, another school of thought believes that one should live peacefully and respect the rights of their neighbour, passersby, and dwellers and so on. They say that people should always raise their concerns with politeness and softness in attitude. Proponents of this viewpoint don't argue that noise in the form of music or parties should be regulated, and the government should define laws and policies to kerb it because they distract and discomfort individuals who are sick, studying or sleeping and so on. For instance, in the UK one can be jailed if found disturbing their neighbour through loud music or quarrel.

To recapitulate, the aforementioned provides solid arguments in favour of both views. I personally believe that noise levels by an individual should be strongly regulated through legislatures in residential areas, hospitals, libraries and so on. However, one should be allowed to enjoy and make noise in sporting arenas, parks, etc.

Sample 5:

It is often considered by many that they can make noises as per their wish, while other people believe that there should be strict rules to control the amount of noise an individual makes. In my opinion, noise pollution causes ample social and physical issues; hence, it should be controlled.

On the one hand, freedom to speak and making noise is one of the human rights. In other words, every citizen has a right to make sounds or noise as they prefer. For instance, in some special events such as birthday celebrations, dancing parties making noise is accepted in the current society. Moreover, making sounds is often considered as accepted behaviour, especially among small children. Making noise provides enjoyment among people obviously during joyful occasions. It helps to ventilate one’s emotions, particularly anger and sorrow.

On the other hand, noise pollution is often accepted as one of the major concerns of the current world due to several drawbacks. Firstly, unpleasant sound causes ample health issues. For example, the high-intensity sound could cause increased stress level, deafness, cardiovascular problems and even sleep disturbances. Secondly, noise would often affect wildlife. Animals would probably develop aggressive behaviour and get irritated due to the high frequency of unpleasant sounds. To cite an example, during thunder and lightning pet animals became frustrated as a result of high pitch sounds. Finally, it leads to trouble communicating. In other sense, communication between individuals becomes difficult owing to noise from the surrounding. In other words, communication gets distracted.

In conclusion, the noise would adversely affect society and one’s body. Hence, necessary steps to be taken to control it. In my opinion, people should abide rules to control noise formation for the welfare of the society and inhabitants.

Sample 6:

People hold different views about whether people should have the freedom to produce noise or comply with some regulations of it. In my view, it is important that noise making is put under control. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe in their rights to generate noise freely. As people these days often have to suffer from considerable stress at work or school, they tend to find an effective way to relieve it. In some cases, recreational activities such as karaoke singing or party holding can bring a certain amount of relaxation, mitigating stressful situations for everyone. If too strictly imposed, any restriction of noise may deter people from gaining access to one of the useful methods of relaxing.

However, I can understand the arguments against noise makers. Firstly, excessive levels of noise can cause serious disturbance to the nearby residents who also have the right to take a proper rest after a tiring day. Those who are affected by the loud sounds from their neighbors may not only be unable to relax but also have their levels of discomfort increased. In the long term, this will definitely have a negative impact on their quality of life. Another reason for this opinion is that too much noise can produce detrimental effects on the health of the unintentional hearers. For example, constant exposure to high pitch noise can result in auditory problems, for example, hearing loss. Hearing-impaired individuals are very likely to experience difficulty in their daily life.

In conclusion, although there are good reasons why people should be allowed to make as much noise as they wish, in my opinion, some appropriate controls are necessary.

Sample 7:

It is common knowledge that in today’s modern world, loud noise is a normal occurrence. There has been an argument over this issue, with many insisting that there ought to be tight restrictions on noise control, while others maintain that everyone should be free to make noise as they please. Each side has their own reasons, and in this essay, I will examine each view before stating my own.

There is some sense in the argument for the right to make noise. There are many activities essential to our lives that, unfortunately, result in loud noises. Any strict regulations on these activities can, therefore, greatly disturb our daily life. For example, the high volume of traffic is often seen as the main source of noise pollution, but it is so important to our dynamic world that any attempt to limit the flow of traffic can affect the life of many people. Not only is the emission of loud noise often inevitable, but it is also sometimes necessary. Festive activities or public celebrations, such as carnival parades or football games often require loud music and noise to create the right atmosphere. Therefore, a ban of all loud noises will either be impractical or likely affect many aspects of our normal life.

However, it is also important to keep the noise we create under control. Constant loud noises can inflict serious harm on our health, especially on our hearing. It is not unusual for people who are exposed to continuous blasts of high-volume sounds, such as construction workers or nightclub DJs, to lose some of their hearing ability or even become permanently deaf. Moreover, loud noises can be highly disruptive. For many people whose job requires concentration, from students to medical doctors, being in a noisy environment can hinder their work and lower their productivity. Thus, there must be certain regulations concerning our noise-making activities.

To sum up, both of these opposite sides of the debate seem to have valid reasons for their argument. It appears that we cannot afford to completely dismiss the noise problem, yet it is also advisable that we refrain from imposing too strict noise regulations. Personally, I believe that any decision regarding this matter should be made with consideration of the ideas from both sides.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Sample 1:

Expeditions to distant isolated destinations have been on the rise recently. While this can potentially benefit wildlife conservation programmes, I firmly contend that the development is disadvantageous overall considering the risks to the environment.

On the one hand, both scientific and touristic expeditions can help develop conservation programmes. Indeed, on-site scientific research conducted at Antarctica has successfully illuminated the mating habits of many nearly extinct animal species such as the emperor penguins thanks to close observation of these species, driving initiatives to boost their fertility rate two-fold. Meanwhile, tourists who visit remote destinations might learn about the damages of climate change, thus becoming intrinsically motivated to protect Earth’s fragile ecosystems from further degradation. For example, a campaign to preserve Himalayan bald eagles was initiated by two Swedish explorers on an expedition after they eye-witnessed eagle chicks dying of starvation on a far-flung mountain peak.

On the other hand, I believe the threat of pollution these activities pose must be highlighted. One obvious danger is oil spills from the cruise ships and other forms of transportation traveling to the remote observation sites. In 2007, a cruise boat heading to the South Pole struck an iceberg and sank to the ocean floor, causing a diesel fuel spill that covered 25 square kilometers. Despite enormous efforts from the international community, the disaster claimed the lives of thousands of sea creatures including many rare marine birds in less than two weeks. It also resulted in permanent damage to the Antarctic fauna, algae and plankton, which are the foundation of the local food chain, disturbing the ecological balance across the entire continent and nearby waters.

In summary, although scientific research and intrepid tourism in remote areas might partly contribute to conservation breeding efforts, I am of the opinion that they pose more pressing existential threats to the environment and natural habitats. Therefore, a complete travel ban should be imposed by the United Nations to preserve the ecological and biodiversity of these unique environments.

Sample 2:

As the result of increasingly sophisticated transportation, many scientists and tourists can traverse across the world to exotic distant lands. This essay would attempt to make the case that while this enablement presents some merits, they are ultimately overshadowed by the demerits.

Visits to isolated regions such as polar areas can facilitate the knowledge expansion regarding the Earth’s ecological system. In these visits, scientists and nature lovers can explore firsthand the secluded landscape and wildlife, which likely helps deepen their understanding of and instill a sense of appreciation for the diversity of our home planet. Scientists go about this by setting up research stations in the area, which allows research work to take place, and consequently leading to a more environmentally informed public. For instance, research expeditions made to the South Pole in the last several decades have given some insight into the exotic wildlife residing in the area. Another benefit is that travelling to previously inaccessible destinations can offer more diversity for tourists, especially thrill seekers or adventure lovers. These travelers can enjoy a relatively exclusive and likely once-in-a-lifetime experience, which not many can claim to have since such traveling is still not for the masses.

The above-mentioned benefits, however, are likely dwarfed by the drawbacks from my perspective. Due to the long-distance nature of the trips to remote areas, the amount of carbon emission released to the environment is inevitably enormous. What’s more, as the means of transportation for long-distance travel is often ships, oil spillage could occur, and in fact they have on many occasions in the South Pole. These accidents may take many years, or even decades, to be reversed. The appearance of tourists can also disturb the wildlife in these once human-free areas, especially with the lack of oversight in these sparsely populated areas. The safety of tourists themselves also poses valid concerns. If accidents do happen along the excursion, it would take lots of time for rescue teams to reach the victims, which puts travelers’ lives at stake.

In conclusion, although the possibility to travel to remote destinations can broaden our knowledge and provide thrilling experiences, these benefits are by no means a worthy trade-off for the negative impacts on the environment and travelers safety risks.

Sample 3:

With the aid of transportation technologies, it is now possible to reach even the most distant regions in the world. However, I would contend that the merits of this development are outweighed by its drawbacks.

On the one hand, the ability to travel anywhere in the world offers considerable benefits. First of all, the discovery of new areas allows everyone to gain a better understanding of the earth and new species. This newfound knowledge can act as a precursor to / clinical breakthroughs or provide scientists with valuable insights to more effectively combat environmental issues such as climate change. Access to previously unreachable scenic beauty also suggests tourism opportunities, as travel enthusiasts are always on the lookout for new exotic getaways.

However, I believe the positive aspects of this trend are eclipsed by more immediate threats to life in this remote natural world. More often than not, as major corporations set foot on and exploit tourism in these areas, the construction of tourism facilities drives out the indigenous people living there. Hotels and recreational facilities emerged at the expense of the locals' accommodation. These people are coerced into / assimilation, which, as history has indicated, results in loss of civilizations and cultures. The presence of foreign visitors in these places also poses certain threats to the natural environment, namely water contamination, land degradation and natural resource depletion.

In conclusion, as exciting as the thought of traveling to remote natural areas may sound, I believe they are better off left untouched.

Sample 4:

As technology has developed, people can now travel to remote natural areas. While this trend is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant.

On the one hand, visiting isolated natural places has some benefits. Firstly, this is a newer and more interesting type of travelling. Since going to other cities or countries has been too common for most people, it might be more exciting for them to explore new places such as the South Pole or the Amazon rainforest. This gives them valuable experiences and unforgettable memories. Secondly, when visiting remote areas, people, especially scientists, might acquire more knowledge about the natural habitat. For example, when coming to the North Pole, scientists can learn about the life of polar bears which live far away from humans.

On the other hand, I believe this development has far more drawbacks. The first one is that travelling to remote natural areas can be risky if the travellers are not sufficiently prepared. For instance, the temperature at the South Pole is usually very low, which adversely affects people’s health. Travelling to forests can also be dangerous as people have to face the risk of being attacked by animals. Also, since visiting isolated places often requires a large amount of investment in researching and ensuring the safety of travellers, the costs of travelling tend to be high. Therefore, it seems like only scientists and rich people can afford this activity, so this development is likely to benefit only a small group of individuals.

In conclusion, I believe the disadvantages of people being able to travel to remote areas outweigh its advantages.

Sample 5:

It is true that humans can now set foot in wild regions far away from civilisation. While I accept that this development can have certain benefits for the human race, I believe that it is likely to have a harmful impact on nature.

On the one hand, undertaking expeditions to the wilderness can be valuable in terms of both science and recreation. There are a considerable number of undiscovered secrets that can be tremendously useful for researchers to conduct their studies. For instance, environmental scientists can analyse the data about the thickness of ice layers over millions of years in both hemispheres to predict the possible changes in global temperatures. Such findings are crucial for the governments to develop appropriate plans to alleviate global warming. Furthermore, the untouched beauty of these areas is usually appealing to travellers, providing people with an attractive option of holiday destination or excursion.

However, I would argue that these positive aspects are outweighed by the drawbacks. When people are given full and easy access to the distant and unpopulated areas, there are likely to be more moving there to reside or start their business. It has been shown that substantial damage has been done to nature such as massive deforestation or water contamination due to humans’ lack of environmental awareness. If there is inadequate protection of the environment from this type of action, wild regions in the world will no longer exist, unspeakably affecting not only the overall ecology but also the lives of other people.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of travelling to wild environments are more significant than the possible benefits for the mentioned reasons.

Sample 6:

Thanks to recent technological advances, travel to remote destinations such as the South Pole is now feasible. Personally, I think this trend is advantageous and disadvantageous in equal measure.

The growth of tourism in distant areas is beneficial in several aspects. One of the most significant benefits is that visitors are able to explore the pristine conditions of these regions, which is virtually impossible to find elsewhere. In these deserted areas almost untouched by humans, nature thrives. In Antarctica, for instance, tourists will be able to enjoy the sights of towering glaciers and crystal clear waters, as well as observing penguin colonies and schools of whales in their natural habitats. Another group to benefit from travels to the Antarctic is scientists. By studying the changes made to the environment and species there, they might be able to observe the impacts of global warming and thus devise ways to conserve the continent.

On the other hand, these trips can cause damage to these environments as well. The first drawback to mention is the risk of pollution. If any accidents occur to the ships touring the Antarctic, it might result in oil spills and debris that could threaten the delicate ecosystems. There is also the risk of invasive life forms. Visitors could unknowingly carry vegetation or even insects from outside into the area, causing disruption to the ecological balance there. Additionally, the growth of tourism could disturb wildlife. They may leave their habitats to avoid tourists, which would in turn affect their breeding and the balance of the ecosystems.

All things considered, trips to distant destinations could bring about both positive and negative impacts to the regions. However, I believe that in view of preserving the natural conditions there, such trips should be limited to a small number of individuals.

Sample 7:

Travelling to remote locations of Earth has evolved as a major topic of concern in recent decades. With advanced technology, missions to these places are no longer impossible for both scientists and tourists. While promoting exploration to such areas has its advantages, I believe the disadvantages are far more significant.

One the one hand, the idea of bringing more people to remote locations is well received by many advocates for a number of reasons. First, some people may regard expedition voyages to untouched areas as exquisite adventures. As the tourism industry expands to these potential destinations, new jobs can be created, and economic benefits can be derived. Furthermore, with the aid of modern means of transport, geologists may now approach the previously inaccessible sites, some of which can be fossil fuel deposits. This is increasingly significant to humankind, as the majority of the current fossil fuel sources have been overexploited and there can be a global energy scarcity in the near future.

On the other hand, substantial disadvantages are apparent because the burgeoning of tourism and geological research may heavily disturb the flora and fauna of the remotely located places. This is due to the unlikeliness that tourist ships bring waste back to the departure point, and that there is no waste treatment plant in untouched places, such as the South Pole. In addition, the work of geologists involves drilling into ice sheets hundreds of metres thick to search for oil and gas. These activities, along with the cumulative tourist waste, may consequently have a disastrous effect on the natural habitats, threatening the lives of millions of animal and plant species.

In conclusion, the drawbacks of the practice of travelling to secluded places such as the disturbance to the local flora and fauna are insurmountable, far outweighing the aforementioned benefits.

Sample 8:

Nowadays, owing to the development of technology, a number of humans are reaching remote places, including the South pole, which our ancestors had yearned to reach. Although some people believe this brings disadvantages, I believe this development entails more merits than drawbacks.

On the one hand, the first drawback is that travelling to distant natural environments destroys the previous biodiversity. With the advance in tourism, incoming visitors can alter the existing nature of animals and plants. Furthermore, travel plans always have a considerable possibility of encountering disasters. Destinations are the places that have not been investigated enough due to severe natural conditions, which may result in large-scale incidents. For example, at the South pole, a great number of explorers disappeared because of unexpected weather or terrain.

On the other hand, I argue that there are more advantages than drawbacks. First of all, expeditions can broaden the potential for future research since there is no data on such places for the investigations of new findings on biodiversity and historical routes. For instance, the investigations on the volume of ice at the South Pole revealed that the pace of ice decline was a serious issue. The research result became a wake-up call to the international community. In addition, commercialising travel increases business opportunities. This inspires the local economy and gives financial security for preservation.

In conclusion, in my opinion, though travels to unreclaimed lands have hazardous effects on the environment and safety, this situation gives positive consequences through the progress in research and enlarging business opportunities.

Sample 9:

The ability to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole, presents both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it allows scientists and tourists to gain first-hand experience of some of the most fascinating and untouched natural landscapes on the planet. On the other hand, such travel can have negative impacts on the environment and the delicate ecosystems that exist in these areas.

One advantage of travelling to remote natural environments is the opportunity it provides for scientific research. Scientists can study flora and fauna of these regions, conduct experiments, and make observations that would not be possible in other settings. This can lead to important discoveries and a better understanding of the natural world. Furthermore, tourism can generate revenue for the local communities and promote conservation efforts in these regions.

However, there are also several disadvantages to this development. One of the biggest concerns is the potential damage to the environment caused by increased human activity. Human waste, pollution, and disturbances can all have negative impacts on the delicate ecosystems that exist in these areas. Additionally, the travel itself can contribute to climate change through the release of carbon emissions, further exacerbating the negative effects on the environment.

Moreover, tourism can also disrupt the lives of the indigenous people who live in these regions. Tourists may unwittingly disrespect the cultural traditions of these communities or bring new diseases that could be harmful to the local population. This can lead to social and cultural conflicts that may have long-lasting effects on the local communities.

In conclusion, while the ability to travel to remote natural environments can provide benefits in terms of scientific research and tourism revenue, it also has negative impacts on the environment and the local communities. The advantages and disadvantages of this development should be carefully weighed, and measures should be taken to mitigate the negative effects of increased human activity in these areas.

Sample 10:

The ability to travel to remote destinations such as the arctic and various islands contains advantages related to travel and research as well as disadvantages regarding environmental preservation. In my opinion, the pros decisively outweigh the cons.

On the one hand, the tradeoffs of being able to travel to remote areas are environmental. Most remote locations are untouched by the rapid industrialization of the last two centuries and despite the best efforts of local governments there is likely to be some contamination from tourism. A good example of this would be various South Pacific islands. The Philippine archipelago in particular is a popular tourist destination, and this has resulted in increased litter and development of the natural environment for tourist friendly infrastructure such as hotels and restaurants. Similarly, the cultural environment for locals is at risk. Numerous indigenous cultures struggle to maintain their unique heritage as foreigners and modern products pour into previously isolated regions.

On the other hand, the main positives relate to travel for pleasure and research. Locations that are not currently occupied by traditional societies were effectively without purpose. Many of them, ranging from remote islands to terrain with inhospitable weather such as Mt. Everest, now offer attractive experiences for the intrepid traveller. For researchers, the benefits are even more tangible. The best-known example of this was the Galapagos islands where Darwin sailed more than a hundred years ago conducted foundational research for his theory of evolution. Since then, the ability to explore new areas has resulted in thousands of discoveries and advances related to archaeology, medicine, marine life, and the environment.

In conclusion, despite the injurious impacts of tourism, it is my strong belief that the opening up of unexplored regions is a net positive. However, governments must still regulate such travel to mitigate the inherent dangers.

Sample 11:

Earth has been acknowledged to possess a wealth of natural riches, scenic beauty, polar ice caps, mountain ranges, hidden terrains, and so on, since time immemorial. Scientists and curious sightseers alike frequently embark on journeys throughout the globe in search of undiscovered natural wonders. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of these investigations and conclude with a reasonable conclusion.

Studying the local population, flora, and fauna, and the impact of climate changes over time is one of the benefits of exploring distant natural ecosystems by researchers and visitors. Scientists are free to conduct studies that may one day shed light on the origins of life, the functioning of the planet's climate, and other fundamental questions. Travelers to the area will be able to soak up the natural magnificence of the area, soothe their minds and bodies, and generally have a great time on vacation. Many tourists, for instance, seek out remote and isolated locations for their vacations so that they can reconnect with nature and their own inner peace.

However, these types of expeditions can cost a lot of money. Travelers in really far locales may put their lives in jeopardy owing to a lack of essential amenities including food, water, medical care, and other necessities. In addition, the impacts of environmental and climatic changes on their lives remain largely unknown. There is a concern that more visitors will visit as a result of these explorations, ruining the area's natural attractiveness and threatening the native species’ habitats.

Summing up, there are good reasons to support any point of view, as we have shown. Despite this, I believe the benefits of exploration outweigh the drawbacks, as it not only leads to significant discoveries but also helps to tame the innate human thirst for excitement and adventure.

Sample 12:

These formerly inaccessible regions of nature are now open to tourists because of technological advancements. I think the drawbacks of this tendency outweigh the benefits to a far greater degree.

There are positive aspects to exploring wild, uninhabited areas. To begin, this is a novel and intriguing kind of transportation. Traveling to new urban centers or countries has become routine for many, therefore it may be more exhilarating for them to discover the South Pole or the Amazon rainforest. They get knowledge and memories that will last a lifetime. Second, it's possible that scientists, in particular, can learn more about the natural environment if they travel to more isolated regions. Scientists, for instance, can study polar bears, which live in isolation from people, by traveling to the North Pole.

Nevertheless, I think there are many more negative repercussions of this trend. The first is that if one is adequately trained, traveling to natural locations far from civilization can be safe. The South Pole, for example, has extremely low average temperatures, which can have catastrophic effects on human health. Forest travel is risky because of the possibility of being attacked by wild creatures. Moreover, travel costs tend to be expensive because exploring remote areas typically necessitates a substantial financial commitment to research and assuring the safety of tourists. So only scientists and the affluent can afford this activity, so only a selected few will benefit from this innovation.                                                                                                                                                                      

In conclusion, it is certain that the downsides of individuals being able to visit far-flung locations outweigh the rewards.

Sample 13:

Modern times have opened up previously inaccessible natural areas to tourists and environmental scientists. In this essay, I'll make the case that the advantages of this strategy much outweigh any potential downsides. The essay will begin by showing that the main benefits are a reduction in stress and an improvement in the local economy, and it will then go on to show that the primary disadvantage is not the creation of pollution but rather the perception of that as a problem.

The primary motivation for visiting undeveloped wilderness places is the pursuit of serenity. People today are under a lot of stress from their jobs, and as a result, some of them are looking to escape to a peaceful natural environment to refocus and recharge. Moreover, this can aid scientists in locating uncommon plant species that can be used for the study of the prosperity of the community. For instance, according to research published in The Times of India, many conventional medicines are derived from natural herbs that were discovered by scientists in faraway lands decades ago.

Some people think that opening up natural areas to tourists and researchers will ruin them for everyone. The reason for this is that a growing number of visitors would visit these areas in the years to come, posing a threat to the ecological system. Many backpackers to these locations are conscious of the likelihood of environmental damage, so they take measures to minimize their impact. In addition, governments implement rigorous standards to preserve the tranquillity of these areas. 

The idea that exploring natural areas will lead to pollution is erroneous, but the reality that doing so helps to achieve peace and development of that area more than makes up for it.

Sample 14:

In recent years, it has been possible for tourists to visit distant regions that were accessible only to scientists and explorers. In fact, the industry is booming with visitor figures rising year after year. While there are certain risks involved, I believe these are outweighed by the benefits.

Travel to remote areas is usually associated with risks regarding environment and tourist safety. Firstly, tourism activities might disturb the fragile environments in these areas. For example, there are incidents in Antarctica when vessels carrying tourists collide with submerged ice, spilling a huge amount of oil into the sea. This can severely interfere with marine life. Land animals are also affected. A recent accident involved a polar bear being shot dead to save a tourist who got too close to the animal. Secondly, keeping tourists safe is another concern because remote areas often have harsh and unpredictable weather conditions. For example, if accidents occur in the Arctic, tourists can be left in sub-zero temperature for hours before rescue arrives.

Nevertheless, the above-mentioned risks are relatively low and thus can be managed; the benefits, on the other hand, are much greater. First, when seaside or mountainous holidays have become too familiar, distant regions offer fresh travel experiences. For example, tourists who travel to the Arctic can see stunning icy landscapes with northern lights and impressive wildlife such as polar bears and penguins. Second, remote-area tourism helps raise environmental awareness. While global warming is not news, the average person seems to be not too concerned with it. Their daily activities are generally not affected, and the impacts of global warming seem non-existent. This attitude might be changed with a trip to the Pole, where they can first-hand observe ice glaciers melt and see wildlife struggle to cope with the changing environment.

In conclusion, it is my view that tourism in distant regions is advantageous, provided that environmental protection and tourist safety are guaranteed.

Sample 15:

Scientific expedition and tourism growth to remote natural habitats has resulted in significant public discussion in recent years. While there are some specific benefits, I would argue that this trend does more harm than good.

On the one hand, increased accessibility to remote wilderness could be advantageous to scientific studies and environmental preservation. Firstly, scientific research in remote areas, including Antarctica, relatively remaining untouched, might enrich human understanding of global environmental issues, including climate change, ozone depletion, and sea-level rise. Ever-accelerating impacts by human activities since the industrial revolution could be better understood by researching ice glaciers in polar areas, containing a unique record of the world’s past climate which later helps scientists to offer more accurate predictions about the Earth’s future environment. Secondly, ecotourism in remote communities might benefit the environment and the local economy because numerous locals and their communities have been relying on ecotourism as their sustainable source of income and conservation funding.

On the other hand, I would argue that there are more drawbacks to this trend. Firstly, increased contact between humans and wildlife animals could strain the already fragile natural environment. There are some reported cases that humans encountering polar bears have caused unnecessary conflicts of killing these wild animals for the sake of protecting humans. Also, scientists and tourists could cause the danger of introducing non-endemic species ultimately devastating native wilderness. Secondly, large ships carrying visitors and scientific professionals could cause great concern as various incidents of oil or fuel spills over these pristine environments could pose a severe challenge for rescue and evacuation and incident resolution due to its isolated locations from inhabited areas. The unavailability of emergency facilities and a dearth of preparation and readiness among tourists could be easily met with unpredictable dangers on these unfamiliar fronts.

In conclusion, while there are some merits of tourists and scientists exploring remote destinations, I believe that the demerits of this trend eventually outweigh its benefits.

Sample 16:

Travelling to isolated places is becoming easier for scientists and tourists. Although this trend is beneficial to some extent, I believe its drawbacks are more significant.

Going on a visit to remote destinations can be advantageous for two reasons. For scientists, field research in remote settings can provide an insight into scientific problems and encourage new ways to investigate the solutions that otherwise would be problematic to achieve in conventional environments. For example, field research in Antarctica would allow scientists to look closely at rising sea levels and therefore find ways to mitigate the detrimental effects of climate change. Regarding tourists, this kind of travelling helps them to have a change of scenery, which can be especially beneficial for adventurous travellers who look for something out of the ordinary. That is, getting off the track can provide trav ellers with a great escape from the hustle and bustle of everyday life while having incredible views and exploring wildlife in unspoiled destinations.

However, the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages. Conducting fieldresearch in remote places is challenging as there are many issues associated with travel hurdles, dangerous weather or animals or even local politics that may not offer conveniences or comfort for scientists. If researchers do not possess good problem-solving skills, their life might be at risk. Besides, tourism is likely to pose threats to these unspoilt places in environmental terms. The presence of so many visitors tends to create an enormous amount of waste or disturb the habitat of native plants and animals. For instance, the highest mountain in the world. Everest, is now strewn with litter that is left by hordes of mountain climbers

In conclusion, although the advantages of contribution to science fields and opportunities to get extraordinary travelling experiences that can be offered by visiting remote places, I strongly believe that the disadvantages of being involved in dangerous situations and disturbing the native environment are greater.

Sample 17:

Remote environments with hostile natural conditions, like the South Pole, used to be out of bounds for the general public. However, this is no longer the case in the present day when scientists and tourists can make a casual visit to such places. From my point of view, the benefits that this trend offers can hardly justify the potential catastrophic drawbacks that it poses.

On the one hand, travelling to remote natural environments brings certain advantages. As regards tourism, these natural areas make for exotic traveling destinations that can create great revenues for the industry. As the uncharted elements of these areas whet the curious travellers’ appetite for adventure, they would not mind paying a handsome fee to get this unique experience. This money, in turn, can go into the preservation of the natural features there. In terms of scientific research, expeditions made into isolated areas may yield some useful discoveries about the origins of various creatures, including homo sapiens. These findings can be added to the existing theories of evolution and offer people a new insight into the history of the world.

On the other hand, I am of the conviction that the potential drawbacks are more disastrous when it comes to visiting remote areas. Insufficient preparation and equipment on the part of travelers can expose them to the hazards of extreme weather. For example, the South Pole and North Pole are infamous for their unyielding cold, to which a long exposure can adversely impact the physics of dwellers on these lands and might even result in death in severe cases. On top of that, a flux of travelers to these lands can alter the already existing course of nature. Specifically, the presence of humans, especially in numbers, can often drive native animals off their natural habitats, which can force them into danger from other predators or hostile environments. Consequently, the ecosystem there may suffer greatly.

In conclusion, I believe that the feasibility of travelling to remote areas can bring more harm than good. It is both the travelers and the natural habitats and wildlife that will bear the consequences.

Sample 18:

Explorers, along with scientists, have long traveled to previously inaccessible locations in the interests of exploration and understanding our world better. Now tourists are also going on excursions there for purely personal reasons with potentially serious effects such as bringing in pollutants and disturbing local wildlife. The benefits of such activities are therefore highly contentious.

For thousands of years, mankind has sought to reach every part of this world in the interest of discovering it all and learning as much as possible. This has opened up these remote areas to human encroachment at a level never experienced before; for example, after the Southern Pacific Ocean was mapped, whalers and seal hunters were sent there in droves to bring back whale oil seal skins for burgeoning European markets. This brought riches to many merchants and an expansion of trade networks which definitely increased the world economy. However, there were no controls on the killing, so some species were hunted to near or complete extinction, affecting the natural ecosystem greatly.

As the world economy has grown, more people have taken to traveling to remote places, even back in the early 1980’s tourists could take a commercial flight over Antarctica from New Zealand, until a plane crashed into a mountain in bad polar weather. While this is a disaster for the people killed, their families and the tourism industry, it also severely impacted a pristine environment, with debris scattered over a large area. This is not an isolated incident either as thousands of tourist boats go to unexplored areas such as Northern Alaska every year, all impacting fragile environments, including wildlife such as Polar Bears.

Overall, the only advantage I can see is scientific research, which can bring incalculable benefits whereas the negatives are manifold, from pollution, including from accidents, to deliberate hunting of endangered species. Personally, I believe these areas should only be open to carefully vetted scientific research to ensure future generations still have this as part of their world.

Sample 19:

Recent advancements in technology have enabled humans to travel to distant places in nature. This is scientifically beneficial to all societies, yet concurrent tourism activities can contaminate the pristine conditions of these places and negate the scientific benefits.

Being able to travel to these places is an unprecedented opportunity for scientific development and application, especially in the field of climatology. Scientists can now travel to pristine locations to collect live specimens, fossils and observe the local natural phenomena that may not have been documented before. For example, studying the layers of the ice cores from the North and South Poles has helped scientists to reconstruct the climatic trends and patterns which date back to millions of years. These findings can add valuable insights and revolutionise the way humans understand our environment in the past and the present. Recently, such findings have been extremely useful in the ongoing discussions on how to solve global issues such as global warming.

Despite unique opportunities it offers to the scientific community, traveling to unspoiled natural destinations could inflict irreparable damage on them when tourism is involved, thereby doing more harm than good. Littering and vandalism are two of some of the most pressing problems caused by tourism. For example, numerous mountain peaks which previously could only be reached by serious mountaineers have reportedly been polluted and defaced after the installation of aerial tramways which grant unrestricted access to all visitors. The aforementioned remote environments could suffer the same fate when waves of tourists frequently land there. Furthermore, the contamination brought to these locations by touristic activities could also interfere with the quality and accuracy of the scientific research carried out there.  

In conclusion, exploiting remote natural locations for tourism could nullify the scientific values they offer and even cause permanent damage to these places. Only selected organizations and individuals who follow strict rules and regulations to preserve these places should be allowed to access.

Sample 20:

Since ancient times, planet earth has been known to host a multitude of natural resources, scenic beauty, polar ice caps, mountain ranges, hidden terrains and so on. Often Scientists and tourists travel all over the earth to explore hidden natural place, admire their beauty or conduct scientific research over its ecosystem. This essay will analyse the merits and demerits associated with these explorations before drawing a logical conclusion.

One of the benefits of exploring distant natural ecosystems by scientists and sightseers is to study the local inhabitants, flora and fauna and impact of climatic changes in that region over time. Scientists can perform their research work which can potentially lead to some important discoveries about the evolution of life on earth, climatic behaviour and so on. Analysis of snow caps in Polar Regions, rivers in Arizona, lakes in Himalaya's and soil in remote forests can help to answer unsolved mysteries. Tourists can enjoy the untouched beauty of that region, relax their souls and enjoy their vacations. For instance, many holidaymakers prefer to choose sites that are not crowded and far away from known places, so that they can enjoy the nature to its full extent and revive their souls.

On the contrary, these explorations often incur huge expenses. People visiting remote places can risk their lives in danger due to unavailability of basic necessities of life like food, water, medicines and so on. Moreover, unknown environmental and climatic changes can have adverse effects on their lives. These explorations might attract more tourists which will destroy its beauty and ecosystem of local in-habitats.

To recapitulate, the aforementioned provides several plausible arguments in favour of both views. However, in my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages as the exploration not only result in important discoveries, but it also helps kerb the human desire for adventure and thrill.

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1 điểm

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Sample 1:

The protection of wild animals and birds is an important part of preserving the natural environment. However, people are divided over whether more resources than necessary have been allocated to this cause. In this debate, I am against the belief that wildlife protection has received too much attention and investment.

Some might argue that enough has already been spent safeguarding wild creatures. They claim that pursuing this goal does not immediately provide economic benefits or improve people’s welfare. Therefore, any more time or resources allocated to conservation is likely to be a waste, and it is better to divert funds to education or healthcare investments, which directly benefit humans. In addition, there is a concern that more spending than currently to protect wildlife is unwarranted. As a matter of fact, much time and resources have been expended for this purpose, but some consider the effectiveness unsatisfactory. The illegal trade of wild animal parts such as horns and gallbladder, for instance, is ongoing and difficult to put to an end.

However, I believe the wild animals and birds deserve every penny to ensure their survival. This is because protecting them from extinction involves not only preserving existing individuals, but also enabling them to procreate. In the world, fewer than 3,000 Indian Tigers are left, yet each species requires 10,000 individuals to proliferate; these creatures are, therefore, in dire need of help in terms of breeding. Furthermore, safeguarding wildlife does positively impact the economy, as evidenced by safari parks. Wild animals live safely and freely in these locations, while visitors pay to observe them as a form of ecotourism. This, consequently, produces an additional source of income for local businesses. Taking these points into consideration, it can be clearly seen that wildlife protection is a multifaceted investment.

In conclusion, the various benefits of conserving wild animals and birds prove its worth, so spending on it is hardly ever too much. For the sake of biodiversity and ecological balance, it is essential that wildlife species are not driven to extinction; time and resources are necessary to realize this goal.

Sample 2:

In recent years, the increasing allocation of resources for the protection of wild animals and birds has given rise to the question of whether or not it is justified. While some argue that these efforts are crucial for maintaining biodiversity, others believe that the resources and attention dedicated to this cause are excessive. Personally, I think that humanity has other needs that are equally worthy of funding.

The first point to consider is that the disproportionate focus on wildlife conservation often overshadows more pressing human concerns. For instance, resources allocated for the protection of a single endangered species could potentially be redirected to address urgent human needs, such as healthcare, education, or poverty alleviation. In developing countries, where resources are particularly scarce, the choice to prioritise wildlife over critical human issues can be especially problematic. For example, in some African nations, vast sums are invested in protecting certain wildlife species, while basic human necessities remain unmet for a significant portion of the population.

Furthermore, excessive focus on wildlife protection can lead to unintended negative consequences for local communities. Often, conservation efforts involve restricting access to natural resources that communities have traditionally relied upon, leading to economic hardships. In parts of Asia, for instance, the establishment of protected areas for tigers has sometimes resulted in the displacement of indigenous communities or restrictions on their access to forest resources, which are vital for their livelihoods. Not only does this create conflict between humans and wildlife, but it also raises ethical questions about the fairness of such conservation strategies.

In conclusion, while the protection of wild animals and birds is unquestionably important, striking a balance is crucial. The current overemphasis on wildlife conservation, often at the expense of addressing human needs and respecting the rights of local communities, suggests a need for rethinking. A sustainable approach should consider both environmental and human factors equally.

Sample 3:

Many today would argue that there is undue emphasis on the safeguarding of various species of wild animals and birds. In my opinion, though there are legitimate practical objections, it is a positive overall given the potential impact of abandoning such efforts.

Opponents of current conservation initiatives argue they are an unnecessary waste of valuable resources. The natural development of ecosystems involves animals going extinct and fighting for survival. Human intervention can therefore be seen as unnatural to a certain degree as animals that adapt will flourish and others will become obsolete. Added to this is the economic burden. The majority of endangered animals are in developing nations in Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America. National governments in these countries have a variety of other concerns related to healthcare, education, employment, and so on that take precedence over animal populations.

However, humans should protect animals as their disappearance is irreversible. The issue of responsibility is not, to my mind, a compelling enough argument as blame can be assigned in a number of directions and is too self-righteous to be persuasive. Instead, it can be argued that permanent damage to the Earth will impact future generations. The Earth depends on biodiversity not only for the development of new medicines and the functioning of a healthy food chain but also in order to showcase its varied expressions of life. As the only known home to life in the universe, it would be short-sighted to eliminate species of animals and damage this reputation.

In conclusion, despite the financial cost, it is essential to protect wild animals which may go extinct. Governments must sometimes prioritize the future over short-term considerations.

Sample 4:

Some people argue that protecting wild animals and birds is a waste of time and money. I completely disagree with this point of view.

Many current practices involving the use of animals illustrate that governments have not invested enough time in the issue of animal welfare. For example, lawmakers have banned the use of wild and exotic animals for entertainment purposes, yet wild animals are still kept in captivity for circuses. This inconsistency between law-making and law enforcement suggests that the issue is not being taken seriously enough by those in power. Furthermore, it seems that an educational approach is unlikely to change people’s awareness about the issue. For many years, people have underestimated the role of wild animals, and many today still hold a belief that wild animal products have exceptional powers. To re-educate such people requires patience and consistency.

In addition to this, resources spent on wildlife protection are still limited. Many authorities believe that wild animal and bird conservation is only of minor importance, and human welfare is far more of a priority. This is why governments are not willing to allocate large amounts of funds and resources to the conservation of wild animals, which makes it difficult for organisations that are actually trying to make a difference. For instance, in Vietnam, we do not see any long-lasting bird conservation campaigns due to a lack of funding from the government, and it is non-governmental organizations that currently raise the funds to take care of existing wild birds.

In conclusion, while there is some time and resources spent on wild animal and bird protection, I believe that far more resources are needed to achieve that ultimate goal.

Sample 5:

The allocation of attention and resources to the protection of wild animals has become a contentious issue. While some argue that excessive efforts are being directed towards wildlife conservation, others believe that such measures are necessary. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present my own opinion.

Critics of intensive wildlife conservation efforts argue that the resources could be better utilized to address more immediate human concerns. They contend that issues such as poverty, healthcare, and education should take precedence. For instance, in Vietnam, where rural areas still suffer from a lack of basic amenities, diverting funds to wildlife protection might seem unjustifiable. These critics believe that if resources were reallocated to human development, the overall well-being of society could be significantly improved. Furthermore, they argue that natural selection and evolution should take their course without human interference, allowing ecosystems to balance themselves naturally.

However, I believe that the protection of wild animals is of paramount importance and should not be diminished. Biodiversity plays a crucial role in maintaining ecological balance, which directly impacts human survival. For example, in Vietnam, the preservation of forests and their wildlife helps regulate the climate, prevent soil erosion, and maintain water cycles. If these ecosystems were to collapse due to neglect, the consequences for human populations would be dire. Additionally, many species are endangered due to human activities such as deforestation, poaching, and pollution. It is, therefore, our responsibility to mitigate these impacts and preserve wildlife for future generations. Conservation efforts can also drive eco-tourism, providing economic benefits and raising awareness about the importance of biodiversity.

In conclusion, while it is essential to address human development issues, I firmly believe that the protection of wild animals should not be compromised. Biodiversity is integral to the health of our planet and our own well-being. A balanced approach, where resources are allocated to both human and wildlife needs, would be the most prudent strategy. By ensuring the protection of wild animals, we safeguard the intricate web of life that sustains us all.

Sample 6:

In recent years, the debate surrounding the allocation of resources and attention to the protection of wild animals and birds has intensified. While some argue that too much focus is given to this issue, I firmly believe that the preservation of wildlife is of paramount importance and deserves the resources and attention it receives.

Firstly, the conservation of wild animals and birds is essential to maintaining the delicate balance of ecosystems. Each species plays a unique role in their habitats, and the loss of these species can have far-reaching consequences, including the collapse of entire ecosystems. For example, the disappearance of a single predator can lead to an overpopulation of prey species, which in turn can damage plant life and disrupt the ecological balance. Therefore, allocating sufficient resources to protect these species contributes to the overall health of the environment and the planet.

Secondly, preserving wildlife has significant economic benefits. Ecotourism, which revolves around the appreciation and exploration of nature and wildlife, is a rapidly growing industry. Many countries rely on this sector to generate revenue and create jobs, making it essential to protect and conserve wildlife populations. Without allocating adequate resources and attention to the conservation of wild animals and birds, these economic opportunities could be lost, leading to negative consequences for local communities.

Finally, wild animals and birds serve as vital resources for scientific research and medical advancements. Many species possess unique traits and abilities that can help researchers develop new treatments and therapies for various diseases. For instance, the venom of certain snakes has been used to develop life-saving medications, while the study of migratory birds has led to a better understanding of navigation and climate change. Therefore, protecting wildlife is an investment in the future of human knowledge and well-being.

In conclusion, I disagree with the notion that too much attention and resources are dedicated to the protection of wild animals and birds. I wholeheartedly believe that investment should be given to this cause for the benefit of all. 

Sample 7:

In recent decades, an unprecedented global increase in awareness of wildlife preservation has been recorded. There are those who are concerned that too much attention and allocation has been spent on this. This essay strongly disagrees with the statement and will elaborate on the evidence and give relevant examples.

It is undeniable that wildlife has economically benefited humans for centuries. First and foremost, agricultural production activities greatly rely on wildlife. To be more specific, without the intervention of wild animals, farming processes would deteriorate. This is because a great deal of wild species, such as bees, worms and several types of birds, play pivotal roles in the ecosystem which includes crops that are planted by farmers. Therefore, more resources should be aided in maintaining the biodiversity of the ecosystem, and the word ought to be spread to raise awareness amongst the community. Furthermore, protecting wild animals also means prosperity for the tourism market. Some species are exclusively indigenous to certain lands and require tourists to travel in order to see them. To illustrate, kangaroos are a local species of Australia, and they have assisted the country’s economic growth significantly just by attracting international travelers. As a result, more resources should be subsidized to wildlife conservation as an investment for long-term benefits.

In spite of all the advantages wildlife preservation offers, some still argue that wild animals do not deserve that much concern. They claim that a portion of the fund for protecting wildlife should be invested in other fields such as scientific research and healthcare. However, such thinking is only valid to a limited extent, because what this argument fails to consider is the devastating result of an unbalanced and damaged ecosystem. Take bees as an example, they pollinate flowers in the process of producing honey, thus helping plants grow and ensure the continuity of many other species, therefore without which the ecosystem will be completely devastated. Considering the current situation in the world, environmental habitats are being destroyed at an alarming rate despite the considerable effort that was put into conserving the environment. This implies that even more resources and effort must be put into protecting wild animals and habitats.

To conclude, wildlife is continuously being degraded globally, and more measures must be conducted to alleviate the damage and assist recovery. Any act of funding or propagating to raise international awareness should be appreciated.

Sample 8:

There is a prevailing debate on whether wildlife protection is a significant concern given the rapid advancement of human activities. I totally disagree with the notion that protecting wild animals and birds is of minor importance.

Firstly, human activities severely impact wildlife. The natural habitats of many animals and birds are increasingly encroached upon for poaching, exploitation of resources, and illegal settlements. This intrusion leads to habitat destruction and puts wildlife at significant risk. For example, the Amur leopard, native to Russia and China, suffers from habitat loss and poaching due to logging, development, and illegal hunting. This has reduced its population to around 84 adults, threatening ecosystems and biodiversity. Conservation efforts, such as protected areas, anti-poaching patrols, and community outreach, emphasize the critical need to preserve wildlife and habitats for future generations.

Secondly, the resources dedicated to wildlife protection remain limited. Many believe that human welfare takes precedence over animal conservation, leading governments to prioritize funding towards human-related issues. Consequently, wildlife protection receives minimal financial support, hindering the efforts of organizations striving to make a difference. In Vietnam, for instance, there are no long-lasting bird conservation campaigns due to insufficient government funding. Non-governmental organizations must raise funds to care for existing wild birds, showcasing the financial challenges faced in wildlife conservation.

In conclusion, the detrimental impact of human activities on wildlife and the insufficient resources allocated for their protection highlight the importance of prioritizing conservation efforts. Ignoring these issues would lead to irreversible damage to biodiversity and ecosystems.

Sample 9:

The protection of wildlife has become a frequent subject of debate with strong arguments for and against. Personally, I believe that humans are paying too much attention and allocating too many resources to this issue, as will now be explained.

Firstly, if we allow any species to disappear, this is actually not a disaster. Some people may argue that biology will be seriously affected if birds and wild animals are on the verge of extinction, but this is an exaggeration. Fossil evidence suggests that the mass disappearance of the dinosaur did not cause any harm to other species on the Earth but merely triggered the emergence of others such as the mammal. Therefore, we should not devote too much attention to the protection of wildlife.

Secondly, public money is limited. This means that the national budget should be allocated to more urgent issues rather than expanding too much in the conservation of wild animals and birds. For example, more resources should be diverted to medical research to find out remedies for fatal diseases such as HIV and cancer, which may help to save thousands of lives in society.

Finally, the government can simply protect wildlife by continuing campaigns to raise public awareness of the protection of wildlife habitats or impose stricter punishments on activities that may harm wild animals. Any individual who hunts wildlife for food or for pleasure should be given a heavy fine, and this may discourage them from threatening the life of wild animals. In conclusion, while I do not refute the argument for the conservation of wildlife, I believe that it should attract less attention and fewer resources from the public.

Sample 10:

Many people suppose that we are devoting too much attention and resources to protecting wild animals and birds. So, are we truly expending too much attention and too many resources as they have claimed? I would say no. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with this view and present some arguments and examples to support my opinion.

On the one hand, it can be argued that we are not paying enough attention to wildlife conservation. There is a significant bias in the allocation of funding and assistance for different species, depending on their popularity, size, or attractiveness. For example, tigers, elephants, and lions receive more direct support than reptiles, amphibians, insects, and corals. Similarly, among mammals, big carnivores and primates are favored over small rodents and bats. Even pollinators like butterflies and bees are given more help than beetles and flies. Furthermore, richer countries tend to fund their own endemic species over other countries’ endemics. However, most of the world’s species, especially endangered ones, are found in the tropics, which are poorer than the temperate regions. Moreover, wildlife conservation is often seen as a charitable cause rather than an essential part of caring for the planet.

On the other hand, we are actually harming wildlife rather than protecting it. We often claim to support the preservation of animals, but we do not act accordingly. For instance, we advocate for the protection of polar bears, rhinoceroses, etc. but we still consume plastic goods, fur coats, leather boots and bags, etc. Additionally, we engage in many activities that destroy wildlife habitats. We deforest land for wood fuel, paper, and other products. We displace wild animals by expanding our urban and industrial areas. We emit greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide into the atmosphere by burning fossil fuels and this causes global warming, which affects the climate and weather patterns.

In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea that we are spending too much attention and resources on protecting wildlife animals. I have shown that we are not paying enough attention to many species that need our help, and that we are actually doing more damage than good to wildlife with our actions. Therefore, I believe that we should increase our efforts and awareness to conserve wildlife for the benefit of ourselves and future generations.

Sample 11:

Our ecosystem depends on the harmony between each living species on the earth. Some argue that until now, we have spent a lot of money and attention on the conservation of wild animals and birds. However, I completely disagree with the above-mentioned statement, and in the upcoming paragraphs, I will highlight the reasons for my disagreement.

From the current standpoint, we believe that the earth is the only planet where life exists, and each and every animal, plant, insect or bird has their own role in maintaining the ecosystem on earth. Nevertheless, human activities have disturbed this balance for a few centuries. In order to expand, humans have destroyed many forests, which were natural habitats for a plethora of wild animals and birds. Because of our activities, the place of natural forest is taken up by the concrete jungles we build without thinking about this outcome. To elaborate, many animals are on the verge of extinction because of the removal of their habitats, such as koalas, Asian tigers and many more. This also affects the food chain of other animals because they depend on each other. Hence, it is necessary to protect wild animals and birds to save the earth, and we have to spend resources for it because we are the ones who are responsible for this situation.

Furthermore, people believe that we have been protecting them by creating zoos and wildlife for centuries. Still, individuals do not understand that the zoo’s environment can never be compared to the natural habitats. Many zoos’ animals live in climate conditions that are not comfortable for them. For instance, bears require cold weather and large open areas, but in the zoo, they live in a hot environment and a small cage just to entertain humans. Moreover, when individuals visit wildlife centuries, they pollute these centuries and throw plastic and litter here and there. These all things affect the breeding of animals too. So, ultimately zoos serve the purpose of entertaining humans and not protecting animals.

The people who believe that we are spending too much on the protection of them do not understand the importance of animals and birds in maintaining the ecosystem. They are not able to see the future threats that their extinction can lead to. Such people believe that we should spend more money on healthcare, education and space exploration instead of protecting animals, but they forget that we can not survive without animals. To illustrate, for healthcare research, we require animals. Some medicines are made from animal products and many more.

To conclude, wild animals and birds are also as important as other animals for maintaining the ecosystem and human activities threaten such animals. Therefore, it is our responsibility to save them in order to protect our earth. So, we should definitely give more attention to them before it is too late for all on earth, isn’t it?

Sample 12:

Some individuals believe that too much attention and exorbitant finances have been utilized towards the protection of wildlife across the world. I disagree with this notion to a great extent.

To begin with, the reason why I believe animals need protection is that it is important to keep biodiversity. As an explanation, every species has its own role in the food chain; therefore, if one species of animal disappears, probably the other will also become extinct. For example, if we take a food chain, frogs use flies as their food, but frogs are snakes’ food. If flies disappear, the frog will disappear; therefore, it is significant to preserve biodiversity. Furthermore, today humans intervene and manipulate nature exceedingly more than ever. That’s why many animals have vanished or lost their inhabitants. Therefore, wildlife protection is important.

To continue, another reason for my disagreement is because of irrational human activity. It’s crystal and clear that the world is advancing before, and this naturally has a huge impact on the environment pollution, and over-exploitation of natural resources are just a few on this list; therefore, humans are responsible for the protection of wildlife. For instance, the Australian government uses huge amounts of money to protect forests because they exploit almost half of their wildlife. On the contrary, when spending a huge amount to ensure wild animal safety, the remaining sector may be underdeveloped.

To conclude, some peoples claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals may cause a decrease in another section; however, I disagree with this notion to a great extent because animals should be protected because there is part of biodiversity, and it is humans responsible for protecting them.

Sample 13:

It is commonly witnessed that too much emphasis is placed on allocation of attention and resources towards the preservation of wild animals and birds. I firmly believe that these efforts are essential for preserving ecological balance, promoting biodiversity, and safeguarding the health of the planet.

First and foremost, wildlife upholds the intricate harmony of ecosystems. To explain, every single species, regardless of its size, is a crucial part of the environment. For instance, bees are tiny creatures, but they help in pollinating crops and ensuring agricultural success. Meanwhile, predators play a significant role in regulating prey populations, thus preventing overpopulation. Therefore, failure to safeguard these species could result in disruptions in ecosystems and jeopardizing the invaluable services they offer.

Secondly, ecosystems rich in diversity possess a higher ability to adapt to various changes, including climate shifts, diseases, and invasive species. Ultimately, prioritizing the safeguarding of wild animals and birds increases the longevity and robustness of the environment. Furthermore, the vast array of wild species holds an inherent worth, as well as a special place of importance in various cultures. Apart from this, the presence of rich and thriving wildlife is crucial for ecotourism, a key source of revenue for local societies and an important means of protecting these diverse creatures.

However, it is important to recognize the importance of finding a balance in resource allocation. To explain, while preserving wildlife is undoubtedly critical, other urgent matters, such as poverty alleviation, healthcare improvement, and education access should also be addressed. Achieving equilibrium among these priorities is crucial in promoting sustainable development.

In conclusion, it is clear that the allocation of attention and resources towards safeguarding wild animals and birds is not only necessary, but also justifiable as by doing so, a healthy ecological balance and biodiversity is promoted.

Sample 14:

It is argued that protecting wild animals and birds is drawing/attracting too much concern and too many resources of society. Personally, I totally agree with this point of view.

There are two main reasons why I think people have paid too much attention to the protection of animals. One reason is that many non-governmental organizations have been established in order to protect animals all over the world. However, they are too concerned about animal-related activities in many parts of the world. For example, it is unreasonable PETA, an animal-protecting organization, accused Katy Perry of using tigers and elephants in her music video “Road” for commercial purposes while she did not. Furthermore, news about the wild can be shared rapidly on the Internet. If a bear is imprisoned somewhere, this news will be widespread on social networks such as Facebook on a large scale immediately.

In addition, people have also spent too many resources protecting wild birds. Firstly, a great deal of money is required to carry out any project to protect wild birds, in which infrastructure and research are the two most expensive. The more difficult research to preserve the DNA of wilds is, the more it costs. Secondly, the expenditure for this protection is quite unnecessary to some extent. While funds should be raised to improve the living standards in some regions, investment in bird protection appears to be a waste of money.

In conclusion, it seems to me that both concern and resources are focused too much on the protection of wild animals and birds in this modern world.

Sample 15:

It has long been considered that protecting wildlife is the responsibility shared by all humans. There are some people, however, who argue that this topic is being given too much attention and that the resources allocated to wildlife protection are much higher than they should be. While I agree that we are making great efforts to ensure the safety of wild animals, I do not believe that these efforts are being misplaced.

One of the reasons why we are not wasting our money, time or other resources on these tasks is that the results of our endeavors are still largely inadequate. Each year, the number of extinct animals still rises, and there are still poachers and consumers of animal products who are untouched by the laws. Clearly, the fact that we have not finished the task of protecting the animals of our planets suggests that more, not less, effort and attention should be given to this.

Secondly, the protection of wile species of animals or birds can benefit us in many ways; therefore, it should not be considered a waste of our investment. For example, the Chinese’s successful breeding program of giant pandas have not only managed to save these animals from the brink of extinction, but also generated great amounts of revenue from tourism activities to their pandas’ zoos. Similarly, reservation areas in Africa, the original purpose of which was to help protect wild animals such as lions or giraffes, also welcomes flocks of tourists every year. It appears that by spending and focusing on protecting animals, we are also encouraging tourism and earning ourselves profits much greater than our initial investment.

In short, I am skeptical of the idea that we are spending too much on wild animals’ and birds’ protection. On the contrary, as the arguments above have pointed out, we should invest even more in ensuring the safety of Earth’s biodiversity. Only by doing so can we both fulfill our responsibility with other animals, while still benefiting ourselves greatly.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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Sample 1:

It is true that many museums and historical places attract a multitude of tourists instead of local inhabitants. There are several reasons leading to this, and solutions should be adopted to solve this issue.

Museums are more often visited by tourists for a number of reasons. Firstly, people who live in the neighborhood are often familiar with their traditional customs and history. Therefore, they lean towards devoting their spare time to exploring the unseen or unknown at other places. Meanwhile, tourists tend to go to places that they have never been to, so that they can have a better understanding of local cultures and arts. In addition, the expense of entrance fees to these historical sites may be a deterrent to many local people. Take the ancient citadel of Hue in Vietnam for example. When going to this place, visitors have to pay around 7 dollars, which is a great amount of money for average Vietnamese people.

However, there are a range of measures that the government could take to address this issue. The first step is for the authorities to arrange appealing exhibits or programs at these sites. For example, some didactic as well as recreational competitions should be held to stimulate the locals’ curiosity and interest, and therefore they could attract them to pay a visit to these places. Another measure that can be taken is to lower admission fees or offer discount tickets to the locals to encourage them to visit these historical attractions.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that in many regions, tourists have more interest in visiting museums and historical areas than local residents do. However, there are many measures that can be taken to tackle this problem.

Sample 2:

These days, a lot of museums and historical sites seem to appeal mainly to tourists, rather than locals. This essay will discuss a number of plausible reasons why this is occurring, and a number of possible ways to attract more local people.

There may be a variety of factors contributing to the low numbers of local people visiting museums and historical sites. Firstly, it is possible that most local people have already visited such places and may already have significant knowledge of their own culture and history, and therefore do not feel the need to return to these places often, or even at all. Therefore, the majority of people visiting are mostly tourists. Furthermore, many local people probably prefer to spend their free time and holidays visiting other areas outside of their hometown or country, because they are more interested in learning about other cultures and history, rather than their own.

Although it does seem to be quite a difficult task attracting more locals to visit their own museums and historical sites, there are a number of solutions that could encourage them to do so. One possible solution may be for local governments to continually upgrade museums by rotating artefacts and displays, in order to arouse more interest from locals. Different exhibitions could be displayed and promoted more often, focusing on different themes, or aspects of the culture. Secondly, governments could also encourage and fund annual trips for local school children to museums and historical sites. And lastly, free entry to such places for locals may also encourage more local visitors.

In conclusion, attracting local people to visit museums and historical sites in their area may be a difficult process, however, there are a number of ways that locals could be encouraged to do so.

Sample 3:

Tourists are generally drawn to museums and historical locations when visiting new countries. However, records have shown local people’s low attendance at these attractions. I will put forward some explanations before solutions can be drawn to tackle this problem.

There are several reasons why tourists, instead of the local people, come to museums and historical places. First, these locations can provide visitors with a comprehensive overview of the traditions in the particular locality they are situated in. As a result, such destinations are generally more appealing to the newcomers than to the locals, those without the need to familiarise themselves with the traditional values of the region. Moreover, because the layout of museums and historical houses is likely to remain unchanged through the years, they can be visually unattractive to the local inhabitants, who may have been to these sites at least once in their younger years.

Several measures can be prompted to promote locals’ attendance rate at buildings for historical relics and museums. The main solution is to change the public’s perception of such places as sites for only monotonous activities. Should civic events, including weddings, anniversaries, and concerts be allowed to be held in these locations, they would attract substantial public attention to historical values. Another resolution is that historians and preservationists should be featured more frequently in the media, with their articles on the tremendous worth of museums and historical remains.

To conclude, historical areas and museums can be uninteresting for local citizens because they can be too familiar with the culture that these places depict. To better this, there should be more media coverage on historical assets and more open-door policies to use such locations as spots for more public-oriented activities.

Sample 4:

In terms of local people’s attendance, museums and historical places have always paled in comparison with other recreational centres. This essay will present some reasons why this has occurred and put forward some solutions to resurrect the interest of local people in visiting these places.

The small and dwindling number of local visitors to museums can firstly be attributable to the low frequency with which activities are held. In other words, the renewals of existing exhibits or the organization of new programs and events are few and far between. For this reason, little interest is aroused in those who have once been to museums or places of historical significance. Furthermore, museums and historical sites do not come cheap. In fact, to get admission to these places, visitors are often required to pay a substantial amount of money, which can be worth a day’s salary.

In order to drum up more interest of local people in coming to museums, a number of ways can be employed. What can be done first of all is to organise activities which incorporate art performances with appropriate content. This not only encourages the attendance of local people but also represents a great opportunity to educate them about the history of their places of origin. In addition, the authorities can also lower the admission fee or offer discounts to local inhabitants.

To conclude, many reasons can be given as to why local people lose their enthusiasm for museums and places of historical importance. However, the revival of these places is within our grasp should proper actions be taken.

Sample 5:

Museums and other venues of cultural significance have been disappointed in their surprising lack of visits from the local population, instead having most visitors coming from abroad. In this essay, I will outline why I believe the lack of interest from local populations arises from the fact that they are already part of the culture and thus do not feel the need to discover it. In order to remedy this, I argue that museums should constantly change their exhibitions to uphold variety and pull in more domestic visitors.

I believe that it is almost counter-intuitive that the local populace, who have been affected the most by cultural and historical sites in their town, have the least interest. It may merely be the case that the reason why foreign tourists are the main visitors is because they come to experience local sites and cultures for the first time, and as such are more attracted to these places of cultural and historical significance due to their novelty. This is why many Parisians do not visit the Eiffel Tower, for example, because they already see it every day, and spending money to explore it is simply a waste.

Thus, I argue that in order to attract the local populace, most museums should use a system of special exhibits that are replaced after a few months. This instills a sense of urgency as the exhibit is only available for a limited time, which may foster the interest of the local populace. The Modern Art Museum in London regularly hosts various exhibitions, for instance, attracting millions of visitors from London every year. This way, locals might find it more worthwhile to explore local museums, since there is something new to see every time.

Overall, I argue that the reason why many local people do not visit their museums or historical sites is due to a lack of novelty, and as such, this can be fixed by a more dynamic exhibition.

Sample 6:

Museums and historical sites are often frequented by tourists while local populations may show less interest. This disparity in visitation can be attributed to various factors, including a lack of awareness, high admission fees, and a sense of familiarity that can lead to indifference. Recognizing these factors, it is crucial to implement strategies to encourage local engagement and appreciation of these cultural landmarks.

One key reason for the lack of local interest is a lack of awareness of the historical and cultural significance of these sites. Locals may not be informed about the stories, artifacts, and events these museums and sites represent, leading to a sense of indifference or a lack of appreciation. This lack of awareness can be addressed through targeted educational programs and campaigns. Schools can incorporate museum visits into their curriculums, while community organizations can host workshops and lectures on the history and importance of local historical sites.

Another significant deterrent for local visitors is the cost of admission. Museums and historical sites often charge high admission fees, making them inaccessible to many local residents. This can be especially challenging for families and individuals with limited financial resources. Addressing this barrier requires a more inclusive pricing structure. Offering discounted or free admission for local residents on specific days or during special events can significantly increase accessibility and encourage more locals to visit.

Furthermore, the familiarity of these sites to local residents can sometimes lead to a sense of complacency. Local individuals may have seen these sites countless times and believe they already know everything there is to know, leading to a perceived lack of novelty. To counter this complacency, creative initiatives are needed to foster a sense of renewed interest and appreciation. This could involve organizing interactive exhibitions, interactive tours, or workshops that provide a fresh perspective on the history and significance of these places. Events like cultural festivals, community gatherings, or local art exhibits centered around the museum or historical site can also encourage local participation and make these places more engaging.

In conclusion, while tourism plays a vital role in supporting museums and historical sites, it is essential to recognize and address the gap in local engagement. By creating awareness through education, increasing accessibility through financial incentives, and fostering a sense of excitement through engaging events, more locals can be encouraged to discover and appreciate the cultural treasures within their own communities. This will not only enrich their own lives but also contribute to the vibrant cultural landscape of their city.

Sample 7:

While museums and historical sites are ubiquitous attractions that draw streams of foreign visitors, they are largely ignored by local residents. There are a number of ways to rationalize this as well as some feasible solutions to turn the situation around.

The primary reason why local people hardly visit these places is because humans naturally take lightly the things they have ready access to. Take the Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum for a locally relevant example. It is unlikely that any of Hanoi’s residents hasn’t come across the building and the generous campus that surrounds it, yet few have taken the effort to enter and admire what’s inside. On the other hand, the daily queue in front of the mausoleum is more often than not comprised of people from other parts of the country and foreigners.

Another reason for the absence of local attention towards museums and historical sites is the lack of appeal of these places themselves. Save for the few most frequented by foreign visitors, most of the historical and cultural attractions are in terrible shape. Subpar hygiene and poor arrangements inside these buildings are among the many consequences caused by a modest budget for conservation.

However, a number of measures can be taken to revive the interest of local people in their city’s historical attractions. Firstly, more funding should be dedicated to the restoration of these places. While damage and imperfections caused by wars can be seen as charms, certain sanitary standards should be adhered to in order to ensure a pleasant experience for visitors. Secondly, artifacts and items curated in museums should be arranged in such a way that is appealing to the younger audience. A more youthful revamp in lieu of the traditional stiff and serene atmosphere will go a long way in getting small children as well as teenagers excited to learn more about the rich history and heritage that museums and historical sites offer.

In conclusion, various solutions can be adopted to attract more local visitors to museums and historical sites.

Sample 8:

Although most places have sites of historical interest and a variety of museums to visit, it is predominantly tourists who come to see them, not local people. This essay will examine the reasons for this before suggesting some possible methods of attracting local people.

The main factor is the different motivations of tourists and local people. For a tourist, the aim when visiting another country, city or region, is to learn about that new place and possibly to understand its culture and history. Visiting historical sites and museums is an excellent way to do this. On the other hand, local people have often lived in the area for much of their lives and have either learned this at school or understand it through personal experience. In addition, tourists are on holiday and have set aside time and money for these activities. However, local people may be too busy working and prefer to prioritise their spending on such things as school, shopping and socialising.

Despite this, attendance of local people could be encouraged in a variety of ways. First and foremost, the perception of museums and historical sites could be changed by holding events at these places. For example, they could hold cultural festivals or galas for the community to celebrate a unique aspect of that particular place. Another possibility is to have special promotions, such as a reduced price or free tickets provided in local newspapers and magazines. Related to this, concession cards could also be provided to local people, so they are encouraged to come more regularly.

In conclusion, tourists have different motivating factors to local people, which accounts for the reasons that they are more likely to visit museums and historical sites. That said, it is possible to encourage attendance by local people through cultural events and promotions.

Sample 9:

It is currently observed that most visitors at many historical locations and exhibitions are from other places rather than locals. This tendency might stem from ticket prices and the perceived attractiveness of these places, but it can be addressed through effective measures by management.

To begin with, there are two compelling reasons why many locals do not visit museums or historically rich destinations in their areas. The foremost one is the price of entrance tickets. Specifically, some local people consider entrance tickets excessively high, causing them to prioritize more affordable pastime options. For example, London’s museums usually cost between $30 to $50 per visit, which is significantly more costly than a casual outing. Additionally, people are generally uninterested in learning more about regional attractions with which they might already be familiar. For instance, many Hanoians have never entered the Temple of Literature because they have been taught about its construction and cultural values repeatedly at school.

However, those in charge of museums and historical places can attract more local visitors through several methods. The most reasonable approach is to lower ticket prices for nearby residents. Managers might offer special discounts or even eliminate entrance fees for them. Although this might result in a reduction in ticket sales, it can be compensated for by an increase in sales of souvenirs or refreshments during visits. Furthermore, it is imperative to offer thrilling experiences to all visitors. An illustrative example of this is the Military Museum in Ho Chi Minh City, where virtual reality has been adopted to allow people to immerse themselves in the tense atmosphere of battlefields. As this attraction has gone viral on Vietnamese social media, the number of local visitors has risen significantly in recent years.

In conclusion, local people do not visit museums and historical attractions mainly because of costly entrance fees and a low level of interest due to familiarity. However, if the management of these locations reduces ticket prices for residents and invests in enriching the visiting experience, they will soon welcome more locals as visitors to their sites.

Sample 10:

It is observed that while many museums and historical sites are popular among tourists, local attendance is relatively low. This essay will examine various reasons behind this phenomenon and propose solutions to enhance the appeal of these venues to locals.

Several factors contribute to the lack of interest among local people in visiting museums and historical sites. Primarily, locals often find these places too familiar, as almost every resident has visited the top attractions in their city or country. For instance, most people living in France have visited the Eiffel Tower, a famous historical monument. However, they do not frequently revisit it since it has remained unchanged for nearly 100 years. Additionally, locals acquire historical knowledge through school education, which may make museum exhibits and historical sites seem redundant. In contrast, tourists are drawn to new experiences and yearn to explore local culture and history through these sites. The blame for the low attendance among locals should also fall on museums which have outdated and monotonous collections as well as inadequate strategies to attract visitors mainly due to funding shortages. This further discourages local visits.

To make museums and historical sites more appealing to local people, a multifaceted approach is required. Firstly, museums should regularly introduce new collections and invest in new exhibitions, while historical sites should organize fresh activities to rekindle local interest. For example, the Central Museum in Indonesia frequently changes its exhibition themes and collaborates with various artists to attract both local and foreign visitors. Additionally, museums and historical sites can invest in technology that offers three-dimensional visual effects to create more engaging and immersive experiences. Many museums worldwide have adopted this technology, allowing visitors to immerse themselves in specific historical eras and thus gain historical knowledge more intriguingly rather than just walking around and reading information boards. Implementing these initiatives requires substantial funding, so the government should allocate more resources to these facilities or seek investments from businesses. With increased financial support, museums and historical sites can enhance their offerings and attract more local visitors.

In conclusion, various factors explain why locals find museums and historical sites uninteresting. However, a concerted effort from both facility managers and the government can encourage more frequent visits from local people.

Sample 11:

Millions of people visit Big Ben and the houses of parliament in London every year but surprisingly most of these visitors come from outside the UK. In fact, many famous monuments and attractions seem to appeal mainly to visitors rather than to locals. In my view this is because of a lack of knowledge about attractions by locals. Also, people often lack the free time and motivation needed to fully explore and know their home region compared to travelling overseas. To tackle this phenomenon, history in schools should include local knowledge and locations as well as national or international knowledge. In addition, the government should encourage domestic tourism and give incentives for people to travel more domestically.

To begin with, many schools and colleges do not emphasise the importance of regional culture to students, so they are often unaware of historical places and events in their own towns. For example, many Vietnamese people can describe famous sights in South Korea but can often not describe these locations in their own country. To address this, the education system should emphasise local knowledge and history by encouraging students to visit local attractions as well as learning about places overseas.

A second key issue is free time. Many people have limited vacation time and will often choose to travel internationally rather than stay locally when they have a few days off. The government could boost domestic tourism by promoting local events and locations, providing financial incentives to tourist attractions and by making sure that tourist authorities cater to local as well as visiting tourists.

In conclusion, the best way for tourism to develop is by making sure local sights and events are well-known and promoted both to a national and international market as well as to local consumers. If this is done properly, then tourism and the economy as a whole will thrive.

Sample 12:

A large part of the attraction of a town or a city to visitors are places of educational and cultural values such as museums and historical sites. Unfortunately, many of these places, while appealing to outside visitors, are not doing well in capturing the interests of the local people. In this essay, I will outline some of the factors that I believe lead to this situation and propose a few solutions to help improve it.

A number of causes may be attributed to the fact that local people tend not to frequent the museums and historical sites in their area. Perhaps they are simply already too familiar with these places, having lived near them for a long time, that revisiting these places holds little value to them. The advertising method of museums and historical places could be another reason. Although most of the advertisements of these places can easily reach the outside world through foreign TV commercials or online websites, the same news may not get through to the local people who do not use the same information sources.

To solve this issue, some certain measures could be adopted. Firstly, to provide the local people with a stronger incentive to revisit, museums and historical sites can organize special and time-limited events especially targeted at local people. For example, they can host events like craft markets, book fairs, or cultural festivals during local holidays; or they can offer local people season tickets and reduced prices for repeat visits. Secondly, museums and historical sites can publicize their activities through channels that local people are more likely to access, such as through the local newspaper, the local radio, or through talks to schoolchildren at the local school. In this way, local citizens interested in these places can find out about them more easily and, as a result, will be more likely to visit them.

In conclusion, a lack of activities aimed at local people and unsuitable means of advertising may be some of the reasons why few local people want to go to museums and historical sites near where they live. Certain solutions aimed at changing these two factors, therefore, may be effective in drawing more interest and engagement from local visitors.

Sample 13:

Museums and historical places around the world hold significance as they have valuable artifacts that are not available elsewhere. Though museums attract a lot of tourists, the locals do not consider local museums and historical places entertaining.   

There are several reasons why local residents do not find museums interesting. First and foremost, the local habitants have been brought up in those areas and have seen the historical places of their area hence these historical places might not arouse their interest anymore. The locals prefer visiting faraway lands and exploring other historical places in comparison to the local places. The hefty entrance fee that historical museums charge may not seem feasible to the locals.

There are several actions that can be taken with the intention of appealing to the local population to visit the local museums. Primarily, community activities being organized by the museum like exhibitions and cultural events will help gain its popularity as most of these historical places are non-profit organizations. The media can also use used as a source to commercialize and promote museums at a local level. A subsidized amount of fee charged from the natives will also attract a large number of local history enthusiasts to pay a visit to these historical sights.  

To conclude, museums and historical landmarks play a crucial role in understanding the culture and the historical background of a particular area. If the locals pay more attention to local museums, it will make them more popular on a larger scale and therefore attract more tourists. The government can also provide attractive offers to natives to visit the historical sights.

Sample 14:

It is common for tourists to visit historical places and museums rather than native people. In my opinion, because it is a familiar area, they are not interested in seeing it, and thus, the country must positively encourage locals.

On the one hand, there are many reasons behind the issue of less-active visitors to historical sites and museums by citizens than foreigners. Even though the historical area is unique, it is a common place for native people. They do not want to see it again. Additionally, they have seen historical sites and museums. Hence, they do not have any desire to spend their money at these places or waste their time. While native individuals have visited the nearest areas and enjoyed their time. Recently, it has been feeling boring, and they have become less interested in seeing them. For example, in London, the rate of visitors to the museum was about 96% international visitors, compared to the locals.

On the other hand, the government should address this issue. To tackle it, the government can offer various incentives to engage citizens, such as promoting the importance of museums through social media and providing free tickets. This can encourage more locals to visit nearby cultural sites. For example, in South Korea, the government has established rules for historical sites, offering discounts to citizens and free entry during festivals.

In conclusion, historical places and museums are not only meant for tourists but also for the community. Promoting these sites could attract locals to these places of culture and history and encourage them through education.

Sample 15:

Historical locations and museums are mostly preserved for tourist attractions. Tourists can range from people from other nations, the locals where the tourist attraction center is located. But it is often said that local people do not visit historical sites. This essay will highlight the reasons why locals do not go to historical sites and solutions to how they can be attracted.

Firstly, Locals, most of the time, are not thrilled by historical sites and museums. This is a result of being told stories about how the place came to be. And as a result, they do not find any spectacular reason why they have to go there to see what is being preserved or showcased. In addition, since most of these locals grew up in the vicinity and most likely they might have walked past the historical site several times, asking them to pay a certain amount of money as a tourist to view the site or museum will make no sense to them, and it will be viewed as a waste of money.

However, Locals can be enticed to visit the museum or historical sites by subsidizing the entrance fees to these sites. For example, if the entrance fee is five thousand nairas, they can be made to pay one-fifth of the price. Also, promos can be put in place for locals. For instance, the first five locals who visit the site on a particular day will be granted free access. Once a few local people have been able to see how interesting and advantageous going to historical sites is, they will publicize it to others, and it might motivate them to visit as well.

Furthermore, the role of education should not be under-emphasized. Since most of these historical locations are in rural areas, they might not see value associated with going to such places. But if the government educates them on the importance of visiting these places, they might be interested in going there.

In conclusion, local people do not seem fascinated with visiting historical locations due to not knowing the purpose it serves and how it can be beneficial to them. I believe with proper education and using suitable means to entice them to these locations, and more locals will be enthusiastic to visit these historical locations.

Sample 16:

It is said that people are losing their enthusiasm for visiting local museums and places of historical importance. This essay will put forward explanations for this before suggesting solutions to tackling this problem.

There are many reasons why museums and historical places are not frequented by local people. The main one is that local people find paying a visit to local tourist attractions boring and a waste of time. In other words, such places would be visually unattractive and arouse little interest in locals, for the simple reason that they have been familiar with those places through school courses or personal experiences. Another significant reason is that the authorities charge a substantial amount of admission fee, giving rise to a reduction of the number of locals visiting historic sites. As a result, the destinations would be generally more appealing and worthy to the tourists than to the locals.

To encourage local residents to visit historical relics and museums, several measures can be prompted. First and foremost, authorities can change the perception of museums and historical sites by organizing cultural events and regular exhibitions, including weddings, concerts and celebrations. These renewals would provide the public with a new experience and attract media attention to historical values. Another solution is to offer free tickets and special promotions for local people at weekends. For example, the Confucian temple in China has set specific days on which free entrance is available for everyone to commemorate and honour traditional occasions. Therefore, a growing number of locals would be encouraged to come more regularly.

In conclusion, people avoid visiting museums or historical places due to their familiarity with those destinations and high entrance fees. The government can promote these sites by conducting interesting programmes and offering free or subsidised entry.

Sample 17:

It is a fact that local people are not very keen to visit historical places and museums. The museum and historical places are the prime attraction for tourists only. In my opinion, there are certain reasons behind this tendency. Government can issue several measures to motivate locals to visit these places more often.

The primary reason behind this trend is that most of the local people are acquainted with their history and culture. They feel no further interest in discovering the same culture by visiting the local museums repeatedly. The local people consider it a waste of time and prefer to discover the history and culture of other places. Another important aspect is the paucity of promotional activities. Historical places are mostly operated by local governments. The government body does not find it very useful to spend money on the development and advertisement of these historic sites. Lastly, we often observed entry fees in the museum which may be a factor that refrains local people to visit heritage places in a frequent manner.

There are certain steps that the government can consider attracting local residents to visit these historical buildings and museums. Firstly, the government may organise exhibitions and cultural programmes in these places to provide the local people with a unique experience each time they visit. Another step that the authority can consider is to offer free tickets to the local schools as well as children. This will persuade the parents to bring their children to these heritage places. This will help the children to understand their history and culture in a much better way. 

Summing up, it is quite evident that local residents do not feel it worth visiting museums and historical sites. It is because the local people believe that they do not have much to learn from these sites. On contrary, foreigners are curious about learning new cultures and history and hence visit these places. It is the responsibility of the government to encourage native people to visit these places by conducting innovative programmes or offering free entry.   

Sample 18:

In this term of local people’s attendance, museums and historical areas, sites, places have always paled and compared with other recreational centers and areas. This answer in the form of an essay should be able to present some reasons why this has been shown and put forward some answer or solution to build the interest of local people in going to these places.

The small and countable number of local visitors or people to museums can first be attributable to the low area with which activities are held. In other words, the renewal of these existing exhibits or the organization of new programs and events are few and far between. For this reason, little interest is gained in those who have once been to museums or places of historical significance. Also, museums and historical sites do not allow cheap. In fact, to get inside these places, visitors are frequently required to pay a fixed amount of money, which can be worth a day’s salary to a common man or family.

To generate some more interest from local people in coming to museums or any kind of historical place or site, several ways can be employed. Some methods that can be used to engage the local audience as a daily visit to these historical sites and places are that first, we should advertise a bit and organize activities that incorporate art performances with decent and reliable content. This not only encourages the attendance of local audiences, people but also represents a great opportunity to educate and tell them about the history of their places of origin and also to tell them about their culture. In addition, the organizers or people at these places can also lower the entrance fee or offer discounts to local inhabitants or audiences.

To conclude, many reasons can be shown with facts as to why local people lose their interest in museums and places of historical importance. However, the future of these places is within our hands, and we should take proper actions for this.

Sample 19:

Many museums and historical sites attract tourists more than locals. This is due to locals often taking these sites for granted and finding repeated visits monotonous. To increase local engagement, strategies like educational integration and targeted campaigns focusing on local identity can be employed, fostering a deeper appreciation for cultural heritage among residents.

This trend can be attributed to several factors. Firstly, locals often take their cultural heritage for granted, assuming that these sites will always be available for future visits. Unlike tourists' drive to explore the historical and cultural significance of the sites, locals feel a sense of permanence that diminishes the urgency to explore these places. Additionally, the content and exhibitions may not change frequently, leading locals to believe that once they have visited, there is little new to see. As a result, the experience can become monotonous, discouraging repeated visits and sustained interest.

To encourage greater participation from local residents, proactive measures can be implemented. Firstly, museums can enhance outreach efforts through campaigns that appeal to the residents, emphasising the relevance of their collections to local history and identity. By showcasing exhibits that highlight connections to community narratives or hosting events that celebrate local heritage, institutions can bolster the pride of local residents, thereby enticing them to the sites. Additionally, educational integration is crucial for attracting local residents. Collaborating with schools to integrate museum visits into educational curricula can cultivate a lifelong appreciation for cultural heritage from a young age, leading to increased visitation from generations to come.

Sample 20:

Many museums and historical sites are predominantly frequented by tourists rather than local inhabitants. This essay will explore the reasons behind this trend and propose solutions to encourage more local visits.

Specific drivers can contribute to the indifference of locals to heritage sites. Chief of which is the familiarity local people have with these sites. Having grown up in the vicinity, they may feel they already possess sufficient knowledge about the history and significance of these places. For example, a resident who has extensively studied the local museum's exhibits during school trips might not feel compelled to revisit. This perceived redundancy diminishes their interest in these cultural landmarks. Moreover, event saturation further contributes to the low local attendance. Over time, locals might have participated in numerous events and exhibitions at these sites, leading to a sense of repetition and boredom.

To attract more local visitors, proactive solutions can be applied by local governments. Firstly, by introducing special discounts, free entry days, or affordable membership plans, museums and historical sites can create incentives for locals to visit. Managers can grant free emission to encourage residents to engage with their cultural heritage regularly. Furthermore, enhancing marketing and outreach efforts can also play a crucial role in attracting local visitors. For instance, featuring exhibits in local newspapers, running targeted social media campaigns, and distributing flyers in community centres and libraries can raise awareness and interest among residents.

In conclusion, while familiarity and repetitive events lead to the decreased attendance of local residents at museums and historical sites, targeted solutions like offering discounts and improving local marketing can significantly increase local engagement.

Sample 21:

It is undeniable that museums and historical sites are more popular with tourists than with local people. There are several reasons why this is the case, and the authorities can take certain actions to improve patronage among local populations.

Among the reasons why these destinations appeal more to out-of-town travellers, locals' familiarity with these venues may be the primary cause. As opposed to tourists who regard historical sites with novelty and excitement, townspeople have grown accustomed to these locations as well as their history and cultural significance. Therefore, few locals feel the compulsion to pay these sites a visit. Time constraints may be another factor worth considering. For tourists, they are presented with limited opportunities to explore the host city's historical and cultural landmarks, which is why many make full use of their sojourn to this endeavour. In contrast, such urgency does not apply to local people, who are able to frequent these venues whenever occasions arise.

In order to entice local patrons, governments can organise exhibitions and other social functions featuring local celebrities at these locations. Such events would not only make these sites less mundane for locals, but also help draw in supporters and acquaintances of the guest performers. Another feasible solution for local authorities is offering free entry to local schoolchildren. This serves a dual purpose: to inculcate their city's heritage in youngsters, and to attract their parents to these destinations.

To conclude, I believe the fact that locals are familiar with historical sites and that they are not pressed for time inhibits them from visiting these locations. So as to boost traffic from local populations, government bodies need to introduce schemes involving locals such as hosting exhibitions and issuing free tickets for students from local schools.

Sample 22:

Museums and historical sites play a crucial role in educating individuals about the past and cultural heritage. However, there is a noticeable trend where tourists tend to outnumber local residents in their visits to these places. This essay delves into the reasons behind this phenomenon and proposes strategies to attract more local visitors.

One primary explanation for the disparity in visitation between tourists and locals is that the latter may perceive themselves as well-informed about their own history and culture. Local residents may have acquired knowledge about these sites through academic institutions or through informal sources like familial narratives. Conversely, tourists are drawn to these destinations due to their novelty and the opportunity to delve into a different cultural and historical context. Additionally, local residents often face time constraints due to their daily obligations, which hinder their ability to frequent museums and historical sites. In contrast, tourists, being in a vacation mode, possess more leisure time to engage in exploration and visitation.

To enhance the appeal of museums and historical sites among local residents, several measures can be implemented. One effective approach is to organize tailored events or programs that cater to the interests of the local community. For instance, museums can host exhibitions showcasing local artwork, musical performances, or educational sessions on local history. These initiatives have the potential to make cultural institutions more alluring to local residents. Moreover, offering discounts or complimentary entry to museums can serve as a compelling incentive for local individuals to visit these sites. The perception of museums as expensive venues might deter many locals from attending. Hence, by introducing affordable pricing schemes or designated days with free entry for residents, museums can attract a more diverse local audience.

In conclusion, the preference of tourists over local residents in visiting museums and historical sites can be attributed to locals’ perceived familiarity with their own heritage and time constraints. To reverse this trend and entice a greater number of local visitors, museums can diversify their offerings by organizing culturally relevant events and implementing pricing strategies that make visits more accessible to the local community.

Sample 23:

Many cultural attractions, such as museums and historical sites, tend to attract more tourists than local residents. This essay will explore the reasons behind this trend and propose potential solutions to encourage more locals to visit these sites.

One primary reason locals do not frequent museums and historical sites is a lack of promotion aimed at this market. These places often target tourists in their marketing campaigns, leaving locals unaware of new exhibits or special events. For example, a local museum might advertise heavily in travel brochures and tourist websites but neglect local media outlets. Another contributing factor is the routine nature of daily life. Local residents are often busy with work, school, and other commitments, making it difficult to find time to visit cultural sites. Consequently, visiting these places becomes a low priority compared to other obligations.

To address this issue, museums and historical sites can develop marketing strategies specifically aimed at local residents. This can include advertising in local newspapers, radio stations, and social media platforms. For instance, a historical site could run a campaign on local radio stations, highlighting new exhibits and special events. Additionally, creating more flexible visiting hours can accommodate the busy schedules of local residents. Offering evening or weekend hours can make it easier for locals to visit. For example, a museum could extend its hours on certain days to allow working adults and schoolchildren to visit after their usual commitments.

In conclusion, the tendency for museums and historical sites to be visited more by tourists than locals is due to factors such as lack of local promotion and busy daily routines. By developing targeted marketing strategies and offering flexible visiting hours, these cultural attractions can become more appealing to local residents.

Sample 24:

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. This phenomenon raises questions about why locals are less interested and what can be done to attract them.

Several explanations exist for why tourists frequently visit museums and historical sites more than local residents. One reason for this trend is that people often overlook what is readily available to them. Many local people prefer to spend their free time and holidays exploring new areas outside their hometown or country. They find excitement in discovering different cultures and histories, which makes their own local attractions less appealing. Additionally, it is possible that most local people have already visited these places and possess significant knowledge about their culture and history, reducing the need to revisit them.

To address this issue, museums and historical sites can take several steps to attract local visitors. Firstly, local governments could continually upgrade museums by rotating artefacts and displays to generate more interest among locals. For instance, different exhibitions focusing on various cultural themes could be displayed and promoted more frequently. Secondly, reducing admission fees or offering discount tickets to locals can encourage more frequent visits. Governments could also fund annual trips for local school children to these sites, fostering an early interest in their heritage.

In conclusion, various factors contribute to the fact that museums and historical sites attract more tourists than locals, and by enhancing exhibits and providing financial incentives, museums and historical sites can attract more local visitors.

Sample 25:

In numerous regions, museums and historical sites often draw a significant number of tourists while local residents may not be as inclined to visit. This discrepancy can be attributed to various factors, and implementing strategic measures is crucial to make these cultural attractions more appealing to the local population.

One significant factor contributing to tourists' preference for visiting museums and historical sites over locals is the perception of familiarity among residents. Those living in the vicinity may regard these attractions as mundane or commonplace, presuming they can explore these venues at any time. For example, individuals residing in Hanoi might overlook the Vietnam Museum of Ethnology, assuming they can visit it whenever convenient. Unfortunately, they often end up never experiencing these cultural treasures firsthand. In contrast, tourists approach these sites with fresh eyes, seeing them as unique and culturally enriching experiences.

To address this issue and attract more local visitors, educational outreach programs should be implemented to enhance awareness of the historical and cultural significance of local museums and sites. To this end, collaborations with schools and community organizations can facilitate guided tours, workshops, and interactive events aimed at fostering a deeper connection with the local heritage. For instance, partnerships with schools can lead to organized field trips, providing students with firsthand experiences to instill a greater appreciation for their cultural legacy. By fostering a renewed sense of connection and appreciation for their cultural heritage, these measures aim to make these sites more appealing and accessible to the local population, ensuring the preservation and celebration of their rich history.

In conclusion, the tendency for museums and historical sites to attract more tourists than local residents can be attributed to the locals' perception of these attractions as commonplace. To address this, educational outreach programs are essential.

Sample 26:

In contemporary society, there is an increasing tendency that more visitors from another city visit museums and historical tourist attractions than natives. The reason and solution of this social trend are elaborated on in this essay.

There are several causes leading to this social phenomenon, the main reason is that the historical tourist attractions are a shortcut to understanding local culture for visitors, the local fine arts like painting and artifact are displayed and the folk opera can be watched as well. They can even interact with artists, those museums have been seen as a tourist spot for the visitors, they can have a lot of fun during their visit. In addition, there ate souvenir shops in art exhibition hall so tourists can buy souvenirs as a memorial for the trip.

To address this problem, effective measures should be adopted in no time. First, the local authority should play an essential role in coping with this situation. They should provide a discount or coupon for local citizens to encourage them to visit museums more often and let them know more about their hometown. Secondly, schools and colleges should also make a joint effort with the government, they can assist museums to hold various kinds of activities like reading festival or culture competition for natives to broaden their horizons, only by this can let natives get involved as more as possible. In fact, many citizens don't know where to go during their weekends to learn new things or have a relax, exhibition hall with so many activities provides a place for them to leisure.

According to the analysis presented above, the expensive ticket and lack of activities are main reasons resulting in the current situation. The government and schools should join efforts to reverse this disturbing issue.

Sample 27:

Many museums and historical sites have become an attraction to tourists although they fail to increase the number of local visitors. This essay will analyze some main reasons for this as well as measures to encourage more local people to visit such places.

The causes for a huge difference in the number of the two mentioned types of visitors are varied.

First, people who live in the neighborhood seem to be familiar with their traditional customs and history. Going to those places would be therefore a waste of time and money owing to the entrance cost; and people would not pay an amount of money to see what they have already known. Meanwhile, tourists from other places tend to pay a visit to museums to know more about a new culture when travelling to a new region. Second, the design of museums and historical sites almost remained unchanged throughout decades, which can be visually unattractive to local residents who have been there at least once in earlier years. However, these places always pick tourists’ curiosity during their first trip.

Some measures can be taken to stimulate more local inhabitants to visit museums and historical places. To begin with, those places should serve both education and entertainment purposes. More game zones should be constructed or didactic as well as recreational competitions should be conducted to increase the number of the locals who come to enjoy their time. Furthermore, if the layout of museums and historical sites is renovated with more decorations and ornate designs of the interior, not only tourists but also more local visitors will come.

In conclusion, there are two principal causes for the locals’ disinterest in spending their time in nearby museums and historical places as mentioned, and actions should be taken to encourage people to go to such places.

Sample 28:

A lot of countries, especially tourists, are more attracted to museums and historical places in spite of resident people. The interest of museums and historical sites is very low in local people. However, some people discuss this point and consider why only a few native people visit their famous sites and what measures should be taken for encouraging visitors.

First of all, local people should have sufficient knowledge about their history and culture. This is the main reason behind the decline of local people’s interest in art galleries. If they visit the same place, again and again then this will not be productive for them. They will not get new things to learn about their past from the museum but for tourists, it is the best place to gain knowledge about the over past culture and heritage. So, they tend to visit often new places. Moreover, the price of tickets is very high, and people do not want to spend more money which is not beneficial for them.

To solve this, the government can construct more museums that contain new types of information apart from over history like a museum of arms and ammunition or maybe aircraft or ships through which we can get enormous knowledge about the latest technology. Advertisements can also attract the countryside people. Tickets price should be affordable and for senior citizens or children under the age of 12 should be free of cost. The government should renovate the old museum and set up new facilities for hygiene and amusement.

To conclude, the local authority should start new things that catch their eyes and make them happy. To attract local people a lot of efforts should be made by the government, but prices should be reasonable and a variety of facilities should be organized.

Sample 29:

Although most people have sites of historical interest and a variety of museums to visit, it is predominantly tourists who come to see them, not local people who visit museums and historical sites. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.

To begin with, there are several reasons why local people do not visit local places of history and museums. First and foremost, today individuals are busy with their domestic chores and they are happy with their sedentary lifestyle. Secondly, it can be seen that Punjab boasts of a number of museums and historical places, but local people do not visit them because the majority of the population in Punjab is hardworking and they have long working hours and after coming back from work so that time they have very less energy to visit historical places. Sometimes many people feel waste of the time to visit these places.

On the other hand, there are some solutions which can attract local people to visit museums and historical buildings because these places depict the history and culture of our forefathers. So schools can impact knowledge about historical places among the students so that they gain interest in respect for such places. For example, schools can give their students assignments related to the history of culture and studies should get more information about muses and old historical buildings from their parents.

To conclude, local people do not visit local places due to the fact that they are busy with their life if museums can create new exhibition every season, then the number of people visit their historical sites will increase eventually.

Sample 30:

It is an observable fact that many museums and historical attractions are essentially visited by tourists and a few local residents show their interest in such places. This essay will first discuss why familiarity and the expensive entrance fees are the primary reasons for this phenomenon, followed by a discussion of how attractive exhibitions and cheap entry fees can encourage locals to visit these sites.

There are two cogent reasons why museums and historical places are not appealing to local residents. One of the most reasonable causes is their familiarity with these sites and historical context. In simple words, local inhabitants are already familiar with their traditional customs and historical backdrop. Therefore, they do not really find these places attractive. By contrast, sightseers tend to visit places that they have never been to so that they can enrich their understanding of local culture, heritage and arts. On top of that, the expense of entry fees to these historical destinations may act as a deterrent to many local people. A case in point is the Taj Mahal in India. A visitor has to pay ten dollars to visit this place which is a considerable amount of money for average Indian people.

However, a package of measures could be designed to encourage locals to visit museums and historical sites. First, the authorities can organize appealing exhibits or programmes at these places. Didactic plays, for example, ought to be arranged in order to illustrate and commemorate historical events to attract more local inhabitants. Another measure that can be adopted is to lower the entry ticket fee for domestic visitors to encourage them to visit museums and historical buildings. New York is a good example here that offers free entry to museums and historical sites on a particular day of the month. As a result, many New Yorkers visit them.

To conclude, locals often do not visit museums and historical attractions because of their familiarity with these sites. If the authorities, however, arrange exciting programmes along with reduced entrance fees, many locals might visit these places.

Sample 31:

Historical places have long been a staple destination for tourists recently. However, in recent years there is not an inclination for local people to visit these sites and these places are always packed with tourists. There are several reasons for this problem and various measures can be taken by governments to improve this situation.

The high cost of entrance fee and monotonous atmosphere are the main causes of discouragement of local people to go to museums. From an economic standpoint, this amount might be desirable for the tourists who choose travelling and they are aware of this cost. However, indigenous people are less likely to spend for visiting the place that they have already known what they expect to see. At the same time, the boring ambience of historical sites is another reason. Since locals have basic knowledge about the history of their country, there is nothing interesting in persuading them to visit there. Therefore, these places can be found a waste of money and time entirely.

Encouraging locals and lower admission fees are the keys to solving this problem. One should note that it is the government’s responsibility to put forward so as to boost the proficiency of historical sites. They can encourage people of the country to visit these places and transfer their observation to the next generation. People find these places more enjoyable if especial events and festivals are held there. Besides, imposing especial offer, discounts and free entrance at weekends, for instance, would be another way to attract the attention of local residents.

To sum up, the lack of local represents will only address if several steps such as rewarding local and making museums enjoyable taken into consideration.

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

Currently, many parents tend to be busy working, and they need to rely on someone else to take care of their offspring. While some people think childcare organisations can offer the best care, I would argue that children should be looked after by their grandparents.

On the one hand, it is believed that youngsters should be sent to childcare centres for some reasons. The first one is that since those centres are professional organisations, their staff are often well trained and therefore have good babysitting skills. For example, when a child falls over and gets himself injured, the staff can react quickly and give him first aid. Furthermore, children can have a chance to make friends with their peers when coming there, which might increase their communication and language abilities. If they are looked after by their family at home, they might feel a bit lonely.

On the other hand, I believe it is a better idea for grandparents to take care of their grandchildren. Firstly, as grandparents have lived for many years and have brought up their own offspring, they have much more experience in raising children. For instance, they might know how to calm the baby down when he cries. Secondly, grandparents are family members, so they love their grandchildren more than other people do. As a result, they tend to spend much more time and effort caring for their grandchildren compared to a childcare staff member. Finally, youngsters looked after by their grandparents are likely to become more family-oriented and appreciate the value of a happy family.

In conclusion, while there are some benefits of children being sent to childcare centres, I believe their own grandparents should raise them.

Sample 2:

In the 21st century, dual-income families revel in a better financial hold and are likely to undergo less monetary stress. The question arises who should take responsibility for their children. Some people believe that the children should be taken care of by other family members. However, other people think that childcare can provide the best care for their children. This essay will discuss both points of view and give a viewpoint.

Firstly, children being taken care of by grandparents, or the rest of the family members has both ups and downs to a certain extent. In terms of goodness, having a guardian as a blood relative can be the best option for looking after children. For example, grandparents are willing to establish a strong bond with their grandchild and they always try to be nice to them by fulfilling the wishes of a grandchild. Moreover, the grandparents are so experienced in raising the child which can be beneficial for the parents for focusing more on their respective careers.

Similarly, sending children to a well-known childcare center is also a good option for parents who have nuclear families where grandparents are not there. For instance, childcare centers are well organized and well maintained and the employees are fully trained as it is an occupation for them, and they know what is right and wrong for the child. However, the child can be beneficial at a care center where physical l development is also taken into consideration. Furthermore, the children will be able to face the world by interacting with other humans.

To conclude, in this competitive world if the children are exposed to face the world by childcare center, then I strongly believe that it is the best option. 

Sample 3:

Nowadays, everyone believes in equality, and every woman and man are considered equally whether it's for a job, etc. To cope with the expenses every family is having more than one person earning and for people with children, it is difficult to handle them. However, parents have two options: taking help from other family members for childcare or sending them to a professional childcare center. I believe that children should be raised by a family member is more remarkable.

While taking care of offspring, the family member can teach the family values to the children. Initially, the children need love and affection which can be provided by family members or especially by grandparents. However, with age, the needs of the children get higher. This concern is handled as a personal issue by the family member. Furthermore, teenagers might feel insecure or self-doubt as now and then family members take care of them.

On the contrary, childcare centers are professionals and they know how to handle certain situations. Children might get new friends or guardians apart from family members and can learn how to approach new people. Despite meeting new people, they might feel lonely or isolated feeling as they are away from their homes. As they don’t know what is good or bad they are exposed to the real world where they might get influenced by evil-minded people.

In conclusion, the childcare centers are good but having a familiar environment with family members like grandparents would be a preferable condition for children.

Sample 4:

In the last few years, both parents working is a familiar scenario. However, it is difficult for them to balance their work life and personal life. While the main question is about not giving sufficient time to their children, for which they will either consult any childcare center or any other family member like grandparents. From my point of view, I believe family members are one of the most convenient options amongst the two.

Primarily, childcare centers are more professional based, and they have a fixed number of working hours, and they do not work 24 hours a day. However, other than self-employed parents might get stuck at work after working hours which can raise the question that what about the children after the childcare center gets closed. Even though childcare center offers trained staff for educating the offspring for physical and mental upbringing. 

Similarly, children taken care of by family members can be beneficial as the family members can look after the youngster as their child. However, grandparents always want a good bond with their successor, and they try to be the best friends of the child, which can provide a good atmosphere for a better upbringing of the children. Moreover, youngsters looked after by their family members like grandfather or grandmother tend to be calmer and composed and they understand the values of family.   

To sum up, parents work to improve the standard of living, and for the same reason, children should not be at suffering end. So, for their bright future, family members like grandparents should be the best option as they can establish a better connection with the children.

Sample 5:

The increasing living expenses these days mean that both parents have to contribute to the family finances. This brings about whether they should send their children to their grandparents or childcare centers for appropriate support while they are engaged at work. In my view, both sides have their pros and cons, but I am in favour of getting help from the grandparents.

There are two advantages that grandparents would make an appropriate choice. First grandparents have parenting experiences, so they would take good care of the children unconditionally with full of care, love, and attention. Secondly, children brought up by grandparents would receive moral lessons and traditional family values. This helps tighten the family bonding as people feel a common sense of interest. On the flip side, grandparents are not always good educators or caretakers in terms of a child's emotional development. Many grandparents often turn blind eyes to the children's faults or simply give them mild punishment. This unfortunately generates spoiled brats. However, if parents intervene at the right stage during the rearing, this problem could be avoided.

Sending children to nursery centers would help a child develop social interaction and communication skills. As children have the company of peers to play along with, they would soon develop these essential skills compared to staying home with grandparents. Moreover, childcare centers can also develop a child's academic development through educational toys and activities which would build up their confidence and creativity. On the flip side, even though childcare centers are officially accredited, they have a less emotional attachment to the children compared to the grandparents. So the child cannot receive as much attention, love, and consideration. Besides, childcare centers are profit-driven, meaning that they work for the financial benefits and children can suffer from overcrowding.

After careful consideration of both arrangements, I am confident that leaving the children with their grandparents is a better choice. However, if it is impossible to do so, sending children to childcare centers would not be a bad idea.

Sample 6:

In modern age, parents are constantly under considerable pressure of balancing between their business and family affairs. Thus, child-rearing is undoubtedly a subject of major concern to many parents. While some advocate the view that it is easy to ask family members to look after their children, others are of the opinion that children should be sent to childcare centers to get better care. Personally, I am convinced that both views have their own merits.

It is generally believed that children will benefit significantly as long as they are looked after by family members, particularly their grandparents. One principle reason is that grandparents are supposed to have extensive experience in child-rearing. Therefore, they know how to rear their grandchildren and how to give them a good living environment to develop fully. Moreover, on grounds of their blood relationship, grandparents are definitely willing to spend more time taking care of their grandchildren than childcare centers do. The fact that they can spend several hours telling their grandchildren fairy tales and traditional stories about family will create an invisible bond between family members and tie up the relationship among generations. As a result, children will develop better self-esteem/ confidence in interactions with others.

Despite those benefits, it is argued that childcare centers can be a suitable alternative choice for children with regard to social skills and safety when family members are not be able to take care of them. In fact, a host of studies about children’s behavior have concluded/ reckoned that those children who have interacted frequently with others since they were a little will quickly develop communication skills and be willing to share their own opinions. Besides, in childcare centers, employees are professionals in babysitting, as they are well-trained for this task. Accordingly, they know how to cope with these children in various circumstances, unexpected accidents for example.

All things considered; it is apparent that both approaches have their own benefits. Thus, neither of them is the only way to provide the best care for children. Parents should consider their own situation to make a suitable choice so that their children will benefit the best from it.

Sample 7:

Although it is common for parents these days to place their children that are pre-school age into childcare centres, some people criticise this and argue that children will receive a better level of care from relatives such as grandparents. Personally, I would argue that the best choice is to send children to a childcare centre.

Those that support care through grandparents cite several reasons for this. Firstly, they claim that this is the safest option due to the fact that they are family members so they can be trusted at all times to put the health and safety of the child first. Another important consideration is costs. Parents will have to pay to place their children in a childcare centre, and with the financial burdens that families face these days, using relatives to care for children would be a considerable cost saving. 

Despite these benefits, there are clear advantages of using professional carers. First and foremost, staff members at most centres are fully trained in early childhood education so they understand child development and will be able to nurture the child’s growing skills in the best way. Not only this, since there are a mix of instructional activities during the day such as painting, singing, and storytelling, children’s creativity and learning will be developed. Last but not least, children can benefit from the opportunity to socialize with other children, which they might not get to do with a relative caring for them at home.

To conclude, I am of the opinion that the advantages of using childcare facilities to look after pre-school children clearly outweigh the benefits of using relatives. This is because the environment they are brought up in will result in children who are well-educated, creative and sociable.

Sample 8:

As the shape of family has been changed to a dual-income family, parenting by grandparents has become a solution to raise children. Some people argue that family members should take care the youth while others assert that it should be given by professional organizations. In this essay, I will discuss both views and suggest my own view.

It is true that childcare by grandparents became a common practice since parents cannot spend enough time to bring up youngsters because of excessive work. Parenting by grandparents has a positive effect on the development of children. The youth can enhance communication skills with different age groups which is one of the most required abilities recently. Moreover, grandparents can provide useful information or customs which has been conveyed from the ancestors and it is hard to achieve in contemporary society. Meanwhile, children who were raised by grandparents would become polite people since they were taught the attitude needed in the conversation with others.

However, the abilities of grandparents are not sufficient enough to raise their grandson because of the lack of physical fitness. That is why many parents send their children to childcare centers. Most rofessional organizations have a concrete system to bring up the youth using facilities and equipment that are suitable to educate them. Furthermore, in the organization, a number of tutors who are well-educated throughout numerous training courses and field experiences work for only children with professional knowledge. Therefore, sending young people to childcare centers creates a good influence on the development of them in both physical and academic perspectives.

In conclusion, while grandparents can provide practical education to the youth, I opine that parents should send their children to childcare organizations which can raise them in systematic ways and reduce the burden of grandparents.

Sample 9:

People have different views about whether they should choose caregivers from centers or their extended families' members to take care of their children while they are working. In my opinion, I believe that children should attend day care centers.

Some prefer the idea of having their relatives look after their children during the working times for some reasons. Firstly, they want a home-like environment which is surrounded by their familiars, which creates the warm and loving atmosphere for their young kids. Thus, their children will not find it hard to get to know their new teachers as well as classrooms. Secondly, from an economic perspective, grandparents babysitting will lower the tuition costs and save more budget for higher school-aged children. Finally, children's behaviors may become better when their grandparents are keeping their eyes on them.

In my view, early childhood care and a stable learning environment, which are provided by center-based childcare, will contribute to children's development more efficiently. Children are given age-appropriate curricula that are needed to stimulate their early numeracy and literacy skills, especially for preschoolers. For example, kids can participate in role plays; through plays, they can learn and develop both language skills and imagination. In addition, with full supervision and well-trained teachers, infants and toddlers can engage in outdoor activities like water play without parents' worries. Furthermore, kids can get into a good daily routine such as eating or taking a daytime nap, which benefits their parents' schedules a lot.

In conclusion, depending on circumstances and needs, parents can either let their children stay at home or enroll them in nursery schools. I personally support the view that children should experience the learning environment at childcare centers.

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Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that celebrities can make the problems seem less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sample 1:

From the perspective of some people, aid agencies can take advantage of celebrities’ fame to raise public awareness of certain important matters. Others, however, hold the view that such a method may only bring counterproductive results. I find the latter argument more convincing.

Those who support the idea of using famed individuals’ assistance have their own justifications. First of all, people who are considered role models have considerable influence on the public. Emma Watson, for instance, being a prominent actress, is currently the goodwill ambassador for the United Nations, promoting gender equality and undoubtedly drawing a great deal of attention from her admirers. Furthermore, a wider range of population can be reached if an organisation’s campaign is represented by a popular star. In many parts of the world, some film stars are even more well-known to the locals than the organisation itself owing to their appearance in familiar cinematic products. Therefore, the introduction of a humanitarian campaign can be further facilitated thanks to the artists.

Nevertheless, I can understand why other people are against inviting celebrities for assistance. When relying on the fame of some people to attract more public attention, an aid programme can also be affected by their scandals. Mass public disapproval may arise from a representative receiving a speeding ticket, or getting caught using illegal drugs, undervaluing the significance of the aid programme. Another foreseeable drawback is that the public might take the presence of famous entertainers as a mere publicity stunt. Without evidence of real actions taken to mitigate a problem, such as participating in a voluntary team to help the people in need, famous people may fail to draw the attention of people to the situation.

In conclusion, while some people have reasons to believe in the success of celebrities in getting people to pay attention, I tend to think that such an approach might not prove to be effective for aid organisations as expected.

Sample 2:

There has been much debate regarding the role of famous people in raising public awareness of major issues. While celebrities can attract people’s attention to the problems, I would argue that they are likely to make the problems become less crucial.

To begin with, well-known people can assist international aid organisations in raising people’s awareness of social issues. Firstly, celebrities can communicate information about big problems to a large audience around the world. For example, by taking part in the Ice Bucket Challenge in 2014, various celebrities such as Bill Gates or Mark Zuckerberg have helped the ALS Organisation to let millions of people know about a disease called ALS. Secondly, since people tend to listen to the ones they admire, famous people are much more likely to be able to ask their fans to take appropriate action. For instance, a well-known football player can ask people to donate money to help homeless individuals.

However, I believe famous people might make the problems become less important. The first reason is that individuals tend to only pay attention to what celebrities do and say rather than what messages they want to convey. In the aforementioned example about the Ice Bucket Challenge, many people watched videos of celebrities taking up the challenge without actually learning anything about the ALS disease. This makes little contribution to solving the problem compared to the large number of famous people involved. Furthermore, in order to attract viewers, well-known people usually try to deliver their messages in a funny and entertaining way, which might lead to the problems becoming less serious.

In conclusion, while celebrities can contribute greatly to tackling social problems, I believe they are more likely to make these problems seem less important.

Sample 3:

It is thought that the support given by prominent people to international charity organizations makes the problems known, however, many believe that those people simply overshadow the issues. In my opinion, I believe the problems will certainly be given more importance when those people publicize their humanitarian work with the organizations.

To begin with, public figures' support of international aid organizations raises people's awareness about the problems, and I agree with that. Those famous people can easily educate or influence the public since they have a platform where they can easily disseminate information about world issues that common people are not aware of. For example, the Hollywood actress and UNHCR ambassador, Angelina Jolie, has traveled the world to spread awareness about the conditions of refugees from different parts of the world. As a spokesperson of the organization, she has educated millions of people about the struggles of refugees and informed the public on how they can help. As a result, more people have become aware and concerned about the problem which has led them to give donations to the organization as well.

On the other hand, it is often believed that the problems are not given more value when famous people show their support to those organizations. This is simply because the public is more interested in the celebrities themselves than the work that they do with the organization. In other words, when they go to the public and talk about world problems, some people do not care about their advocacy because they are simply fixated on the fact that they are watching a celebrity in person. In addition, the media usually highlights the celebrities' persona rather than the problems that they are working with the organization because it is more appealing to their audiences. Therefore, all these things make those main problems trivial.

To conclude, despite people having different opinions, I think the problems will be highlighted and supported even more when the help of famous people towards international organizations is made public.

Sample 4:

To raise public perception on social issues such as poverty reduction, plagues, international organizations often borrow celebrities’ power as a key tool. However, there is a fact that global campaigns are likely to be neglected or even boycotted due to illegible public figures. In my opinion, celebrity-driven international aid might significantly change community awareness, providing that both associations and artists get on with each other.

The main reason that organizations repose trust in famous people is due to their far-reaching influence. They are paid attention by not only international but also mass media all over the world; stories on the plight of the poor or devastating consequences of plagues might therefore make the headlines. Thanks to celebrity involvement, the public will mutually help the needy and patients by fund raising as well as other contributions. For example, Lady Gaga and her supporters donated a large amount of money for an anti-cancer movement in a very short time which most ordinary people find impossible because they are not as influential as superstars.

However, not every famous person is worth an icomnic figure. Some artists lead an unhealthy lifestyle such as sexual scandals, fraud indictment and thus worsen community campaigns that they participate in. Take, for instance, Lindsay Lohan, who is notorious for uncontrolled behaviors. What if organizations present her in movements for children’s rights? The very high possibility is that the public has a bad impression on what organizations impart to them. As a result, she is likely to be criticized severely, and this activity might also be unable to attract further attention.

In conclusion, the importance of public figures in international aid is undeniable. However, to ensure that movements are on track, associations had better consider whether celebrities’ record is clear enough to perform the role of a representative.

Sample 5:

In recent years, many global aid agencies have used celebrities to excite attention to important issues, and many people think that it is quite effective. Others opine that the involvement of such famous personalities actually downplays the problems. I believe that despite their face value, celebrities often denigrate the severity of social, environmental and humanitarian problems despite their good intentions.

No doubt, well-known people’s endorsement is an effective strategy that can gain momentum in attempts to raise public awareness of pressing problems. They argue that famous persons are distinguished by their unique personality traits and success to engage and attract diverse audiences ranging from the media and fan base to philanthropists and political elites. A case in point is Princess Diana; she helped place a Red Cross campaign to ban landmines in the international spotlight. Diana, perhaps the most celebrated woman in the world back then, visited Angola, and dared to enter a live minefield, met amputees, and compelled unprecedented worldwide attention for banning minefield. This was quite effective.

However, it is also true that celebrated persons can often undermine the severity of an issue as their approach to humanitarian purposes is likely to cause more of an ego response than a profound moral response. To put it another way, such celebrity activism can never work effectively because media and mass people often pay more attention to the persons than to the issues they supposedly represent. Take Angelina Jolie for example. Last year, when she participated in an anti-corruption campaign, the media ran more stories about her personality, private life and lifestyle than the original issue. On top of that, it sometimes depoliticizes the issue. For instance, complex social issues like women empowerment, in women’s magazines particularly, are depoliticized by the individualistic narratives of the empowered famous white women.

In conclusion, it is a fact that celebraties make problems seem less serious as they bring rapt attention to their personalities and lifestyles. Therefore, global aid groups should carefully engage renowned people to grab attention to the issues about which people are indifferent.

Sample 6:

In today's interconnected world, the disparity between wealthy and impoverished nations has become more pronounced. To bridge this gap, international aid organizations often leverage celebrity endorsements to attract public attention. This approach has sparked a debate on whether celebrities enhance or trivialize the significance of the issues at hand.

On the positive side, the involvement of celebrities can greatly benefit international aid organizations. Due to their widespread recognition, celebrities can effortlessly draw public attention to critical issues. This heightened awareness often translates to increased donations and support for various causes. Celebrities also lend their social credibility and positive public image to these organizations, thereby enhancing their reputation and trustworthiness. Moreover, when people see their favorite celebrities advocating for a cause, they are more likely to follow suit, bringing about a widespread change in societal attitudes and actions.

However, there are negative aspects to using celebrities in such campaigns. One primary concern is that the presence of celebrities might make the organizations appear less serious and professional. The glamorous and often entertainment-focused image of celebrities can clash with the gravity of the issues that aid organizations aim to address. This could lead the public to perceive these initiatives as superficial or insubstantial. Furthermore, there is the risk that people might focus solely on the celebrities themselves rather than the underlying problems these organizations are striving to solve.

In conclusion, both perspectives offer valid points, but the advantages of using celebrities seem to outweigh the drawbacks. The primary objective of aid organizations is to garner public attention and support, and celebrities are exceptionally effective in achieving this goal. When utilized correctly, celebrity endorsements can significantly advance the mission of these organizations.

Sample 7:

Today, it is not rare to see celebrities actively take part in philanthropy activities, giving rise to the term “celebrity humanitarians”. While some people advocate that this development will help raise public awareness regarding the issue, others believe celebrities instead make the problem less important than it ought to be. I will discuss both views and then state my opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe celebrities dilute the importance of the problems. There have been many cases where the involvement of a celebrity only serves as tabloid materials rather than educates the public about the issue, especially when the celebrities’ main motive is to promote their name. For example, a model once published a series of her nude photos, citing her opposition to the illegal poaching of animals in Africa as the main motive, but never mentioned anything about how serious the issue of illegal poaching was in following interviews.

On the other hand, it is undeniable that celebrities are ideal candidates to alert the masses to the pressing issues, if for no other reason than their unparalleled diverse audiences. The large fan base of famous people is very likely to support the good cause that their idol endorses. In addition, celebrities can gather huge media coverage, and as a result, even people who are not their fans can be aware of the problem. Such attention-catching ability is very important to spread the message about international aid needed.

Having evaluated both sides of the argument, my conclusion is that the charity organizations can harness the celebrities’ star power, at the same time combat the afore mentioned problem by choosing their spoke person wisely, so that the ambassador sincerely has the best interests of the troubled people or animals at heart, and not to divert public attention to himself.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

There are those who opine that young people's literacy skills have been detrimentally impacted due to their excessive reliance on electronic communication. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because opportunities are seldom provided for them to correct their mistakes and their exposure to informal language is excessive.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that young people are prevented from developing the ability to realise their spelling and grammatical mistakes. When they communicate via user- friendly devices, the advanced computer system will automatically give assistance by checking and correcting the mistakes made, resulting in these individuals never attaching importance to the errors at all. Thus, they will end up repeating the same mistakes and their reading and writing skills are threatened.

Another important point I consider relevant is that young people frequently use casual expressions on their computers and smart phones, including "CU29t", "LoL" and "dunno". Although this approach allows them to communicate with great convenience, they will gradually become accustomed to using these words. If they were required to generate some formal writing pieces, they would have difficulty accomplishing such tasks because of their inability to select appropriate vocabulary and sentence patterns.

In conclusion, I reiterated my complete approval of the idea that communication by using computers and mobiles poses a threat to young people's writing and reading skills. For one thing, they do not know what spelling or grammar mistakes they are making and how to write appropriately. Therefore, it is suggested that the young not only enjoy the convenience brought by electronic communication but also spend time learning vocabulary and grammar rules as well as practising different writing genres.

Sample 2:

It is observed that the tendency of the young to utilize computers and smartphones exerts an adverse impact on their literacy skills. I mostly disagree with this notion since it provides useful tools and access to a wide range of materials although it can give rise to their overreliance on digital devices.

The first justification for my disagreement is that digital devices enable youth to utilize specialized tools to improve their writing skills. This is because many word processing and writing applications available on computers and mobile phones offer features such as spell-check and grammar correction, which can help young people enhance the quality of their essays and reports. For instance, Grammarly, a writing assistant app, helps users to identify and correct errors in their writing as well as provide suggestions for sentence structure, vocabulary choice and tone improving the accuracy and readability of their writing.

Another reason is that youngsters can easily access diverse reading materials. More specifically, the internet offers a vast array of written sources, including news articles, blogs and online books. This can provide young people with access to diverse writing styles, genres and perspectives, which can help improve their literacy skills. To illustrate, besides their textbooks, young students can also read e-books and online news on their computer to gain a deeper insight into gender equality, thus they can write more convincing essays on this issue.

However, the over-dependence on technological devices can detrimentally affect young people’s literacy skills to some degree. With the prevalence of autocorrect functions on computers and mobile phones, young people may not be as motivated to learn the correct spelling and grammar. As a result, they may become overly reliant on these functions, leading to weaker confidence in their writing skills.

In conclusion, I somewhat maintain that young people’s literacy skills can be significantly boosted by the universal use of computers and mobile phones due to the prevalence of helpful tools and a variety of materials, though this can lead to them becoming over-dependent on electronic devices which can stunt their learning. It is advisable that the young should use these devices on a regular basis but regulate the amount of time using them to increase their writing and reading expertise.

Sample 3:

The widespread use of smartphones and computers for communication has led to detrimental impacts on young people's reading and writing skills. I completely agree that this trend is disadvantageous to these skillsets, and in this essay, I will provide evidence that supports my point of view.

The decline in traditional reading habits is one of the most prominent consequences. With the growing popularity of social media, instant messaging, and other digital platforms, young individuals are increasingly drawn to reading short and informal texts. This has resulted in fewer people reading books, newspapers, and magazines, which were once considered essential reading materials. Furthermore, the reduced attention span caused by constant exposure to digital media has made sustained reading challenging for young people, which is a crucial aspect of developing healthy reading habits.

Technology has not only affected users' reading skills but also writing habits. The growing dependence on software for communication has contributed to a rise in informal writing styles. As a matter of fact, today's youth tend to overuse emojis, acronyms, and abbreviations in their language, which can hinder the development of professional writing skills. Furthermore, young people's reliance on autocorrects and other digital assistance plugins has simplified the writing process, which allows them to overlook grammatical and spelling errors. This, in turn, ultimately results in a lack of attention to detail and a deterioration in writing proficiency. What is more, since these tools are generally used for informal communication, the availability of instant messaging and other online communications platforms has discouraged young individuals from acquiring formal writing skills.

To summarize, the rising use of computers and mobile phones for communication has resulted in the decline of traditional reading habits and hindered the development of formal writing proficiency in young individuals.

Sample 4:

Some people believe that young people’s reading and writing abilities are deteriorating because of the frequent use of mobile phones and computers for communication. I completely agree with this statement for the following reasons.

As mobile phones and computers become more popular, reading is among the first skills to be affected. Digital communication often involves reading short bursts of information, such as social media posts and text messages. This can make young people less likely to read longer, complex texts in print form, which could erode their comprehension skills and ability to analyse complex arguments. In addition, the constant notifications and distractions that come with digital communication can make it difficult for young people to focus on reading tasks. This can lead to a lack of deep reading skills and an inability to concentrate for long periods of time.

Young people’s writing skills can also be hampered due to modern communication methods. Mobile phones and computers often include autocorrect features, which can lead to a dependence on technology to correct spelling and grammar errors. This can harm young people’s ability to recognise and correct mistakes on their own and may lead to poor writing skills in the long run. Moreover, digital communication often relies on abbreviations and slang, which means young people would rarely use proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation when texting. For example, young people may become accustomed to using “u” instead of “you” or “lol” instead of writing out “laugh out loud”. Gradually, this can turn into a habit and cause young people to make frequent spelling errors and reduce their writing ability.

In conclusion, I agree with the idea that communication on computers and mobile phones can reduce young people’s reading and writing skills. The popularity of digital communication can lead to shallow reading, reduced attention spans, and more frequent writing errors.

Sample 5:

The increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has sparked concerns about its impact on young people’s reading and writing skills. I firmly agree that this trend has a detrimental effect on these abilities.

Firstly, young people’s reliance on shorthand language and emoticons in text messages and social media leads to a decline in their ability to write coherently and with proper grammar. In fact, the brevity and informality of these mediums do not require the same level of structure and clarity as formal writing. Consequently, young people may become accustomed to using incorrect grammar, spelling, and punctuation, which can carry over into their writing in other contexts. For instance, instead of writing out complete sentences, young people may use acronyms and abbreviations, such as "LOL" (laugh out loud) or "BRB" (be right back), to convey their messages quickly. While acceptable in casual texts or social media posts, these shortcuts are inappropriate in formal emails or business communications.

Secondly, young people are less likely to read books or long articles as they are accustomed to shorter, more immediate forms of communication. As a matter of fact, growing up in an era of instant gratification, they have easy access to information at their fingertips. They are used to receiving information quickly and easily through social media, texting, or other digital platforms that deliver concise messages. As a result, young people may have less patience for longer, more in-depth forms of communication, such as books or long articles. For example, instead of reading a full-length novel, they may prefer shorter pieces, such as blog posts or news articles, that can be consumed quickly. These shorter pieces offer more immediate gratification, as they can be read and shared quickly, without significant time or effort.

In conclusion, the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication significantly hampers young people’s reading and writing skills.

Sample 6:

Some individuals believe that the growing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a detrimental impact on young people's reading and writing abilities. I completely disagree with this viewpoint since modern technologies offer more opportunities to read and write and accessible lessons on these abilities.

First, the increased use of reading and writing skills that technology has caused is substantial. It is because mobile phones and computers are often linked with texting and messaging, modern forms of writing. These devices also offer access to social media, abundant with reading material in the form of countless web articles and news stories. As a result, we may improve our literacy via exposure to contemporary technology and routine activities like texting, emailing, and reading the news. For instance, the everyday need to send and receive emails at work greatly improves the writing and reading skills of those who do so.

Furthermore, modern technologies also provide accessible education in reading and writing. The Internet has made it possible to access various online educational resources, including comprehensive degree programs, individual tutoring sessions, and instructional films. In addition, computers and mobile phones are today the most common means of accessing this modern academic world. Thus, they are essential if students are to make progress in reading and writing through distance learning. As a result of the widespread school closures caused by the recent Covid-19 outbreak, for instance, many children learned essential reading and writing skills entirely through computers.

In conclusion, I disagree entirely that mobile phones and computers negatively affect our reading and writing skills as they make reading and writing instances more common while also connecting us to online academic platforms to improve reading and writing skills further.

Sample 7:

In an increasingly digital era, some individuals believe that escalating reliance on computers and mobile devices for interpersonal communication adversely impacts the reading and writing capabilities of the younger generation. While this argument holds some validity, I, on the contrary, am of the opinion that the influence of modern technology can be harnessed positively to enhance these fundamental skills.

There are credible reasons to support the assertion that the pervasive use of electronic devices could impede young people's literacy development. Firstly, digital communication often employs an informal, abbreviated language style which, if used excessively, could potentially weaken their formal language proficiency. In Vietnam, for instance, text messages and social media platforms are rife with "net-speak" and emojis, a stark departure from standard written Vietnamese. Consequently, this shift may lead to difficulties in understanding and producing complex grammatical structures and vocabulary in a formal context, leading to an overall decline in writing skills.

However, I believe that the rise of digital communication also presents a plethora of opportunities to bolster literacy skills. Though informal language is commonplace, it does not necessarily signify a decrease in reading and writing abilities; rather, it represents a different, albeit less traditional, form of literacy. Young Vietnamese, through daily online interactions, are exposed to a wealth of written language in a context that they find engaging and relevant. This routine exposure can significantly enhance their reading fluency. Furthermore, the digital world offers countless resources to aid in improving traditional literacy. For instance, online language learning platforms provide structured courses to elevate writing skills, while e-books and online articles cater to diverse reading interests.

To encapsulate, while there are concerns regarding the detrimental impact of digital communication on young people's literacy skills, I maintain that this trend can be manipulated constructively to enhance reading and writing abilities. In this age of rapid digital progression, it is pivotal to adapt educational strategies to harness the potential of technology, rather than opposing its inevitable proliferation.

Sample 8:

It is claimed that youngsters’ reading and writing skills can be negatively affected due to regular exposure to computers and mobile phones for communication. Although this trend is indeed disadvantageous, I still believe that it can bring several benefits.

On the one hand, the widespread use of digital devices may harm young individuals’ skill sets. To begin with, digital platforms such as social media and messaging apps frequently encourage young people to read shorter and more informal content. Thus, when it comes to traditional reading materials, for example, books and newspapers, people may find it challenging to focus and develop healthy reading habits. In addition, technology also has detrimental effects on writing skills due to the overuse of emojis, acronyms, and abbreviations. This habit, to some extent, can hinder the development of professional writing skills, hence, affecting youngsters’ study and work performances. 

On the other hand, computers and cell phones can improve young people’s communication abilities. Firstly, many autocorrects and other digital assistance plugins are introduced to aid people while writing. For example, a student can use Grammarly, a digital writing assistant, to fix grammatical and spelling errors while working on their assignments and research. Thus, a person is able to save a large amount of time and energy while still demonstrating their writing proficiency. Secondly, young individuals can easily practise their reading skills with technological devices. Since e-books can be downloaded and used anywhere and anytime, people can read as many books as they want. As a result, using digital devices can help young people save money and gradually develop good reading habits. 

To summarise, despite the fact that the rising use of computers and mobile phones for communication can result in poorer reading and writing skills, the benefits brought by those technologies should not be ignored.

Sample 9:

The advent of digital communication tools such as computers and mobile phones has undeniably transformed the way individuals interact, particularly among the youth. While some argue that this shift has adversely impacted young people's reading and writing abilities, I believe that these technologies offer opportunities for enhancing these skills if utilized effectively.

On the one hand, it is often claimed that the pervasive use of digital devices undermines traditional literacy skills. This perspective is grounded in the observation that young individuals, engrossed in texting and social media, tend to adopt informal language, abbreviations, and emojis, potentially neglecting proper grammar and spelling. For instance, in Vietnam, students who spend significant time on their phones might struggle with academic writing tasks, as the brevity and informality of online communication do not demand rigorous linguistic standards. Moreover, the passive consumption of content on digital platforms can lead to a decline in critical reading skills. If students are only exposed to bite-sized information, their ability to engage with and analyze complex texts could be diminished.

However, I believe that when approached correctly, digital communication can actually enhance literacy skills. The key lies in leveraging these tools for educational purposes. For example, there are numerous apps and online platforms in Vietnam designed to improve vocabulary and writing proficiency. By engaging with these resources, students can practice and refine their language skills in a dynamic and interactive environment. Furthermore, the internet provides access to a vast array of reading materials, from classic literature to contemporary articles, enabling young people to broaden their horizons and deepen their understanding of various subjects. With their active participation in such activities, students are more likely to develop robust reading and writing abilities.

In conclusion, while the rise of digital communication presents challenges to traditional literacy, it also offers unique opportunities for enhancing these skills. It is essential for educators and parents to guide young people in making the most of these technologies, ensuring that they are used not just for casual interaction but as powerful tools for learning and personal growth.

Sample 10:

The usage of digital devices such as smartphones and computers has revolutionized the way we communicate with people. While some people argue that this trend is detrimental to the reading and writing abilities of the younger generation, I disagree with this statement.

Digital communication has brought about numerous advantages for reading and writing skills. With the prevalence of abbreviations, emojis, and informal language in text messages, individuals have adapted to a new form of communication that suits the fast-paced nature of modern life. This evolution in language does not signify a decline in literacy skills but rather represents a dynamic shift in communication styles. Additionally, digital devices offer unprecedented access to a wealth of information and learning resources. Platforms like Kindle, Google Scholar, and various news apps provide easy access to e-books, academic articles, and global news, fostering enhanced reading comprehension and vocabulary acquisition.

Furthermore, digital platforms such as social media, blogs, and forums encourage individuals, especially young people, to express their thoughts and ideas through writing. Platforms like Facebook, Twitter, WordPress, Reddit, and educational tools like Google Classroom facilitate writing opportunities, enabling users to hone their writing skills through regular practice and feedback. Thus, digital communication enriches reading and writing skills by providing diverse content and ample opportunities for expression and improvement.

To conclude, the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has transformed the way young people read and write. However, it does not have a negative impact on their literacy skills. Digital communication serves as a powerful tool to enhance the reading and writing skills of the younger generation.

Sample 11:

The increasing use of computers and mobile phones among young people for communication has raised concerns regarding its impact on their reading and writing skills. While some people believe that this trend negatively affects literacy skills, I side with those who argue that it offers new avenues for language development.

One concern is that digital communication has introduced a simplified form of language that includes abbreviations, slang, and emojis, which may diverge from traditional language skills. As a result, young people often rely on this informal style of language even in formal settings. Additionally, the quick, bite-sized nature of digital content might negatively affect the attention span required for in-depth reading and understanding. This could potentially weaken this generation's formal writing skills, which are crucial for academic and professional success.

However, these drawbacks are balanced by significant benefits. The digital era has led to an increase in the quantity and diversity of reading and writing. Young individuals come across various forms of text online, which exposes them to different language styles and vocabulary. The interactive nature of digital platforms also encourages active engagement with text, fostering improved language skills. Moreover, digital communication equips young people with a different set of language skills, such as being able to effectively and concisely convey information. They are also better able to read between the lines to decipher the deeper meanings of a text conversation.

In conclusion, while the informal nature of digital communication poses challenges to traditional reading and writing skills, it also offers opportunities for developing a broader set of literacy skills. I believe that the negative influence of digital devices on young users' language skills is insignificant compared to the benefits they bring.

Sample 12:

Mobile phones and computers are among the most important inventions that have brought huge convenience and efficacy. While people argue that the use of these gadgets for communication is having a bad impact on reading. They are unable to socialize, others say it may have a positive impact on young people by access to different apps. I strongly believe that these gadgets have a harmful impact on young people.

Foremost, these gadgets, when used for communication, can make young people unable to socialize. Presently, there has been a high increase in the usage of phones to communicate. With the pandemic that happened in the year 2020, people have become more distant. There are more online activities, and this can severely impair someone in their communication skills. For example, when compared with older generations and younger generations. Because of less socializing and more acronyms in texting while using a phone some words that have not been used. Instead of physically communicating nowadays there are different ways through pictures and videos that are being used.

On the other hand, these gadgets can be of great benefit because they have a lot of apps. Many companies have now developed apps that can be used for learning more languages which is a huge benefit. For example, the app Duolingo has different sections for learning languages, such as Spanish, Dutch, Mandarin, and so on. This can help you converse properly with people who speak those languages.

In my opinion, I believe these gadgets will have a harmful effect on skills such as teaching. There are professions that are solely based on writing and speaking. If the younger generations are only using these gadgets without proper research from books written by professors, this would be bad.

In conclusion, the negative impact would be for people to be unable to socialize. While the positive effect is that it helps one develop more languages through the apps seen in the gadget. In my opinion, I believe that the negative effect is that there will not be skills in teaching.

Sample 13:

The use of computers and mobile phones has been beneficial for communication since their invention. But in recent years, I believe they have had a negative impact on the reading and writing skills of young people today.

Firstly, young people are always on their phones chatting and texting their friends and family. Since they are fast paced, they find it time-wasting to type long sentences, thereby resorting to abbreviations. The use of abbreviations is so rampant these days that you will find it difficult to understand a conversation between two young adults. This has, in a way, had a bad effect on the writing skills of young adults. They find it difficult to spell actual words since they are used to abbreviations. For example, some young adults do not know the difference between it is and its, their and there, were and where, this and these.

Furthermore, the use of computers and mobile phones has reduced the reading culture among young adults. The advent of e-books which can be read on phones and computers, hasn’t helped reading among young people either. Most times, they store these books on their phones and computers with the hopes that they will read them, but they don’t read them because they get engrossed with social media. Also, since most young adults spend the majority of their time on the phone, they find it hard to put their phone aside to pick up a book to read.

In conclusion, I believe that the rampant use of phones and computers has had a negative consequence on the reading and writing culture of young people. The writing culture can be improved if the use of abbreviations is reduced. Also, limiting the time spent on social media and creating time to read books, magazines, and other enriching articles will improve the reading culture among young people.

Sample 14:

There is no doubt that technology has spread throughout society, and some argue that increased communication via technology such as computers, cell phones, and so on has had a negative impact on young people's reading and writing abilities. However, I disagree with this view in some ways, which I will describe in the following lines.

Mobile applications and desktop software that provide language assistance were created to make users' lives simpler, but regrettably play a significant part in deteriorating their language abilities. It is common for teenagers to have installed software such as Grammarly and MS-Word on their devices, which assist them in writing correctly by employing auto correction features, therefore rendering them blind to proper and erroneous phrases. Apart from that, communicating through social chatting applications such as WhatsApp, Facebook, and so on makes people accustomed to using slang words and abbreviations, which further complicates class presentations, colleague group discussions, and formal meetings because it becomes difficult for them not to use informal terms.

As a result, it impairs the reading and writing abilities of young office employees. Communicating with the aid of technology is advantageous since the software employed by such devices provides clues of possible language when writing, which not only improves writing abilities but also raises users' cognitive skills. Furthermore, the convenience of availability for conversing at any time due to owning mobile phones will improve a person’s reading and writing abilities. For example, if an employee is sending an email to a superior using a laptop, it would be simple to create decent, error-free writing. As a result, exchanging ideas via technological devices improves such abilities.

To summarise, while speaking using electronic devices has certain drawbacks, it appears to be more favourable in terms of supplying lists of vocabulary lists, enhancing cognitive abilities, and facilitating access to devices aids in refining individuals' language skills.

Sample 15:

It is often said that the Internet's creation in the nineteenth made easier the way in which people could learn, work and study. The use of computers and mobile phones was seen at first as a democratization of knowledge, culture, and books. However, I think that this primary ideology was totally wrong following the side effects and trajectory and use of these devices. Indeed. I do think that computers and mobile phones for communication have a negative effect on people's reading and writing skills, especially for young people.

First, young people have been raised with mobiles and computers. The problem is that most of the content shared on computers and mobile phones, especially because of the use of social, are videos, images, and emoticons. For example, to get informed of the news, people used to communicate with others, write letters to people who were informed of the situation, or read newspapers before the Internet was created. Today, most - if not all young people are being informed by watching videos on the Internet and social media. As a result, we can attest that young people are getting used to a virtual world made of videos and images.

But not only are newspapers concerned, but also all kinds of information. Indeed, when young people, especially students, needed to find information for a school project they were confronted with what a lot of young people are "reluctant to" today: opening a book, an encyclopedia. Indeed, many young people are being disinterested in books as computers and mobiles are making on-web research easier and faster. Young people are, as a result, reading less and hoping to find quickly a piece of information instead of reading an entire article about it. For example, who reads an entire book about a country to communicate with someone from another country when they can just find a short article about the culture they are trying to know better?

Nevertheless, writing skills are also strictly damaged by computers and mobiles. Because we are more connected to people thanks to computers and mobiles, we increase the process of talking with everyone, everywhere, as fast as it can be. Before, thanks to the use of letters, people had time to think about what they would write and how they would like their text to be perfectly spelled and well written. Not only letters but also phone calls would help people develop their writing skills as you could not use abbreviations and slang as people do every day by texting. A single image - a yellow face called a smiley - can replace dozens of words if not more. People are developing slang, image, videos, and GIF language instead of writing what they feel, think, and want to say in a text.

Also, vocal messages become a threat to reading and writing as these two skills are becoming useless in computers and mobile communication. In addition, creating a technology through which users of these devices are enabled to dictate a sentence that the mobile will write in a text makes people even more unskilled in writing and reading.

To conclude, the prominent use of mobiles and computers for communication has numerous negative effects on young people's writing and reading skills. Indeed, it keeps them away from reading and especially writing because of vocal messages and the creation of slang. Communication becomes a way for people to tell what they have to say without thinking about what they are writing and saying.

Sample 16:

Technological equipment such as mobile phones and computers have acquired their significance in the modern-day communication among the young. Personally, I believe that this has both positive and negative effects on their reading and writing skills.

On the one hand, I agree that excessive reliance on these devices is responsible for the young generation’s poor performance in reading and writing. Firstly, many people have a strong preference for computer software when composing text documents due to its convenient functions. For example, Microsoft Word provides users with the ability to modify or erase a piece of text without effort, simultaneously slowing down the writing speed of the users. In addition, young people who spend much time playing with their phones and computers are likely to have insufficient time for reading activities. Gradually, the lack of practice may impair their reading competence in the long term.

On the other hand, it is also true that the proper use of electronic devices can have a positive effect on reading and writing skills. The Internet has now been made accessible through both mobile phones and computers, allowing young readers to gain knowledge from a wider range of sources. Online English newspapers, as an example, are useful for English learners to enrich their vocabulary. Using computers to write blogs is also a good way to enhance writing skill. Today, the availability of Internet infrastructure can enable bloggers to update their stories at their convenience. By writing regularly, the writing ability of a person is certain to improve.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the use of electronic equipment items can have both advantages and drawbacks for the reading and writing skills of users, depending on the way they are used.

Sample 17:

Nowadays, the number of young people depending on modern devices such as laptops and smartphones for communication is increasing, which is believed to negatively influence their reading and writing skills. However, I disagree with this opinion because the impacts of the positive effects on improving such skills are more considerable.

The first reason is that mobile phones and computers help users enhance their reading skills since

they provide access to unlimited sources on the Internet. With technological devices, young people could read the newest novels or the latest news from their favorite authors or channels, which allows them to form a good habit of daily reading and enriches their vocabulary. Moreover, for learning purposes, many learners could consult articles of various languages by scholars around the world, and as a result, they shall be able to conduct extensive reading in many foreign

languages.

Another important reason is that, with the development of social networking sites, people could enhance their writing skills as well. Students, for example, could practice their writing skills online, by writing their essays and then posting them on the internet, readers could comment and

correct their writings. In addition, by approaching the enormous knowledge resource, youngsters

could learn from styles of many authors, who have the best-selling books, thereby creating their

own writing styles. Gradually, their writing skills would become more ameliorated.

In conclusion, it seems to me that communication via mobile phones and computers has more advantages than disadvantages for the reading and writing skills of the young generation. It is recommended that the young should use these modern communication devices properly so that they would help them improve their ability to read and write in the right way.

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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

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It is common these days for older people who need employment to compete with people much younger for the same type of work. While this can create problems, there are steps that can be taken to reduce the impacts.

The main problem is that older people may find it more difficult to secure work, which arises because younger people are more likely to have up-to-date qualifications and experience. For example, information technology is integral to a variety of jobs these days and the skills needed for this are rapidly changing. Young people may well have recent knowledge through university or through using technology in their leisure time. If older people cannot secure work, this leads to other problems. As they are likely to have a family to support, they may not have an adequate income to provide for their children’s education or other such necessities.

It is the government that needs to take measures to ameliorate such problems. This needs to begin with ensuring that older people have all the skills needed to compete in the job market, which could be achieved by providing free training on the most important job requirements at local community colleges, for example. In addition to this, the government needs to encourage employers to change their employment practices by promoting the value of experience that older workers can bring to a job.

To conclude, the main issue with competition for work between these groups is that older people may start to find it more difficult to find work. However, despite this, through the right training and changes to recruitment practices, older people can compete on an equal footing to the younger generation in the jobs market.

Sample 2:

The competition between older and younger people for the same jobs has become increasingly common in today's job market. While this situation can create a number of problems, solutions exist to address the concerns from both of these age groups.

Clearly, this competition can cause a lot of headaches for the parties involved. Firstly, job security for the older group may be threatened especially in careers that are more labor intensive, as employers may perceive a young candidate as more energetic and favor them to replace an older staff member as a result. This is even more likely if an older employee has spent years at the job without being promoted to a higher position. Meanwhile, young jobseekers have to face a higher entry barrier for employment. Every year, university and high school graduates compete among themselves for jobs, and with this reality, their competitors would include people who undoubtedly possess more experience as well. This puts the younger generation’s lives under pressure and would end up limiting their access to good employment opportunities.

Several measures can be implemented to resolve the aforementioned issues, fortunately. Employers, initially, should adopt policies of additional job security for older staff, in some form of program for older workers to mentor their younger counterparts. The employees, as a result, will have more opportunities to contribute at the workplace, and be less likely to feel that their livelihood is under threat. With regard to the youth, they should be encouraged to shore up their employable skills, such as leadership and communication. Taking part in extracurricular activities where they could volunteer for responsibility is usually the first step to honing these qualities. They would, as a result, stand out amidst the fierce competition in the job market.

In conclusion, the fact that older and younger people contest each other for employment certainly causes problems for both age groups. In my opinion, it is imperative to consider solutions for these issues, to ensure that all age groups have fair access to job opportunities.

Sample 3:

It is true that fierce competition in the job market between older people and their younger counterparts has become an increasingly widespread concern. Several problems have resulted from this tendency, and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions from both individuals and the government.

Competing with the young, the older generation has to face up to two main issues. Firstly, due to age discrimination, older people often suffer more disadvantages when seeking the same positions as young candidates, even when they have similar abilities and qualifications. As a result, a number of them become unemployed, which prevents them from meeting basic human needs. Secondly, old employees might be under strong pressure, stemming from the fact that their young colleagues seem to be more creative and adapt themselves to changes at the workplace more easily than they could do. This may lead to both physical and psychological problems, including heart disease and depression.

Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems. The first solution is that the government should encourage enterprises to apply the Age Discrimination in Employment Act of 1967 in order to protect employees who are 40 years old or more from employment discrimination based on age. As a result, they would be given greater opportunities to find suitable jobs and earn a living. On an individual level, older workers should be willing to update their skills through attending training courses. If younger colleagues also help them to adapt to changes in the working environment, older workers will gain confidence and improve their work performance.

In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of increasing rivalry between the old and the young in the job market and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems, not only by the government but also by individuals.

Sample 4:

There is stiff competition for jobs between the elderly and younger generations these days. This essay discusses possible issues caused by this and steps that can be taken to address the problem.

There are two main issues influencing both generations. The first one is that an increasing number of older job hunters can worsen youth unemployment. In terms of working experience, older employees definitely have the edge over younger workers, meaning that they have a higher rate of being employed. Moreover, the elderly are strong candidates with better decision-making and problem-solving skills sharpened during their work life, therefore, young people may not stand a chance in competing for the same jobs with them. Another problem is the higher rate of poverty among the elderly. As the job market is rapidly changing, many jobs today require candidates to be tech-savvy and vigorous which are clearly disadvantages for older workers when competing with younger people.

Some simple measures can be implemented to deal with the root causes of the problem. The first solution is that governments should encourage businesses to provide more internships for less experienced young employees. As a result, they will have the opportunity to accumulate experience. Another measure is providing retraining to the elderly so that they are able to fill jobs that require them to have technical skills. Consequently, they can have higher employability which helps to prevent them from poverty.

In conclusion, the youth unemployment and the poverty suffered by older people are two main issues arising from the job competition between younger and older workers. Encouraging firms to provide more internships for young employees and providing retraining to the elderly can be done to solve the problem.

Sample 5:

The increasing competition for jobs between older and younger people has become a significant issue in today's labor market. This essay will explore the problems caused by this trend and propose potential solutions to address them.

There are many problems caused by this trend, and one major problem is the increased difficulty for young people to secure employment. Older individuals, with their extensive experience, often receive preferential treatment from recruiters, leading to fewer opportunities for the younger generation. This preference exacerbates youth unemployment rates, contributing to social issues. For instance, in Japan, companies' emphasis on hiring experienced workers has intensified job market competition, resulting in a phenomenon known as "freeter" or "unemployed NEET" (Not in Education, Employment, or Training). Furthermore, the lack of stable income for unemployed youth can drive them to criminal activities such as robbery to support themselves and their families. Consequently, not only does this diminish the quality of life for citizens, but it also threatens public safety.

To mitigate these issues, employers should create more job opportunities tailored for young employees. Implementing fast-track schemes for rapid training and the promotion of talented young staff can help them realize their potential and contribute significantly to their companies. Additionally, governments should establish policies to provide older people with sufficient social benefits, such as old-age pensions and medical care. For example, the Vietnamese government's "No Poor Elderly Household" program offers financial support to impoverished elderly individuals. These measures would reduce the competition for jobs between the young and the old, empowering younger individuals to secure their desired positions.

In conclusion, this trend leads to numerous issues and addressing the employment competition between older and younger people requires a comprehensive approach that includes creating more job opportunities for the youth and providing better social benefits for the elderly.

Sample 6:

In many workplaces, there is a natural conflict between younger and older employees. In my opinion, this can impact staff morale in a number of ways and the best solutions involve competent management and hiring practices.

The ramifications of an age-diversified workplace relate to the environment. When new employees join, there is often resentment from older workers who feel threatened or must compensate for their new colleagues’ inexperience. If the younger workers are arrogant, this conflict will grow into animosity and result in a toxic workplace culture. Similarly, if they are unable to quickly adapt to the company, older workers will likely become frustrated. Conversely, there is also the possibility, particularly if the work involves emerging technologies, that the more experienced workers will lag behind and younger workers will feel hampered. This can also lead to an unhealthy workplace atmosphere.

The solutions for the problems detailed above relate to management and hiring. A company that selects a qualified young employee with a positive mindset does not have to fear negative effects on morale. After hiring, management also plays a key role in dissolving tensions and preventing their initial occurrences. For example, managers who know the strengths and weaknesses of their employees well will not team up with workers with contrary personalities. Additionally, by ensuring older employees stay current with new technology, managers will avoid the potential conflict arising from changes in their field. Finally, the manager must also take steps to guarantee the workplace has strong cohesion by valuing contributions from all employees, setting a relaxed atmosphere, being transparent, and ensuring there are no double standards due to age.

In conclusion, the issues stemming from a variety of ages working together concern the environment and the solutions involve strong management. In this way, these seemingly inevitable conflicts can be mitigated.

Sample 7:

The increase in competition for employment between older and younger individuals presents significant challenges that necessitate effective solutions.  As the retirement age extends and economic conditions are uncertain, older individuals are staying in the market for a longer period. This dynamic is one of the root causes of the competitive environment, posing several problems. 

Firstly, the older workforce is more prone to face discrimination when employers prefer younger candidates as they are more technologically adept. This bias can result in an increase in unemployment among older individuals, leading to financial insecurity and a potential increase in reliance on social welfare systems. Moreover, older employees may experience difficulties after leaving a particular organisation in securing new positions that match their expertise and qualifications, leading to underemployment and job dissatisfaction. On the other hand, younger individuals may find it challenging to secure entry-level positions in a company because of the presence of more experienced older candidates. This situation can hinder their career development and delay their progression in the job market. 

To address these issues, one can start by promoting age diversity in the workplace through more inclusive hiring practices. Employers should be encouraged to recognise the value of experience and unique perspectives that older people may bring. Apart from this, continuous professional development should be emphasised for both older and younger workers. This can be done by providing training and upskilling opportunities that can help older individuals stay relevant in a rapidly changing job market. For example, companies can offer workshops on new technologies and industry trends to ensure that all employees, regardless of age, are equipped with the necessary skills.

To conclude, the competition between older and younger individuals for employment can lead to age discrimination, financial insecurity, and hindered career progression. However, by promoting age diversity and offering continuous professional development, these challenges can be effectively mitigated.

Sample 8:

It is true that competitiveness is a widespread mentality in the workplace, especially among young and senior employees. There are several reasons behind this problem, and governments may take a variety of steps to ameliorate the situation. The quantity of mature-aged personnel is the first foreseeable result. Despite the fact that the ageing workforce has a wealth of expertise, they appear to be less productive owing to their declining health. As a result, their work performance would suffer as a result. Another effect is an increase in the unemployment rate among junior employees, which is frequently cited as a significant source of juvenile criminality. Because of their lack of employment, young people are more likely to misbehave, such as spoiling, murdering, and so on, in order to get by. As a result, our culture not only indirectly encourages youngsters to commit crimes, but we also fail to properly utilise young employees who appear to be inexperienced yet committed to working.

To address these issues, I believe firms should create early retirement incentive programmes for dedicated older workers as soon as possible. To guarantee that they enjoy a healthy life for the remainder of their lives, special healthcare and other social welfare payments should be provided. Furthermore, companies should provide additional job possibilities for young workers. Consider a fast-track programme, which is a mechanism for speedy training and advancement of outstanding young employees. As a result, they will be able to maximise their potential and contribute significantly to the organisation where they work.

Finally, both young and senior employees contribute equally to a company's success. As a result, managers must lead a multi-generational workforce through training activities and employee incentive programmes.

Sample 9:

There is a natural tension between younger and older personnel in many companies. This, in my opinion, may have a variety of effects on employee morale, and the best solutions entail competent management and hiring procedures.

The environmental implications of an age-diverse workplace are significant. When new employees arrive, older employees may feel threatened or feel obligated to compensate for their new colleagues' lack of expertise. If the younger employees are arrogant, the dispute will escalate into hostility, resulting in a poisonous work environment. Similarly, older workers will feel upset if they are unable to rapidly adjust to the firm. Conversely, there is a risk that more experienced workers may fall behind and younger people will feel hindered, especially if the task includes developing technology. This can also result in an unpleasant work environment.

The answers to the issues listed above have to do with management and hiring. A firm that hires a talented young employee with a pleasant attitude does not have to worry about morale problems. Following the recruiting process, management is crucial in resolving conflicts and avoiding them from arising in the first place. Managers who are familiar with their employees' strengths and limitations, for example, will not assign individuals with opposing personalities to the same team. Managers will also minimise possible disagreement coming from changes in their sector by ensuring that older staff are up to date on new technology.

Finally, the manager must ensure that the workplace has strong cohesiveness by appreciating all employees' contributions, creating a pleasant culture, being honest, and ensuring that there are no age-based disparities. Finally, the difficulties arising from the collaboration of people of various ages affect the environment, and the answers require strong management. These ostensibly inevitable confrontations can be avoided in this way.

Sample 10:

In recent years, older employees have faced increased competition for jobs as a result of an influx of skilled younger people. This article will explore some of the difficulties raised by this competition, as well as some steps that may be made to assist elderly people in finding and keeping jobs.

In terms of jobs and work, being middle-aged or older has a number of drawbacks. To begin with, it is common knowledge that older individuals have less competence in the abilities required for current professions. Young people, for example, are considerably more tech-savvy and have a much easier time mastering skills related to information technology and the internet.

Second, the elderly are physically challenged. Due to the fact that people lose energy as they age, young people are frequently more productive than older people, making them more desirable employment applicants. There are, however, options for older adults to improve their employability. To begin, they can and should concentrate on enhancing their abilities through private study and professional growth. There's no reason why older individuals can't gain the information and abilities that their younger counterparts have. Adopting a healthy lifestyle is a simple yet efficient approach to become as productive as young people in terms of physical disadvantage.

If they are committed to exercise and a good diet, even retirees may occasionally outperform young people. To summarise, while older individuals encounter obstacles in the contemporary job market, with a dedication to hard work and a disciplined lifestyle, older people may become more competitive in the job market.

Sample 11:

Those seeking a job are now facing stiffer competition from the younger generation. This essay will suggest that the main problem this causes is higher poverty among older people and propose lowering the retirement age as a possible solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

Increased competition from today’s youth has left many over the 50s in poverty. If a young and old person applies for the same job, it is often the case that the younger individual will have more qualifications and may also be willing to work for less money, leaving many seniors without work and ‘left on the scrap heap’. For example, a recent survey showed that since the financial crisis in 2008, fuel and food poverty has increased by 82% amongst the aged. Despite this, many of the older generation own their own property and have large savings and therefore, are somewhat insulated from these troubles.

The most viable answer would be to drop the age of retirement. Most industrialized countries could afford to lower this from 65 to 60, thus allowing millions of people to simply retire and be looked after by the state. For instance, Finland recently decreased the retirement age for all government employees to free up more jobs for their graduates. However, this initiative may be very unpopular with the business community, who would have to pay for many of these early retirements.

In summary, the increased rivalry between young and old in the job market has resulted in the impoverishment of many of our older citizens and countries should consider reducing the age of retirement to solve this.

Sample 12:

It is true that there has been increasingly more competition between the young and the old who are in search of the same job. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, steps can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.

As more elderly applicants have to compete with the younger ones for a job, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that this will obviously pose more challenges for the young who are struggling to find a place in the labor market. Older people, understandably, are usually given more favorable consideration by recruiters due to their vast experience in comparison with the young generation, which can lead to a shortage of work for younger people, increasing the rates of unemployment. Furthermore, when being unemployed and lacking a stable source of income, people are likely to commit crimes such as robbery to feed themselves and their families. As a result, not only will the citizens’ quality of life diminish, but their safety will also be threatened.

However, there are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, decreasing the legal retirement age can alleviate the pressure of competition the young have to take. Secondly, increasing the state pension is also an ideal option for this issue because some retirees who find their pension sufficient for living will not have to return to work. Finally, governments can create more available jobs by attracting international organizations to invest with additional incentives.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as older people are competing with the young for the same job.

Sample 13:

Seniors are now competing with youngsters for the same jobs. This creates tough competition in the job market. Unemployment rates are already high in some countries. And when youngsters have to share the available jobs with seniors, it creates more unemployment among them.

The fact that many seniors still need jobs clearly shows that their financial situation is not good. This is a cause for concern. Seniors who don’t have enough savings for their twilight years are a social liability. If they don’t manage to find employment and earn enough, the government will have to take care of their healthcare costs. What’s more, finding jobs is not easy for senior adults. Many of them lack the skills needed for the modern workplace. That said, there are still some jobs for which companies prefer seniors to juniors. Even if they are not as tech-savvy as youngsters, they have more experience. Also, they are able to think with a level head. Because of these traits, many companies still appoint senior adults.

Seniors actively looking for employment are not exactly great news for young people. While it is true that they can learn a lot from the experience of older employees, there aren’t enough jobs for all in the market. The truth is that young people who often have a dependent spouse and young children need employment more than seniors.

There are some solutions to this problem. Enforcing a strict retirement age will prevent seniors from looking for jobs. However, that will affect older people who are in desperate need of a job. To help them, the government needs to launch some welfare schemes and ensure that all the people who need assistance can have it.

To conclude, when seniors compete with juniors for the same jobs, the unemployment situation only gets worse. The government can prevent this from happening by launching welfare programs for the elderly.

Sample 14:

It is true that competition is a significant attitude in a workplace that is more prevalent between young and old employees. There are numerous reasons regarding this issue and various measures can be taken by governments to improve this situation.

Higher unemployment proportion and the incursion of the innovative breakthrough are the major causes of increased competition amongst both young and old groups. Since people have faced economic recession in the world, the unemployment rate is rising, they are more willing to maintain the job they have, and youngsters compete with their older counterparts to find a great job. At the same time, due to advanced technology, employers find the younger generation more knowledgeable with higher qualifications. In this regard, youngsters are more likely to be recruited by them. However, a sense of competitiveness will arise at this point because older people believe that traditional and conventional methods are far more useful and never replaced with novel ones.

Providing greater job possibilities and utilizing both young and old people to train each other are the keys to solving this problem. It is the governments’ responsibility to invest in creating job opportunities and employing or maintaining the elderly who are skilled and experienced so as to train younger counterparts. Besides, authorities can offer training courses for old workers in order to boost their technological knowledge. As a result, older people can benefit from the younger to learn modern technology usage at work.

In conclusion, the competition among the young and the old workers will only be tackled if both groups help each other to improve their weaknesses and provide more job opportunities in society.

Sample 15:

It is common these days for older people who need employment to compete with people much younger for the same type of work. While this can create problems, there are steps that can be taken to reduce the impacts. The main problem is that older people may find it more difficult to secure work, which arises because younger people are more likely to have up-to-date qualifications and experience.

For example, information technology is integral to a variety of jobs these days and the skills needed for this are rapidly changing. Young people may well have recent knowledge through university or through using technology in their leisure time. If older people cannot secure work, this leads to other problems. As they are likely to have a family to support, they may not have an adequate income to provide for their children’s education or other such necessities.

It is the government that needs to take measures to ameliorate such problems. This needs to begin with ensuring that older people have all the skills needed to compete in the job market, which could be achieved by providing free training on the most important job requirements at local community colleges, for example.

In addition to this, the government needs to encourage employers to change their employment practices by promoting the value of experience that older workers can bring to a job. To conclude, the main issue with competition for work between these groups is that older people may start to find it more difficult to find work. However, despite this, through the right training and changes to recruitment practices, older people can compete on an equal footing to the younger generation in the jobs market.

Sample 16:

Today, the increasing number of experienced job seekers have to compete with young adults for the same job positions. This phenomenon causes youth unemployment, which in turn impacts society severely. However, in my opinion, the governments and educationists should work hand in hand so as to reform the current educational system in order to grapple with the issue.

The growing competition between the older and young adults brings about several crises in society, youth unemployment in particular. The high youth unemployment may contribute to the risk of competencies and talent since a large number of university graduates are found difficult to get a job and to put the capabilities and knowledge they have gained into producing innovation and contributing to economic growth. In addition, youth unemployment could also harm happiness and mental health. Being employed is crucial for young adults so as to feel accepted in the community, thus not having a job can hold them in cultural, economic, and social isolation. Employment anxieties and social exclusion may cause various health problems, like depression. Besides, several studies reveal that youth unemployment is associated with juvenile delinquency and drug abuse as well.

However, in order to curb this issue, governments and educationalists should work together so as to reform the current education system. That is to say that the curriculum needs to offer courses that enable students to acquire business acumen and mandatory skills required to successfully manage a position. Besides, employers also can play a paramount role in quelling the problem. They should connect with students earlier by providing apprenticeships and mentors so that these young people could be well-equipped for the job field.

In pithy, the competition seems likely to contribute to the youth’s unemployment that has a ripple effect through society. However, governments and educationists should devise a new education system squaring with real-world job requirements. Apart from that, employers also should provide adequate internships for students so that they grab the skills associated with the professional ambiance.

Sample 17:

It is undeniable that a growing number of young adults are faced with increasing competition from the It is undeniable that a growing number of young adults are faced with increasing competition from the elderly in the workplace. This essay will endeavor to explore the negative effects caused by this hot competition between the young and the old job seekers, and then present some suggestions to alleviate these potential problems.

The most troubling effect would be on the young, unemployed graduates, who may feel unmotivated and frustrated. Senior job candidates have rich experience, and therefore they tend to outshine young adults. Young employees are relatively restricted in terms of work experience and communication skills, because of which employers prefer to recruit older people with higher working efficiency rather than those who have just graduated from the university. Without a decent job and salary, it is extremely difficult for young people to make a living, as a consequence of which, some of them might resort to crime to fulfill their desires.

Another negative implication could be on the senior workers. They might find it daunting to keep up with the latest advancements in technology. In the manufacturing industry, for example, the use of advanced machines is quite common. But, how to operate the equipment could be a tough challenge for older workers, whereas it may be simple and easy for their younger counterparts. Therefore, the elderly employees might suffer both physically and psychologically, even if they secure reasonable jobs. Finally, if senior employees constitute the largest proportion of the company’s staff, then it could lead to a decline in productivity and efficiency of the enterprise.

These problems can certainly be solved. Considering the severity of this problem, it is imperative for the government to encourage self-employment for fresh graduates, so that young people still have huge room for employment even though they are eliminated by the job competition. Governments should encourage businesses to create more jobs for less experienced young employees who will then have the opportunity to accumulate experience.

Further, the governments should allocate more money to the pension system, which can basically guarantee the basic needs of most elders, so that they do not have to look for jobs. At the individual level, the elderly should plan ahead for their retirement and enjoy their retired life, instead of competing for the limited job vacancies. This would be a win-win option both for the aged and the young.

To sum up, competition between both age groups for the jobs will continue to be more intense, but some steps at the government and individual level can help to lessen the severity of the situation.

Sample 18:

Today, the labor market is becoming more competitive than ever before, with increasing competition between candidates of different age groups. This has led to a number of problems that need to be tackled, as will now be explained.

Firstly, there might be an increase in the rate of unemployment among young job seekers. Compared to the young, older candidates often possess a rich source of experience and thus have an obvious advantage when it comes to the recruitment process. The younger they are, the fewer chances people have in job hunting, and this is the case of many Indian youths who are struggling to secure a job after graduating from university.

Secondly, the workforce will be less productive. The experience of older workers cannot be used to justify their low levels of productivity due to the constraint of health. Companies that employ senior workers are often at risk of having their business delayed because of the frequent sick leave of these employees. In contrast, junior workers tend to be more dynamic and more content with working overtime, which contributes to the success of their firms.

However, there is a range of available options to combat the issue. One remedy is that the government should offer incentives for older people and encourage them to retire. This will pave the way for young people to fill the vacancies created. Another measure is that companies ought to hire both junior and senior employees because a mix of experienced and energetic staff members can be extremely beneficial for them to grow.

In conclusion, various solutions can be taken to handle the problems caused by growing competition between young job seekers and their older counterparts.

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Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The improvements in technology currently bring about harmful effects on the environment. While some people believe having simpler lives is the only solution, I would argue that technological advances can help to tackle these environmental problems.

On the one hand, it is believed that individuals need to live simple lives and rely less on technology. The first suggestion is that people should walk or cycle rather than drive cars. This is because the current number of cars being manufactured and used is increasing, which causes high levels of exhaust fumes and makes air pollution a serious issue. Additionally, people should try to reduce their consumption of electricity so that the exploitation of natural resources such as fossil fuels or nuclear power can be minimized. An example of this idea is the annual event called Earth Hour, where everyone is asked to turn their lights off for sixty minutes.

On the other hand, I believe the developments of technology can greatly contribute to environmental protection. Firstly, because of those improvements, people can come up with ways to recycle materials such as paper or glass, which reduces the problem of waste disposal. Secondly, technology can also help to create electricity using renewable resources. For example, many countries in the world have built plants that utilise solar energy to generate power. As a result, it is not necessary to rely on non-renewable resources, and people can create electricity without significantly damaging the environment.

In conclusion, while some people think that they should live simpler lives to prevent environmental issues, I would argue that these problems can be dealt with by technological improvements.

Sample 2:

Some immense environmental problems such as global warming and ozone depletion in the Earth's stratosphere can be ascribed to technological developments. While some people believe that living a simple life can mitigate these problems, I contend that the best measure is green technology.

There is a common fallacy that a simple lifestyle can adequately address environmental issues. People may argue that by cutting household and transport energy use, they are making a substantial contribution to environmental protection. However, this method does not stop the massive energy consumption at industrial sites. Some may also claim that not using electricity at home is the right choice, and events such as Earth Hour are an appropriate measure to cut carbon dioxide production. Ironically, the aforementioned event is symbolic rather than practical, as most people start to light candles for lighting purposes, an act that produces even more carbon dioxide than light bulbs do.

I firmly believe that environmentally-friendly technology is the best answer to the problems. First, electric or hybrid transport vehicles can reduce the amount of traffic fumes that have been damaging both the biosphere and the atmosphere of Earth. For example, thick layers of smog in Beijing gradually diminished after most petrol and diesel cars were replaced by electric ones. Second, the use of alternative energy sources such as solar and wind can stop the over-exploitation of fossil fuels, thus reducing the amount of greenhouse gas emissions, the main culprit of global warming. Finally, with the latest technological advancements, household appliances that once threatened the environment have become greener. An excellent example of this is that modern refrigerators and air-conditioners do not produce CFCs, a type of gas that is proven to be the major catalyst of ozone destruction.

All of the existing data provides a concrete foundation that advances of technology should be adopted to tackle environmental problems, while simple ways of life are ineffective and sometimes counterproductive solutions for these problems.

Sample 3:

People have argued about the negative effect of technology on the environment. A group of people think that rather than following the development of technology, we should have a simpler way of life. However, others disagree as they believe that technology could address environmental issues.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that the rapid development of technology has caused some environmental problems. Many inventions are beneficial for human beings, but they have a catastrophic effect on the environment. For example, the invention of cars that use fossil fuel has caused some serious effects on the world. The cars produce carbon monoxide, which is not only dangerous for living creatures, but it also becomes the main cause of global warming. Therefore, some people believe that we should change our lifestyle into a simpler one. One of the ways is by using friendly environmental transportation such as using a bicycle to commute. The bicycle is not only safe for the environment, but it could also be used as a way of exercise.

On the other hand, other people believe that technology could be used as a way to resolve environmental problems. As we can see that one of the biggest threats to the earth’s civilisation is the usage of the plastic bag. The waste of plastic bags has become a big issue, as they could only be composed for about 100 years. However, with the new technology, scientists have found a new way of producing plastic bags. With the new formula, plastic bags could be recycled; therefore, it would resolve one of the environmental issues.

In my opinion, I do believe that technology is beneficial for human beings if we use it wisely and proportionately. I personally believe that research for new technology should be continued, as we need to have improvements in life, but the government should review and monitor this research properly.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Whether students should be allowed to criticize and give recommendations to their teachers has been a hotly debated topic. While some people argue that this means a loss of respect and order in a classroom, I support the view that this development could lead to a better educational experience.

On the one hand, two-way feedback between teachers and learners could possibly result in a lack of regard and discipline. First and foremost, most students lack emotional maturity and thorough understanding of the world’s workings to give constructive comments. In case a student is impulsive and immature, he could sabotage the teacher’s reputation by giving unjust criticisms should he be hostile towards the teacher for giving him bad marks or reprimanding him. Moreover, as each student holds different opinions, it would be difficult for the teacher to come to a unified conclusion as to what he should improve on. This could lead to confusion and strenuity for educators who are trying to establish themselves as better teachers.

On the other hand, I agree that empowering students with the ability to assess their educators could lead to the betterment of education. To start with, the core of education is to serve students and equip them with more knowledge, thus, understanding their insight and needs are critical to being a successful educator. Through learners’ responses, teachers could refine their methods and make adjustments to their lesson plans to better suit their students, resulting in more educated and motivated learners. Furthermore, this development could help teachers to hone their pedagogical skills. As teachers are forced to alter their teaching methods, they will encounter more innovative approaches and become more flexible in dealing with special cases in the classroom.

To conclude, while it is a fact that disrespect and a loss of order could ensue from equipping learners with the power to judge their teachers, the notion’s advantages such as gaining better understanding and innovation have overshadowed the disadvantages.

Sample 2:

In recent decades, the question of whether high school students should be free to evaluate and criticise their educators has evolved into a major topic of concern. While some people think that disrespect and indiscipline are an unavoidable outcome of this approach, there are stronger reasons why it would result in increased educational quality.

On the one hand, there is a common belief that enabling students to judge teachers may undermine students’ sense of respect and discipline. This is primarily because some high school students are generally immature and inexperienced. Therefore, some of them tend to lose their temper and overreact each time they are disciplined by teachers. The problem can be further exacerbated when all the students see their peers criticising the teachers. They may think of such action as the right way to behave and start to imitate it. The respect for teachers may therefore be lost, which means the classroom learning environment may be detrimentally affected.

On the other hand, there is strong evidence that giving students total freedom in expressing their thoughts and feelings towards teachers may enhance educational quality. To explain, many countries are promoting student-centered teaching with two-way communication where open discussions between teachers and students are encouraged on any topic, including teaching methodology and the effectiveness of the teaching programmes. This approach has the substantial advantage of making students become proactive in studying and providing teachers with a chance to better their pedagogical skills by receiving feedback from students. In this way, both the learners and the educators can achieve higher academically.

In conclusion, the educational method of encouraging high school students to judge their teachers is likely to lead to enhanced academic achievements, despite the possibility that some classes may experience some initial instability in the form of disrespect or lack of discipline. It is recommended that schools should adopt this approach so that education quality can be improved.

Sample 3:

People have different views on whether high school students should be allowed to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Although this could be perceived as being disrespectful, I believe constructive feedback from students could do wonders for our education system.

On the one hand, proponents of the idea that students should not be allowed to make comments regarding their teachers claim that this can result in disrespect and lead to poorly behaved students. It is common knowledge that students should look up to their teachers and obey all of their instructions. Having a student, who is impulsive and inexperienced, criticizing a professional teacher is not appropriate in many cultures. In addition, even the majority of high school students are usually not mature enough to make objective judgments. Their feedback might end up being personal criticism, which contributes nothing to the improvement of the quality of education.

 On the other hand, many people, including myself, believe that it is beneficial for both students and teachers if there is an open environment where students can freely express their opinions, including their thoughts about their teachers. This two-way communication allows students to actively think about the lessons, and specifically what they want their teachers to improve. Moreover, thanks to student feedback, teachers might recognise their own weaknesses and find ways to make adjustments to their pedagogical skills. Consequently, their lessons are likely to become more interesting as it suits both parties, which might result in a better learning outcome.

 In conclusion, students might not be the best people to comment on their teachers. However, I strongly believe that encouraging students to provide relevant feedback about their teacher’s teaching methods is advantageous for the education system.

Sample 4:

In almost every educational system, finding strategies to increase educational quality is a major priority. High school students are encouraged to express their thoughts about teachers in some cultures, while others believe that this might lead to a lack of respect and discipline in the classroom. Both points of view will be carefully examined throughout this essay before a sensible verdict is reached.

On the one hand, it is true that student input can aid in the enhancement of educational quality. In many circumstances, the level of comprehension of pupils is highly dependent on the manner teachers perform the class, rather than the content of the lesson. If the class is slow, for example, it will be ineffective for professors to teach too quickly, causing the majority of students to forget what they have learned. Without student feedback, it would be difficult to determine whether the lesson pace is adequate for the class, which could compromise the session’s quality.

Allowing students to submit comments and criticisms about their teachers, however, has significant disadvantages. For starters, teachers are susceptible to students’ unfavorable remarks. Many would believe that praise, rather than criticism or any other type of feedback, is due to their efforts in presenting the lesson. This is a popular belief among teachers in many Asian countries’ educational systems. Furthermore, due to a large number of comments, the classroom may become chaotic. Students’ opinions differ, and it would be impractical for teachers to devise a teaching method that would satisfy all of them.

In conclusion, encouraging high school students to make comments about their professors, despite being appealing in theory, does not appear to me to imply an enhancement in educational quality.

Sample 5:

Despite educators’ willingness to better themselves, they are not necessarily happy with all forms of feedback. In particular, they often have mixed feelings about having their students evaluate them. Is this concern justified?

Some people believe that learners are not the best candidates for giving constructive criticism, and I can understand their point of view. The primary reason, according to some educators, is that when teenagers are aware of their ability to influence their teacher and the change in power dynamics, they are likely tempted to challenge the preset classroom rules, in effect undermining the authority of the teacher in change. Another concern is some students, especially those who regard disciplinary actions or low grades they have previously received as unfair, are said to make use of this opportunity to vent on a personal level. However, these claims are unjustified, as they assume that students work against the best intentions of educators, which is simply not the case for most high schoolers.

Others, however, argue that student feedback is essential for continuous professional development, a position that I can readily side with. The main reason is that students, as the primary audience of teaching, possess the most intimate knowledge of their daily experiences under a teacher's guidance. Their feedback is therefore less likely to be skewed compared with reports produced by directors of studies who only sit in on a class or two over a semester. Being asked to provide feedback on a regular basis is also good for students, because it helps them feel more fully engaged in their education. Those who feel their opinion matters are far more likely to have a personal stake in the educational process, so their learning outcomes are unsurprisingly better than those of under-appreciated students.

In conclusion, although teachers may hesitate to grant their students the power to evaluate their teaching, doing so can offer excellent insights into the effectiveness of their work. When this is done regularly, the quality of the educational experience is sure to improve for both the teacher and the students.

Sample 6:

Some today contend that high school students should have greater latitude to critique and question their teachers, despite the risks this presents for classroom management. I am strongly in agreement as this enables the ideal classroom environment.

Critics of this shift in mentality point out that the teacher position requires respect. A teacher who is consistently being interrupted by students will not be able to lecture and assign and mark homework well. Many students might exploit a rule that encourages questions in order to intentionally derail lessons and undermine the teacher. There is also the possibility that the negative attitude of some students will create general unrest that is not conducive to learning. However, I would argue that the appearance of respect, when in reality most students question their teachers in private, holds little actual value beyond preserving unwarranted pride.

Moreover, the free discussion of ideas is essential to the best learning. Students who are sitting quietly and feigning interest in class are likely to become less motivated. On the other hand, if a class is studying a work of literature or an event in history, students will engage more fully in lessons given the opportunity to ask questions. By asking questions, even if these queries are loosely defined as criticisms of what is being taught, they will suddenly have a reason to learn and the lesson will become more memorable for all students. The questions might also lead the class to novel insights as long as the teacher is confident enough to embark on collaborative explorations.

In conclusion, although certain educational institutions fear that questions may undermine teachers, they in fact are the foundation of a positive learning environment. Schools should embrace academic rigor in all its forms.

Sample 7:

Excellent education is now difficult to find in modern society. There is an ongoing argument about whether it is advantageous for students to assess and criticise their classroom instructors. There will be a deeper investigation of both the opinions and my own opinion.

Understanding the formal viewpoint, it was believed that allowing students to rank and criticise their professors would improve education. If students have the authority to give remarks and question their professors, then teachers will develop their teaching techniques and will try to teach students by applying easy and effective techniques. To cite an example, an article in a local newspaper proved that, since students criticise and review teachers, they not only started to recognize their mistakes but also improve them. Thus, remarking is beneficial for both of them in the learning process.

In contrast, other supporters who assess and criticise their professors would lead to a significant drop in discipline and esteem. Although it depends on the conduct of the students, the majority of instructors dislike getting criticisms and comments about themselves; as a result, it has a negative impact on their respect and the classroom atmosphere. For example, a teacher refuses to instruct in the classroom since the students were misbehaving and making irrelevant remarks. Consequently, the behaviour of the students affects their learning itself.

To conclude and express my opinion, allowing students to give reviews and criticise their professors is a great way to improve educational quality; but it should be acceptable to a limited extent as their behaviour does not affect teachers' respect.

Sample 8:

In recent times, finding methods to enhance instructional content is often one of the top concerns of any education system. In certain countries, high school students are encouraged to comment on their professors; while others think that this might lead to a lack of respect and classroom discipline. The viewpoints and my opinion will be addressed further.

On the one hand, it is true that allowing students to critique and assess their professors will increase the quality of education. In many instances, the amount of comprehension of a student relies more on the manner in which the instructor conducts the study than on the study materials themselves. To cite an example, it would be impossible for professors to evaluate if their technique of instruction is correct or incorrect if they did not get feedback from the students who are having difficulty with it.

On the other hand, there are several downsides to commenting on and criticising their lecturers. For instance, teachers are prone to offensive remarks from pupils; as a result, teachers believe that they are exerting effort in the classroom and deserve respect and admiration from their pupils instead of critique. For example, in the school systems of many Asian countries, instructors often hold this viewpoint. Apart from this, the classroom may be in disarray as a result of the many remarks; however, without feedback, it would be hard for instructors to satisfy their students, who have varied perspectives.

To conclude and to offer my position, the education system is not necessarily improved by inviting high school pupils to remark on their instructors.

Sample 9:

Finding techniques to improve instructional material has been one of the most important problems of education systems in recent years. In certain nations, high school students are urged to remark on their teachers, while others believe that this might result in a lack of regard and classroom discipline. The viewpoints and my opinions will be examined in further depth.

Discussing the formal standpoint, it is advantageous for the overall quality of the educational experience if students are allowed to talk and express their opinions. In addition, it will aid educators in enhancing the strategies and resources they employ to educate. For instance, if teachers gather student comments, they will be able to identify their errors and design more effective teaching tactics. Therefore, for the betterment of the education quality, encouraging students to provide feedback is not only good for professors but also helpful for the students themselves.

However, this argument has a negative influence on the classroom's discipline and the instructors' respect. Since some students' unappreciated behaviour affects the environment of the classroom and their inappropriate comments, lead to difficulties for their teachers. The findings of the survey indicated that at least one instructor has been terminated as a direct consequence of a student's inappropriate comment. Therefore, it is immoral for students to make remarks and assertions while behaving improperly.

In conclusion and offering my position, although classroom environment and discipline is important, permitting students to provide feedback is essential for enhancing the quality of education; however, they must do it in an acceptable way and conduct.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?

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Sample 1:

An increasing number of individuals these days decide to delay childbirth. This is primarily because they want to devote more time to their career and personal life, and I believe this trend results in a more developed society and happier family life overall.

Those who decide to have children later in life normally point out a desire to prioritize their career and personal life. For one, those who are at the early stages of their career often struggle to support themselves and their family. Individuals in entry-level positions may have to undertake extra tasks, work overtime, while also receiving low pay. Once they start a family, they are likely to be under undue strain as they need to incur various expenses relating to day care, baby supplies, and their children’s school fees later on. Similarly, young parents also may find it hard to enjoy their personal life. For example, the burden of taking care of an infant may prevent a young couple from travelling, moving to a better city, or switching careers. Therefore, it is reasonable for young people to postpone parenthood.

Having children later is positive overall for society and family life. Regarding society, parents with financial flexibility can better provide for their children. For instance, these children are likely to possess greater chances of attending quality schools and learning extracurriculars such as how to play a musical instrument or speak a foreign language. As a result, these children are considerably more likely to be better educated and more well-rounded individuals, potentially improving the quality of the future workforce. Delayed childbirth also can result in happier family life. Parents who are firmly established in their careers are likely to devote more time to caring for their children without worrying about financial decisions or having regular quarrels about money matters with their significant other.

In conclusion, the reasons why individuals delay childbirth are mainly occupational and personal, and I believe this shift is a positive development due to the beneficial impact on society and family life. This trend is already prevalent in many wealthy nations and should now be encouraged in less developed countries as well.

Sample 2:

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals are opting to have children later in life. This shift in family planning can be attributed to various socio-economic and personal factors. While this trend offers numerous advantages, it also presents certain challenges that warrant consideration. In my opinion, this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.

One of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood is the pursuit of higher education and career advancement. In today’s competitive job market, many individuals, particularly women, prioritise establishing their careers and achieving financial stability before starting a family. For example, a woman who completes her postgraduate studies and establishes herself in a professional role by her early thirties may feel more equipped to provide a stable environment for her children. Additionally, societal shifts towards gender equality have empowered women to make informed choices about their reproductive health, further contributing to this trend.

There are some disadvantages of this trend. Biological challenges associated with delayed childbearing, such as decreased fertility and increased risk of complications, cannot be overlooked. Additionally, older parents may face generational gaps with their children, potentially impacting their ability to relate and engage with them effectively.

However, the advantages of this trend are considerable. Delayed parenthood often results in children being born into more financially secure and emotionally mature families. Parents who have achieved their personal and professional aspirations are likely to provide a nurturing environment, enriched with resources and stability. For instance, older parents may have accumulated savings and have a clearer sense of their life goals, which can translate into better opportunities for their children.

In conclusion, while the trend of having children later in life is driven by valid socio-economic and personal reasons, and offers substantial benefits, it is not without its drawbacks. On balance, the advantages, such as increased financial stability and emotional maturity, tend to outweigh the disadvantages, provided that individuals make informed and well-supported reproductive choices.

Sample 3:

These days, an increasing number of married couples delay their parenthood. The career-oriented mentality is the root cause of this current trend, and I believe it is a negative development because it leads to decreased fertility and health issues.

Today, many individuals become very passionate about their higher studies and career development. They devote their twenties and thirties to achieving advanced degrees and distinguished careers. That is to say, young married couples are passionately engaging in their higher study and careers to ensure their career growth. For example, a career-oriented couple may prioritize their career dedicating time and energy to create a niche for themselves in their chosen profession. Once they manage to carve out a niche for themselves, then they may feel they are ready for parenthood in their late thirties or early forties.

However, delayed parenthood is associated with reduced fertility and increased health issues. In advanced maternal age, women’s ovarian reserve decreases, causing a decline in the quality and number of eggs available for fertilization. Consequently, women may face enormous challenges to conceive naturally and other increased health problems. For instance, a recent study finds that women in their late thirties and forties may face a greater likelihood of infertility, miscarriage, and gestational diabetes compared to their counterparts. Similarly, the adverse impacts of age also occur in men. From the age of forty, research finds that the rate of DNA fragmentation is higher which can cause genetic abnormalities in children. For these reasons, I think delayed parenthood is a negative development.

In conclusion, the reason behind late parenthood is that individuals are enthusiastically engaging in higher study and professional development. However, I feel that decreased fertility and other health problems associated with delayed parenthood are more significant downsides than some minor benefits that it may offer.

Sample 4:

These days many couples decide to have babies at least a few years after their marriage and they are in their early thirties when they become parents for the first time. I believe career, social changes, and escalating living expenses are some of the major reasons behind this trend. In my belief, the advantages of having children later in life outweigh its demerits.

To commence with, a growing number of people, including women, are now serious about their career development. This is perhaps the primary reason they do not expect to have children in the early stage of their marriage. It is intuitively obvious that with huge competition, unemployment and economic crisis, people around the world are constantly worried about their careers and salaries. As a result, many decide to postpone their first childbirth. Secondly, women's empowerment and social changes have altered the old way of life where a woman's sole responsibility was to look after the children. Since many wives are working these days, they decide to have babies after they reach a certain position in their career. Furthermore, social beliefs regarding giving birth to children have changed dramatically, and people are more concerned about living expenses than the number of babies they have, unlike in the past.

Undeniably, people who choose to concentrate on their careers first and then have babies can take better care of their children due to better careers and economic freedom. Having offspring early in life can escalate the expenditures and financial responsibilities of parents. Moreover, if they do not spend enough time with children, they grow up with psychological issues. Thus, by having early children, young parents might put their careers at risk as well as the future of their children. Reversely, having offspring in early life has few advantages. Such parents have new members in their family, and their isolation would be extirpated, and they will become more family-oriented.

In conclusion, despite the pleasure of having a new baby in the early years of marriage, parents who decide to have babies later can focus on their career, fulfil financial goals and have sufficient time to spend with the family.

Sample 5:

With paradigm shifts in social beliefs and people's fascination with careers, they tend to become parents at a later stage. Several reasons are responsible for this, and I believe that it has more negative consequences.

To begin with, the average year when people get married those days has increased significantly. As a result, childbirth is naturally delayed. According to a recent survey, many young people who start their careers after their university graduation are more focused on their jobs than having their own family. Besides, many young people are undecided whether to marry or not. Eventually, when they get married, many of them are already in their mid-thirties, and they take some time to settle and have some financial stability before having their first child. Furthermore, the old belief that a girl should manage a family and have children earlier has changed, and more wives work in offices than ever. The decline of the joint family has also contributed to this trend as couples solely decide to have a baby, unlike in the past.

If we notice the severe detrimental impacts this trend has, we will surely try to reverse it. The most cynical outcome of this trend is the number of couples who struggle to become parents. It is scientifically proven that the infertility rate among couples is higher who try to become pregnant after their mid-thirties. Some couples eventually break up their marriages due to this, and it brings unfathomable social problems. Furthermore, having a child in the early years of marriage makes the couple more family-oriented and this eventually helps them have a better future.

To conclude, late marriage, nuclear family structure, and more focus on jobs are the main reasons people become parents at a later stage in their lives. I think this trend has more adverse results than positive outcomes. So, it is expected that married people would carefully consider different negative and positive aspects of having babies later in their lives.

Sample 6:

It is evident that many couples choose to delay having children. This trend can be attributed to the growing financial pressure and the desire of prospective parents to fully prepare for the role; however, I consider this change to be completely disadvantageous given its effects on people’s health and family relationship.

To commence with, there are two primary factors contributing to delayed childbirth. Chief of these is the increasing financial responsibilities of upbringing a child. It is evident from the ascending inflation rate and price hikes in accommodation, nourishment, medical care and clothes for babies. That explains why young couples prioritise saving and establishing a stable source of income before embarking on parenthood. The second reason is the fact that being a good parent can be a daunting task for today’s youngsters. Effective parenting requires competent caregiving skills and a profound understanding of a child’s behaviour and characteristics which modern-day young people are generally short of. This shortage causes some to delay having children until they feel adequately ready to assume such a crucial role.

From my perspective, this trend is negative to both individuals’ well-being and familial connection. Regarding the former, postponing parenthood puts babies and their mothers’ health at risk. It is scientifically proven that women who conceive later in life, especially at the age of 35 and beyond, face an increased likelihood of miscarriage or complications during labour, while newborn babies are more likely to suffer from innate health problems such as down syndrome. Concerning the latter, delayed childbirth gives a rise to the age gap between children and their parents. This age disparity can, in turn, result in challenges in understanding one another, leading to a wider generation gap and potential familial conflicts that can strain relationships.

In conclusion, the fact that couples are having children at a later stage can be explained by the heightened monetary burdens as well as the need for more adequate parenting preparation, and in my opinion, this is a negative development considering the consequences on the overall well-being and family bond. That is why governments should provide incentive programs to encourage the young to start a family and have children at an earlier age.

Sample 7:

The decision to have children at a later age is becoming increasingly popular in modern society. While this trend can be explained by a combination of factors, the disadvantages of having children later in life likely outweigh the disadvantages.

It is necessary to first examine the causes of this phenomenon. Among them, increased availability of contraception can be cited as a prominent reason. Thanks to advances in medicine, women can afford to delay childbirth via pills or medical procedures, such as egg freezing. Additionally, many adults these days tend to place a larger emphasis on career development than they do reproduction. Fields such as finance, technological research and healthcare can be rather dynamic, requiring a significant investment of time. Consequently, there is no doubt that an individualistic focus on one’s profession takes time away from both males and females. These reasons prove that having children at an older age is a decision based on both circumstance and preference.

Positive and negative impacts are equally likely to occur as a result of this decision. One of the main advantages is that children can grow up in financially secure households. This provides children with a better quality of life, as parents can accommodate them with more resources and opportunities. However, older parents may struggle to keep up with their children. For parents whose age gap with their children is significant, their level of energy and enthusiasm might not be the same as younger parents’. This would translate to less physical and emotional support that a child can expect to receive than if they were born to young parents. Taking these points into consideration, it could be seen that this development possesses more drawbacks than it does advantages.

In conclusion, despite the reasons and benefits to support this decision by parents, it is usually more disadvantageous to give birth at a later age. Although the time to have children is based on individual circumstance and preference, it should not come too late.

Sample 8:

The choice to have children at a later age is gaining popularity in contemporary society. While various factors contribute to this trend, the drawbacks of delayed parenthood likely outweigh the advantages.

It is necessary to first examine the causes of this phenomenon. Notably, medical advancements, such as contraceptive pills and procedures like egg freezing, enable women to postpone childbirth. Moreover, many adults today prioritize career advancement over starting a family. Fields such as finance, technology, and healthcare demand substantial time investments, diverting attention from parenthood. These factors demonstrate that the decision to have children later in life is influenced by both circumstances and personal preferences.

Positive and negative impacts are equally likely to occur as a result of this decision. On the advantage side, children born to older parents often enjoy financial stability. This translates into a higher quality of life, as parents can provide them with greater resources and opportunities. However, older parents may struggle to keep up with the energy levels and enthusiasm of their children. When there is a significant age gap between parents and children, the physical and emotional support that younger parents typically offer may be diminished. Considering these factors, it becomes apparent that the disadvantages of delayed parenthood outweigh the advantages.

In conclusion, despite the reasons and benefits that support the decision to have children at a later age, it generally leads to more disadvantages. While the timing of parenthood is a personal choice influenced by individual circumstances and preferences, it should not be postponed indefinitely.

Sample 9:

In this modern era, the majority of couples prefer to have children in their later years of life. This essay intends to analyze the reasons behind this development. While there are several advantages associated with this trend, the disadvantages are far more.

To begin with, there are two main benefits of conceiving babies in later life. The prime advantage is that people can enjoy their life more with each other and can be able to know about one another. In this way, their mutual understandings become stronger, and they enjoy the time they spend with their young ones.

Securing the future is another significant reason. Individuals, at first, want to be financially secure in order to fulfill the desires of their families. It consumes a lot of time to get a job in this hyper competitive era. That is why they delayed having infants. Moreover, after becoming self-dependent, both genders can give a bright future to their children. For example, parents would be capable of enrolling their children in schools where they get good quality education and learn other skills meanwhile, which are not available in all schools.

However, the drawbacks cannot be underestimated. The main problem caused by giving birth later is related to the fertility of both genders. After a certain age, sometimes their fertility rate starts decreasing, due to which they face difficulties in conceiving babies, and pregnant women require special care. Not only this, many females are prone to death because of their lack of physical ability to give birth to a child. Also, a study shows that children who are born in later years are often born with some abnormalities, either in terms of physical or mental. As a result, they face problems to survive in this world.

In conclusion, although there are various merits of giving birth to a child, a single disadvantage is more dangerous for both mother and child as they are sometimes prone to death.

Sample 10:

Planning to have a baby is the most precious part of a married couple’s life. Nowadays, a number of people are giving preference to having children later after marriage. I believe that this trend has more advantages than loopholes.

To begin with, the main reason for this trend is that most people are working nowadays, they want to achieve all the luxurious facilities in their life and the same they want to give to their children in future. Moreover, a couple invests their entire budget to secure their parents and dependents for a better future. There are several advantages to it; firstly, they can give enough financial support to their children for future study. Secondly, they can deposit some amount for their older age. For example, in the early part of his existence, a person must spend most of the money on developing his own personality and other characteristics in order to be an incredible parent and son.

On the other hand, complications in pregnancy due to health issues, elaborate, humans can lose the opportunity to be fathers and mothers because of deciding to reproduce later. For example, research by doctors has published that due to our current lifestyle and increasing age, there are more chances of getting infertile. Furthermore, people are also losing sexual desire as age increases, which can also lead to infertility.

In conclusion, while there are legitimate concerns about infertility and health complications associated with delaying parenthood, the advantages - such as financial stability and the ability to invest in personal growth - outweigh these drawbacks. Furthermore, with the rapid advancements in reproductive technology, couples have more options than ever to achieve their dream of parenthood.

Sample 11:

In recent times, it is said that more people decide to have more children at an older age. This essay will discuss the reason why this is prevalent and also state some merits and demerits associated with it. The essay will be concluded by stating whether the advantages surpass the disadvantages or not.

To begin with, having children is a decision that couples should look into before concluding to have one either at the early stages of their lives or at a later stage. I believe the major reason more people make up their minds to have children later in life is for companionship. The fear of being alone after one’s spouse is dead has made people reconsider having kids at a much older age. Since children are a lifelong investment and will mostly be there for you, especially when you need someone to talk to and take care of you when you are well stricken in age prompts them to make this decision. For example, most people without children are mostly sent to adult homes when they get old. On the other hand, people with children are mostly looked after by their kids in old age.

Furthermore, the demerit of having a child at a later point in life can be devastating. Some people only decide to have kids due to societal pressure or peer pressure. Our society today sees couples without children as incapable, and there is this stigma on them that either of the couple has fertility issues or the wife is barren, whereas it was a decision not to have kids. Consequently, they may be forced to have kids they do not want, and this leads to maltreatment, abandonment, and lack of love for the child. Also, taking care of a child requires a lot of effort, and having advanced in age before having one does not help since the strength and agility of the couples would have diminished.

Conclusively, though having children is a blessing, I believe having them later in life might be a curse since the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

Sample 12:

There is a growing proportion of the world’s population who decide to have children later in life. The underlying reasons for this trend are varied, and I suppose that the merits would eclipse the downsides.

There are two main factors leading to the decision of delaying childbirth. The first one is because people have the propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles. Especially in the US and other developed countries, not only men but also women want to stabilize their finance before becoming parents so as to provide their kids with sufficient living condition for their future development. Another explanation for this is that many modern individuals have adopted a fear of taking unwanted custody due to the recent alarming rate of divorce. It is because premature marriages have become common, which usually goes with many couples’ doubt of their marital harmony, deterring their early desire for raising a child. There would be, consequently, fewer kids growing up without fatherhood or motherhood.

However, the drawbacks should not be overlooked. That too many couples following such a trend might exert adverse effects on the population structure, which potentially results in the future aging workforce and hinders social development in the long term. Additionally, it could both heighten the possibility of infertility among mothers at their old age and risk the new-born babies’ mental and physical health. Down Syndrome could be a typical example of the problems that those kids might have to suffer from.

In conclusion, the occupational prioritization and the hesitation over the likelihood of single-parent responsibility could be seen as the root of late childbirth, and I am convinced that the advantages are of more significance.

Sample 13:

Having babies later in life is regarded as a new mode of marriage, especially in these days when soon becoming adolescent parents might face plenty of troubles. It is easily seen that financial burden is one of the reasons why many spouses tend to delay their childbirth because giving birth early forces them to tighten budget. In this essay, I will lend more other detailed causes and efects to this trend.

The fact that pregnancy has been more common in older women stems from late–life marriage whose benefits are huge. Tying the knot early, in some cases, would cause constant quarrels about the rights of child-rearing between young couples due to their immature thoughts on marital values. In contrast, delayed marriage may secure better conditions for children’s future. This would help singles have more time to seek a financially stable job and broaden behavioral experience before deciding to live with someone forever. Besides, high remarriage rate led by the rise of divorce in recent years partly contributes to late childbirth. The reason is that the lack of compatibility forces many couples to end their first love and marry again. Therefore, they may start having children after age 35.

As mentioned above, the benefits of late childbirth are undeniable, however, elderly parents, as well as society also face up to threats that they can foresee. Indeed, raising kids at old age is more arduous than that at young age, not only because their health will decline but also because their children are too little to self-image. Moreover, having children when reaching over 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health. As a result, babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death.

In conclusion, stable income and settled life make delayed marriage more appealing. The thing is we need to consider the pros and cons of this to decide what is right for a happy union.

Sample 14:

In recent years, the decision of parents to start a family later in life has become an increasingly popular trend. There are a number of reasons for this, and the trend has a significant impact on both family life and on the community as a whole.

There are two important reasons why more people nowadays are deciding against having children when they are young. Firstly, rather than embarking on parenthood, many individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top priority. If they had to split their time between working and bringing up their offspring when they were at the early stage of their careers, their performance at work and promotion prospects would be prejudiced. Secondly, delaying childbirth could give young people countless opportunities to enjoy their lives. For example, this choice may let young couples have a richer social life, pursue their interests and hobbies or even travel the world.

However, this tendency could have negative effects in terms of both family life and society. An important effect for a family is that raising children could be a huge challenge for older parents. Even though they have high socioeconomic status, as well as great experience and knowledge, it is not easy for them to communicate with and relate to their children, due to the generation gap. Another impact is that getting pregnant after 35 years of age carries more potential health risks. Specifically, this could increase the danger of miscarriage for older mothers and stillbirth, while babies could be at greater risk of having Down’s syndrome. Consequently, this could negatively affect the quality of the workforce in times to come.

In conclusion, there are a number of evident reasons for the trend in which people prefer giving birth late. As a result, this could negatively influence each family and all the society.

Sample 15:

In this day and age, the decision of parents to delay childbirth until later in their life has become a growing trend. A host of factors may contribute to this tendency, and I would contend that the merits this development entails outweigh its drawbacks.

There are some major compelling reasons why some young couples are deciding against embarking on early parenthood. Firstly, as people often desire to invest their time and effort in landing a well-paid job and climbing a high ladder in their career, having a child early can be an obstacle preventing them from achieving such career goals. Specifically, if they have to split their time equally between working and rearing children in the early stages of their careers, their work performance and promotion prospects may be negatively affected. Another reason causing the delay of early pregnancy is that some young couples also hold the belief that if they have children early, they cannot enjoy a rich social life and have no spare time to spend on their leisure pursuits.

It is justifiable why many people are convinced that it brings about more drawbacks than benefits. Firstly, it is widely believed that late childbirth oftentimes carries some potential health risks for both babies and old mothers. Particularly, getting pregnant after more than 35 years of age may increase the danger of having a miscarriage or stillbirth for older mothers, and even if the child is born, he or she is likely to suffer from Down Syndrome. As a result, this can adversely affect the quality of the future workforce. Another disadvantage of postponed parenthood is that raising children is considered a huge challenge for old parents. Specifically, even when they have a high socioeconomic status, they will still have difficulty communicating and relating to their offspring due to a big generation gap. This proves one of the main contributors to conflicts between parents and their children and further the distance among family members.

However, I still believe that the demerits of this trend surpass the advantageous effects of this tendency. Firstly, despite the potential health risks of late baby carriage that a mother may suffer, nowadays, thanks to recent leaps in the medical field, such health problems can be mitigated. Furthermore, when parents spend more time stabilizing their careers and their financial statuses, they can ensure a better life quality for their children. Another benefit of having infants later in life is that older parents can accumulate more life experience they gain through their early age. These hands-on experiences can assist them in bettering their parenting skills. This can even enable them to establish more effective communication with their children, contributing to alleviating the disadvantageous impacts of a potential generation gap.

In conclusion, I would contend that parents' desire to fulfill their career aspirations and enjoy a comfortable life without the responsibility of early childrearing are the driving factors behind the trend of delayed childbirth. Moreover, I believe that the merits of this development overshadow the downside.

Sample 16:

In the past, it was a natural step that a couple would get married fairly young, and then start a family. However, this is no longer the case, and the delay of childbirth is becoming very common. This essay will consider the reasons for this trend and the possible effects on families and society.

The driving force behind this trend is changing employment patterns. As more women have pursued an education and entered the workforce, they tend to marry later and have children later in their life. This is unavoidable in many cases because women cannot combine family and work well due to costly childcare. Another factor is all the other opportunities available to everyone. For example, many men and women choose to travel around the world or take the chance to work in another country, thus delaying settling down.

There are a number of possible impacts on families and society. Firstly, with regards to families, it can be more difficult for older women to get pregnant, and they may experience more health problems, such as a miscarriage, high blood pressure or diabetes, during pregnancy. Also, the parents may find the whole experience of bringing up children more tiring if they are older. In one respect it may be positive for society because if people are choosing to work for longer, a country will have a productive workforce. On the negative side though, in the long-term falling fertility rates will mean an aging population with a lack of young people to work and take care of the elderly.

In conclusion, there are several reasons that people are having children later in life, and this can have a number of impacts, both positive and negative. Given the fact that society continues to change, this trend is likely to continue well into the future.

Sample 17:

In modern society, there has been a major concern that many couples have delayed parenthood. Some explanations for this social trend will be put forward, before an analysis of its impacts on society and family life is given.

A few reasons can be given to justify the trend of giving birth at later stages of life. First, the labour market is increasingly competitive, and it is a norm that young parents defer having children to devote the whole time in the first years of their employment to lay a sound foundation for their future career. Second, it is believed that children are raised better by older parents. This seems valid due to the fact that older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child.

The trend exerts both advantageous and disadvantageous influence on society and families. On the one hand, children born to more prosperous and experienced parents can receive better and more comprehensive education, and thus contribute more to society when they grow up. In each household, the parents may also reap the benefits of this trend, as their first working years are not interrupted by pregnancy and childcare. On the other hand, when an aged couple decide to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period. If any complicated maternal health problem arises, the life whole family would be turned upside down.

To conclude, the tendency to have children at later ages is caused by a number of factors, such as the competitiveness of the job market for young adults, and both the positive and negative impacts of it can be seen in families and society.

Sample 18:

Many people currently decide not to have babies when they are young and wait until they get older instead. There are some reasons for this tendency, and it could have some impacts on family life as well as society.

To begin with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals want to have children later in their life. Firstly, this choice allows them to have more time to enjoy life when they are young. For instance, it is easier for a young couple to travel when they do not have a baby to nurture. Secondly, people who are at the early stage of their career usually have lower income compared to when they are older. Therefore, many people decide to start raising a family after having accumulated enough money to ensure a better life for their children.

However, this tendency might bring about some negative effects on both family life and society. The first impact is that having children later will cause a significant age gap between two generations. This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring. Additionally, if people give birth when they are too old, the babies being born might be less physically healthy. This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend.

In conclusion, there are some reasons why many people prefer to have children later in their life, and this tendency can result in some negative impacts on both family life and society.

Sample 19:

In recent years, there has been a noticeable shift in the timing of parenthood, with many individuals opting to have children at a later stage in life than in previous generations. This trend is attributed to various factors, and while there are advantages to delaying childbirth, I think there are more significant disadvantages that warrant consideration.

One of the primary reasons for delaying parenthood is the emphasis placed on career advancement and financial stability. The desire to secure a stable foundation for the family’s future drives many couples to delay having children until they feel economically prepared to support a family. Moreover, there has been a cultural shift in attitudes, encouraging individuals to delay marriage and childbirth until they have reached a certain level of maturity and life experience. This societal change underscores the belief that individuals should pursue personal growth and self-discovery before taking on the responsibilities of parenthood.

The advantages of delaying childbirth are evident, particularly in terms of financial stability and preparedness. Couples who delay having children can allocate more time to build stable careers, secure their financial situation, and create a conducive environment for raising a family. This deliberate approach enables parents to offer their children better educational opportunities and a more comfortable standard of living. However, I believe they are overshadowed by disadvantages associated with delaying parenthood. Advanced maternal and paternal age can lead to fertility issues, posing challenges for conception and increasing the risks of pregnancy complications. Additionally, a larger age gap between parents and children might result in a generation gap, potentially affecting communication and understanding between family members.

In conclusion, the decision to delay having children is influenced by various factors, including career priorities and changing societal norms. While the advantages include financial stability and a conducive environment for child-rearing, I think there are more drawbacks related to fertility issues and generation gaps.

Sample 20:

An increasing number of young couples today tend to delay childbirth. This essay discusses possible reasons for this and why the merits outweigh the drawbacks.

There are some reasons why many people decide to postpone parenthood. The main reason is that women nowadays lay more emphasis on their career than housewifely duties compared to those in the past. Also, many jobs today require them to be available around the clock, so it is really tough for modern women to balance work and family. Another reason might be that the increasing cost of living is adding to young couples’ hesitation in starting a family. If they have children at an early stage of marriage, they are quickly under immense pressure to earn enough money to cover both living expenses and childcare.

I believe that the merits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks. The first merit is that postponing childbearing can help people focus more on their job in order to climb the career ladder and earn a higher income. As a result, they can achieve financial security and thereby have a good preparation for bringing up their children in the future. Another advantage might be that deciding to delay parenthood also provides couples with more time to enjoy life with each other, thereby strengthening their relationship and contributing to a life-long marriage. For example, my parents spent a lot of time travelling before giving birth to me. This activity has helped them understand each other more and manage to build a strong family bond. However, the longer delaying childbirth is, the higher health risk women may face. For example, getting pregnant after 35 years of age may increase the risk of miscarriage or premature birth.

In conclusion, the emphasis of women on their career and the increasing cost of living are the two main reasons resulting in the delay in giving birth. I believe that the merits of being able to focus on working and enjoying life outweigh the drawbacks of health risks suffered by women who delay pregnancy.

Sample 21:

Nowadays, an increasing number of couples choose to have their first child in their later life. This trend can be attributed to several reasons. In this essay, I will discuss these reasons and evaluate whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

One of the primary reasons why people decide to have their first child at a later age is financial stability. Adults have the opportunity to accumulate financial resources and ensure their economic well-being before starting a family. By establishing a solid financial foundation, they can provide a better quality of life for their children. For instance, they can afford quality education, healthcare, and other essential needs.

Another factor contributing to the decision to have a first child in later life is emotional readiness. Older individuals tend to have greater emotional maturity and experience, which enables them to provide better care and support for their children. They have had more time to understand themselves and their needs, allowing them to be more patient, understanding, and nurturing parents with a deeper understanding of their child’s emotional needs.

Furthermore, older parents often possess a higher level of maturity and life experience. They are better equipped to face the challenges that come with raising children. Their life experiences have taught them valuable lessons and problem-solving skills, which they can apply in their parenting journey. This can result in a more stable and nurturing environment for the child’s growth and development.

Despite these advantages, there are some disadvantages to consider. One major concern is the potential health and physical risks associated with later pregnancies. Older parents may face higher risks of complications during pregnancy and childbirth. Additionally, the age gap between parents and children can create a generation gap, leading to potential difficulties in relating to each other and establishing a strong parent-child bond.

In conclusion, while there are some drawbacks, the advantages of having a first child in later life outweigh the disadvantages. Financial stability, emotional readiness, and the maturity and experience of older parents contribute to a nurturing and supportive environment for the child’s upbringing. However, it is essential for individuals to carefully consider the potential health risks and potential difficulties in bridging the generation gap. Ultimately, the decision should be based on personal circumstances and individual preferences.

Sample 22:

In contemporary society, a growing number of individuals in certain countries are opting to have their first child at a later stage in life. This can be attributed to a host of reasons, and I am convinced that the advantages of this development pale in comparison with its disadvantages.

There are a number of explanations for the increasing popularity of delayed parenthood in this day and age. Firstly, in today’s fast-paced and competitive world, individuals often prioritize establishing themselves professionally and achieving financial stability before starting a family. They may want to advance their careers, build a solid foundation, or pursue educational opportunities. Additionally, societal expectations have shifted, with more emphasis placed on personal fulfillment and self-actualization. As a result, individuals feel compelled to delay parenthood to ensure they have accomplished their personal aspirations before taking on the responsibilities of raising a child.

In my opinion, the trend towards deferred childbearing does more harm than good. While such a decision allows individuals to focus on personal and career development, the potential health risks associated with advanced maternal age pose significant concerns. Chief among these is that older mothers face a higher likelihood of fertility issues, complications during pregnancy, and an increased risk of genetic disorders in their children. This is compounded by the fact that the energy and stamina required for raising a child may be compromised in older parents, affecting their ability to provide adequate care. Finally, postponing parenthood would inadvertently create a significant age gap between the two generations, making it difficult for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring, thereby adversely affecting the family bond. Given these potential downsides, I firmly believe that the well-being of both mothers and their children should not take a back seat to one’s personal and professional aspirations.

In conclusion, the choice to have a first child later in life has become increasingly common due to various societal factors, and I am of the opinion that the drawbacks of this trend, such as potential health issues and the challenges in parent-child relationships, are weightier than its benefits.

Sample 23:

Having infants further down the road is viewed as a recent fad of marriage, particularly in running days when before long becoming juvenile guardians may confront a lot of difficulties. It is effectively seen that the monetary weight is one reason why numerous companions will quite often postpone their labor since conceiving an offspring early powers them to fix the spending plan. In this exposition, I will loan more other definite reasons and impacts of this pattern.

To initiate with, a developing number of individuals, including ladies, are currently focused on their vocation advancement. This is maybe the essential explanation they don’t anticipate having youngsters in the beginning phase of their marriage. It is naturally clear that with enormous rivalry, joblessness, and monetary emergency, individuals all over the planet
are continually stressed over their professions and pay. Therefore, many choose to defer their first labor. Furthermore, ladies’ strengthening and social changes have adjusted the prior lifestyle where a lady’s only liability was to care for the kids. Since many spouses are working nowadays, they choose to take infants after they arrive at a specific situation in their vocation.

In any case, old guardians, just as society additionally face dangers that they can anticipate. To be sure, bringing up kids at an advanced age is more difficult than that at a youthful age, on the grounds that their wellbeing will decrease as well as in light of the fact that their children may be too young to be self-sufficient, requiring more care and attention. Additionally, having kids when coming to the north of 35 can influence pregnancy because of maturing wellbeing. Thus, infants are not sufficiently beneficial or even kick the bucket rashly passing.

Taking everything into account, in spite of the delight of having another child in the early long stretches of marriage, guardians who choose to have babies later can zero in on their profession, satisfy monetary objectives, and have an adequate chance to enjoy with the family.

Sample 24:

Having a paradigm change in societal belief and people’s fascination with using a coveted career, they are inclined to become parents in a later period than yesteryear. There are a few notable causes of this, and I believe it has more negative effects.

Because of this, childbirth is delayed. As per a recent poll, many young men and women who begin their careers after their schooling tend to be more focused on their tasks than having their very own household. Finally, if they get married, they are already in their mid-thirties, and they require a while to settle and have monetary stability before getting their first child. What is more, the old belief that a woman ought to be well prepared to handle a household and have kids earlier has shifted, and many more wives operate in offices than ever before.

If we detect the harmful impacts of the tendency have, we will attempt to undo it. The negative outcome of the tendency is that the number of couples trying hard to get parents. It is scientifically demonstrated that couples’ infertility rate is greater who attempt to become pregnant following their mid-thirties. A few of the couples finally split their marriages because of this, which attracts unfathomable social issues. Additionally, having a kid in the first years of marriage creates a few more family-oriented, which finally helps them get a greater future.

In conclusion, late marriage, nuclear family construction, and much more focus on tasks are the key reasons people become parents in a later phase, and this has more negative results on the positive sides.

Sample 25:

There are growing numbers of men and women choosing to have children later in life these days. In my opinion, the financial advantages of this trend far outweigh any perceived downsides.

The most significant tradeoffs of this relate to opportunity and maturity. Many individuals decide early on in their career to wait until their mid to late 30s to have children. The natural risk here is that if the relationship ends before that point or they then have trouble conceiving, they may end up childless. This possibility is lower today due to advances in fertility science but still exists. Furthermore, having children is a maturing experience. If an individual waits until late in life to raise a child, then they delay the experience gained and may later regret their decision. Most parents would openly admit that parenthood is a life-altering milestone and a defining moment of adulthood.

Nonetheless, the disadvantages detailed above pale in comparison to the economic merits of delaying childbirth. Firstly, most young parents are not in an ideal situation in their career. Many working parents earn low salaries and work long hours. Once they have a child that means the majority of their day is occupied and they may feel trapped and overburdened. It is then difficult to switch careers or move to a new location as well as afford all the expenses incumbent on parents. This often results in parents becoming resentful and projecting their animosity towards their children or significant others. In contrast, parents who are firmly established in their careers, earn decent salaries, and have savings set aside have both the time and energy to devote to raising their children well without having to stress about making ends meet.

In conclusion, despite marginal risks concerning the opportunity and experience, it is an overall positive for financial reasons that many prospective parents are putting off childbirth. Therefore, this trend should be welcomed and encouraged.

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Some people prefer to provide help or support directly to the local community. Others prefer to give money to national or international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

Shocking news about charity fraud cases, in recent years, has attracted the ire of the public because their money donation to natural disasters did not reach victims. This is allegedly one of the reasons why some choose to give their financial support directly to the needy, not to any aid organization. From my perspective, even though the fact that some charity groups make use of the generosity of benefactors is undeniable, these organizations are still trustworthy for us to donate money or clothes.

It sounds childlike, but indeed many individuals donate money to charities just in order to be mentioned in mass media. With regard to this, humanitarian organizations would make donors’ names known more widely because they often work in collaboration with news agencies to popularize their campaigns via several media channels. Accordingly, lists of sponsors would be mentioned respectfully in TV news or online newspapers, which is beneficial for their personal reputation. Besides, members of international aid groups are often trained in the skills of charitable giving. As a result, they may be better at holding community events than a single person who might lack the experience to be a skilled fund-raiser.

However, it is not by accident that many people choose to make a direct donation. As stated above, the main reason is that not every humanitarian association is transparent and credible. In the name of legitimate charities, some fake organizations played on benefactors’ sympathy to pocket their money or even noncash items such as books, clothes, furniture, etc. Their donations, therefore, might not reach victims of outbreaks or natural calamities. Thus, many individuals lend a helping hand to disadvantaged people to avoid falling victim to charity scams.

In conclusion, in my opinion, international aid organizations are still well worth a bridge for the whole society to help the needy overcome adversity.

Sample 2:

Giving money to those in need can be a personally satisfying experience, but there is a choice between donating nationally and internationally through charities or giving directly to those around you. This essay will consider the merits of both approaches. 

The first advantage of providing direct support is that you can know exactly how your money is being spent. For example, if you give money directly to people in your local village or town, you can see where it has gone. When you donate to larger charitable organisations, on the other hand, you are not sure how much will actually be given to those in need as some may be allocated to administrative costs or expensive marketing campaigns. Another benefit is that you can see the impact on those you are helping, which can lead not only to great personal satisfaction but also to respect from others in the local community who appreciate the work you do.

There are advantages, however, in giving to charities that are national and international. First and foremost, there is the choice of good causes. Locally the kinds of places to help may be limited, but in larger organisations you can get involved in such activities as sponsoring a child or conserving wildlife. Not only this, donating to larger charities with an international reach means having the knowledge that you are involved in issues of fundamental global importance, such as curing diseases and human rights, or helping those caught up in tragic environmental events, such as flooding, earthquakes and famines. 

In conclusion, given the benefits of both, I would argue that an individual should make their own choice based on their personal preferences and whichever provides them with the most personal satisfaction. What is crucial is that we continue to give to those who are more in need than ourselves. 

Sample 3:

Today poverty is still on full display anywhere in the world, even from the sparkling and vibrant streets of Los Angeles or to the less glamorous district of Mumbai city. In the fight against poverty, help is at hand. However, a bone of contention remains whether people should directly support the underprivileged or donate to charities. This essay will look at this issue from both perspectives.

There are clear justifications for why some funders would rather help the poor by themselves. First of all, help is given instantly as there is no paperwork, no collection, no delivery involved. It would also mean that no money is lost in the pockets of corrupt government officials. Second of all, it has been found that a considerable number of recipients of aid programs spend money on children’s education or healthcare, rather than alcohol or cigarettes. Therefore, development can be easily promoted.

However, the idea of giving cash directly to the poor is also treated with skepticism by many people who otherwise suggest that money or any other type of donation should be given to charity organisations. Their main argument is that for the people whose lives have always been devoid of material possessions or money, knowing how to manage the financial aids is out of the question. There are many cases where poor people use the money to start businesses; however, bankruptcy is imminent due to their lack of knowledge regarding financial management. For this reason, charities, which can distribute the funds more effectively, prove their prominent roles in improving the living standards of the impoverished.

To conclude, I am inclined to think that giving money to charities is a better way to end poverty as it deals with deeper causes of the issue in the long run.

Sample 4:

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are willing to help poor people, but how they can donate appropriately is a tricky question. While considering the required expertise and convenience, many resort to charities to hand in their donations, I believe it would be better to directly support the local community, as it can be a quicker and more transparent approach.

Procedural convenience is the most important reason why donors choose charities for the donations because it saves their plenty of time by simply just filling in a few forms and handing in their money. In addition, professional charities are more experienced and well-organized because these kinds of activities have been significantly developed and improved. For example, every year charities handle millions of US dollars from a large range of donors for various situations, such as charities for earthquakes or pandemic diseases. Therefore, they are more likely to have a reliable management system to handle complex tasks.

However, in terms of transparency question, supporting poor people directly over private charities is preferred by many philanthropists. In other words, the donors are often worried if their money will be used properly and wisely because the allocation of funds usually is an unpublished process within charities. By contrast, if people can purchase some goods and deliver them to poor people directly, the concern of transparency can be completely avoided. Another problem is that the work efficiency of charities is usually quite low due to the fact that they have to deal with a number of management issues, such as endless meetings to discuss and plan expenses, whereas assistance can be provided much faster in a neighbourhood circumstance.

In conclusion, although both methods have numerous benefits, I would encourage donors to directly support the people who need them, because in need of an emergency issue, a fair and faster response is important regardless of the level of competence.

Sample 5:

Donating money to the poor is a humanitarian activity that has drawn the public ‘s attention in recent years. While many donors provide money and other support directly to the needy, others choose national aid organizations. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this issue before my own opinion is stated.

On the one hand, there are two major reasons as to why many people give financial support or other non-monetary contributions to charities. Firstly, these organizations may make donor’s names known more widely because they often invite reporters and journalists to write about their campaigns. Accordingly, donors’ names would be mentioned in TV channels or online newspapers, which is beneficial for their personal development. Secondly, members of charities are often trained to make a donation. As a result, they would be better at holding community events than a single person who might lack the experience to be a skilled fund-raiser.

On the other hand, others decide to donate directly because not every charity group is believable. Many national charitable organizations made use of donators’ kindness to pocket their money and even noncash items such as books, clothes, furniture, etc. Their donations, therefore, might not reach victims of outbreaks or natural disasters. Thus, to ensure that the needy receive money fully, many individuals choose to make a direct donation, instead of giving funds to aid groups.
In conclusion, in my opinion, national charitable organizations are still well worth a bridge for the whole society to help disadvantaged people due to the above reasons. 

Sample 6:

Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help should be encouraged and respected.

Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases.

Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions of children's life.

In my view, a minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches those who need it desperately. The government could run a campaign and encourage door-to-door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.

Sample 7:

There are diverse views on the way one should get involved in delivering charity. While some prefer to do it locally, within their radius, others prefer to expand this radius to reach people at national and international levels. Both these views are significant, and hence a detailed discussion is needed before framing a rational conclusion.

On the one hand, those who have the former view focus that when charity is delivered locally, it would reach the right person. To be precise, the direct delivery of charity would ensure its complete effectiveness because the deliverer can easily identify the real needs of the person who is in need. He can identify clearly the type of help, the time of help, the duration of help and the best way to execute it when it is done within his locality. Therefore, satisfaction would be the maximum for both the 'giver' and the 'taker'.

On the other hand, those who align with the latter view highlight that charity should reach more people based on the intensity of the suffering. To be clearer, one should understand that there are people in the farthest end of either in their own country or in a foreign country who have serious needs including food, medicines, clothes and shelter. This is from the Laokaoya website. They believe that people should understand these people are also their fellow beings, and it is their responsibility to take care of them in the best possible way. Providing money to national and international charity organizations can make this a reality, and hence they prefer this way.

After analysing both views in detail, I feel that charity is one of the basic responsibilities of human beings, and there should not be a question regarding the area of delivering it. However, one should ensure that it reaches the right people.

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Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Unemployment causes many problems for society. Individuals suffer not only economically, but also in terms of their self-respect and even health. Inevitably, when the breadwinner is unemployed, other family members become victims too. Young people without job prospects may turn to drugs or crime to escape boredom and poverty. For all these reasons, any measures which can reduce unemployment are to be welcomed.

The first priority for the job seeker is information, and here the Internet offers a unique tool. Details of job vacancies and training schemes can be accessed within minutes on a computer screen, saving time and money that would otherwise be spent visiting employment agencies or buying newspapers. In addition, the Internet can be very useful in preparing for job interviews.

Once a suitable job vacancy has been identified, it's vital to respond quickly, and in this respect, it can be argued that a mobile phone is more convenient than a conventional phone. Since calls on a mobile can be very expensive, however, costs can easily get out of hand unless they are monitored carefully.

It has to be said that, like any tools, the Internet and the mobile phone are only as good as their user. Both need to be used effectively, and of course both are open to abuse. There is little point in making technology available, therefore, without providing basic training in using it.

In conclusion, I believe there are strong arguments for giving unemployed people access to the Internet. However, the case for providing mobile phones is less convincing, and it may be more cost-effective in the long run to invest in relevant training programmes.

Sample 2:

Many folks ponder that the governing bodies ought to hand over to each jobless person a cell phone and must ensure that they have internet connectivity. They reckon that it is the best way of utilising money of the citizens to decrease joblessness. This essay disagrees with the above-given view and the supporting viewpoints will be discussed in the upcoming stanzas.

To initiate with, it is the government’s responsibility to help its citizens to get rid of unemployment which is the root cause of poverty. However, providing internet-enabled cell phones to the commoners may not be very effective in dealing with the problem. It is certainly not a good way of spending public money because many non-serious people may take advantage of such schemes, and they might use smartphones merely for entertaining themselves by playing games or watching videos. The government itself cannot be certain whether people will actually make the correct use of such a facility. Although this would be a generous move by the government funded by taxpayers of the nation it definitely would not mitigate unemployment.

To continue, there are several other potent ways of dealing with the lack of employment opportunities.  Firstly, loans with minimal interest rates can be given to aspiring and budding entrepreneurs with which they would not only be able to become self dependent but would also be able to provide jobs to several other able and skilled people. Secondly, placement drives must be conducted regularly so that skilled and educated people may get hired by reputed firms. Lastly, the right to education must be ensured so that all citizens may be qualified enough to work and earn their livelihood.

To sum up, apart from the ones listed above, there are several other ways as well to deal with unemployment. Giving masses mobiles phones or the internet solely would not help resolve this gigantic problem.

Sample 3:

It has been suggested that governments should give jobless people phones and internet access to alleviate the unemployment problem. This essay will argue that, whilst this may be a good idea, it is certainly not the best way of using public money to solve the problem.

To begin with, it could be seen as a positive step to give unemployed people phones and internet access. This would certainly help improve their lives in a small way and may give them the ability to hunt down job leads. However, it is not a guaranteed method of finding employment. For one thing, phones are severely limited in comparison with computers, which would be far more useful for jobseekers. A computer is more appropriate for writing CVs and scrolling through lists of adverts. As such, perhaps public funds would be better spent on computers rather than phones.

In addition, the idea of just giving unemployed people technology in order to solve their problems seems a little wishful. The fact is that most people have phones and internet access in 2021, suggesting that this is not what prevents them from finding work. Perhaps the money would be better spent on job fairs, counselling, benefits, or even investment in local businesses to spur the hiring process. Indeed, whilst none of these is a perfect solution, they all seem rather more realistic and preferential than buying thousands of phones and internet contracts.

In conclusion, while it may be a good idea to give all jobless people a phone and internet access, it is almost certainly not the best use of public funds in terms of tackling unemployment.

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Most large companies nowadays operate multi-nationally. To what extent do multi-national companies have responsibility toward local communities in which they operate?

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Sample 1:

It is fairly unusual for many major corporations to have offices in many countries these days. Coca-Cola, Samsung, and Google, to mention a few, are examples of global businesses that have a presence in virtually every country on the planet. Such businesses, it is claimed, should have a social duty, particularly to local communities. Owners and managers have a social responsibility to offer work possibilities for locals and treat them properly. Rather than abusing them. They might, for example, pay a "living wage" to guarantee that local workers have a decent standard of living. I also think it's a good idea for firms to donate a part of their revenues to local charities, environmental projects, or educational efforts. Finally, rather than attempting to reduce their tax liability by exploiting accounting flaws. Company executives, in my opinion, should be pleased to contribute to society through the tax system.

On the one hand, because companies must generate money in order to exist in a competitive environment, the degree of accountability should be limited. Any worries about social obligations become meaningless if a firm is unable to pay its debts or fulfill changing clients’ requirements. In other words, a firm can only contribute positively to society if it is financially sound. As a result, it must prioritize ensuring its work productivity. This would imply that local workers must satisfy a specific level, such as graduating from high school, in order to be hired. Another issue to consider is that not all major corporations are well-known or financially successful. So, expecting a substantial financial reward from them is unrealistic. If companies want to stay competitive, businesses must invest in upgrades and innovations. Finally, global corporations with a strong reputation and high revenues should contribute as much as feasible. But forcing other less successful or well-known corporations to do so is unrealistic.

Sample 2:

In the modern period, an increasing number of international companies have established operations all over the world. These businesses clearly generate a lot of money, but they also make a major contribution to the native population.

Because of the simplicity with which business laws and regulations may be followed. A large number of well-known businesses have begun operations all over the world. Particularly in developing nations where labor is relatively inexpensive. On the one hand, these businesses help to fuel the economy. By bringing massive amounts of foreign cash into these countries. On the other hand, the money they pay in taxes benefits indigenous peoples.

Nonetheless, I believe these enterprises have an extra role to play, and it is their responsibility to assist the communities in which they operate. For starters, multinational firms can set aside a particular number of seats or employment quotas for locals. Giving them the opportunity to work for respected corporations. Furthermore, the benefits they provide may improve the quality of life in local communities. Furthermore, education institutes can be developed to train disadvantaged people of society so that they can better serve their nation. Furthermore, businesses might set aside a specific amount of money for the health sector.

For example, Microsoft's fully financed "Eradicate Polio" initiative is on track to eradicate the disease throughout Southeast Asia within 10 years. Similarly, worldwide corporations may aid in the prevention of dangerous and life-threatening illnesses. To summarize, governments can get different taxes and share benefits from organizations functioning in their nations. However, these businesses also have a duty to assist people in the areas of employment, education, and health.

Sample 3:

Multinational corporations have grown in popularity in recent years, and this is evident. These businesses, in my opinion, must be accountable for local residents, and their support is required for their employees and local residents.

To begin with, there are a multitude of reasons why major corporations from various countries have a significant impact on local communities. First and foremost, corporations have the potential to pollute the natural environment when they construct or manufacture. Running industries, disposing of trash, and just using air conditioners are all examples of factors that contribute to air and water pollution.

As a result, they must accept responsibility for limiting the number of pollutants discharged in order to preserve the surrounding ecosystem. Furthermore, international corporations have a significant duty to pay taxes on time. If they do not follow, they will break national laws and, as a result, deprive residents of the advantages that they have earned. Companies with a multinational workforce, on the other hand, should assist their employees and local residents for the following reasons. To begin with, training their staff might increase the number of their items.

To be more precise, laborers will operate more efficiently if they are familiar with the items they produce and the equipment they utilize on a regular basis. Second, employers must safeguard the health of their employees by providing safe working conditions and paying appropriate wages. In reality, some harmful issues, such as child labour, starvation pay, and unsafe working circumstances, must be avoided. Finally, the operation of international big corporations is critical for economic growth. However, I believe that taking responsibility for people in local countries and assisting them as well as the workforce is critical.

Sample 4:

Today it is not uncommon to see many large-sized enterprises often base their offices in numerous countries. Coca Cola, Samsung, or Google, to name but a few, are typical examples of these multinational corporations which are present in almost all comers of the world. It is suggested that such companies should have a social responsibility, especially to the local communities.

One social obligation that owners and managers have is to create job opportunities for the locals and treat them well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a ‘living wage’ to ensure that the local workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects, or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes. I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.

On the one hand, the degree of responsibility should be limited because businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health. Therefore, it must guarantee its work productivity first. This would mean that the local workers have to meet a certain standard, like graduating from secondary school, to be given a job. Another point is that not all large companies are well-known or financially successful, so it is not reasonable to expect a huge economic incentive from them. They have to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain competitive.

In conclusion, multinational companies with a good reputation and high revenues should make their contribution as much as possible, whereas it is unreasonable to force other less successful or well-known ones to fulfill this responsibility.

Sample 5:

In the globalization process, a variety of organisations run on an international scale. However, I believe that these firms should not forget to place more of an emphasis on contributing to the development of the local societies where they are located in several aspects. The first responsibility that the multinational companies should take is to preserve the local environment. Companies of any size would exert negative influence on the region’s air and water quality by running factories, disposing of waste to the waterworks or simply using air conditioners. Therefore, it is encouraged that they are active in placing restrictions on the level of the contaminants released in order to operate on an environmentally friendly basis.

Second of all, paying tax on schedule is also an obligation. The tax money is used to upgrade the public constructions and regulate the social-economic activities, thus facilitate people’s life. Accordingly, by not paying tax properly, the companies not only violate the national laws, but also indirectly deprive the inhabitants of a wide range of benefits they are well-deserved to reap.

Finally, the major global companies can support the regional communities by creating jobs. Provided with career opportunities at a firm near their homes, the workers can not only save time and money for traveling but also find it easier to take care of their family. In a broader view, this action helps reduce the unemployment rate in the area, which boosts the local economic development in the long run.

In conclusion, I believe that helping the local communities thrive should be considered a must for the international organisations, and there are many ways to implement the task.

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People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

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Sample 1:

Residents today are suffering from high levels of anxiety no matter where they are. This essay discusses possible reasons for this and steps that can definitely be taken to address the problem.

There are some reasons why people’s nervousness about their safety is increasingly common regardless of their location. The first reason is that the increasing crime rate is adding to people’s anxiety when they are at home. They are afraid that intruders can break into their house, steal their property, and even pose a risk to their life. Another reason might be that traffic accidents are concerning people the most when they are out. As the number of transportations is growing, the rate of suffering from a road accident is higher. Therefore, people’s worry about their safety when travelling is unavoidable.

Some simple measures can be implemented to deal with the root causes of the problem. The first measure is that local governments can install more surveillance cameras in residential areas, thereby preventing criminals from breaking into people’s homes and helping people feel safer when they are at home. Another solution might be that residents should be encouraged to use public transport, thereby reducing a great number of private vehicles which is perceived to be the main cause of road accidents. In the long term, imposing stricter punishments for driving offences should be implemented in order to improve road safety and ease people’s fear when going out.

In conclusion, the increasing crime rate and traffic accidents are two main reasons making residents anxious regardless of their location. Installing more surveillance cameras in residential areas, encouraging residents to use public transport, and imposing harsher penalties for road safety violations can be done to ease people’s nervousness.

Sample 2:

It has been observed that some people feel unsafe both within their homes as well as outside of it. The predominant causes seem to be related to their psychological make-up and sometimes even loneliness. Counselling and implementation of calming techniques as well as developing a strong social network could effectively address this issue.

In most cases, an underlying reason for constantly feeling subjected to a potential physical threat can be attributed to an overactive mind. A feeling of personal safety being compromised could stem from a traumatic childhood experience, some phobia or even anxiety issues. For instance, a person might have an uncanny feeling of being followed all the time because of having been kidnapped as a child. Sometimes, being terribly lonely could also trigger unexplained imaginary thoughts resulting in an individual getting fraught with such distressing ideas.

However, to combat such fears, external assistance in the form of counselling to bring about a change of mindset at a deeper level could prove highly beneficial. Yoga and meditation practices could also work wonders to soothe a restless and overactive mind. For example, the efficacy of meditation to relieve anxiety has been scientifically proven and it is being introduced in educational institutions as well as corporate offices. Also, developing stronger bonds with friends, neighbours and colleagues, and being surrounded by their support could help one get rid of all trepidations.

To conclude, the major reasons for many people not feeling safe anywhere are rooted in their psyche and may also arise due to their leading a solitary existence. Psychological counselling, practising calming techniques and expanding their social circle could help them overcome their fears. 

Sample 3:

Crime is increasing in today’s era rapidly, and government agencies lack the ability to counter that. Most people are feeling afraid, even when they are staying at home.

To start with, Robbery cases are rising day by day, especially at night, which keeps the people frightened, even when they are resting at home during the night. A partial reason for this increase can be given to the municipality department, which is responsible for keeping the road lighting up to date. It is easy for criminals to hide their identity and escape during the dark. People are afraid to go out during the night due to the lack of repair of road lighting by the municipality department, which is a boon to criminals.

In addition to the above, the lack of patrolling by police teams is also responsible for boosting the confidence of criminals. Police patrol at one or two times, maximum, at their scheduled time, which criminals are quite aware of. They are planning their activities in line with police patrol and harassing people while walking during the night. Police patrolling is also limited to the main market area instead of residential areas, where most of these incidents happen.

In order to control and improve the situation, the government shall implement a slew of changes. Police patrolling shall be boosted in a residential area, and CCTV cameras shall be installed for monitoring purposes. The municipality department shall be ordered to repair all damaged street lighting and shall ensure the working of the same during the night. Law enforcement agencies shall chase the criminals and put them behind bars so that lessons can be taught to others.

To finish this, government plays an important role to keep society safe and give confidence to citizens about their security. Ultimately, its enforcement of the law boosts faith in citizens and investors to live and work in society without any security concerns.

Sample 4:

In today's world, safety has become one of the major concerns of people, both at home and in public places. Despite numerous attempts made by the authorities, the feeling of insecurity prevails among individuals. This essay will explore the causes of this phenomenon and suggest a few remedies to tackle the issue.

The primary reason for people feeling unsafe is the soaring crime rate. Criminal activities can occur abruptly, leaving even people with the soundest mind agitated and alarmed. Another contributing factor to this issue is people's inclination towards an individualistic lifestyle. Technological advancements have created an environment where communication on a personal level has become almost obsolete, making people suspicious of others, leading to a lack of trust and the feeling of fear.

One possible solution to address these problems is by imposing stringent laws to deter criminals from committing crimes. The government needs to formulate policies and laws that instill the fear of severe consequences for offenders. Increased patrolling in high-risk areas by law-enforcement personnel should also help instill a sense of safety among the public. Furthermore, to promote social cohesion, local administrations could endeavor to arrange awareness campaigns and regular community gatherings. Such events will create opportunities for people to build trust and foster a sense of community, reducing the feeling of isolation and insecurity.

In conclusion, the fear of harm, whether out in public or within the confines of our homes, is an unfortunate reality. By introducing stricter laws and increasing police presence in high-risk areas, together with promoting community involvement and social awareness campaigns, the government can address this issue and help ensure the safety and security of its citizens.

Sample 5:

In these modern times, people do not feel safe in their own homes or when they are out due to the rapid advancement of modern society. I will look into the causes for this occurrence and provide possible solutions.

In this paragraph, I will discuss the causes behind the issue. There are many reasons why people feel dangerous when they stay at home or go out. The main reason is the level of crime rate is relatively high. The declining economy and stock market lead to issues like employers dismissing their employees. Under such circumstances, many employees hardly find a new job and have no choice but to commit a crime such as stealing and robbing.

In addition to this, another such cause is its deteriorating environment. Using auto production machines to produce more units usually releases a large amount of smoke, chemical gases, etcetera. Local people who usually stay at home will naturally feel there is euismod developing disease such as lung cancer. As they cannot get fresh air rather have to inhale heavy chemical gases, which affects their mental as well as physical health.

Fortunately, there are some possible solutions. One such solution is the government can provide allowance to jobless people. Due to this, the laid-off workers and employees are able to afford daily essentials, which will significantly decrease the crime rates. On the other side, the industries should be constructed far more away from the residential areas where only industrial disputes are handled.

In closing, I pen down saying that although there are many factors that are responsible for the people who feel unsafe at home or outdoors, the government is in the best position to solve the problems.

Sample 6:

In modern days, there has been a higher and higher percentage of those who reported not feeling safe in their communities. What has been disclosed in recent surveys has highlighted the need to increase safety not only on the streets but also at home. The goal of this essay is to outline why this has happened and put forward appropriate solutions

In countries rich and poor alike, much concern has been raised about safety issues both on the street and at home, and their concern is justified. In the first place, individuals have been bombarded with tragic crime reports of murder, rape, or house robbery almost every day. This is a particular issue in developing countries where people are desperate enough to rely on committing crimes for food, money, or survival. Besides, road fatalities have been rising on an unprecedented scale, no matter what means of transportation taken.

This problem can be firstly remedied by increasing the penalty for street crime. In view of the damaging consequences it can cause to victims, the several-month prison sentence that is imposed on such criminals is too lenient and therefore should be made longer. In addition to this, many methods can be adopted to put the brakes on the death rates on the road. For example, the government can upgrade the infrastructure and also the road condition.

To conclude, street crime and road accidents can be identified as the two most common reasons why more and more people do not feel safe today. It is hoped that this issue is resolved before it gets out of hand.

Sample 7:

People today have a sense that their safety is threatened both outside and inside their house. The reasons for this vary, and this problem should be tackled in different ways. There are common risks that every individual has to confront as they walk out the door. One particularly salient example for this should be traffic accidents. High population density puts pressure on the transportation system, and a rise in the number of commuting vehicles means that people now are more likely to get involved in a car crash than they were in the past.

In addition, our individual safety is not guaranteed even when we stay at home. Food poisoning is a general concern today, as manufacturers are willing to trade the well-being of their customers for profits. Toxic substances are injected into many products to maintain the food’s freshness for a longer time, and this is why state hospitals are now filled with cancer and heart-disease patients.

To tackle this problem, I would like to propose several measures. Firstly, the food market has to be better managed. The government should examine more carefully which ingredients are contained in pre-prepared meals sold to the public and ban those with high levels of preservatives. Secondly, education campaigns about the benefits of public transport should reach every resident. For example, Hanoi Urban Transport Operation Center has recently run a program called “Travel by Bus every Friday” on Facebook. This encourages the local people to put a limit on the use of their personal vehicles, thus the frequency of traffic accidents would also be reduced in the long term.

In conclusion, I believe that the mentioned remedies can certainly help people lead a safer life.

Sample 8:

People currently feel unsafe either when they stay at home or go out on the streets. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.

There are some reasons why people now have to face serious risks no matter where they are. Firstly, due to climate change that is happening all around the world, people might face the danger of natural disasters even when they are at home. For example, in Japan, earthquakes and tsunamis occur every year, and many people have been killed during those events. Secondly, when being out on the streets, individuals are usually exposed to different types of pollution such as noise or air pollution. This might negatively affect people’s health and can even lead to fatal consequences.

Feasible solutions should be produced to tackle these aforementioned problems so that people would feel safer. The first measure would be to develop new technologies that can help minimise or prevent the damage caused by natural disasters. For instance, scientists have come up with machines that can forecast the occurrence of earthquakes. Additionally, it is necessary to reduce noise and air pollution on the streets. This can be done by encouraging citizens to use public transport in order to limit the levels of noise and exhaust fumes caused by private vehicles.

In conclusion, there are some reasons why people today usually do not have the feeling of safety either at home or when they are out, and some measures could be taken to solve this problem.

Sample 9:

It is true that people now feel that they do not have a greater sense of security either in their own house or when they go out. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with by several effective measures. 

There are numerous reasons why people nowadays feel that their safety is threatened either when they go out or at home. To begin with, individuals are more likely to be exposed to a variety of dangers resulting from heavy traffic as they go out in the streets. A striking example of this is a dramatic increase in the number of traffic accidents. An increasing number of commuting vehicles means that people are more likely to be involved in more accidents than before. Moreover, high population density places great stress on transport systems, which can lead to different types of pollution such as noise or air pollution. Secondly, it seems that many people are facing various risks such as food poisoning even when they are at home. In fact, toxic substances injected into food might pose a risk to people's health, so there are more and more cancer and heart patients, which puts great pressure on hospitals. Also, people now might face natural disasters such as earthquakes or floods due to climate change. Consequently, many human lives are seriously threatened. 

Some solutions should be implemented to tackle this problem. A practical measure could be that citizens should be encouraged to use public transport instead of private vehicles such as cars or motorbikes to reduce traffic congestion as well as pollution, which might have adverse effects on both people's health and their life. Furthermore, one of the most feasible solutions so as to minimize the damage of the disaster is to develop technology. For example, a number of machines should be invented to predict the occurrence of earthquakes by scientists. Additionally, in order that food safety issues could be guaranteed, the government should take some actions such as having stricter market access requirements to secure the entry of products in markets. 

In conclusion, individuals can feel safer if a number of effective measures should be implemented. 

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Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be or to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Advertisement is something that accentuates and helps in the hype of the product which is advertised. A person’s allure is highly influenced by these factors as the concept of beauty is defined by these ads. Consciously or subconsciously, these leave a perennial impression on viewers’ minds, urging them to buy these products. The individual always tries to be the person in the advert and loses the identity of their own. In the forthcoming paragraphs I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons.

To begin with, different types of advertisements are there, and all of them are intended at producing ratings for the product. Most of the adverts are false and misleading, and this makes the people lose their uniqueness and develop some other temperament. They lose their esse and become a copy-paste of the person shown in the ad. Several regrettable events have taken place as a result of immoral publicity.

There exists a lot of positive potential in advertising, but the fact is that people are taking it in a manner that is incompatible. Everything has pros and cons, but the way we perceive it is totally dependent on us. The people who make ads have only one thing in mind, and that is the marketing of the product and the profit. They always focus on the promotion of their commodities for a desirable outcome and the people blindly follow their lead and they are not bothered about their uniqueness and charm.

Even though advertisements perform a vital role in our progress, losing individuality and trying to be someone else is a serious issue.

In conclusion, advertisements do play an integral role in defining the current trends in the modern day market. In my opinion though, the way that the common folk perceive such advertisements may differ from person to person and similarly the influence. Therefore, it is highly important that these advertisements are used both effectively and logically to maximise the customer choices and not as a ploy to deceive the customer with false propaganda.

Sample 2:

An often-debated topic is whether advertising has a major influence on the growing similarity of people’s lifestyles in the modern world. I partly agree with this opinion for a number of reasons.

On the one hand, the power of advertising is undeniable. The growth of the advertising industry has resulted in many people buying products of the same manufacturer, which can be seen in the case of consumer goods. Today, the advertising campaigns of multinational companies such as Unilever have been so successful that their products almost dominate the market. Smaller enterprises tend not to be able to compete with these giant market leaders due to their disadvantages of capital poured into advertising programs. Thus, customers are often swayed to buy products of famous brands rather than those made by less well-known companies.

On the other hand, it is also true that people tend to copy others’ lifestyles without being affected by advertising. For example, it is valid to argue that many young people are trying to emulate their idols’ fashion styles. Many manage to purchase the same clothes, dye their hair, and wear the same perfume as their stars do. People can also turn to their social relations for advice when they need to buy something. For instance, junior citizens usually ask their friends before they come to a final decision on buying a smartphone.

In conclusion, advertising has indeed the gap between each individual’s lifestyle in modern society. However, I believe that it is not the sole factor that contributes to the trend.

Sample 3:

It is sometimes thought that advertisements result in people becoming increasingly similar and that they discourage individuality. In my opinion, advertising certainly does promote conformity amongst certain people, but most people will always make their own individual choices which will make them appear different.

The role of advertising is to promote products in a way that encourages people to buy them and this in turn means that people inevitably end up buying the same things and appearing the same. This is particularly true of the fashion industry which tells followers of fashion what colours to wear in which seasons, what styles of clothes they should wear and even the length of their hair. The adverts put pressure on young people to look fashionable by following looks which have been planned by the fashion industry. As a result, those who are easily influenced by fashion trends will tend to appear more similar and with less individuality in an attempt to be considered fashionable.

However, the wish to appear fashionable and follow fashion trends with strict conformity only applies to a certain group of young "trendy" people. For others, fashion trends are interesting but not something that should be followed religiously. For instance, while some of them may choose to follow the fashionable colour that season, they may prefer a different hair style which is more suited to their own face shape or character. Consequently, although some aspects of their dress may be similar, the majority of what they wear and how they wear it is different and shows their individual character.

In conclusion, although fashion victims follow trends and may appear similar, they are in the minority as most people prefer to select what they wear and how they look for themselves.

Sample 4:

Today more and more individuals get enticed by different brands and want to look exactly as in the display. Therefore, rather than looking different, people opt for looking alike. However, I firmly disagree with such an occurrence. My preference is explained in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, the first and foremost reason for my inclination is that products that people go after are just to attract individuals as they are advised by celebrities, and this is the major reason for people buying branded products which will indirectly surge the net profit of that particular product. For example, Madhuri Dixit is a brand endorsement of Olay brand which is applied on the face to remove dark circles, wrinkles and most importantly, to look ageless. However, instead of looking young and beautiful, some people end up having redness and peeling of skin on their face, and therefore individuals should immediately stop using such products with side effects. Moreover, people make the baseless decision to follow some well-known personalities.

On the other hand, it cannot be disregarded that this is not a case because of aggressive marketing; but the mass production of some industries is to blame. Few companies like H and M, Walmart, and Costco reduce their price by producing their goods in bulk. A middle-class individual is bound to buy such products in order to keep their monthly budget low. The same fashion is just a mere coincidence, and it is not done intentionally at all.

To conclude, it can be observed that the promotions done by some industries have a huge impact on one’s mindset.

Sample 5:

In this digital world, we are exposed to ads every now and then, some claim that such a case has made people have similar personalities. I bolster such an opinion; my position is explained further with valid examples.

To begin with, people nowadays hoard items in order to fit in with others as they think of a common way which the rest of the world follows due to heavy marketing. People are seen buying items with which they are not even comfortable, they are putting compliments from others above their own convenience. Tv, billboards and other such places we are surrounded with make up our thoughts the way the business owner wants. A certain brand of footwear was made famous because the company hired a famous actor to endorse the item. Even though their market value was high compared to its quality the sales of this product suggest otherwise. Times of India revealed that the average sales were around $1.2 billion.

On the other hand, there are people who opine that the marketing team just showcases their products while the choice of buying these items is always left to individuals. Supporters of these views debate that advertisements are published with the intention of just making people aware of the current products available. Marketing is an integral part of sales and according to these individuals, adverts are never used to mislead their customers. They add that such a scenario of drifting a huge mass to have similar looks and thoughts is not plausible.

To summarize, advertisements are essential for enhancing sales, yet the shortcomings of their influence on people should be considered. In this case, the government cannot force anyone, but it is our own responsibility not to be dragged towards these fake trends and false status.

Sample 6:

We are all witness to the fact that adverts emphasize and hype up the product that is showcased by any company; this accentuates people following the same trend, leaving their personality on one side. I agree with the given statement, my stance on this is provided in the ensuing write-ups.

Nowadays, companies precisely advertise in a way that attracts more and more people to buy the same product at the same time. This influences people to leave their individual personality as well as culture and is manipulated to act according to the way the mass has approved. There are many cultures dying because of western influence. The so-called globalization has endangered our age-old practices. According to the evidence provided by Sogang University, Seoul, many traditions die out every year, about half of the traditions have lost significance and a quarter is not even known to most people.

However, it would be unfair to blame companies for the similar behavior that people in general have. There are various brands that sell the same products. At times, one might follow the same trend due to the convenience and comfort that the product proffers. For instance, most of us wear jeans for the reason that they are more comfortable for us. There are a plethora of brands selling this item at different price ranges. There is no doubt that everyone’s unique personality can’t be completely changed by advertisements of any brand or personality.

To sum up, I would put forth that there are many negative effects of advertisement, and they are regulating our mindsets and thus, it must be controlled.

Sample 7:

As many people have access to television and the Internet, advertising is becoming an integrated part of the modern life and greatly affect our behaviours. Personally, I agree with the view that these ads tend to make us want to behave in a similar manner.

For decades, advertising has been shaping consumers' behaviours with several identical patterns and preventing us from making us a diversified society. A common practice is that marketers try to create new habits for customers who nonstop adopt new lifestyles' concepts. These habits then become the norms of modern life. For example, when people feel tired, they now get familiar with taking an energy drink like Redbull or Sting instead of water, which never happened in the past. As a result, modern citizens around the world, at present, love to wear clothes of Gucci, use an iPhone 6, take a Starbucks in the morning and go to McDonald's for lunch.

It is also clear that adverts often take advantage of the images of celebrities to make the audience conduct themselves in the same pattern. Because people usually take some superstars as their role models, letting them see ads involving these famous people would give rise to the desire to buy the same products or to react in the same ways. In other words, if they do not use those products, they might feel that they are just old-fashioned ones. For example, when Ho Ngoc Ha – a Vietnamese famous singer – becomes a representative for a cosmetic product, thousands of women immediately think of buying that product, not because of the quality of itself but the fact that they want to look like her.

In conclusion, the rise of advertising is an irresistible trend, and this movement apparently prevents everyone from being different individuals.

Sample 8:

Some people maintain that people's individuality is disappearing because of advertising. Although this is true to some extent; it is still up to each of us to maintain our individuality.

On behalf of advertising, it is important to note that most advertising is targeted at large groups of consumers. Although that advertising encourages us all to wear the same brand of clothes, to drink the same brand of soft drink, or to shop at the same retail store, the advertisers are well aware that people have multiple choices and will make buying decisions based on their individual preferences.

Although some people will succumb to the conformity encouraged by advertisers, most people still will buy a product or service mostly because it fits who they are and who they want to be. For example, a person might see a television commercial promoting a specific brand of athletic shoes that is being promoted by a popular professional basketball player.

The person viewing the advertisement might buy that brand or because they aspire to be like the professional athlete in the commercial. Nevertheless, it can be argued that the consumer still has the free will to determine whether he will buy or not buy those shoes.

Although advertising seems to encourage conformity and discourage individuality, people still have the free will to determine whether they will conform or not and whether they will buy a product or not. If a person wants to maintain their individuality in regard to using a specific product, they can certainly choose to use an alternative product.

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The world's natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?

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conditions. Climatic conditions will remain favourable only if there is stability in the ecosystem. In the present scenario, there is an increased extraction of fossil fuels to meet the never-ending demand of human beings. When large quantities of greenhouse gases are emitted into the environment due to the increased consumption of such fuels, it can detrimentally affect the earth’s climate.
Immediate solutions need to be taken for this alarming issue. The most effective remedy to this issue is the consideration of alternative resources which are renewable in nature. This helps to reduce the uncontrollable use of non-renewable resources. For example, people should be encouraged to use solar and wind energy to produce heat and light. Apart from this, government should implement stricter environmental policies to regulate and control the use of natural resources.
To conclude, it is essential to use natural resources religiously only considering the need rather than the greed, if not, the world may come to a standstill.

Sample 5:

The environment is changing at an accelerating speed. This is reflected in the fact that natural resources are increasingly consumed by people. Such situation can lead to many consequences and some actions must be taken to address these issues.

The increase in consumption of the world’s natural resources can have negative impacts on the lives of humans and other living creatures. Firstly, people have long relied on natural resources to meet their needs. The fast consumption of these resources is likely to cause serious conflicts among countries because of such issues as the dearth of coal, petrol, and fuel. If wars occur around the Earth, the lives of countless people will undoubtedly be lost. Furthermore, other animals are negatively affected. Many fish species, for example, are on the verge of extinction because people use modern equipment to catch a great number of fish irrespective of their sizes. This means that young fish have little chance of reaching the adult stage when fish can reproduce back. Therefore, the lives of people and many species would be in danger due to the overconsumption of natural resources.

Nevertheless, there are some viable solutions to limit the negative effects of such event. It is vital that governments world-wide make full use of renewable energy sources, for instance, solar, hydroelectric power. This measure can significantly reduce the human reliance on non-renewable energy. In addition, the government should introduce laws that require fishermen to catch adult fish only and return baby fish into the wild nature. Withs this legislation, the number of fish is likely to increase significantly enough to accommodate the rising needs of people around the globe.

To sum up, the rapid consumption of natural resources can threaten the lives of not only people but also other animals on the planet. These issues can be addressed if governments attempt to invest in utilizing renewable energy and implementing laws that boost the reproduction of animals in general.

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that having these people to give a talk to teenagers is the best way to tell them about the dangers of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Crime education is of paramount importance in any country, but the way it can be conducted is often a subject of debate in society. While I agree that asking those who are released from prison to have a talk to school students is a good education method, I also believe that there are better alternatives to the problem, as will now be discussed.

On the one hand, I agree that students may be aware of the consequences of engaging in criminal activities when attending a talk given by ex-prisoners. Their life stories are often vivid and persuasive, and this can attract the attention of school students easily. These ex-criminals are real examples that people have to pay for their unlawful activities, which can raise awareness about law-abiding citizens among young people. The success of a series of educational programs on Vietnamese Television channels about the price that offenders have to pay proves that the narrative forms of crime education can work. It is hoped that a speech of used-to-be wrongdoers is promoted at all school levels in future.

However, I believe that a combination of different education methods would produce a more desirable result compared to a former prisoner holding a talk. Primarily, parents should act as pioneers to educate children at an early age about social evils and how to avoid them. It has long been acknowledged that the home environment has a profound effect on the development of a child, and a significant percentage of juvenile crime stems from insufficient education criminals receive in their childhood. Teachers at schools also play an important role in raising the awareness of students about crime. Moral lessons ought not to be neglected in the classroom, and a positive education environment should be promoted, contributing to crime prevention.

In conclusion, it is my opinion that a talk given by ex-offenders, albeit effective, is not the best education method for crime education.

Sample 2:

It is true that we should hate crimes, not the criminals as they are also the human being. Evidence shows that good individuals are forced to commit a crime and are convicted, and many ex-prisoners become normal members of our society. Since they have suffered from isolation and punishment, they can share their experience with teenagers and encourage them to abide by the laws and rules.

To begin with, rehabilitated offenders have experience about the prison life and the types of wrongdoing people get involved in. They can share those experience with the teenagers and young people are more likely to accept advice from someone who speaks from real life experience. This can be a great arrangement to let adolescents know how someone gets involved in a crime and how they suffer for this. It would discourage them from committing crimes and become good citizens. I presume those teenagers will have many questions and the ex-prisoners are the best persons to answer those, and this will have a powerful impact on the fresh minds.

Moreover, people who have been punished by the law would benefit from this arrangement as well. They would feel better by sharing their stories and this is a great way to stay away from crimes for these people. They would also feel connected to the society and would be glad for doing something good. Alternative ways of educating young people about the menaces of committing a crime are letting teachers educate students. However, in my opinion, this is not that efficient as students would treat those as class lectures, not real-life interesting stories to listen to carefully. Educating students through stories and films can also be effective but they are not as much interactive as sessions with ex-prisoners.

To conclude, we should educate our young generation about the consequences of committing crimes, and I believe they would learn this better from reformed prisoners who speak from their experience.

Sample 3:

It is true that several people have changed themselves to be a better person after they had been released from prison. And it is believed that they are better at giving advice to young people about the negative effect of crime. I personally agree with the statement and the following essay will discuss in detail about it.

To begin with, it is a fact that the public usually has negative images of ex-prisoners, but not all of them have a bad personality. As some prisons provide technical skills and personal development programs to their prisoners, many of them have successfully followed these positive programs. These courses have changed their character and provided them with adequate skill, therefore, they were accepted back in the society. Many of them have learned their lessons during imprisonment, as they worked harder and became more successful than the regular people. Apart from psychopath criminals, an ordinary person, who has committed crimes and has been sentenced to be imprisoned often understands the value of life and thus changes radically.

But in many countries, the crime rate among young people has been increasing significantly in the past few years. I believe that the best way to reduce the rate is by having some campaigns and testimonials from former prisoners who have changed their life. With their shares, it is hoped that it will open and broaden the view of young people about the dangerous side of crime. They would also become an effective mentor because they understand the condition of these teenagers, as they had experienced the same situation before. With their guidance, it is hoped that many teenagers will improve their life and become a better person.

In conclusion, I totally agree that some former prisoners who had changed their life would be a good advisor for the young generation. Their unpleasant experience would be a valuable lesson for the young people and hope that the teenagers would avoid crime activities in the future.

Sample 4:

There is no doubt that crime rates have dramatically increased over the last few years. Some criminals managed to become good human beings during their stay in prisons. One of the reasons is that they have practically seen the problems and sacrifice they had to make. Some people argue that these are the best examples of creating awareness about crimes in teenagers. However, others state that a person with a criminal background will not leave indispensable impressions on people’s minds.

Firstly, it is the duty of government and the people to identify the aspects of crimes in teenagers. After that, there should be workshops and seminars which should highlight the consequences of committing crimes. It is also the responsibility of parents and guardians to keep an eye on their children’s activities. While making little efforts, one can save many criminal activities in their surroundings.

Secondly, people who were part of immoral doings and became good citizens after prison could help teenagers in eradicating this sort of sins. They have personally experienced all the suffering they had to go through after compelling crime. They know the possible reason, why and how youngsters get involved in such cruel doings. Their worlds would leave undeniable impressions on people’s minds and will help to eliminate crime from the society.

Finally, I strongly believe that once a criminal is not always a criminal. If one has regret about his past and has changed himself should be treated like a normal human being. Furthermore, they could help teenagers from remaining away from crimes while telling them about their sacrifice of time, health and family.

Sample 5:

In recent years, imprisonment is assumed as the finest method of punishment to offenders of law because after running the punishment time, the majority of people tend to be good members of the society. This condition derives plenty of people think that the prisoners are convenient speakers to talk to adolescents about the precarious of breaking the laws. I personally agree with that statements and I have some reasons to support it which will be explained briefly in the following paragraph.

First and foremost, detention given to the criminals is usually followed by training and education that will be utilised in their future life. For instance, they are taught about religion and how to survive their life in the right way such as lessons for becoming a tailor or a painter. Those lessons make them likely to be better inhabitants and might be easier to be accepted in their circumstances after completing their penalty.

Furthermore, due to the experiences obtained as long as running punishment, they seem to become suitable speakers to tell the teens about the difficulties that might be faced when living in a prison. To illustrate, they can share how regretful they are after committing a bad action and how they felt and repented because they cannot meet their family and cannot act freely like others. This story will certainly be remembered by the adolescents since they hear about those bad impacts directly from the prisoners so they will think twice if they want to disobey the applied rule.

In a nutshell, it can be concluded that majority of people become better citizens after obtaining lessons at the jail and because of the experiences acquired in the jail, they are likely to be suitable people to tell the teenagers about drawbacks which occur owing to be a criminal.

Sample 6:

It is true that imprisonment helps the offenders to develop an acceptable character in the society and family. Even though ex-offenders can teach about the consequences of crime very clearly, I am of the opinion that they are not role models for teenagers due to various reasons.

To start with, teenagers should not learn the effects of illegal activities from the ex-lawbreakers as this way of learning may cause to generate a tendency for imitating such activities in children’s minds, especially who have a lack of maturity and curiosity. Moreover, since ex-offenders have the past history of crime, they are not ideal individuals to teach the younger generation effectively. Social stigma is another factor, which means that social leaders often try to keep away the ex-prisoners from the mainstream of society owing to social status issues. Consequently, they are reinforced to engage in criminal activities repeatedly and they would also be terribly isolated.

Again, each society has their own prestigious law enforcement system to promote legal awareness in children, which is more effective teaching than learning from the ex-offenders. As such, ex-prisoners are not required to guide teenagers in spite of jail life experience for a certain period of time. An ideal example would be the organisation of awareness programmes of the police department in school settings in India.

In contrast, there is another line of thought that ex-prisoners are the ideal teachers to make awareness among children regarding the detrimental effects of criminal offences because they have real life exposure in such tough situations. Apart from this, these bitter lessons about punishments can create a strong influence in children, which in turn can generate an innate fear in them to involve any criminal activity. Eventually, children would deter lawbreaking activities, and they would become productive citizens in future. Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that the ex-prisoners have a clear criminal background and an inner desire to perform such activities again.

To conclude, despite certain advantages, ex-offenders cannot be effective mentors in teaching ill effects of offences due to many challenges.

Sample 7:

There is an age-old argument that states some people who have spent time in prison become good citizens later. Even though some may disagree with this, I firmly believe it to be true. Records show that sane people who committed crimes in the past were probably coerced by their situation or acted in self-defense. In such cases, the person is not immoral for the most part and retains their values and virtues. Therefore, they can be considered good citizens and integrated into society post their term.

In other cases, some deliberate offenders, who undergo rehabilitation while serving their sentences, experience a shift in their attitude and mindset. The isolation from their families, friends, and society allows them to introspect their misdeeds. Furthermore, their interactions with other inmates give them a fresh perspective of life that helps them metamorphose into good citizens.

Interestingly, this argument gives rise to a new topic of concern, i.e., whether these ex-offenders should be accepted back into society. It is no secret that integration into normal life can be an uphill struggle due to prejudices and discrimination. As a community, we must separate the crime from the criminal because, in the end, they are humans. Although it may sound cliche, everyone is entitled to a prospect of redeeming themselves. When such opportunities are presented to those who have been in prison, it allows them to work towards becoming a good citizen.

Few prisons host different programs that equip the inmates with technical skills. Alongside that, they also have personality development classes. All these efforts taken by the prison prepare an offender to go back into their lives. Where they can fend for themselves and contribute towards their community and country. After all, being a good citizen is not just confined to following the rules. Individuals should also be able to serve society.

Change is a time-consuming and tricky process, especially for offenders. Nevertheless, it is not unattainable, especially when paired with appropriate efforts, empathy, and the right attitude. In conclusion, I would like to assert that some people who have been to prison can become good citizens later.

Sample 8:

It is often believed that imprisonment can bring about changes in a convict, i.e., a person who has served time in prison can become a good citizen later. Although the premise is riveting, the idea is debatable.

Let us first understand the argument's background. A person who has been sent to prison is associated with a felony. Therefore, he or she has violated laws or morals, inflicted harm and suffering to fellow members of society. In most cases, their crimes were premeditated, where they knew their actions would result in loss, trauma, and damage. The question is, a man who has carried out planned crimes, is he capable of change? He who is accused of heinous crimes is doubtful to change and become a good citizen in the future.

However, there are two sides to this coin. Many a time, it can be that the offender is not a deliberate criminal. Their situations compel them to choose the wrong path. For example, an educated but unemployed man may turn towards robbery in an attempt to provide for his family. In such cases, he is not a conscious criminal but forced by circumstances to act like one. Through proper rehabilitation and opportunities, he can be elevated out of it. Such convicts can become good citizens later and get back to normal life even after serving a prison sentence.

Now comes the other side of the coin. Here we see those criminals who have meticulously designed the crime and accomplished it. Evidence shows that some of these criminals have no regrets for their misdeeds. Crime was the way of life for them until before imprisonment. Hence, these people have little to no chances of changing into good citizens later. Integrating them back into society with the hope of transformation can be preposterous and have dire consequences for everyone around.

From the above premises, it can be inferred that only a few of those who have been to prison can become good citizens later. The argument can only turn into reality if the convict realizes their mistakes and works towards self-improvement.

Sample 9:

Before getting into the depths of the age-old argument that some people who have been to prison become good citizens later. First, it is important to understand the attributes a good citizen should possess. Well, there are divided opinions, but some traits that everyone must have to be a good citizen stay unwavering. A good citizen should be law-abiding, respectful towards the country, its institutions, and fellow countrymen. Additionally, he pledges to care for society and contribute to its well-being and growth.

Offenders are usually not considered to be good citizens because they fail to respect and follow the law. Moreover, their actions give rise to violence, trauma, loss, and misery for other people. As an appropriate punishment for their misdeeds, imprisonment becomes inevitable. How many believe that during this period of incarceration, several convicts experience a positive change in their attitude and perspective. During the days spent in isolation, away from their friends and families, inmates contemplate their actions together with acknowledging their mistakes. Such introspection transforms them, and so, people who undergo this process often become good citizens later in life.

There is a section of convicts, who are not wilful criminals, but their situations coerced them to commit crimes. A said crime could have resulted from an act of self-defense. Here, the guilty are already repenting of his actions and would redeem himself. These people do not abandon their values and were good citizens before a fateful incident. Hence, through careful and empathetic rehabilitation, they can be brought back to normal life and into society.

Anyway, there exist deliberate criminals who despite being aware of the consequences have planned and carried out multiple crimes. They often have no remorse for their misdeeds. There is no prospect of their transformation. Hence it would be illogical to believe that they can become good citizens later.

In the end, the idea that some people who have been in prison can become good citizens later is bewitching. Although it can only be true for those who wish to change in a true sense.

Sample 10:

It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.

In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.

The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for schoolteachers to speak to their students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions.

In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.

Sample 11:

It is the case that, recently, educating young generations about the repercussions of committing an offence has become a subject of concern in the modern world. From my own perspective, although there are several reasons why ex-prisoners are able to make teenagers aware of this severe issue, there are more reasonable grounds that various better alternatives still need applying.

On the one hand, the idea of accepting advice from those who were previously incarcerated is justified to some extent. One explanation is that ex-criminals are real examples because they had to pay for their unlawful activities by undergoing the process of imprisonment and rehabilitation. Young people, in fact, are likely to get a close insight into the difficult life in prison, which is told vividly and persuasively, hence, these stories have the capability of drawing students' attention as well as raising their awareness to be law-abiding citizens. In addition, it is an effective way for these lawbreakers to reform. Sharing experience with other people establishes the connection to society, which enables those who were penalized by law to believe in a meaningful life and deter them from reoffending as well as being good members of the community.

On the other hand, there are other useful methods that should be followed to teach the young about the consequences of engaging in criminal activities. First of all, the parental role is important in educating about social evils to children at an early age. It is believed that the home environment has a profound influence on the development of a child, in reality, an enormous proportion of juvenile delinquents stem from insufficient education from their childhood. Besides, it is essential for schools to make a contribution to preparing the young with criminal prevention knowledge. After the moral classes in the educational program, students stand chances to discuss together and draw their own lesson.

In conclusion, while listening to ex-offenders' stories is effective in a few aspects, there are better ways for crime education.

Sample 12:

Educating school students on the consequences of carrying out a crime has long been a contentious issue. There is a common belief that talks by ex-prisoners should be held at school to inform students of the threat to society when a crime is committed. While this practice is beneficial in a few ways, there are many better methods to educate students about the dangers of crimes.

There are certain benefits of having reformed criminals talking to students about the hazards that are associated with crime. The most obvious benefit is that students may learn from those who truly understand crime. Those who committed a crime have likely gathered knowledge about the dangers of crime for the victims, not only from their own offenses but also from communication with other criminals. In addition, this method may also educate students about the threat to the offenders themselves when they commit a crime. To explain, ex-prisoners are those who have undergone a long process of imprisonment and rehabilitation, so their life-stories are often a great source of real-life experience of not only what prisoners are deprived of but also how remorseful they feel.

However, there are better solutions to teach students about the negative effects of partaking in criminal activity. The most viable measure may be to introduce criminology as a subject at school. While the life-stories of ex-prisoners are often biased, criminology knowledge is based on empirical data and research and as such, tends to be more reliable than anecdotal evidence. With this method, students can learn all the necessary knowledge about crime, including the dangers of it, through the lens of science and therefore have a holistic view on crime and the associated dangers. Another useful measure could be to film the harsh daily lives of prisoners and show it to school students. Notwithstanding the benefits of giving talks, films with vivid imagery can be much more visually attractive and thus more effective in informing students of the harsh reality of life in incarceration.

In conclusion, talks by ex-prisoners may keep students informed of the dangers of carrying out a crime. The government, however, should adopt stronger measures such as introducing criminology as a school subject and showing students documentaries about the lives of prisoners.

Sample 13:

We indeed need to hate offences, not criminals since they are also individual beings. Evidence proves that great people are forced to commit a crime and are convicted, and many ex-prisoners become ordinary members of society.

First, rehabilitated offenders have experience about prison life, and the kinds of wrongdoing people get involved. They could share those experiences with teenagers, and young people are more likely to accept guidance from somebody who speaks from real-life experience. This can be a fantastic arrangement to allow the adolescents to understand how someone gets involved with a crime and how they suffer for this. It would discourage them from committing crimes and become good citizens. I presume those teenagers will have many questions, and also the ex-prisoners would be the best men to answer people, which will have a powerful impact on the fresh minds.

Additionally, people who were penalized by the law would benefit from this arrangement too. They would feel better by sharing their stories, and this is a fantastic way to keep away from offences for these folks. They would also feel connected to society and are glad for doing something great. Alternative ways of educating young people about the menaces of committing a crime are letting teachers educate students. However, in my view, this isn’t that efficient as students would take care of those as class lectures, not real-life intriguing stories to hear carefully. Educating students through stories and movies can also be powerful, but they are not as interactive as ex-prisoners.

To conclude, we must instruct our young generation about the consequences of committing crimes and that I believe they would learn this better from reformed offenders who speak from their experience.

Sample 14:

It is correct that several people have changed themselves to become a much better person after being released from prison. And it is believed that they are better in advising young people about the negative effect of crime. I agree with the announcement, and the subsequent essay will talk in detail about it.

First, it is a fact that the public typically has negative graphics to ex-prisoners, but not all of them have a terrible personality. As some prisons offer technical skills training and personal development programs for their prisoners, many of them have followed these positive programs. These classes have changed their personality and supplied them with adequate ability; therefore, they have been approved back in society. A number of them have learned their lessons during imprisonment, as they worked harder and became much more effective than the typical people. Apart from psychopath offenders, an ordinary person who has committed offences and has been sentenced to be imprisoned frequently understands life’s value and changes radically.

The best way to reduce the speed is by having some campaigns and testimonials from former prisoners who have changed their lives. With their stocks, it is hoped it will open and broaden the young folks’ view about the dangerous side of crime. They would also become an effective mentor because they know those teenagers’ status, as they had experienced the same situation before. Lots of teens will enhance their life and become a better individual with their guidance.

In summary, I agree that some former offenders who had changed their life could be a good advisor for the young generation. Their unpleasant experience would be an essential lesson to the young folks and expect that the teenagers would prevent criminal activities later on.

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International travel sometimes makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What may be the reasons for this? What can people do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?

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It is irrefutable that international tourism has taken mammoth dimensions. Unfortunately, sometimes, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. In this essay, I intend to delve into the causes of this situation and suggest some ways to alleviate the problem.

The most important reason why some are opposed to international tourism is that tourists may unknowingly show disrespect for local culture. For instance, we generally cover our heads in a religious place. A tourist may not do so or take his shoes inside a temple. This may offend the local people. Sometimes, youngsters may be attracted towards the western culture, which the tourists bring with them, and many may find this a threat to the local culture.

Moreover, the tourist dollar may not be helping the local people. We all know that tourists stay in five-star hotels and enjoy the best facilities. They may be taking two showers a day, whereas the local people may not have enough water to drink. This has been the case in Shimla, which is a very popular hill station in Himachal Pradesh, India. On top of that, when tourists buy souvenirs from local artisans, they bargain a lot. The poor artisans, who look up to tourists for their livelihood, end up earning the bare minimum. Finally, tourism creates pollution, which helps nobody. We are all suffering from the consequences of global warming.

The solutions are not simple. We cannot discourage tourism. lt is the backbone of many economies of the world. First of all, the tour operators should take the onus of guiding the tourists about the main things of local culture. Secondly, the tourists should stay with locals as paying guests. This would be a win-win situation for both. Local people would earn, and the tourists would taste the local culture. Finally, ecotourism should be promoted. For example, if an elephant ride is possible, the tourist should avoid using cars. After all, a good tourist is one - who takes away nothing but photographs, and leaves behind nothing but footprints.

Summing up, international tourism does have a downside to it, but many steps can be taken to lessen the negative effects.

Sample 2:

People typically travel abroad to discover diverse cultures in various places. However, some claim that rather than broadening their perspectives, travelling abroad only serves to reinforce their prejudices. Before putting up my suggestions, I’d like to evaluate this complex phenomenon.

In my opinion, a huge number of things contribute to this unusual circumstance. First and foremost, as residents of industrialised nations are constantly proud of their outstanding traditions, they are much more inclined to struggle to fit in with a less developed nation. They are presumably dissatisfied with the surroundings, cuisine, weather, and other aspects of the area. Even worse, in host nations where locals are hesitant to accept visitors, certain conflicts between tourists and indigenous people might quickly arise. Furthermore, it is logical that individuals from various countries have different perspectives about different lifestyles, faiths, and other aspects of daily life. Visitors’ misunderstandings about the host country are made worse by the stark disparities. For instance, Chinese tourists may anger their waiters in western nations when they are unaware that they are expected to leave gratuities.

It is evident that having a thorough understanding of the nations they will be seeing before taking off gives them the opportunity to have a more fulfilling trip. Individuals might look for a more detailed introduction to the countries with the aid of computers. They shouldn’t believe the overly dramatic marketing. They can instead consult their pals who have already been there for extra suggestions. They should be psychological and tolerant enough to deal with the negative aspects of the host nations.

To sum up, everyone wants to take a fantastic vacation overseas to enjoy their free time. However, some annoying details and occurrences are unavoidable. As a result, we should focus on the positive aspects of travel rather than developing stereotypes.

Sample 3:

International travel is regarded as one of the finest ways of broadening one’s outlook by understanding the diversity of different places, the people, their culture and lifestyle. On the downside, international travel has also led tourists to become biased and cold instead of receptive and indulgent. 

One of the primary causes aiding this unwanted outcome is that what is considered sacred in one place may not hold any value for the tourists. In Arab countries, for instance, women are required to wear a burka or unrevealing clothes, and western women, not realizing the importance of being fully clad, may develop an aversion as to why women in these countries are treated the way they are. And visa-versa, a tourist hailing from a reserved background may not identify with the western culture and feel appalled by the lifestyle of people there through not knowing better. Research prior to the trip can resolve this, or if there is a tour guide or organizer, they must take it upon themselves to educate the tourists about the local values and culture in a way that they understand and empathise with rather than look down upon it.  

Stereotyping is another significant cause of prejudice among tourists. The source of stereotyping is the media portrayal of certain countries, places and people, which is why tourists have preconceived negative opinions about these places when they arrive. Without really getting to know the local people, a trip may just accentuate these views. Awareness is the only cure to break the stereotypes and for this interaction amongst the local people and the tourists must be rallied by encouraging home stays so that the differences between reality and media portrayal can come to the surface. 

In conclusion, international tourism does have its problems which can lead to prejudiced views. However, efforts in the right direction can overcome them. 

Sample 4:

It is true that travelling to another country is sometimes considered to be a bias than a chance for visitors to broaden their horizons. There are several reasons why international trips have become useless, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem.

There are two main reasons why travellers do not seem to reap the benefits from visiting foreign places. The main reason why tourists commit deviations when they are travelling is that visitors themselves tend to generalize what they have seen or heard and develop biased views on local people or culture. For instance, foreign visitors are likely to see certain practices to be uncivilized, or barbarian, inferior to their own civilization. This lack of information makes them unpleasant instead of becoming eye-opening or rewarding when they get the chance to learn about various customs, lifestyles and rituals. Another reason for this issue is that some people find it stressful to spend time in an alien country where they do not speak the language, or where they feel that they cannot easily integrate with the locals.

There are several actions that travel agencies and tourists could take to promote the consciousness of the destination country. Firstly, travel agencies should take the responsibility of guiding tourists about the essentials of customs and traditions of the nations they have the intention to visit. Secondly, tourists themselves should do some research before going to some places, which results in a great respect for local culture or customs. Finally, tourists do help protect local culture and environment, for example, by taking green transport. By doing these, travellers may find local residents unexpectedly hospitable and welcoming.

In conclusion, there are some negative attitudes of travellers towards host countries, but various measures can be taken to raise awareness of different nations and ethics groups in the rest of the world among foreign visitors.

Sample 5:

It is an irrefutable fact that due to an urge to learn new cultures and visit new places, international tourism has increased considerably, which is, among other things, resulting in increased prejudice rather than broad-mindedness. Considering this, this essay will ascertain the considerable factors which are playing their predominating role to increase the incidents of being prejudiced before outlining appropriate measures to cope.

There are some factors involved in increasing the prejudice against the international tourists during their travel. Firstly, cultural and traditional sentiments could be a significant espousing factor to be considered. It is generally seen that the international tourists, inadvertently, end up hurting the cultural or traditional beliefs of not only certain communities but also some religions, which is not considered appropriate by the natives. Not removing the shoes while visiting the temples or not offering a tip to the waiters could be taken as fortifying examples. Moreover, intense bargaining by a certain community could be another substantial cause for this biased behavior.

Despite the causes discussed above regarding the increased prejudice, there are quite a few readily solutions available which could be implemented to mitigate the impacts caused by the potential factors. Initially, awareness could be an effective tool. It can be defined as making ourselves familiar with the cultures and traditions of host countries before our travel by researching on the internet, so our naivety does not become a cause for the misunderstanding. Additionally, having fixed price shops, like big brands, could be another indispensable key.

In the end, indeed, prejudice with the international tourists is adversely affecting the broad-mindedness; however, aforementioned some concrete steps can assist to alleviate the damaging impacts.

 

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Some think that the government should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The issue of providing financial assistance to retired individuals has been a controversial topic. Some people believe that the government should provide financial support to retired individuals, while others think that they should be self-sufficient. In my opinion, both viewpoints are justifiable, and it is essential to have both individual accountability and government aid working together to guarantee a respectable life for retired individuals.

On the one hand, those who argue that the government should support retired people financially claim that it is the government’s responsibility to provide for its citizens, especially those who have retired after contributing to society for many years. They argue that retired individuals may not have the means or ability to earn an income and that they have a right to a comfortable standard of living in their retirement years. Additionally, providing financial assistance to retired individuals can also help stimulate the economy by increasing spending in areas such as healthcare, travel, and leisure.

On the other hand, there are those who argue that retired individuals should take care of themselves financially. They contend that retirement planning is an individual responsibility, and that people should save and invest their money during their working years to support themselves during retirement. If the government provides financial support to retired individuals, it may lead to a dependency on the government, and people may not feel motivated to save for their retirement. Additionally, providing financial assistance to retired individuals can be a burden on taxpayers and may lead to an increase in taxes.

In conclusion, the issue of whether the government should provide financial support to retired individuals is a complex one, with valid arguments on both sides. While it is crucial for individuals to take responsibility for their financial planning, the government should also be held accountable for ensuring that all citizens have access to basic necessities such as food, shelter, and healthcare. Ultimately, a combination of personal responsibility and government support is necessary to ensure a dignified life for retired individuals.

Sample 2:

It is true that elderly people who have retired are in great need of care and financial support. Although I accept that the government should look after and financially support them, they need to have their own savings because the national budget does not suffice to pay for everything each citizen needs in their life.

On the one hand, it is necessary for the government to provide care and financial aid for retired citizens because each of them has certain contributions to society. Economically, some people enrich the national budget through the taxes they pay, while others spend money on commodities and services when going shopping, which allows businesses to earn profits and pay taxes as well. Such taxes can be used by the authorities to develop their country, such as building hospitals, and pay for officials like police officers or politicians. As a way of compensation for their devotion to their youth, the government ought to offer the elderly money-related assistance and care services, for example, regular free-of-charge health checkup.

On the other hand, the elderly should not entirely rely on the governmental support as this can cause a huge financial burden on the state budget. However wealthy a country can be, it can hardly satisfy each of their people’s demands, so every individual in society should save their own money to cover their non-essential expenses. Without a sum of savings, they would face a lot of difficulties when they need to afford entertainment or new fashion items. It is not advisable for the government to spend excessive amounts of money on public welfare as this will harm the budget used to solve pressing social issues such as environmental pollution or the housing crisis.

In conclusion, I believe the government should assist retirees with money and take care of them, but it is each retiree that needs to save certain amounts of money to stay financially independent.

Sample 3:

When population aging is becoming an issue in many countries, social welfare provision for the elderly has been a subject of significant concern. While the notion that governments should extend financial assistance to their senior citizens is held by many, I contend that these individuals should also take proactive measures to prepare for their retirement, thereby alleviating the strain on governmental budgets.

On the one hand, there are legitimate reasons why many assert that governments should prioritize the well-being of the elderly. The first rationale provided is that most elderly citizens have made substantial contributions to society, whether through taxes or work. Therefore, they are deserving of financial aid to ensure a decent quality of life during their retirement years. Moreover, the declining physical capabilities that often accompany old age can pose a difficulty for elderly individuals to find a job. Without government support, self-sufficiency seems to be too challenging for them. If governments turn a blind eye to the needs of this vulnerable demographic, it would be not only morally but also legally wrong.

Nonetheless, it is imperative for each individual to devise plans for their old age to minimize their dependency on government handouts. This is primarily because when governments have to fund all the expenses of the elderly, the national budget will be strained. Consequently, heavier taxes may be imposed on the working population, and funding for other important sectors, such as education and healthcare, could be impacted as a result. Furthermore, making financial security for the old a convention tends to result in idleness among citizens, which discourages them from working hard and saving for their old age. This, in turn, can take a heavy toll on long-term economic growth.

In conclusion, although governments should have measures to ensure the life quality of the senior citizens, it is not advisable for the elderly to rely entirely on governments’ aid, as it imperils the fiscal health of the nation. Therefore, each person should work hard and make savings during their working years to be self-sufficient as much as possible after retirement.

Sample 4:

The question of who should assume responsibility for the financial aid of senior citizens has long been a debatable topic. While some argue that it is the government’s duty, others advocate that older adults should be accountable for their retirement. I think both governments and individuals have a role to play in financially supporting retirees.

On the one hand, governments should provide financial assistance for older people because they are unable to support themselves. The intervention includes pension schemes, healthcare benefits, and other social welfare programs, helping people have a comfortable and dignified life later. For instance, in developed countries, governments provide a monthly pension to all retirees, regardless of their previous income level, to meet their basic needs.

On the other hand, individuals should also be in charge of their own post-employment savings. While the authorities can offer some fiscal backing, it cannot be solely relied upon to provide financial security during retirement. Thus, aged people are better off saving and investing in retirement funds early in their working life. Doing so can help them be proactive when facing uncertainties in their later life. Governments also benefit from that decision and have a more abundant budget for other priorities.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that both governments and individuals should shoulder responsibility for the monetary assistance of older people. Governments should only provide social welfare programs to ensure a basic standard of living for the elderly, while individuals should also make economic plans to secure their own retirement funds. That approach not only assists old citizens to have a more prosperous future but also lightens governments’ load on the financial burden.

Sample 5:

Over recent decades, heated controversies have been aroused over whether the elderly should be provided with healthcare and financial aid after their retirement or manage through these years by themselves. The following essay elaborates on both perspectives before stating my personal viewpoint on this contentious matter.

On the one hand, the assumption that governmental authorities should financially support senior citizens is legitimate to a certain extent. Firstly, this policy would serve as a worthwhile compensation for these individuals’ contribution to national socio-economic development. Since the old have fulfilled all civic duties during their working years namely paying taxes, casting ballots or working for the community, healthcare and monetary assistance during old age is worthy of their previous efforts. Secondly, there exist certain individuals who are physically and financially incapable of looking after themselves. Indeed, since not all citizens are employed or receive adequate fringe benefits, particularly those facing bankruptcy and poverty, government funding to provide them a decent living standard should be an important humanitarian act to save them from destitution and misery.

On the other hand, it is also reasonable to claim that the elderly should fend for themselves by saving during their working years. Individually, senior employees, who can earn and save money on their own, can secure financial stability and independence after their retirement without relying on the government for life sustenance. In so doing, they could freely opt for various recreational activities, thereby leading a more fulfilling and comfortable life. On a wider scale, practicing self-sustaining retirement can also alleviate unnecessary burdens on the national budget. Due to the prohibitive provision of financial and human resources to support old people, that senior citizens fund their own retirement would relieve strains on the state capital, which could otherwise be allocated to education, healthcare systems and other integral sectors of the country.

In conclusion, proponents of both standpoints indisputably have valid arguments for their convictions. In my opinion, however, aside from retirement pension, healthcare and financial assistance should only be offered to those who are in genuine need to benefit both individuals and communal growth.

Sample 6:

The debate over whether governments should provide care and financial support for retirees or if individuals should save for their own old age is highly contentious. Both sides present strong arguments, but I align with the latter perspective.

On the one hand, advocates for personal retirement savings argue that this approach promotes economic growth. When individuals save independently, it alleviates the financial pressure on the government, allowing more funds to be directed towards productive areas such as infrastructure, industry, and healthcare. For example, Singapore’s Central Provident Fund (CPF) mandates that working adults contribute a portion of their income to a savings account, resulting in substantial retirement savings. This reduces the need for government assistance and enables greater investment in national development. Moreover, saving for one’s own retirement fosters self-respect and pride, as individuals are not reliant on state support for their living expenses, leading to a more dignified life.

On the other hand, supporters of government support for retirees, including myself, argue that the elderly have made significant contributions to society and deserve assistance in return. Many have bolstered the national budget through taxes or stimulated the economy through their spending. Thus, it is fair for the government to provide them with financial aid and care services, such as regular health checkups and pensions. This ensures that the elderly can access basic necessities like housing, food, and medical care, reducing their risk of poverty. For instance, a study by the Australian Institute of Health and Welfare found that pension recipients are less likely to experience poverty compared to non-recipients. Additionally, as more elderly people live alone, nursing homes that offer proper care and social interactions are crucial in preventing isolation and depression, providing a sense of community.

In conclusion, while encouraging personal retirement savings has its advantages, I believe government support is essential to ensure that the elderly live with dignity and receive the care they deserve for their lifelong contributions.

Sample 7:

The debate surrounding financial support for retirees is polarizing, with opinions divided between government assistance and self-reliance. I firmly believe that while personal responsibility is vital, government support plays an indispensable role in ensuring a dignified retirement for all citizens.

On one hand, proponents of self-sufficiency argue that individuals should prepare for their retirement without expecting governmental aid. For instance, my uncle, a diligent saver, managed to amass a considerable retirement fund through decades of frugal living and wise investments. This approach, they claim, instills financial discipline and reduces the dependency on social systems, which are often strained under the weight of aging populations. Furthermore, self-reliance in retirement planning encourages a culture of savings and investments, potentially leading to a more financially literate society. However, this view presupposes that all individuals have equal opportunities and resources to save for their retirement, which is not always the case.

Conversely, I am convinced that the government should shoulder a significant part of this responsibility. A close family friend, who worked in public service for over thirty years, relied on government pension schemes to navigate her retirement years. This support enabled her to cover medical expenses and maintain a modest, yet comfortable lifestyle. Governmental assistance is crucial for those who, due to lower earnings or unforeseen circumstances, are unable to save adequately for retirement. Such support not only guarantees basic living standards but also reflects a society's commitment to its elderly citizens' well-being. It acknowledges the contributions retirees have made and ensures they are not left in destitution due to circumstances often beyond their control.

In conclusion, while personal savings play a critical role in retirement, government support is fundamental to ensuring that all retirees can live with dignity. This dual approach fosters both individual responsibility and societal solidarity, ensuring a balanced and inclusive solution to retirement living.

Sample 8:

It is true that when people advance into their golden years, they require more help and attention. For that reason, a significant number of people hold the opinion that the government should provide financial assistance to the elderly. However, I tend to agree with those who argue that workers should be saving a portion of their income to have a nest egg in their retirement.

To begin with, a culture of saving rather than depending on the government may foster the overall economic development of a country. In other words, if people were to accumulate their own savings for their pension age, it would lessen the financial burden on the government. As a result, the government would be able to release more funds to more productive purposes, such as development of infrastructure, industries, hospitals, and so on, which may expedite the overall progression of a country.

In addition to economic factors, putting money aside has some personal benefits. Since savings-oriented people are not dependent on the state for their living expenses, this may instill a sense of self-respect and pride in them. On the other hand, those who are reliant on financial assistance very often face the negative societal stigma, as many people consider them to be inferior and unworthy members of society. Hence, to live a life with dignity and pride, taking responsibility for funding one's own retirement is evidently a better option from an individual perspective.

In contrast, the provision of monetary outlays for retirees has proven unfeasible in many countries. Since in many nations the number of senior citizens is on the rise, in the long run governments are likely to struggle to sustain the cost of providing for the elderly. The early signs of this have been seen in many countries that were forced to raise the retirement age, including my home country where men can now retire at the age of 67 instead of 65. Therefore, in the foreseeable future, these kinds of support may become completely unsustainable.

In conclusion, the provision of state monetary support may undoubtedly lessen the concern of retirees to some extent. However, considering the issue of sustainability of this provision, it is better to opt for individual savings from the very beginning of working life, for the benefit of both individual and national development.

Sample 9:

In today’s society, the topic of whether the government should financially support the elderly after they retire or if these individuals should fend for themselves remains contentious. This essay will delve into both perspectives before I share my viewpoint.

Many assert the belief that governments should bear the responsibility of financially supporting retired citizens. Primarily, it’s a societal duty to care for those who have devoted a considerable portion of their lives working and contributing to the nation’s development. They have paid taxes, provided services, and laid down the infrastructure for the younger generation. In many cases, retirees might not have a steady source of income, and thus, without government aid, they could face severe financial hardships, leading to an overall decrease in their quality of life.

On the other hand, advocates for self-sufficiency among the elderly argue that it fosters a sense of responsibility and lessens the burden on the state’s coffers. This viewpoint emphasizes the importance of personal savings and investments made during one’s working years, anticipating the needs of retirement. By being financially independent, retirees can maintain their dignity and reduce the strain on public funds, which could be allocated to other pressing societal needs.

In my opinion, while individual financial planning is crucial, it’s the government’s duty to ensure that its senior citizens live comfortably after retirement. Not all retirees have the means or foresight to save adequately, and it’s a mark of a compassionate society to care for its elderly.

Sample 10:

People work hard so that they can earn money to fulfill their needs. However, working has an age limit. Everyone has to retire after a certain age. The source of income stops after that. Some people think that retirees should be provided with support from the government monetarily. There is another group of people who think that they should take care of themselves. I agree that the government should be responsible for some instances. However, I believe that people should be responsible and mature enough to keep their savings. These savings can be used at the time of retirement. The main reason many supports a government-backed retirement plan is the horrible condition of many seniors.

There are scenarios where senior citizens require the help of the government. There are several possible serious causes deserving due attention. There are senior citizens who need to live away from their families. There are war veterans with a disability. Few senior citizens and retired people go through economic crises. Without the provision, these people are dependent more on the mercy of society and might end up taking charities or in worse cases, begging on the streets as well. They might face many difficulties unrelated to economics. They might not be able to go to the market themselves, they might need to visit doctors. For them, governments are their last refuge and in the best position to lend a helping hand. Despite the rare instances presented above, countries must inspire ownership of one’s own future. If all citizens knew that they would get a handsome retirement fund in later years of life, they would become less interested in working hard, saving money, and making wise investments. Since governments are responsible for dealing with larger populations, they may not always focus on responsible adults who are well-equipped to take care of their own needs. One fine and classic example of this kind of situation is parents raising their children. Parents take care of the child till a certain age and provide free education and places to stay. However, after a certain period of time, children are expected to support themselves. Parents that pamper their children for too long, in fact, spoil them in the same way a national retirement fund can demotivate individuals from working harder in life.

I believe that there should be a balance between support and complete help. The government should identify people who genuinely need help. Also, the common people should not be taking advantage of such policies.

Sample 11:

It is often argued that older people have difficulty in managing their finances after they retire because of which government support becomes necessary. On the other hand, some people believe that older people should have the means to support their own financial needs. By discussing both the views, I would put forward my preferred opinion on this issue. Considering the argument where people believe that older people should be able to manage their expenses themselves, it is quite possible.

Most elderly people are found to be left alone in most of the countries in the world during their old age. Either they have children who work far away from home or have been married away living separately from their parents. In such a situation, managing one’s own financial affairs is essential, and one must be capable enough to support themselves financially. While government’s support can be considered an added benefit, the lack of the same should not be considered a major issue when one has enough financial management. However, on the other hand, one of the most important aspects is that after a certain age, older people are not able to take care of themselves. Because of their old age, their health issues, etc they become dependent on their children or other younger people. As a result of old age, monthly income for the older people becomes short in relevance to their daily medicinal and homely expenses. The medicinal expenses are quite expensive for those suffering from chronic diseases and financial requirements could be fulfilled with support. Government support for retired people is hence essential for older people despite the fact that they can manage themselves. This is because the older they grow, the more difficulties they face. Accordingly, different governments in different countries should take steps to support their aging population with retirement benefits.

Sample 12:

In light of rising costs of living, the sources of income for retirees have become a topic of debate. It is generally believed that senior citizens in retirement should receive monetary assistance from governments, whereas other people argue that saving up money for their retirement stage is each individual's duty to enhance their living standards in their later life. In my opinion, both states and citizens should be equally responsible for the financial support in retirement.

On the one hand, it is the state obligation to allocate public funds to subsidising retired individuals. Members of governmental bodies are elected by citizens who believe their needs would be satisfactorily served. Therefore, governments need to fulfil such a mandatory public duty to promote the general welfare of their people of all ages. The elderly entering their retirement stage are often no longer able to maintain their employment due to various age-related chronic illnesses they might suffer. Social and financial assistance such as tax-free pensions, health service discounts, free public transport passes should be provided to the older members of society. These financial supports would play a vital role in ensuring the standard quality of life for retired individuals.

On the other hand, the opposite school of thought argues that individuals should also proactively take responsibility for accumulating their own retirement savings rather than entirely placing financial reliance on the states. People should be prepared to set aside money for their future during their tenure, by properly establishing their monetary objectives. Making long-term investments and obtaining social insurance can also enable individuals to achieve financial security when they embark on their retirement. Private enterprises should also be held accountable for offering monetary support to their employees when they take a leave from the workforce. Consequently, senior citizens can enjoy their financially comfortable life, without merely depending on the public funds.

In conclusion, I opine that governments should allot the state funding to pensions for retired people, who also have a significant role to play in being financially self-reliant following their withdrawal from employment.

Sample 13:

In today's society, the issue of whether governments should provide for retired individuals has become a topic of considerable debate. While some argue that the authority should primarily focus on providing money and care for the elderly, others contend that individuals should be encouraged to save up for their retirement. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present my opinion on this matter.

One viewpoint suggests that governments have a responsibility to provide care for retired individuals. Advocates of this view argue that as people age, their physical and mental well-being may deteriorate so that they are incapable of working and making ends meet. Therefore, they would become vulnerable and require specialized care and assistance. For this reason, it is sensible to expect the governments to allocate resources to establish quality healthcare services, retirement homes, and social programs that cater to the specific needs of the elderly to ensure that they receive the necessary support and enhance their overall quality of life.

On the other hand, an opposing viewpoint asserts that senior citizens should be encouraged to budget their finances for retirement. By being financially independent, retired individuals can maintain control over their lives and make choices with their own will. Encouraging personal savings through financial programs can equip people with the means to support themselves during their retirement years without relying solely on the assistance from the people in charge. As a result, individuals will be empowered to take responsibility for their financial well-being.

In conclusion, while care is essential to meet the specific needs of the elderly, financial independence empowers individuals to maintain control over their lives. Therefore, I believe that a balanced approach that incorporates both aspects is necessary.

Sample 14:

Many today have come to the conclusion that retired seniors should be supported by the government and not left to their own meagre resources. While I agree there are certain cases where governments are liable, citizens ought to be incentivised to handle their own finances.

The main reason many supports a government backed retirement plan is the dire condition of many seniors. There are a number of possible causes deserving due attention. Some seniors are without family, others may be war veterans and have trouble finding work due to physical or psychological impairments, and still others may be victims of economic downturns. Without support they must fall on the mercy of society and will wind up in soup kitchens and seeking out chronic charity or even begging. Simply put, governments are their last refuge and in the best position to lend a helping hand.

Despite the rare instances mentioned above, nations ought to encourage ownership of one’s own future. If all citizens knew the government would provide a decent retirement fund for them, they would have little incentive to work hard, save money and make wise investments. Governments deal with large sample sizes and, granted this would not happen with many responsible adults, it still poses a sizeable national risk. An analogous example of this is the way parents raise their children. They provide for them early on, much like how governments offer free schooling, but then children are expected to grow up and take responsibility for their own lives. Parents that coddle their children for too long end up spoiling them in the same way that a national retirement fund would deprive individuals of the opportunity to become self-reliant.

In conclusion, the advantages of a more self-assured, mature citizenry outweigh the odd unavoidable case of desperation. There should be a degree of balance to allow for these exceptions while still nurturing more life-affirming values.

Sample 15:

Retirement is an essential stage for every working person. Few people plan their post-retirement income source well in advance, while others do not. Hence, the government must take care of retired people either by giving them financial support or taking good care of them. In my opinion, instead of providing financial support, the government shall take care of them by reimbursing their necessary expenses.

Some people favour financial support from the government for retired people. According to them, the government shall deposit the minimum fixed amount directly into retired people accounts so that they can meet their basic expenses. This amount shall be annually increased by inflation to cope with market prices. All expenses shall be managed by retired people out of the provided financial support. However, this may limit the government’ responsibility towards retired people, which shall not be the case.

On the other hand, People demands that a retired person’s well-being should be ensured by the government. Retirement people are looking for more care post-retirement and giving them financial support isn’t enough. Their medical expenditure rises with their age, which cannot be met by providing them a minimum fixed amount because of the rising cost of medical services. Also, providing them with financial support may expose them to fraudsters, who hunts for old age people to fulfil their ill intentions. These people need good care of themselves and look for more emotional support from society.

Hence in order to provide a better life post-retirement, I strongly believe that government shall take care of retired people by preparing society for retired people and creating more leisure activities options for these people. Only providing financial support to retired persons will not suffice the purpose.

Sample 16:

It is a customary notion that individuals who have retired from work need monetary support to manage the demands of daily living. Some people opine that the government should lend a hand to these people, while others suggest that the individuals should be financially self-reliant. I agree with the former and in this essay, I will discuss these contrasting viewpoints and examine how individuals’ and governments’ contributions play a role in retirement.

Firstly, I think it is the government’s job to see to the needs of all people and therefore, it is their duty to provide succour to retired persons for sustenance. They could do this by providing benefits or pensions as well as offering subsidies. The government can also provide free healthcare since many older people frequently suffer from chronic health issues. Providing bus passes and transport at a rebate may considerably help people who have retired. Lastly, ensuring that the passive income generated by retired persons through their pensions remains tax-free will also financially aid them.

However, it can also be argued that individuals themselves should have saved up enough when they were in active service so that they could look after themselves following their retirement. Moreover, organisations also have a duty to their employees to grant financial support to their pension funds. Individuals can also save up for the future during their tenure by setting financial goals and reining in their spending. Also, investing in funds and getting insurance can help provide financial security when the individual ultimately leaves the workforce.

Thus, in conclusion, it can be said that both government and individuals have significant roles to play when providing monetary assistance to people who have retired, with the individual contributions being more significant while the person is actively working and the government’s contributions emerging as more significant when the person in question has withdrawn from work.

Sample 17:

The issue of financial support for retired individuals has generated contrasting viewpoints, with some advocating for government assistance while others contend that retirees should take responsibility for their own financial well-being. This essay will explore both perspectives. Personally, I agree with the opinion that it is the responsibility of the government to look after those retirees.

Proponents of self-sufficiency in retirement contend that individuals should be responsible for planning and saving for their own retirement. They emphasise the importance of personal financial discipline and investment in retirement funds or private pension plans. From their perspective, relying on the government for financial support can create a culture of dependence and discourage personal responsibility. For instance, individuals who diligently contribute to retirement accounts throughout their working years can build a substantial nest egg, ensuring a comfortable and secure retirement without relying solely on government assistance.

Supporters of government-funded retirement benefits argue that it is the responsibility of the state to provide financial assistance to retirees. They assert that individuals who have devoted their lives to contributing to society deserve a dignified and secure retirement. Government-sponsored pension schemes, such as social security or national pension programmes, are seen as essential to ensure the well-being of retired individuals who may not have sufficient personal savings or alternative sources of income. Moreover, these proponents argue that a society’s progress and development are reflected in how it takes care of its elderly citizens.

In weighing these viewpoints, I wholeheartedly believe that not all individuals have the means or knowledge to effectively save for retirement. Moreover, unforeseen circumstances such as economic downturns or health issues can significantly impact an individual’s financial stability in old age. So, the governments should provide a safety net through comprehensive social security systems, ensuring that retirees have access to financial support. The elderly retired people have contributed to society through their taxes and work, and the government must take responsibility for looking after them when they are most vulnerable in their old age.

In conclusion, government assistance can provide a necessary safety net for retired people and a crucial aspect of a functioning society. It is essential to support retirees with government funds and foster a society that values and protects its elderly population.

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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?

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Sample 1:

People seem to be increasingly reluctant to have a walk regularly. As there are certain causes of such a trend, some solutions are also available to urge people to walk more.

Amongst the reasons for the lack of people’s interest in the walking activity, the convenience of modern technology in travelling and the boredom of walking activity are the two significant ones. Firstly, some technological applications which support travelling such as electric lifts and escalators are very common in public places. These devices help people to move to the higher levels of a building more easily and quickly than using the stairs, so people would feel it unnecessary to walk. Secondly, walking for exercise can seem monotonous to many people because they have to repeat a series of actions every day, unlike going to the gym where they can use different exercising machines; additionally, it is less boring to train with and talk to other members at the gym.

In order to raise people’s interest in walking, there are some workable solutions to be adopted. To begin with, walking the stairs can be made a more enjoyable experience by adding some attractive decorations to them. For example, some 3D painting artists can be hired to paint their eye-catching works of art on the walls and the staircases, which may make people excited to use the stairs the next time. In addition, companies can offer some incentives such as free gym membership to the employees who use the stairs instead of the lift. They can also hold a company event in the form of a walking competition with prizes to promote the benefits of walking for health.

In conclusion, people dislike walking for several reasons, and this problem of inactivity can be addressed with some measures suggested.

Sample 2:

In contemporary society, the paradox of declining walking habits despite the widely recognized health benefits of this activity has become a pressing concern. This essay will explore the reasons behind the decreasing trend in walking and propose viable strategies to address this issue.

There are several factors contributing to the diminishing practice of walking. Firstly, the rapid urbanization and modernization of cities have led to the proliferation of motor vehicles and the establishment of sedentary lifestyles. As a result, walking has been overshadowed by the convenience and speed of motorized transportation. For example, in most metropolitan areas, the prevalence of motor vehicles and sedentary habits has diminished the practice of walking among the population as much as 75% on the last two decades alone.

Secondly, the increasing reliance on technology and digital devices has captivated people's attention, discouraging outdoor activities like walking. The allure of smartphones and online entertainment has contributed to a more sedentary lifestyle among individuals, depriving them of the physical benefits of walking. For instance, many individuals spend a significant amount of their leisure time engrossed in smartphones and digital entertainment, which detracts from their inclination to engage in physical activities like walking.

To tackle this issue, various measures can be implemented. Firstly, city planners should prioritize the development of pedestrian-friendly infrastructure, including well-designed sidewalks, pedestrian bridges, and green spaces, to encourage people to walk as part of their daily routines. For example, the city of Copenhagen in Denmark has successfully implemented a pedestrian-focused urban planning approach. This initiative has significantly increased the number of people walking and cycling, leading to improved public health.

Furthermore, government and local authorities can launch public awareness campaigns to promote the health benefits of walking and raise awareness of the detrimental effects of a sedentary lifestyle. Investing in education about the importance of physical activity can have a profound impact on changing people's attitudes towards walking.

In conclusion, while the decline in walking habits is influenced by factors such as urbanization and technological advancements, it is essential to implement proactive strategies to promote walking as a healthy lifestyle choice.

Sample 3:

Walking regularly is decreasing day by day the world over. This essay will suggest that the principal cause of this trend is a scarcity of time and submit an awareness campaign as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

The prominent reason why a smaller number of individuals walk every day is their cramped schedule. This is to say that many job class people have tight schedules and therefore, they attempt to minimise commuting time and in order to do so; they use vehicles and public transportation regardless of the distance they have to travel. Take an example of my state Punjab where the overwhelming majority of citizens travel on their bikes and in their cars, even though they have to pay a visit to nearby grocery shop where they can easily get around on foot in less than 5 minutes.

To tackle this predicament, the government should launch a publicity campaign in the media to spread awareness amongst citizens about the benefits of walking. An awareness campaign could shed some light on the statistics provided by the WHO about how a 30-minute walk on a routine basis can deter people from having dangerous diseases such as stroke, diabetes and high blood pressure. There is every likelihood that most people take it seriously and take out some time to walk. For instance, a similar initiative Finland has proven really successful where many men and women now walk for at least 15 minutes on a regular basis.

In inclusion, a smaller number of individuals regularly walk because they have a hectic schedule. However, this dilemma can be curbed by a campaign to aware people about the positive impact of walking on one’s wellbeing.

Sample 4:

A daily walk of 30 minutes is said to be the best exercise. Our grandparents used to walk for miles on end to reach their destination. Today, people walk much less. Many factors are responsible for this.

In the developed world most families have cars. They don’t walk even to the nearest grocery store. In the developing world, too, people are giving up the habit of walking because they have easy access to public transport systems.

We all seek comfort. Walking on foot can be tiring. Needless to say, people prefer to travel by bus or car whenever they have access to them. Motor vehicles are fast and thus they also help save time. Unfortunately, this habit of using the car or bus has several negative consequences. Most of us now spend hours in the office sitting in front of a computer. Because of this sedentary lifestyle, we have developed many health problems like obesity, diabetes and heart trouble. We can avoid most of these lifestyle diseases by simply walking for 30 minutes a day.

Many people who have given up the habit of walking are unaware of the health problems they face. The government and health workers need to create awareness among the general public about the benefits of walking. People who use a car should park their vehicle farther from their office and take steps instead of the elevator. Children too should be encouraged to walk to school. Once they get used to this habit, they are more likely to stick to it in the future too.

To conclude, lack of time and the need for comfort are the reasons that prevent people from walking. However, most of us will start walking again if we are aware of its health benefits. So, creating awareness is the key. The government and the media can play an important role in this.

Sample 5:

The benefits of walking are numerous, and experts recommend it as a good way to keep healthy and fit. Despite this, the number of people who walk on a daily basis is on the decline. The reasons for this are manifold, but there are also several solutions that may help people walk more.

Lack of time is the most common reason people cite for not engaging in any form of physical activity. These days most people have hectic schedules that involve juggling their work and home responsibilities. As a result, they are often too exhausted or pressed for time and therefore opt for faster and more comfortable forms of transport, such as cars, bikes or public transport. Another major reason for the reduced number of pedestrians on the roads is a lack of safety. Most full-time workers are not free to walk during the day and will skip it in the evenings or early morning hours, if they do not feel safe enough to do so.

Fortunately, there are quite a few solutions to this issue. One is making walkers safe, which means the government should ensure that there are enough sidewalks and streetlights available in every suburb, so that pedestrians can walk or jog safely whenever time allows. Another useful option is to create special walking tracks and parks in neighbourhoods where people can get some much-needed exercise in the evenings. The added benefit of promoting the healthy lifestyle and walking in the community makes this solution even more attractive.

To conclude, the pressures of daily life and lack of safety while walking reduce the popularity of this healthy practice. Governments can reverse this trend by creating more green spaces for people to walk in and addressing their safety concerns.

 

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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

As veganism trending is becoming extremely common, many people hold the view that people can maintain a healthy lifestyle without the need of meat. I agree that being a vegetarian means being healthier. However, I would argue that removing meat from daily diet can lead to various detrimental consequences which directly associates to our health.

To begin with, there are many undeniable positive aspects of having a vegetarian diet. The most significant benefit is that this diet helps reverse several chronic illnesses such as heart disease, cancer or obesity. This is mainly because plant-based foods consume less cholesterol so consequently, there will be a lower level of blood pressure and cholesterol. Another advantage is that vegetarians are less likely to be overweight as the amount of fat in vegetables is extremely lower than that in meat.

However, meat can nourish our body more than plant-based foods can. Firstly, vegetables are deficient in protein whereas a large amount of this is found in meat. The main reason why the human body needs to consume a balanced diet of protein is to build and repair tissue as well as maintain a healthy body, which is vital when doing anything energetic. Secondly, besides promoting mental health, meat also improves physical health as meat is extremely rich in various vitamins and minerals such as vitamin A, B, D. It has been proven that these vitamins play an important role in promoting good vision, stronger teeth and bones system.

In conclusion, it is true that following vegetarian diets results in many benefits such as lowering risks of getting chronic illnesses. However, I believe that meat is highly required while maintaining healthy diets.

Sample 2:

Everyone ought to make the move to a vegetarian diet because including meat in one's diet in any form is not required for maintaining a healthy diet. I think that this opinion has been derived from a little polarized thinking. The upcoming passages will outline the various views and benefits. 

There are a few reasons why certain people are more likely to switch to vegetarian diets. First of all, this sort of diet may put an end to animal cruelty. Unfortunately, a large number of animals are killed every year throughout the majority of the globe to generate meat items for human consumption. Additionally, certain endangered species may be at risk of going extinct due to illicit poaching and poaching for everyday meat intake. Furthermore, since raising cattle can result in significant emissions of carbon dioxide, the mass manufacturing of various meat products may increase our carbon footprint. As a result, the widespread meat industry may contribute to environmental deterioration.

However, there are several obvious drawbacks to a vegetarian diet. To stay in good health, our bodies require a vast range of vitamins, proteins, and other dietary components. Fruits and vegetables alone cannot provide a person's need for sufficient proteins and vitamins. A balanced diet that includes a variety of meats and vegetables can thereby reduce health concerns. Additionally, individuals should find alternative ways to fulfill their own food needs because some dangers, like famine and the greenhouse effect, may result in a shortage of herbal goods. As a result, individuals should cut back on relying just on one product for their meals.

In conclusion, it is important for individuals to obtain the nutrients they need from the food they eat on a daily basis; hence, it is preferable for them to consume a diet that is balanced and includes a variety of foods, ranging from vegetables to different kinds of meat.

Sample 3:

A person's life depends heavily on their diet. Some people believe that everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet and stop eating meat. Few people think that eating vegetarian cuisine might be dissatisfying to their bodies, compared to eating meat. Despite this, I do not totally concur with the notion that everyone has to give up meat in order to be healthy.

To begin, following a vegetarian diet exclusively does not constitute a balanced diet, and there is no data to back up this assertion. To put it another way, in some activities like wrestling and boxing, where daily caloric demands are much greater than average, the only way to get this quantity of energy is to consume a diet that is heavy on meat. As a direct consequence of this, not everyone can acquire all of their nutrition from the plants around them.

On the other hand, a vegetarian diet that is healthful is often low in calories and rich in protein. According to a number of studies, eating meat, particularly red meat, is associated with an increased likelihood of developing cardiovascular disease, dementia, and some forms of cancer. In addition, the intake of meat is one factor that has led to an increase in levels of obesity all around the world.

Finally, I want to stress that although a vegetarian diet has many advantages, I still think that vegetarians may need to take a lot of supplements and work hard to have a varied diet that is rich in important macronutrients. While keeping healthy, non-vegetarians may readily combine vegetarian and non-vegetarian diets.

Sample 4:

Undoubtedly, a balanced diet is essential for maintaining good health throughout life. However, since they are vegetarians, individuals like eating green vegetables as part of their feast and do not require a non-vegetarian meal to maintain good health. I completely concur with the aforementioned statement, which I will clarify with concrete instances in the sections that follow.

To begin, every living thing, whether it is a fish, a chick, or a goat, has the same fundamental right that people do to take pleasure in every moment of their lives. Therefore, a living being does not have the ability to die because they are not getting enough of the nutrients that their body needs since they have access to a wide variety of foods that may satisfy those needs, such as fruits, vegetables, milk, and beverages, and among various other things.

In addition, it is unarguable that eggs are a valuable source of protein; however, if humans attempt to kill chickens and ducks, and chicks for their own gain, this will, in the long run, have an effect on the food web. This is because the environment has its own food chain that works to maintain the equilibrium of the ecological system.

Combining all of the information presented in the previous paragraphs, people should make an effort to consume the foods that are suggested to them by the food chain. These foods include plants and vegetables as well as dairy products. These foods are adequate to supply us with the necessary vitamins, carbohydrates, proteins, and minerals that are required by our bodies in order to stay fit and healthy. As a result, adopting a herbivorous diet rather than an omnivorous one is highly recommended.

Sample 5:

In the last few decades, vegetarianism has entered the mainstream of many societies. It is suggested by those who side with vegetarians that meat is not a necessary element in a healthy diet and that going vegan is the way to go in modern times. However, I totally disagree with this view for some reasons.

First, it is not advisable for children to become vegetarian. As they are in the process of growing up, they need to eat a wide range of food, including meat which contains essential nutrients, to improve their physical health. For example, iron from meat helps in producing tissues inside the body while zinc is indispensable in helping to transport oxygen to different parts of the body. If children only eat vegetables, they might become less healthy than they should be.

Second, athletes are the people who should not be vegetarian. Since their job involves intense training on a regular basis, they need to consume meat such as beef or pork which provides them with enough calories and protein. Without enough calorie and protein requirements, they are likely to suffer from fatigue even when doing physically undemanding tasks.

In conclusion, I do not think that becoming vegetarian is an option that everybody should take. 

Sample 6:

Many people in the world currently choose not to eat meat in their daily meals. While I accept that this tendency can help people to live healthily, I believe not everyone should become vegetarian.

In my opinion, there are several benefits of being vegetarian. Firstly, since there are many types of vegetables that can provide people with enough nutrition, it has become less necessary for people to eat meat. For example, potatoes and beans are two popular dishes for families in England because of the large number of calories they can provide. Secondly, vegetables and fruits contain vitamins that are highly beneficial for people. For instance, it has been proven that eating an apple every day can help individuals improve their health and avoid illness. Finally, if more people refuse to eat meat, less animals will be slaughtered.

However, I believe this tendency is not suitable for everyone. First, it is not advisable for children to become vegetarian. As they are in the process of growing up, they need to eat a wide range of food, including meat which contains essential nutrients, to improve their physical health. If children only eat vegetables, they might become less healthy than they should be. Furthermore, athletes are the people who should not be vegetarian. Since their job involves intense training on a regular basis, they need to consume meat such as beef or pork which provides them with enough calories.

In conclusion, while I agree that becoming vegetarian can help people have a healthy diet, I do not think it is an option that everybody should take.

Sample 7:

The consciousness of eating healthy and staying fit is rapidly increasing among the youth, adults, and even the elderly. The source of consuming a high fiber diet inclusive of rich amounts of vitamins and proteins has gained popularity in the recent past. Some people believe that the only way to eat a healthy diet is to consume a diet that doesn’t include meat, and everyone should completely adopt a vegetarian diet to stay healthy. I totally disagree with the above-given statement.

Agriculture in India observed a sudden rise with the advent of the green revolution after independence. The revolution introduced farmers with new technology like the use of high yield variety seeds, chemical fertilizers, and manures, pesticides, and insecticides. The crops grown today are less organic compared to the past. Previously farmers were only dependent on natural resources for the production of crops, but due to the commercialization of agriculture, a lot of chemicals are added to the seeds, which makes them harmful and unfit to consume. 

Consumption of pulse was considered the best source of acquiring proteins essential for the human body. The advent of chemical fertilizers not only made them harmful to use but also has caused a sudden increase in diseases like diabetes, gall bladder stone, and deadly cancer. People are becoming more aware and have adopted organic farming in their confined gardens to be less dependent on market products. 

The diet today which we consume is less likely to be pure and contains more man-injected proteins. The doctors themselves suggest eating and adopting eggs and boiled chicken in the diet as a source of rich protein diet. People are more inclined towards exercise to stay fit for this, and they are advised to reduce their consumption of carbohydrates and substitute their meals with protein-rich resources. However, one cannot completely become a vegetarian or a non-vegetarian. It is always a mix of both worlds to fill the stomach. 

To conclude, meat cannot be completely discouraged in the diets, as it is the only pure source having fewer chemicals in it. 

Sample 8:

Many argue that everyone should adopt a vegetarian lifestyle because animal-based products are no longer an absolute necessity for a nutritionally adequate diet. I largely disagree with this statement because abstaining from consuming meat is economically impractical for less affluent segments of society, despite its legitimate health benefits.

Proponents of vegetarianism correctly argue that a well-structured meat-free diet can sufficiently fulfill most of one’s nutritional requirements. Cereals and oats, for example, are excellent sources of complex carbohydrates and fiber, while fruits and leafy vegetables provide most key vitamins, minerals, and micronutrients. Beans, lentils, and legumes can effectively fix the protein deficiency stigmatized in many plant-derived diets. The naturally lower caloric density and levels of harmful cholesterol in a vegetarian meal plan also make consumers significantly less susceptible to arthritis, cancer, and other cardiometabolic risks such as stroke, diabetes, and obesity.

Despite these admittedly legitimate defenses, a vegetarian lifestyle is unaffordable for many people because it is often more expensive than animal-based diets. Many dieticians, in fact, have suggested that fruits and vegetables, while containing most essential nutrients, are deficient in specific vitamins and minerals such as B12 and iron. Viable solutions to such insufficiencies would be either consuming more food or utilizing vitamin supplements, and neither option is financially feasible for individuals living with monetary constraints. Average citizens, as a result, may be economically compelled to opt for cheaper packaged foods that are higher in calories, sugar, saturated fat, and sodium to ensure sufficient energy provision within their budget, thus, rendering the nutritional benefits of vegetarianism irrelevant context.

In conclusion, a vegetarian diet is relatively prohibitive for particular classes due to the expense, although it indeed satisfies an individual’s vital dietary needs. In my opinion, it is a fundamental human right to make certain lifestyle choices such as diet.

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Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Unemployment and poverty are indisputably the major reasons of crime. Providing vocational education to prisoners inside penitentiaries would definitely reduce joblessness and destitution. However, I disagree with the given statement that providing education to inmates is the best way to reduce crime. lt is a good method, but there are other better methods to curb crime.

To begin with, the main purpose of prisons is not just to punish criminals, but also to rehabilitate them lf this rehabilitation part is not looked into, then majority of criminals would re-offend after coming out of prison. This is because such criminals are not accepted by the general public, and nobody likes to give them jobs. Therefore, just educating them is not enough to reduce crime. The government must ensure that they are given jobs to fend for their basic needs.

Another important fact, which has to be considered, is that these penitentiaries are very costly to maintain. When these inmates are taught vocational skills such as carpentry, a lot of infrastructure is required. While all this expenditure may help a few prisoners, it may be futile in case of those hard-core criminals who are not in there because of illiteracy or unemployment. They just have a criminal bent of mind. They would never become useful members of society even after such education. Rigorous imprisonment would be better to deter potential criminals.

The best way to reduce crime would be to never let it happen in the first place. Laws should be enforced so strictly that people should think a hundred times before resorting to crime. Compulsory primary education should be given to all children. Youth unemployment should be dealt with by creating job openings or by encouraging entrepreneur ship.

To conclude, it can be reiterated that while educating the prisoners and trying to make them self-sufficient would be good to reduce crime, the better methods would be to stop crime from happening in the first place.

Sample 2:

The relationship between education and crime has recently been a subject of significant debate. It is often argued that individuals with a low level of education are more likely to engage in criminal activities. As a result, there is a prevailing belief that offering education to prisoners could be an effective strategy for reducing crime rates. While this perspective has its merits, I am inclined to believe that while education in prisons is valuable, it should be accompanied by a comprehensive approach to address the complex factors contributing to criminal behavior.

One strong argument in favor of providing education to inmates is the potential for breaking the cycle of crime. Studies consistently demonstrate a correlation between limited educational opportunities and criminal behavior. Equipping prisoners with skills, knowledge, and qualifications makes them more likely to reintegrate into society as productive citizens upon release. This can help them secure employment and build a stable life, reducing the likelihood of returning to criminal activities. Moreover, an educated individual is better equipped to make informed decisions, thereby reducing impulsive behavior that often leads to crime.

However, solely relying on education as the primary solution to reducing crime is overly simplistic. Crime is a complex issue with multifaceted causes, including socioeconomic factors, mental health, substance abuse, and environmental influences. Failing to address these underlying issues comprehensively may render the impact of education in prisons limited. For instance, a person struggling with substance addiction might require rehabilitation services in addition to education to address the root causes of their criminal behavior.

A more effective approach would involve integrating education with other forms of support and rehabilitation. Instead of viewing education as a standalone solution, it should be considered part of a larger framework aimed at holistic inmate transformation. Comprehensive rehabilitation programs addressing mental health, addiction, job training, and family reintegration would contribute to more successful reentry into society. Moreover, focusing on restorative justice principles could encourage prisoners to take responsibility for their actions, making them more accountable and less likely to re-offend.

In conclusion, the correlation between education and crime cannot be denied, and providing education to prisoners is undoubtedly a step in the right direction. However, it should be considered as part of a broader strategy. Crime reduction requires a multi-pronged approach encompassing education, rehabilitation, mental health support, and reintegration programs. By addressing the underlying causes of criminal behavior, society can create a more lasting impact, ultimately fostering a safer and more productive community for everyone.

Sample 3:

Recently, crime has been increasing out of control. Some hold the idea that in order to deter crimes, criminals should be given proper education while in prison. Personally, I partly share the same view with this.

It is my belief that nurture, not nature, is responsible for malignant and antisocial behaviours. That is to say, everybody is born with good personalities and what turns some into criminals is parental neglect and lack of education. Many studies have shown that children who are not supervised by their parents on a regular basis are many times more likely to go off the rails, commit acts of selfishness or to behave aggressively towards others. This rationalizes why I think a good number of prisoners after being released will not repeat their offences if they are given an education.

In addition, while being in jail, inmates have plenty of time which can be misspent. For example, some of them spend their time gambling with their cellmates or accessing materials with objectionable contents. Thus, giving them the opportunity to be educated translates to the reduction of time, which can be potentially frittered away or used for malicious purposes.

Nevertheless, there are objections to this perspective. Those who oppose it claim that the potential program of giving education to criminals can cost a huge amount of money from the Government budget. However, considering the result it can deliver in the long run as far as societal stability is concerned, this program is not a waste of taxpayers’ money.

What has been discussed above has effectively corroborated my view that education can reduce participation in criminal activities, and inmates should receive an education while serving time.

Sample 4:

Crime is one of the serious problems prevailing worldwide, and it has been increasing at an exorbitant rate in recent years. As a result, every country is seeking to deal with this critical issue. Some people believe that longer prison sentences will assist in curbing crime, while others disagree and argue that there are better ways to deal with the issue of incarceration, such as education and providing ways of earning money, that are far more successful and beneficial. I find myself in agreement with the view that incarcerated persons should have access to education and employability skills.

To begin with, the crime rate in low-literacy countries is comparatively greater than in literate countries because illiterate people are unable to find work, so they resort to criminal activities to supplement their income, resulting in getting caught and being put behind bars. Since they have plenty of time in jail, they can use it to learn a course or a skill and become educated, which will help them after they have served their sentence. These offenders’ minds will be less inclined to engage in illegal activities if they spend their free time learning.

Furthermore, the convicts should be educated about the alternative ways of earning their daily bread such as sewing, plumbing, furniture refinishing, carpentry, cooking, doing laundry, gardening, packaging, painting, etc. In this way, the prisoners can get a chance to learn and work while carrying out their sentences, which will also help them to sustain themselves after they’ve completed their term. Employability skills and basic understanding of howw to make money will help offenders gain confidence in their ability to become a good person and reintegrate with the society. Thus, educating criminals provides a number of benefits.

However, some people opine that offenders should face longer jail sentences since this phenomenon will invoke fear in other convicts, stopping them from committing crimes again.

To sum up, the inability to find work after serving a jail sentence is one of the key factors that drive convicts to commit crimes again; however, I believe that if these criminals are provided with access to education and work skills in prison, then their life could take a turn towards a better and crime-free future. Thus, education will provide the offenders with the right direction to live a life free of crime.

Sample 5:

Recently, crime has been increasing out of control. Some hold the idea that in order to deter crimes, criminals should be given proper education while in prison. Personally, I partly share the

same view with this.

It is my belief thatnurture, not nature, is responsible for malignant and antisocial behaviors. That is to say, everybody is born with good personalities and what turns some into criminals is parental neglect and lack of education. Many studies have shown that children who are not supervised by their parents on a regular basis are many times more likely to go off the rails, commit acts of selfishness or to behave aggressively towards others. This rationalizes why I think a good number of prisoners after being released will not repeat their offences if they are given education.

In addition, while being in jail, inmates have plenty of time which can be misspent. For example, some of them spend their time gambling with their cellmates or accessing materials with objectionable contents. Thus, giving them the opportunity to be educated translates to the reduction of time which can be potentially frittered away or used for malicious purposes.

Nevertheless, there are objections to this perspective. Those who oppose claim that the potential program of giving education to criminals can cost a huge amount of money from the Government budget. However, considering the result it can deliver in the long run as far as societal stability is concerned, this program is not a waste of taxpayers' money.

What has been discussed above has effectively corroborated my view that education can reduce participation in criminal activities and inmates should receive education while serving time.

Sample 6:

Criminals are those who have committed crimes or are legally convicted of some crime. The primary reason for people becoming offenders is a lack of education. Many criminologists have established the relation between unschooled children at a young age and delinquency. According to reports, only 32 percent of U.S prisoners were high schooled. This directly hints at the correlation between the two markers.

To begin with, if we look deeply into the formative years of children. It is the school that plays a vital role in creating a mindset that is molded in the right direction. Schools provide insights into the detrimental effects of committing a transgression. This enables children to learn the right behavior. With higher levels of education. Their worldview broadens and their conscience develops even further. Many schools carry out debates and discussions to understand children’s take on crimes and criminals to enhance their understanding. Criminal books that contain case studies help students understand the gravity of the offense. The countermeasures which include strict punishments like lifetime imprisonment. Or even capital punishment creates a socially appropriate behaviour in the minds of learners. Moreover, formal schooling also educates pupils to become disciplined, self-reliant, patient, and risk-averse over the years.

Since education empowers a person not just mentally but financially too, it causes people to behave in a cultured way. Mostly, it is the dire need for money that has given rise to thieves, looters and robbers. Education would give them financial empowerment. In other cases, where crime is committed primarily to seek revenge for personal reasons. Education can act as a vessel that will blossom the flower of peace of harmony in the minds of people. The offenders who are already serving their sentence can be given a second chance at a better life. By enabling them to learn the skills required to survive the outside world. For example, in the USA, the crime rate has decreased by 99% since the government started focusing on the education of offenders.

To conclude, a major cause of crime is lack of financial assistance and at the core of absence of financial independence is lack of education. Therefore, if education can be made to reach the masses not just at primary and secondary level. But higher education levels too would empower people to find a reputed job and self sustain, thereby reducing crime rates across the globe.

Sample 7:

Crime is not just the result of a lack of resources but a lack of the right mindset. The primary reason for the continuous increase in the number of offenders is the lack of the right kind of education. Most of the criminals are those who have not attended formal schooling. Thereby closing the doors of opportunity for themselves and choosing crime as their means of survival.

Education is the round development of a learner not just in mind and body but the soul as well. The goal of education is not just to develop the cognitive abilities of humans but also aims at fulfilling the affective domain. In the formative years when children are educated about socially appropriate behavior, it plays a vital role in growing them into responsible young adults. Most offenders who are currently serving their sentence have one common thing among them. No matter the nature of their crime, they all had very little to no education. This hints at the direct relationship between crime and education. A country like New Zealand or Iceland ranks lowest in the crime rate not just because of the size of the population but also due to education. These countries impart compulsory education to children from the age of 6-16 and are funded by the state. Countries where education burns a hole in the pocket witness a higher number of criminals.

Certain steps can be taken to promote education among the people. For example, education must be made compulsory not just till secondary level but also at degree level too. This would enable the learners to be self-sufficient and find a reputable job thereby providing financial independence. Schools must include criminal books in their curriculum as exposure to them would make pupils grow into moral beings. Convicts who are serving their sentences in prison must be taught skills so that they stand a better chance in society when they are free.

To conclude, education must be given importance if a country has to prosper while ensuring the security of its people. Early education along with a higher level of education must be promoted among the people to reduce financial dependence. Besides these, strict laws should be implemented to curb crimes and discourage criminals.

Sample 8:

Crime has become a major issue in many countries and in recent times, it has increased many folds in several countries. The major reason that studies have found for it is the lack of education. Murders, looting, theft etc are the result of lack of financial independence. And it is education that can truly liberate people from the clutches of poverty and misbehavior.

To begin with, the early years of education play a vital role in determining the personality of a child. It is in the formative years that a child can either show premature signs of psychopathy. Or anti-social traits which if not corrected can further lead to transforming them into serious offenders in adulthood. Therefore, children at a very young age must be educated with a quality education that can help them create awareness and stimulate moral thinking. The school must introduce books that contain case studies to acquaint students with the aftermath of committing crimes. If the students are educated about the harsh punishments that offenders undergo, they will prevent themselves from indulging in juvenile delinquency.

Researchers have found education induced a reduction in crime rates. Learners who were compelled to stay in school longer than they would choose voluntarily. Resulted in an overall boost in not just the gross educational rate of the countries. But also reduced crime rates at a drastic rate thereby proving that education is the key to minimize crime and criminal mindsets. Criminals who are serving their punishment can also be allowed to educate themselves. Countries such as Singapore which allows prisoners to pursue their education during their period of retribution. Show lower crime rates than other parts of the world.

To conclude, education can make people self-reliant and financially independent. Allowing them to choose what is right not just for themselves but for society as well. Thereby developing themselves into responsible social beings. Exposure to education must be brought in the early years and should be continued till people attain higher education. That makes them capable enough to find a reputed source of earnings.

Sample 9:

Education for offenders during imprisonment as a method to reduce the rate of crime has evolved as a major topic of concern in today's society. While I agree that such a solution is effective to reduce crime, I am convinced that it is far from being the best method and there are many better ways of reducing crime.

I accept that education for prisoners may contribute to the reduction of the crime rate. The primary reason is that such a form of education could provide offenders with the working skills that are essential when they return to the community. With improved job prospects, prisoners may therefore earn a living after leaving prison and are less likely to commit a crime again. Another significant reason is that education could show the offenders that they are still valued by society. As a consequence, they may feel an enhanced sense of humanity and community and become better citizens after their prison years. These people may then inspire many other people to live without crime.

However, I am firmly of the opinion that education for offenders is not the best solution to reduce crime. This form of education is offered only to those who have committed a crime, and therefore has far less preventive value, compared to other stronger solutions. For example, severe punishments such as longer imprisonment for criminals could deter criminal acts by other members of the public who have the intention of carrying out a crime. There are also other educational methods that may have a stronger and more long-lasting impact on the reduction of crime. An excellent example of this is crime education at school, which helps equip students with the necessary knowledge about crime and crime prevention. This measure is undeniably a more sustainable crime-fighting solution than education for criminals.

To conclude, I firmly believe that although educating prisoners is an effective way to reduce crime, it is not the best solution, as there are more preventive and sustainable measures such as crime education at school and stricter punishments for criminals.

Sample 10:

The intricate relationship between criminal behavior and the level of education has been the subject of numerous research and debates. The assertion that the provision of education within the prison can make a huge difference in mitigating crime rates by equipping inmates with the requisite skills necessary for employment upon their release is a view that I heartedly agree with.

To begin with, education serves as a potential tool that can transform the lives of many individuals. And it extends beyond providing people with vocational skills that can foster the development of critical thinking, empathy, and self-esteem in them. These attributes play an essential role in contributing to one’s personal growth and can help people make more informed and beneficial life choices. Thereby it can assist in reducing the likelihood of lapses. Besides, unemployment plays a large role in the path to successful reintegration of ex-convicts into society. By facilitating access to education within prison environments, inmates can be equipped with marketable skills so that they can increase their chances of employability. This can not only smoothen their transition back into society but also reduce their chances of resorting to criminal activities as a means of survival.

However, it is important to acknowledge that while education can play a pivotal role in eliminating crime, it is not a universal remedy. A myriad of other factors such as social inequality, substance abuse, and mental health issues also fuel criminal tendencies and require simultaneous attention. Therefore, a comprehensive approach that addresses all these factors, rather than focusing solely on education, is crucial for a sustainable reduction in crime rates.

In conclusion, while the relationship between crime and education is complex, there is substantial evidence to suggest that providing education in prisons can be an effective strategy for reducing crime rates. It not only equips inmates with the skills necessary for employment but also promotes personal development, both of which are crucial for their successful assimilation into society. Therefore, investing in prison education programs should be a priority for policymakers aiming to reduce crime rates and create safer communities.

Sample 11:

It is a popular belief that educating criminals while they are serving their sentence in jail is the best solution to bring down the crime rate since studies have proven that the literacy rate among criminals is low. I absolutely agree with this line of thought as education can make the felons' employment worthy and prevent them from resorting to crime to earn their livelihood.

First and foremost, most of the individuals who break the law do so with the intention of making money to meet their basic needs. They are pushed onto the path of crime as they are either illiterate or not literate enough to get jobs that will give them the security of a steady income. For instance, a study conducted by a leading research center in 2022 revealed that over 60% of lawbreakers did not have any criminal intent when they committed their first offense. It was done with the sole purpose of feeding themselves and their families. Therefore, educating criminals to enable them to get jobs that will be their steady source of remuneration is a sound solution to bring down the crime rate. 

Moreover, literacy in itself will be a deterrent to crime. Education brings along a sense of maturity and understanding that is lacking in illiterate individuals.  Education can transform the offenders and their thought processes. For instance, once educated, a prisoner, upon release, is less likely to go back to the path of crime. Such individuals find it easier to reintegrate into society and lead productive lives by making positive contributions to society.

To conclude, education has transformative powers which, if imparted to criminals as a part of their rehabilitation programs, can result in a safer society. It is a prudent choice to ensure employment and smooth integration into society for the lawbreakers.  

Sample 12:

In this competitive era, to survive in this world, individuals need to earn money. Without that, they will starve to death. To make money, people choose different paths. Some individuals get a proper education after getting a stable job. While people who want to earn fast money do some criminal activities. This is because they are not educated. I agree with this point of view. A person with an educational background knows the struggle of making money, and he or she can’t break the law to earn fast money.

To begin with, education affects the person’s mind; not only can he or she make hard cash with intelligence. Which they develop during their academic period, but it also helps them to make decisions in difficult situations. Moreover, anyone can get a job with knowledge, so they don’t need to commit illegitimate offences to make money. For instance, as per India Today’s survey, people who broke the law at a young age, after they were incarcerated and had a chance to get an education there, changed their lives and became successful individuals without breaking the law.

Furthermore, a person with academic experience has a sense of fear. This means they know the laws and punishments for corruption, so they think after making a move. In addition, lack of education is a fundamental problem; without it, a person can’t survive in this technological world. despite having money, if a person does not know. He might be stuck on what he can do with that money.

In conclusion, education is a pillar of people’s lives and an essential requirement of everyone’s lives, so I think knowledge is more important than money.

Sample 13:

As recent studies indicate that poor education level can result in an increase in crime rate, and in order to reduce it, providing relevant education to criminals while they are in prison is crucial. I agree with this view as I believe that it can help criminals readjust in the society.

To begin with, providing education to prisoners is not necessary. Firstly, some researchers claim that criminals commit a crime not because their education level is poor, but as it is their nature. Even though the government provides vocational education in order to help them to adjust in society, it would not be as effective as people think. In addition, it is difficult to estimate the results out of this measure. Although the government will spend a large amount of money to educate prisoners, it is unpredictable whether it would be effective or not. Therefore, implementing such policy can be a waste of state money and efforts.

However, educating prisoners while they are in prison is considerable. First of all, many criminals reoffend when they leave prison. If they receive relevant education, they will be more encouraged to find a job after serving prison sentence. In fact, this measure is on trial in numerous countries; criminals receive vocational education such as manufacturing products, bread making and so on. Moreover, if they can find a job after receiving education, they are less likely to commit repeated crimes to fit them into the society. Thus, educating criminals can be the most effective way to tackle crime issues.

In conclusion, I believe that it is important to educate prisoners vocationally as they will be able to find a job when they leave prison. The government should invest their budgets in educating them to help them readjust into the society.

Sample 14:

It is generally observed that criminals are either illiterate or they have a low level of education. Therefore, it is thought that the most effective way to tackle crime is to provide education to criminals in prisons. While providing education in prisons can reduce crime to some extent, there are other better solutions to lessen crime.

Admittedly, providing education to criminals can certainly reduce crime. When criminals get some education, they would be able to get jobs after leaving prisons. Thus, they would be able to fulfil their basic needs, and they will not be forced to resort to crime. Education would also increase the self-confidence of convicts and would make them more open-minded and respectful.

However, I believe providing education in prisons would not be very successful in reducing crime. Firstly, the main reason why criminals commit crimes again and again is not the lack of education, but the inability to secure good jobs. This is because most people avoid hiring criminals and there is a need to change society's attitude towards criminals. Government could also facilitate this change through incentives like tax rebates to businesses and companies, which hire convicts.

Secondly, education in prisons may stop repeat offences, but it will not impact the first-time crimes. Hence, rather than focusing on education in prisons, the government should focus on primary education, so that the overall illiteracy in society comes down and even first-time crimes are reduced. Finally, the link between illiteracy and crime is overstated as some of the developed countries with high literacy rates have higher crime rates than developing and underdeveloped countries. So, focusing on education to address crime may not have the desired results.

In conclusion, although prison education would reduce crime to some extent, I believe that it is not the best method of reducing offences in the society.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

There is an ongoing debate about whether a person is successful or not has everything to do with luck. I strongly oppose this statement for various reasons.

Firstly, this belief is not entirely accurate in multiple ways. Many people believe that natural talent, which is a form of luck, that makes a person successful. However, there is only so much that innate talent can do for you if hard work is not present. For example, students who are extremely bright kids score poorly on the college entrance exam or do not contribute to anything significant in their careers. Moreover, many people think luck plays a role in helping people build their connections. However, I believe that partnerships and opportunities come only to those who genuinely put effort into maintaining that connection or grasping that opportunity. For example, there are multiple encounters that a person has in their lives, but to turn those encounters into personal relationships depends on one’s communication skills.

Secondly, even if luck does play a part in one’s success, believing that success relates to it can be dangerous. People who have this mindset tend to beat themselves up all the time or procrastinate in accomplishing their goals. Because they think everything correlates with luck, they will blame themselves for not being destined to gain success or spend time waiting for the perfect moment. Moreover, people who believe in this correlation also downplay others’ achievements. For example, many people tend to disregard others’ hard work or efforts the moment they find out that those people come from a rich background or are naturally gifted.

In conclusion, I oppose the statement that whether or not a person can achieve their goals depends on luck. I believe that this statement has no sound foundation to it and is a dangerous misconception to have.

Sample 2:

Many individuals hold the belief that luck significantly contributes to the achievement of one's goals. Although it is true that luck plays a role in success, I contend that hard work and patience are far more crucial factors determining whether individuals accomplish their objectives.

On the one hand, I acknowledge the importance of luck in facilitating success. For instance, individuals born into affluent families often enjoy privileged access to quality education, which enhances their prospects of securing promising careers. Consequently, those from moneyed backgrounds tend to have higher chances of success compared to those who are not as fortunate. Additionally, a successful business venture is often considered a matter of luck. For example, individuals who start a business just before an unexpected economic downturn or engage with untrustworthy partners are more likely to encounter failures. Conversely, those who fortuitously encounter the right people at the right time often find success in their investments.

However, I firmly believe that hard work and patience are the most critical factors on the path to success. Firstly, substantial effort and unwavering dedication are necessary to accomplish significant achievements. Take, for instance, Michael Jordan, who became one of the greatest basketball players in the world through rigorous training, including shooting hundreds of jump shots every day during his summers. Secondly, the attainment of goals requires time and persistence; overnight success is a rarity. Consider Thomas Edison, who failed a thousand times before successfully inventing the world-changing light bulb. If he had relied solely on luck rather than exercising patience, he may not have achieved such eminence as an inventor.

In conclusion, the influence of luck on success cannot be dismissed. However, I maintain that hard work and patience hold greater importance in the pursuit of goals.

Sample 3:

The notion that success is mainly attributed to a stroke a luck has been a subject of controversy. In my opinion, I am far from wholeheartedly agreeing with this statement because I firmly believe that individual achievements are the result of perseverance and personal abilities.

There is no denying that being lucky can sometimes lead to unexpected accomplishments. For instance, consider the case of Archimedes, one of the most renowned ancient Greek physicists. In his attempt to address the King's doubt regarding the purity of his golden crown, this great scholar fortuitously came up with the answer when he found himself floating in the bath. Therefore, thanks to his chance discovery, Archimedes' principle cemented a cornerstone for subsequent empirical experiments in physics and the overall flourishing of this field.

However, it is important to recognise that achievement solely based on fortuitousness is inherently unpredictable. The capricious nature of luck means that it cannot be considered a reliable strategy for individuals striving to accomplish their goals. Meanwhile, there is a compelling argument for more controllable intrinsic factors, with persistence, knowledge, and skills being the driving force behind individual attainments. One illustration of this is the game-changing breakthrough by Pierre and Marie Curie. While radioactivity was initially discovered accidentally, had it not been for their expertise in chemistry and physics, let alone their strong will to uncover the answer, radiation and its revolutionary medical applications in cancer treatment would not have emerged. Similarly, in today's circumstances, a student is likely to fail a university entrance examination if they lack sufficient subject-related knowledge and exam skills. Equally important is the perseverant attitude maintained throughout the studying process, regardless of past failures.

In conclusion, while it is evident that luck plays a role in goal achievement, success relying on fortuitousness alone seems unpredictable. Alternatively, it is primarily the result of individual qualities, involving determination, knowledge, and skills. Hence, I find the assumption that successfully attaining aims is solely a matter of luck only appealing to some extent.

Sample 4:

How influential luck is to a person's success is an interesting topic of debate. While some believe that luck is the primary factor, I am inclined to disagree with this point of view, as hard work is also a significant contributor to people’s achievement.

The idea that luck is the chief determinant related to accomplishing somebody’s goal is not without merit. It might be easier to reach success if people were born into fortunate circumstances. Anderson Cooper, who is one of the most critically acclaimed broadcast journalists and recognizable faces on TV today, is a descendant of the elite Vanderbilt family. This gave him access to better education and resources, allowing him to attain the career he has had. Furthermore, some people may be lucky enough to bloom at the right time, which can give them a pioneer’s advantage in their field. Arnold Schwarzenegger was one of the most popular action movie stars decades ago, thanks to his imposing physique at his prime, yet nowadays, hardly any actor can make a career out of action movie roles.

However, luck is far from the be-all and end-all in a person's success. I would consider diligence and dedication to be more instrumental, as they lay the foundation for fortune to do the most work. Though Arnold’s aforementioned example can be interpreted as one of somebody who peaked at the right time, it should be noted that he had already been a successful bodybuilder by the start of his acting career. Arnold, undoubtedly, had to put time in on uplifting himself before his talent could be noticed. Had he not strived to be the best from the beginning, his life would not have turned out the way it had. Taking this point into consideration, it is clear that fortune is not the greatest contributor to somebody's accomplishment.

In my opinion, while luck plays a role in producing success, hard work and determination are ultimately essential. People who seek to achieve an aim in life should remember to make tangible effort toward their goals before hoping to be favored by Lady Luck.

Sample 5:

The debate whether luck is the primary determinant of success in achieving targets has been heated constantly. My position is that hard work and determination are far more important than luck, while we must not consider luck as the main precursor of the attainment of one’s goals.

I advocate the notion that the role of being diligent and determined is more significant than luck. Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventors in the 20th century, is an excellent example of such a notion. He conducted numerous experiments with the filament until the finest light bulb was produced; and his hard work, rather than luck, was acknowledged by all the human races. Another clear evidence of this notion is the case of Nguyen Ngoc Ky. This disabled man could not write by hand, but he was determined enough to teach himself to write with his foot. The fact that he would then become one of the greatest teachers in the history of education in Vietnam provides a concrete foundation that even with bad luck, determination could result in goal achievement.

By contrast, I believe the saying that fortune has a major part to play is just a fallacy. One clear reason is that although there may have been a number of people reaching their goals with good luck, such good luck in most cases only comes to people who have worked hard. Take Mendeleev as an example. As a research chemist, he worked tirelessly for a few decades, until one day in his dream, the complete arrangement of the elements appeared. we could ascribe the appearance of this arrangement to luck, but no one could deny the extreme effort that Mendeleev had exerted. Another clear reason for my belief is that luck could only lead people to short-term achievements, and there is nothing to ascertain that it would continue to exist in the long run. The over-reliance on good fortune, as a result, would prevent people from achieving their long-term or life-long aims.

In brief, I think the importance of luck in determining goal attainment is overstated, while there are much more significant factors to consider, namely hard work and determination.

Sample 6:

People have different views about what elements contribute the most to a person’s success. While I accept that luck does have an important role in helping people reach their targets, I would argue that hard work and determination are much more crucial factors leading to the achievement of an individual.

On the one hand, I agree that luck can be an important factor. Some people are fortunate enough to be born in a wealthy family, which allows them to have better education or to easily start their own business without having to borrow money from someone else. As a result, these people tend to have better opportunities to succeed than those coming from poor families. Furthermore, some individuals are lucky to be given great talents which others do not have. For example, Mozart was able to play music when he was very young, or Lionel Messi already had great football skills when he was born.

However, I would argue that although luck can be necessary, it is not the most crucial factor leading to success. Firstly, people need to work really hard and put much effort into their jobs if they want to be successful. For instance, before becoming one of the best football players in the world, Cristiano Ronaldo had to go through intense training hours every day for many years. Secondly, a person is less likely to reach his targets if he does not have determination. On the way leading to success, there might be many difficulties, and people need to keep moving forward to overcome those challenges.

In conclusion, while I agree that luck is important in helping people become successful, I believe that hard work and determination are the most important elements.

Sample 7:

It is argued that some people’s success is mostly attributable to luck instead of their own hard work. However, I completely disagree with this opinion.

I believe that only determined and industrious people will be successful in whatever they do. Hard-working people usually attain their goals. For instance, Steve Jobs spent thousands of hours coding and experimenting to bring out the great Macintosh operating system that we use nowadays. Another clear case of success through determination is Nick Vujicic, an Australian motivational speaker, who suffered from a rare disorder which resulted in the absence of four limbs. Despite not having any hands or legs, Vujicic earned a bachelor’s degree with a double major in accountancy and financial planning; he had his own family, and now he travels around the world to inspire people as a motivational speaker. And the famous KFC Restaurant founder. After all the struggles is his life, Col. Sanders started his own business at the age of 65, and his age has never been a matter to have his own success.  

On the other hand, by contrast, luck is only a small factor in determining one’s achievement. Firstly, people cannot solely be dependent on luck to become successful. If a student does not study for an exam, chances are he or she will fail, no matter how lucky he or she may be. Secondly, luck only contributes to short-term fortune. For instance, a person who wins a lottery is definitely lucky because winning a lottery does not require you to do anything to earn it. It purely depends on luck; yet he or she cannot win the lottery for the rest of his or her life.

In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that in order to achieve objectives in life, one must be extremely determined and hard-working to follow his or her passion till the end. 

Sample 8:

The influence of luck on personal success has been a subject of debate and speculation. While some argue that luck plays a pivotal role in determining the outcomes of our endeavors, I firmly disagree with this stance as I think that there are more essential elements.

Those who advocate for the role of luck in one's journey towards success may have some valid arguments. They may well argue that random chance and external circumstances can certainly impact the trajectory of an individual's life. It is therefore reasonable to state that unexpected opportunities can sometimes play a part in opening doors to success. This was the case of J.K. Rowling as a small publishing house decided to take a chance on her book, and its subsequent success propelled Rowling to literary stardom. Had she not encountered this stroke of luck, her manuscript may have remained undiscovered. However, relying solely on luck as the primary driver of achievement overlooks the intricate interplay of personal qualities and deliberate actions.

In addition to luck, there are two crucial factors that hold more significance in shaping one's success. Chief among these is that individual attributes such as determination, resilience, and adaptability contribute significantly to overcoming challenges and achieving goals. These qualities enable individuals to persevere in the face of adversity, learn from failures, and adapt their strategies accordingly. Secondly, persistent effort, characterized by consistent hard work, dedication, and a growth mindset, is essential in honing skills, acquiring knowledge, and seizing opportunities. It is through sustained effort that individuals cultivate expertise and demonstrate the strength required to overcome obstacles on their path to success.

In conclusion, while luck undoubtedly has a role to play in shaping outcomes, it is not the sole determinant of personal success. The belief that luck alone can make or break an individual's achievements undermines the importance of personal attributes and continuous effort.

Sample 9:

Some are of the belief that luck is the determining factor when accomplishing a given goal. In my opinion, luck is pivotal in individual situations, but its importance decreases over larger sample sizes.

The main argument for the primacy of luck is highly visible, singular examples. This translates to extremely successful individuals. For instance, Bill Gates and Steve Jobs were exceptionally intelligent and hard-working but they would never have become leading figures in history if they had not grown up in California in the 1970s during the computer boom. It is likely they would still be successful regardless of their era and place of birth, but the extent of influence would be more limited. This same principle applies for the average individual as there are moments in one’s life that are best credited to good luck or an advantageous situation.

However, the significance of luck decreases over time. Take, for example, an average person. They may be born into a wealthy family and have a good start in life; they are lucky from the onset. Nonetheless, if they are not hard-working, there is a strong chance they will not be able to accomplish their goals in life. The reverse is true of someone born into a bad situation. There are exceptions, where the situation is dire or the period in history precludes success, but most people who apply themselves over a long period of time will ‘make their own luck’. This is because as sample sizes become larger, the influence of variance naturally decreases. It still requires some extraordinary luck to attain huge aims but more modest ones result from repeated action rather than fortune.

In conclusion, luck is decisive in particular instances but not more generally. It is therefore more important to place greater value on working hard in the long-term than on the off-chance of being lucky.

Sample 10:

It is a widespread belief that the achievement of one's goals primarily depends on chance. However, I strongly disagree with this notion as it overlooks the undeniable role of hard work and determination in attaining success. In this essay, I will elaborate on how one's efforts and personal qualities play a crucial role in realizing their aspirations.

To begin with, it is undeniable that relentless effort is the key to success. Individuals who have reached remarkable heights in their respective fields, such as Bill Gates and Elon Musk, have devoted countless hours towards their goals. Bill Gates, for instance, dedicated himself to the computer industry, investing time and energy into his company on a daily basis. Similarly, Elon Musk actively engages with his engineers to construct rockets for his enterprise. These exceptional individuals exemplify the correlation between persistent effort and the accomplishment of their objectives. It is evident that luck alone is insufficient to propel individuals towards achievement; a significant amount of effort must be invested.

Moreover, success is not solely determined by luck, but also by the possession of essential qualities and traits. Even if luck were to favor someone, they would still need to make conscious efforts in order to capitalize on it. Developing skills and characteristics relevant to one's goals is crucial. For instance, in areas such as business, education, and building relationships, individuals must concentrate their efforts and develop the necessary traits. In essence, the opportunity to achieve one's goals is directly proportional to the amount of effort exerted by an individual.

In conclusion, the attainment of one's objectives necessitates a focus on individual effort and the cultivation of essential traits. It is evident that every successful person has invested substantial time and energy in their endeavors. While luck may play a minor role, it is insignificant compared to the monumentous impact of one's efforts. Without doubt, reaching one's goals is only possible through persistent and dedicated hard work.

Sample 11:

Many people claim that luck plays the most instrumental role in helping them achieve their goals in life. Personally, I vehemently disagree with this notion as hard work, determination and perseverance are more important factors than luck for attaining different goals.

There are multifarious reasons to strengthen my viewpoint. Firstly, there are several people who despite all odds reach the pinnacle of success through sheer dedication and hard work. For instance, late APJ Abdul Kalam faced so much hardship in his childhood; however, he conquered all formidable challenges through untiring perseverance and grit. Needless to say, he achieved whatever he aimed at during his presidential tenure and in his scientific career. 

Secondly, anything which is achieved just through luck does not last long unless achievers put in diligent efforts to sustain it. To illustrate, people open businesses for their children; nevertheless, their businesses only grow if these children devote time and show dedication towards their work. For example, people may come into a lot of money due to sheer luck; however, if they do not know how to invest that money, they will soon squander it.

Lastly, there are people who are born with physical disabilities but still they have a success story to tell. Take, for instance, Helen Keller who was deaf and blind, but with her determination and unparalleled efforts she became an eminent author and political activist. Although she was not born with fortunes, she fought against all odds and became an epitome of hard work and determination.

To conclude, I firmly reiterate that luck does not play a major role in achieving success and factors such as perseverance, commitment and dedication are more imperative in attaining goals.

Sample 12:

Numerous people claiming that those who become successful had a few unfair advantages in life. They even insisted that individual’s good fortune is purely correlated to luck instead of great merit. I completely disagree with this opinion, as I believe that success is the result of individual’s hard work, talent and determination.

To have been born in a rich family is an enormous stroke of luck, but to sustain and maintain that level of success requires enormous amount of talent and hard work. Some accomplished individuals believe that in order to achieve someone’s desires, a person should pose a brilliant intelligence and extraordinary ability above others. For example, intelligent people are more likely achieved higher education, employed in a multi-national company, and received higher pay checks. They prospered because most of them focuses on growing their core strengths and take up demanding jobs rather than rely on any significant extent of luck to strike them.

In contrast, there are plenty of instances that people who are less intelligent and poses a mediocre talent but, in some way, become wealthy and successful. Some people think, anyone can become successful no matter what an individual’s background or race. But only the luckiest people end up on the highest peak of success. It shows that the most successful people in the world are not necessarily the brightest and most talented but the luckiest. However, if people will only anticipate for luck and forget to act, the opportunity is going to be wasted.

In conclusion, good fortune probably will take part in someone’s success in life but great talent, hard work normally the key factors in success. Therefore, I disagree that a persons’ achievement is merely due to luck, luck may place us in an advantageous position, yet we still need skills and effort to think critically and stretch our ingenuity. 

Sample 13:

People have different views about the decisive factors to attaining set goals. While I accept that fortune has a role to play in people's accomplishments, I also claim that without effort and determination, people are unable to achieve and maintain their success for a long run.

On the one hand, being lucky does contribute to some individuals attain their desired outcomes. Being born in a wealthy family undoubtedly paves the way for people to access a better academic base and financial resources to fulfill their ambitions. However, others may struggle to place these foundations for themselves without a sense of wealth from their family background. It is also worth mentioning that many are blessed with certain innate talents or abilities which help to remove obstacles to reaching their objectives. If it were not for these gifted capacities, those with intensive punishing training would not ever reach a comparable level especially in fields that being naturally talented can be more highly appreciated than trained skills such as painting or music composing.

On the other hand, even a streak of luck cannot ensure triumph when there is no constant sweat and dedication. An unexpected fluke might bring sudden fame and wealth, but all will fade away with the flow of time when energy and time are not invested to notch up and attain the stretch of endeavour. An example for the point made would be those lottery winners who recklessly spend the fortune earned at ease will finally return their previous status without reaching any further destinations within the matter of time. Even with provided foundation, people born with silver spoon can easily demolish the whole fortune mounted over family generations if they do not cultivate needed skills and knowledge.

In conclusion, although a run of luck can contribute to people achieving their desired status, but it is certainly not the key to a guaranteed wanted results when effort and dedication are not present.

Sample 14:

It is argued that the individual’s destiny may or may not play a key role in accomplishing specific objectives. Some will agree with the point that fate is significant in achieving targets or endeavours; however, some will oppose and will stick to their sheer talent and hard work to achieve success. Both luck and hard work are essential in attributing goals.

On the one hand, we strive to achieve goals by working day and night. We give our best, and with much determination, we sometimes sacrifice our sleep and enjoyment to get what we want. If we have worked hard, no challenge can stop us as we know our contribution inside out, and we are well aware of the solutions and how to tackle them. Sometimes, we do get immediate results with good luck, but to have extraordinary success, we need to go the extra mile with great perseverance. For instance, we plan on making money through gambling or the lottery, trusting our luck to gain prominence. However, sometimes, the situation can turn the tables around, and we could lose a hefty amount making us miserable. The fruit of hard work is never taken back, and it has a steady result with fewer downfalls as compared to luck.

On the contrary, sometimes, fate is also involved in deciding the result of the objective. We may encounter environmental challenges like heavy rains causing floods that can stop us from attending the central conference meeting, which would either make or break the deal. Similarly, our health issues would also make us give up the months of hard work we had put in to achieve our target. For example, a student studies hard for the entrance tests for months, and with hard work and persistence, he/she scores well in the mock tests, which boosts his/her confidence for the main exam. However, a day before the main exam, he/she falls sick, which enables him/her from giving the exam, and months of hard work go in vain shattering the dreams of getting into good universities.

To conclude, luck is a belief, and hard work is our path to achieving our goals. These two should work collaboratively to give desired results. One should always possess and believe in both luck and hard work.

Sample 15:

The notion that the fruition of one's aspirations hinges predominantly on fortune is a perspective that merits scrutiny. I contend that success is a blend of luck, hard work, and strategic planning, with the latter two bearing greater significance. The ensuing discourse will explore the pivotal roles of perseverance and judicious decision-making in achieving life's objectives, alongside acknowledging the element of chance.

Hard work and persistence stand as the cornerstones of achievement. Numerous anecdotal evidence and empirical studies underscore that individuals who dedicate themselves to their goals, persist through challenges, and continuously hone their skills tend to reach their aspirations more consistently than those who rely solely on luck. For instance, the stories of accomplished individuals in various fields, from science to the arts, often highlight decades of dedication and relentless effort rather than serendipitous breaks. This suggests that while luck may open doors, enduring success is largely a result of sustained hard work.

Strategic planning and adaptability further debunk the myth that luck is the primary determinant of success. Life's most successful figures are not merely hard workers; they are strategic thinkers who plan their paths meticulously and adapt to changing circumstances with agility. They anticipate challenges, mitigate risks, and seize opportunities with precision actions that are less about luck and more about foresight and adaptability. Consider the tech entrepreneurs of the 21st century who, through strategic foresight and adaptability, have transformed our world; their success stories are testaments to the power of planning and flexibility over mere chance.

In conclusion, while luck may play a role in the initial stages of a person's journey towards their aims, it is the amalgamation of hard work, strategic planning, and adaptability that primarily dictates success. These elements ensure not only the achievement of goals but their sustainability in the long term. Thus, attributing success to luck alone undermines the profound impact of personal effort and strategic execution in shaping one’s destiny.

Sample 16:

It is often debated whether a person's success in life hinges predominantly on serendipity or if it is shaped by other factors. While I concede that luck can occasionally play a part in one's success, I robustly contend that it is primarily a person's abilities, efforts, and courage that determines their triumph.

One critical reason to substantiate my argument is that individual competence and relentless perseverance are pivotal to personal prosperity. For instance, individuals who climb the corporate ladder are not just fortuitous but often have demonstrated considerable diligence, resilience, and an uncanny knack to seize opportunities. This was exemplified by the late Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple Inc. Although initially fired from his own company, Jobs' unfaltering determination and innovative prowess allowed him to stage a triumphant comeback and revolutionize the technology industry, proving success often necessitates tenacity rather than mere fortune.

Conversely, individuals who sustain valuable relationships in their personal and professional lives typically do so not by the whims of chance, but through their exceptional communication skills, empathy, and respect for diversity. A prime example is Mahatma Gandhi, whose powerful words and non-violent philosophies garnered support worldwide, leading India to independence. His success was underpinned not by luck, but by his compelling communication and unflinching commitment to his cause.

On the other hand, an over-reliance on luck can prove detrimental to personal growth. Waiting for serendipity to strike might breed complacency, fostering a passive attitude towards personal development. Relying on the whims of fate rather than actively honing one's skills can stagnate career progression and personal advancement.

In conclusion, while good fortune may occasionally contribute to one's success, it is not the primary determinant. Substantial factors like personal skills, knowledge, courage, and above all, self-effort play a much more significant role. It is vital to remember that rather than banking on serendipity, one should persistently strive for self-improvement, as success is more often the result of diligence and resilience than a mere stroke of luck.

Sample 17:

The correlation between success and luck has long been a topic of contentious debate. Although serendipity may play a sporadic role in shaping an individual's trajectory, I strongly advocate that the achievement of life's goals is predominantly underpinned by personal endeavour, talent, and perseverance.

A key proposition substantiating my perspective is the indispensable role of hard work and aptitude in paving the way to success. For instance, those rising through the ranks in their professional fields are often not merely beneficiaries of luck, but industrious workers with the audacity to seize opportunities and showcase their competence. A compelling illustration of this is the illustrious trajectory of the renowned physicist, Albert Einstein. Initially deemed a slow learner, his groundbreaking theories in physics were not the product of fortuitous luck, but rather of tenacious effort and an extraordinary aptitude for understanding the universe's mechanics.

Furthermore, maintaining fruitful relationships in life does not usually arise from the whims of chance, but rather from the consistent efforts to foster understanding and connection. One notable exemplar is Nelson Mandela. His successful struggle against apartheid was not marked by luck but by his exceptional ability to unite people under a shared cause, demonstrating the potency of empathy, communication, and respect over mere fortune.

Conversely, an excessive reliance on luck can inadvertently breed passivity, hindering an individual's self-growth. Expecting fortuitous happenstance to deliver success can lead to complacency, neglecting the importance of self-improvement and personal skill enhancement. In the words of the philosopher Seneca, "Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity."

In conclusion, while luck may occasionally have a hand in how a person achieves their aims in life, it is not the primary catalyst. Attributes such as skill, knowledge, courage, and diligence are significantly more pivotal in the quest for attaining life's objectives.

Sample 18:

Attaining great success has been constantly considered as a major topic of debates among citizens in recent years. While a group of people are convinced of the predominant role that luck plays, I personally advocate the notion that there are other determinant factors involved in someone's achievement.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that in some cases, people reach their goals by luck. Typically, entrepreneurs who desire to success in their career have to possess specific prosperity when they operate their business. The emphasis on fortune when it crosses their path and meets the preparation is important to seize the golden opportunity. Good fortune has also generated some cases of success in entertainment industry, the field which may have witnessed many ordinary people whose names unexpectedly become popular and emerge as a phenomenon. In fact, they could be experts in some domains or even possess no typical talent and luck serves the key factor in their success in capturing public attention.

On the other hand, the role of diligence and determination should be considered as the determining factor leading to one's attainment. It could be explained that luck might only show up temporarily and without needed skills, preparation and persistence, people could fail in achieving their long-term targets. In fact, many extraordinary achievers assure that their goals are attained by their continuous effort and passion to the fields they pursue. Jack Ma, one of the self-made billionaires with humble beginnings, is the prime example. After being rejected by almost 30 employers, he never stopped by treating those failures as opportunities to propel himself to become an inspirational figure for people these days.

In conclusion, luck may lead to success in a few cases, but lifelong achievement will only come and be recognized if the best effort and perseverance are dedicated to the work.

Sample 19:

It is argued that people's success mostly depends on luck instead of other elements. While I agree that luck can have a significant impact on helping people achieve their goals. I would argue that hard work and determination are far more important than luck.

On the one hand, l accept that luck can be considered as a contributory factor to an individual's success. ln fact, there are some people who are fortune enough to be born in a rich family, which can help them easily achieve their targets because they have better educational opportunities and better career prospects than those coming from poor families. Moreover, some individuals are born with natural talents, which might help them succeed in their own career. A striking example of this is Mozart, a naturally gifted composer, who can compose many works at the age of five.

On the other hand, I would argue that luck is not the key element leading to success. First, industrious people tend to attain their goals. For example, Ronaldo had to undertake many years of intensive training to become a professional and talented football player. Second, determination can help people reach their goals. Take Nick Vujicic as a good example. Although he does not have any hands and legs, he can overcome difficulties by his own determination in order to become an Australian motivational speaker.

In short, in my opinion, luck might have an important role in one’s success, but it is not the most crucial factor leading to success.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Sample 1:

These days, the government spends a large part of its budget not only on public services, but also the arts. Although I agree that it is important to spend money on public services, I do not think spending additionally on the arts is a waste of money.

There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of the government budget on public services. First and foremost, public services are the things such as hospitals, roads and schools, and these things determine the quality of life that most of us will have. For example, if the government does not spend enough money on hospitals, the health of our society may decline. Similarly, if not enough money is spent on schools, our children may not be properly educated. Also, it will be the poor in our society that will be affected more if we do not spend enough on these things because they are the ones more dependent on such services.

However, this does not mean that the arts should be completely neglected. To begin, it is difficult for many arts institutions to generate much profit, so without some help from the government, many theatres and other such places may have to close. Moreover, the arts also have an important impact on our quality of life. Many people get great pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances so it is important that the government assists such institutions so that they can continue to provide entertainment to the public.

To sum up, there are clear benefits of ensuring a large amount of investment goes into public services as this influences the quality of life for nearly all of us. That said, I do not believe spending money on the arts is a waste of money as this too provides important benefits.

Sample 2:

Government funding with regards to art, such as music and theater, have been a longstanding issue of debate - many people believe that their tax money should alternatively be spent on public services. Personally, I believe that both art and public services bring about different benefits to society, and so government investment in both is desirable.  

On the one hand, it is important to note that art is the voice of a society, and therefore, to fund art is to encourage the expression of society as well as the development and pursuit of new ideas. Art has always served as a window into the past and reconnects today’s generation with previous ones and has helped to create new creative movements. Such is why many European governments continue to fund museums and exhibits in their own countries despite many of them being unable to operate on a commercial basis, for they can showcase their own heritage and culture and inspire future generations.

On the other hand, spending on public services helps to ensure a more immediate benefit to the population. As opposed to art, it could be said that public services are enjoyed by most if not all of a country’s population, and therefore investing in it could be seen as much more equitable. Important public services such as healthcare also have the benefit of keeping the population healthy while creating numerous high-quality jobs. The economic effects of public services could thus be observed to be more immediate and tangible than investments in art.  

Nonetheless, I argue that there are different benefits to both art and public services, and the government should invest in both.  

Sample 3:

It is logical to maintain and increase government expenditure on public services because they are inherently related to a country’s development. However, I believe that governments reallocating their budget from arts to public services instead might not be a pragmatic approach, considering the potential values of the arts sector.

On the one hand, the chief reason behind diverting government subsidies from the arts to the public services might arguably be that the arts are considered mere entertainment, while the public services directly impact the country’s sustainable growth. This could be seen in Vietnam, where many schools and hospitals in rural areas require enormous financial support to renovate and purchase facilities, along with establishing the transport systems connecting these places to residential areas. Therefore, theoretically, curtailing the spending on arts to focus on public services is quite sensible.

Nevertheless, I would argue that the reallocation proposal probably overlooks the positive externalities that spending on arts can produce indirectly and in the long term, and creative industries deliver economic and social impacts even with little instant profitability. Firstly, museums, theatres, and cultural events can boost an area’s income through consumer purchases and attracting foreign investments. At the same time, tourism also contributes to the economy by promoting the hospitality industry and creating employment opportunities. Secondly, beyond the financial merits, arts can better the regional quality of life in several ways. For example, participating in cultural and artistic activities can improve the well-being of the residents. Aside from cultural consumption, local inhabitants also benefit from these fields, which leverages the power of arts in urban planning. Therefore, utilizing adequate government resources for arts is a rational strategy considering all the benefits hereinabove. Finally, strategic investments in arts can contribute substantially to the coffers for public services. South Korea’s policies of prioritizing the music sector are a successful example. The music industry in South Korea boosts the country’s economy by billions of dollars, a large portion of which is added to the fund for the public sector.

In conclusion, while ensuring sufficient investments in public services is necessary, I would contend that withdrawing capital from the cultural and creative sectors is an injudicious action considering the economic and social value arts can add to a country.

Sample 4:

How to allocate fairly government’s budget for a variety of social demands from health care, infrastructure to other mental ones such as arts remains controversial. Some people insist on that that money should be earmarked more for public services and less for the arts, while others believe each area should receive an inequitable amount of spending for its unique value contributed to social development. I partly agree with the latter view for the following reasons.

Admittedly, public services are not of immediate benefit for the entire society. The issues of health care, education, and infrastructure are always top concerns of any government that wants to recruit high-skilled labour, a strong workforce, and modern facilities. Some countries still struggling with abject misery after wars, a large amount of spending for music and painting proves infeasible.

However, the need for arts is rising these days for their long-term worth, especially during the time the country is beyond the peak of economic development and gears itself towards sustainable growth. With music, painting and other kinds of arts gaining their popularity, people’s spiritual life is continuously enriched. Such cities say, Florence, Paris, and Madrid are always unforgettable destinations of millions of visitors for their spectacular artistic creations and lure them into a different world where people are away from worries and let their creativity take off. These cities are also homes to various well-known art geniuses from Picasso, Leona DeVinci to Gaudi, who led art revolutions, partly by dint of their governments’ greater appreciation of this field and bigger expenditure on it. America and Britain are, too, other examples of nations where the music industry overwhelms other key ones for their greatest generation of profit. This is again derived from their governments’ frequent organization of musical shows and festivals to attract audiences worldwide.

Sure, investing in public services is going to improve the infrastructure; however, investments in the arts and traditions will simply helps us improve the economy and GDP.

In a word, governments should pay more attention to key sectors when their nations are in the embryonic stage of growth, but once they escape the life of poverty, arts should have a bigger say for their mental, educational and economic merits.

Sample 5:

It is precisely understandable that governments must begin looking at varying ways to improve the public facilities for a sustainable development. Governments must make a true innovation in keeping the society stable, meaning that the citizens should get adequate services from the governments. As per the said statement, governments should use the money for public development and not for other things, such as theatre and music. On a personal note, I complete disagree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall support my reasons.

These days, to deal with development as a country, governments must compete with other nations. Arts can contribute to the quality of life positively. I believe that every nation has its own abilities and skills that make it stand out from the rest of the world. For instance, we are witnessing some of the competitions held at a global level, where people take part from every corner of the globe, such as Miss Universe, Asian Idol, World Choir Competition, and more. Every nation sends the best participants to take part in these competitions. Competitors get to compete with an array of people, coming from varying backgrounds, nations and cultures.

Additionally, I think that in case a government invests money into the art sector, the country, as a whole, will get to relish a gamut of benefits. For instance, India has a lot of skillful, talented artisans, crafting enchanting and mesmerising decor pieces. India can sell these crafts on a global scale. This way, our talent and skills can become everlasting, creating unending opportunities for the artisans as well as the country. However, to make the most out of this global sale, people would have to establish a good teamwork with the government only then adequate outcome can be achieved.

Sure, investing in public services can improve our infrastructure-game; however, paying major attention to only this factor will not reap any benefits. Hence, arts and theater should get the deserving attention as well.

Concluding this essay, I would like to say that governments should begin investing the funds to enhance art creation as it has bigger opportunities to make a country extremely successful.

Sample 6:

There are various areas of government expenditure that suffer from a lack of substantial monetary investment. In situations like these, sensible resource management must be followed by the administration to allocate necessary funds to the sectors in need. It is widely believed that public facilities and infrastructure should be given more priority instead of fine arts when it comes to the utilization of government resources. I am a strong supporter of this belief as urban services serve a more crucial purpose than artistic agencies.

A considerable proportion of the population is greatly dependent on government-provided services. These amenities are a crucial aid to the smooth functioning of an ordinary citizen’s life. Furthermore, the dependence on such facilities is more prevalent in third-world countries like India, Brazil, and China, where the general income of a majority of the populace makes private services unaffordable. Thus, bearing in mind the necessities of the people on a macro-level, the public-sector merits extensive financial backing.

Additionally, we must also address the fact that creative activities like drama and music are only possible when the basic needs are adequately fulfilled. If there is a deficiency in the physical and mental well-being of an individual, no matter how impressive the artwork is, it will fail to ignite any stimulus within that person. Thus, it is vital to enhance the standard of living of the population before refining the quality of arts, as artistic demands are always secondary to rudimentary needs.

Nevertheless, the value of creative work cannot be disregarded entirely as all the artforms collectively form an industry that is vital to the economy. However, this trade has the support of numerous wealthy individuals and organizations, thereby do not require much assistance from the government.

Finally, the framework of government services requires fiscal reform. Thus, the authorities should recognize these obligations and concentrate their resources on the public sector.

Sample 7:

It is often argued that the government should finance public services instead of spending its budget on arts, music and theatre. Although I agree that the government’s investments in public services play a very important role, I think that proper funding for the arts sector is also crucial for society.

On the one hand, the government should definitely allocate a large part of its budget to public services. This economic sector determines the overall quality of life, ensuring that some basic services, like schools, hospitals and roads, are available to all citizens irrespective of their income or social status. Public services satisfy the primary needs of the society and thus need proper funding, while artists and musicians are not curing diseases or building houses, so their role is secondary. For example, any country can live without music concerts, but the absence of medicine will create significant problems. That is why the government should adequately finance public services in the first place.

On the other hand, arts, music and theatre are not a waste of money, since they are an integral part of society’s cultural and intellectual development and amusement. Firstly, art and music draw people’s attention to diverse phenomena and represent the inward significance of things. Quite often a single drawing, piece or song can exhort myriads of people to reconsider their attitude towards some situations. This way, art serves as a major source of a nation’s personal and intellectual development. Moreover, visiting museums, watching movies and listening to music are common ways of relaxation and entertainment. Thus, the art sector is also important to society and should not be neglected.

To conclude, though I agree that the government should allocate a large part of its budget to such urgent needs of the society like public services, I think that arts, music and theatre should also be financed since they play an important role in people’s development and entertainment.

Sample 8:

In some countries, the higher tax incomes come from arts such as movie industry, music or theatre business. In this regard, arts are beneficial investments for the government. On the other hand, arts, such as music are the food for soul and government should patronise this sector.  

Moreover, in big countries like America and United Kingdom arts are one of the biggest earning sources for those countries. The fact that, many people want to come to these countries because their arts are famous and the best in the world. Due to the fact movie industries, music or theatre has been encouraged the government for tax. Indeed, it can help the government to invest some money to public services as well. Hence, those countries are famous for music and movies and its imposing in the world and have become destiny for many people around the world for gaining their passion in arts.

Undoubtedly, in the United States of America, we can see that musician, an actor or an actress have higher incomes, but they should be taxable for the government that is a policy not only in this country but also in some countries that have good arts too. For this reason, to develop some areas, for instance, healthcare, public transportation, etc. The government should encourage the artists and arts. Clearly, to give excellent service for American civil society, arts should not be ignored. Furthermore, taxpayers’ awareness among arts industries are higher and which is rapidly changing the economic growth of America.

Arts are the important media to give profits for the USA whereas in the UK too. Arts represent the identity, uniqueness, heritage and reflection of a nation.  In brief, investing in arts is by means a waste of money, rather it is a good investment both for economic growth and cultural enrichment.

Sample 9:

The government spending on arts has long been a contentious issue. Many counter the idea of government incurring expenses to promote arts. However, I feel governments should continue to spend money on arts. This will be argued by analysing how arts can contribute to a country’s economy as well as serve as a platform to achieve one’s goals.

To begin, arts such as music and theatre are steady sources of income for a country. A case in point would be New Zealand, where the government supports new artists by lending them money to kick-start their careers, which in turn enables the state to collect taxes on the revenue earned by these artists. This stream of income would be lost if there’s no spending to foster local artists. Hence it is clear that arts are vital for a country’s economic health rather than being a liability to it.

In addition, having a decent infrastructure for creative industries would mean realisation of dreams of millions who wish to be artists. For instance, in the UK, a person could choose to adopt arts as a career path, enabling him or her to earn a fair livelihood, rather than having to reluctantly pick a profession that he or she does not feel passionate about. A state where the government doesn’t invest in arts would most likely prevent people to go after what they long for, resulting in frustration on the part of people. Therefore, arts play an important part in contentedness of the individuals of a nation.

In summary, the government should continue to devote resources to arts since its significance in a country’s tax system and bringing happiness to people should not be underestimated. Henceforth, government’s funding of arts is not a waste of a country’s resources.

Sample 10:

Some people are convinced that the financial reserve of the government should be allocated to the public sector rather than on arts. However, I strongly believe that arts play a major role in the development of a country.

Primarily, arts symbolise the culture of a nation. In the primitive era, people celebrated their occasion through music and dance. These cultural activities have become a religious ritual for them, thereby representing an aboriginal tradition. It is in the style of an art such as designs of garments and historic rock sculptures that determine the ethnicity of a group. For example, in the Philippines, the Ifugao tribe in Bulacan is well known for wearing a bahag attire, which looks like an old an old-fangled brief. Their cultural identity becomes famous because of their artistic rice terraces.

Furthermore, arts have become the freedom of expression. Some arts enthusiasts can demonstrate their feelings through music or paintings. Such activities have a reasonable means of portraying emotions. One example of this is expressing depression through a composition of a melancholic song rather than to venture in a destructive behaviour such as inebriation of alcohol. Thus, art is a good passion that entices the people to do recreational activities.

Finally, it is widely believed that some artistic outputs have contributed to the tourism of a country. There are holidaymakers who visit a country so they can witness a painting, sculptures or any artistic masterpiece. To illustrate, the painting of Juan Luna “the Spolarium” in the Philippines has lured a considerable number of foreign visitors. This is because the painting depicts the suffering of most Filipinos at the time of Spaniard regime, which becomes a historical event in the country.

To conclude, I am convinced that arts have a greater contribution to the society. Not only does it represent the cultural heritage of a country, but it also encourages performing a formidable masterpiece that can promote the culture of a country.

Sample 11:

The art, music and theatre constitute an integral part of the culture of any country. The government often found supporting these by arranging a requisite amount of funds but for some spending on these activities should ideally be utilised for the welfare of the country’s people as it otherwise does not serve any good purpose. I think there is nothing wrong in supporting arts of a country and government is the ideal body who should do this.

With globalisation, often the culture of developing countries transforms to adopt the traits of developed countries. For example, traditional street plays in India are things of past and people are more inclined toward watching movies, a culture from the western countries. This poses a threat to the existence of an intrinsic regional culture of a country which actually defines the spirit and uniqueness of the country. So it is the responsibility of the government to support traditional art, music and theatre which tends to carry the cultural heritage of a country.

Every year a lot is spent by the government to promote regional art, music and theatre and this is something which people suggest is a waste of money. Prima facie it is correct, but on the other hand, it helps promote these features of a country which help the government to attract more and more tourists from other country and it also acts as the livelihood of the people who are solely dependent on these skills. For instance, nation foreign exchange has risen 20%, since the last five years, thanks to the increasing promotion by the government.

To summarise, it may involve a huge cost for a nation to support art, music and theatre but it should be seen as an investment for supporting the unique heritage of the country.

Sample 12:

It is highly debated that pouring government funding into art is such a waste, and it should be distributed in other sectors instead. I definitely believe otherwise. This essay will first explain the significance of art and then discuss in detail the financial opportunities stemming from its preservation.

The expression of the human creative mind and imagination plays a tremendous role in painting a nation’s distinct identity that sets it apart from others. Art has greatly contributed to our cultural growth, which betters the understanding of our heritage and fills the gap between different generations. As a result, we are able to take pride in the essence of who we are as a community and fluently communicate it with the world.

Moreover, quality of life could be vastly enhanced through the performing arts such as music and theatre due to their entertainment value. They are incredible outlets for people to release stress by allowing them to escape the harsh realities of life. Consequently, our emotional and mental health would be fully nourished, which could be just as crucial as looking after our physical well-being.

Not only should countries invest in art for sentimental reasons but also for economical motivation based on its potential earnings. Museums that house ancient artefacts could host special exhibitions to attract a significant number of tourists, and subsequently generate a sizable income. Destinations like the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York and the Louvre Museum in Paris welcome millions of visitors annually and rake in an enormous amount of revenue. An additional benefit could be the employment opportunities available to the local workforce, who would eventually contribute to the economy in the form of income tax.

Art is undeniably valuable because it carries such cultural and financial importance. Therefore, governments should continue to invest in protecting as well as furthering its development.

Sample 13:

In this day and age, increasing attention has been placed on the debate over whether the government should allocate funding to the arts or devote the entire budget to public services. From my perspective, both the arts and public services bring different benefits to society, and therefore, government investment in both is desirable.

On the one hand, it is important to note that art is the voice of society. Funding the arts encourages public expression and the development and pursuit of new ideas. Art has always served as a window to the past, linking today’s generation with previous ones, and helps to vividly create new narratives. For example, European governments continue to fund museums and exhibits in their countries, despite many being unable to operate on a commercial basis. These institutions can still afford to preserve their heritage and culture.

On the other hand, spending the budget on public services provides more immediate benefits to the population and directly impacts the country’s sustainable growth. This can be seen in Vietnam, where many schools and hospitals in rural areas require substantial financial support to renovate and purchase facilities, along with establishing transport systems connecting these places to residential areas. Therefore, reducing art funding to focus on public services is essential.

To conclude, while ensuring sufficient investment in public services is crucial, I contend that withdrawing capital from cultural and creative sectors is unwise, considering the economic and social value the arts can add to a nation.

Sample 14:

The government must allocate funds on public services instead of investing in music and theatre arts which are considered an unnecessary expense. I completely agree with this statement of utilising people's money in public services than in the arts.

The foremost reason for not considering any investments in arts is because area, such as music and arts, is a recreational activity rather than an essential service. It does not form a vital link in society and is enjoyed by the wealthier sections of the society who constitutes around 20% in our country whereas the remaining 80% of people are economically poor and are devoid of basic amenities such as food, health, and employment. Thus, investment by the government authorities should not be in the arts.

On the other hand, the important reason for not spending in public service is it improves the welfare of the people and society. Spending money in providing free education would provide opportunities for children from economically deprived backgrounds to prosper in their life. As more people are getting graduated, a majority of jobs would be taken up by the locals than from outsiders. This, in turn, would overall enhance the economic activities of the country. Hence, investing in a citizen's education would result in the growth of the individual and the community.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that a government's expenditure must not be in a leisure activity such as arts, but instead ought to be spent on public services such as education which is beneficial to both the common man and the society as a whole.

Sample 15:

The debate over allocating government funds to support the arts is contentious, with some arguing it's a waste that could be better spent elsewhere. I hold a different view. This essay will first explore the importance of art and then delve into detail about the financial opportunities that arise from its preservation.

The expression of human creativity and imagination plays a crucial role in defining a nation’s unique identity that sets it apart from others. Art has significantly contributed to our cultural advancement, deepening our understanding of our heritage and bridging generational gaps. Consequently, we are able to take pride in our collective essence as a community and effectively communicate it to the world.

Furthermore, the quality of life can be greatly enhanced through performing arts like music and theater due to their entertainment value. They serve as valuable avenues for individuals to relieve stress and escape the challenges of daily life. As a result, our emotional and mental well-being can be fully nurtured, which is as important as maintaining our physical health.

Countries should invest in art not only for its cultural significance but also for its economic potential. Museums that preserve ancient artifacts can organize special exhibitions to attract a large number of tourists, thus generating substantial revenue. Iconic destinations like the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York and the Louvre Museum in Paris welcome millions of visitors annually and generate significant income. Additionally, these initiatives create employment opportunities for local communities, contributing to the economy through income tax.

Art holds undeniable value because of its cultural and economic significance. Therefore, governments should continue to invest in its protection and advancement.

Sample 16:

When it comes to arts, it is often said that governments should invest in arts such as music, theatre, painting and sculpture, whereas others argue that the investment in those areas is such a waste of money. In this essay, I will discuss and analyze both views and state my own opinion.

As for investment in arts, it comes with several advantages such as growing talented artists and offering entertainment to people. Without a doubt, people who are eager to become a popular artist and make money tend to suffer from financial burden as doing artwork causes high expenses such as costs of art materials or music instruments and the places for working. It is needless to say that the investing in amateurs encourages them to achieve their goal such as holding their own exhibitions. In addition, many people are likely to enjoy entertainment such as listening to the music and watching movies on theatres, in their free times. Therefore, supporting artists is a crucial element to provide people with a variety of entertainment.

On the other hand, government has a duty to deal with various public services such as libraries, institutions as well as education for old people. As a matter of fact, students do not tend to use libraries for reading books, these days, due to the influence of smartphones. Moreover, there are not enough programs regarding exercises, preparing for retired life, prevention of dimentia and so on for old people. As this reason, many people argue that government should invest money in public services rather than in arts.

In conclusion, investing fairly in both arts and public services is one of the major duties of government. However, in my opinion, government should more invest in arts instead of public sevices as the more art industry grows up, the more entertainment can be activated.

Sample 17:

According to many people, the investment in art liked music and theatre are nothing but causes of money. They believe that this money can be utilized to fulfill the increasing demand for public services like hospitals and schools. I agree with this statement to some extent. This essay will emphasize on the reasons why both are important to our society.

Our society is built up with various elements. According to few people, some of them may not be that crucial for our existence. They believe that a community needs hospitals with advanced types of equipment and schools with innovative technology for the development of a better society. For instance, a hospital with all the diagnostic equipment’s like computed tomographic scan enables cloches to detect diseases at early stages result in fewer mortalities. Thus, government authorities must invest more finances in these essential sectors to strengthen their basic infrastructure.

Despite the above facts, I still believe that field of arts is also important for a society if not equally. Artistic sculptures created over time help us to remember our cultured existence. The stories reenacted by theatrical performances enable us to relive the history or feels the emotion of an artist, as we get connected with them emotionally at a subconscious level. Furthermore, the music songs whether traditional folklore or modern pop songs provide us the relaxing environment and entertainment, within preservation of our cultural inheritance.

In conclusion, I can confidently state that government should invest more in public services. However, I do not believe that financial funding for the futuristic section is a total wastage.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

With the current lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers, it is argued that more people should be encouraged to take part in vocational training rather than academic study. I agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.

Firstly, vocational training provides students with skills directly related to their intended trade, which makes it much easier for them to find a job once they are qualified. For example, those training to become an electrician learn the exact skills and knowledge required for the occupation, making it much easier for them to find a job quickly and start earning money. University graduates, on the other hand, often lack any job-specific skills after completing their course, which can often make it difficult for them to find suitable employment. Furthermore, the knowledge taught in university courses is often highly theory-based and oftentimes broad in scope, and therefore may not always be relevant to the student’s future job. 

Secondly, vocational training is often much shorter and far less expensive than university level qualifications. Vocational training courses are often completed within 12 months or less and equip students with the skills and knowledge to enter the workforce quickly. However, university courses usually take between 3-5 years to complete, and do not always provide students with job-ready skills, and in some cases, students need to complete further training before they can enter the workforce. In addition, the cost of vocational training is usually much cheaper than university tuition fees and is often subsidised by the government in order to accelerate the supply of employees to meet the demand of the job market.

In conclusion, I believe that more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because it is often cheaper, quicker, and a more effective pathway to gaining employment.

Sample 2:

Some people think that more students should select vocational training rather than go to university due to the current lack of qualified workers. I agree with this statement for the following reasons.

One key advantage of vocational training is that it provides students with practical skills that can be applied in real-life situations. Unlike academic courses, which focus more on theoretical knowledge, vocational training offers hands-on experience that is essential for the trades industry. This means that students are better equipped to perform their jobs effectively, and the quality of work produced is of a higher standard.

Another benefit of vocational training is that it offers an alternative path to success for individuals who may not excel in traditional academic settings. For some students, academic study may not be suitable due to personal preferences or learning difficulties. Vocational training provides an alternative way for these students to develop their skills and gain employment in fields where they can thrive.

Moreover, vocational training can help to address the skills gap that exists in the trade industry. There is currently a shortage of qualified workers in trades such as electricians and plumbers, which can lead to a range of issues such as delayed construction projects and increased costs for consumers. Encouraging more individuals to pursue vocational training can help to address this gap and ensure that there are enough skilled workers to meet the demand.

In conclusion, while academic study has its benefits, vocational training is equally important, especially in the trade industry. By encouraging more individuals to pursue vocational training, we can provide a practical and accessible pathway to success for students who may not excel in traditional academic settings, as well as address the skills gap in the trades industry.

Sample 3:

It is true that these days the majority of high school graduates prefer to pursue tertiary education, leading to a shortage of blue-collar workers in many nations. Therefore, I completely agree with the sentiment that more students should be urged to take vocational courses as this choice would benefit individuals and the country as a whole.

The growth of a country can be adversely affected to a significant degree when there are not enough manual workers. These people make tremendous contributions to society that equal or exceed those of white-collar workers. Since hospitals, schools or museums require maintenance and renovation on a frequent basis, the availability of electricians and plumbers ensures the safety of all who use such buildings. A lack of manual labor can also be the catalyst for many serious ramifications. For example, when a country possesses an insufficient number of electricians, the electricity grid of the country may be at greater risk of malfunction. As a consequence, the power supply to factories and businesses can be unstable and suffer consistent interruptions, which surely would affect the economy of that country.

Considering this need for manual workers, it is more beneficial for students to attend vocational courses. In many countries, a great number of university graduates struggle to find employment due to intense competition and oversaturation in the job market. For example, in Vietnam, the number of jobless recent graduates has been on the rise in the last decade, and many of those who are fortunate enough to be employed only earn a subsistence-level salary. This implies that the imbalance in the workforce makes tertiary education a less ideal option than it was several decades ago. Thus, those who qualify as electricians, plumbers and other essential manual workers can find a decent job more easily and often have better career prospects.

In conclusion, a lack of manual workers can have detrimental effects on the development of a nation. Therefore, I believe more students should undertake vocational training for their own sake and that of the economy of their entire country.

Sample 4:

Today’s society is characterized by pragmatism, as evidenced by the preference for training for practical employment over academic education. I disagree with the idea that vocational training is more valuable than a university degree, although the latter has certain significance.

Providing the workforce with the necessary knowledge and skills is unquestionably crucial and advantageous. Evidently, not everyone can study effectively in the research-focused setting characteristic of higher education. In reality, it would be harmful to presume that everyone, regardless of how talented they are, should be given an equal chance to attend college. American institutions, which have witnessed an indiscriminate increase in the quantity of university degrees, have also, ironically, suffered from an overall decrease in quality. On the other hand, a talented worker may create real values for society, which ought to be maintained.

This does not, however, imply that it is acceptable to underestimate the university degree. By contrast, ignoring higher education would seriously harm a nation’s sustainability and development. For instance, no foundation could be set for scientific and technological applications without ongoing study of and instruction in the basic sciences, which have recently been criticized as impractical. Similar to the previous example, studies of history, literature, and philosophy are sometimes castigated as obscure and futile, but without them, people would experience unimaginable mental poverty and would be no different from mindless labor machines.

In summary, while university education prepares one for serious research undertakings, vocational training trains potential skilled workers. Though the two types of education take different paths, they both play critical roles in society.

Sample 5:

Despite the popularity of universities, some argue that vocational education should be promoted to help alleviate the increasing scarcity of competent workers across many labor sectors. I agree with this viewpoint because skills training offers greater practical knowledge and is more likely to result in a successful job search.

Vocational education is primarily beneficial because it teaches pupils the particular tasks and procedures of a specific occupation. Therefore, its typical training component often involves real-world and hands-on experience. By participating in these practical experiences, students may apply their theoretical classroom knowledge in actual scenarios. For instance, training to become an electrician or plumber must include practical application. They only become proficient when using specialized tools, interpreting technical manuals, and identifying common problems. This practical aspect of vocational training allows learners to get a comprehensive knowledge of the abilities required for success in their chosen sector.

Furthermore, vocational training can also be an effective way to prepare for a successful job search. The reason is that not only does vocational training programs are more practical it also often teaches skills in high demand in the job market. For example, programs in healthcare, information technology, and skilled trades like plumbing and electrical work are consistently in high demand. Consequently, graduates of these programs can find work more quickly. In addition, many vocational training programs have strong connections with local employers in their respective industries. This can give students valuable networking opportunities and access to job leads that may not be advertised publicly. As demonstrated, graduates of vocational training programs often have practical experience, in-demand skills, and industry connections, all of which can help them stand out in a competitive job market.

In conclusion, personally, more individuals should be encouraged to pursue vocational training since it provides more relevant, hands-on experience and increases the likelihood of securing employment.

Sample 6:

It is true that we live in a society that places a high emphasis on white-collar jobs, which leads to a shortage of competent blue-collar workers. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea that more teenagers need to be urged to take a course in vocational schools.

On the macro level, this policy could create the balance between the two types of workers. Obviously, manual workers contribute to the growth of the economy as much as those working in the office do. As a result, if a country fails to have a sufficient number of manual workers, the growth of the economy might be negatively affected. For example, when a country does not have enough electricians, the whole electricity grid of that country might be at the risk of malfunction. The obvious consequence of this situation is that the power supply to factories and businesses would be unstable and interrupted, which hinders the proper operation of its economy.

On the micro level, as there is a lack of skilled worker, those who possess a trade will seek employment more easily. Recent graduates from universities are unable to have a job due to the intense competition and oversupply in the labor market. By contrast, most vocational schools often offer programs that are in high demand or shortage. This means that after finishing these courses, students are guaranteed a job in local factories. Consequently, many people with a bachelor’s degree in business administration or finance are still jobless whereas those with a trade of plumbing or nursing have a good job and, therefore, ensure a successful future.

In conclusion, the society is in a severe shortage of skilled workers; hence, encouraging more youngsters to attend trade schools is actually necessary to maintain the economy in good shape.

Sample 7:

While many people pursue university education for academic study, there is a compelling case for encouraging more individuals to undertake vocational training. I do agree with this viewpoint for many reasons.

Firstly, there is a significant and growing demand for skilled tradespeople, including electricians, plumbers, and carpenters. Many industries are facing a shortage of qualified workers, leading to delays in construction projects, maintenance, and other essential services. By promoting vocational training, we can help fill these gaps and ensure that these crucial roles are adequately staffed. For instance, the demand for skilled tradespeople is outpacing the supply, leading to a significant workforce shortage, with a 2023 report by the Associated Builders and Contractors (ABC) indicating a shortage of over 600,000 workers in the U.S. construction industry.

Secondly, many vocational programs are accessible to individuals from various backgrounds and can provide a viable career path for those who might not have the means or desire to pursue a university education. Encouraging vocational training can help reduce socioeconomic disparities by offering an alternative pathway to financial stability and career success. Consider the example of Year Up, a non-profit organization in the United States that provides intensive vocational training programs targeting young adults from low-income backgrounds. This program equips them with technical skills and professional development opportunities and has demonstrated success in helping graduates secure high-paying jobs in fields like IT and healthcare.

In conclusion, encouraging vocational training is crucial to addressing the shortage of skilled tradespeople and providing accessible career opportunities for diverse populations, thus promoting economic stability and reducing socioeconomic disparities.

Sample 8:

It is true that many people prefer to pursue academic studies at university rather than to follow a vocational training course. While nobody can deny the need for university graduates, I totally agree that we should encourage more people to qualify as electricians, plumbers or other essential manual workers.

There are two important reasons why more workers must be trained in skilled professions such as plumbing or electrical work. Firstly, such workers are vital when new buildings are constructed or when existing buildings have to be renovated or simply maintained. Indeed, in many countries, a permanent maintenance staff of skilled tradesmen is employed in hospitals, schools or museums, ensuring the safety of all who use the buildings. Secondly, in some developed countries, there is an existing imbalance in the economy, resulting in graduate unemployment, while at the same time there is a shortage of skilled labour. Governments in those countries need, therefore, to work with employers to ensure that extra vocational training is provided.

More people must be encouraged to attend vocational training courses. The onus is on schools to incorporate relevant subjects into the curriculum, so that not all the emphasis is placed on preparation for academic study at university. Many boys and girls are not academically inclined, but this does not mean that schools should consider them as failures. For example, workshops in schools could provide an opportunity to learn ‘hands-on skills’, adapting the theory of the physics lessons to practical applications. Parents should also help their children to choose vocational careers, explaining the good employment prospects and remuneration for manual workers with qualifications and skills

In conclusion, I agree that it is vital that we encourage more people to do vocational training because without such skilled workers, society cannot function effectively.

Sample 9:

By most people, vocational training is considered a dishonorable escape route for those who are not smart enough to attend colleges. Now that the scarcity of qualified craftsmen, such as construction workers, electricians or locksmiths is getting more acute, some have suggested that more people should be encouraged to undergo vocational training. From my point of view, I cast no doubt on the veracity of this statement.

There are multiple benefits that can be derived from attending trade schools, instead of universities. In the first place, programs of vocational schools are often shorter. More specifically, while college students have to commit to at least 3 years of full-time study, it takes only 1 or 2 years for students to receive certain specialised certifications. In addition, the principal focus of vocational programs is on providing hands-on experience to students and there is no need for them to study subjects that are not relevant to their choice of subject. The prime example for this is Vietnamese college students, regardless of what majors they pursue, are obliged to study concepts of the communist party while students at trade schools do not have to. For this reason, their employability is significantly enhanced.

Despite such advantages, many are still skeptical about taking vocational training as it does not offer much flexibility. I acknowledge that the career choices are much more limited for vocational students and that there is little chance for them to change their career if they desire to. However, if students receive proper career orientation program before embarking on their learning, few wrong decisions will be made.

All things considered, I am inclined to restate that vocational training should no longer be kept on the periphery of the educational system and that it should be encouraged among students of all levels of education.

Sample 10:

It goes without saying that society always needs a skilled workforce to function. Employees of different professions contribute different to the thriving of the community, and therefore I disagree with the statement that vocational courses should be given anymore weight than before.
There is no doubt that many people consider taking tertiary education instead of a vocational training program to prepare for their future. It is universally accepted that knowledge and qualifications gained from university can help one to have a head start over other candidates when it come to job hunting. In Vietnam, for instance, a majority of high school graduates are content to spend fours to five years more studying at a university with the hope for a bright career ahead. This results in a lack of skilled manual workers such as plumber and electricians in society.
However, if we encourage more people to become blue-collar workers, then there will be a shortage a while-collar workers who may otherwise create more wealth for society. For example, few engineers would mean lower productivity; a dearth of scientists may inhibit scientific discoveries which can provide us with a better life in the future. In contrast, those doing blue-collar jobs may face redundancy when too many applicants complete for the same position. An unbalanced workforce might, therefore, hold society back from development in the long term.
In conclusion, the workforce will adjust itself to carter for the need of the community. If there are too many engineers than necessary, some will take vocational courses to become tradespeople to avoid unemployment.

Sample 11:

The debate over the selection of academic study or vocational training has become the issue of intense public and personal interest. While I concede that encouraging academic pursuit is beneficial to some extent, I believe vocational training courses should be promoted as the main priority of workforce development.

There are certain grounds supporting the view of encouraging scholastic pursuit at colleges and universities. The most obvious proof is that prioritizing knowledge-intensive courses ensures the creating of generations of intellectual personnel with great vision and overarching understanding of different fields. This type of training would empower young students to become erudite experts who are indispensable to take high-ranking management positions in companies or govemmental organizations. Another necessity of promoting academic training takes root in the fact that this type of training plays an irreplaceable role in building research and academia communities. A shortage in the number of students undertaking university education and research activities would eventually result in the lack of researchers and specialists who assume the responsibility of leading innovations and providing data-driven recommendations for improving intemational and national policies.

On the other hand, I am convinced that vocational training should be recognized as the key to the workforce supply question. The provision of practical vocational skills and knowledge serves as the most crucial advantage of this type of training. In contrast to the lunited demand of intellectual and academically equipped workforce, qualified and skilled workers are in great demand in all countries. The pursuit of expertise in particular manual professions would bring individuals extensive job and career development opportunities which might be significantly more limited in intellectual fields. Moreover, encouraging people to pursue vocational training congruently helps govemments to mitigate the problem of unemployment associated with work force misbalance. This practice contributes to shifting career interest of unemployed graduates towards mediocre yet promising jobs which could give them a chance to eam their living.

In conclusion, although I recognize the necessity of promoting college education, I fimly believe that priority should be given to vocational training, making it the core of workforce development.

Sample 12:

Many individuals opt to pursue intellectual education at a university rather than a practical training programme. Although no one can dispute the importance of university graduates, I completely agree that we should encourage more individuals to become labor workers.

There are two major reasons why additional individuals in specialized professions such as plumbing or electrical work must be taught. For starters, these employees are essential when new structures are being built or when old facilities need to be restored or simply maintained. Yet, in many nations, hospitals, schools, and museums employ a permanent maintenance team of qualified workers to ensure the safety of everyone who utilizes the structures. Second, there is an existing imbalance in the economy in certain wealthy nations, leading to graduate unemployment when there is a scarcity of trained labor. Governments in such nations must therefore collaborate with companies to guarantee that additional vocational training is available.

More individuals should be encouraged to enroll in vocational training programs. It is the responsibility of schools to add relevant courses into the curriculum so that the focus is not just on preparation for academic studies at university. Many boys and girls are not academically inclined, but this does not imply that they are failures in school. Workshops in schools, for example, might give a chance to develop ‘hands-on skills,’ translating the theory of physics classes to practical applications. Parents could also assist their children in making career choices by discussing the strong job opportunities and compensation for manual workers with degrees and abilities.

In conclusion, I believe that it is critical that we encourage more individuals to pursue vocational training since society cannot operate successfully without such professionals.

Sample 13:

In today's academic landscape, a vast majority of students tend to gravitate towards academic studies at the university level, often neglecting the acquisition of vocational skills such as plumbing and electrical work. The question of whether we should actively encourage these individuals to learn such skills is a contentious one. In my opinion, while the importance of academic study cannot be understated, imparting vocational skills should indeed be encouraged.

The primacy of academic study is based on its ability to impart comprehensive knowledge in a wide array of fields, thereby equipping students to function effectively in their chosen professions. For instance, a student studying medicine at a university must have an in-depth understanding of human anatomy to eventually become a successful doctor. This is the kind of knowledge that academic study excels at delivering.

However, in focusing solely on academic study, we risk overlooking the significant benefits that vocational skills can bring. First, the acquisition of such skills equips individuals to handle everyday issues independently, whether it be fixing a leaky pipe or repairing faulty electrical wiring. This not only instills a sense of self-reliance but also has the potential to save significant resources in the long run.

Furthermore, in an increasingly competitive job market, possessing a vocational skill could provide an alternative source of income for those who are unable to secure employment in their field of academic study. Not to mention, those who cannot afford university education can gain financial stability through vocational jobs.

In conclusion, while the pursuit of academic study at the university level remains critical, we should not neglect the value that vocational skills can offer. Rather than viewing academic and vocational skills as mutually exclusive, we should strive for an educational system that values and promotes both, producing well-rounded individuals capable of navigating the various challenges life presents. This, in my opinion, is the ideal scenario.

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Nowadays, students can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

It is often argued that libraries have become redundant because of the easy availability of information online. However, I totally disagree with this idea. It is true that all information known to mankind is now available on the internet. Internet accessibility has also improved over the years. However, this does not mean that libraries are no longer needed.

Libraries are much more than mere access points for books and information. They serve some other purposes as well. For example, libraries provide a quiet environment where one can read and learn. Distractions of everyday life can kill the joy of reading. Libraries offer a solution to this problem. Also, when you are in an environment where everyone is reading, you will also be motivated to get your reading done. This may not be possible at home, even if you can find the same reading material online.

The internet is a vast pool of information but if you don’t know what you are looking for, it is nearly impossible to find relevant information online. Libraries, on the other hand, make research easier by grouping books on a particular topic together. Even if you don’t know anything about a given topic, you will still be able to find relevant information on that topic. Today’s libraries also provide access to computers and tablets so that users can search online if they need more information on a topic.

Internet accessibility may have improved over the years, but there are still millions of people who do not have access to the internet. Libraries are the only sources of information for them. If libraries were to die, they would be in trouble.

To conclude, despite the existence of all information online, libraries are still important because they provide an environment conducive to reading and learning.

Sample 2:

It is true that online information has revolutionized the way students acquire knowledge. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea that libraries today are obsolete.

First of all, it is now very convenient and time-saving for students to look for online information. For example, due to the development of search engines such as Google, they can search for any information on the internet, in no time, regardless of location. In addition, the amount of online knowledge is enormous and diverse, so it can meet the needs of students in any academic major. Therefore, they no longer need to spend time going to libraries and looking for a particular book among numerous shelves.

Another point is that the growth of online books has contributed to the obsolescence of libraries. Many universities have built their online websites providing their students the access to all digital books they need for academic purposes. This can not only enhance students’ learning experience but also enable universities to remove libraries, thereby saving a large amount of money spent on maintaining them. For example, my university provides students with a free account to download textbooks and reference books from its website. Therefore, I can read them on my smartphone or laptop in order to do assignments and prepare for dissertations.

In conclusion, I believe that libraries are unnecessary in today’s society because of the development of online knowledge which is more convenient and time-saving for students and the growth of digital books that allow universities to eliminate libraries and help their students study more conveniently through their websites.

Sample 3:

Today, the role of libraries has come under scrutiny, leading some observers to claim that they are redundant in society. Even though traditional libraries might appear obsolete, I am inclined to disagree with this opinion.

There are reasons to believe that libraries no longer have their place in the world. Firstly, online resources are ever-expanding, and it is increasingly convenient to access them at the same time. Search engines, academic databases, and digital information archives offer troves of knowledge which can be looked up at will, when registered at an institution. All that is needed is a computer connected to the Internet, which is almost a prerequisite for every university student these days. Technology, moreover, has led to the existence of eBooks and digital newspapers, making it possible to own scholarly texts without having to go to libraries to acquire a hard copy. For that reason, some people argue that these places are inefficient and should be repurposed as a result.

Libraries continue to be integral in some respects, however. They are not mere repositories of knowledge but also appropriate spaces for studying. The atmosphere at libraries is conducive to students’ concentration, as distraction, such as noise, is optimally controlled. This can also be relevant for facilitating education in groups, since students can exchange ideas with each other while still able to maintain their focus. Group learners, therefore, would end up being enriched both socially and in terms of critical thinking. Furthermore, as opposed to online databases, libraries are operated by librarians, who vet and classify reading materials to ensure that they are reliable. At the same time, these professionals help visitors by guiding them to those reputable sources. This makes the visitors feel welcomed, which is an experience absent from the solitude of online browsing.

In conclusion, while digital technology has introduced faster access to information compared to libraries, I disagree with dismissing their necessity. Despite the threat posed to their existence by the Internet, libraries are likely to remain pivotal in education and scholarly pursuits.

Sample 4:

Today, concerns are high about how the digital age will change libraries. Some argue that libraries soon will sink into oblivion as nowadays, information of any field is readily available on the Internet. To the best of my knowledge, this idea should be rejected as one can see quite a few facts why libraries are relevant in modern days.

Generally speaking, students today are learning in conditions that are not conducive to their education. At home, they are attacked with all kinds of noise coming from next door. It is not a rare occasion when a party is organised, or a karaoke session is held. In school, vehicle horns, the sound of motorbike engines, or from construction sites continue to wreak havoc on students’ concentration. In such situations, libraries are no less than oases in the desert for the students. They are places where it is invariably quiet anytime they visit, where they have their work done effectively.

Some hold the belief that libraries are no longer necessary in this day and age when knowledge and information is freely up for grabs for students. From my perspective, this view is flawed. What this argument fails to take into account is the fact that a significant amount of information on the internet nowadays has never been verified, and therefore, it is prejudiced, inaccurate, or even misleading. Such information can potentially warp students’ perception on many life issues, which can cause devastating effects on both their professional careers and private lives later down the road. Books, on the other hand, are always censored before being published. Hence, it is much better for students to gain wisdom from books than from materials circulating the Internet.

Although the internet has eased everyone’s life when it comes to information and knowledge.  However, such knowledge might be disdainful if is denuded of the reality.

These foregoing points have brought me to the conclusion that the importance of libraries should not be downplayed despite many advancements made in the technological era.

Sample 5:

The mark of the digital epoch has been substantial and astounding in changing the horizons of life from multifarious aspects. The same has been going around with the education system and the existence of libraries in today’s era. Some people say that since the internet is the stock of all the information now, the existence of libraries is unnecessary to people today. However, I am in stark contradiction to that. In the paragraphs to come, I shall be putting forth my views on the importance of libraries and how ineluctable they are.

The digital wave has turned and transformed everything upside down. Education is being tremendously shifted online nowadays, where students can refer to any online website to and fetch the information on their subject, however, that couldn’t rule out the essence of our conventional education and libraries. As is rife, the information on the internet has been a lot of times seen to be uncensored and even malicious. For the students and the young minds that do not have a discernment potential to the zenith, this is even more inimical. Moreover, most information and internet facts are not even corroborated nor are they substantiated with the truth and reality. In addition to that, the presence of open-source libraries on the internet and some platforms like Wikipedia are often denounced as they are many a time fabricated by the users as per the information they have that might not even be distantly relevant to the context in question. Libraries, however, are the sources of authenticated information. The books and journals are more often validated, censored, cross-checked and then certified to be worthy of being put to the readers’ usage and as a knowledge imparting source. 

Also, if we see the ambience and milieu of the library, it has all the vibes and vibrations that are extremely conducive to a learner’s need and study as they are free from any external aberrations and distractions, which one generally finds in the setting of online studies while being home or somewhere else like children playing, the hubbub of the household events, a cacophony of traffic noises and at times, restlessness and temptations as per the extrinsic atmosphere that might digress the path of reading and learning. The very reason why the people preparing for the toughest of exams, such as bureaucratic examination, devote the lion’s share of their time reading in libraries, as they say, that is extremely propitious for them owing to the pin-drop silence and above all, the collective vibrations that are free from all the distractions and therefore, the din.

Though another school of thought says that one might go and read in the online subsets and there is a vast amount of information available, however, they fail to understand that despite being an ocean of knowledge, e-sources are not always deemed reliable and trustworthy.

With that all, it takes us to the conclusion that libraries and books can never be replaced or displaced at the advent of online and other ancillary sources. Though they might be taken the help from, it might never supersede the presence of libraries.

Sample 6:

Students are currently able to acquire information on the Internet in a much easier way than in the past. While I accept that online sources of information have advantages over traditional libraries, I would argue that there is still a great need for libraries in today’s world.

It is true that accessing information online has several clear benefits. The first one is that online sources can store a huge amount of information that is greater than any physical library. This allows researchers to easily get the information they need without having to travel to a local library. Furthermore, students can look for information on the Internet whenever they want, while most libraries can only be visited for several hours per day. As a result, it might be better for those who are busy to utilize online information sources.

However, I believe that physical libraries still have special features that online sources can never replace. Firstly, libraries usually provide quiet areas, which is a great environment for students to learn and research since they are less likely to be distracted by things around them. For example, some of my university friends claim that they can only concentrate when they are in a quiet study area in my university library. Secondly, since everyone can easily write and post information on the Internet, these online sources are not always reliable for research. Therefore, we need libraries whose staff members have the responsibility to select and provide readers with the most credible materials.

In conclusion, while I agree that there are great benefits to getting information on the Internet, I disagree with the idea that traditional libraries are no longer important.

Sample 7:

Without a doubt, information has become more accessible than it ever was in the past. Virtually everything now is a click of a button away, provided that the user is able to input the appropriate prompt. However, to go as far as to say that such accessibility to information has rendered libraries obsolete is likely an exaggeration. While it is true that the uses of information online do in a lot of ways overlap with those of physical libraries, and that the ease of access to information online has indeed reduced the number of trips to the library overall, there are still many values brought about by libraries that are unique to libraries alone. 

Few could justifiably claim to truly know what their local library holds. The sheer breadth of topics and content covered by the books present in the literal nooks and crannies of any given library is often only known to librarians and perhaps the most passionate library visitors, and still, it is often underestimated. Libraries are often home to text that does not exist anywhere else, be it historic text exclusively kept in a certain location that has become too fragile to undergo digitisation, or text on obscure topics that has simply found its way to that specific library. These materials are, more often than not, unavailable in online databases. To close a library would be to rob these precious materials of a safe place where they could survive the flow of time that has caused the loss of so many other materials. After all, libraries serve far more than merely its patrons. They also serve as an archive to preserve human knowledge and wisdom, for once a piece of information is lost to time, it essentially is considered to have never existed. It is, then, no exaggeration to say that the existence of libraries is a service to society itself. 

Aside from its practical purposes, libraries are a place of great cultural value, as well as sentimental value to many a visitor. To tourists, libraries, along with museums, could be the only place where they learn about the city they are visiting. To our forefathers, libraries may be the only place where records of the foregone era in which they lived still exist. To researchers and university students, libraries are often the only place they could hope to still have that highly specific and obscure piece of information that online databases failed to contain. To people unaccustomed to continual usage of digital or devices, or those simply looking for a moment of respite from the endless hours of working with a computer screen, libraries may be the only place they can do so. One could argue that even then, aside from the functions mentioned in the previous paragraph, libraries are by no means a necessity. However, one must then consider whether it is actually necessary in the first place to condemn libraries for not being truly and irrefutably essential, for if that was the case, there are plenty far less meaningful establishments still in existent today at any given location. Should we or should we not conduct the purge in the same manner to these establishments?

At the end of the day, so long as libraries continue to function as both an archive to our history and wisdom and a retreat for people who seek the values they bring, no one could justifiably claim libraries are no longer necessary. Digitisation of books has been, without a doubt, a great step towards information accessibility for people all around the globe, but it is only just that, a means of access. Libraries, however, are much more than that, as has been explained in the text above. 

Sample 8:

In the digital age, where information is readily available online, the relevance of libraries has been questioned. While students can access vast amounts of information at their fingertips, the necessity of libraries remains a topic of debate.

Libraries offer more than just access to information; they provide valuable resources and services that cannot be replicated online. In addition to books and academic journals, libraries offer quiet study spaces, access to specialized databases, and guidance from knowledgeable librarians. These resources contribute significantly to students’ academic success by fostering an environment conducive to learning and research.

However, it is undeniable that the internet has revolutionized the way information is accessed and disseminated. Students can now access a wealth of information instantly, saving time and effort. Online resources also offer multimedia content, interactive learning tools, and global perspectives that complement traditional library resources.

In conclusion, while the internet has undoubtedly changed the landscape of information access, libraries remain relevant and necessary for students’ academic development. The combination of online resources and library services provides students with a comprehensive and diverse range of tools to support their learning journey. Therefore, rather than rendering libraries obsolete, the digital age has highlighted their adaptability and importance in facilitating knowledge acquisition and scholarly pursuits.

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Public celebrations (national days, festivals) are held in most countries. Some people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Many nations give importance to public celebrations as it upholds their integrity. Although it is opined that the money expended in this is to be deviated to other necessities, in my opinion, expense on national days and festival is worth.

Celebrating historical days gives a sense of unity among citizens which enhances the overall development. To be clear, patriotism can be instilled in the minds of youth by providing the chance of watching these events. For example, victory day of china commemorates the past events which helps youngsters to know more about the freedom fighters as well as their struggle. Thus, this makes it clear that having these days celebrated not only creates unity but also nurtures love towards nation.

Despite national barriers, many celebrate several festivals, the world over. It is during this time individuals find time to get-together unlike other days in which they may be busy with their work schedule. Besides, it enhances the relevance of tradition and culture among people. To be precise, had it not been for the efforts of authorities, upholding the traditional values would not have been possible.

Having analysed the significance of both national days and festivals, it can be concluded that fund allocated for the same is eventual because of the benefits it renders. The more the importance given to public celebrations, the better the nation would be.

Sample 2:

People have different views about whether public expenditure on national occasions such as new year or festivals is too much nowadays. While I agree that governments and individuals are spending a significant amount of money on those celebrations, I would argue that this activity is necessary and therefore can be considered acceptable.

It is true that a large amount of money is currently spent on some important celebrations of a country. Firstly, governments are spending a proportion of their budget on holding events to celebrate these occasions. For example, much money is being paid for fireworks on New Year’s Eve in many countries around the world. Secondly, individuals also spend money to have celebrations and parties with their families, which is a common habit in many areas. For instance, my parents and I often have a special dinner on the final day of every year.

However, I believe there are great benefits of public spending on national celebrations, and therefore it is completely justifiable. The first advantage is that this is a great way to preserve the culture of a nation. To illustrate, Lunar New Year is an important part of the Vietnamese culture, and holding celebrations for this occasion is necessary to remind younger generations of this tradition. Additionally, since these occasions are usually the only times for family members to have time and enjoy together, it is understandable that people would want to spend money on something that makes them happy. Finally, as there are only a few national celebrations in a year, the amount of money spent on those days is unlikely to be too much.

In conclusion, I disagree with the idea that people and governments are spending too much money on national occasions.

Sample 3:

Commemoration of important national events is a part of a nation's pride and a way to show respect for its tradition and history. Such events are instrumental in motivating the new generation to be patriots and bestowing tribute to people whose contributions are unforgettable. Thus, the amount spent on such celebrations is justified.

To begin with, public ceremonies are important in terms of spreading nationality, giving mass people a reason to forget their differences and improving public relations. The amount spent on such events is often disputed by many, but this opinion, in no way, is practical, and the importance of observing national events is unparalleled. Such a celebration, for example, Independence Day, teaches us who we really are, how much our ancestors sacrificed to give us freedom, and how we are all connected as a nation. In my early childhood, I did not show an acute interest in the history of our country until I noticed the way people observe Independent Day and how the whole nation remembers the sacrifices of the martyrs of our country. We need to celebrate our significant national days to pass the history to the next generation.

Now getting back to using the funds on more important things - a government already has a plan in place for disaster recovery and using funds for important sectors. Each sector in a country already gets a share of the national budget, and we need to focus more on prudently using the funds for true development, not switching funds from one important cause to another. Finally, festivals are people's fundamental rights, and a government should always support such public festivals including religious and national galas to prove that the authority works for the contentment of the public.

To conclude, public celebrations and the government's role in organising them and using the national fund to support it have a great influence in fostering nationality, showing a government's support to the people. This is why the amount spent on such events is essential.

Sample 4:

All around the globe, governments allocate a significant amount of funds towards public celebrations such as national holidays, religious and national days and traditional festivals. Some individuals argue that the government spends excessive amounts of money on these events and should instead allocate it towards other useful purposes. In this essay, I will argue in favour of this statement.

The governments should not spend a considerable amount of money on public celebrations when many people, particularly those in developing nations, are poor, lack access to proper healthcare and education, and are unemployed. For example, in several countries, significant proportions of the population live below the poverty line and lack access to basic amenities, including food and shelter. Under these circumstances, spending a substantial amount on public celebrations is an unnecessary luxury.

Another reason why excessive spending on public celebrations may not be rational is that it may create an unnecessary financial burden on the government, leading to other essential services being neglected. For instance, if a government allocates a significant portion of its budget on national celebrations, it may end up underfunding critical sectors like education, social security, and infrastructure. This can result in a lack of basic amenities and facilities, which can negatively impact the overall well-being and progress of society.

In conclusion, governments, especially in developing nations like ours, should allocate a very small fund for public celebrations and reserve a much bigger budget towards more pressing needs. I think that governments already spend too much money on public celebrations, and this budget should be better utilised on public health, education, social security, job creation and infrastructural development.

Sample 5:

Governments, all around the world, allocate a significant amount of their budget for public celebrations such as national holidays and festivals. While some argue that the government spends too much money on these events, I strongly disagree with this statement. In my opinion, the spending on public celebrations is justified, and I believe that the government should continue to fund these events.

It is essential to understand that public celebrations play a significant role in a country's cultural heritage and social cohesion. Cancelling these celebrations could result in the loss of cultural identity and traditions that unite the nation. Moreover, public celebrations can help promote tourism, generating revenue and creating jobs. For instance, the Mardi Gras in New Orleans is a significant source of revenue for the city's economy, with more than a million people visiting the city each year. Similarly, Oktoberfest in Germany attracts millions of visitors worldwide, and the festival has a positive impact on the country's tourism industry. These celebrations also foster cultural heritage and tradition.

Furthermore, public celebrations can bring people together and provide a sense of belonging and national pride. These events offer an opportunity for people to celebrate their achievements, remember their history, and acknowledge their shared values. For instance, Independence Day celebrations in our country remind us of our shared values of liberty and democracy.

In conclusion, while there may be arguments against spending on public celebrations, I believe that the money spent on these events is justified. These celebrations serve as a symbol of a country's cultural heritage and unity, and they also generate revenue, create jobs, and promote tourism. Therefore, governments should continue to allocate funds for these celebrations.

Sample 6:

Commemoration of critical national events is a part of a nation’s pride and a way to show respect for its tradition and history. Moreover, such events are instrumental in motivating the new generation to be patriots and bestow tributes to people whose contributions are unforgettable. Thus, the amount spent on such celebrations is justified, in my opinion.

To begin with, public ceremonies are essential in terms of spreading nationality, giving mass people a reason to forget their differences and improving public relations. Many often dispute the amount spent on such events, but this opinion is in no way practical, and the importance of observing national events is unparalleled. These celebrations, for example, teach us who we are, how much our ancestors had sacrificed to give us a better country and how we are all connected as a nation. In my early childhood, I did not show an acute interest in our country’s history until I noticed how people observed Independence Day and how the whole nation remembered the sacrifices of the martyrs of our country. We must celebrate our significant national days to pass the history to the next generations.

Furthermore, injecting money into those events is relevant. Being organized by a prestigious organization like the state, commemoration days will not only help citizens remember the fallen soldiers but also create a chance for the public to pay tribute to the people who have contributed to the nation. Furthermore, essential holidays will be a precious opportunity for family members to worship ancestors and entertain together. Consequently, people could respect previous generations, thereby warming up family bonds.

Nevertheless, a government should have a plan for disaster recovery and funds for important sectors. Each sector in a country already gets a share of the national budget. We must focus more on prudently using the fund for genuine development, not switching funds from one critical sector to another. But festivals are people’s fundamental rights, and a government should always support public festivals, including religious and national galas, to prove that the authority works for the public, not against them.

Thus, in conclusion, observing public celebrations is very important, but we should also take care that the event is not commercialized or used for petty social or national gains.

Sample 7:

National holidays cost countries and their governments a lot of money. Wages need to be paid to employees despite their absence from work, and a national loss in productivity is experienced. For these reasons, some people suggest governments do away with holidays and instead spend the money on worthy projects. While this might seem at first to be a practical suggestion, I disagree strongly for a number of reasons.

Firstly, it is axiomatic that a country’s production of goods declines when workers are not working; however, this is a tiny part of a much larger economic picture. Productivity is a function not only of hours worked but also of energy, drive, and morale. Thus, national holidays, which give workers a chance to relax and to celebrate aspects of their country and their lives, make for a happier and more productive workforce. In Australia, for example, the long weekend is a tradition that helps to unify society by making all feel rewarded and valued in a common enterprise and identity. It is for these reasons that labeling public celebrations ‘a waste of money’ cannot be supported.

Further, having the financial means to start new national projects is a good thing, but the question of apportioning funds in a manner that an entire society agrees is ‘a better way’ is simply unrealistic. A further consideration is the ramifications of pressure put on workers to work 52 straight weeks a year, a policy that could lead to stress-related illnesses and serious social problems. As this shows, the cancelling of public holidays and redirection of funds is an implausible suggestion.

In conclusion, I must affirm that while it is tempting to realize the short-term increase in productivity and savings that would result from abolishing public holidays, the overall cost greatly outweighs the gains.

Sample 8:

One of the most controversial issues these days is whether governments of various countries should avoid spending on public celebrations. Since I believe such activities are vital for a country’s customs and traditions, I disagree with this notion.

To begin with, some people argue that public celebrations are a waste of government resources, especially in monetary terms. They believe such events have no gain and do not contribute to the development of a country; instead, they burden the national treasury. The proponents of this argument state, a country should focus more on its vulnerable areas and allocate funds to improve the dire conditions of its underdeveloped regions rather than spending lavishly on celebrations. But we see all nations celebrating their public events with great pomp and show with a sense of pride.

Meanwhile, the publicly celebrated events are unique to every country and are a strong indicator of their culture, tradition, and history. In addition, such celebrations have proved to boost the tourism industry. As people travel to other countries to experience different cultures, there is no better way than to plan a visit when public celebrations are in full swing in a host country. For example, 23rd March is publicly celebrated in my country. This day has great significance in the independence of Pakistan; therefore, a national parade is conducted every year with participants from all over Pakistan. People from nearby countries come to enjoy this parade, and it is a great learning experience for the future generations as well. Therefore, it is easy to see why public celebrations are necessary.

The only logical conclusion is that spending on public celebrations is important for a country. Since the expenses on public celebrations are a drop in the ocean compared to other projects, even if the government ceases to fund such events and shifts that money to solve other issues it would not move the needle.

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Many people think there is a general increase of antisocial behavior and a lack of respect to others. What do you think are the causes of this and how to improve the situation?

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Sample 1:

In recent years, many people have noticed an increase in antisocial behavior and a lack of respect toward others. This has become a cause for concern as it affects the quality of life in our communities. In this essay, I will discuss the possible causes of this trend and suggest some ways to improve the situation.

One possible cause of the increase in antisocial behavior is the breakdown of traditional values and social norms. As our society has become more individualistic, people have become less concerned with the needs and feelings of others, leading to an erosion of social responsibility and moral values. Additionally, the rise of social media and online communication has made it easier for people to engage in disrespectful and offensive behavior without any consequences. For example, a person can create a fake social media account to bully or harass another person online, as the anonymity provided by social media allows that person to hide their identity and avoid any accountability for their actions.

To address this issue, it is important to promote a sense of community and social responsibility. This can be achieved by encouraging people to participate in community activities and events, such as volunteering and local programs. Another way to improve the situation is to increase the consequences of antisocial behavior. For example, individuals who engage in such behavior should be held accountable for their actions, and consequences should be severe enough to discourage future violations.

In conclusion, the increase in antisocial behavior and lack of respect toward others is a concerning issue, but there are steps we can take to address it. By promoting social responsibility and values like empathy and respect, we can improve the quality of life in our communities.

Sample 2:

It is true that antisocial and disrespectful behavior in society has been on the rise recently. This trend might be attributed to problems in one’s life, but a joint effort by both governments and individuals can reverse the trend.

Personal issues and low self-esteem are some of the factors that can contribute greatly to an inconsiderate behaviour. First, personal problems such as work disputes or relationship conflicts could lead to prolonged stress. This potentially provokes bitterness and frustration, which might subsequently be vented on others. In addition, low self-esteem is another cause, which usually stems from family problems or school bullying. Indeed, individuals with a history of being neglected by their families or abused by their friends tend to be insecure, unconfident and have little to no self-respect. As a result, they tend to exhibit the same abusive behavior that was once bestowed upon them toward others in order to mask their own insecurities.

In spite of the causes mentioned above, there are viable solutions and appropriate adjustments to improve the situation. First, people could set for themselves some conversation standards or develop a rudeness filter to avoid lashing out at others uncontrollably. This strategy could guarantee a certain decency of behavior, as well as making them politer and more respectful. In addition, governments could allocate more resources into childcare programmes, thereby reducing abusive incidents. As a result, children’s self-esteem and confidence would be increased, making them well-mannered members of society.

In conclusion, although personal issues and long-term oppression could negatively impact daily attitudes, solutions including better long-term childcare or self-discipline strategies would promote appropriate manners. In my opinion, the situation would be improved greatly within the next 10 years if these ideas were implemented.

Sample 3:

In recent years, society has witnessed a noticeable rise in antisocial and disrespectful behavior. This phenomenon happens in various contexts and stems from certain causes, which require definite solutions in order to fully address.

There are several explanations for this issue, one of which being the lack of support for respectful behavior on content-sharing platforms. These days, many people are habituated to media consumption in the form of watching trending videos, but there is noticeably little content which features positive behavior. This can easily warp the sense of reality among people, especially young watchers, and make them think respect is not necessary for life. Additionally, the lack of discipline from parents to children play a role as well. Some parents are too negligent or too lenient to their offspring, leading to a general reluctance to straighten out children’s behavior. Taking these points into consideration, it could be seen that unmannered and disrespectful acts have been given fertile grounds to develop.

In order to address this issue, some measures should be considered. Firstly, there should be more videos that educate watchers to be respectful on content-sharing platforms. If that is not possible, watching time should be limited by law, which is what the Chinese government has successfully done for their video-sharing apps. Meanwhile, in the family, parents should be more attentive to how their children act and be on the lookout for inappropriate behavior. Because the home environment has a profound impact on children’s development, spotting poor manners and promptly warning children against them promptly can prevent disrespectful behavior from taking hold. Parents should be quick to remind their offspring what is right and wrong, or use stern reprimand, in order to establish discipline.

In conclusion, the rise in antisocial behavior and lack of respect for others in society is a concerning issue that needs to be addressed. While there are different causes, the solutions mainly lie in restrictions on media consumption and better education. By implementing these measures, it is possible to create a more respectful and understanding society.

Sample 4:

In the current world, it is opined that an increasing number of individuals to tend to act offensively and disrespectfully towards others. This unsettling problem mainly derives from modern technology and lack of proper education, which can be addressed with both parental and governmental interventions.

There exist several driving forces behind the rise in antisocial and disrespectful behavior in society, one of which is the growing popularity of social media platforms. Given the recent boom in social networking sites namely Facebook, Instagram or Tiktok, much content containing vulgar and provocative information can be disseminated without censorship. As a consequence, being frequently exposed to these types of toxic content, numerous viewers, especially youngsters, can imitate and develop antisocial and aggressive behaviors towards others. In addition, lack of parental guidance and supervision is also responsible for rising disrespect among individuals. Indeed, since there are increasingly more working parents with hectic schedules, they tend to be negligent of their children, thus failing to teach them essential moral behaviors and social manners.

Two viable measures can be adopted to effectively tackle the issue of declining respect toward other people. Firstly, more stringent regulations on technology usage should be implemented, particularly when targeting younger generations. To clarify, governmental authorities should strictly censor hateful or disruptive information posted on social networking platforms so as to protect vulnerable individuals from being detrimentally affected. Secondly, it is crucial that parents instill strong moral values within their children at home, such as teaching them how to be kind and respectful towards others. They should also set strict parental controls on devices used by minors while monitoring their screen time, which will ensure their offspring consume healthy content online.

In conclusion, toxic content on social media together with parental negligence are the two main reasons for an increase in a lack of respect and misbehavior. Reversing this trend would require a multifaceted approach involving both families and governments working together in order to create a more civilized society that promotes mutual respect and understanding among citizens.

Sample 5:

The widespread problem of anti-social behaviours and disrespectful attitudes towards others has long been a major topic of concern in society. Some of the major culprits of this problem will be discussed before the most important solutions are drawn.

Reasons for this alarming situation vary. In some cases, people may hold an anti-social attitude or disrespect others because they live in an environment where violence and discrimination are the norms. For example, children of sexist parents in rural families in Vietnam, irrespective of their gender, show a worrying tendency of disrespecting women. In some other cases, it is the lack of parental guidance that is to blame. As modern parents are becoming increasingly busy with their jobs, they may have the proclivity to be indifferent to children’s education. When there is no one to help young children distinguish between the good and the bad, ill-mannered attitudes may emerge and develop among them without being controlled.

A number of definite actions could be taken to mitigate the problem. On the national level, the first obvious solution is to reduce violence and discrimination. As this would be a massive act, all the voters and legislators should be responsible. Together, they could call for stricter enforcement of the laws on violent and discriminatory acts to deter them from happening. Furthermore, on the nuclear-family level, parents must not underestimate the significance of their guidance for children. If they notice any signs of an anti-social or insolent manner in children, they must provide them with negative evaluations of these signs. At the same time, parents could also educate their children about social manners by instilling a pro-social sense in them. These actions, albeit small, could have a strong influence on children when they mature.

To conclude, it is clear that violence, discrimination, and the indifference of parents to children’s education are the major catalysts for the increase in anti-social behaviours and disrespect for others. Strong measures, such as stringent law enforcement on violent and discriminatory acts, must be taken to alleviate this distressing situation.

Sample 6:

The pervading instances of apathy and vitriolic behaviour amongst each other have been a menace to society for a long time and that continues to grow even today. The possible causes and remedies have been touched upon in this essay.

The major reason and foundational cause of it are born with the way one’s upbringing is subjected to, at large. The seed of rancour often germinates in childhood itself. Reports have suggested that children brought up in a toxic environment and violent households are twice as much imperilled to grow as individuals which may by the conventional definitions and boundaries, be called as having anti-social tendencies. Similarly, being subjected to bully or snide remarks all through the process of being grownup have reportedly been suggestive of laying the baselines of rancorous demeanours and hence, asocial personalities. Another major reason could be reckless parenting, where children are often inclined towards learning what they discern from extrinsic factors including peer pressure. Then, the notorious and most pronounced cause, the unregulated graphic contents majority of the people, primarily children are seen to be persuaded by.

The possible remedies and preventive measures that could be taken in this regard shall be good and meticulous parenting. As is also said, “Childhood shows the man as the morning shows the day”, the early years of a person should be assiduously catered to. In schools and colleges, it is of prime importance to monitor the activities and be alert and cautious to any actions suggestive of discrimination or suppression. They should be handled strictly, and apposite actions should be taken likewise. Workplaces likewise should be diligent enough in taking into notice such episodes of apathy and culprits should be dealt with with the rightful actions. Internal whistleblowers, anti-bullying squad and other associations likewise could be of immense help. Overlooking these matters and avoiding the same generally en route to something grave and hence, should be spoken out and reported as whatever the case may be.

Conclusively, the scourge of antisocial behaviour could only be contained when these issues are not slipped under the rag of trivial matters.

Sample 7:

Nowadays, every culture engages in inappropriate behaviour and disrespectful attitudes. There are other factors that should be taken into consideration; nevertheless, certain causes, such as unemployment and dysfunctional families, will be examined in this article. As a result, several potential solutions will be presented.

To begin with, folks just need employment to address the root reason for antisocial behaviour. People who do not have a profession will be hostile. More significantly, their bottled-up rage generates a variety of problems, including disrespectful behaviour. Furthermore, some people have grown up in impoverished households. In other words, they have not been trained appropriately, and as a result, they exhibit the same incorrect behaviour in their community, which is referred to as antisocial behaviour.

Some workable alternatives include, for example, requiring governments to offer employment opportunities to qualified individuals who are looking for work. Men and women should be given the same opportunity. Adults will treat one another with more respect if they can find fulfilling careers. For a clearer understanding, consider some of the economically advanced nations in Europe, which have low crime rates. Second, authorities need to show consideration for low-income families who live in substandard circumstances. Even though children in wealthy households may engage in juvenile delinquency, they should help them in sending their kids to school.

In conclusion, there are a few explanations for why individuals act improperly in public. Two reasons and two remedies have been presented in this article. Governments should implement some suitable measures to address social behaviour because it is a very significant issue.

Sample 8:

It is irrefutable that behaviour plays an indispensable role in everyone’s life, owing to which it is generally argued whether maximum utilisation affects individual behaviour or not. It is mainly due to excessive usage of screen activity and the lack of physical exercise, which can be tackled by spreading awareness.

Commencing with this, there are a plethora of reasons why there is an increase in hostile behaviour. The first and foremost is because of excessive cell phone usage. This is because smartphone releases detrimental rays from the screen, namely SAR, which is deleterious for holistic human development. Nowadays, an individual becomes not solely aggressive but also disrespectful. Besides this, due to this absence of exercise, individuals become the victim of injurious diseases, which is why they become prey to harmful behaviour. Take Canada as an epitome, which is witnessed because of excessive usage of technology, and teenagers become prey to bad behaviour. As a result, it is deconstructive development.

Moving further, in order to tackle this grave issue administration should spread awareness among individuals and make them aware of the injurious impact of the usage of mobile phones. In addition, the authority should make parks as well as grounds through which individuals do physical exercise, which is a justified boon for them and due to this, individuals behave well. For instance, in 2018, lawmakers of the United Kingdom made a myriad of grounds and parks where individuals perform physical activity rather than using a cell phone which is constructive development for them. Consequently, it is fruitful for individuals and brings drastic improvement in every person’s life.

Having concluded, although utilising mobile is beneficial for the individual in order to gain knowledge, it is detrimental to individual behaviour as well as mental health.

Sample 9:

There is no denying the fact that anti-social behaviour and disrespect towards others have become more prevalent in recent years. This issue has become a major concern for many people, and it is important to examine the reasons behind this trend and find ways to address it.

One of the main reasons for the increase in anti-social behaviour is the breakdown of traditional social structures. In the past, people lived in close-knit communities where they had strong social bonds and a sense of belonging. However, with the rise of technology and social media, people are becoming more isolated and disconnected from each other. This lack of social cohesion has led to a decrease in empathy towards others, which in turn has contributed to the increase in anti-social behaviour. Another contributing factor is economic hardship and inequality. In many societies, there is a growing divide between the rich and the poor, which can lead to feelings of frustration and resentment among those who are struggling to make ends meet. This can manifest in anti-social behaviour such as theft, vandalism, and other forms of criminal activity.

To address this issue, there are several steps that can be taken. One solution is to promote social cohesion and community involvement. This can be achieved by organizing community events, promoting volunteering opportunities, and providing support for local businesses. Another approach is to provide opportunities for education and employment, as this can help to reduce economic inequality and give people a sense of purpose and direction in life. Furthermore, promoting values such as empathy, kindness, and respect can go a long way towards reducing anti-social behaviour. This can be achieved through education and awareness campaigns, as well as by promoting positive role models in the media.

In conclusion, while there may be a general increase in anti-social behaviour and disrespect towards others, there are steps that can be taken to address this issue. By promoting social cohesion, reducing economic inequality, and promoting positive values, we can create a society that is more respectful and compassionate towards others.

Sample 10:

The perceived increase in antisocial behavior and lack of respect towards others is a concerning trend in contemporary society, stemming from various underlying factors. This essay will discuss the causes of this phenomenon and propose strategies to address and improve the situation.

One significant cause of this phenomenon lies in the potential breakdown of traditional family structures and the decline of strong social support systems. Weakening family bonds and a lack of parental guidance can hinder the development of essential social skills and a strong moral compass in young individuals. This, in turn, can manifest as disrespectful behavior and a disregard for societal norms. Furthermore, the pervasive influence of social media cannot be overlooked. Online anonymity can embolden individuals to engage in antisocial behavior without facing immediate consequences. Exposure to a constant barrage of negativity and hostility online can desensitize individuals, normalizing a lack of civility in real-world interactions.

Combating these issues requires a multi-faceted approach.  Firstly, strengthening the foundation of social values is crucial.  Parents and caregivers need to prioritize instilling respect, empathy, and responsibility in children.  Encouraging open communication and fostering a supportive family environment can equip youngsters with the social skills necessary to navigate the complexities of social interactions. Secondly, addressing the negative aspects of social media is essential.  Promoting responsible online behavior through educational campaigns and fostering a culture of online accountability can help curb the spread of negativity and encourage respectful online interactions.   

The rise in antisocial behavior and disrespect necessitates a collective effort.  By strengthening family structures, promoting social and emotional learning, and fostering responsible online behavior, we can cultivate a more civil and respectful society.  Prioritizing these measures will ensure that individuals not only understand the importance of mutual respect but also actively practice it in their daily interactions.

Sample 11:

In recent years, there has been an increase in concerns about the surge in anti-social behaviour and disrespect has become more prevalent. While some people argue that it is a mere perception, others believe that it is true. I agree with this statement, this essay will explore the reasons behind this trend and will also provide solutions for the same. 

Modern society includes rapid urbanization, which has caused a surge in the mobility of people from one place to another causing a weakening of community bonds. As a result, people feel very disconnected from their neighbours which leads to a lack of a sense of collective responsibility. This forms anti-social tendencies in people. In addition to this, the digital age has changed the way people communicate with one another. Online platforms allow people to interact face-to-face with others, but they also provide anonymity to the users, which fosters cyberbullying and trolling.  Apart from this, the pressure of contemporary life including things like work demands, financial stress and academic expectations strain mental health which leads to anxiety, depression and other disorders in people. These days the media too, glorifies rudeness, aggression, and disregard for others. When such behaviour becomes normalized, it spreads in society, influencing negative individual conduct.

To deal with all of this, people and the government should promote community engagement activities like holding neighbourhood events, volunteering or community activities. When people feel that they are part of a community they are less likely to engage in any anti-social activities. Furthermore, education should be provided on digital etiquette, cyberbullying and the impact of individual actions on society. Schools and parents should promote empathy and respect in virtual spaces. Moreover, mental health services should be accessible to everyone and at every possible place. Schools, offices and communities should prioritise one’s mental well-being. Apart from this, Media outlets, influencers, and content creators should promote positive role models and discourage disrespectful behaviour in people. They should do responsible reporting and should actively promote its consequences.

To conclude, addressing anti-social behaviours requires collective efforts. By strengthening community bonds, promoting digital literacy, prioritizing mental health, and fostering responsible media practices, a more respectful and harmonious society can be created. 

Sample 12:

It is unfortunate that along with vast progress in life there is also a growth in anti-social behavior and people have become less respectful of each other. This essay intends to analyze some causes of this phenomenon and suggest ways to ameliorate the situation.

There are many reasons for the increase in anti-social behavior in today's world. To begin with, the huge planet Earth is now a small global village. Everybody is connected through Internet, but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort, and freedom, but their hearts desire even more. To satisfy their heart's greed people have become workaholics, and as a result, have no time for family and friends. In other words, people have become selfish, isolated, and indifferent.

In addition, the changing family structure is another big cause of this phenomenon. Earlier, people lived in joint families and the grandparents were there to supervise the children. Now there are nuclear families in which both parents go out to work, and children are left unattended at the hands of media like the TV and the Internet. No one monitors what they watch, and they see the programs full of violence and crime, which makes them anti-social.

There are many solutions to this problem. Firstly, people have to learn to strike a balance between work and family life. Government should also fix the maximum hours a worker can work per week so that exploitation is not there in the job market. Secondly, people should revert back to the old joint family system. This would be beneficial for all. The children would learn moral values and the elderly would be well looked after. Finally, media can play a big role in highlighting the good points of the traditional and western culture so that the people can adopt good social values.

Summing up, anti-social behavior and mutual lack of respect in today's times can be dealt with by simple measures taken by individuals and governments collectively.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Moving to a different part of the world can be an exciting and challenging experience for many people, as they can meet new people, explore newplaces, and taste new cuisines. Meanwhile, it is essential to understand and respect the local customs and traditions of the host country, even when some of these conflict with the newcomers' own preferences.

On the one hand, I strongly believe that individuals should respect and follow the local customs and traditions of the country they have chosen to live in. Every country has its unique culture, beliefs, and practices that have been developed over centuries. As a foreigner, it is crucial to understand and appreciate these customs, which can help to integrate into the local community. For example, in Japan, it is customary to bow when greeting someone, and failure to do so can be considered rude.

On the other hand, it is essential to acknowledge that some customs and traditions might not align with an immigrant's personal beliefs or values. For instance, in some countries, women are expected to dress modestly and cover their heads, which may conflict with their personal freedom and expression. In such cases, it is crucial to engage with the local community and find a balance that respects both local customs and personal values.

In conclusion, I believe that for people who choose to live in another country, it is essential to find a balance that respects both local customs and personal values. By doing so, individuals can build meaningful connections and become active members of their new communities.

Sample 2:

The globalised world these days makes it simpler than ever before for people to relocate and start building a life in a new country. As everyone comes from their own cultural background, a question arises of whether or not people should be expected to follow the customs of their host country. I completely agree with the view that while learning about the local customs may require some time and effort, it is valuable and will aid the integration of the newcomers into society.

In many cultures, following the local customs means showing respect, which is an important moral value in nearly every culture. The opposite is also true: disregarding traditions is often seen as a sign of disrespect. In order to establish good neighbourly relationships and feel welcome in the new place, it is important to demonstrate the effort to become part of the community. By expressing an interest in learning traditions, new arrivals gain a chance to interact with their neighbours and colleagues, get to know them and build some connections in the new country.

Another positive aspect is the enhanced feeling of belonging that people get from participating in activities others around them are doing. When a national festival is in full swing, standing on the sidelines might make people feel excluded and perhaps even homesick, whereas joining others opens up opportunities to attend special events together, go to parties, meet new people and feel part of the celebrations. In Australia, for example, Easter is a very special time of the year and some of the traditional activities include Easter egg decoration, gifting and baking hot cross buns; sharing your designs and recipes with others is an excellent conversation starter.

In conclusion, learning the customs and traditions of one's new country doesn't mean a loss of their own culture. On the contrary, it is an opportunity to gain a deeper understanding of cultural connections and should be embraced as a positive experience.

Sample 3:

Many people argue that foreigners should adapt to the local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country. I completely agree with this view.

Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they do not conform to the norms of social behaviour in the host country. Firstly, it will become almost impossible for them to blend into their new environment. For example, an entrepreneur who comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the business practices of that country. There are bound to be many pitfalls, not only legal ones but also simply in terms of winning and keeping customers. Secondly, recent immigrants might fall foul of the law if they do not respect the behaviour and customs of locals. In Singapore, for instance, residents will consider newcomers dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places.

There are also many benefits for foreigners when they do adopt the customs and traditions of their new country of residence. One advantage is that local people will be more welcoming when they feel that the newcomers are showing respect for the local way of life. The establishment of closer links with the host community might lead to greater integration and mutual understanding. Another benefit is the richness of the experience which newcomers will gain from enjoying aspects of local customs and traditions, enabling them to participate in community life and avoid social isolation. During festivals and national holidays, especially, they will feel like they ‘belong’ in their new country.

In conclusion, I would argue that it is essential for new residents to follow the traditions and habits of locals in the host community in order to integrate fully into society.

Sample 4:

In the modern busy life, there are a large number of immigrants who have been willing to have a comfortable life in other nations. Many advocate that people should conform to the local customs and traditions when they settle in a new country. From my respective, I strongly agree with this idea because of some problems and benefits that people can face with them.

There are two important reasons why newcomers should blend into the local culture in the host country. Firstly, the refusal to adapt to host environment would create a cultural barrier for immigrants. This leads to social isolation, which has negative influences on people’s lives. Secondly, it is logical/true that limited knowledge of local customs may result in some illegal actions in the host country and make local/native people unpleased. For instance, in Singapore, one of the cleanest countries in Asia, local residents consider anyone dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in the public.

Newcomers can gain some benefits if they adopt the customs and traditions of a new country. One benefit is that if immigrants behave in accordance with the local norms, they will be accepted easily by local inhabitants, and as a result, they can receive/gain respects and affections as well as some help from the local. For example, when the enterprises want to expand their production in a new country, they must be aware of business practices there, which provides them with useful information to maximise profits. Another benefit is that newcomers might gain the richness of knowledge by virtue of the local customs and traditions, which enables them to actively participate in the activities of the community. In many festivals, people are able to participate/join freely and feel harmonious like their own country.

In conclusion, I would argue that people who dwell in a new country should follow the customs and traditions which local people observe.

Sample 5:

Many people argue that foreigners should observe the local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country. I purely agree with this opinion.

There are important reasons why people should follow the customs when they settle in a foreign country. Firstly, if newcomers behave according to the local norms, the resident population will accept them much more readily, they will make friends more easily, and they will earn respect. For example, an entrepreneur who comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the business practices of that country. There are bound to be many pitfalls, not only legal ones but also simple regarding winning and keeping customers by observing the local way of doing business. Secondly, recent immigrants are likely to be shunned if they upset local sensibilities. In Singapore, for instance, residents will consider them dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places.

In their adopted homeland, newcomers should also adopt the traditions which local people observe. The principal benefit is the richness of the experience which new residents will gain from enjoying aspects of the local traditions, enabling them to participate in community life and avoid social isolation. During festivals and national holidays, especially, they will feel like they “belong” in their new country. For example, Chinese people in the UK not only celebrate Chinese New Year, but they also often attend the local New Year celebrations and fireworks in London and other major cities.

In conclusion, I would certainly argue that people who settle in a new country should follow local customs and embrace the traditions which residents observe.

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

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Sample 1:

It is a fact that nowadays, nutrients are from educational, commercial and social points of view. There are several reasons for such situations and a few visible influences. These aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.

To embark on due to the competition era, parents are worried about the future of their children. So they keep engaging their child in various activities, but all these, they did not notice the freedom of their little one. Firstly, if we consider education, there is currently a considerable comparison done by their guardians. Hence, pressure to study makes children demotivate. Exams for entrance to colleges create pressure on students. Therefore, sometimes they forget to smile or to be happy. As a solution, there should not be an overload of studies and pressure to do specific work. Let children allow to do it by themselves and allow to take decisions independently.

In terms of social and commercial, many children are shy to communicate with others, while others are smart to converse with their close ones. Every person has different characteristics and perceptions, but people cannot judge them by comparing them with another child. So, comparison always makes demotivating, and it affects the growth of the youngster. People should note that it doesn’t force children to act commercially. Firstly, make them understand how to behave socially and communicate with them.

In conclusion, nowadays, competition between students has increased and forcing children to take academic subjects creates pressure on children. However, it can be addressed through educating children and parents.

Sample 2:

Creativity and vast imagination are all we need to explore or tamper with. Children are like wet clay. We can mould them according to our desires. Parents and our society want brilliant minds, and this effect results in children facing academic, social and commercial pressure. In this essay, I will explain the causes of this and what kind of action should be taken to control this.

Why are millions of children facing pressure? Due to the fast-paced society. In this world, everyone wants a large slice of cake in the form of an award. Education systems should emphasize a balanced curriculum that values not only academic achievements but also the development of social and emotional skills. Encouraging open communication about mental health within families and schools can help children navigate social pressures more effectively.

Parents must collaborate on values that prioritize personal growth over materialistic aspirations. This involves encouraging children to pursue their interests and passions, rather than solely focusing on traditional markers of success such as high grades and prestigious careers. By fostering an environment where children feel valued for their unique talents and abilities, parents can help reduce the stress associated with academic performance.

In conclusion, addressing the pressures children face necessitates a comprehensive strategy involving educational reforms, social awareness, and responsible commercial practices. By doing so, we can create an environment that nurtures the holistic development of our younger generation.

Sample 3:

It is certainly true that most juveniles are facing study and media pressure in today’s era. This is for various reasons, and some remedial actions can be taken to solve the problem.

The reason why children face academic pressure is because of tough competition, which is why each one wants to score high grades and be at the top of their class. This is because some of our society and parents believe that scoring high is only a clear path to a successful life. Some youngsters think that if they score higher, then they will only be selected for a better university and then get a good job. In tandem with this, social and commercial pressure is caused by children spending most of their time on the internet or television, from which they get attracted to some eatable items and start following their role models.

The most obvious solution to this problem is that the parents should not pressure their offspring to school because that may lead to depression or many health problems. To tackle this problem, they can lead their child to enjoy their life and encourage them to do good things. Secondly, the parental lock should be applied so that parents can check what commercial or social things their children are watching, which may help them in watching knowledgeable things.

In conclusion, pressure to score high or commercials is at the root of this problem. Nevertheless, there are some workable solutions in the form of encouraging their children to do good things.

Sample 4:

Some feel that children now have more responsibilities related to education, society, and economics. In my opinion, the causes all concern technology and the best countermeasures must be enacted in concert by governments and parents.

In my opinion, the primary catalyst for these added pressures is technology. In terms of education, students are now expected to learn about computers in school. By itself, this contributes little pressure; however, the additional time in front of a screen, coupled with the time spent in their free time online takes a heavy toll on mental health. Similarly, social demands related to the online world are growing. Most children must at some age begin to keep in touch with friends through various messaging applications and then learn the dynamics of social media, which can also increase anxiety. Finally, while online most children will be targeted by advertisements. This exploitation means that even the commercial world adds psychological pressure to the minds of the young.

The best solutions to these problems come from authority figures. Firstly, governments can establish stringent regulations. A good example of this would be a law recently passed in mainland China that prohibits gaming companies from allowing children to play more than 3 hours online per week. Similar restrictions about screen time in schools and laws governing advertising would also help alleviate the novel burdens technology has added to children’s lives. Additionally, parents can serve as a final filter and monitor their children closely. Instead of allowing their children to have a smartphone from a young age, they can instill a love of reading, playing outside, and socializing in the complete absence of technology in the hopes of fostering lifelong habits.

In conclusion, despite the risks that technology poses to mental health for children, there are simple steps that governments and parents can take. However, this requires that parents recognize these dangers as inherently harmful to their children’s development.

Sample 5:

There is a current distressing situation that the external life has burdened the youth with a wide range of pressures. In this essay, I would discuss several precursors to this issue, before some viable measures are drawn.

The fact that children are coerced into pressures and responsibilities stems from a number of root reasons. As far as the academic burden is concerned, it is the escalating competitiveness of the job market accompanied by the parental over-expectation that is to blame. The organisations’ demand for a qualified workforce pours into the parents’ mind a thought that their children have to be successful at school, and many youths today take studying as an obligation. In addition, some children, mostly those who have special talents or are born in famous families, may find their personal life in the public interest. The appearance on the media at such a young age may deprive the junior citizens of an innocent and carefree childhood. Regarding the commercial pressure children have to encounter, fast food chains or sweetshops have made them the target customers, and they are dragged into a chaotic influx of information by both the online and offline advertising campaigns.

In order to reverse such pressures on children, I would like to propose a number of drastic remedies. Firstly, parents should create a mentally and physically healthy domestic environment, involving a balance between learning and relaxing. Cooling-down activities such as sports, drawing or travelling, which are normally affordable, can release the stress of children brought on by both academic and social burdens. In addition, business morality has to be emphasised and penetrated by all firms. They should keep their online advertisements inaccessible to the youth by putting age restrictions on their websites.

In final words, it is unfair for the children to bear any kind of pressure, and every part of society should exert effort to provide them with a happy youth life.

Sample 6:

In recent times, children have been experiencing mounting pressure from various aspects of their lives, such as academics, social interactions, and commercialism. In this essay, we will delve into the causes of these pressures and outline some measures that could be taken to alleviate them.

There are several reasons why children are facing an increasing amount of pressure. One of the main causes is the emphasis placed on academic performance. Schools and parents alike put significant pressure on children to excel academically, with the expectation that good grades will lead to better opportunities in the future. In addition, the rise of social media has contributed to the social pressure that children face. Social media platforms have become a primary means of communication among young people, and the constant comparison to others can lead to feelings of inadequacy and anxiety. Finally, commercial pressures, such as advertising, can influence children's purchasing decisions and make them feel like they need to have the latest gadgets or clothing to fit in with their peers.

To reduce these pressures, various measures could be taken. Firstly, schools and parents should place less emphasis on academic performance and more on overall personal development. This would involve encouraging children to develop other skills, such as teamwork and creativity, and providing them with opportunities to explore different areas of interest. Additionally, social media usage should be monitored and limited to avoid overexposure and unhealthy comparisons. Finally, commercial advertising aimed at children should be regulated to ensure that children are not being unduly influenced by commercial interests.

In conclusion, the mounting pressures faced by children in contemporary society can have detrimental effects on their well-being and development. However, by addressing the underlying causes of these pressures and taking steps to alleviate them, we can create a more supportive and nurturing environment for children to grow and thrive in.

Sample 7:

With the ever-increasing competition and demands in life, a child’s family, school and society expect too much from the child. While it is important to excel in schools, sports, social activities and other aspects of life, those children should be shielded from the mounting pressures by maintaining a balance in their lives. Otherwise, the expectation would act as a boomerang and hamper their development.

The world has become far more competitive than ever before, and this is causing stress on young children as well. For instance, I did not have to compete with anyone to get admitted to my primary school, but my nephew had to take an entrance exam to get enrolled in the same school, and just one in every twelve applicants was successful. Besides, we had plenty of time to enjoy ourselves and play in school, while this is different for today's young pupils. They attend classes, take evening coaching, and go to music and art schools; and all these activities are meant to fulfil their parents' dreams and the school's expectations. Today's parents want their children to be top scorers in school, math geniuses, as well as great soccer players and renowned artists. The problem is that it is not a rational and practical expectation, but those expectations create more pressure on young minds. Moreover, the commercialisation of products which target young children is another problem we need to address as they also create stress on our children. 

To address this issue, we have to draw a line to our expectations and find out the true potential of a child rather than pushing them constantly. The state should discourage having an entrance exam in elementary schools and have sufficient funds to ensure proper entertainment and sports facilities in academics. Moreover, teachers should not put pressure on children to do homework every day, and they should try to make school a place to learn in a fun way. Finally, social perspectives to prepare every boy or girl to become a doctor, engineer or a high-rank government employee should change immediately.

To conclude, modern children are being pushed beyond their limits to achieve academic, social and professional success, and this has unfathomable negative consequences. Parents and teachers should find the hidden talent of a child, not try to make them something they are not meant to be.

Sample 8:

In contemporary times, juveniles are exposed to pressing demands posed by their studies, the society around them and the overwhelming influence of the media and all manifestations. The source of these challenges is visible but, the ways to resolve these issues are elusive. Thus, one needs to delve deeper.

The most prominent source of immense load on young minds is the need to perform at formal tuition. Constantly rising emphasis on testing has made life miserable for youngsters as they are caught between two extremes, learning and preparing for examinations, leaving them with little time for extracurricular activities. The crisis further deepens when parents also raise the bar of expectations from their wards, which many times also mirrors the social perspective. Since everyone wants their children to outperform those of their peers and social connections. 

Similarly, peer pressure and perspectives formed by engaging with electronic games television and the internet have a far reaching impact on tender minds who are required to adhere to the norms established by their mothers and fathers, and also address their own aspirations, foster by engaging with those of their age groups and various external sources of information. Most are found facing a dilemma. 

However, the panacea for this predicament can only be found if schools and parents make joint efforts. Where the former should reduce the frequency of the examinations, the latter should stop comparing their offspring and start seeing them as distinct individuals. Furthermore, there is also a need to make expectations more realistic besides, monitoring how young ones interact with the outer world.

Overall, although the situation is bemusing as youngsters face numerous uncertainties, things can be improved and life of young ones made easier if parents and schools act prudently and adopt sensitive approach towards young individuals.

Sample 9:

In contemporary society, children are increasingly burdened with a multitude of pressures stemming from academic, social, and commercial realms. This essay will explore the causes behind these pressures and propose measures to alleviate them.

One of the main causes of the mounting pressures on children is the ever-increasing emphasis on academic achievement. In many educational systems, success is often equated with high grades and standardized test scores, leading to intense competition among students. The pursuit of academic excellence creates a significant burden, as children are subjected to rigorous study schedules, excessive homework, and immense performance expectations.

From a social perspective, the influence of social media and peer pressure exacerbates the pressures faced by children. The constant exposure to carefully curated online personas and the need for validation through likes and followers can lead to feelings of inadequacy and the fear of missing out. Commercialization is another prominent factor contributing to the pressures faced by children. Advertisements, targeted marketing, and materialistic culture create a sense of consumerism, promoting the idea that possessions equate to happiness and social status. This relentless consumer culture puts pressure on children to acquire the latest gadgets, trendy fashion, and branded products.

To mitigate these pressures on children, a holistic approach is required. Firstly, educational reforms should prioritize a more well-rounded approach, focusing on the development of skills, critical thinking, and creativity rather than solely relying on test results. Encouraging a love for learning and promoting individual strengths and interests will foster a healthier academic environment. Additionally, parents and guardians play a vital role in supporting children. Open communication channels should be established to provide a safe space for children to express their concerns and seek guidance. Society as a whole must also take responsibility by promoting media literacy and encouraging the responsible use of technology. Finally, implementing stricter regulations on targeted advertising aimed at children and promoting a more inclusive and diverse representation in the media can help in this regard.

In conclusion, children facing escalating pressures from academic, social, and commercial perspectives require comprehensive solutions. By addressing the causes behind these pressures and implementing measures such as educational reforms, parental support, and societal changes, we can create an environment that nurtures the well-being, happiness, and holistic development of children.

Sample 10:

During the process of ensuring a better future for our children, we are knowingly and unknowingly putting more pressure and burden on them and our expectations sometimes are incessant. However, we should let them enjoy their childhood and not make them robots, and this can be achieved by reducing the competitions and having practical expectations from them.

To begin with, the main reason children today are under constant pressure from their parents, society and country is the increasing competition everywhere. For instance, a good school has only 100 seats for children while more than 10 thousand children compete for admission to this school. As a result, parents and teachers are forced to put extra pressure on their children. Colleges, universities and the job market has more or less that same picture where thousands of people compete for a few posts. Secondly, parents and society want our young children to be brilliant in every aspect of life – in education, in sports, in arts and extracurricular activities and so on as if without being multitalented, our youngsters are not going to make positive impacts in the future. Finally, youngsters in many countries are forced to take up some sorts of part-time jobs while studying, some to gain experience and some to support their finances, and this is also creating an invisible pressure on them.

To let our children enjoy their childhood and grow up in a remarkably positive environment, we should have practical expectations from them. This single aspect can eliminate many invisible burdens modern children have today on their shoulder. We should not engage them in activities we, not them, are interested in and find out their hidden talents to prepare them for the future. Finally, the government and the country should ensure that we do not put our children to unnecessary competitions by enhancing the country’s economy and by creating more job opportunities for them.

In conclusion, children are the future leaders, and they will lead society, the nation and the country one day. Thus, we want our children to get the very best and become ideal citizens so that they can have a better life while making the world a better place for all. To ensure that, we need to have practical expectations from them and build a better society for our future generation.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

The history curriculum has always been one of the key subjects during school years. Some people suppose that acquiring knowledge from world history is a significant process for school children, while from my perspective, setting the course of local history should be attached more importance to.

Admittedly, there are good grounds to argue that it is the process of learning international history that drives school children to broaden their horizons. Considering that world history courses function as a platform for students to obtain a comprehensive understanding of the difference between cultures and civilizations, school children may gradually comprehend how to embrace the distinction in the background of globalization. Therefore, in the long run, the conflicts, caused by prejudice and misunderstanding, can be significantly mitigated provided that citizens have generally been cultivated with multi-perspectives from an early age.

However, the sense of identity that national history classes prepare the young generation with should not be ignored. For one thing, the knowledge from local history can be easily understood and digested by school children since what the course covers lead students to trace their own origins, which means they can learn to appreciate local characteristics combined with the specific environment they live in. For another, setting national history courses is also significant for cultural heritage. The contents, whether it be the documents of public events or the records of historical figures, guide students to recognize their roots, therefore helping them raise the awareness of maintaining the uniqueness of local culture. Under the circumstance of globalization, when cultural assimilation is likely to take place, this kind of consciousness instilled in young individuals makes them take initiative to inherit national features, contributing to the distinct advance of countries.

In conclusion, attaining local cultural literacy should be given top priority to for school children compared with learning world history in contemporary society.

Sample 2:

Teaching history for schoolchildren has been a heated topic constantly. There is a common belief that local history is more important to children than world history. However, I disagree with this belief.

I believe the notion that local history is more valuable than world history should be rejected. Some people may claim that the insights into the local historical values are completely enough for one to live. Their claim could be true a few decades ago when most interpersonal communications were between people of the same race and origin. However, this view is now outdated, as the world has become globalised, and international business and migrant workers have made any community a global village. In this context, an understanding of a foreign country’s history would enable future local workers to reinforce the relationship between them and the expatriates from that country.

In addition, I am strongly convinced that children would benefit the most only when the learning of local history is placed parallel to that of world history. To understand a local historical event, children should put the regional and sometimes even world context in that historical era into consideration. For example, children should acknowledge that the event that Vietnam regained its independence after defeating the Japanese troops in Indochina in 1945 only happened after a series of relevant events in the World War II, one of which is the surrender of Japan to the Allies. In this way of learning, children would understand history more deeply and thoroughly.

All the existing data has provided a concrete foundation that the study of local history should always be parallel to that of world history. This practice would guarantee that children learn history more comprehensively and be able to tighten the bond with migrant workers in their country.

Sample 3:

History is a subject that is present in most school systems and is compulsory at many levels of education. Regarding this matter, debate has been heated about the importance of teaching of local history, instead of world history to schoolchildren. In my point of view, the focus of this subject should be placed on the local history rather than the history of the world.

Firstly, local history provides a foundation for the youth to explore their own identity and that of their nation. For example, Vietnamese school children should be educated about the Great Hunger occurred in 1945 during the war with the Japanese in order to fully appreciate the plight that their forefathers had experienced and therefore value the life of peace, freedom and independence today. I feel it is essential that the youth, the leaders of tomorrow, are given the broadest, most accurate platform on which they can construct their own perceptions of life.

Opponents of this view claim that the world history should not be removed from the school programs as it is related to local history and students will have a better understanding of the subject. I am convinced that this view is flawed. In fact, much history teaching is concerned simply with memorising “facts” in the world that have little to do with their own countries and therefore students will feel overburdened if they are obligated to learn it. This, in the long run, would not benefit children.

All things considered, for school children, the relevance of receiving knowledge about local history dwarfs that of learning world history.

Sample 4:

It is argued that children in the age of schooling should place more emphasis on learning the history of the place where they live than the global history. While I agree that finding the local history will help them gain more knowledge of their origin, I believe that there are some benefits of accessing the world history.

On the one hand, it is true that teaching children understanding of the local history helps them promote a sense of patriotism. In fact, the whole Vietnamese had suffered numerous strauma during the war against Western enemies, just because thousands of Vietnam heroes sacrificed their live to protect the independence and freedom. Therefore, they have to a duty to increase the nationalism in the preservation of the peace that they are enjoying. Furthermore, nowadays more young people are reluctant to studying history compared to epochal significance. This means that the value of historical events will be put aside to some extent and gradually sink into oblivion, hence it is vital that children should learn the past of ancestors and predecessors.

On the other hand, studying history in the world brings numerous benefits to young learners. Firstly, obtaining knowledge from the world enhances our horizons of the civilization and developments of humans. During the globalization, more children are likely to access international education, so they face misunderstanding and backwardness when moving to a new country if they fail to recognize the importance of human history. In addition, attaining cultural literacy on a world scale is another advantage. Human beings, unlike other species, have the gift of language, that is, symbolic thinking and communication, so communicating intelligently in any language, requires that we share a common fund of knowledge, information, vocabulary, and conceptual tools to become global citizens.

In conclusion, I hold my firm belief that by learning history at a local and international level in educational system, future generations will get deeper insights into the past human dignity.

Sample 5:

The debate on whether local history or world history is more crucial for school children's learning is ongoing. I stand in opposition to the view that local history holds more significance than global history, believing that both are of equal importance.

Local history undoubtedly has its place in education. It connects young learners to their nation's past, instilling a sense of pride and respect for the sacrifices made by previous generations. Take Vietnam, for instance, where the youth learn about the nation's fight for freedom through numerous wars. This knowledge not only enriches their understanding but also motivates them to live up to their ancestors' legacy.

However, diminishing the role of world history in the curriculum would be a mistake. In an era marked by globalization, it's imperative for students to gain a comprehensive understanding of different cultures and histories worldwide. Such knowledge fosters a global perspective and mutual respect among diverse nations. Moreover, studying global historical events like the abolition of slavery and decolonization offers insights into international relations and historical progress.

In sum, both local and world histories are invaluable to the educational journey, each contributing uniquely to students' learning and development.

Sample 6:

Many people have valued the role of local history to schoolchildren over that of world history. In my opinion, I disagree with those people as both of them are equally essential for young learners.

Studying the history of their hometown is for sure an indispensable part of school’s curriculum during students’ early education. I believe having thorough insights into what happened in the past at one’s locality develops his patriotism. For example, children of primary and secondary schools in my village are taught about how their ancestors defended their land against outside intruders and reclaimed sovereignty. Therefore, those young children would take pride in their origin and treasure the life they know as it is today. Additionally, I think it is not only students’ privilege but also their responsibility to know about their own history to understand their hometown’s traditional values and identity.

From another angle, learning about world history shares equal importance just as local one. Acquiring knowledge about the world’s past events equips students with a more well-rounded perspective of life. Lessons about the World War or Feminism protest against women’s abuse and discrimination would help those learners enhance their understanding about various aspects of the world. Furthermore, I think that being taught about the other countries’ historical backgrounds would benefit young learners in their future career. Students who accumulate knowledge of this particular field at an early age would possess a golden selling point to work for foreign enterprises, especially those who highly value company culture like Japan.

In conclusion, I believe the significance of domestic and international history cannot be brought into comparison to see which one is more necessary because they have distinctively equal meanings to children.

Sample 7:

It is contended that learning about local history holds greater significance than understanding global history for students. I partially agree with this view as I believe both local and global history education bear unique values and should complement each other in the learning journey.

On one hand, knowledge of local history allows students to gain a profound understanding of their roots and cultural identity. This is of vital importance in preserving traditions and values that define the uniqueness of their community. Furthermore, it encourages respect and pride for the heritage, which in turn instills a sense of belonging and responsibility towards the local environment and society.

On the other hand, global history education is pivotal in promoting empathy and broadening the students' perspective. It offers a broader view of diverse cultures, thereby fostering tolerance and understanding among different nations. However, it should not replace local history education but rather supplement it, creating a balanced understanding of the past, both near and far.

In conclusion, while the importance of teaching local history should not be understated, integrating it with global history lessons would indeed equip students with a more holistic perspective of the past, enriching their academic and personal development.

Sample 8:

While some history lessons in schools focus on the history of the children’s country, others take a more global approach and teach the history of other countries as well. I believe it is important to learn about the past of one’s own country but also the history of the world.

On the one hand, there are benefits to learning the history of one’s own country. It can foster a sense of pride and patriotism for children in the place they have come from by teaching them about the many achievements of their nation over history, such as wars they have won or freedoms gained. It is also important for children to understand where the customs and values of their country have emanated from in order for them to feel that they too would like to continue these into the future. Both of these will mean the children will grow up feeling a sense of belonging to where they have come from. 

On the other hand, it is important to learn about the rest of the world too. Every country has a different history and culture and if children are not taught about this, they will lack the analytical abilities to really understand their own nation and how it compares to other places. Countries are also intertwined in their histories. There have been two World Wars and so it is impossible to fully appreciate these without learning about world history.

All in all, it is paramount that children understand history at both the national and international level. Learning only about one’s own country would result in a very narrow-minded view of the world. 

Sample 9:

It is often argued whether schoolchildren should prioritize learning about local history or world history. While some may advocate for the significance of studying world history, I firmly agree that learning about one's local history holds greater importance and should be an essential component of the school curriculum. This essay will discuss how studying local history fosters a sense of patriotism and preserves valuable community values. Furthermore, it will argue against the inclusion of extensive world history in the curriculum, as it may confuse and overwhelm students.

Firstly, studying local history allows schoolchildren to develop a strong sense of patriotism. By understanding the struggles and triumphs of their ancestors in defending their lands from external threats, children can cultivate a deep pride in their roots. For instance, when they learn about the valor and bravery displayed by their great-grandparents in safeguarding their community's peace and prosperity, it instills a sense of belonging and identity. Consequently, this nurtures a genuine attachment to their local history and encourages them to contribute positively to their communities.

Additionally, local history encompasses a plethora of invaluable values and virtues, such as loyalty, bravery, and honesty, which need to be preserved and passed on to the next generation. These essential character traits form the ethical backbone of communities and promote harmonious relationships among individuals. Since children might not respond well to advice, the most effective way to inculcate these values in them is through the teaching of local history. By highlighting the exemplary conduct of past community members and their adherence to these virtuous ideals, children are not only inspired but also motivated to uphold these principles in their own lives.

Some argue that studying world history expands children's horizons and prepares them for the future. However, I believe that bombarding children with a multitude of historical events from around the world may overwhelm and confuse them. The sheer volume and complexity of global history can be daunting for young learners. By restricting their historical knowledge to local events, children are offered a more manageable framework from which they can comprehend and appreciate history.

In conclusion, while there are those who advocate for the inclusion of world history in school curricula, I strongly believe that the advantages of learning local history far outweigh those of studying the history of the world. By instilling a sense of patriotism and preserving valuable community values, local history not only enriches children's understanding of their past but also shapes their present and future identities.

Sample 10:

Exploring the history of their hometown undoubtedly forms an integral part of the school curriculum during early education. I firmly believe that gaining a comprehensive understanding of past events in one's locality fosters a sense of patriotism. For instance, primary and secondary school children in my village are educated about how their ancestors defended their land against external threats and reclaimed sovereignty. Consequently, these young individuals develop a sense of pride in their heritage and cherish their current way of life. Additionally, I opine that it is not merely a privilege but also a responsibility for students to familiarize themselves with their own history in order to comprehend their hometown's traditional values and identity.

From a different perspective, learning about world history holds equal importance to local history. Acquiring knowledge about past global events provides students with a more comprehensive view of life. Lessons on events such as World War or the Feminist movement against women's abuse and discrimination contribute to students' understanding of various aspects of the world. Furthermore, I believe that learning about the historical backgrounds of other countries would benefit young learners in their future careers. Early exposure to this field of knowledge could give students a competitive edge, particularly in pursuing opportunities with foreign enterprises, especially those that place a high value on company culture like Japan.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the importance of domestic and international history cannot be compared to determine which is more essential because they hold distinctively equal significance for children.

Sample 11:

It is believed by some that studying local history is more advantageous for children than studying world history. While the knowledge of local history is important, the study of world history is as important.

On the one hand, there are profound advantages of teaching local history to the students. To begin with, this information is relevant to the students' own surroundings. It touches children with their roots. The study of local history helps them become better voters and more effective members of any type of society. Secondly, local history fills the young minds with a sense of patriotism. For instance, it is through history alone that an Indian child comes to know of the various deeds performed by such patriots as Guru Gobind Singh, Rani Lakshmibai, Bhagat Singh, Gandhiji, etc. By reading their great lives and deeds, the child can easily be inspired to emulate them. A proper teaching of history can prepare the way for sober nationalism.

On the other hand, the study of world history cannot be undermined in today's era of globalization. All major civilizations of the world have common roots, which point to the basic unity of mankind. The cultures of different countries have contributed in one way or the other to the total heritage of mankind. One of the important aims of history is to point to this basic unity. History is one subject that can promote international understanding in the best possible way. It can destroy prejudices existing among nations, and it can also help develop unity among nations. Global history people understand how other cultures affect their own. It also encourages them to develop a greater appreciation for multicultural influences within their own communities as well.

To sum up, it can be reiterated that the study of history is important in toto, but local history must be taught before teaching the history of the world.

Sample 12:

It is argued that children at school should be taught about the history of their hometown rather than the global history. I firmly disagree with this view for the following justifications.

The main reason why it is better for schoolboys and schoolgirls to be informed of the world history is that it helps them to understand how the society which have changed in the past. It is true that many countries in Africa was dominated by the invasion of Westerners. Nevertheless, after the free social Africa, they are now developing in a quick manner. Therefore, by studying what happened around the world, students can analyze the wrong and right things. On the contrary, placing more priority on teaching young learners local history would end up making them bored with historical subject. Because if their hometown, having fewer historical events to emphasize the evolution of society, students can not understand all the social value.

In addition, only by learning the history of the world can the young become a global citizen. Unarguably, when they are global citizens, they can travel to their favorite place, they can also work overseas and experience other cultures. By contrast, it is proved challenging to students who do not know about world history, because they find it very difficult to make friends with foreigners or understand their behavior. Consequently, schoolchildren can only live around their hometown, thereby not developing comprehensively.

By way of conclusion, I totally believe that better emphasis should be placed on the importance of a student’s global history than development in local history, which both strengthens national identity and offers a comfortable and effective time learning that monotonous subject.

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Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Sample 1:

The advent of the Internet and online social media is widely believed to have rendered print media obsolete and unnecessary for modern society. Personally, I completely agree with this statement for the reasons mentioned below.

Firstly, contemporary printed newspapers tend to be largely ignored because of their shortcomings in terms of accessibility. As today’s citizens have been extensively exposed to modern technology and frequently use their smart electronic devices to access social media, virtual news seems to be much more preferable to them. This kind of information absorption is undoubtedly more convenient and accessible than traveling to a physical bookstore or newsstand and directly purchasing newspapers there.

Secondly, online media are absolutely superior to their print counterpart in terms of information updates. Specifically, while it normally takes several days for the latest news to appear on traditional newspapers because of the editing and publishing processes involved, virtual newspapers are capable of displaying regularly updated current affairs owing to their sophisticated technological features. Consequently, online readers can absorb up-to-the-minute information and knowledge on current news with significantly more ease.

Lastly, the impact of online newspapers on the environment appears to be much more positive than printed ones. This is because the mass production of conventional newspapers often demands the annual felling of a tremendous number of trees, potentially leading to serious natural catastrophes such as floods or droughts. By contrast, virtual newspapers hardly require any ecological element, which can largely contribute to the conservation of the environment and natural resources.

In conclusion, it is my firm conviction that online media will totally replace their print counterpart in the near future for its superior advantages such as easy accessibility, quick updates on latest news and contribution to the environmental protection.

Sample 2:

Due to the spreading popularity of online media, printed newspapers are no longer needed. I am in total agreement with this opinion as digitalized publications are already more dominant because of the advantages they offer.

First of all, e-news is more environmentally friendly compared to traditional newspapers which drain a range of natural resources for their production and transportation. With the rising global concerns about environmental problems, it is understandable why a large number of readers have switched to online news as an eco-friendly substitution for the conventional reading habit.

Another reason why traditional newspapers can no longer be the most important source of information is that they cannot compete with online news in terms of updating speed. Thanks to the omnipresence of the Internet and electronic devices like smartphones, readers can receive real-time updated national and international breaking news. Moreover, internet users have access to a wide range of reading resources with various contents free of charge or at a smaller expense in comparison with buying different printed publications from press agencies.

Additionally, conventional newspapers cannot offer readers the experience online media does. While printed publications can only convey messages through texts and images, online news provides people with the ability to watch the event as it is happening, share and discuss articles, and even contribute with their own updates. That is why platforms like Twitter and Youtube have gained such popularity among news readers.

In conclusion, due to the undeniable benefits online media brings to readers such as its easy accessibility, diversity, and environmental sustainability, traditional printed newspapers are becoming obsolete. 

Sample 3:

Technology advancement has resulted in a profusion of digital platforms. As a result, the vast majority of people believe that daily newspapers are no longer necessary. As a consequence, in my opinion, an up-to-date broadcast is now available on electronic devices. In the following paragraphs, I will clarify my position. There are numerous reasons to support this notion.

Nowadays, getting news on the internet provides a number of advantages. For starters, internet papers keep readers up to date faster than traditional periodicals. For example, we can acquire global updates instantaneously on the internet, but it would take publications a few days to investigate and publish the data officially. Second, the internet allows users to access free material and the most up-to-date information without having to purchase physical newspapers from stores, allowing them to save money and time.

On the other hand, I believe that physical diaries are still indispensable for a variety of reasons. The first is that they are one of the most reliable sources of information. Because anybody may create and upload articles on the internet, they may include untrustworthy material that has not been adequately vetted before release. Furthermore, online journals frequently have a detrimental impact on people's health. For example, if we spend many hours each day reading online news on our mobile phone or computer, this might have a negative influence, particularly on our eyes.

In conclusion, while individuals are increasingly using alternative media to acquire worldwide information, this does not indicate that there is no longer a vital demand for physical press.

Sample 4:

It is commonly argued that physical newspapers are no longer essential. I completely agree with this notion due to the greater updatability of online newspapers and how more natural resources can be saved.

The first justification for my agreement is that online newspapers would be superior to conventional ones in terms of faster updates. More specifically, they can provide up-to-the-minute information about events that are happening domestically and globally, enabling Internet users to obtain current news in a matter of minutes. For example, when the Russo-Ukrainian War broke out, the information about its occurrence and consequences was updated instantly and continuously on different media platforms such as TV and the Internet. On the contrary, newspaper readers have to wait for at least several days to acquire the news about it due to the long process of editing and publishing.

Another reason why I am of the opinion that traditional newspapers could be superseded by Internet-based news is that more natural resources can be saved. While the production of physical newspapers requires a large amount of paper, ink used and the distribution of newspapers by truck, the proliferation of online news would prevent a substantial number of trees being felled and reduce emissions of pollutants into the air. As environmentally friendly lifestyles are being favoured by more people in contemporary society, paper-based newspapers are more likely to become obsolete.

In conclusion, I strongly maintain that paper-based articles are falling into disuse and are not required because news in other media is a more beneficial source of information owing to their ability to be updated quickly and save natural materials. It is advisable that the government take action to enhance cybersecurity to ensure the veracity of news on the Internet.

Sample 5:

We all are living in a digitalized world surrounded by techno-savvy ways of living. Everything we wish to know about does not require paying a visit. Everything is synchronized on our phones. With this boon of technology, we can reach any corner of the world virtually and could cross the limit of boundaries. We can just by sitting indoors know what is happening in and around the world.

In modern times it is not necessary for the people to only read printed newspapers to gain information regarding what is happening in the world. Many people believe that they do not require printed newspapers for the information. In the techno-savvy world with a simple click, we can gain information about the events happening. I agree with this concept. There are many reasons for supporting this idea.

To begin with, the first advantage which we can attain is that of reduced cost of publication in the digital publication. Printed newspapers involve a lot of additional publication costs. For publications, a lot of press agencies have to be contacted, and other additional charges are also applied for publication. The digital publication can help to extend the reach just by surfing on the internet and simultaneously can lessen the burden of additional charges.

Additionally, printing publications have a limited reach to the general public. They are limited by the boundaries of the country, whereas digital publications have a wide range of reach. We can sneak into the digital publication of any country through the internet. Thus, breaking the limit of boundaries.

Lastly, besides being economical, digital publications are also environmentally friendly. With the rising global concern, it is more preferable to switch to the online mode of publication. Printed publication drains a lot of natural resources, especially wood. Thus, digital publications are more eco-friendly as compared to printed publications.

To conclude up seeing the numerous advantages it is more appropriate and prudent to switch to digital publication for gaining information.

Sample 6:

With the fast pace of development, we have changed many of our traditional habits. With modern technological development, we can gain information regarding any event happening in and around the world. Moreover, with the ongoing pandemic, we all are compelled to switch to the techno-savvy mode for our day-to-day activities. But as we are all aware that every development begets its advantages and drawbacks.

There is an ongoing tussle between two opinions regarding putting a halt to the printed publications of the newspaper. Many people believe that it is not necessary to rely on the printed newspaper for gaining information, whereas many still wish to carry on their traditional habit of reading printed newspapers. Thus, before reaching any conclusion it is important to reflect upon the arguments of both sides.

To begin with, the printed newspaper holds immense for many people. Elderly, people are among those who still fancy the tradition of reading printed publications. Due to their weak eyesight, they prefer to read printed newspapers. Besides, reading an e-paper would not be convenient for them.

Secondly, printed publication supports many paper factories and putting a halt to the printed newspapers can be a great loss to them. These factories would incur a great loss.

Now taking a glance at the advantages of the e-paper, I feel that they are more beneficial as compared to the printed publication. E-papers are more easily accessible and are more economical as compared to printed newspapers. Moreover, they have a wide range of extensions and are not restricted by any boundary of the country. With a click, we can have a glance at the various events happening in and around the world. Secondly, e-papers are more eco-friendly than printed ones. Keeping in mind the present global conditions we should be cautious and try to lessen the global crisis by switching to online mode.

Thus, to crown it all I feel that e-papers are more economical and eco-friendlier to choose from as compared to the printed ones.

Sample 7:

With the astonishing technological development, we can reach any corner of the world in the blink of seconds. Such technological development is a great boon for humans where they don’t have to anymore rely on newspapers for gaining information regarding what is happening in the world. In today’s contemporary world many people believe that they don’t need printed newspapers to gain information. I agree with this idea. There are many reasons to support this idea.

Firstly, e-papers are more economical and convenient for the young generation. These e-papers have more range of reach as compared to the printed newspaper. We can easily glance at the international publication through the internet and can sneak into the events happening in the world virtually. Moreover, we can immediately get the information of any fresh event and don’t have to wait for it to be published as a printed newspaper.

Moreover, e-papers are more eco-friendly as compared to printed papers. Printed newspapers drain a lot of natural resources. Given the current global concerns, it is wise to prefer the online mode for accessing information.

To put it in a nutshell, it is more advisable to opt for e-papers as we have witnessed numerous advantages of e-paper.

Sample 8:

Several people anticipate that publication of printed materials should come to a halt due to the emergence of computer-based reading habit. As far as I am concerned, such a trend is inevitable.

Firstly, the utmost advantages in terms of costs render printed publications far eclipsed by digital versions. For instance, instead of buying many with various contents, different press agencies, just by a click to search on the Internet, users can access a rich range of reading resources with various contents, many of which are free or cost little. Besides, cutting large expenses on printing or shipping incurred by conventional printing, digitalized publications are substantially economical, granting readers more opportunities to afford quality reading materials at reasonable prices.

Secondly, it is the convenience of digitalized materials that may persuade readers to halt their traditional reading habit. Indeed, the availability of thousands of documents, provided domestically and internationally without geographical constraints, could bring users unlimited choices and encourage them to read on electronic devices more regularly. Moreover, promptness of news updates through e-materials would help individuals keep abreast of the latest news substantially quicker than traditional ones.

Finally, rising awareness of preserving the global environment also plays a role in the imminent elimination of printed materials. To specify, readers over the globe switch to device-based reading as they hope to contribute to reducing logging activities for wood, which would be continued in parallel with demands for printed materials. Therefore, the contemporary reading habit on gadgets is also considered as a meaningful and eco-friendly substitution for the conventional habit.

In conclusion, due to complete advantages of reading on high-tech devices over the habit of reading printed materials, publication of printed versions would seem unnecessary in the future.

Sample 9:

In the world of technological advances, computer-based reading habit is becoming increasingly popular, which prompts many people to think that printed newspaper is no longer necessary. I entirely agree with this viewpoint because online news now can offer readers with superior benefits that conventional ones cannot. To begin with, online news could bring about more rewarding reading experiences, for when people access the Internet for news, they can simultaneously browse several websites for the same piece of information. Thanks to this convenience, readers can scrutinize the reliability of the news, or they can get exposed to a wide range of articles in order to see one affair from different angles. In addition, Internet technology has allowed information to be disseminated more quickly than the traditional one. For this reason, people can catch up with the latest news inside and outside their countries. Secondly, reading non-printed sources of news can be an eco-friendlier substitution. It is true that the amount of wood cut down for publishing printed materials is considerable. The rising awareness of environmental conservation has urged people to use electronic gadgets suchas mobile phones or computers on reading so that people can live in a greener world with less waste being dumped into the environment. Thirdly, it goes without saying that reading news on the Internet can be a more economical choice as many websites offer low-cost or free access to their articles. This enables people of different income and finance to read news more.

In conclusion, thanks to the advantages of device-based reading, publication of printed versions

would be useless in the future.

Sample 10:

It is true that many people believe that there is no longer any role for printed newspapers in the modern world of high-speed communication. While there are strong arguments to support this view, I would argue that there is still a continuing need for newspapers today.

The advantages of news which is available through the internet, TV or radio cannot be denied. Firstly, news from all around the world can be updated by the minute, often accompanied by live video or – in the case of radio – audio recordings. Thus, those who follow news such as political events, stock market movements or those who are simply keen on sport have all come to expect instant communication. Secondly, only the most remote corners of the world now have no access to radio or TV transmissions, and the internet is casting its web to reach an ever-wider audience. The spread of alternative options has therefore reduced the dependence on printed newspapers as the sole or main source of information.

Despite such advantages of news communicated by other, faster means, I consider that printed news is still important in today’s world. One reason is that not everyone wants or needs to live their life at a fast pace. The elderly in particular often enjoy the leisurely routine of reading the newspaper over breakfast or while sitting in their living room in the mornings. Another consideration is that a printed newspaper can simply be picked up and put down at will. For example, I often read a newspaper on the train or bus to work and then I usually leave the paper on the seat for another passenger to read if they wish.

In conclusion, although they have declined in popularity, printed newspapers are still a necessary part of communicating the news.

Sample 11:

The majority of people believe that printed newspapers should stop production due to the increasing importance of online news sources. In this essay, I will objectively analyze this statement before reaching a rational conclusion.  

Many individuals might be correct in this regard. Firstly, a closer examination of this issue allows the public to understand the benefits of online newspapers. For example, with the evolution of the Internet, information is readily accessible at any time. Secondly, through social media platforms, one can express their opinions to a wider audience. It's worth noting that one doesn't need a physical magazine anymore, as smartphones offer numerous articles. Therefore, it can be inferred that online resources attract attention due to their features.

However, it's undeniable that traditional newspapers still hold significant popularity. Firstly, influential editors prefer to refine this format rather than replace it entirely. Additionally, communities still purchase magazines from stores due to their unique style. Readers also argue that printed articles are more informative and impactful. To put it precisely, printed newspapers are associated with a sophisticated and nostalgic lifestyle.

In conclusion, I emphasize that printed news has its pros and cons compared to modern methods. However, the coexistence of both forms of media should be considered in contemporary society. 

Sample 12:

The vast majority of the population deems that press should cease to be printed as online news sources have increasingly taken a more vital role. During the course of this essay, I would analyse this statement objectively before drawing on a rational conclusion.

One could assume that a lot of individuals are correct in this situation. First of all, a closer examination of this issue enables the general public to draw conclusions about the advantages of online newspapers. For instance, the Internet’s capabilities have evolved, and society can now access information at any given time. Second, by using social media websites, the person can communicate his views to others. It’s also essential to mention that readers do not necessarily need to acquire a printed magazine in order to get information because mobile phones include a sizable number of articles. Thus, it may be inferred that online resources attract people’s attention because of their features.

On the other hand, it is certain that printed tabloids continue to enjoy widespread popularity. To begin with, influential editors constantly tweak this format rather than wanting to modify it; thus, printed reading materials should not fall too far behind. Additionally, because of its distinctive style, communities still buy journals from bookstores. Similarly, readers claim that articles with printed type are more enlightening and impressive. To be precise, the existence of printed newspapers is still connected with the concept of a sophisticated, habitual, and nostalgic lifestyle.

To summarise, I would stress that printed news has both positive and negative sides in comparison to more modern methods; nevertheless, the coexistence of both forms of media should be considered in contemporary society.

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Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Some people believe that despite the spreading popularity of the online media, traditional newspaper will still hold the most vital position among news readers. In my opinion, this idea is rather absurd as the Internet has become increasingly dominant due to the benefits it offers.

The first thing that attracts people to reading news on the online sources is their easy access. With the presence of the Internet around almost every corner of the world, people with a portable device such as a mobile phone can access huge storage of news. In fact, latest events, for example IS Terrorist attacks, would be updated immediately on CNN or New York Times. By contrast, with prolonging procedures including editting and printing, traditional newspaper might not be able to compete with the Internet in terms of the updating speed.

Another benefit with which the Internet can, from my point of view, take over the position of printed newspaper is the new experience it brings to readers. One limitation of newspaper is that it cannot convey visual messages to the people who read news on a regular basis. Meanwhile, non-stop progress of the technology industry has unfolded the possibility to upload videos and voice records on various online websites. For instance, soccer fans these days can rewatch their favorite matches anytime they want with only a laptop connected to the Internet, which a mere paper cannot do.

In conclusion, I disagree that printed newspaper would continue to be the most crucial source of information because more and more people will be drawn to use the Internet.

Sample 2:

Despite the overall increase in digital news, many people believe that society will still get most of its information from newspapers. I personally contend that newspapers are struggling to find traction in the modern world due to their cost and inflexibility, and as time goes on, they will flounder and be replaced.

Firstly, newspaper subscriptions of all kinds are decreasing since they are more expensive than the free online news. There is little benefit to getting newspapers delivered to the front door today, as with a touch of a smartphone, information from all over the world can be readily available at one’s fingertips. Thus, digital news is both more affordable and more convenient to the masses, and companies who refuse to make the transition to online platforms suffer dramatically from lower financial returns. This is, for instance, why we see many traditional news sources going bankrupt and being replaced by online social media platforms such as Twitter or Facebook.

Secondly, digital news allows for more varied content to be offered than print media. More specifically, the former can incorporate video recordings, digital audio and high-quality images, something that is simply not possible on newspapers. To read the news in newspapers is to miss out on the range of what can be communicated by news apps nowadays, which are able to provide a much more illustrative depiction of the real world. This is why traditional newspapers such as the Guardian or the Washington Post have moved many of their operations online: to make their content more diverse and thus to attract more readers.

Overall, I argue that the benefits of digital news, both in cost and variety, compared to newspapers are significant. Thus, I argue that in the future, internet news will become the primary source of information for most people in society.

Sample 3:

Many traditionalists believe that while people have access to the Internet, conventional newspapers will continue as the major source of news. I totally disagree with this view.

The speed and convenience of the Internet in this digital age have led to the increasing popularity of online news. Firstly, the Internet is able to provide up-to-the-minute news as it happens, 24 hours a day every day. As long as I have my smart phone or laptop with me, I can connect almost instantly to the Internet, surf the websites and access the news of my choice across the globe. Secondly, more and more people now have access to the Internet and this trend appears set to continue. The more widespread the accessibility of the Internet, the more people will come to rely on it as their new’s source.

In contrast, newspapers have drawbacks which affect their popularity. One major disincentive of relying on newspapers as a news source is the cost. Competing with freely available news online, newspaper publishers are facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Some major American newspapers have now’ introduced online versions alongside their printed editions in an attempt to arrest this trend. Another disadvantage of newspapers is the amount of paper consumed in their production. With growing environmental awareness, there is a body of public opinion which rejects buying newspapers because this involves cutting trees and transporting them to paper mills. While this may not be a major factor at present, the environmental argument will almost certainly gain ground in the future.

In conclusion, I would argue that newspapers will continue to decline in importance, and more and more people will use the Internet to access the news.

Sample 4:

It is common at the present time to see people getting updates on the latest news from the internet rather than the traditional method of reading a newspaper. I would argue that electronic sources of news will gradually replace that of the newspaper. 

Newspapers remain an important source of news for several reasons.  The first of these is that the older generation still prefer to read their news this way, which is because they have traditionally bought a newspaper over the years and so do not wish to change or simply do not know how to do so online in some cases. In addition to this a newspaper also comes with other supplements, such as magazines and television guides, and sources of entertainment, such as crosswords. This makes it more attractive for some than going online.  

However, though newspapers may not disappear completely, the Internet is likely to become the more dominant source of news over time. This is primarily because younger people tend to read the news online and prefer not to pay for it, so those reading newspapers, the older generations, will gradually decline. This links in with the second reason, which is that as media companies start to see a drop income from newspapers, printing them will become unprofitable and they will be forced to find ways to make money from news online. 

In conclusion, although newspapers remain popular today, they will gradually be replaced by the desire to read the news through electronic sources. This may be a sad loss given their history, but unfortunately it is an unavoidable development. 

Sample 5:

It is argued that although many people read news on the internet, newspapers prevail over digital news and will continue to outweigh its importance for the majority of people. This essay will discuss how it disagrees with the given statement. I believe online news is more accessible and convenient in comparison to newspapers, and online news is more versatile and more inclusive.

As my first point, I believe that the accessibility and convenience of digital news cannot be replicated with a newspaper. Online news allows people to consume news in an immediate manner, where any news story can be accessed by the tips of our fingers, is an incomparable advantage. This is even more relevant when we consider how fast-paced life can be, and how digital news can serve this purpose so efficiently. In our speedy times, the more sedentary nature of newspapers seems less fitting. Newspapers evoke a sense of study, leisure and sitting somewhere comfortable enough to enjoy your paper. This however contrasts the ease in which people can otherwise access news online. Moreover, not only is online news readily available, it is equally as easy to circulate and share amongst friends, leading to more of a cultural awareness amongst people. Take for example the situations in which you want to be updated with the news but don’t have the leisure of time. This could be on the way to work, queueing to board a flight, or simply travelling between destinations, where such situations create pools of time that are ideal for a quicker digestion of news.

Secondly, online news is more versatile and more inclusive. Online news offers a more versatile range of content as you can read news from hundreds of sources. The immediate benefits of this lies in reading numerous writing styles from a multitude of news sources. When reading a paper, you are reading their house style and thus reading a particular style of writing. Whereas, online news stretches across multiple styles of writing and encompasses a global perspective with more linguistic variation. As well as this, news can be digested in the form of video. Some people may find that they would rather watch a short video and be updated in this manner. A newspaper simply cannot perform this action. Consuming news online can create a chain of engagement where one article can lead to another, to a review, to an interview, to trending stories and so on. The individual reading news online means that their library of knowledge can easily be topped up and they can gain a more informed perspective by reading news from different sources. Due to the myriad ways of online news, this also makes it more inclusive to print news where it can be read in all languages, including its video element that may be more suited to people. If for example an article needs to be used in a lesson at school, it is more engaging and inclusive for the teacher to provide their students with its digital format. If a portion of the students have English as a second language, then the teacher can easily supply them with the article in its many languages. Furthermore, students are likely to be more receptive to supplementary video material alongside text.

To summarise, I believe that reading the news on the internet has more advantages in terms of its accessibility, levels of engagement and inclusive nature, than reading a newspaper and is therefore a more significant source of news for the masses.

Sample 6:

Some believe that despite the rise in consumption of online news, newspapers will always be the primary news source for most. In my opinion, though newspapers may remain more trustworthy, online news will surely only become more popular in the future.

Those who argue for the primacy of newspapers point out their reputations. Before publication, newspaper articles are researched thoroughly, often for several months, by accomplished and professional writers who then pass their articles on to editors who verify the information and approve inclusion in the next edition. Most individuals are dimly aware of this process and therefore more likely to carefully read and trust reputable papers like The New York Times and Washington Post. This stands in marked contrast to online news, which is written hastily and published instantly, often with the intended purpose of generating clicks and advertising revenue rather than accurately informing their audience.

Nonetheless, the majority of people already receive most news from sources other than newspapers. This includes television and podcasts, but websites and social media now dominate the media landscape. Most individuals find articles through websites like Facebook and Twitter that allow for the direct posting of links, which can then redirect users to a primary news source. Other more popular social media, including YouTube, Instagram, and TikTok, are more likely to aggregate and summarize or respond to recent news stories. Their potential audience is far wider than the dwindling circulations of physical newspapers.

In conclusion, despite the reliability of newspapers, there is little that can curb the growing ubiquity of online news. Individuals must therefore be more discerning as to which influencers they trust.

Sample 7:

In the modern world, obtaining news on the Internet has become an accelerating trend. I have faith in the likelihood of this trend overshadowing the traditional way of reading newspapers to become the most crucial source of news.

The most obvious proof supporting my viewpoint is the decline in the popularity of traditional newspapers. Conventional newspapers’ nature is characterized by a thorough and time-consuming process of editing, printing, and distributing. This turns out to be a weakness that causes newspapers to fail to meet the instant quest for news of modern newsreaders. In addition, due to the fact that printed newspapers are geographically limited, their reach and exposure levels are becoming substantially lower than those of online news. Apparently, it is online press, not the traditional one, which helps news seekers all over the globe access local news as well as global news published by a variety of internationally prestigious newspapers including BBC, New York Times, and Wall Street Journal. Such availability of online news far outweighs that of printed news, steadily dominating the news industry.

Moreover, the advantages of online news significantly surpass those of printed newspaper. In this era of advanced technology and communication, the omnipresence of the Internet and the availability of Internet devices have boosted the popularity of online news to the extent that the concept of buying and reading a printed newspaper would become obsolete and inconvenient. Online platforms which facilitate fast-moving and immediate news updates will certainly become the utmost solution to satisfy increasing demand and busy news seekers. Thanks to Internet-based platforms, news about an incident happening half the world away could be retrieved within a few seconds after its commencement, which renders news updates one day later on conventional newspapers out of date.

In conclusion, despite the fact that printed newspapers still hold an important role, I firmly support the tendency that they will be eclipsed by online news.

Sample 8:

It is true that a growing number of people are using the Internet in order to find out the latest news. While newspapers are still popular, I strongly disagree that most people will continue to rely on them as a source of news.

The first reason for my view relates to the increasing use of the Internet around the world. Recently, a growing number of people have accessed online news via technological gadgets such as smart phones or tablets, so they do not need to buy a newspaper to obtain news. Even in more remote corners of the world, access to the Internet is becoming more widespread and the online community is growing daily.

Secondly, online news is always up-to-date while printed news needs time for editing, printing and delivering. In this fast-changing world, readers tend to expect updated information about what has just happened or is happening around them. Online news can be broadcast immediately with vivid pictures and relevant stories, making it more appealing to readers than printed news.

Finally, the Internet is a repository of information for people to dig for information that they need. Digital information can be stored in mass quantity, which allows internet users to search for events that occurred in the past. In contrast, newspapers are generally hard to preserve because of the corrosive effects of the environment and their sheer bulk makes storage difficult. This once again confirms the edge of online news.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that the Internet is even now replacing newspaper as the principal medium or accessing all the latest news.

Sample 9:

The advent of the Internet and other forms of media in the twenty first century has unquestionably brought about a metamorphosis in the way people seek knowledge and information. Newspapers, the one form of media which was once considered highly important, has now entered a state of significant and rapid decline in many places across the world. This has led to suggestions that newspaper will soon become a thing of the past. My way of thinking is that the death of newspapers is almost certain.

Firstly, many people are against reading newspapers because the process of making it is not environmentally sustainable. Even though newspapers today are losing their readerships, a staggering number of trees are being cut down every day to produce them. On the other hand, using digital tools to disseminate knowledge does not necessitate cutting down trees, disrupting animal lives and certainly proves to be more environmentally friendly.

Secondly, readers of newspapers are likely to receive out of date or incorrect information. The fact is that the process of making a newspaper is a long and complicated one, involving many stages such as writing, editing, printing and distribution. This means that by the time newspapers hit the shelves, there might be some changes to the events covered and it will already be too late to make any adjustments.

Nevertheless, some are skeptical about the view that newspapers will die out and their argument is that newspapers are a more reliable source of information than other types of media such as the Internet. However, the truth is that many journalists today display poor professionalism and low morality. Many do not think twice about writing incorrect information in order to increase the readership. This shows that the information in the newspapers is not any more trustworthy than on the Internet.

These points have strongly corroborated my view that the decline of newspapers is not overstated and there will be no place for newspapers in the near future.

Sample 10:

In light of advancements in technology and the proliferation of the Internet, there is an increasing number of people learning about the news on online platforms. Although I am of the opinion that newspaper will maintain its position as a major news provider for people, I believe that people will read most of their news from online newspapers rather than printed ones.

News captured online can be unreliable. This is because many news providers are competing with each other to grab people's attention to sell ads. The more viewers they have, the higher the price of the advertisements they can sell. Clickbait headlines are a prime example where the content of an article can sometimes be incompatible with the title of the article as long as it can induce people to click. Moreover, there is a great deal of fake news online because with an Internet connection, everybody can create online content that is accessible by millions of people. The information can be biased and subjective as there is no evaluation of the reliability and validity of the information posted.

On the other hand, newspapers are often considered a much more reliable and trustworthy source of information. This is because most major journals and newspapers are under the control of the government and the news is often written by professional journalists. Furthermore, access to the most significant and official information, especially those from the government, are often reported by reliable journalists and newspapers rather than by individuals or tabloids. However, it is undeniable that with the development of the Internet, online newspapers are gaining in popularity due to its convenience and speed. As a result, more and more people will subscribe to reputable newspapers such as BBC or The Telegraph to get their valuable and reliable news.

In conclusion, I believe that online newspapers are the future of news capturing for the majority because of its superior reliability and validity over other sources of news on the Internet.

Sample 11:

Most people still view traditional newspapers as being more important than traditional internet news sources. I vehemently disagree with this assertion since, in contrast to online news, newspapers are less readily available to individuals.

The fact that the internet is more accessible in a number of ways is the first and foremost reason why the majority of people will prefer it. Especially over the outdated practice of reading newspapers. This means that traditional news publishing processes are laborious and take longer than using the internet to convey news to readers. For instance, a local periodical may cover a story the day before it is published. The story is then printed, subject to editorial adjustments, and after receiving final approval, it is made available to the public. Thus, making the information one day old. Online articles can be read whenever it is convenient for the reader without having to wait for the local newspaper to print the next day's edition. As a result, a newspaper is superseded by the influential ways that the internet offers to learn about current events.

Furthermore, because of technological advancements, internet sources offer many advantages over printed ones, far outpacing newspapers in many ways. This is due to a few factors. First, the massive amount of paper used in the printing of news articles. It often encourages readers to turn to online sources in an effort to reduce waste and promote the environmentally friendly trend. Second, using internet applications, readers can receive critical information that, in some cases, demands quick broadcast. For instance, "TOI" has created a user-friendly web portal. It has features that allow the public to access it in a variety of languages. And it offers constant updates in a matter of seconds, covering all types of news globally. So, by increasing the use of internet channels that disseminate news to the public, newsreader preferences are making printed newspapers obsolete.

As a result, newspapers have historically played a significant role in bringing the news to the public's doorstep. But I am convinced that, given its favourable results, online news will continue to dominate newspaper popularity.

Sample 12:

There's no denying that more and more people are using the Internet to stay up to date on news. But some individuals still hold that traditional newspapers are still the preferred source for the majority of people. Despite the advantages that newspapers provide, I contend that internet news will quickly overtake print news in the 21st century.

On the one hand, I have to admit that even in the Internet age, printed newspapers continue to be a great means for many people to stay current. First off, readers feel at ease reading newspapers because of their physical quality. Many people enjoy the tactile experience of holding genuine paper in their hands. And many of them even have the practice of making notes or underlining passages while reading the newspaper. This activity unmistakably improves people's processes for digesting information and their enjoyment of reading. The reliability of print reading is another benefit. Newspaper editors and journalists constantly work to avoid publishing inaccurate information. Because it is very difficult to amend any news after it has been released to the public. This makes newspapers a more trustworthy source of information.

Despite the advantages of traditional newspapers that have been discussed, I still believe that online media will be more popular than print media. The fact that web news provides immediate access to reporting of events around the globe is its most important advantage. In other words, instead of waiting for the morning newspaper, consumers may get the most recent news on their phones or laptops. The low cost of this innovative medium for widespread news consumption contributes to its popularity. Readers can save a lot of money on newspaper subscriptions. As they don't have to pay anything to keep up with the most recent news or read an engaging article in an online magazine.

In conclusion, I think that internet news will finally capture the hearts of readers in the near future. Even though traditional newspapers may still be a great source of information.

Sample 13:

Young people are increasingly using the internet to read the news because it is the quickest method to keep up with the latest information. However, there are still just a few individuals who read newspapers printed on paper. Especially older people who aren't as familiar with modern technology. And this is related to the fact that they can't easily "use the internet, locate correct statements, and distinguish between information sources."

First and foremost, it is clear that we are in the midst of the digital era. Due to this, people use more electrical devices - such as computers, mobile phones, and so on - in their daily lives than they did in the past. These days, individuals choose to use their cell phones to get information and statements since they can always take them anywhere and at any time. Aside from when they are sleeping. And the demand for and client base for these gadgets are both growing quickly. For instance, I seldom ever purchase newspapers. As I constantly read news on the official websites or pages on the internet using my computer and mobile devices.

Second, trees are used to create the paper used to print newspapers. Since most people toss newspapers after reading them, it is bad for the environment. And we should use less paper in order to preserve nature. Although it is possible to recycle wastepaper, it is evident that many presses degrade over time and produce dirty paper. It makes recycling impossible for certain materials. For instance, there aren't many paper recycling firms, and there aren't many used newspaper recycling initiatives in Mongolia.

In light of these issues, newspapers, which until recently were the primary source of news in our culture, have begun to give the internet more prominence. As we know, firms have been paying close attention to their corporate social media platforms for the past ten years. So, I believe that most readers have shifted to a way of acquiring their news through official websites.

Sample 14:

Traditional newspaper was always the first and most crucial news source, but the arrival of the Internet era has brought a new competitor, online news. Personally, I believe that despite the importance of press, Internet news will soon be just as important.

On the one hand, it is believed by a great number of people that newspaper will continue to dominate, even in the age of technology advances. Firstly, not all of the world population are capable of accessing online news. In fact, people in various less developed countries do not own any electrical or technological devices, let alone the Internet. Secondly, as the majority of press publishing houses tend to hire professional journalists and editors, their articles tend to have more credibility and accuracy as well as reflect the truth. Finally, part of the population, especially the elderly, simply just do not adopt changes but rather stick to old goodies. They have been reading traditional newspaper for decades, and there should be no obligation for them to turn to Internet news now.

On the other hand, it seems logical that the preference of many people now is to read online news over traditional press. One of the key benefits that the Internet acquires is the ability for us to share the article, comment under it, and even contribute our own works to the news sites. On top of these undeniable advantages, online news producers can provide the audiences with real-time updated information, which newspaper can never achieve. If a brutal gunfire occurs, the latest information about the casualties will be posted online as soon as possible with contribution made not only by reporters but also those who witness the crime scene. Another factor that leads to the increasing figures for Internet news supporters is environment. By finding information about what is happening in the world online instead of purchasing a newspaper, we can save tons of paper and carbon footprint which is the major catalyst for environmental pollution.

In conclusion, I believe that although newspaper is currently a major news source, the Internet will soon be equally important in the foreseeable future.

Sample 15:

It is certainly true that the internet has reached into every facet of human lives and reading habits are no exception, with the majority of modern-day people opting for digital news. Many traditionalists believe that despite the upsurge in the popularity of the online medium, newspapers will continue to remain a vital source of news in the future. I vehemently disaccord with this notion and will explicate my stance in forthcoming paragraphs with credible examples.

To commence with, there is an irrefutable number of arguments in favour of my stance. Firstly, and the most conspicuous one is the convenience of reading. To elucidate this, the internet offers flexibility to access any news, of past or present events, at the click of a button. Unlike newspapers, digital news is always accessible on your smartphones, tabs, or computers. Another pivotal aspect is that online newspapers can be accessed for free or at a minimal cost, whereas physical copy is costlier than digital version owing to the publication cost. To instantiate, the monthly subscription of most newspapers is more than Rs 200, which makes them at least 80-90% costlier than e-newspapers.

Another paramount ground of my belief is that digitized news is up-to-date when compared to its physical version. In other words, unlike traditional newspaper which gets updated once a day, online platform information gets updated almost every hour. An apt illustration of this would be how masses keep themselves updated about minuscule details of any live event related to sports or entertainment via digital news. Last but not least, people are increasingly becoming conscious of the impact of printing on the environment. In contrast, digitized copies do not need any paper or ink and hence are more eco-friendly.

To recapitulate, I stand in firm agreement that traditional newspapers will continue to decline in importance, and the masses will gradually switch to the digital version.

Sample 16:

Whilst traditional newspapers are still very much in circuit and are institutions in their own right, I disagree with this statement because newspapers are generally less convenient, and digital news is obtained far easier.

To begin with, the dominant reason for disagreeing with the statement lies in my belief that the habit of reading newspapers is far less convenient in our modern fast-paced working world. The sedentary nature of newspapers; reading through them, creating them, delivering them- is far less expedient than reading news on the internet. Take for example a longstanding, established newspaper. The stories are covered the day before and there needs to be time for proofreading and editing. This results in the content already having a ripeness to them. Whereas news that can be consumed on someone’s phone is instant. Live news can be tracked, and you can constantly refresh the latest news. With information needing to be near instant in our society and fundamentally current, newspapers feel dated and less pertinent to our speedy times.

Additionally, by engaging with news in a digital manner, the reader has a more robust menu in terms of what they are able to consume. The infinite possibilities of what the internet can procure is far greater than that of a newspaper. There cannot be more content created from the newspaper, but an article can easily lead to another, to an interview of interest, to literary recommendations- by reading the news online, the individual has more ownership and authority in what they are reading, as well as a wider variety of content. Importantly, online news is also able to be translated and read in any language possible. A newspaper cannot immediately translate itself and suddenly become bilingual. Therefore, online news is comparatively more inclusive and offers a myriad of types of news.

In conclusion, in spite of newspapers having significance and maintaining a readership, I firmly believe that digital news is a more digestible, convenient and stimulating way to absorb news, and will continue to override newspapers.

Sample 17:

Some people believe that despite the widespread popularity of the online media, traditional newspaper will still hold the most vital position among news readers. In my opinion, this idea is rather absurd as the Internet has become increasingly dominant due to the benefits it offers.

The first thing that attracts people to reading news on the online sources is their easy access. With the presence of the Internet around almost every corner of the world, people with a portable device such as a mobile phone can access huge storage of news. In fact, latest events, for example IS Terrorist attacks, would be updated immediately on CNN or New York Times. By contrast, with prolonging procedures including editing and printing, traditional newspaper might not be able to compete with the Internet in terms of the updating speed.

Another benefit with which the Internet can, from my point of view, take over the position of printed newspaper is the new experience it brings to readers. One limitation of newspaper is that it cannot convey visual messages to the people who read news on a regular basis. Meanwhile, non-stop progress of the technology industry has unfolded the possibility to upload videos and voice records on various online websites. For instance, soccer fans these days can re-watch their favorite matches anytime they want with only a laptop connected to the Internet, which a mere paper cannot do.

In conclusion, I disagree that printed newspaper would continue to be the most crucial source of information because more and more people will be drawn to use the Internet.

Sample 18:

There is a common belief that newspapers will still be the most vital means of reading news despite the innovation that the Internet has brought to the information provision process. Personally, I disagree with this view.

At the outset, I admit that newspapers may remain as the most popular source of information for certain parts of society. Take the senior citizens as a salient example. Journals were present on virtually every corner of the world a few decades ago, and the unremitting availability of this type of publication shaped a long-lasting reading habit among the previous generation. This explains why those individuals are not willing to change their way of accessing information. In addition, to the understanding of some people, the information published by newspapers is better censored. This view is, to some extent, justifiable due to the fact that the majority of websites and social networks are open for all members to post about their opinions, creating a chaotic influx of online information.

However, from my perspective, it is not reasonable to state that most people will consider newspapers their primary means of reading news in the future. At its simplest, the Internet has revolutionized the way we are exposed to information, and how online platforms place the entire world at our fingertips is simply superior to the way gazettes or broadsheets provide us with daily news every morning. To exemplify, online newspapers can publish vivid live reports of events or football matches, while traditional newspapers only supply brief summaries of such occasions on the following day. Plus, the audience, with an Internet-connected device, is allowed to access news under the form of video clips, which are by no means available on newspapers.

All the aforementioned points lead me to a firm conclusion that the Internet will replace the newspapers as the most important source of news in the foreseeable future.

Sample 19:

In recent years, digitization has become an integral part of our life, and it has impacted almost every aspect of our life including our reading habits. While an increasing number of people prefer to read online news, it has been argued that newspapers will remain the main source of news and information. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, reading newspapers is a force of habit and in future people will move to digital news.

There are many benefits to reading news on the internet. The most important benefit of online news is that it is up-to-date and convenient to read. Traditional newspapers get updated only once a day, but their online versions are updated almost every hour. Also finding information online is easy because one can easily search any topic by entering the keywords and read instant updates.  Secondly, reading digital news is easy and enjoyable because one does not have to turn pages like in a newspaper to find information.

In addition to this, digitized news can be accessed for free or at a minimal cost, whereas physical newspapers are costlier than their digital versions. For instance, the monthly subscription fee of most newspapers is more than Rs. 200, which makes them at least 85-90% costlier than e-newspapers. Last but not least, people around the globe understood the impact newspapers have on the environment, whereas digital news does not require any paper or ink to publish. Hence, it is considered eco-friendly.

In conclusion, people are fond of reading traditional newspapers. However, considering the advantages of digital news, I firmly believe that people will leave their habit, and switch to digital news, which will become the primary source of information in the near future.

Sample 20:

The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place to find information about what is happening in the world. I believe that this trend will continue, and the Internet will soon be just as important as the traditional press.

On the one hand, I believe that newspapers will continue to be a vital source of information, even in the Internet age. Firstly, newspapers are the most traditional means of communicating the news, and not everyone wants to or is able to use the Internet instead. For example, old people or those in rural areas might not have the ability or opportunity to get online, while many of us simply prefer newspapers even if we do have Internet access. Secondly, newspapers can be trusted as reliable sources of news because they employ professional journalists and editors. Finally, many people like the experience of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at a computer screen.

However, the Internet is likely to become just as popular as newspapers for a variety of reasons. The main reason is that it allows us much faster access to news in real-time and wherever we are, on different gadgets and mobile devices. Another key benefit of online news compared to newspapers is the ability to share articles, discuss them with other people, give our views, and even contribute with our own updates on social media. For example, there has been an explosion in the use of platforms like Twitter and YouTube where anyone can share their news and views. A final point is that this source of news is less damaging to the environment.

In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source of news, because I believe that the Internet will soon be equally important.

Sample 21:

Multimedia is playing an important role in keeping people abreast of the outer world. Due to a hectic schedule, the majority of people prefer to read news online; however, in spite of it, newspapers will be the first choice of the masses in the long run. I entirely agree with the latter statement because it has been an old and authentic source of information, and it is inexpensive to buy.

To my mind, since time immemorial, it has been one of the oldest sources of information and authenticity too. People have had more faith in the press since its origin. They believe that information in the newspaper is verified first and then it is printed. So, it does not shatter the faith of the people in the press. A recent study found that being the oldest source of information; it is the first choice of oldsters. They start their day by reading the newspaper because of its credibility. So, they consider it a true source of information.

To continue, it does not cost people an arm and a leg. People do not have any financial burden to purchase it. All and sundry can purchase it. To exemplify it, buying newspapers is in access to everyone. On the contrary, reading news online requires an internet connection, which everyone cannot afford. So, being cheap in nature, it is purchased by everyone.

In conclusion, people would prefer to read newspapers more because it is a cheap source of information as well as people have more faith in it because it delivers genuine information which is not influenced by politics or any eminent personality.

Sample 22:

Since time immemorial newspapers have been an important source of news, but the case is a little different now. A big proportion of the population, especially the youth have switched to other means, to keep a track of what is happening around the world. I believe that newspapers are becoming obsolete and will no longer prevail in the future.

As the proverb goes, ‘time is money’, people can’t afford to spend a lot of time reading news from newspapers, which is detailed and sometimes irrelevant. We also know that certain newspapers are biased politically and can thus mould the thinking of the public. These factors make one think if switching completely to digital news is a solution.

Millennials tend to read only the gist of the news if it does not intrigue them, and there are applications specifically designed to serve the purpose. With the newspaper virtually in your pocket, it gets really convenient to read the news while travelling or having a short break. One can also apply specific filters to receive the type or genre of news they prefer. With such comfort and portability available, why would one want to go back to the traditional way?

Although from a different perspective, most old people prefer newspapers as they are not so familiar or comfortable with the latest technologies. Additionally, they have a lot of time on their hands and reading the whole newspaper helps them pass it easily.

To conclude, it’s best if the culture of newspapers is put to an end. This will prevent the wastage of paper (thus saving trees) and make news-reading effective.

Sample 23:

Some individuals are of the opinion that the newspaper is the most popular medium of getting news and it will prevail as the main source of news despite the growing number of pupils who enjoy reading news on the internet. In my opinion, this idea is rather illogical as the internet has become increasingly dominant because of the benefits it offers.

To begin with, easy access to the internet drives many people towards online news than traditional newspapers, for explaining this, with a few clicks of a button on technological devices e.g. smartphones or tablets, one can easily browse the internet almost everywhere if he/she has network connections. Even in more remote corners of the world, access to the internet is becoming more widespread and the online community is growing daily. For instance, the internet is now available and easily accessible in rural and remote places of Bangladesh, a developing country.

What’s more, in this fast-changing world, readers tend to expect updated information about what has just happened or is happening around them. For this reason, people are inclined to online news since it is always up-to-date whereas printed newspaper necessitates a certain amount of time to edit, print, and deliver which is a weakness that discourages modern readers to buy newspapers these days. In fact, online news can be broadcasted instantly or live with vivid pictures, videos, and relevant stories, making it more appealing to readers than printed news. For example, we often see live sports such as cricket, football on Facebook in order to inform sports lovers about the latest score and results.

To sum up, taking all the aforementioned ideas into consideration, I personally opine that people will be much more interested to use the internet rather than traditional newspaper in terms of obtaining news.

Sample 24:

The colossal earth of yesteryear has become a global village. This depicts the powerful impact of the internet. Whenever we need to know about some topic or any happening, we can quickly get through the online news feed. Despite this effortless activity, some people still rely on newspapers. I believe that online news feeds can never overcome the importance of newspapers due to some powerful reasons.

The first and foremost point is that online news is not a reliable source of news. The various websites platform is the source of speak, an influential speaker. Whatsoever you want to listen to, only that topic news is shown on the website. This is because the internet excesses your activity by analyzing the browsing choices. Secondly, we have myriads of people who do not know the internet excess. They are much comfortable purchasing the daily newspaper and get updated.

Furthermore, the world comprises countries, people who are not well enough to carry smartphones or the internet excess. For them, few rupees of newspapers are more than enough to know the happenings of their own countries and the world. Additionally, online news is entirely dependent on the availability of the internet. Still, there are many places where there is no internet access. So, we cannot rely entirely on online news since they are not accessible to various areas.

In summary, I reiterate that no one can deny online news’s importance as they are easily accessible, and many people like to use them. However, still, it can never cover up the importance of the newspaper because of various reasons. A newspaper might be a traditional way of updating oneself but still is the best and reliable way to explore the world and the country.

Sample 25:

In the present day, the internet has become easier to access, so reading news online that is very popular for everyone. But some people believe that reading newspapers are more crucial ever than source of news. In my viewpoint, I tend to disagree with this statement.

First of all, the reason is that reading news on the internet is very convenient for people. Just having a smart phone or laptop or whatever devices are connected with the internet, it is easy to read the news in anywhere and anytime because most of information is posted on the internet. Besides, reading news online is very rapidly, people do not need to go to the bookstore and buy a newpaper that waste their time. It is easily to find the news they want to read on the social network. So, the accessibility of the internet has become widespread and the new source of news to everyone.

Another reason is that reading news online less cause pollution for environment than using newspaper. For example, if the demand of reading newspaper increased, that would produce many papers by cutting trees and utilize the amount of expense for ruining products made by paper. That is major factors destroy forest and environment. In addition, using newspapers do not save for a long time but using the internet to read news that it is quickly to find to read the news again.

To sum up, I would argue that newspapers will decline, and more and more people will use the internet to access the news.

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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Sample 1:

Advertising has become a ubiquitous presence in modern society, infiltrating our daily lives through television, social media, and public spaces. This, in my view, is an unwelcome development.

One of the negative effects of advertising is its potential to invade personal privacy. Advertisers often collect personal data from consumers without their knowledge or consent, then use this information to tailor their advertisements. For example, social media platforms, such as Facebook or Instagram, are believed to track user activity and browsing history to serve up targeted adverts. This can be alarming, as it means that our online behavior is being closely monitored, analyzed, and exploited by companies. The more advertising pervades our lives, the less privacy we are likely to have.

Another issue with the omnipresence of commercials is that they can disrupt our daily routines and demand our attention, making it difficult for us to focus on tasks or activities. For example, when watching a video on YouTube, viewers are often interrupted by adverts that cannot be skipped, causing a break in concentration and immersion. Similarly, while browsing a website or using an app, pop-up ads can appear out of nowhere, hindering navigation and frustrating users. Moreover, advertisements are often designed to be attention-grabbing, using bright colors and loud sounds, which can be annoying and overwhelming for viewers. These examples demonstrate how intrusive and disruptive advertisements can become.

In conclusion, I am convinced that the increasing prevalence of advertising in everyday life is a negative development, given its intrusive and disruptive nature and potential violation of personal privacy.

Sample 2:

Advertising is gaining more popularity in the marketing of products or services. While advertisements are considered to be advantageous, they can have numerous negative influences.

It is unquestionable that there are several benefits of advertising. By dint of the large-scale expansion of advertising in almost every kind of mass media and nearly all hoardings, this sector is likely to generate a diversity of employment opportunities. In other words, it provides occupations for artists, painters or copywriters in designing and preparing logos, contents or ideas for advertisements. Another advantage is that advertising may enable the messages involved in products and services to reach potential customers, followed by an increase in sales for businesses. Additionally, only thanks to advertisements, can customers be kept informed about newly launched products. Therefore, they have more choices to make about their beloved products, contributing to the enhancement of their comforts and standard of living.

However, advertising could cause several disadvantages for customers. No sooner might companies or business exaggerate or even distort the facts related to their products for commercial purposes than the customers can experience feelings of confusion about these items, making them have troubles selecting the products to their taste. Furthermore, the facts show that the more advertising expenses increase, the higher the product price is. The reason can be that the selling price of the advertised items covers the high cost of advertisements. As a result, the advertised products can cost more than they should. Finally, when customers cannot resist the temptation of products which are advertised beyond customers’ expectations, there is every likelihood of them purchasing products which may be unnecessary. This trend could be seen as a waste of money.

In conclusion, based on the aforementioned explanations, individuals may gain both considerable benefits and drawbacks through the growing prevalence of advertisements.

Sample 3:

Today, as is rightly said by many, is a world of marketing and endorsements. In the competitive world that we have today, advertisements and commercials are a must. This essay shall advocate the development and constructive impact of advertising.

Early-stage or mid-age startups, organizations and companies, the more we see, the more we observe the encompassing pervasion of businesses these days. One niche has typically umpteen business models. With the rising era of entrepreneurs, solopreneurs and digital nomads, the vigour and strife amongst businesses have only been exacerbated. Therefore, advertisements are of greatest essence keeping in view the current times, thereby, resulting in the increasing usage of various advertising channels, be it, pamphlets, hoardings, flyers, newspaper commercials, or the entire digital marketing rigmarole. The more the marketing, the more is the awareness.

Many people might not even be acknowledged to the new product line a company launches or a new product that paves its way in the market. In such a scenario, making them aware is the only perspective initially thought of. Moreover, making a new customer be a stalwart, remarketing branding and endorsing are what businesses primarily and obviously look for. During today’s time when options are many, in the pursuit of customers, a recognition of a brand evanescing is not uncalled for, reminding them of one’s existence, in such a case, is majorly solicited.

Some may argue that advertising tactics today have been misguiding, well, that’s not the case amongst those who are prudential and wakeful of the multiple sources available.

Conclusively, it could be stated that advertisement has been progressive development, and not only should it be treated as an option to ponder upon, but also considered as one of the key constituents of a business model and the relevant campaign.

Sample 4:

The development of businesses has given rise to the growing number of advertisements that can be seen anywhere, on streets or in the media. In my opinion, this phenomenon could be both positive and negative.

On the one hand, advertising has brought a number of benefits for not only consumers but also businesses. Certainly, advertising provides details about newly launched products, which is important for consumers who are still unaware of such products. In fact, improving quality alone would be less effective if producers failed to commercialize their commodities. Putting it in another way, companies, entrepreneurs for example, spend a great deal of money on publicity materials in order to approach prospective customers. This, in return, generates higher profit and enhances those companies’ competitiveness in the market.

On the other hand, the surge in quantities of commercials exerts several undesirable impacts on customers. First, instead of being well-informed about a new line of product, people are being bombarded with all kinds of advertisements. Those can be either deceptive or annoying; and such information overload has become a nuisance to many people, particularly when their favorite telecasts are constantly interrupted by irrelevant promotions. Second, advertising encourages people to purchase what they do not really need. Images of celebrities are used in many extravagant commercials, especially cosmetics, to stimulate people to purchase products that are being advertised. However, in reality, most of those products are of little use to buyers.

In conclusion, advertisements of various types have become prevalent in modern society; and this is, in my view, advantageous and detrimental as well.

Sample 5:

It has always been difficult to assess the contribution of advertising. This issue is fraught with controversy, with concern being expressed over the harmful effects of advertising. In my opinion, its positive effects outweigh negative effects. 

Advertising plays a significant role in fostering full employment and facilitating economic well-being. By conveying marketing information constantly to the target audience, advertising speeds the consumers’ acceptance of new goods and technologies. Were it not for commercials, it would be very difficult for sellers to get their products to the market, and for buyers to be informed of new commodities.  It also guarantees the high turnover rate of the manufactured goods and therefore, sustainability of a business. It is also agreed that advertising is one of the main sponsors of a large number of other industries, for example, the entertainment industry-particularly sports, music, and theatrical events. 

Advertisements in recent years also have become very thought-provoking and educational. Messages of love, friendship, family core values, and environmental protection that are included in some commercials have been very well received by the audience. 

Unarguably, advertising is criticized every now and then for misleading the public. However, the rapid development of advertising itself has provided a solution to this problem, as the information delivered to the audiences has made them knowledgeable consumers. Under these circumstances, they can easily distinguish inferior products from quality products with their knowledge. The misleading effect of advertising will be counteracted over time. 

In conclusion, advertising suggests what consumers need and contributes partly to economic development. In this sense, advertising is of great value to people and the society. The general perception of advertising as a source of misleading information is in fact a bias.

Sample 6:

Advertising has become increasingly prominent in our daily life, leading some to ponder the consequences. In my opinion, this development should be unwelcomed, since more specialized advertisements and more advertising jobs have come at the cost of individuals’ personal privacy.

On the one hand, modern advertisements are designed to be finely tuned to the viewer's browsing history and can therefore allow customers to get more of what they want. Complex search algorithms and data collection enables advertising companies to tailor their products to suit an individual's personal tastes, allowing them to expand their profits and for the customer to spend less time browsing for products. For example, companies such as Amazon or Wish often buy data from Google in order to better advertise their products, which has allowed them to become the large corporations that they are today.

Yet on the flip side, modern advertising use of personal data could be said to be a mass invasion of privacy. The smallest details about individuals’ lives e.g. their sleep schedule, their locations, etc, are increasingly being collected through various mobile apps and social networks. Although terms and conditions are often shown to users before downloading or using any apps, it could be said that most people are still nonetheless unaware of the full extent to which their data is collected. It could be argued that the Cambridge Analytica scandal recently has shown many users how people’s information might actually be used for socially undesirable purposes, such as influencing a result of a democratic election.

Overall, I believe that modern advertising, through its use of personal information, has done more harm to society than it has benefitted it in the form of convenience and job creation.

Sample 7:

Nowadays, people are confronted with advertisements of all kinds on a daily basis. Some people believe this has both positive and negative impacts on our lives, and personally, I completely agree with such viewpoint.

People in the modern world come into contact with advertisements almost everywhere, from online commercials to banners displayed on crowded streets. Frequent exposure to advertisements of the same, or similar types of products, helps consumers make a clear comparison of certain aspects of the product, such as function or price, before deciding which items are suitable for their needs. For instance, thanks to the commercials of Iphone X and Samsung Galaxy S10, people wishing to purchase a smartphone can easily weigh up the pros and cons of these two products, and then choose the right one that serves their demand.

However, widespread advertising can also have some negative consequences that are worthy of consideration. First, the information delivered in advertisements is not always accurate, as many companies exaggerate the features of their products in order to draw attention from the public. As a result, consumers are likely to receive products of much lower quality than advertised. Second, the heavy cost of producing a range of advertisements can raise the market price of many products, meaning that people will have to pay more money to buy an item that they want.

In conclusion, the fact that advertisements of all types surround people can influence their lives in both positive and negative ways, and companies should consider giving the accurate information, and reduce their budgets for advertising to mitigate the drawbacks mentioned above.

Sample 8:

In today's society, the prevalence of advertising has reached unprecedented levels, sparking discussions on whether this development is predominantly positive or negative. While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that the positive implications are eclipsed by the negative ones.

The increasing use of advertising can bring several advantages for companies and consumers. The most obvious benefit is that advertising serves as a powerful tool for businesses to promote their products or services to potential consumers. Through strategic marketing campaigns, companies can effectively communicate the features, benefits, and unique selling points of their offerings. This promotion enables them to reach a wider audience and attract customers, thereby increasing their sales and revenue. Moreover, advertising can be informative as it can provide consumers with valuable information about products, features, and pricing, helping them make informed purchasing decisions.

However, this development can be more disadvantageous in terms of privacy issues and consumer behaviour. First, the intrusive nature of advertising infringes upon personal privacy. With the advent of targeted advertising, organisations collect vast amounts of personal data to tailor their advertisements specifically to individuals, raising concerns about the erosion of privacy. Another significant issue is that some persuasive techniques used in advertising can manipulate consumers, leading to impulse buying or the purchase of unnecessary products. For instance, time-limited offers, limited stock availability, or exclusive deals can create a fear of missing out and prompt people to make immediate purchases without carefully considering their needs or the value of the product.

In conclusion, although the increasing ubiquity of advertising serves certain economic and informational purposes, it can ultimately invade the privacy of countless people and adversely impact their purchasing habits. Therefore, I am convinced that this phenomenon is generally more detrimental.

Sample 9:

As advertising has become an integral part of our daily life, there has been a debate over whether its popularity is beneficial or harmful. Although it may bring about certain negative impacts, these are far outweighed by the benefits brought from this trend.

Admittedly, advertising campaigns may bring certain disadvantages to the customer. The most important of them would be that, in order to boost sales, many advertisements deliver overly positive images of a product, thus possibly leading to a false perception of the product among consumers. For example, most soda commercials portray a happy fresh image associated with consuming their drinks, with little or even no warning on the harmful effects of excessive added sugar, which may cause a wide range of diseases from dental cavities to diabetes. In addition to that, most social media advertisements these days are inserted in the middle of the content being viewed by the users, with the intent to enhance interaction. This, if repeated several times, may disturb or annoy users scrolling through their news feed on Facebook, or watching videos on YouTube and other social media platforms.

On the other hand, despite some obvious disadvantages, the advertising industry offers a host of significant benefits to relating valuable insights about a product, and lucrative job opportunities for those seeking employment in that field. Regarding the former, advertising and promotion campaigns from different brands of the same product line give users an opportunity to learn about all the features and specifications of a product and compare them to make the purchase that best fits their needs. Regarding employment, this industry has been a key player in the labour market, offering millions of jobs worldwide ranging from graphic design to social media marketing. For decades, advertising has been enabling its labour force to earn a living for their families, as well as live their dreams and fulfil their passion in their chosen career.

In conclusion, even though advertising may indeed bring certain inconveniences to its audience, the benefits in terms of providing information and employment are more impactful and meaningful. Based on the aforementioned arguments, I contend that the increasing prevalence of advertising is an overall positive trend.

Sample 10:

The pervasive presence of advertising in modern society has raised significant concerns, leading to a growing debate about whether this trend is a positive or negative development. This essay contends that the increasing ubiquity of advertising in everyday life is primarily a negative development.

The increasing presence of advertising in everyday life can be attributed to several factors shaping the modern consumer landscape. Firstly, advancements in technology and the widespread availability of digital platforms have considerably expanded the avenues for advertising. With the rise of the internet, social media, and mobile applications, companies have greater opportunities to target and engage with their audiences, utilizing targeted ads, sponsored content, and personalized marketing strategies. Moreover, the globalization of markets and intensifying competition among businesses have propelled the need for greater brand visibility and consumer reach, prompting companies to invest significantly in advertising campaigns to capture attention in crowded marketplaces. 

Firstly, the relentless intrusion of advertising into various aspects of our lives has led to an overwhelming and often intrusive consumer culture. From billboards lining our streets to targeted advertisements bombarding us online, the constant barrage of marketing messages can be mentally exhausting and invasive. This saturation can diminish the quality of life by creating a constant sense of commercial pressure and consumerism.

Secondly, advertising has evolved to employ increasingly sophisticated psychological tactics to manipulate consumer behaviour. It often exploits vulnerabilities such as insecurities, desires, and fears to persuade individuals to make unnecessary purchases. For example, the cosmetic industry frequently preys on societal beauty standards, encouraging consumers to buy products promising to "fix" their perceived flaws. This form of manipulation can lead to financial strain and exacerbate mental health issues like anxiety and depression. Furthermore, the ubiquity of advertising can stifle creativity and cultural diversity. In a quest for profits, media outlets and content creators may compromise their artistic integrity by prioritizing advertisements over quality content. This prioritization often leads to a homogenization of culture, as unique voices and perspectives are drowned out by commercial interests.

In conclusion, the increasing prevalence of advertising in daily life should be viewed as a negative development due to its intrusive nature, manipulative tactics, and potential to homogenize culture. When advertisements become so pervasive, they stray from their original objective and start manipulating people through their fair and unfair marketing and advertising techniques. Therefore, I conceive it as a negative development.

Sample 11:

Advertisement is ubiquitous in daily life, provoking heated debate about whether this is a positive or negative trend. I believe that the widespread advertisement is mainly due to the rise of consumerism culture and business competition. I also think that this is a negative development because advertising manipulates truth as well as invades privacy.

The widespread prevalence of advertising can be primarily attributed to the rise of consumerism culture and intense competition among businesses. In today's society, consumerism has become deeply ingrained, with individuals constantly bombarded by messages encouraging them to buy products and services. This culture of consumption drives businesses to invest heavily in advertising as a means of capturing the attention of potential customers and driving sales. Moreover, globalisation has intensified competition in markets worldwide, compelling companies to differentiate themselves and establish brand recognition. As a result, advertising has become a critical tool for businesses to stand out amidst competitors and maintain relevance in the minds of consumers.

However, advertisements tend to deliberately distort the truth by using manipulative tactics. To put it simply, advertisements frequently use emotional appeals; for example, desire or fear, to persuade consumers to purchase a product or service. These emotional appeals can often be immensely powerful and can exert profound influence on consumers to make decisions based on their emotions rather than on rationality. In some cases, advertisements may use misleading information or visual appearance to make a commodity appear more attractive or effective than it really is. Skin cream advertisements, for instance, usually use before-and-after photos to demonstrate magical improvements, even though the photos may have been digitally customised.

Likewise, advertisements often invade people’s privacy. The advent of online and social media advertisement has made it easier for marketers to target specific groups of individuals with personalised content. This practice can lead to the intrusion into personal information without individuals’ explicit consent. For example, if someone searches for a particular product online by browsing a couple of websites, advertisers have the information and show ads based on that even if the person does not give marketers consent explicitly for the information to be used.  

To conclude, I think the growing prevalence of advertisements is primarily because of consumerism habits and increased business competition and can be considered disadvantageous as it distorts the truth to manipulate consumer purchase decisions and intrudes into private information.  I therefore contend that the phenomenon is a negative development.

Sample 12:

In an era where advertisements infiltrate every corner of our lives, from the digital realm to the physical, the debate surrounding their omnipresence is increasingly pertinent. This development, while indicative of our commercial culture, brings both merits and drawbacks. On one hand, it fosters consumer awareness and drives economic growth; on the other, it can lead to information overload and consumer manipulation. The crux of this essay revolves around these two contrasting perspectives.

Advertisements, at their core, serve as a vital conduit for information, enabling consumers to make informed decisions about a plethora of products and services. For instance, without the detailed insights provided by advertisements, individuals may remain unaware of innovative solutions to everyday problems or advancements in technology that could enhance their quality of life. Furthermore, advertisements are instrumental in driving economic activity by stimulating demand. This, in turn, contributes to job creation and innovation, as companies strive to meet the evolving needs of their target audience. Such dynamics underscore the positive impact advertisements can have on both individual consumer behavior and the broader economy.

Conversely, the saturation of advertisements in our daily lives is undeniable and cannot be overlooked. This constant bombardment not only detracts from the essence of meaningful living but also exerts an undue influence on consumer choices, frequently leading to impulsive purchases that may not reflect genuine needs. Furthermore, the persuasive nature of advertisements often distorts reality, creating unrealistic expectations about happiness and success, and promotes a materialistic worldview. For example, the portrayal of an idyllic lifestyle, purportedly attainable only through specific products, can have a detrimental effect on self-esteem and encourage a cycle of consumption that prioritizes material possessions over genuine well-being and life satisfaction. This emphasis on acquisition over fulfillment underscores the complex impact of advertisement-driven materialism on societal values and personal contentment.

In conclusion, advertisements have a dual role: informing consumers and driving economic growth, yet their ubiquity raises concerns over societal values and personal choices. Balancing these aspects is crucial. Encouraging critical consumer awareness and ethical advertising is key to minimizing the adverse effects of this omnipresent element of modern life.

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The pervasive presence of advertising in contemporary society has sparked a polarizing debate: is its omnipresence beneficial or detrimental to our daily lives? This essay asserts that despite economic advantages, the intrusiveness and potential misinformation of ads tip the balance toward a negative impact. Following, I will examine advertising's dual role in economic stimulation and consumer education, alongside its intrusive nature and the proliferation of misleading content.

On the one hand, proponents of advertising underscore its role as a vital economic engine. Take, for instance, a major tech company's launch of an innovative smartphone. By creatively leveraging cutting-edge technology, advertisers craft compelling narratives that captivate potential buyers, subsequently stimulating product sales. A prime example is a sports drink commercial that, during a global sports event, not only promotes hydration but also celebrates athletic excellence, resonating with a vast audience and spurring conversations around health and performance. Such advertisements do more than just sell; they also educate consumers on the latest technological advancements and health trends, enabling them to make well-informed purchases.

Conversely, the omnipresent nature of advertising often becomes an intrusive force in our lives. Consider the experience of streaming a gripping movie, only to be frequently interrupted by repetitive ads for household cleaning products; this incessant bombardment of commercials can significantly detract from the viewing experience. Moreover, the rampant practice of misleading advertisements has far-reaching consequences. For example, a skincare brand promising miraculous results may use digitally altered images as proof, potentially misleading consumers and eroding trust when the touted benefits fail to materialize. Such deceptive practices can lead to a widespread loss of consumer confidence and incite legal action, damaging the brand's reputation and the advertising industry’s credibility as a whole.

In conclusion, while advertisements drive sales and educates the public about products, their pervasive and sometimes deceitful nature can detract potential buyers. It is imperative that the advertising industry finds a middle ground, promoting products while preserving consumer trust and respecting personal space.

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In an era where advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life, it is crucial to scrutinize the implications of this trend. Are these pervasive marketing efforts a boon or a bane to society? I argue that while advertisements play a key role in economic growth and consumer education, their omnipresence and propensity for misinformation often undermine these benefits.

Firstly, advertisements are instrumental in driving economic vitality. By presenting products and services in an appealing light, they stimulate consumer interest and, consequently, sales. For example, an innovative car advertisement, highlighting advanced safety features and eco-friendly technology, can significantly boost the automotive industry, leading to increased production and job creation. Additionally, advertisements serve an educational purpose, informing consumers about new products and services. This role is particularly evident in health campaigns, where ads about the latest medical advancements can guide individuals to make informed healthcare decisions.

However, the saturation of advertisements in everyday life can have a detrimental effect. A prime example is the disruption caused by ads during online streaming. Constant interruptions during a viewer's favourite series not only dampen the entertainment experience but can also lead to ad fatigue, where the viewer becomes disinterested or annoyed by the product being advertised. Furthermore, the integrity of advertisements is frequently called into question. The beauty industry, for instance, has been criticized for using unrealistic, digitally altered images, creating false expectations and contributing to body image issues among consumers. Such deceptive practices erode consumer trust, which is the cornerstone of any healthy market.

In conclusion, the ever-increasing presence of advertisements in our daily lives is a double-edged sword. On one side, they are catalysts for economic progress and consumer awareness. On the other, their intrusive and sometimes misleading nature poses significant challenges. As we move forward, it is imperative for the advertising industry to balance commercial pursuits with ethical considerations, ensuring that advertisements not only capture attention but also uphold truth and respect for the audience.

Sample 15:

Advertisements could be found anywhere in our daily lives. In my opinion, the current prevalence of advertising is a positive development for companies and a negative development for customers.

On the one hand, advertisements are a powerful tool of competition for companies. Advertising stimulates demand, expands the scale of production and in turn reduces the cost of production per unit. This not only increases profit but also creates a competitive pricing advantage for companies of advertised products. In addition, since it pays to advertise, advertised products are usually of good, if not the best quality. In other words, a company would emphasize on improving the quality of products before advertising, which also helps to create a trustworthy brand image among customers.

However, advertising is so common that it now becomes useless and a nuisance to customers. First, customers are often bombarded with advertisements of the same product, making it increasingly challenging for them to believe the advertising message if all companies claim they provide the best service or quality products. As a result, buyers now often turn to their friends or acquaintances for recommendations, which renders advertising ineffective. In addition, due to constant repetition, people have now developed an aversion to advertisements and try to get rid of them as much as possible. For example, most viewable media platforms like YouTube or Netflix are now using the removal of advertisements as the unique selling points to attract new customers, implying the audience’s hostile attitude toward advertising.

In conclusion, I believe advertising could assist companies in generating profit and improving product quality. However, due to their prevalence, advertisements are becoming less effective as customers not only struggle to believe the advertising messages but also try to avoid them as much as possible.

Sample 16:

In recent times, the ubiquity of advertisements has become increasingly apparent, permeating various facets of our daily existence. This phenomenon elicits mixed reactions, and while it is undeniable that advertisements play a pivotal role in shaping consumer behavior and sustaining the economy, it also raises concerns about their potential negative impact on individuals and society. This essay will discuss both perspectives before drawing a balanced conclusion.

On the positive side, advertisements serve as a crucial engine for economic growth. By promoting products and services, they stimulate consumer demand, fostering business expansion and job creation. Moreover, advertisements contribute to the dissemination of information, enabling consumers to make informed choices about a myriad of products available in the market. This not only empowers individuals but also enhances competition, thereby encouraging businesses to innovate and improve the quality of their offerings.

Furthermore, advertisements often play a significant role in raising public awareness about social issues and promoting positive behaviors. Public service announcements and campaigns use the power of advertising to address concerns such as health, safety, and environmental issues. This influence can lead to positive behavioral changes within society, contributing to the overall well-being of individuals and the community at large.

However, the omnipresence of advertisements has also been accompanied by negative consequences. One notable drawback is the potential to manipulate consumer perceptions and create unrealistic expectations. Advertisements, particularly those in the fashion and beauty industries, often perpetuate unattainable standards of beauty, leading to body image issues and low self-esteem, especially among the youth. Additionally, the incessant bombardment of advertisements can be intrusive and contribute to the commodification of culture, turning human experiences into commercial opportunities.

In conclusion, the prevalence of advertisements in contemporary life has both positive and negative ramifications. While they are instrumental in driving economic growth, spreading awareness, and promoting positive behaviors, the potential for manipulation and the perpetuation of unrealistic standards must be acknowledged. Striking a balance between the benefits and drawbacks of advertising is essential to ensure that it continues to be a force for good without compromising the well-being of individuals and society as a whole.

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Advertisements have long been an excellent way for companies to bring information about their products and services to potential customers. These days, advertisements can be seen nearly everywhere: from radio adverts to billboards, which have become a ubiquitous part of society. This essay will discuss the negative aspects of such pervasive advertising.

Although adverts and other marketing campaigns can deliver useful information to consumers, they also reach audiences for which they were never intended. For example, advertisements for alcohol can be spotted in various commercials and at sporting events. As a result, children are often exposed to products that they are too young to understand. This can leave them with a distorted and misguided perception of what the product is and how it is used. Furthermore, it could be argued that exposing children to such content is immoral as they are impressionable and unable to make mature consumer decisions.

Next, adverts are very expensive for companies to produce. Global brand names such as Nike, Adidas, and other businesses spend millions of dollars to have their products and services marketed during major sporting events like the World Cup and the Super Bowl. With all of the social and economic problems occurring around the world, that money could be better spent helping those in need. Furthermore, it is difficult to determine if the information being shown to the audience is accurate. Some businesses engage in what is called false advertising. This means that they exaggerate the features and characteristics of their products and services in order to increase sales.

In conclusion, it is clear that ads can be helpful to those seeking information about their next major purchase. However, advertisements have become a nuisance as they expose young people to unhealthy products such as alcohol. Also, advertisements divert large sums of money that could otherwise serve a social usefulness. In the future, advertisements will perhaps be less intrusive and more properly target their intended audiences.

Sample 18:

In today's society, advertisements have become increasingly prevalent in our daily lives. While some argue that this trend is negative, I strongly believe that the dissemination of advertisements has a positive impact. The numerous advantages associated with these ads serve to outweigh any potential disadvantages.

To begin with, positive advertisements abound in today's world. Anti-smoking ads, for instance, can be found everywhere. Recent studies have shown that these ads have led to a significant reduction in the number of smokers. Furthermore, even cigarette packs themselves now display no smoking advertisements. Seeing these ads can motivate smokers to quit, while non-smokers are discouraged from adopting the habit. Similarly, environmental pollution ads can also have a positive impact.

On the other hand, some people argue that advertisements are a nuisance. Whether watching a video on YouTube or simply watching television, the viewer is often forced to sit through ads regardless of their interest. This has created a widespread aversion to advertisements. Moreover, some ads are not genuinely helpful; they may overstate the benefits of the product or even lie outright. This is because advertisements are designed to sell a product at all costs. Advertisers may choose to advertise a product's strengths while ignoring its weaknesses. They may even manipulate or exaggerate the facts to do so.

In conclusion, while positive advertisements and those that avoid overstating claims are undoubtedly beneficial, those that mislead or deceive the viewer are clearly negative. Therefore, while some negatives exist, I firmly believe that advertisements have a positive impact on our lives.

Sample 19:

Advertisements have become an inseparable part of our daily lives. Some people believe that it is a negative development. This essay will argue that advertisements have several positive aspects. 

One of the primary positive aspects of advertising is information. Advertisements play a crucial role in providing valuable information to customers, presenting details about products, services, outstanding features, and various offerings available on the market. For example, when a new iphone model is released to the market, advertisements highlight its innovative features, functions, and prices. As a result, customers gain knowledge about the product and can make well-informed decisions before making a purchase.

Secondly, the advertising industry itself creates job opportunities. When it comes to advertisements, there are a diverse range of professionals associated with that such as creative teams, marketing experts, copy writers, graphic designers, and media planners. For example, let’s consider the process of creating a video advertisement, which typically involves a team of skilled individuals working together. The creative team brainstorms ideas and develops the concepts, while the copy writers craft scripts, designers create visually appealing elements and more. Indeed, the advertising sector generates jobs for a substantial portion of the workforce.

Moreover, advertisements play a vital role in promoting businesses and contributing to overall economic growth. Widely advertised on various public channels, including social media, and television, products have the opportunity to reach audiences effectively. Consequently, companies can enhance customer awareness, and more and more people know those companies. From that, advertisements can boost a company’s revenue and sales. Therefore, the results from advertisements generally not only benefit businesses but also contribute to the overall economy. 

In conclusion, advertisements have several advantages, including useful information, job creation, and economic benefits, that contribute to the development of society.

Sample 20:

Advertising has a significant psychological impact on consumers' purchasing decisions. The ability to transform wants into necessities has been viewed as a power of endorsement. Advertisements not only support the goods but also reassure consumers of its calibre. Celebrities and singers are used in contemporary advertising to entice consumers to their stores. It is further said that content is not as important as making it easier for repeat customers to spend money on items that are not necessary necessities for them. For instance, when companies like Nike, Adidas, Pepsi, etc. sign celebrities to endorse their products, it somehow affirms the items' high quality. This supports the claim that quality is not the only important factor in the fanciful world. The responsibility to support the product's characteristics and quality can be absolutely attributed to the marketing spend. I disagree with the notion that the market functions solely on needs, disregarding wants. Because it has been observed that the advertisements are bringing in money for the walking businesses. and turning them into the unicorn-like internet lodging business Make my Trip (MMT). Actors like Priyanka Chopra and Amitabh Bachhan are trusted by heirs worldwide to promote their films. Oyo offers the same products but endorsement by known celebrities helped MMT to establish goodwill in the market regarding the goodwill of the company. And its quality and a sense of safety they provide. Advertisement not just fulfils the needs but also makes the new one. Products which are now needed were once a demand or a sign of prosperity or status to which I refer to as borrowed status. For example, the luxury Mercedes cars the need of travelling can be met by an ordinary car but with few additional features. And quality ads by the celebrity face makes it a need in the so-called Elite community. This comment further strengthens the arguments that advertisements do play a vital role in the society to generate wants into needs. Hence, we can conclude consumerism has weighed human sentiments with marketable goods.

Sample 21:

Many businesses that fall under the category of luxury goods rather than necessities rely on advertising as their backbone. Visual commercials appeal to the viewer's mind and persuade them to purchase a product that is not really necessary for them. This is the function that marketing plays in the marketplace.

Advertisements highlight more than only the benefits and services that a product offers. However, the product's quality is also supported in a way to reassure the client that it has been thoroughly inspected before going on sale. As an illustration, Puma employs alluring advertisements to draw customers into their universe.

Since the invention of modern advertising, businesses have paid celebrities or any other well-known figure to promote their goods. Due to the fact that only that celebrity can guarantee the product's quality, businesses like Puma are able to increase their revenue in place of this. As a result, needs are created from wants. So I'm vehemently opposed to the idea of customers just buying items that meet their wants. The aforementioned illustration demonstrates my point and leads me to the conclusion that advertising has made requests and wishes into necessities or commodities.

A firm that makes beauty products called Nykaa recently made headlines for their IPO launch and the amount of money it brought in. The development of digital advertising's reputation among young people was vital. Once more, it is important to remember that advertisements serve purposes other than simply promoting a company's goods. However, the Celebrities they are in the urge to support the quality of its product, also producing a requirement in the market. This enabled Nykaa to raise money through an initial public offering and serve as a model for a group of people. This serves as a metaphor for how wishes become needs. This is a result of the psychological effect that was had on the clients.

Hence, I can stick to the prior argument that it's not always the needs that drive the market. It's also about the wants which may be converted into the needs.

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While promoting the features of the product, advertising also, to some extent, supports its quality. This has an effect on consumers' mentality and encourages them to buy goods even when they could live happily without them. This is the part that ads play in encouraging people to buy and sell items.

The needs are just for financial comfort, but this is because so much money was spent on advertising. They continue to buy those things for the group of individuals who cannot typically utilise them. This demonstrates that among consumers, desires may occasionally trump needs. I disagree with the idea that wants come later and only needs to drive the market initially.

Advertising transforms desires into necessities, acting as the market's coach in the process. These days, it's common for companies to hire celebrities to endorse their products, sending the message to their fans that the goods they are promoting are of a specific calibre. For instance, Nestle's Maggie hired renowned Bollywood actor Amitabh Bachhan in order to have a significant psychological effect on the audience. to get a competitive advantage over the market's other suppliers of Yippie's kind of goods. Consequently, Nestle generates more money than Yippee does. Advertising does, in fact, help turn wants into requirements, I can say as much. In order to convert consumer wishes into necessities like food and clothing, advertising is a major actor in the market.

Endorsements do more than only highlight the advantages and benefits of a product. However, you should also provide a basic guarantee of the product's quality. The celebrity who is engaged for the advertisement to have a significant psychological impression is frequently viewed as being more crucial than the ad's actual substance.

As a result, it is obvious that the market is driven by the demands that may be created through advertising.

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Advertising in its many forms, which has become increasingly prevalent, has affected our daily life in a huge number of aspects. In my opinion, this is a totally negative development.

First, due to the collection of personal data, one prime impact of advertising is that it might result in the invasion of people’s privacy. Users’ confidential information such as their name, addresses, locations, or even consumer behavior have been collected through social networking sites, online shopping or ride-hailing apps. This also means that users’ behavior is monitored without being aware that their information is being gathered, which can be exploited for undesirable or even illegal purposes. Consequently, this can exert adverse effects on personal security and privacy.

Second, the ubiquity of advertisements can also cause interruptions to some of our activities, which has made it difficult for us to focus on tasks or activities. To exemplify this, regarding advertisements on video-streaming platforms, viewers are sometimes disrupted by commercials, which can be very disruptive and annoying, especially those which cannot be skipped. Once being disrupted, viewers can lose their interest in the content they are reading or watching. When it comes to advertisements on online newspapers, some tend to be nicely designed or eye-catching, which can be distracting for viewers when they are trying to focus on a single article or finding information.

To sum up, I believe that the increasing popularity of advertisements is an adverse development that may cause inconveniences for people as it can be disruptive and invade people’s personal privacy.

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The increasingly ubiquitous appearance of advertisements has proven useful to the global economy. However, asides from some evident advantages to consumers and businesses around the globe being considered followingly, the growth of this innately deceptive marketing tool can still bring about bad shopping habits to the general population.

On the one hand, advertisements being more embedded in everyday life can greatly facilitate product promotions for businesses. As reaching a larger pool of audience becomes increasingly viable to brands, customers also benefit from a resultant wider range of merchandises, possibly allowing them to make wiser choices by comparing between different brands and their varied qualities. Consequently, by enhancing the shopping experiences for consumers, and enabling businesses with better access to promote their products, this constant growth in advertisements ultimately increases sales, business competitions and thus, creating possibilities for economic growth.

On the other hand, it is inevitable that advertisement gaining traction will lead to it being overused. The core of this marketing tool is to persuade consumers to buy a product or service; therefore, its overly widespread presence could lead to unnecessary products being promoted. Employing redundant advertising, of which the popularity is steadily growing, could consequently bombard consumers with useless information. Being overwhelmingly surrounded by varied forms of advertisements of the same product, in addition, tends to deteriorate one’s decision-making abilities when it comes to choosing the proper goods. Alternatively, when being exposed to thousands of advertisements on a daily basis, consumers may fail into the trap of buying unnecessary products because of the manipulative nature of advertising, thus giving rise to bad shopping habits.

In conclusion, although the expansion of advertising serves as an incentive for further economic development, it can alter consumer behaviors in a way that often encourages excessive consumption.

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Advertisements are growing increasingly popular in recent years, and whilst some people are of the opinion that advertising greatly assists us in making purchase decisions, we can also hear some others decrying ads for being annoying and misleading. In my opinion, it has both positive and negative sides in equal measure.

There are several disadvantages inherent in advertising. Advertisements, with the advent of the Internet, has been rising on an unprecedented scale. Pop-ups, flyers and billboards are virtually everywhere, and since we are simply unable to avoid seeing them, such advertising overload has been considered to be unwelcome intrusion rather than useful information. Furthermore, several ads attempt to tempt people into making unnecessary purchases. Every year, many people, under the manipulation of alluring and provocative ads, queue for the latest flagship phones, even though their old ones are still in perfectly good condition. Discarding things when they are still of good use is a huge waste of money and resources would. There are several disadvantages inherent in advertising. Advertisements, with the advent of the Internet, has been rising on an unprecedented scale. Pop-ups, flyers and billboards are virtually everywhere, and since we are simply unable to avoid seeing them, such advertising overload has been considered to be unwelcome intrusion rather than useful information. Furthermore, several ads attempt to tempt people into making unnecessary purchases. Every year, many people, under the manipulation of alluring and provocative ads, queue for the latest flagship phones, even though their old ones are still in perfectly good condition. Discarding things when they are still of good use is a huge waste of money and resources.

However, advertisements and commercials are instrumental in promoting a new product to the market. Along with marketing, advertising plays a vital role in bringing fresh products and services closer to consumers who have not heard about them. Were it not for commercials, it would be very difficult for sellers to get their products to the market, and for buyers to be informed of new commodities. Also, in recent years, advertising has become very thought-provoking and educational. Messages of love, friendship, family core values, and environmental protection that are included in some commercials have been very well received by the audience.

In conclusion, my firm conviction is that advertising is detrimental for its intrusive and manipulative natures, but it can be very informative and meaningful as well. Wise consumers are those who demonstrate the ability to see through those pieces of advertising and make sensible buying decisions.

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The ever-increasing business growth has paved the way for the omnipresence of advertisements in multiple aspects of daily life. From my standpoint, this development can be equally beneficial and detrimental at the same time.

On the one hand, the widespread presence of advertisements can bring many advantages to both businesses and customers. For businesses, advertising will give them a competitive edge in brand awareness. It is understandable that for a product to reach its target customers, the firm needs to adopt numerous marketing strategies in which advertising plays an integral part. It can be exemplified by the advertising campaign called “Just Do It” from Nike as this slogan has become iconic for the brand and boosted its sales considerably. For customers, they will benefit from having a variety of choices for products they wish to buy. When exposed to divergent advertisements, customers will be aware of these new products, including the brand name, the newly improved functions. Hence, customers can compare with other similar products and select the optimal quality goods.

On the other hand, the ubiquity of advertisements can leave several repercussions for customers and businesses. First of all, customers can feel overwhelmed by the colossal number of advertisements. Should they meet with too many commercials, instead of feeling informed of useful information, customers will be fed up with advertising and ignore its well-meaning value. For instance, many people have showcased their frustration because they are bombarded with advertising that acutely interrupts their online experience like playing mobile games or watching YouTube videos. Another drawback is that excessive advertising can be a financial burden to businesses. Setting up advertisements everywhere does not correlate with meeting the target market and increasing sales. Therefore, businesses may squander an inordinate amount of money on advertising to little or no avail.

In conclusion, although advertising is of paramount importance to business development, its constant presence can be a mixed blessing to both businesses and customers. Thus, it is imperative that both sides make proper use of advertisements with a view to averting the shortcomings discussed above.

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Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sample 1:

Traffic congestion has become the bane of citizens in many parts of the world. In order to mitigate this problem, some suggest that public transportation, such as trains and subway lines should be constructed. Meanwhile, others are firm in their belief that building wider roads makes more sense. Both of these methods will be analysed below.

On the one hand, building trains is an effective method to improve traffic condition. There is compelling evidence to support investment in public transportation. In countries where subway systems are up to standard, the number of private vehicles that participate in traffic is small, and city dwellers can save hours of delay and also thousands of dollars on travel expenses. That is not to mention a significant number of gallons of fuel saved, which means slowing down the exploitation of natural resources.

There are, however, others who express doubts on this approach. Their suggestion is that a better way to alleviate traffic jam is to make bigger road systems. The undeniable fact is that in many developing countries today, roads are narrow and in a desperate state of disrepair, which greatly obstructs the travels to their destinations. Someone’s small accidents, a flat tyre, for example, can bring traffic to a halt, which is a commonly-seen problem in roads that have only two lanes.

To conclude, both methods discussed above provide sustained relief on our roadways; however, it is my opinion that the method to build trains and subway makes more sense in terms of environmental protection.

Sample 2:

The high volume of traffic is a huge problem for many big cities. Therefore, there is a widely held view among a number of people that governmental bodies should pour money in building such public transport systems as train and subway lines. Others, however, argue that road expansion is the more proper way. To my mind, though widening streets benefits us, this can not alleviate traffic congestion.

It is not by chance that developing public vehicles is considered one of the common approaches to reduce traffic jams. To day, people have indeed used too many private vehicles whose disadvantages can be listed. The long line of cars at peak hours is a typical example, which may lead to lengthy delays. This can also cause other serious consequences such as traffic accidents. Accordingly, it is widely believed that building underground tunnels can solve heavy traffic jams due to empty spaces beneath the ground.

However, according to others, road extension is a better alternative because this solution does not demand more efforts. Also, extending road does not seem as costly as developing underground transport systems. Another reason for this is that bigger roads will create more spaces for vehicle owners, helping them to circulate easily during peak hours. By doing so, traffic congestion can be alleviated.

In my opinion, road expansion is not a long-term measure because people tend to drive their vehicles regularly on newly widened streets. In other words, traffic jams might continue to occur. Therefore, government should take other solutions into consideration for safer transportation.

Sample 3:

The methods of mitigating traffic congestion have been a heated topic of controversy. Some people argue that the construction of larger roads is the answer for the problem. However, I contend that such a solution is ineffective in the long term, while the option to construct railways and subways is a far better measure.

There is a common fallacy that governmental spending on building larger roads could sustainably address the problem of traffic congestion. An increase in road size could reduce the traffic intensity in the short term, but larger roads also mean that the citizens are encouraged to purchase more individual vehicles. This leads to the fact that the roads, albeit larger, would soon be filled with intense traffic again. For instance, traffic jams returned to Shanghai’s main streets not long after they were expanded in the early 1990s. In brief, if this solution is implemented, traffic jams would still persist in the long run.

Rail and subway systems, however, could ensure that traffic congestion is properly addressed. Unlike cars and buses, trains are capable of transporting hundreds of people simultaneously and thus would meet the transport demand of a vast number of passengers. Moreover, trains do not have to go through intersections and traffic lights, and dedicated lines ensure their travel is hardly interrupted. In other words, trains are always on time regardless of the level of traffic. This level of punctuality would encourage many people to choose railways and subways as their primary means of transport, and the number of individuals vehicles would decrease accordingly. As a result, traffic congestion could be tackled successfully.

The existing data provides a concrete foundation to conclude that building more and larger roads in an unsustainable measure, while train and subway lines would be a much more effective solution for the problem of traffic congestion.

Sample 4:

Traffic congestion has become an aching problem of many administrations all over the world. To mitigate the problem, it is suggested that public transportation such as trains and subway lines should be erected. Meanwhile, a school of thought claims that building more and larger roads makes more sense. In my view, both methods contribute equally to the effort of preventing traffic jams.

On the one hand, building trains and subways is an effective method to improve the traffic situation. In actual fact, in countries where public transportation is up to standards, the number of private vehicles participating in the traffic tends to be small. Therefore, city dwellers can save hours of delaying and an abundance of money spent on traveling expenses. A stark example of this is Netherlands, a European nation whose subway system is considered the most developed in the world, has the lowest frequency of traffic jams. For many consecutive years, Netherlands has ranked on top of the worldwide chart as the place for best driving experiences.

On the other hand, some individuals hold the belief that a more effective way to alleviate the issue is to erect wider road systems. There is no denying the fact that in some third world countries, roads are relatively narrow and in a desperate state of disrepair, which greatly obstruct travelers to their destinations. If better road systems are to be build and maintained, the rate of traffic congestion would decline significantly. For instance, Kansas City, known as the least congested large city in the world, owns one of the most comprehensive freeway systems.

To conclude, both methods discussed above provide sustainable relief on the current situation of traffic, as they play an equal part in curbing the severity of traffic jams around the world.

Sample 5:

It is indubitable that traffic congestion is a growing anxiety in many parts of the world. In order to mitigate this problem, some suggest that roads should be fabricated. Others, however, believe that public transportation, such as trains and subway lines should be constructed. Both of these methods will be analysed below. I, personally side with the latter view.

On the one hand, expanding the road network could naturally ease traffic jams. Obviously, more and more private vehicles would be accommodated, and commute time would reduce. This strategy would also be good from the economic perspective also. The cost of road construction is much lower than that of subway lines. The money thus saved can be used for other key sectors, such as healthcare and education.

On the other hand, construction of mega rail systems is a more effective method to improve traffic condition. There is compelling evidence to support the investment in such public transportation. In countries where subway systems have been made up to standard, the number of private vehicles has come down. Trains can carry a much larger number of passengers than any other form of transport. Additionally, city dwellers can save time and also money on traveling expenses. For instance, in New Delhi, many people now prefer to travel by Metros rather than their private vehicles because of the comfort and the quality.

I personally believe that in places where the budget of the governments is constrained, a combination of both approaches is needed. For example, in India, the road networks are being expanded in almost all places, but subways lines are also being added slowly and steadily in many cities. In the foreseeable future, the expanded road networks are also going to prove inadequate, and so subway lines would remain the only solution.

To conclude, both methods discussed above can provide relief on our traffic congestion. However, it is my opinion that the method to build trains and subway makes more sense in the long run.

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1 điểm

More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?

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Sample 1:

An increasing number of youngsters from developed nations are moving to underdeveloped nations for a short period of time to do volunteer work such as teaching or constructing houses for local people. This essay discusses possible reasons for this, and I believe that this trend is more beneficial to these young people.

There are some reasons why doing volunteer work in underdeveloped nations is becoming increasingly popular among young people from rich nations. The first reason is that schools in developed nations tend to encourage their students to take part in volunteer campaigns in deprived communities. This activity is a part of their educational goals which aims to improve youngsters’ social responsibility and help them become global citizens. Another reason is that young people are eager to explore the world and broaden their knowledge about different cultures. Therefore, doing volunteer work in underdeveloped nations has become an ideal way to fulfill their eagerness.

I believe that this trend is more advantageous to these youngsters. Firstly, through helping people in poorer countries to have better living conditions and educational opportunities, these volunteers can enrich their social experience which plays a vital role in their future career path. For example, teaching English to children and taking care of the elderly in deprived areas are valuable experiences for youngsters from developed nations who want to become teachers or doctors. Furthermore, young people will have to overcome many difficulties such as culture shock, language barrier, and bad weather to provide aid for the community in underdeveloped nations. Therefore, their willpower can be strengthened and help them become more mature. 

In conclusion, educational goals of schools in developed nations and youngsters’ eagerness to explore the world are two main reasons for the increasing number of young volunteers in deprived nations. I believe these young people will achieve more benefits from this trend than the local community because this trend can help them accumulate social experience and enhance their willpower.

Sample 2:

It is becoming increasingly common these days for individuals from wealthier nations to donate their time to aiding less developed countries. In my opinion, this is a natural result of advances in media and technology, and it benefits the wealthy far more than those being ostensibly helped.

The main reason this has become a pervasive trend in recent decades is that young people are more aware of and capable of traveling to other countries. The last several decades have witnessed the rise of media beyond traditional television shows and newspapers and now include websites and social media. The average young person today can use their smartphone to easily access information from a variety of sources on issues in distant countries. Additionally, individuals today are generally able to travel conveniently abroad. Air travel is not only far faster than past modes of travel including ships and trains but has also become cheaper as average incomes have risen, particularly in developed nations.

However, this phenomenon is mostly concerned with improving the self-esteem of the wealthy. Young people often lack confidence and one way to improve their own self-image is to volunteer for causes in other countries. A young person of privilege might feel guilty about their own standard of living and lack of accomplishments in life and therefore travel abroad to help others in order to gain confidence. When this person returns home, they will be able to flaunt their achievements in front of friends, their parents, and on university entrance essays. In contrast, the people who have been helped are unlikely to experience a significant change in their lives and the cost of housing and training young volunteers might even outweigh their contributions.

In conclusion, while advancements in technology and media have enabled more young people to volunteer abroad, the primary beneficiaries of this phenomenon are often the travelers themselves. However, there can be occasional advantages for the local communities as well.

Sample 3:

It is indeed a fact that any poor country can thrive with enough charity work. And youngsters from developed countries become a helping hand to such countries by doing works like teaching and construction. In this essay, I will discuss the reason behind it, and we will see how it benefits both parties.

Showing kindness to others is one of the most significant gestures. We often teach our young ones to help anyone in need, regardless of race, gender, or nationality. As a result, we have observed a lot of communities from affluent countries that try to help those in desperate need of help. This act of kindness teaches them the value of human life. In this materialistic world, they learn about the importance of life. These acts also make them realize how fortunate they are and constantly reminds them to be humble and grateful. Such qualities cannot be taught in a classroom; therefore, they try to help people from developed countries.

On the other hand, countries that struggle to provide necessities benefit from the generous act of foreign youngsters. Unfortunate people who cannot afford an education can take advantage of young talent. Also, benefits are not limited to education only. Nowadays, volunteers also provide help to build houses or cure viral diseases with the help of advanced technology.

But still, who is more beneficial? Well, in my opinion, both parties enjoy different benefits. Youngsters learn the most crucial lesson of kindness and develop a sense of satisfaction, and the developing country gets help with little to no investment to resolve various burning issues.

Sample 4:

The number of youngsters leaving economically stable countries for less stable ones to do free work like building houses and teaching in communities is increasing daily. However, they do these to keep themselves occupied as there are fewer job opportunities in urban areas; I believe that rural areas benefit more from this activity than the youth.

Many youths leave their comfort zone in the cities and migrate to rural areas to work without getting paid just because they couldn’t get a job in the big companies around them. Working in these areas keeps them busy and occupied rather than waiting to get a job. In addition, youths see this as an opportunity to gain more experience in their line of work, knowledge which is required to function optimally in the cities. When I graduated from the university as a registered nurse, I worked for six months in a village which boosted my experience before I sought a job in Lagos.

However, even though it is working in the rural areas without getting paid benefits to the youths, I believe the people living in these communities are the biggest gainers from these acts of charity. To start with, these youths teaching in the rural schools and districts impact knowledge on the children. They bring ideas from the cities and teach these young ones. Also, those that engage in building structures help improve the well-being of the people living in the communities and improve the image of the area as a whole. For example, a youth posted to a rural site for his country’s service decided to build a latrine toilet for the community, which solved the problem of defecating in rivers and dams.

To round it up, youths leave the prominent and wealthy cities for poorer ones to assist in doing works like teaching and building structures to keep themselves busy and gather experience. However, I believe the community benefits more from this act of charity because the well-being of people residing in the end.

Sample 5:

There has been an ongoing trend of many young people from prosperous nations deciding to spend their time doing voluntary work in underprivileged countries. Some of the prominent reasons for this phenomenon will be discussed before the benefits of both individuals and developing countries are analyzed.

There are several convincing reasons associated with this practice. The most significant factor is that doing such unpaid work in poor countries would be a comparative advantage for the young when applying for a job in the future. In other words, in this fierce and competitive job market, a candidate possessing an application file accompanied by only great scores could not be the ideal one that a recruiter is finding; therefore, he or she needs outstanding volunteering experience to be able to compete with other rivals. Another reason that is worth mentioning is that young generations could engender the feeling of community when participating in unpaid work. Their voluntary efforts help to give prominence to the value of sharing and the sense of social responsibility to secure improved humanity and international awareness about disadvantaged places.

It is undoubted that both the young volunteers and underdeveloped or developing countries could equally gain from this phenomenon. Regarding the young, it is apparent that the aforementioned meaningful work not only brings the volunteers unforgettable life lessons, gives them hands–on experience but also helps expand their network of relationships. As a result, they gradually grow more mature and confident, realizing the diversity of life by getting to know many walks of people. In regard to poorer countries, they may have a chance to raise the living standards of their dwellers. For instance, knowledge related to environmental protection or health care which they have acquired from overseas volunteers possibly improves their living conditions afterwards.

To sum up, the requirement of a more competitive profile and the determination to support financially disadvantaged countries are the two principal elements that make young people join a wide range of voluntary activities. I would contend that both the volunteers and the community are the beneficiaries of the practice above.

Sample 6:

In recent times, there has been an emerging culture by the enthusiastic youth who are energetically drawn towards exploring the world. They often wish to travel and in order to support that they volunteer in small communities in developing nations. This is a positive movement as it is advantageous not only to the society but also to the youngsters.

One of the reasons why people travel to developing territories is because of affordability. Many of these are freshers or students who can only afford to visit places which have a weaker currency value. Additionally, doing social work gives a meaningful purpose to their expeditions and also helps them share their talents, in exchange for food and accommodation. For instance, there are several global organisations such as WOOFF and UNESCO which offer travel fellowships to individuals in exchange for volitional activities in the third-world nations. 

This increasingly rising trend has numerous benefits to both – the local public as well as the young individuals. Many of these communities are poor and therefore face several problems. With the influx of youth, the society is exposed to several innovative ideas with the local resources, which can often creatively solve their daily-life challenges. On an individual level, doing first-hand social work helps build character and introduces them to problems which they might have never encountered in their affluent countries. These experiences widen the perspective of the world and challenge them to tackle these problems. For example, several volunteers set up unique businesses providing education, jobs and revenue to the same weaker villages they volunteered at, thus improving the quality of life of these neighbourhoods. 

To conclude, the growing flock of the younger generation spending time in underdeveloped countries is drawn by their desire to contribute to the well-being globally. Furthermore, this trend creates a sustainable system which fosters the exchange and movement of young people, as well as benefits the communities.

Sample 7:

It is true that a growing number of young people from affluent countries are doing temporary jobs without payment in less wealthy countries. Reasons for this vary, and I believe that both these young individuals and the community reap the benefits.

There are several reasons why the youth in rich nations tend to do unpaid work in less affluent countries. Chief among them is the growth of the aviation industry. The emergence of low-cost airlines allows young individuals who are on a tight budget to travel to remote corners of the world. For example, having a voluntary foreign English teacher in Sapa, a mountainous area in Vietnam, used to be far-fetched several decades ago, but cheap carriers such as Tiger Airlines and Jetstar Airlines have made it happen. Another reason is the spread of information. The development of technology has brought images and the living condition of poor communities to the richer world, which creates an urge for the young to take action. Many graduates decide to take a year out to help these inhabitants of poverty-stricken countries partly because of the television programs and the news they watch and read.

Doing unpaid jobs pays dividends for both young volunteers and the community. On the one hand, young people can experience the life of indigenous people, gain hands-on experience and enjoy the breathtaking view of the places where they work. They may then come back to their normal life and decide on the career path that they want to pursue. On the other hand, people in poor countries might benefit from the work of young citizens from rich nations. Knowledge received can have lasting effects on the locals’ future, while housing built will provide a better living condition than before.

In conclusion, various factors contribute to the influx of young volunteers to poor communities. Personally, I believe that this is beneficial to both these young people and the community as a whole.

Sample 8:

In the last few years, volunteer tourism has become very popular among the youth from the developed countries. They travel to the developing and under-developed nations to contribute towards the development of the infrastructure or to educate and aware people. There are many reasons that have led to this tendency, and in my opinion, both the youth and the communities they are serving, benefit from it equally.

There are several factors that have led to the popularity of the volunteer work in the underprivileged sections of some nations. The main reason is the spread of awareness and information by the digital and other forms of media, which connects us to the events all over the world. There is news about natural calamities and other emergency situations from all over the world, which makes the youth, want to help the needy and lend a helping hand to the local authorities. Also, in most developed countries, it is a part of the education to sensitize the students towards the importance of sharing and helping others, as this helps them to become better citizens.

This development has benefits for both the youth volunteers and the people they are serving. For the youth, volunteer work adds to their work experience and gives them an opportunity to put to work the skills they have learned at school and college. These days even the employers look for employees who have a volunteer work experience. So, the youth can get better jobs if they have a good background of some social work. To add to it, they get more exposure because of the travel to other countries and coming in contact with people from different cultures and social strata. It broadens their horizons.

The communities these youth volunteers work in are definitely benefited, as their standards of living are improved, with the development of the homes and other infrastructure. In times of calamities and other natural disasters, the volunteer workers help rebuild their homes and other facilities. The education provided by them helps them to gain knowledge and makes their future brighter. It improves their chances of getting a better job, which in turn improves their quality of life.

To conclude, it can be said that the volunteer work done by the youth is a positive trend, which is advantageous for them as well as the communities they work with.

Sample 9:

It is common to see that an increasing number of adolescents from wealthy countries deciding to spend their time doing voluntary work in poor communities. The following paragraph will dicuss some reasons for this tendency as well as the benefits that young people and the host country gained.

There are various reasons why young volunteers spend their time doing unpaid work to help poor people in poorer countries. First of all, doing volunteer will be a comparative advantage for young people when applying for jobs in the future. In other words, in this competitive job market, employers are not only looking for candidates with good grades but also with volunteering experience. Another reason is young generations could engender the feeling of community when participating in unpaid jobs. It comes from a desire to help suffering people, to experience what it is like to live in a poor community.

On the other hand, the trend described above can offer both the community and participants obvious advantages. The positive effect on the community is that poor countries can improve their residents's living standards. For instance, the education activities can make childrens in these areas have more dreams about life and thereby have a brighter future. Meanwhile, youngsters benefit through the life experience which they gain, living and working from a different culture. It is a life-changing challenge and young people will return to their homes with a much more mature and a broader outlook on life.

In conclusion, this tendency become popular because of the requirement of a competitive profile and the determination to support financially disadvantaged countries. I would suppose that either the community or the youngsters benefit from this, it can truly be said to be a win-win situation.

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1 điểm

In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

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Sample 1:

It is true that these days the family structure has considerably shifted, and the changing roles of men and women in the family have become increasingly similar. There are several new forms of family composition, and in my opinion, these developments are not always desirable.

In the past, nuclear families where parents and their offspring living together under one roof used to be prevalent. However, there is now a huge trend towards single-parent families due to more marriages ending in divorce, while the increase in cohabiting couple families and stepfamilies is probably a result of cohabitation and remarriage becoming much more acceptable. In addition, the number of single-mother families has increased as many mothers want to have children without getting married. In terms of changing parental roles in a family, there has been a rise in the number of stay-at-home dads in recent years when it has become normal for women to gain qualifications and pursue their own career path. This is in sharp contrast to about half a decade ago when men were breadwinners, and women were in charge of household chores in their families.

In my view, the changes described above could have both positive and negative consequences. On the one hand, due to the lack of emotional attachment and legal binding, non-traditional households such as stepfamilies and cohabiting parents are more prone to breaking down. Consequently, children of these families are more likely to be involved in antisocial behaviors while their parents may experience feelings of loneliness and worry. On the other hand, the changes in the roles of members in the family could be seen as progress because women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their own careers to assume childcare and domestic responsibilities.

In conclusion, I believe that the changes in the roles of family members and the family structure are both positive and negative.

Sample 2:

The changes of family structure and family roles have become a major topic of concern in modem society. Some of the main changes will be identified, before an evaluation on whether this is a positive or negative trend is made.

A few drastic changes could be observed in families today. The most obvious one is the decreased size of an average family in society. In Vietnam, for example, a majority of extended families of three generations or more living under the same roof have been transformed into nuclear families with only parents and children. In addition, there is also a significant change in terms of the roles of the father and the mother in a family. The responsibility of males as the sole breadwinner of the family has now been shared with their partners, and now women have equal working opportunities compared with their male counterparts. Accordingly, household duties are also shared equally between the two sexes.

I contend that this new family structure is without doubt beneficial for all families. As regards the smaller family size, each family member could benefit from an increased sense of freedom. For instance, parents have more time for themselves now, compared with the situation in the past when they had to bear the responsibility of taking care of both grandparents and children. With respect to the change in family roles, women may reap the benefit of having their own career and thus financial freedom. Men also gain from this change since they have been freed from the financial pressure of being the only source of income in the family.

To conclude, the most apparent changes in today’s families include a decreased family size and a shared financial and household responsibility of men and women. All the existing data has provided a concrete foundation that these changes are beneficial for all members of the family.

Sample 3:

It is true that there have been significant changes in not only the family structure but also family roles. In my opinion, these changes should be regarded as a positive tendency.

To begin with, the structure of a family is relatively different from that of some decades ago. In the past, it was likely that extended families became prevalent among societies when many generations including children, parents and grandparents lived in the same roof. In contrast, these days are witnessing the domination of nuclear families which have only parents and their offspring. Regarding parental roles, in earlier periods, men and women were supposed to be breadwinners and homemakers respectively as fathers tended to earn a living while mothers were supposed to stay at home to fulfill household duties as well as looking after children. However, both men and women currently go to work to support the whole family, whereas household tasks are often divided.

I am of the opinion that these changes would have beneficial effects on family life. First of all, if fewer generations reside together, people seem to have more freedom and privacy to do anything they have interest in without disturbing other members. For instance, in extended families’ juveniles adoring pop music might have to stop listening to it because their grandparents could find it annoying and noisy. Furthermore, pursuing their own careers can allow women to become financially independent from men and this also provides families with another income to have a higher standard of living. Another benefit when husbands assist their wives with household chores is that women would ease the burden of housework and have more time for themselves which can be spent on recreational activities.

In conclusion, I hold the view that several changes in family pattern and the role of member such as the fact that extended families are gradually replaced by nuclear ones and the fair division of household duties is a positive development.

Sample 4:

In recent decades, significant transformations have taken place in the organizational structure of families and the roles played by each member. These modifications are primarily related to the interrelationships among the different family components. Despite the positive aspects of these changes in terms of material gains, I believe that this drastic shift can exact a significant emotional toll in the long run.

In the current era of rapid modernization and urbanization, the boundaries of families have been dramatically altered, making it increasingly difficult for family members to spend quality time together. A concomitant effect of this has been a decline in the general level of income, which has further exacerbated the situation. As a result, in most households, both parents are now compelled to work full-time to sustain their livelihoods, unlike the past when the sole responsibility of providing for the family rested on the father's shoulders. This shift in dynamics has resulted in increased pressure on parents to balance work and family life, often leading to the neglect of one at the expense of the other. The consequences of this are manifold and long-lasting, affecting not only the individual family but also the broader society.

Furthermore, with recent developments in familial aspects, parents may lose the opportunity to listen to their children or build a strong emotional connection with them. For instance, dinner used to be one of the most important meals in traditional families, as it provided both parents and children with an opportunity to interact closely and convey valuable lessons regarding proper manners or other essential values. However, this valuable chapter is becoming obsolete as, by the time working parents get home, their offspring have already had their meal. Thus, the diminished family time not only deprives children of proper growth but also breeds childhood traumas that can eventually lead to adult mental illnesses.

In conclusion, with the advent of modernization and the resulting financial strain, family structures are continually changing, with both parents becoming heavily involved in their professional aspects. Although this new development might bring financial gains for households, it comes at a severe cost of emotional attachment among family members.

Sample 5:

In recent years, the family structure has undergone a tremendous transformation, marked by the shrinking of family units and a consequent reduction in familial responsibilities. This phenomenon can be attributed to the acceleration of urbanization and the growing focus of young people on their careers, which has resulted in increased financial and mental independence. As a result, young people are increasingly opting to live with their friends or by themselves, rather than with their families, and are no longer viewed as the primary source of support for both elders and children.

This shift towards smaller and more independent family units has had numerous advantages for both individuals and society at large. Young people are no longer weighed down by excessive family responsibilities, such as caring for children and elders, and can thus focus more fully on their personal and professional lives. Elders, in turn, can enjoy a more fulfilling social life by living with people their own age who understand their experiences and perspectives. Additionally, the decreasing birth rate resulting from these changes is being compensated for by a surge in demand for nursing home services, which is creating more job opportunities and contributing to overall economic growth.

Despite these benefits, some may argue that this shift towards smaller and more independent family units may have its downsides. For instance, it may lead to a decline in traditional family values and a weakening of familial bonds. However, these concerns can be mitigated by the increasing availability of alternative forms of social support, such as community groups and social networks, which can serve to fill the void left by traditional family structures.

In conclusion, the revolution in the family structure that we are currently witnessing is a natural consequence of urbanization and the growing focus on individualism. While it may have some drawbacks, its advantages are manifold, ranging from reduced family burdens for young people to increased job opportunities and a more fulfilling social life for elders. Ultimately, this shift towards smaller and more independent family units is a positive development that should be embraced and celebrated.

Sample 6:

During the last decades, fundamental modifications have involved family organization and the roles of its members. These changes are mainly related to the relationships among the different family components. Though there are some positive aspects in terms of material gains, I believe this drastic change can incur a massive emotional cost on the long run.

Nowadays, the fast-paced environment of people’s lifestyle has been changing the boundary of the families. It has become almost impossible for family members to spend quality time together. These days, the general level of income is lower than that of the earlier period. That is why, to stretch out the earnings all through the months, in most case both parents are required to work full time, whereas previously only the fathers used to shoulder the financial burdens.

In addition, with the recent development in familial aspects, parents would lose the chance to listen to their children or build a strong emotional connection with them. For example, dinner was one of the most important meals in the traditional families, it used to give both parents and children a chance to interact closely and convey messages to the Kids regarding the right manners or other valuable lessons. But this incredible chapter is becoming obsolete because of the time when working parents get home, offspring already have had their meal. This is how, the shrunken family time is not only depriving children from gaining a proper growth, but also it is breeding childhood traumas which can eventually lead to an adult mental illness.

To conclude, with the advent of modernisation and the resulting financial strain, family structures are changing constantly where both parents are getting heavily involved in their professional aspects. Though this new development might bring financial gains for the households, it comes at a serious cost of mental attachment among the members.

Sample 7:

A lot of changes in the form and the function of families, namely the decrease in average number of family members and the less dependency on families, have happened recently. In my opinion, this transition of characteristics of families is preferable because it would help people financially and strengthen their relationships with the family members.

The most prominent change in family structure is that the average size of a family has become smaller than ever before. In other words, more and more families are deciding not to live with their grandparents or other relatives, as the number of atomic family is increasing in Japan. Moreover, ordinary family members are becoming dependent on their relatives, and therefore a family is not a safety space for many people anymore.

Furthermore, I strongly believe that this transformation of families is beneficial for most of the people in terms of financial and social aspects. The smaller the family size, the less people have to pay for maintaining their family activities. Unfortunately, the burden of caring their parents is extremely heavy for young adults because they are so busy to nurture their children and to earn the required amount of money for their upbringings. In addition, if people can become more independent from their families, they would be more sociable. Because citizens usually spend much time in schools or offices where their families cannot support them, a good relationship with colleagues or friends would bring a lot of benefits on people while the role of family shrinks.

In conclusion, I am convinced that various changes; the reduction in the figures of family members and the low dependency on families, that have taken place over the last decade is mitigating financial problems of young adults and improving their communication skills.

Sample 8:

The alteration in family structures and roles leads to numerous consequences in society. However, the changes are not always for the better, which will be analyzed in this essay.

The size and task division in families have shifted with smaller households and more power for women. Indeed, nuclear families are a prevalent choice for many, or even they want to have double income and no kids. More peculiarly, people may decide to live without registering their marriages, and young ladies even decide to be single moms. As regards changes in the familial roles, the society has witnessed more women rising up to be breadwinners for their own homes, pushing more husbands to the jobs once done by housewives like doing household chores, and caring for children.

Those drastic changes in the family configuration have led to both positive and negative corollaries. On the bright side, when people do not live in extended families, they escape from the duties, interferences of family members into their decisions. Their more freedom is also fortified by more privacy people have in their own rooms and houses, and fewer shared facilities. Besides, their reduced involvement into other family members' business saves them more time to focus on developing their own lives and futures. Nonetheless, with more independence, women find it easier to break their marriages, which leads to a rise in the divorce rate. In addition, love and care for the elderly may be lessened when everyone has their own house, fiddling with their own business, so they may toss the ball of responsibility among each other and leave their parents abandoned.

In conclusion, smaller families and more independence for women have benefited people in some aspects but also harmed them in others. However, if people are well aware of the reasons behind the negative, I believe, these family changes will yield more positive aftermaths.

Sample 9:

In the past few decades, the patterns of a family have greatly diversified. There are some changes regarding its organization and members’ role; and in my opinion, these changes can be seen as a progress.

Families at present have undergone two main differences compared to the past. First, the structure of a nuclear family now can have more than one breadwinner, who normally is the father. This is because in the modern world, only a few jobs could secure the stability of single-earner families, which forces both parents to be the financial supporters. Second, the trend that parents exchange their roles has become more common. As the result of women’s protest for their rights, mothers now have equal opportunities for education and work, which allows the other spouse to assume responsibility as a stay-at-home parent to take care of the children and the housework.

From my perspective, those changes in the family’s structure and parental roles are positive for a number of reasons. That both parents can become the breadwinners would ensure thestable finance of a family, which not only directly eases the burden that the father have to bear in order to support the whole family but also enables the mother to pursue her dream job. From another angle, it is an upward step that people are at liberty to do what they like and what they are good at. Women can follow their dream and stabilize her family financial status if they are better at work than their husbands.

In conclusion, I think the changes occurring to a family’s hierarchy and members’ responsibilities are a positive step toward a better world.

Sample 10:

It is clear the picture of what a family looks like has transformed over the past few decades and families are now generally more fragmented. Some would say that couples parting ways is understandable as they are just not meant to be together, however others feel this could adversely affect a strong family bond.

Indeed, we should not only consider one country when looking at the family dynamic. In some cases, a couple may not have a choice as to exactly how many children they wish to have. For example, in times of overpopulation in China, the government has stipulated that parents must only produce one child. Furthermore, in western society, many social issues possibly stemming from inadequate education, poverty and drug and/or alcohol abuse, have resulted in the breakdown of the family unit. Therefore, today, single parents must fend for themselves to look after loved ones, without the moral or financial support from a partner who may have no involvement or simply does not care.

The question arises as to whether a different outlook for families poses threats or benefits. It is likely that Chinese people feel aggrieved when they cannot plan their family just how they want it. Nevertheless, from their government’s standpoint it is clear that balancing the economy is a chief concern to ensure there is not an undersupply of jobs. Also, while single parents may find looking after their children a challenge, it could be argued that it will make them stronger and more independent. Consequently, these traits might brush off on their offspring.

In summary, it is clear that broken families are likely due to various (mostly) uncontrollable governmental and social factors. That said, I personally believe that a weakened family unit could lead to wider issues to the detriment of society.

Sample 11:

In the present context, it is obvious that the families are much different in terms of their structure and gender roles in a family unit as opposed to a family a few decades back. Families today are very small in size since single parenting is not uncommon. In addition, the roles of parents have changed drastically. Moreover, marriages among same sex are legalized in many countries in the world now. In my opinion, most of these changes have a positive impact on the family itself and society. Relevant factors regarding this topic will be further elaborated in this essay with examples.

To begin with, family is the backbone of society or in other words family is a reflection of society. When it comes to roles among family members, in most families, both parents support the economical stability of the family and they both share the responsibility of the children. If we consider a family a few decades back, the situation was rather different. For instance, women were supposed to look after the children while men were supposed to take care of financial stability. It is needless to say that this has completely changed by today. From my perspective, this is a positive tendency since family and children are well supported by both parents.

In addition, when it comes to the structure of the family today, same-sex marriages, as well as single parenting, can be seen in many parts of the world. From my point of view, this is a positive trend since having different sexual preferences as opposed to conventional opposite-sex marriages is no longer a reason to be discriminated against.

In conclusion, families play an important role in society. Families have been changed a lot over the last few years in various aspects as aforementioned. As per my view, this can be considered as a positive development of the society.

Sample 12:

In recent times, there has been a number of changes within the structure of families, and the roles that family members play. This essay will discuss those changes, and the impacts these trends are having on families.

Firstly, in a lot of countries, many people are now choosing to live in a nuclear family structure, where only parents and children live together, and grandparents live separately. In the past, however, it was quite common in many countries for three, or even four generations of a family to all live under one roof. There has also been a shift in the roles that various family members play. For example, in the past, it was commonplace for men to have to work to provide for their families, and women to stay at home to cook, clean, and raise the children. However, many women nowadays are choosing to work instead, while some fathers stay at home to help out with family and household duties.

These changes can bring about both positive and negative effects. Nuclear family structures allow more freedom to parents who no longer want to live in their hometown, in order to pursue their careers. Many people need to live in large cities these days to find work, however many older, retired people want to remain living in their hometown. Though, one disadvantage of the nuclear family is that grandparents may not be available to help raise and care for grandchildren. In terms of the changing roles, women have greatly benefited from the opportunity to pursue a career, and become the breadwinner of the family, instead of being housewife. One downside of this trend though might be that some people would argue that women are better at domestic duties than stay-at-home dads.

In conclusion, I believe there are both positive and negative effects from these changes, though the impacts on each individual family will be different.

Sample 13:

Until a few decades ago, men were the providers and women were the caregivers. Men would go out to work and earn money. Women would stay at home looking after children and cooking food. This arrangement is disappearing, and, in my opinion, it is a positive trend.

In many families, now both spouses work and earn money. This is particularly true in developed and developing nations. This trend has changed the structure of families and the role of family members. Men are no longer seen as the only breadwinners. In some families, women earn more than men do. They deserve equal treatment.

Working women expect their partners to share the household responsibilities with them. They want their husbands to help them with the kids and housework. Most men are willing to lend a helping hand. Many of them never saw their dads doing the dishes or dusting the furniture, but now they do it happily because their women are also busy with their careers.

As more and more women become financially independent, the role of family members will change. Modern women have carved a niche for themselves in almost every sector. They now work and earn. Naturally, they deserve equal treatment and respect. Men who still have age-old notions of male supremacy may find it difficult to come to terms with the change of roles. However, those who think practically have certainly changed their attitudes and support their women in their careers and at home.

To conclude, women’s empowerment is the reason behind this change in the structure of families. Women no longer want to confine themselves to the four walls of their home. As they have started working outside, traditional definitions of husbands and wives have changed. Men are no longer the only breadwinners and women are no longer the only caregivers. In my opinion, this is a positive trend that has the potential to make our world a better place where both men and women command equal respect.

Sample 14:

Recently, there has been a gradual transformation in the household structure and the way each member makes a contribution to the family. In this essay, I would like to discuss several possible changes and demonstrate that those changes are totally beneficial.

To begin with, the way a family is organized is far different from that in the past. Firstly, men and women are now sharing the role of breadwinners. A few decades ago, fathers were those who earned money to raise the family, while nurturing progeny was the responsibility shouldered by mothers. Today, as a logical effect of gender equality, professional opportunities are available for people of both sexes, leading to the fact that both men and women should exert effort to make ends meet. Secondly, people now have an inclination to form nuclear families. The escalating competitiveness of the job market accompanied by the higher demands of living standards drives people to work overtime and have fewer children.

From my perspective, the aforementioned changes are totally advantageous. The first benefit is that the financial pressure that parents of medium-sized families have to burden is far less significant than that of large families. This allows them to save money for long-term purposes, such as affording a house or sending their children overseas for tertiary education. Another significant advantage is that the children of such busy parents can learn how to live independently and acquire a diverse mixture of qualities at a young age. For example, many youths today have to prepare meals and arrange the study schedules themselves, which helps to sharpen up their self-reliance.

In conclusion, I would like to reaffirm my position that the household structure and the role of each family member are altering in a positive way.

Sample 15:

True, the family structure has altered significantly in recent years, and the changing responsibilities of men and women in the family have grown increasingly comparable. There are various different types of family structures, and these advances are not necessarily good, in my opinion.

Nuclear households, in which parents and their children lived together under one roof, were common in the past. However, because more marriages end in divorce, there is now a strong tendency toward single-parent families, while the rise in cohabiting couple families and stepfamilies is likely attributable to cohabitation and remarriage being much more acceptable.

In many regions of the world, the family patterns and functions of each family member have changed dramatically during the previous several decades. Personally, I believe that the benefits of these developments outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, the structure of a modern family may differ from that of previous generations. Large, extended families, which were once common, have been replaced by smaller, nuclear families. In other words, people today do not live in the same house as their distant relatives or grandparents did 50 years ago. Instead, parents want to spend more time alone with their children while occasionally catching up with family. In addition, the roles that parents play in their households have changed during the previous century. While in the past, males were the breadwinners, today's families benefit from financial assistance from both working parents, implying that females have an equal role to play in assisting their families and in the job market.

These adjustments, on the other hand, have positive consequences for both the family and society. To begin with, the increase of nuclear family groups may relieve them of the burden of supporting other family members besides their child. This allows them to concentrate more on growing and raising their children. In terms of parental duties, this helps to liberate women from the role of solely being stay-at-home moms and allows them to pursue their own occupations. As a result, society will benefit from increased contributions and talents from the weaker sex, as well as improved gender equality.

Finally, the rise of widely dispersed families and women's rising participation in the workplace have benefited families and women in particular.

Sample 16:

It is true that not only the family structure but also the functions of the family have changed dramatically. These adjustments, in my opinion, should be viewed as a positive trend.

To begin with, many people in many countries are opting for a nuclear family structure, in which only parents and children live together while grandparents live separately. In the past, however, it was usual for three or even four generations of a family to live under the same roof in many countries. In addition, the duties that various family members play have shifted.

To begin with, the structure of a family nowadays differs significantly from that of previous generations. When multiple generations, including children, parents, and grandparents, lived under the same roof in the past, extended families were more common. In contrast, today's society is dominated by nuclear families, which consist solely of parents and their children. In terms of parental roles, in the past, men and women were expected to be breadwinners and homemakers, respectively, since fathers were expected to work outside the home while moms were expected to stay at home and care for their children. However, both men and women now work to support their families, and home chores are frequently shared.

These improvements, in my opinion, would have a positive impact on family life. For starters, when there are fewer generations living together, people appear to have more freedom and privacy to do whatever they want without bothering other family members. For example, in extended families, children who enjoy pop music may be forced to stop listening because their grandparents may find it irritating and boisterous. Furthermore, pursuing their own careers can help women become financially independent of males, as well as providing families with an additional source of money to help them live comfortably. Another advantage of husbands assisting their wives with home duties is that women will be relieved of the strain of housework and will have more time to spend on recreational activities.

To sum up, I believe that various changes in family structure and member roles, such as the increasing replacement of extended families by nuclear families and the equitable sharing of household responsibilities, are positive developments.

Sample 17:

In today's society, changes in family structure and roles have become a major source of concern. Before determining if this is a positive or negative trend, some of the most significant changes will be highlighted.

A family, also known as the society's cell, has always changed as a result of life's regular affections, resulting in numerous differences in the structure and roles of members compared to the past in order to adapt to the current environment. Based on my perspective, I strongly believe that these familial adjustments are beneficial.

Families have undergone some significant transformations in recent years. The most noticeable is the shrinking average family size in society. In Vietnam, for example, the bulk of extended families with three generations or more living under one roof have been reduced to nuclear families consisting solely of parents and children. Furthermore, there has been a substantial shift in the responsibilities of the father and mother in the family. Males' responsibilities as the family's only earner have been shared with their partners, and women now have equal employment options as their male counterparts. As a result, household responsibilities are split evenly between the sexes.

The first advantage is that the financial strain on parents of medium-sized families is far less than that on parents of large families. This enables them to save money for long-term goals such as buying a house or sending their children to a university abroad. This new family structure, in my opinion, is unquestionably beneficial to all families. Each family member may benefit from a greater sense of freedom as a result of the lower family size. Parents, for example, now have more time for themselves than they did in the past when they had to care for both grandparents and children. In terms of changing family responsibilities, women may gain from having their own work and hence financial independence. Men benefit from this development as well, as they are no longer under the financial strain of being the family's sole source of income. The aforementioned adjustments, in my opinion, are beneficial.

To summarise, the most noticeable changes in today's households are smaller family sizes and men and women sharing financial and domestic responsibilities. All of the evidence suggests that these modifications will benefit all members of the family.

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Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to show imported foreign film and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sample 1:

There has been a difference of opinion regarding the merits of foreign movies and TV channels to the culture of a country as people believe domestic products would be better. From my perspective, both of those categories are equally important.

On the one hand, people usually believe foreign films and TV telecasts can contribute to the cultural diversity of a nation. Fascinating social norms and practices, such as public hugging, which is common in the US, can follow the wave to other nations as Hollywood blockbusters are becoming more popular. This phenomenon is believed to benefit the richness of the host country’s traditional backgrounds. Moreover, the import of international movies and TV shows could perfect the flaws of the country’s sets of beliefs. In Vietnam, for example, the ceremony of funerals is often perpetuated with ongoing depraved customs such as gambling and drinking. Since the arrival of TV shows from more developed nations, which triggers a new and civilized way of thinking, such practices have been gradually aborted.

On the other hand, it appears to me that producing local movies and TV programs has the same importance. Citizens of a country would be able to acquire knowledge about their own culture. Apparently, profound insights of traditional values can be vividly conveyed in cinemas and on the media if the content is made by local people. The second point to be considered is that this way can relieve the worry of cultural assimilation which has emerged as a detriment to the existence of a country’s traditional beliefs and customs. In fact, if exotic practices are absorded thoughtlessly, it might lead to the oblivion of the long-standing ethics, which emphasizes the necessity for domestic products.

In conclusion, I would argue that both types of films and TV telecasts play an equal role in a country’s culture.

Sample 2:

In the era of globalization, plenty of foreign movies and TV programs enjoy a high level of popularity around the world. Some people argue that this brings many benefits to the local culture. Others, however, assert that the development of domestic films and TV programs ought to be prioritized.

Importing foreign movies or TV programs has many advantages. The one that attracts the most publicity is that this improves people's awareness of diversified cultures. For example, many young people in China understand American customs and lifestyles by watching Friends. Consequently, they might eliminate prejudice when adjusting to unfamiliar cultures. Besides, local filmmakers and program producers have the chance of approaching new perspectives and technical expertise, such as high-quality scripts and first-rate special effects. Therefore, more local films are inclined to compete and demonstrate on an international stage, attracting audiences and spreading domestic cultures all over the world.

However, reliance on domestic films can contribute substantially to the cultural development of a nation. A compelling reason is that local TV programs tend to be culturally embedded, which in turn promote the development of domestic tourism. For instance, "Where Are We Going, Dad?", one of the most popular Chinese TV shows, resulted in a great number of tourists from home and abroad exploring historical attractions where they were televised. Furthermore, governments could maintain and preserve their typical values. By watching nationally produced films and TV programs, people would develop a sense of belonging to its culture, such as cooking traditional cuisines and attending national festivals.

In my opinion, although introducing foreign films and TV programs is beneficial to a country's culture, domestic ones which enhance and encourage local cultural values should be highly supported.

Sample 3:

People have different views about whether it is better for a country to purchase foreign movies or to create domestic ones. While importing movies from other countries can have some advantages, I would argue that producing local movies is a better option.

On the one hand, there are some clear benefits to buying movies from other countries. Firstly, when a country imports movies produced overseas, it can help its people learn about other cultures in a much easier and more effective way. This would help its citizens to be more knowledgeable. Secondly, individuals can learn the good things of other more civilised societies and alter their behaviour. For example, the habit of queuing is a nice thing in many Western countries, and people from Vietnam can learn and copy this action when watching foreign movies.

On the other hand, I believe it is better for countries to produce movies domestically for a number of reasons. The first one is that movies made by local people would help preserve the traditions and customs of their own cultures. For instance, many Vietnamese TV programmes remind young generations how people celebrate Lunar New Year, which is the most important public holiday in some Asian countries. If young people only watch foreign movies, traditional values might be gradually forgotten. Another reason is that the film industry often creates jobs such as actors, directors, and cameramen. Therefore, it is necessary to invest in producing movies in order to provide more employment opportunities for local people.

In conclusion, while purchasing foreign movies is beneficial for a nation’s culture to some extent, it seems to me that making local ones is a much better choice.

Sample 4:

For the past decades, the importance of a country developing its own motion picture expertise versus importing foreign entertainment programs has been the center of attention in the entertainment industry. I believe that having the best of both worlds would work most effectively.

There are certain grounds supporting the view of featuring foreign films and TV shows. Firstly, globalization supports the widespread of cultural products that integrate within themselves the essence of the nation from which they originate. Viewers, therefore, while enjoying the entertaining element of these programs can simultaneously learn more about the world and its various cultures. For instance, an Asian viewer can be amazed by the individualism conveyed in western blockbuster movies while an American can explore the significance of collective eastern values from a Chinese or Korean drama. Furthermore, the international trade of these items has not only aided the development of globalized culture but also broadened people’s understanding of the diverse world around them. It is not deemed daring to say that without cultural exchange through TV channels, feeling and learning about other cultures would turn less visually impressive.

On the other hand, it is justifiable, though maybe considered ethnocentric, that domestic entertainment products retain an equally indispensable role in a country’s film segments. The most obvious reason is that the act of a country developing its own movies and broadcasting industry is of necessity to preserve its culture. Through local films and TV shows, children and adolescents develop their cognition of local customs and traditional values and have a tendency to practice them. Another endorsing reason is that domestic films and shows are irreplaceable products that bring people true feelings and complete understanding of contexts and clichés used. Since people can more easily relate themselves to others who speak their language and whose behavior they could totally understand, viewers can reflect themselves and their society in a lively way through local TV programs.

In conclusion, I believe it is crucial for a country to find a balanced coexistence of both ways, not only advancing towards globalization but also preserving one’s unique film and TV industry.

Sample 5:

It is true that some people favour importing movies and TV shows from overseas, rather than attempting to produce these within their own country. While many people consider that such imports make a valuable contribution to national culture, I would argue that it is necessary to promote a local entertainment industry.

On the one hand, local movies and TV programmes benefit national culture in two important ways. From an educational perspective, the young can learn about their country’s past, stimulating their interest and national pride. For instance, instead of studying history from boring textbooks, students nowadays are able to learn about their nation’s history by watching locally-made documentaries or movies. From an entertainment perspective, local TV shows and films are relevant to everyday experiences and a familiar way of life. Even when copyright ideas from other countries are used, local producers can adapt these to make shows such as a Vietnamese version of The Voice or The Next Top Model.

On the other hand, international movies and TV programmes can also benefit the cultural life of a country. Firstly, people are able to understand something of the life and culture of other countries, which they can simply enjoy as entertainment or adventure. The American film ‘Titanic’ for example, is not only a disaster movie, but also gives an idea about the history of emigration from Europe to the USA. Secondly, foreign movies and TV shows help many people to improve their language skills, combining learning and enjoyment. Many Vietnamese students, for example, have benefited from watching TV series such as Friends.

In conclusion, although international movies and TV programmes contribute to the diversity of a country’s culture, it seems to me that local film and TV industries should also be supported owing to their roles as education and entertainment providers.

Sample 6:

In modern times with fast development in technology and our lifestyle, finding a space for entertainment is very crucial. In the entertainment world, a topic is more prevalent than whether it is beneficial to view foreign films or not. Many view foreign films as a great source of entertainment as well as a source of knowing different cultures of the world. Whereas many believe that watching foreign films can deteriorate the culture of one’s country. To conclude it is important to light the arguments presented by both sides.

To begin with, looking at the advantages of foreign films, these films can benefit in many ways. Watching foreign films gives an insight into the various cultures and traditions which we are unaware of. The youngster can gain a foison of knowledge regarding the language and culture of a particular country. Moreover, watching a foreign film can prove to be a productive task. For example, watching technology related movies can enhance the knowledge regarding the present technology trends.

On the contrary, many still believe that allowing watching foreign films can beget many demerits to an individual as well as to a country as a whole. Let’s have a glance at these demerits. Many believe that watching these movies affects the youngsters’ minds. And casts an influence on the culture and convention of society or a particular community. Foreign movies can change the thought process of youngsters in myriad ways leading to distraction from the appropriate path of their life. Moreover, many foreign films depict certain things which are not considered appropriate for certain groups of people.

Thus, to conclude I would state that it wholly depends on an individual. Whether to grasp the valuable knowledge from the overseas films or just to get influenced by the foreign movies and try to imitate their style and culture.

Sample 7:

The ongoing highly debated topic regarding releasing foreign films in different countries is attracting myriad opinions to ponder upon. Releasing a foreign movie in another country is garnering numerous opinions which are worth reflecting on. There is a divide of opinion regarding whether a country should allow the release of foreign movies in its own company. Before drawing any conclusion, it is important to know the opinions of two different sides.

Firstly, let’s look at the advantages of watching foreign movies. To begin with, foreign movies can be a great source of information regarding various historical events that occurred in the world. Many historical and political movies can brief an individual with the various historical events and various political movements like about the world wars. Secondly, foreign movies are a great source of movies and have a lot of creative content to exhibit. Some foreign movies are extraordinary in their content and story. And thus, the audiences are taken aback with awe and astonishment while watching the foreign movies.

There are still many people who believe that foreign movies can affect a country in many ways. Firstly, foreign movies can highly affect the performance of the local entertainment industry. And thus, can discourage them leaving them with no progress in their domain. Facing a stiff competition from foreign films and the liking of foreign films can affect the performance of the local actors in myriad ways. Moreover, foreign films leave an indelible impression on the minds of the youngsters. The youth of the particular country can get influenced. To such an extent that they even try to imitate the foreign culture, abandoning their own culture and tradition.

To crown it all, the influence of foreign films varies from person to person. It solely hinges on the individual whether to garner the valuable things from the foreign films or to just merely watch them for entertainment purposes.

Sample 8:

Watching foreign films is a great source of entertainment for many. But for many foreign films can beget unsought consequences in the form of “influence”. Foreign films depict both merits and demerits to a great extent. According to me, the influence varies from person to person.

Before building the opinion regarding the boon or bane of foreign films it is crucial to know the ideas of two different sides.

To begin with, foreign films can enlighten an individual in various branches of language and culture. Foreign films can be a great source of information regarding Various historical events which the young generation has never witnessed. Secondly, foreign films watching foreign films can help us to know about various unique cultures of different countries which were latent to us. One can get to know about the culture of western countries. It provides knowledge to youngsters who are interested in studying abroad. Many major trends come from foriegn films.

Talking about the demerits, the major demerit of watching foreign films is that they have a great impact. On the minds of youngsters as well as on the culture of one’s country. The youth of a country can be highly influenced by the culture and living styles of the foreign culture. While it can be a medium of knowledge youngsters try to copy everything they see. It results in deterioration of one’s own culture. This might be impactful towards rich traditions and culture of native countries. Also, one can get influenced by negative scenes of movies. This results in bad behavior or using abusive words. Foreign films and their culture depict a different ideology behind their language. It might be cool to use abusive words in films, but it impacts negatively in real lives. While youngsters can learn negative things they can also learn positive things.

Thus, to conclude the influence of foreign films depends on the different cultures.

Sample 9:

Audiences worldwide have now opened up to viewing local as well as foreign entertainment media. While some people are appreciating this awareness of other cultures, others feel the local entertainment market should be promoted more. Both these views shall be discussed further.

When a country telecasts films and TV shows of a foreign origin, it opens up the vistas for understanding and accepting certain, if not all, aspects of that culture. Generally, the content of foreign media is quite different from one's local entertainment options, and this ignites considerable amount of curiosity among the people. It is commonly observed that teenagers are more inclined towards foreign movies and TV shows and form a huge fan base for such programs. This depicts the broad mindedness and willingness to know and learn about the mannerisms and tastes of foreign countries which is the crux of harmonious globalization.

The people who feel that the local entertainment industry should be promoted, might feel so, as it has been seen that in some countries, their own local movies are not appreciated much, maybe due to lack in quality of entertainment. This dominance of foreign movies and TV shows discourages the local artists to make more films. Such kind of a situation also might provoke some people to think that the emergence of foreign media is harming their own culture and industry, thereby giving rise to a negative attitude and close-mindedness towards foreign movies and TV shows.

I'd like to conclude by saying that local films and TV shows also should be acknowledged as much as the foreign entertainment. Watching foreign media logically doesn't harm or repress one's local culture in any way, it only encourages a good-spirited amalgamation of particular features of the other lesser-known culture.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

The role of one government to support citizens of other countries has been a major topic of concern in today’s society. From my perspective, this practice is feasible, and there are compelling reasons why governments should help people in the global community rather than only focusing on the citizens of their own countries.

In this context of globalisation and international integration, the provision of assistance for peoples of all countries in the world is not an impossible task anymore. One explanation for this is that modern means of transport have transformed the way that international assistance could be given, and now assistance could reach even the most remote places on Earth. For example, thousands of victims of a deadly earthquake in a mountainous city in Nepal were rescued by US and German military helicopters in 2014. One further explanation is that thanks to international banking, the international community could offer a helping hand to any country where the financial system is on the verge of collapse. An excellent example of this is that the saving money of millions of taxpayers and pensioners in Greece was saved by a timely act of the European Commission of injecting a huge amount of bailout money into Greek banks in 2009.

I strongly believe any government must assume the responsibility of helping citizens in other countries. This is mainly because assisting inhabitants in other countries, to some extent, is synonymous to assisting people in the home country. In 2014, hundreds of US and UK doctors and nurses were sent to African countries to cope with the outbreak of Ebola, a dreadful plague, which had killed many thousands by that time. This action prevented the plague from further spreading to other nations, including the US and the UK themselves, considering that there was a free movement of people between countries and there were millions of African migrant workers in the US and the UK at that time. Besides, the act of supporting people all around the world may promote a sense of humanity, which is essential to the sustainable development of the world, because humanity is the foundation of peace and stability.

To conclude, governments must assist citizens of other countries for a clear reason that this feasible act could simultaneously enhance a global sense of humanity and assure their own nationals of a proper living environment.

Sample 2:

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.

At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries, the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.

In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.

Sample 3:

In this economic-driven world, some think it is impossible to help all people in the world, so countries should focus on helping their people first. I disagree with this view because many individuals and organisations contribute significantly to the betterment of the people all over the world. Even top companies, celebrities and millionaires are supporting people through various means. One such example is donating crores to ensure school education in Africa. 

Improving access to knowledge and education strengthens young people’s capacity to act as agents of change in future. According to the 2023 Global Hunger Index recommendations, governments must invest in and support diversified rural economies, improve employment conditions and plan a comprehensive food system to alleviate people's hunger and malnutrition. Similarly, the Human Development Index 2023-24 report suggests planetary public goods for climate stability to battle the Anthropocene and embrace new technologies for equitable human development. 

Since 2023 has witnessed extreme weather and climatic conditions affecting middle and low-income people, the United Nations, neighbouring countries and friendly nations have provided humanitarian aid to survivors all over the world. On the other hand, OECD member countries supply medical aid to victims of war, especially in the Middle East. 

Therefore, I disagree with the idea that governments must only focus on their own countries rather than the whole world. Helping all people is nothing but a moral obligation to all countries. Subsequently, it mutually benefits everyone. I hope governments will recognise that global cooperation is the need of the hour. They must work together on common terms and provide sustainable solutions long-term.

Sample 4:

It is merely impossible to help all human beings in the world, so countries should only focus on their citizens first. This idea reflects narrow-mindedness and a lack of empathy. So I disagree with this idea as it leads to regionalism, discrimination and unrest in society. 

Firstly, developed countries like the USA, UK, Japan, etc must provide aid to third-world countries as they suffer from political instability, huge poverty, and high mortality rates. According to the IMF, richer nations can assist poorer countries by gathering their resources, initiating their own bilateral development programs, and funding the work of the IMF, World Bank and other multilateral agencies. Moreover, the IMF continues to work with all partners to ensure economic and financial stability in poorer countries.

A classic example of helping all people in the world is Covid-19 pandemic aid. Many countries rapidly scaled up emergency financial assistance and programs with new commitments reaching almost $9 million people in 2020 alone. In post-pandemic, when countries open up to trade, they mostly benefit because they can sell more and buy more. Since the Covid-29 lockdown has triggered an economic collapse, trading has become a lifesaver for all people. Trade is not about charity; it is about providing developing countries with the necessary tools to achieve their development goals.

Overall, it is possible to help all people in the world, if there is the right perspective, strategy, and above all empathy. In a way, it promotes peace and harmony between nations. So governments should start helping everyone in the world, irrespective of their nationality, religion and age. 

Sample 5:

Everybody says that it is impossible to help all people in the world, so all presidents must only focus on their citizens first. I strongly agree with this statement because if each country helps their own people, automatically all people in the world would be benefitted. It sounds fair and not discriminating against any community or social group. People are the backbone of a country. If the government doesn’t help them, other countries can’t. 

Achieving self-help and economic independence is a long-term goal. It can be achieved through meticulous planning, building strategies, and good implementation. If the government is serious about helping their people first, they will lay a strong foundation first. The government would eradicate poverty, provide equal access to education and employment, and curb crime from society. 

Let’s take India. With a population of over 1.4 billion people, India is the world’s largest democracy. However, inequality persists across all sectors of society. Child malnutrition has remained high. India’s growing aspiration to achieve developed countries status by 2050 requires a climate-resilient growth process that comes with broad-based gains to the majority of the population. If the government starts focusing only on their people and addresses these critical issues, it would benefit a majority of the world population. 

From the above, it is clear that fully supporting their own people is a challenge for countries, given the vast population and limited resources. So they should work on their own people and develop their economy slowly and steadily. It promises a bright future and eventually helps all people in the world.

Sample 6:

Many people believe that governments should only support their own inhabitants and not assist residents from other countries. While it is true that the government must prioritise its own citizens, I believe it is also possible to provide assistance to others around the world.

To begin, there are several reasons why governments should assist citizens in their own countries. To begin, because there are an increasing number of homeless persons in local communities, such as people who do not have their own homes and live under bridges or metro stations, authorities should prioritise assisting impoverished people who cannot afford shelters. The government, for example, may provide public housing and free meals. Second, as a result of the transitional economy, the unemployment rate has skyrocketed.

For example, in Vietnam, the labor-intensive economy has evolved into a knowledge-based economy requiring a large number of educated workers. As a result, policymakers must prioritise the issue of unemployment. Governments, for example, might provide employment training to unemployed people. This may help to minimise the number of unemployed persons.

However, I believe that we can also assist civilians from other regions of the world. First, because there are many undeveloped countries with low living standards, such as Haiti and Ethiopia, governments in wealthier countries must assist these poorer countries. This could assist them in overcoming adversity. For example, when individuals in African countries die of curable diseases, wealthy countries might give drugs and provide medical assistance. Furthermore, diplomacy is critical to economic development. Japan, for example, typically provides untied loans to several developing countries. This could strengthen diplomatic relations between states and ensure countries' long-term development. In conclusion, while governments can aid their population, I believe it is equally feasible to help individuals all around the world.

Sample 7:

Countries are classified into three types: developed, developing, and underdeveloped. So the governments in the countries I listed provide a different type of welfare benefit to their citizens. I feel that such affluent countries have the ability to assist countries that are experiencing challenges, but they cannot assist all people on the planet. As a result, I agree that governments should prioritise residents in their own countries before attempting to assist other countries, as described in the following paragraph of this article.

Nowadays, technology has advanced to the point that many things are faster and easier than they were in the past. As a result, the effect of this development has been felt by all countries throughout the world, and it is the responsibility of governments to increase domestic money circulation. Because in today's world, people can utilise their money anywhere and at any time. For example, we can buy an ebook from an online store or conduct numerous financial activities without having to go to the bank.

On the other side, in the present, countries that lack authority, whether developed or emerging, are unable to reap the greatest benefits from technology. As a result, some countries face challenges that their governments are unable to address. People, for example, did not receive assistance when a natural disaster struck, and governments did not provide compulsory education for their inhabitants. As a result, some developing countries must seek assistance from other countries.

To summarise, I agree that the government should prioritise its people, but if their people have a decent quality of life, they can come to aid other countries in need. So, while we can assist others by collaborating with other governments or countries, it is impossible to assist everyone on the planet.

Sample 8:

The subject of nations attempting to provide overseas aid has recently captured the public's attention. Many people say that it is difficult to support all of the world's citizens, and that countries should prioritise domestic happiness over foreign aid to other societies. Although I agree that it is hard to assist all of the world's residents, I believe that governments should focus primarily on local concerns. In this essay, I shall elaborate on my point of view.

On the one hand, the world's governments' reluctance to provide international help to underdeveloped regions is understandable. It is unrealistic to expect government assistance to reach all of the impoverished because their numbers are large and they exist in different parts of the world. Furthermore, communities have a wide range of demands, which can create a slew of problems when it comes to assisting them. Due to poor transportation and extreme weather conditions, developed communities, for example, may face several challenges while sending food and medical aid to destitute regions in Africa. Because of such concerns, governments spend money to help other countries while struggling to care for their own citizens due to local budgetary constraints. In other words, leaders should prioritise the well-being of their citizens before spending large sums of money on global assistance, which could have a significant impact on their economy.

Officials, on the other hand, should assist as many societies as possible, regardless of the notion of assisting all people on the earth. Rich countries should help poor countries in critical humanitarian sectors such as health, nutrition, and education. Nations such as Yemen, which face the domestic threat of famine or contagions caused by war and terrorism, should get assistance from wealthy communities. This humanitarian cause of help will have a significant psychological impact on residents of both rich and impoverished areas. This is evident as they discourage any sense of alienation, fragmentation, or loss in favour of the enjoyment of charity and belonging to the global public. As a result, assisting people overseas not only assists the poor in living properly, but it also promotes the idea of self-devotion and belonging to achieve a better world among wealthy audiences.

Finally, I believe that world leaders should provide a helping hand to their struggling neighbours in order to support those in need. In addition to achieving political rivalry among nations, governments should provide their citizens' domestic needs and assist others in promoting good humanitarian ties.

Sample 9:

It is an undeniable fact that helping all individuals around the globe is not possible at all. Although I agree that governments should focus on people in their nations, I also believe that some poor countries do not have enough money to meet their basic needs, so other nations should support them.

For a variety of reasons, some people assert that the government should help people in their own country. The principal reason is that it is the responsibility of higher authorities to make the citizens of their own country satisfied. To explain it, individuals elect the higher authorities because they need support. That is why the important role of government is to fulfill the basic needs of people and provide them with better facilities. Moreover, billions of people live in the world. So, it is impossible to help them all. As a result, the world is divided into countries, and every nation has its own government, which makes a lot of effort to provide facilities to individuals, such as schools, hospitals, banks, etcetera.

On the other hand, rich nations should also help undeveloped countries. The predominant reason is due to national calamities and other technical problems. Some countries become poorer, and they do not have enough money to fulfill the basic needs of their individuals. So, at that time, other nations should support them not only financially but also they can provide food to them. Apart from this, in this modern era, some nations are also there which are undeveloped. So, developed countries should help them in the construction of schools, colleges, and hospitals. Due to this, the children of poor countries get a better education to become successful in the future.

To conclude, I opine that it is impossible to support all individuals around the globe. I also assert that rich nations should help undeveloped countries by giving them sufficient money and food.

Sample 10:

The question of whether governments should provide aid internationally or domestically has drawn much attention from the public. Although I understand why helping everyone in the world is unachieveable, I strongly disagree that governmental support should solely be concentrated on satisfying local needs.

On the one hand, I suppose the world’s leaders’ hesitation over the provision of international aids to deprived regions is legitimate. Firstly, it is unfeasible for governments’ support to reach all of the underprivileged as their number is enormous in many separated places around the globe and the type of support they need also varies. For example, developed nations may encounter numerous obstacles in terms of transportation upon sending food and medicines to unwealthy regions scattered around Africa where people are facing the threat of famine or contagions. Secondly, I believe leaders of a country should prioritize the well-being of their citizens and stabilize their economy and politics before carrying out any acts of global assistance.

On the other hand, I still believe governments should help as many people as they can regardless of the fragile odds for worldwide comprehensive support for all people. To begin with, in many underdeveloped countries, their leaders are unable to bear the burden of eradicating domestic poverty or crises due to, for example, terrorism, which calls for the involvement from other affluent nations. Also of great significance is that this national act of charity could have a huge impact upon individuals living in prosperous areas. If the government takes actions to help people overseas, citizens of that country will idolize the idea of self-devotion toward a better world.

In conclusion, I truly believe the world leaders should lend their neighbors a hand to offer help to people in need on their doorstep.

Sample 11:

It has been argued in the past that since it is not possible to help the whole of the world’s population, national governments should only lend their assistance to citizens within their jurisdiction. I only agree with this view, since while I believe that governments can only effectively and legitimately exercise their power over their own population, it would nonetheless be in their interest to support weaker states.

It could be said that governments can only effectively govern in a certain geographical area. If a population is too large, or if jurisdictions overlap, there could be confusion as to which government’s authority applies. This is why countries today try to have clearly defined borders, in order for the government to focus on governing only the people enclosed within it. Further, it would also be cost-inefficient for a government to help other people across their borders - the job might better be left for their national government, who is more attuned to the needs and demands of the citizens.

Nonetheless, it might conversely be argued that some richer countries should still have some responsibility to assist poorer and weaker governments who cannot govern themselves. This could produce goodwill between countries and promote international cooperation. Furthermore, by helping countries that cannot effectively govern, this reduces the possibility that there will be refugees as a result of political instability or war. For instance, the reason why aid is given to developing countries in South America by the United States is to make the countries more stable and to reduce immigration into the latter country.

Overall, I argue that it is true that in most cases, governments should only focus on its people since spreading its resources to other nations would be ineffective and wasteful, it should be said that it can sometimes be in their interest to support those from other countries in order to ensure cooperation and stability.

Sample 12:

Countless people today have recommended that governments should prioritise supporting their own people over donating overseas. I strongly agree with this statement as global involvements generally do more harm than good, and governments get better control regarding national help.

First, foreign help could be a bit difficult for every nation to acquire. Amidst the ones that are facilitated by external relief, a majority of nations either end up misusing the contributions or become overly reliant on them. A good instance of this would be the assistance sent to numerous African countries during times of public chaos. Certain dishonest governments would often control the aid, whether food supplies or financial support, to preserve their autocratic position. Even in the occasional cases where help reaches its planned targets without intrusion from governments or non-governmental organisations, there is a strong probability of establishing a dependency. People usually profit more long-term from developing features related to self-reliance rather than becoming submissive in a dependent relationship.

Furthermore, governments can impact their own population better. There is an array of techniques that these authorities can choose, for example, subsidizing a comprehensive social government assistance net, letting individuals keep a greater amount of their tax money, and more. A good illustration of this would be in China where the public authority has colossal influence over both public and private elements. This guarantees that their help isn’t abused and that it upholds really weak fragments of the populace. Their oversight and information on their own nation means a more productive allotment of assets, and this applies for the most part to governments all around the world.

Although contributing to the global economy periodically is acceptable, it’s better if it does not become a habit.

All in all, governments can mediate most successfully in their own countries. Consequently, unfamiliar assistance ought to be restricted to situations of outrageous emergency.

Sample 13:

Many today have suggested that governments should prioritise supporting their own citizenry over offering foreign aid. I strongly agree with this statement as international interventions often do more harm than good and governments have greater control concerning domestic assistance.

Firstly, foreign aid is notoriously difficult to manage. The majority of countries helped by foreign aid either end up exploiting the charity or become overly dependent. A good example of this would be the aid sent to many African nations during times of civil turmoil. Certain corrupt governments would often leverage the aid, whether it be food supplies or financial support, to maintain their autocratic position. Even in the rare cases where aid reaches its intended targets without interference from governments or non-governmental organisations, there is a strong likelihood of establishing a dependence. Individuals generally profit more long-term from developing characteristics related to self-reliance rather than becoming subservient in a dependent relationship.

Moreover, governments are able to affect greater change over their own populace. There are many different tactics that governments can choose ranging from funding a comprehensive social welfare net to allowing individuals to keep more of their tax dollars and contribute to the economy. A standout example of this would be in China where the government has tremendous sway over both public and private entities. This ensures that their assistance is not misused and that it supports truly vulnerable segments of the population. Their oversight and knowledge of their own country translate to a more efficient allocation of resources, and this applies generally to governments globally.

In conclusion, there is little support for the efficacy of foreign aid and governments can intervene most effectively in their own nations. Therefore, foreign aid should be limited to times of extreme crisis.

Sample 14:

The global scenario is such that on one hand the world is becoming more and more developed and linked due to increase in trade and movement of people between countries. However, billions of people still live in poverty and are in need of help. This essay will look at the arguments for and against helping poor countries.

If we look at reasons for helping poor countries, the first reason can be a humanitarian one. It can be said it is the social duty of industrialized nations to help people in countries who are suffering from famine, drought, war, or disease. Interestingly, many rich countries also have a political or diplomatic agenda behind donating money. They want to maintain a relationship of dependency with the recipient, or simply to influence the government and direction of the country. But the fact is that the developed nations are much less than the nations needing help. The question here arises up to what extent a poor country can be helped.

Many experts opine that aid is not necessarily the best way to help a country. Many a time, billions of dollars of aid often don’t reach the needy, getting seeped off into corrupt governments and inefficient administrations. Also, many foreign aid projects are unsuitable for the target country. There are many examples in economic magazines and newspapers of aid-funded projects in Africa that failed miserably. This kind of situation not only proves to be a setback for the poor countries but also is a blow to the economies of the rich ones.

The statement that it is impossible to help everyone does seem true. However, it is our duty to try and make a difference. There are many other ways in which we can help poor countries. Flexing trade restrictions allowing countries can sell their goods is one way. There is a dire need for basic necessities in such countries, so awareness and facilities for say water, sanitation, hygiene and such should be deployed.

In closing I’d say, even though the richer countries seem prosperous, there is not enough money in the world for everyone. Everybody, rich or poor, needs to make do with what they have, and try to expand the resources appropriately.

Sample 15:

It is argued that supporting masses all over the world, who really need help, is not possible for governments, so the regime should focus on indigenous people of their own native land. I agree with this statement, aa it is the prime responsibility of any government to assist it’s a citizen first then others.

First and foremost, native people pay a tax to the government of their country, and they help in generating income. Thus, their contribution to the development of a country is immense. Moreover, it is a moral obligation for the rulers who rule the country to provide a healthy living standard to its countrymen. So, the upliftment of a nation’s people is an indispensable task for the government. For instance, if developing countries support their people to raise their living conditions like creating employment, free education, reservation for downtrodden in various sectors, then people will flourish, and they can give an utmost contribution in making their country stand on foot and also in the line of developed nations. Afterward, that country can assist a lot of other nations in many ways.

In addition, it is impossible for a single nation to assist people all over the world due to the scarcity of funds. It is a shared responsibility. So, every government is liable to their masses in order to create harmony in the country and for shaping their country in a new world. Besides, there is no use in helping other people by depriving one’s people and making them handicapped to lead a life full of miseries. Thus, people will experience trial and tribulations. So, people must be assisted by their own government.

In conclusion, serving people worldwide in supporting them in times of difficulty is impossible. It is because every government has its own responsibilities for its citizens. If any government fails to do so, then there will be anarchy in a nation, and a feeling of hatred will develop in the minds of people.

Sample 16:

Past few decades, due to globalization, migrating to other places hs been rose and become common. Some people believe that yielding aid to other countries is not possible for the bureaucrats; their priority should have to own the country first. I strongly agree with the given notion my inclination will be justified in the following paragraphs, along with a logical conclusion.

On the one hand, to embarking with, several reasons indicate that giving priority to own people is beneficial. First and foremost, the government helps to penurious people and released funds and provides food and shelter additional, in some stimulating situations such as cyclone, earthquake disaster. Secondly, educating more citizens as much as possible also helps the economy in the future and helps reduce delinquency or crime rates.

On the other hand, we are human, and for humanity, we desire to aid others, especially by giving resources. If the authority succours to another part of the world people, it forges tribulation for own country people and the nation, helping other people around the world, forge unemployed in own nation, and a chance to affect the economy. Apart from it, for critical situation help to other countries also make good relations to other countries. For example, developed countries provide help to poor and underdeveloped countries through food and essential resources, especially in an emergency.

In conclusion, some believe that governments should prioritize helping their own citizens over those of other countries. I agree that authorities should focus on improving the standard of living for their own people before extending aid abroad. However, offering assistance during critical situations can also be valuable for fostering goodwill and demonstrating humanity.

Sample 17:

A significant number of people believe that as long as there are problems in our own society, we should not help people from other countries. I disagree with this approach because I believe we should strive to help as many people as possible.

To commence with, I recognize that it is crucial to help our neighbors and fellow citizens. Most of the communities have people who are somewhat poor or disadvantaged. For instance, you can find homeless people even in the richest cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there is usually an opportunity to donate time or give money to support these people. In India, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in community kitchens. Since problems are on the way and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritize local philanthropy.

Moreover, I believe that we have a responsibility to help those who live outside our national borders. The problems people face in some countries are far more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often easier to help. For example, when children in South African countries are dying from curable diseases, governments and individuals in wealthy nations can save lives simply by paying for pre-existing vaccines. A small donation to an international charity can have a far greater impact than helping in our area.

In conclusion, it is true that we can’t assist everybody, but in my opinion, national boundaries should not stop us from helping the needy.

Sample 18:

Because it is not possible to assist everyone on the planet, it is suggested that governments should limit their efforts to those in their own nations. While it is ideal for one government to take good care of its people, it is also necessary to form connections with other countries. This essay will explain both sides and support them with specific evidence.

On the one hand, a nation’s well-being should be its main concern, as many governments seem to be neglecting their duties and responsibility to their people. Such actions can be recognized through low GDP per capita, high rate of unemployment and homelessness, or high crime rate. These elements, in time, can affect the country’s ability to develop politically and financially, whereas nations that look after their residents thoroughly obtain higher HI (Happiness Index).

On the other hand, a wealthy nation cannot be sustainable in the long term without commercial and goods exchange with others, both of which can only be reached through relations between them. Then, one government bears the duty of supporting another in case of financial and political distress, including supporting its people. 

In general, although helping its own citizens will be beneficial for the country’s well-being, it is also undeniably mandatory to create relations and allies with other countries.

Sample 19:

Whether governments should send out foreign aids or not remains a controversial topic. Although it is sensible for officials in the highest position to put their own people first, they should not cut off these aids altogether.

Prioritizing the need of their own citizens would enhance the standing of the countries as well as the well-being of their citizens. This could be done by dedicating proper attention to optimizing the living conditions within the country’s borders before any forms of aid are extended overseas. Take the U.S, for example. The superpower had to reroute a large part of its funding previously channeled to combat global problems to deal with social problems in their own backyard, which could be partly attributed to the overwhelming pressure from the country’s constituents. It is only natural for these representatives of the people to pressure their governments into delivering on their promises of a prosperous nation, the failure of which is likely to indicate the incompetency of those top government officials in power.

However, exercising restraints on international financial aids is not synonymous with a complete halt, for the latter would be too extreme a measure that is bound to isolate the country from all the diplomatic relations. The act of turning their back on countries that are reaching out for help could stir up ill will. If and when that country finds itself in something along the lines of a financial crisis, it is hardly likely that any other countries will come to its rescue. Moreover, sending out financial packages to help ailing economies could be interpreted as a gesture of goodwill, which in turn improves the country’s global position and international trading. Trade barriers could be lifted, for example, which facilitates economic development for the country and employment opportunities for the people precedence.

All in all, it is a government’s duty to serve and maximize the well-being of its people, and the majority of their resources should be devoted to serving such a cause, yet it is also justifiable for countries to reach out to other countries that are struggling financially for the associated downstream effects.

Sample 20:

In the world of contemporary geopolitics, the discourse around the prioritization of domestic welfare over international humanitarian efforts by governments has emerged as a topic of considerable interest. The claim that governments are incapable of addressing myriad issues persisting in the global community is impossible to deny. However, this essay states that it is incumbent for nations to strike a balance between their domestic responsibilities and international obligations. 

Governments of a country by virtue bear an unequivocal responsibility for their citizens. Elected representatives are entrusted with the task of governance by the people, thereby providing solutions to domestic problems is their primary concern.  Areas such as healthcare, education, infrastructure development, and economic growth require immediate attention due to their direct effect on the quality of life of citizens. A concentrated focus on these areas leads to a robust framework for national development.

Nevertheless, in an era known for unprecedented interconnections, global issues often transcend national boundaries and have huge domestic implications as well. Phenomena such as climate change, pandemics, and international terrorism are not only constrained by geographical boundaries. Accordingly, it is in the best interest of nations to contribute towards mitigating these global challenges. Additionally, nations that have attained a certain degree of prosperity often possess resources that surpass their domestic requirements. By extending assistance to underdeveloped or developing countries, these nations can cultivate diplomatic relationships and foster global stability. This act of extending help should not be misconstrued as mere charity; rather, it should be viewed as an investment in global peace and prosperity that indirectly brings benefits to the contributing nation.

In conclusion, while it is imperative for governments to prioritize their own countries, they must not disregard global issues. Striving for a balance between national priorities and global responsibilities is crucial for the collective betterment of humanity.

Sample 21:

In the modern globalized world, it is contended that governments should prioritize aid to their own citizens and assist them in their overall development rather than focus on extending help to people across the world. I completely agree with this viewpoint since not only is it their prime responsibility but such focused efforts in their own countries will also get better results and it will eventually result in global benefits as well.       

To begin with, it is the fundamental responsibility of every government to safeguard the well-being and interests of its own citizens. To illustrate, during the COVID-19 pandemic, countries that focused on their citizens' health and well-being by implementing strict lockdown measures and vaccine distribution plans were able to protect their populations effectively. Neglecting this duty in favor of global assistance can lead to domestic unrest, which would ultimately hinder the government's ability to provide effective assistance internationally as well. 

Moreover, the resources available to governments are finite and limited. Attempting to assist all people worldwide would lead to a dispersion of resources that could result in inadequate support for domestic issues. For instance, this could have detrimental consequences for essential services such as healthcare, education, and social welfare, which are vital for the well-being and development of citizens. In fact, it is only when a government demonstrates its commitment to its citizens that it can effectively contribute to global efforts to alleviate poverty, conflict, and other global challenges. 

In conclusion, while the world faces many pressing global issues, governments must prioritize their own citizens' welfare because a strong and stable domestic foundation not only benefits the citizens but also enables governments to play a more effective and influential role on the global stage. 

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes? And what will be the effects on society?

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Sample 1:

In several parts of the world, there is currently a lack of students choosing to study science in universities and colleges. This problem happens due to some reasons, and it can have some adverse impacts on society.

There are several reasons why fewer university students are choosing science as their major. Firstly, these subjects are usually more difficult and demanding, which requires students to put much effort into their study. For example, my friend who is doing a course in biology said that he had to conduct too many experiments and complete numerous projects, which prevented him from having any free time. As a result, science subjects seem to be less attractive to students compared to economics or business-related subjects. Secondly, as there are currently fewer employment opportunities available for graduates in science fields, learners are less likely to decide to select these majors. Instead, they tend to choose other subjects which allow them to find jobs more easily.

A shortage of learners in science fields can result in some negative effects. The first impact is that when fewer students decide to learn about science, there would be a serious shortage of employees working in these fields. This would lead to fewer technological developments, which would also prevent improvements in people’s life quality. For instance, it would be difficult for humans to produce newer smart phones with better functions. Additionally, while a significantly increasing number of students are choosing economics and business to study, the number of job vacancies in these areas is limited. Therefore, many university graduates would have to face unemployment, which increases burden on society.

In conclusion, the shortage of students choosing science subjects is caused by several factors, and this problem might bring about serious impacts.

Sample 2:

It is an evident phenomenon in many countries in the world that there is a shortage of students who choose to study science subjects as their major. There are some reasons to justify this trend and it also causes/ triggers adverse/unfavorable effects/impacts on the society.

The first reason why fewer students choose science as their major is that science subjects namely Biological Technology or Computer Science,… are extremely demanding. Generally, a major in science consists of related subjects with a great amount of specialized knowledge and a number of experiments, which can be very tough. As a result/ Consequently, students are often put under pressure a lot of pressure in order to understand and handle the tasks well. Another justification is that graduates may take risks of unemployment as there are fewer job opportunities for graduates in science majors. Instead, students are likely to choose a major that is not so demanding but still makes it easier for them to find a job.

The deficiency in students in science fields might trigger unfavorable effects to the society. The most clearly seen impact might be the imbalance between the number of students who study science and other majors. This may lead to the shortage of workers in scientific fields and also cause a lack/ insufficiency of technical breakthroughs and inventions. Additionally, there may be a crisis of employment due to the disparity in the number of graduates who choose other fields such as business, art or pedagogy and those who study science. More students majoring in science may be made redundant as there are less job opportunities in this area. As a result, this will increase the burden of unemployment on the society.

To conclude, reasons that cause the lack of students choosing science as a major vary, and this issue may bring several negative impacts on the society.

Sample 3:

In many countries these days, there are noticeably fewer students opting to study science subjects, causing a significant concern. This decline stems from several causes, and if left unchecked, it is likely to become a threat to human development.

There are certain explanations for the reduction in science enrolment. The principal cause is, perhaps, an aversion to difficulty among students. Even for typical fields such as mathematics, physics and chemistry, the intellectual rigors required can be staggering, and thus, many students would come to perceive them as arduous and demanding. Besides that, humanities and liberal arts disciplines present students with more comfortable choices. In higher education, business, language, and social studies are usually regarded as less intensive with respect to problem-solving, making them less strenuous overall. Taking these points into consideration, it is understandable that many students would look upon hard science subjects with tepidity and detachment.

This diminished interest likely presents two major threats to progress. A foreseeable impact, firstly, is the shortage of skilled scientists and technological innovators. This deficit would undoubtedly stall research and development, limiting a society's ability to solve complex problems or produce solutions for improving human life. Even more detrimental, however, is that such a lack of interest may disintegrate the complex infrastructural systems that many people seem to take for granted. Without enough technologically-minded workers, future generations will be ill-equipped to take over and maintain crucial infrastructure when its current custodians retire. Incidents such as power outages or plane crashes are avoidable, but will happen more and more in this scenario, throttling productivity and causing catastrophic damage. It could, therefore, be argued that human development will stagnate unless more students engage in the hard sciences.

In conclusion, the declining enrolment in scientific disciplines is a pressing issue. As its causes and consequences are clear, in order to reverse this trend, immediate attention and rectification are needed to induce a change in perception of the sciences.

Sample 4:

It is true that the number of science students are becoming inadequate in different parts of the world nowadays. The essay below will analyze some explanations for this situation as well as its influence on society.

There are two principal factors that contribute to the common disinterest in science subjects. First, those subjects are often challenging and require a lot of diligence as well as a great deal of patience and intelligence. The number of research that an average biology student has to do is more than other subjects with higher level of both difficulty and commitment, which discourages many students from choosing science as their majors. Second, employment opportunities in this particular field are limited and extremely competitive. Although a huge amount of time and effort is spent on science study at school, there is still little chance for them to get a job after graduation.

Society greatly suffers from the scarcity of human resources in science fields. Apparently, as the number of science students is insignificant, other majors such as business or economics become prevalent, hence the imbalance in future workforce. In fact, competitiveness increased due to too many degree holders of the same expertise pushes a worrying number of graduates to the verge of unemployment. Another problem is the shortage of science professionals as qualified employees are low in number. Unless more students decided to study science at university, sooner or later we would have to face a major human resource crisis.

In conclusion, hurdles regarding some strict requirements of science subjects and employment opportunities are factored in a lot of students not choosing such subjects to study, and there are serious problems arising from this situation.

Sample 5:

It has been observed that there is a global decline in the number of students studying subjects like science, technology, engineering, and maths, known as STEM subjects. There are many factors leading to this alarming trend that has affected society on different levels.

This trend stems from several factors, two of which are the loss of interest in the subject and the perception that there are limited career options. The fact that science-related subjects are taught in high school with an overemphasis on theory, and that it lacks hands-on laboratory experiments, is one of the main factors contributing to the decline in participation in STEM subjects. This is because students studying a deep, complex subject like biology or physics need to witness firsthand its practical applications in order to spark their interest. Therefore, in the absence of adequate experimentation, science may appear to be incredibly dull and tedious. Moreover, limited career options and job openings could be another main factor influencing students' academic pursuits. The number of job opportunities, and associated pay rates in other fields, such as marketing, IT, and legal counsel, can be markedly higher, while jobs in STEM fields are most often found in university settings and struggle to attract sufficient funding.

This worrying trend has affected society on both national and global levels. Regarding the effects on a given nation's economic growth, a shortage in the scientific workforce hinders their ability to continually innovate, which is vital for the development of new technologies and industries. This highlights the importance of science education in maintaining a nation’s competitiveness in international markets. On a global scale, the most successful countries, such as the United States, the United Kingdom and Japan, are those that promote science in education. Furthermore, the world today is facing unprecedented challenges like record-breaking temperatures and worldwide wildfire crisis, and science-based solutions are urgently needed to face them. Without having enough students choosing to study subjects in STEM fields, this could prove to be an impossible task.

In summary, the decrease in the number of science majors worldwide is caused by the lack of interest in the subject and job opportunities. Societies both nationally and internationally will face serious challenges if there are not enough scientists in the future. It is vital for the government to have specific policies that could potentially address this problem.

Sample 6:

Undeniably, education plays an imperative role in children's lives. These days, it can be seen that only a few students are choosing science courses for their future. It has become a matter of grave concern. Many factors add pain to the issue, and it impacts the community adversely.

To start with, there are plenty of reasons behind this trouble. The primary factor is that these genres of the subject require patience and perseverance, and it becomes laborious work for the learners to handle great pressure on their shoulders. Moreover, Science is a demanding stream which could lead to serious health issues such as depression, and migraine since an individual is under stress. To cite an example, in a survey conducted by Oxford University in 2015, 60% of wards experienced emotional or physical symptoms of hypertension, social isolation and sleeping difficulties by getting into science subjects. In brief, such pupils are not prepared to program in an innovative field. 

Another reason is the uncomplicated educational program alluring the scholars and the youngsters are more inclined towards fewer studies. In addition, it takes a number of years to succeed and to get employed. Hence, the students do not prefer science over creative courses. Yet another reason, parents are not much indulging in getting their children into science faculty since they are not aware of scientific studies and experiments.

However, the aforementioned point might have some negative effects on society. Science is the momentous factor in fostering our nation's economy and conducting research and experiments. Due to the lack of technology, the development of society will decelerate. For instance, it would be difficult for humans to produce newer technology with better functions and a lack of human resources. For that reason, our future might not be secure in the hands of newcomers. 

To conclude, there are a plethora of causes why fewer students choose the science field for their future and if this situation happens, we have to face detrimental effects. It hurts individuals and communities deeply since scientific study might not be adopted by the youth.

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In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sample 1:

Limited access to education has led children in remote locations to live under poor conditions. Schools and teachers, accordingly, are believed to a long-term solution, which will guarantee a better life for disadvantaged children. However, others argue that technology is the master key to this issue. In this essay, I will discuss both these views before giving my own opinion.

There is not any difficulty to understand why the role of schools and teachers is highly acclaimed. Unlike developed nations, many rural areas have faced a severe teacher and school shortage, leading to illiteracy among children. Therefore, erecting more schools would help rural pupils acquire new knowledge as well as social skills more easily, all of which are conducive to their mental and physical development at an early age. Apart from this, rural communities can gradually escape from poverty through far-reaching changes in education.

On the other hand, without the help of technology, children in remote villages will have many difficulties in access to education. The reason is due to geographic barriers. Since the distance from their home to school is far, and they often go to school on foot, students often drop out. Therefore, by equipping young children with online lessons or programmes, they can self-study at home without having to go to class or being completely dependent on teachers. Also, this is a good chance for them to familiarize themselves with online education – a state-of-the-art educational mode.

In my view, schools and technology play an equally important role in rural and remote education because both have their own values. The concerted action between these factors, therefore, will promise disadvantaged children a better studying condition.

Sample 2:

It is true that rural children are significantly less likely than urban children to receive adequate education opportunities and resources in developing nations. While some argue that the issue could be fully addressed by providing computers and Internet access, I personally believe that building more schools and recruiting competent teachers would be a more practical solution.

On the one hand, some individuals’ main mottos for dealing with the problem are to spread computer literacy in rural regions. Firstly, mastering computer use allows children from remote areas to compete against other candidates in the race for decent future jobs. It is mainly because a modern job will require employees to be familiar with at least some computer applications to boost their productivity at work. Secondly, the main attribute of E-learning is to offer the youth a wide range of knowledge and also the flexibility of accessing information and resources. For example, utilizing free search engines could supply users valuable and up-to-date information within few minutes. Studying via Internet also have the capacity to support children’s language development as there are numerous websites aiding in learning foreign languages.

On the other hand, children could not access a well-rounded education without dedicated teachers and renowned schools. The first reason is that spending prolonged periods in front of faceless computers screens could take away critical human interaction which is beneficial to our children. Moreover, children could be easily distracted and exposed to largely unregulated material in an unsafe environment. Secondly, it is the trust and bond between teachers and learners that creates the learning environment while virtual learning simply cannot do that. Good teachers apparently inspire our young people, promote their enthusiasm and build their self-esteem to succeed in their educational goals.

In conclusion, although computers have been helping several children to progress more quickly compared to traditional methods, teachers still have a pivotal role to play in education development.

Sample 3:

It is true that a proper education is still out of reach for the children born in rural parts of developing countries. While some people suggest building more schools and sending more teachers to these areas, others would propose the provision of computers and Internet access. In my personal view, the latter seems more feasible.

On the one hand, schools and teachers are still fundamental to the objective of making education accessible to countryside students. Firstly, schools serve a number of purposes other than providing places for classes. More importantly, schools also function as meeting places for students to learn the importance of collaborating and socialising with other people, provide an ideal learning environment for further study and maintain the discipline of students through regular attendance. Secondly, owing to poor access to a systematic and constant education in the first place, students in remote areas are unlikely to study by themselves effectively. In other words, teachers are required in the learning process because they can acknowledge these students’ deficiencies and help them to solve their problems by repeating the same explanation, giving suitable exercises or even tutoring them privately.

On the other hand, I believe there are good reasons to supply these rural students with computers and Internet connection. The first reason is that these devices enable the students to pursue study programmes despite the fact that these students live in distant areas. For example, students can use the computer and the Internet to participate in webinars from universities or work with the teachers through emails. This idea would seem more feasible than sending teachers to remote regions to teach. Another reason is that the computer can be a useful learning tool with educational softwares. There are many computer programmes which contain a comprehensive course of self-study these days, so that the students can use these software applications without travelling out of their hometowns.

In conclusion, as people have their own views in how to provide education for rural students, I think that technology would offer a more plausible solution for the reasons mentioned.

Sample 4:

Regardless of societal differences, education is a universal feature that should be prioritised for all children around the world. However, in today's world, poverty plays a significant part in the education of underprivileged children. To address these concerns, the government should consider enacting various regulations to ensure that everyone, regardless of their differences, receives an equitable education. Let me highlight a few factors that aid rural youth in their academic pursuits.

To start with, some people believe that education is the most essential phase in an adolescent's life since it allows them to receive the best direction from teachers and transforms them into a self-sufficient member of society through the experiences gained from daily routine in school. Furthermore, teachers play an important role in a student's progress in specific disciplines. A kid who is weak in any topic, such as math or science, can benefit from good direction and care from a teacher. Furthermore, schooling instils moral principles and social conventions in a person so that he or she can live independently. In another scenario, some people believe that a student may learn and prepare independently with internet access rather than face-to-face connection. Individuals are totally reliant on themselves and the internet facility in this case. Although the internet makes all information available at the click of a mouse, it does not provide comprehensive understanding of subjects; rather, it delivers well-known theoretical knowledge rather than practical abilities. To summarise, children from rural areas should develop themselves through both theoretical and practical learning. Computers and internet access can also be offered so that people can learn more about things and improve their technical abilities. Despite cultural shifts, education and learning systems should be followed as before, despite the importance of technology in today's environment.

Sample 5:

Many young people in rural areas in certain developing countries nowadays are unable to obtain an education. While some argue that providing educational facilities and experienced teachers is the best way to solve this problem, others argue that computer-based and internet-based learning programmes can help. I concur with the latter viewpoint.

On the one hand, there are some understandable reasons why schools and teachers may be able to overcome this issue. To begin with, educational institutions allow students to significantly improve their social abilities, such as leadership, communication, and negotiating, to name a few. This is due to the fact that the schooling environment provides students with recreational activities such as teamwork projects, team building, clubs, etc., which enhance their relationships with peers and improve their interpersonal skills. Furthermore, teachers are the only ones who can discriminate between the best and worst students, allowing them to create tailored lessons for each student, something that a computer or the internet, no matter how valuable, could never match.

On the other hand, I feel that distance learning has its own set of advantages. To begin with, due to the lack of transportation infrastructure in rural areas, learning over the internet would cut down on the amount of time spent at school. As a result, it would assist students from low-income households in saving money, time, and effort. Furthermore, having access to the internet would allow youngsters to learn regardless of their physical location. To be more specific, Google is a fantastic source of information on everything from science to art.

To summarise, while schools and teachers may assist children in rural regions in obtaining an education, I believe that the remote learning method can also be beneficial.

Sample 6:

Children from rural areas in developing countries sometimes face a lack of educational resources. While some argue that the problem may be handled by building more schools, others propose upgrading them with current technology. Creating new institutes, in my opinion, is the best approach. On the one hand, schools and teachers remain critical to the goal of making education accessible to students in rural areas.

To begin with, schools perform a variety of tasks in addition to offering general classes. More importantly, schools serve as gathering places for students to understand the value of cooperating and socialising with others, as well as providing an optimal learning atmosphere for continued study and maintaining student discipline through frequent attendance. Secondly, kids in remote places are unlikely to study efficiently on their own due to a lack of regular and consistent education in the first place. In other words, teachers are important in the learning process because they can recognise students' weaknesses and assist them overcome them by repeating the same explanations, assigning appropriate tasks, or even teaching them privately.

On the other hand, I believe there are compelling reasons to provide computers and Internet access to these remote children. The main reason for this is that these devices allow students to continue their studies despite the fact that they live in remote regions. Students can, for example, utilise a computer and the Internet to engage in university webinars or communicate with lecturers via email. This proposal appears to be more practicable than sending teachers to teach in remote areas. Another argument is that educational software may turn a computer into a beneficial learning tool. These days, many computer programmes have a thorough self-study course so that students can use these software applications without having to leave their hometowns.

Finally, people have differing perspectives on how to deliver education to rural students. For the reasons stated above, I feel that technology would provide a more viable answer.

Sample 7:

In less developed countries, the lack of educational provision for children in rural areas is a serious issue. While there are strong arguments that installing more computers and extending internet connection could help to tackle this problem, I believe that the top priority should be to build more schools and employ more teachers.

On the one hand, providing computers and wider internet connection for remote rural areas is important. Firstly, internet access offers an unlimited source of information. Therefore, it is possible for pupils in rural communities to take advantage of distance learning educational programmes, giving them the same opportunities as children in city schools. Secondly, the introduction of computers enables children to acquire IT skills. It is evident that without such skills, pupils cannot learn how to use Microsoft Office or search for information online, abilities which will increase their future employment prospects.

On the other hand, I agree with those who contend that it is better to provide more schools and teachers in rural areas. The principal reason is that teachers play a vital role in the early stages of teaching basic literacy and numeracy, without which the computer and the internet are little more than playthings. In these early years, the teacher is a mentor who interacts directly with pupils, enlightens them and instils in them the value of learning. Another reason is that the more schools that there are in rural communities, the more likely is the realisation of the goal of universal education. With proper guidance from teachers, pupils can make the most of online resources, and the educational level in developing countries will be raised.

In conclusion, I would argue that the provision of more schools and teachers is a vital first step in widening access to education for children in rural communities.

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Nowadays, young people admire media and sports stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Sample 1:

In recent years, there has been growing concern over the admiration young people have for media and sports stars, despite the fact that many of these celebrities do not set a good example. I believe that this trend is a negative development due to its harmful impact on adolescents' morals and the potential threat it poses to social stability.

Firstly, the influence of media and sports stars who engage in questionable behavior can lead to moral issues among impressionable adolescents. Young people often view celebrities as role models, and when these figures exhibit behaviors like substance abuse or reckless actions, they may consider these actions acceptable or even desirable. For instance, many teenagers who idolize Hollywood celebrities like Paris Hilton are misled into pursuing a glamorous, materialistic lifestyle centered around parties and nightclubs. Similarly, figures like Kim Kardashian promote the notion that scandal and publicity stunts are effective ways to achieve success, sending the wrong message to the younger generation.

Secondly, the excessive reverence for celebrities in entertainment can pose a threat to social security. When celebrities face criticism for their scandals, their devoted fans may attempt to defend them aggressively, leading to public disturbances. This creates challenges for authorities in maintaining order. A notable example is the chaos that erupted during a Korean pop concert in Vietnam, where uncontrollable fans caused disruptions, endangering both themselves and the public. Such incidents highlight the dangers of blind admiration for celebrities and its detrimental effects on society.

In conclusion, the trend of young people idolizing media and sports stars who do not set good examples is a negative development, as it contributes to moral decay among adolescents and threatens social stability.

Sample 2:

Youngsters today are idolizing famous people who may not be a good role model. This essay discusses why the drawbacks outweigh the merits.

On the one hand, admiring famous people like a pop singer or a football player could bring benefits to the young. The talents and achievements of idols can inspire teenagers to pursue their passion, thereby helping them reach their full potential. For example, my younger sister is a big fan of Adele, who is a famous British singer. She practices singing everyday with the dream of becoming an accomplished singer like her idol.

On the other hand, there are potential drawbacks of idolizing celebrities who do not set a good example. The main drawback is that the behavior of youngsters, especially adolescents, can be easily influenced. They will imitate their idols’ bad habits such as smoking, drinking alcohol or even abusing drugs. As a result, their health and future life can be destroyed. Another disadvantage might be that youngsters tend to spend too much time following their idols on social networking sites and attending their events. This can distract them from their study at school and even result in poor academic performance. Finally, some famous entertainers take advantage of their fame and make profits from advertising products without caring about their quality. In case of a bad quality product related to health such as food supplements being advertised by celebrities, this can adversely affect the health of many young people.

In conclusion, the drawbacks of shaping youngsters’ bad behavior, distracting them from their study, and being detrimental to their health seem to outweigh the merits of giving them inspiration. Given this situation, it seems that parents should pay attention to their children if they are admiring a famous person.

Sample 3:

The younger generation are having great admiration for media and sport celebrities although they are not perfect role models to follow. In my view, this could be seen as detrimental.

From one standpoint, emulating famous entertainment stars might spark changing patterns of fashion and behavior among young adults who are not mature enough to judge what is suitable within their society. As matter of fact, they show a propensity for copying what those stars say or do on TV, even if their actions go against the cultural value of some localities. Regarding fashion, the way Dam Vinh Hung, who is a renowned Vietnamese singer, dresses would be the onset of a modern yet rather unacceptable trend of fashion with exposed skin. Unfortunately, the young have yet to understand the long-term shortcomings of such a trend to traditional way of dressing which values the beauty and elegance of clothes such as the Ao Dai.

Additionally, such reverence for celebrities in the field of entertainment would possibly cause a detriment to social security under certain circumstances. A typical example of this is the chaos during and after Korean singers and musical bands’ show in Vietnam a few years ago when the crowd of fans went uncontrollable, which caused irritation for the locals and also danger to the fans themselves. Furthermore, if their idols were criticized due to their scandals, they would try to sugar-coat the situation or even trigger arguments. This would be really challenging for authorities to maintain security.

In conclusion, I suppose the phenomenon that young people idolize media and sport celebrated individuals who are notorious in some aspects is negative.

Sample 4:

The admiration young people hold for celebrities is not a new phenomenon. Throughout history, youths have been inspired by people with outstanding athletic abilities. It is argued that this admiration brings with it more positive than negative issues/ramifications. This will be proven by looking at how sports figures both instill inspiration and teach life lessons to young people.

Firstly, celebrities often display extremely developed skills, which can help to spur young people towards a life full of physically active. For instance, school children are often driven to exercise in an attempt to emulate superstars such as Novak Djokovic, Ronaldo, and Messi. As this additional exercise is good for their health, it is difficult to argue that the inspiration celebrities leave upon young people is entirely a bad thing. Thus, this shows that the admiration people hold for sports stars has positive implications/reasons.

Although the negative character traits of many sports celebrities are often called into question, it is felt the public mistakes professional athletes make can act as good morality lessons for young people. A good image of this occurred when Canadian runner Ben Johnson dishonorably lost an Olympic gold medal due to steroid use. This incident showed young people around the world that drug use is a shameful practice. As this example illustrates, the public errors athletes commit can often act as good lessons for adolescents.

After looking at the above, it is felt to hold athletes in esteem does not bring with it entirely negative consequences. It is assumed the historical admiration people retain for sports stars is not going to change into the foreseeable future.

Sample 5:

In the modern society, youngsters often look up to well-known entertainers and athletes. Many people believe that these celebrities are not good role models for young individuals. Thus, they are concerned about the influence of such admiration. From my perspective, whether that idolisation is beneficial or detrimental depends merely on the young generation’s attitudes.

On the one hand, youngsters’ adoration towards celebrities can bring about several positive effects to themselves. First of all, individuals who are selective will filter out all the negative characteristics and only opt for good traits in famous figures to emulate. This consciousness ensures that adolescents will not blindly reduplicate improper actions from celebrities. For example, even though singer Michael Jackson was involved in several allegations, his talent, perseverance and work ethic still inspire many youngsters around the world. Secondly, teenagers can also take valuable lessons from their idols’ mistakes. Since celebrities’ actions are often publicized, adolescents have the opportunities to observe various examples of misconducts and learn from them. For instance, upon hearing the doping accusation of Louis Armstrong, many of the biker’s fans realize that there is no shortcut which leads to success and honesty should be of paramount importance.

On the second hand, idolizing entertainers and sportsmen may result in adverse effects. To begin with, since most adolescents are malleable, bad examples from celebrities can develop moral issues in them. Many teenagers who look up to Hollywood figures such as Paris Hilton believe that they should pursue a glamorous, material life with parties and nightclubs. Other celebrities like Kim Kardashian present a wrong message to the young generation, suggesting that using scandals and PR stunts are the most effective methods to gain attention and be successful. Furthermore, there are considered to be better role models for the young to hold in high regards, such as activists or philanthropists. However, the popularity of celebrities may sway teenagers’ interest away from these individuals. To be more specific, many teenagers do not care much about politics and other social issues since their attention is solely devoted to entertaining figures.

All things considered, I believe that the adoration which youngsters dedicate to media and sports stars have both strengths and weaknesses. While this admiration allows youngsters to emulate celebrities’ good traits and draw a lesson from their mishaps, it also develops moral issues in them and takes the spotlight away from the more deserving role models.

Sample 6:

It is true that many media and sports celebrities are idolized despite the fact that they are not good role models. I believe that this reality is negative because fans can be exposed to many of the stars' inappropriate behavior.

First of all, many sports stars, despite their talent, still have scandals that set negative examples for young fans. Many football stars have impressive performances on the field and are even recognized for their contribution to the sports industry but are later exposed as unfaithful people. Gerard Pique, a former football star at Barcelona, perfectly exemplifies this when his extramarital affairs came to light and abruptly ended his 12-year marriage. Admittedly, many of Pique's supporters might say that the scandal has nothing to do with his professional career: However, infidelity is obviously unacceptable, and it still sets a detrimental mindset for his fans.

Admiring notorious celebrities also has many downsides for young fans. Many so-called singers in the entertainment industry gain fame only from their catchy yet meaningless songs, and many of whom cannot even sing live. Catapulted into stardom, many of these entertainers become arrogant and not only do they refuse to take constructive feedback, but they might also think of others as inferior. This inappropriate manner can easily affect impressionable young fans as a result, causing them to think that once one has become famous, he no longer needs to learn.

In conclusion, famous figures in the field of media and sport are very much influential among the young, and fans can be negatively affected as a result if their idols fail to uphold certain standards of behavior.

Sample 7:

The younger generation tends to admire celebrities from the media and sports realms even though they may not be ideal role models. From my perspective, this could be regarded as harmful.

From one standpoint, emulating famous entertainment stars might spark changing patterns of fashion and behavior among young adults who are not mature enough to judge what is suitable within their society. As matter of fact, they show a propensity for copying what those stars say or do on TV, even if their actions go against the cultural value of some localities. Regarding fashion, the way Dam Vinh Hung, who is a renowned Vietnamese singer, dresses would be the onset of a modern yet rather unacceptable trend of fashion with exposed skin. Unfortunately, the young have yet to understand the long-term shortcomings of such a trend to traditional way of dressing which values the beauty and elegance of clothes such as the Ao Dai.

Moreover, the adoration for entertainment celebrities could potentially pose a threat to public order in specific situations. An illustrative instance of this occurred during a concert by Korean singers and bands in Vietnam a few years ago, where fan frenzy spiraled out of control, leading to irritation among locals and endangering the fans themselves. Additionally, if their idols faced criticism over scandals, fans would attempt to downplay the situation or even engage in arguments. This presents a significant challenge for authorities in maintaining security.

To summarize, I believe the trend of young people idolizing media and sports figures, despite their negative traits, is unfavorable.

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1 điểm

It is suggested that everyone should have a car, a television and a fridge. Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh advantages?

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Sample 1:

Some people believe that the possession of material things like cars and fridges is the first priority in everyone’s life. I contend that this development is detrimental to the society rather than benefit it.

On one hand, the good effects of all citizens owning cars, fridges or TVs on social development cannot be denied. Firstly, it promotes national economy and society. By changing the model of their cars for example, customers nowadays seem to be boosting production process, which creates huge profits for companies. These enterprises therefore have to employ more labors to meet consumers’ demand, as well as pay tax for government. And such taxation in turn is used to build public facilities to improve living standard. Secondly, such increasing consumption forces manufacturers to plan competitive pricing. As a result, even low-income workers can buy a car at a reasonable price and enjoy the comfort of life.

On the other hand, there are many problems emerging from this fact. Among those, environmental issue stands out from the rest. To be more specific, the greater productivity is the more industrial waste that manufacturing plants release to the environment. Likewise, consumers who dump cars or TV sets which are still in use should be to blame for. Apart from this concern, material pursuit affects consumers negatively. For example, being obsessed and seduced by its fabulous model, people do not hesitate to purchase a new car without giving it a second thought. Today the youth’s perception of happiness has been also distorted in such way, which tempts them to commit wrong doings to own the latest model of a necessity.

In conclusion, although consumerism could possibly make the economy prosper, I myself believe that its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages. Not only does the amount of global waste surge noticeably due to uncontrollable consumption and production, but many citizens could become anti-social members when chasing material desperately.

Sample 2:

There has been a growing demand for a car, a TV, and a fridge in everyone’s life. Despite having numerous benefits of these cars, TVs, and fridges, the benefits are outweighed by the disadvantages of cars, tv, and fridge.

These luxurious commodities are in high demand, which implies that our economic situation is improving, as the increasing sales figures of cars, TVs, and fridges are associated with higher employment, a good salary package, and the ability to maintain a higher standard of living. Traveling long distances has become more comfortable than ever before. People can enjoy their ride in an air-conditioned car, enjoy music. On the other hand, people can enrich themselves by watching TV, as they get to know news from all around the world, incidents that happen in every corner of the world. They get all the updates within a second. And the fridges have helped people to preserve food longer without being stale, they can also stock up foods, drinks for future requirements.

In spite of having these advantages, there are many disadvantages of these commodities. Firstly, cars are held responsible for environmental pollution. The air emitted from the car, not only pollutes the environment but also affects human health. Many serious hearts, lung diseases are increasing due to environmental degradation. The use of television and fridges creates pressure on the electricity supply of the world. People are getting habituated to watching television. Nowadays, children are having eyesight problems from a very young age.

Sample 3:

Nowadays people desire to have several materialistic things in their life like televisions, fridges, cars, to lead a luxurious life. These commodities have high utilities, they raise the standard of living of an individual and make it more convenient, but at the same time, there are several disadvantages of these things.

The use of a car enables people to travel comfortably and reach their destination on time. In addition to this, they can enjoy the air-conditioned car journey and enjoy music while traveling. The refrigerator is used to preserve the perishable food that can otherwise get stale, thus avoiding wastage of food. Lastly, television is a great source of news and entertainment.

Despite the aforementioned advantages, there are many limitations of these luxurious commodities which cannot be avoided. The main problem for the use of the car is environmental pollution, which is caused by the exhaustion of toxic fumes from automobiles. Due to this, many respiratory diseases are on a rise among urban people. A survey by Melbourne University has found that 60-70% of the population suffers from pulmonary disorders owing to the inhalation of polluted air. Along with that, the use of refrigerators releases a gas named CFCs that leads to the depletion of the ozone layer.

Thus, it has been proved that the invention of these luxurious commodities has left harmful effects on the environment as well as the health of the human being.

Sample 4:

We belong to a materialistic era, where everyone demands more and more. Commodities like cars, refrigerators, tv were luxurious commodities a few years back, but it has become necessities now. The advantages obtained from these commodities outweigh the disadvantages.

It is the quest of a human being for material possessions that keeps society going. People work hard in order to fulfill their needs and also to lead a luxurious life., with all the comforts. Besides, the high demand for such things has boosted the national economy. The manufacturing industry has been providing 24*7 employment to thousands of people who produce these things in chunks. It was said by Mignon McLaughlin, "Be glad that you're greedy; the national economy would collapse if you weren't." More of these goods are produced because there are high demands for these products. Had there been no demand for these goods, there wouldn't be any development in the economy.

On the other side of the coin, these are leading to strain and stress in the lives of people. People have become workaholics; they are missing the joy of life and are always running behind money in order to be able to purchase these luxuries in life. Sometimes, people tend to take help of unfair means to buy these things and ultimately lead to violence and crime. People are further unable to draw lines between necessities and indulgence, these create a problem. They turn things from simple materialism to over-materialism. There are families, where every room has a personal TV, every floor of a house has a refrigerator, everyone has a personal car. There is nothing but wastage of resources. The over-use of anything has ill effects. Just like the emission from cars causes environmental degradation, along with that, it has adverse effects on human health. The people living in Urban regions are suffering from respiratory diseases. These diseases are lesser in rural areas, due to the absence of too many vehicles. Further, the use of refrigerators has also put the habit of storing food like fish, meat, etc for weeks. This is again harmful as there are many kinds of bacteria that are born in the stored food. The present young generation is getting habituated to watching television. They are even suffering from eyesight problems and headaches.

So despite the advantages a car, TV and refrigerator have in our life, the number of disadvantages is more.

Sample 5:

Some people believe that it is necessary for each person to possess an item of some fundamental needs for travelling, entertainment, and food storage. Although some clear benefits of such development could be seen, they are, in my view, eclipsed by the considerable drawbacks.

There are several advantages of having a private car, TV and fridge. First of all, people who need to travel on a daily basis, especially those who live far away from their workplace, could stay active all the time thanks to the availability of their personal vehicle. Secondly, having a TV could be a perfect choice of recreation because it offers a a variety of channels, such as Cartoon Network or HBO, to satisfy viewers’ personal preferences. Finally, when in possession of a fridge, people would save a significant amount of time supposedly spent on shopping for food.

However, the disadvantages of those personal possessions are much greater regarding both environmental and individual levels. To start with, hypothetically if everyone had his own private form of transport, particularly cars, the emission of harmful exhaust which would be too difficult to measure would do grave harm to the environment. From an individual perspective, it would cost a legacy if every person insisted on purchasing his own fridge and TV. This is because property prices would certainly accelerate owing to the growth in customers’ demand for those commodities. Also of great concern is the payment of expensive electric bills as fridges have to be plugged in all the time.

In conclusion, despite a few beneficial aspects of having a car, a TV and a fridge, the demerits are of greater significance from both individual and environmental angles.

Sample 6:

It is true that almost everyone wants a car, a TV and a fridge as some of the basic essentials of a good lifestyle. Despite the benefits, I believe that on a long-term view, these are outweighed by the disadvantages.

On the one hand, the growing consumption of cars, televisions and fridges has several benefits. At its simplest, the rise of the consumer society stimulates economic growth. The increasing sales figures for cars and household equipment are often associated with more jobs and wealth being created for society. Another advantage is that people can have a higher standard of living than before. Travelling on the road is no longer tedious because individuals can sit in a car, listening to music and enjoying the comfort of air conditioning. In the same way, people may watch television to relax or to gain knowledge, and fridges help them preserve food longer without being stale.

On the other hand, I believe that the above benefits are outweighed by potential problems. Primarily, the use of cars is often held responsible for environmental pollution. Exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the air quality and consequently affect people’s health. For example, in many big cities in the world, urban citizens are suffering from chronic respiratory problems due to poor air quality. Using fridges and televisions also places pressure on electricity supply in the world. The growing use of these devices in the home merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become intractable in many parts of the world.

In conclusion, taking a long-term perspective, I would argue that the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the advantages.

Sample 7:

Car, TV and fridge are amenities of our home life. In the absence of these home appliances, our life would become less convenient. Nevertheless, the fact that every one of us possesses a car, a TV and a refrigerator might exert adverse influences on our society in terms of traffic congestion and environmental pollution. Both sides of this issue will be analyzed from multiple perspectives.

Undeniably, the benefits which we reap from these electrical household products are substantial. Functions of a fridge, for example, help food stay fresh longer, making our daily meals more delicious. Thanks to a car with family –friendly features, members in each family can enjoy quality time together such as travelling and going picnic. Televisions not only provide us with a lot of leisure options but also entertain our life in many different ways. With respect to this, our spiritual life has indeed been improved vastly due to such modern and convenient inventions.

However, by reason of benefits mentioned above, people often tend to overuse them without being aware of their side effects. Therefore, if everybody all over the world has a car, a TV or a fridge, this may put our living habitats at risk. Our globe would be heated up due to the daily release of a huge amount of energy into the air. Apart from this, traffic might also be congested frequently because there are too many vehicle owners driving their private cars rather than use public transport.

To my mind, whether this development does more harm than good mainly depends on the way that we use products. If people’s environmental awareness is high, they themselves will know how to use home appliances in the right manner.

Sample 8:

Today we belong to an era of materialism, and everyone wants to have more and more in life. Things like a fridge, TV and car were the luxuries of yesteryear and have become the necessities of today. There are many advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon, but the disadvantages definitely outweigh the advantages.

On the positive side, the quest for material possessions is what keeps the society going. People work hard to fulfil their needs and achieve their goals. It is everyone’s right to own the comforts of life. Secondly, because of the demand for such things, the national economy is boosted. Manufacturing units provide round-the-clock employment to thousands of people to produce things in bulk. Mignon McLaughlin has rightly said that “Be glad that you’re greedy; the national economy would collapse if you weren’t.” What is more, when demand is more and mass production is done, then the cost of the things is cut down and the consumer is ultimately benefited.

On the downside, this is leading to stress and strain in the lives of people. People have become workaholics and are missing out on the joys of family and social life. Sometimes, people even adopt unethical means to get these things, and this leads to crime and violence. There is no harm in owning things such as a car, TV or fridge, but things turn bad when this simple materialism turns into over-materialism and people start wanting a TV in every room of the house and a car per person of the family. Our neighbours have a triple-storey house and there is a refrigerator on every floor just for their comfort. People fail to draw the line between necessity and indulgence, and this creates all problems. They fail to realize that – “If you live for having it all, what you have is never enough.”

The most significant disadvantage of excessive materialism is the environment. Manufacturers promote their products through ads and people are lured into buying new things even without need. It is a bitter truth that a society in which consumption is artificially stimulated in order to keep production going is a society founded on trash and waste, and such a society is a house built upon sand. For example, new models of TVs and refrigerators are introduced every other day and people just go and buy them even if they need those things or not. The disposal of old ones is adding to global litter and is destroying our environment.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that there is no harm if everyone wants to own a fridge, a TV and a car but it would be much better if we give importance to the word ‘a’ instead of everyone the word should be every family.

Sample 9:

It is recommended that everybody desires to own a car, a television and a refrigerator, but I feel that the drawbacks of this development for the community outweigh the advantages.  

Most importantly, people are forgetting the real luxuries of life by desiring the artificial ones.  The remote-controlled life has resulted in people falling prey to diseases like obesity and heart attacks as walking and cycling has been replaced by cars, eating refrigerated foods and killing the time by watching television. The real purpose of this development has been forgotten. Consequently, cycling to office, passing time by having a healthy conversation with a friend and cooking fresh food are now mostly found in the sentences of an author’s novel.   

Though, these developments are also very important and beneficial as people can work at longer distances by driving cars, remain connected with the world by watching television and prevent wastage of valuable food by storing in the refrigerator. But, as outlined above, the aura of these developments is being lost due to the negative impact of its unbalanced usage.  

Thus, it’s need of the hour to ring the bell and make people understand how to take optimum use of the said developments whereby the sole purpose of these scientific inventions for the society is achieved and people may have access to luxuries as well as healthy living.

To recapitulate, possessing a car, television and refrigerator is now easy and has become an integral part of one’s lifestyle but keeping it under control by paving the way to real luxuries and healthy usage habits will make the disadvantages of this development for society look small in front of the advantages.

Sample 10:

Electronic appliances and gadgets have become a quintessential part of people’s lifestyles nowadays. They’re being considered as measures of one’s standard of living, which to some extent isn’t right. This essay shall discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a development in our society.

As the technology advanced, the lifestyle of people became introduced with devices that would make our day-to-day working much easier, faster and comfortable. The best examples of this are a car, a TV, a refrigerator, an air conditioner and so on, that make us reach our destination faster, provide us entertainment from world over, and help us prepare delicious food. Naturally, people got addicted to these appliances so much that now it is impossible to imagine even a day without them. It is definitely a good thing that we’re making such phenomenal breakthroughs in science so as to make human living more convenient and luxurious. However, certain aspects of this development aren’t so much to be proud of.

Some people feel that these material things – cars and TV and so on, are essential to establish a certain status in the society. This thought process creates a pressure among individuals to feel inferior if they don’t own one of these things. Moreover, having a luxury sedan is considered to be more of a status statement than owning a small hatchback car. Such made-up norms of some sections of the society are the reason why this development also has a stigma associated to it. I’d suggest the society should stop feeding itself to these hypocritical beliefs and enjoy technology and its inventions without any such worries.

In conclusion, I’d say that the few disadvantages, although prominent, do not outweigh the many advantages of the fact that people want to own material goods. According to the arguments presented above, it is all a matter of one’s perception of this situation. The best thing to do is neglect the drawbacks and concentrate on the benefits.

Sample 11:

It is widely accepted that people want to have several material things in life, such as a refrigerator, a TV, and a car, to make life more comfortable. While these products are good for people, in my opinion, in the long run, their benefits are overshadowed by their limitations.

To commence with, life has such fundamental amenities as a car, refrigerator, and television. Firstly, they improve a person's standard of living and make him more comfortable. For example, a car allows people to travel comfortably and reach their destination in a short time. In addition, perishable foods can be kept in the refrigerator for a long time to avoid waste. In addition, television is a great source of news and entertainment.

On the other hand, despite the aforementioned advantages, they have various disadvantages that cannot be neglected. The worst problem is the pollution of the environment from exhaust gases and toxic exhaust gases from cars. As a result, air quality deteriorates, which can cause many severe respiratory illnesses in humans. To illustrate this point, a study by the University of Melbourne found that 60%-70% of the population suffers from lung disease due to the inhalation of polluted air. What's more, it's a proven fact that refrigerators emit Chlorofluorocarbons (CFCs) that can deplete the ozone layer.

To conclude, all available data provide concrete evidence that overuse of these modern inventions can have adverse environmental and public health consequences, regardless of their benefits; Thus, I believe that the disadvantages of a TV, a car, or a refrigerator overshadow its merits.

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1 điểm

Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

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Sample 1:

The unpopularity of using bicycles in numerous places has been brought into question although there is little doubt about their friendly effects on the environment compared to cars or airplanes. The reasons for this are varied and several feasible solutions will be proposed in the essay below.

There are two main underlying explanations for the uncommon use of bicycles. Firstly, it would consume a considerable amount of time to travel by this means of transport, which, according to many, justifies the price of potential environmental damage caused by other types of vehicles. This is because it fails to benefit dwellers of major cities in particular when their pace of working life would eclipse the values of using bicycles to the environment. Secondly, modern people are becoming less concerned about the negative impact that their daily use of cars and public transportation would inflict on their surroundings. Therefore, it is rather impractical to expect cycling in cities or even the countryside.

The government plays a vital role in encouraging the use of this environmentally friendly vehicle. They could conduct monthly green days that by law require citizens to cycle to work to get people involved in protecting their environment. In the long term, such an initiative would help to gradually form a habit of cycling among occupied individuals. More importantly, propagation via various means of media along with optional courses about the advantages of cycling to the environment at schools seem imperative to heighten social awareness of this matter.

In conclusion, cycling, regardless of its positive influences on the environment, has become a rare picture in the modern world for a number of reasons; and the government should take immediate actions to improve this situation.

Sample 2:

Although riding a bicycle is clearly a better way to protect the environment than using other types of vehicles, not many people around the world prefer this means of transport. There are several causes of this unpopularity, and some solutions could be proposed to promote the usage of bicycles.

To begin with, there are several reasons why few people use bicycles to travel on a regular basis. Firstly, since modern life is getting much busier than in the past, individuals nowadays want to spend as little time on transport as possible. Therefore, they prefer to use other types of vehicles such as motorbikes or cars which would take less time. Secondly, cycling is more physically demanding than riding a motorbike or driving a car. This tends to discourage people from choosing this method, especially on a hot and sunny day or when they have to travel a long distance.

Several actions can be taken to increase the popularity of bicycles. The first solution would be to make it more costly to own a motorbike or a car. This can be done by increasing the price of petrol or raising tax on these vehicles. As a result, more people would choose bicycles as their primary means of transport. Additionally, more lanes should be built to serve only cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel with bicycles. The final solution is to launch campaigns to raise citizens’ awareness of the harmful effects of motorbikes and cars on the environment, and this could encourage people to cycle more often.

In conclusion, there are some reasons why bicycles are becoming less common in today’s world, and solutions should be produced early to promote this environmentally friendly means of transport.

Sample 3:

With technological advancements and the ever-growing population, today many people have developed. And developing countries can purchase private vehicles for travel and work purposes. These vehicles emit harmful gasses including greenhouse gas. Carbon dioxide - which harms the environment disproportionately. In the rise of pollution and global warming. Individuals are looking at other forms of transport which are environmentally friendly. Cycling is one such form of transport. Which has zero emission and can take up minimum space on the road which reduces traffic congestion as well. But cycling is not so popular in most places and convinces more people to shift to cycling for regular chores. And work purposes so that air pollution can be controlled. Pollution negatively affects lives on earth and is degrading the environment. Therefore, we should collectively work towards increasing and spreading awareness about the benefits of cycling healthwise and environment wise.

There are several prominent reasons why cycling isn’t the desired mode of transportation for most individuals. Firstly, to cycle somewhere takes comparatively more time than other modes of transport. Considering we live in a fast world where we want everything instantly. It’s natural that this disadvantage takes precedence and makes cycling a less attractive option. Secondly, with weather unpredictability cycling to a particular destination can be really inconvenient. As it hardly has any protective shield like cars or buses, where once you’re inside you’re protected from the heat, rain, or cold breeze. But when cycling, you’re exposed to the weather directly. Which makes it less appealing as most places have certain weather aberrations regularly. And most people can’t keep a track of the weather forecast before leaving their house.

Usually, cycling is preferred for short distances as it is time consuming without any protective shields. In order to encourage more and more people to switch to cycling, the governments and the various media platforms should address these issues. And spread awareness in terms of how cycling can be a positive influence on the environment and individual health. For example, to promote health and affordability many Indian colleges today have the system of rented bicycles. Where one can rent a bicycle for a few hours and move around the campus faster, thus inculcating an environmentally friendly positive habit. Therefore, we can see that taking small initiatives like these can go a long way in affecting people’s lifestyles and choices. So, we need to focus on the right message to convince people to shift to cycling and increase its popularity.

Sample 4:

Today more than ever, our primary responsibility is to protect the environment at all costs. As the damage done is irrevocable and is affecting individual lives as health issues are getting widespread among humans, animals and marine life. This has compelled humans to find alternatives in every domain of their lives to reduce pollution. Air pollution is a major concern for individuals as we can see its adverse consequences on our health. Today more and more people are suffering from breathing trouble and have to wear masks which filter the air they breathe in. As the air quality is reducing drastically. One of the main reasons to see such a trend in urban areas is because of the continuous emission of harmful gasses from vehicles. Today the number of vehicles on the road has increased exponentially which pollutes the air. Thus, making it difficult to breathe. Therefore, we need to start looking for environmentally friendly options out there and embrace them faster to stop further degradation. Cycling is one such form of transportation that will be our focus in this essay.

Cycling is not only environmentally friendly but cycling regularly has several health benefits as well. Therefore, one should take a serious look at this affordable option which can solve one of the major problems we face today. But cycling is not popular in many places as it is not considered the ideal mode of transport. In a society, where inequality is quite high, people who cycle are usually the ones who belong to the poorer section of the society. Who cannot afford private vehicles. This class divide greatly influences the decision of owning private vehicles. And as the purchasing power of individuals increases the people who used to cycle switch cars. This issue needs to be addressed, and people should be encouraged. To switch to cycling without looking at it as a class identifier. In countries like India, where the income distribution is highly unequal with more than half of the population below the poverty line. The class divide is prominent and is discriminated against. Therefore, the government needs to first address the class issue in order to get rid of these preconceived notions. Before encouraging individuals to shift to cycling.
Secondly, cycling should be promoted along the lines of health benefits. Since cycling requires every individual to burn their own energy to cover distances. This helps people to stay healthy as nowadays since everything is automated. People tend to get lethargic and sit in front of screens for long hours which causes health problems. Hospitals, doctors, trainers, health instructors should focus more on the benefits of cycling to encourage the shift towards a healthy lifestyle. This way cycling can be seen in a positive light, thus gaining the much-needed popularity.

Sample 5:

Cycling is not a new innovation but rather has been a prominent mode of transport. Since its origin and has become less popular with more sophisticated forms of transport. But these vehicles have a negative effect on the environment. As they emit harmful gasses into the atmosphere and contaminate the air we breathe in. So, it’s time to look back to an eco-friendlier solution that will cause minimum damage to the environment. Cycling is one such mode of transportation which has zero emission. And also takes up minimum space on road and for parking thus saving space. But cycling has certain disadvantages for which more private vehicles are preferred over it. And in order to change the narrative around the same, the government should first address the issues and find ways to encourage this practice.

Cycling is not only time-consuming as compared to other modes of transportation but also can lead to more accidents as today roads are constructed in a way that is better suited for cars. And buses which makes people riding cycles more vulnerable to road accidents. Cycling is also not popular in many places as it requires too much human energy which many feel it can be counterproductive when going to work. Cycling to work can lead to exhaustion and not performing one's task diligently. These reasons are dominant in most places where cycling is not popular. So, the government should first find solutions to these problems by building separate cycling zones. Along the main area where only cycling is allowed which can reduce accidents. Media platforms should focus on the health benefits of cycling and show how cycling to work is a healthy habit one should pursue. Companies can incentivize employees who cycle to work which would make more people switch to cycling.

For cycling to gain popularity, humans should be aware of its benefits and should also find it a safe mode of transport with minimum risks.

Sample 6:

It is a fact that riding a bicycle is good for our health and it is an environment-friendly mode of transportation. However, it is still not favourable in many countries. The following essay will discuss some of the reasons for this trend and several suggestions that could be implemented to encourage more people to ride bicycles.  

It is true that in several countries, the people do not like to use bicycles as their mode of transportation. Firstly, it is the view and the thinking of the people who still believe that bicycle is not a mode of transportation, and it is only used for exercises. They think that riding a bicycle is only a sporting or recreational activity and for commuting they need to ride on busses, trains or drive their own cars. Secondly, since some governments do not provide any bicycle lane for the cyclists, people find it risky to ride bicycles in the main streets. Without the existence of the separate bicycle lane, some people think that riding a bike to work would be dangerous as they have to share the road with car commuters and motorcyclists.

There are several things that governments could do to persuade their people to ride bikes. One of the solutions is by providing separate cycling lane for public. By having a lot of bicycle lanes in the area, it is hoped that it will encourage the residents to ride bikes for their daily commuting. Another solution could be encouraging and informing people by making campaigns about the positive effects of bike riding to the societies. The promotion should be attractive and informative about the benefits of cycling to the people. Lastly, the government should also lead by examples about bike riding. One of the examples is that the government could persuade their employees to ride bicycles on a daily basis. By seeing that government authorities are riding their bike to work, it is hoped that the public will also follow the example.

In conclusion, although bike riding has become a popular mode of transportation in some countries, but it is still not widely accepted in several other countries. It is because the mindset of the people which believe that cycling is a just a matter of sport and cycling lanes are not available in their country. The governments should make some action plans to persuade their people to ride bikes, as it is beneficial for the people and the government as well. 

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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sample 1:

Some people have proposed that a higher proportion of the national budget should be allocated to support those in need at hospitals. However, I believe healthy lifestyle promotion programs must be prioritised considering their perennial impact on society.

On the one hand, governmental support is critical to the recovery of patients whose treatment costs exceed their financial capacity. For example, the medical treatment process for a cancer patient includes numerous costly procedures, starting with the conduct of diagnostic tests, the use of prescribed medications, and ending with interpretation of the results and counselling. In Vietnam, the total sum of these medical and non-medical expenses can total over $50,000, which is unaffordable for the majority of Vietnamese working families. Therefore, to ensure proper treatment, the Vietnamese government must provide monetary support to these patients through insurance schemes or the Red Cross organisation.

On the other hand, health promotion and disease prevention initiatives can produce greater long-term social impact. Many of these initiatives, such as those executed by the WHO in Cambodia, have successfully provided locals with essential health information related to nutrition, along with the hygienic and cardiovascular benefits of regular exercise. As the number of Cambodians who adopt healthy diets and preventive measures against diseases are on the rise, the rates for hospitalisation have witnessed a remarkable drop in recent years. Cambodia has, therefore, reduced financial demand for the construction of hospitals and clinics, allocating a greater proportion of a stretched budget to other critical sectors such as education and social equality.

In conclusion, although some patients might benefit from governmental financial aid, I opine that programs which promote a healthier lifestyle are of greater importance to society as a whole. In my opinion, governments should promulgate laws that require the participation and involvement of all political bodies to support these programs.

Sample 2:

In today's modern world, the allocation of public funds is a subject of significant debate. A persistent question in public health funding is whether it is more important to invest in promoting healthy lifestyles to prevent illness or to allocate resources for treating those already sick. I partially agree with the statement, recognizing the value of both aspects of public healthcare.

To begin with, promoting a healthy lifestyle through public funds is undeniably essential. This is primarily because many diseases that plague society today are direct consequences of unhealthy lifestyles. The rise in non-communicable diseases such as heart disease, diabetes, and obesity can be largely attributed to poor dietary choices, a lack of physical activity, and other unhealthy habits. By investing in education, awareness campaigns, and infrastructure for healthier living, we can reduce the incidence of these diseases and, consequently, the burden on the healthcare system.

Nevertheless, there are certain diseases that cannot be completely prevented through lifestyle modifications. Infectious diseases, for instance, can affect even the most health-conscious individuals. Neglecting this aspect would be unfair to individuals who suffer from such illnesses. It is our ethical responsibility to provide them with access to the best possible medical care and treatment options. By doing so, we not only ensure that individuals receive the care they deserve but also advance medical research and innovation, potentially leading to more effective treatments in the future.

In conclusion, while it is undoubtedly crucial to invest in initiatives that encourage healthier living, it is equally important to allocate resources for disease treatment. Striking a balance between prevention and treatment is the key to a comprehensive and effective public healthcare system, ensuring both a healthier future and the best possible care for those who are already afflicted with illness.

Sample 3:

Many people say that in order to fight diseases, the government should invest more money in encouraging a healthy lifestyle instead of spending money on the treatment of people who are already suffering from illness. I advocate this point of view.

On one hand, I agree that a large proportion of state budget should be allocated to activities or campaigns that promote a healthy lifestyle. This is because a lot of diseases nowadays are actually the direct result of people’s unhealthy habits. For example, children who eat fast food on a daily basis commonly can suffer from a range of health issues, such as weight problems and obesity. These diseases can be prevented if people are made more aware of the severe consequences of an unhealthy diet. In addition, there are a number of incurable diseases, such as HIV, AIDS and many forms of cancer. Of course, there are drugs and treatments that can prolong the life of patients suffering from such diseases, but the better solution in this case is obviously trying to prevent these diseases from occurring, instead of trying to cure them, which can often place a heavy burden on patients’ families, and on society as a whole.

On the other hand, the treatment for people who are already ill should also receive adequate funding, due to the fact that some diseases simply cannot be prevented. People living in many tropical or coastal regions, for example, are highly vulnerable to water-borne diseases after a natural disaster such as a tsunami or heavy flooding. Additionally, there are also some illnesses and disorders that are inherited. For instance, if a person suffers from asthma, it is highly likely that his children will also contract respiratory related diseases, regardless of their diet or lifestyle. These mentioned cases would be almost impossible for people or the government to prevent, and therefore money needs to be spent on the treatment of patients.

In conclusion, both promoting a healthy lifestyle and spending money on the treatment of people who are already ill are equally important in the fight against diseases, and each country should develop flexible plans to adapt to different situations.

Sample 4:

The world health care system has been facing enormous pressure due to frequent outbreaks of diseases. It is argued that the state should increase their spending on raising the citizens’ awareness of a healthy way of living rather on providing timely treatments when the diseases have occurred.

Without question, “prevention is better than cure”, therefore the government should have policies in making its people adopt a healthy lifestyle. Through national and local awareness enhancement campaigns, people can be better informed of potential health risks associated with their bad habits. For example, instead of consuming too much fast food on a daily basis, teenagers or busy workers will therefore choose more nutritious foods or try to cook by themselves, which can prevent the high incidence of obesity, diabetes and other fatal diseases.

In addition to their long-term positive effects on people’s frame of mind, such campaigns are cost-effective. What needed is budget on conveying messages on the mass media like television, newspapers or conducting various workshops to share advice and experience to the public. By contrast, the medical treatment fees for a single patient with cancer disease like liver or lung cancer can amount to dozens of millions or billions, meaning a huge financial burden to the state and the family.

However, the government cannot ignore its obligation in improving their medical system as well as assisting the already ill patients covering their medical fees. The hospital fees are so expensive in some countries that only the rich can afford, so the government’s role in offering aid for treating the sick is a moral duty. As well as this, constructing more hospitals and buying modern equipment should also be put into consideration as it is more effective in the short run.

In conclusion, raising the level of public awareness is more important, but the government cannot neglect its concern on the supply of medical treatment for those currently being ill.

Sample 5:

It is sometimes said that the state should spend money on the prevention of illnesses through promoting a healthy lifestyle rather than on the remedies of ill patients. From my perspective, while the former investment has an important part to play, I believe that it is by no means more important than recovering ill patients.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why the promotion of a healthy lifestyle should receive funding from the government. Firstly, this source of funding could help solve the problems of an unhealthy lifestyle, which is pervasive in modern societies and which causes a range of debilitating diseases. For instance, obesity and heart diseases often result from the lack of exercise and a cholesterol-rich diet. These health problems can be prevented through propagation and public campaigns that raise awareness among citizens about the associated risks of unhealthy food. Secondly, despite the development of medicine and healthcare systems, a lot of illnesses still remain incurable. For example, in many forms of cancer, the disease cannot be cured completely even after exorbitant and painful courses of treatment, which is regrettable as many of these cancers could have been negated with a healthy lifestyle.

On the other hand, the allocation of a reasonable proportion of public money to treating the ill is of the same significance. It is a fact that a number of diseases are hereditary. In other words, they are passed from parents to their child in the genes and cannot be prevented in any way. For example, a child whose parents have diabetes is highly likely to suffer from this genetic disorder as he ages. In these cases, neither a healthy lifestyle nor a good diet could ensure a clean bill of health, thus highlighting the role of treatment. Moreover, the expenses of medical care and medicines are getting higher, especially for some serious inheritable illnesses. In these cases, the medical bill could pose a serious financial burden on the ill, who would need financial support from the state to alleviate the problem.

In conclusion, it is certainly true that the government should invest money in promoting a healthy lifestyle among all citizens, but this is by no means the only way public money should be distributed since, in many circumstances, costly treatment of the ill cannot be neglected.

Sample 6:

Many people believe that instead of being spent on curing the sick, public money should be used for illness prevention by encouraging people’s living in a healthy way. Personally, I totally agree with this point of view, and supporting arguments will be presented in the following essay.

There are many reasons why illnesses should be prevented rather than be cured. Firstly, it is a fact that many of them nowadays are caused by unhealthy lifestyles and habits. For example, those who consume too much fast food and lead a sedentary lifestyle are likely to suffer from the risks of obesity and cardiovascular diseases like heart attack and heart failure. People can minimize the chance of getting these illnesses if they actively change their eating practice and do physical activity on a regular basis. Secondly, scientists nowadays still have yet to find medical treatment for some incurable diseases like HIV, AIDS, different types of cancers and especially the Covid-19 epidemic. Therefore, a more ideal approach, in this case, is apparently trying to lower the number of infected cases, which can clearly alleviate the burden on the patients themselves and their families.

Furthermore, prevention is less costly than cure in the long term. Obviously, effective preventive solutions stop people from contracting acute diseases, which will lead to fewer sick people being hospitalized. This not only reduces patients’ spending on hospitalization, drugs, and other medical fees but also lowers government expenditure on healthcare services. For example, during the raging outbreak of Covid-19 these days, worldwide authorities are sparing no effort to vaccinate their citizens with the hope of halting the spread of the pandemic. This means the amount of public money saved can be, otherwise, reallocated to improving other fields of the society, such as education, economy, and infrastructure, as well as promoting sustainable social development and people’s well-being

All things considered, I wholeheartedly agree that prevention is better than cure and that the state budget should be spent on preventive solutions, for the advantages given above.

Sample 7:

In contemporary society, the allocation of public funds has become a subject of intense debate. Some argue that it is more prudent to invest resources in fostering a healthy lifestyle to prevent illnesses, while others believe that treating those already afflicted should be the primary focus. I concur with the former perspective, as preventive measures not only contribute to overall well-being but also alleviate the burden on healthcare systems.

To begin with, fostering a healthy lifestyle has multifaceted benefits. By channeling public funds into educational campaigns, fitness programs, and nutritional initiatives, societies can empower individuals to make informed choices regarding their well-being. For instance, public health campaigns can disseminate information about the importance of regular exercise, balanced diets, and stress management. Such initiatives may not only promote physical health but also contribute to mental well-being, reducing cases of lifestyle-related diseases such as obesity, diabetes, and cardiovascular issues.

Furthermore, investing in public health programs can substantially reduce the economic burden associated with treating chronic illnesses. To illustrate, a study published in the American Journal of Preventive Medicine found that investments in preventive health services resulted in significant reductions in future healthcare expenditures, which is particularly crucial nowadays given the global rise in these expenses. By curbing the prevalence of diseases through proactive measures, governments can redirect resources towards other urgent needs, such as education and infrastructure, in order to elevate the general living standards of their citizens.

In conclusion, while treating existing illnesses is undeniably crucial, prioritizing the promotion of a healthy lifestyle through preventive measures offers a more sustainable and economically viable solution. By promoting individual responsibility and reducing the prevalence of diseases, societies can achieve long-term health benefits and alleviate the strain on healthcare resources.

Sample 8:

The debate over whether public funds should prioritize promoting a healthy lifestyle to avert illnesses or be channeled towards treating the already sick is a contentious one. This essay posits that investing in preventive health measures is fundamentally more crucial than allocating funds for treatment. The discussion will delve into the long-term economic benefits of prevention and the enhancement of public health standards.

Firstly, the economic rationale behind prioritizing prevention over treatment is compelling. Preventive measures, such as public awareness campaigns and subsidized healthy food options, can significantly reduce the prevalence of chronic diseases like diabetes and heart conditions. For instance, a study by the Harvard School of Public Health revealed that for every dollar spent on preventive health programs, there is a return of about $2.71 in reduced treatment costs and increased productivity. This is because preventing diseases not only saves immediate healthcare costs but also averts the loss of productivity due to illness, thereby bolstering the economy.

Moreover, investing in preventive healthcare fosters a healthier society. Initiatives such as community exercise programs and nutritional education in schools equip individuals with the knowledge and tools necessary to make healthier lifestyle choices. Countries like Japan have successfully implemented nationwide health promotion programs, resulting in some of the highest life expectancies in the world. These measures underscore the importance of a proactive approach to health, emphasizing that a healthy populace is foundational to societal progress and well-being.

In conclusion, while the treatment of illnesses is undeniably important, the allocation of public funds towards promoting a healthy lifestyle offers more significant long-term benefits. By prioritizing prevention, not only can economic savings be realized, but the overall health of the population can also be improved. This strategy ensures a more sustainable healthcare system and a vibrant, productive society.

Sample 9:

Allocating public resources towards fostering a health-conscious society rather than exclusively treating ailments post-diagnosis presents a profound debate. This discourse supports the former approach, asserting its superiority due to its long-term sustainability and broader health improvements. The ensuing argument will explore the effectiveness of preventative measures in enhancing public health and reducing healthcare burdens.

Preventive health strategies extend beyond mere cost savings, embodying a vision for a resilient, informed society. For instance, implementing mandatory physical education in schools and community-based fitness initiatives can significantly mitigate the risk of obesity and associated non-communicable diseases. Such interventions, reflective of the Finnish model which saw a dramatic decline in heart disease mortality rates through national lifestyle campaigns, illustrate the transformative power of preemptive action. This approach not only alleviates the financial strain on healthcare systems but also cultivates a culture of wellness, empowering individuals to take charge of their health.

Additionally, the ripple effect of preventive healthcare transcends individual benefits, fostering a societal environment where healthy living is normative and accessible. Urban planning that encourages active transportation, like cycling and walking, coupled with the provision of green spaces, serves as a testament to the societal benefits of preventive measures. These initiatives, akin to those in Copenhagen, Denmark, not only enhance physical health but also contribute to environmental sustainability and community well-being, showcasing a holistic approach to public health.

In conclusion, investing in preventive healthcare is a wise and ethical choice, offering both economic and societal benefits. It not only leads to a healthier future but also reflects a commitment to enhancing every citizen's quality of life. Redirecting public funds towards health promotion and disease prevention is essential for sustainable development.

Sample 10:

It is widely argued that spending government funds to promote salubrious living style among citizens is more crucial than treating terminally ill patients. I strongly agree with this statement, because rather than allowing diseases to develop and lavishly spending money on patients in critical conditions, proper preventive measures with changing lifestyle can save both invaluable lives and money.

The most popular preventative measure to save life and public fund is introducing a healthy life. In fact, this alone protects people from spending money on treatments for most of the precedent diseases. In other words, the cost of healthy living is considerably cheaper compared to the capital needed for the scientific research and treatments for the perennially ill patients. For instance, the diseases like Metastatic cancer, Cystic fibrosis are almost incurable but take a massive amount of money to continue treatment. Studies show that the cost of one year treatment of 100 patients with these diseases is equivalent to the amount that a government needs to finance for almost one million citizens’ basic well beings.

In addition, preventive actions with lifestyle work miraculously with those who are susceptible to inheritable diseases. We know that people are mostly vulnerable to suffer from the diseases that their ancestors did. Considering this, governments can save huge public funds if they sort out the group of people who are potential to inherit rare genetic diseases. If these people are brought to a master plan to follow a customised lifestyle which could contribute to withstand the potential genetic diseases, both governments and individuals can save a massive potential medical expense.

In conclusion, I agree that governments’ preventive measure with lifestyle modification, targeting diseases and potential patient types, is not only cheaper for individuals and governments, but also more effective and safer than studying and curing the diseases in hindsight.

Sample 11:

In today's complex healthcare landscape, the allocation of public funds presents a pressing concern. Some think the government should direct resources toward promoting a healthy lifestyle to prevent diseases, others believe we should primarily focus on the treatment of patients. I totally agree with the first statement and there are some reasons to support my opinion.

When it comes to cost-effectiveness, preventive measures, such as vaccination campaigns and educational initiatives on nutrition and exercise, are far less expensive than treating advanced diseases. For example, the cost of administering vaccines to prevent infectious diseases like measles or polio is significantly lower than the expenses associated with treating patients who contract these diseases. This economical method allows for the allocation of resources to a broader spectrum of the population, thereby reaching a larger number of individuals.

Moreover, directing public money toward motivating individuals to embrace practices and choices that lead to overall well-being can significantly minimize the healthcare burden. By focusing on prevention, healthcare systems are less inundated with patients suffering from avoidable illnesses. This reduction results in shorter waiting times for treatments, better patient care, and an overall more efficient and responsive healthcare system. For instance, countries with robust public health campaigns against smoking have seen a decrease in smoking-related conditions, leading to reduced strain on healthcare resources.

Additionally, having a healthy lifestyle plays a crucial role in preventing epidemics. Timely and extensive vaccination campaigns, for instance, have been instrumental in averting large-scale outbreaks of contagious diseases. When a significant portion of the population is vaccinated against diseases like influenza or COVID-19, the spread of these illnesses is curtailed, preventing them from reaching epidemic proportions.

In conclusion, it is evident that spending public budget on educating people to lead a healthy lifestyle is a prudent and forward-thinking approach. It not only proves to be cost-effective but also alleviates the burden on healthcare systems and effectively prevents epidemics. While treatment remains vital, a focus on prevention represents an indispensable cornerstone of public health policies, ensuring the well-being and vitality of society at large.

Sample 12:

Health funds are always included in every country's national budget since the early stages of the world. Every year the government has allocated a lot of money for the prevention and cure of the public most common diseases. It is agreed that spending public money to promote a healthy lifestyle for the prevention of illnesses is more importantly than for the treatment of already ill people. This argument will be proven that prevention is better than cure, and already ill people are expected to be at their terminal life.

For one, spending state funds on promoting a healthy lifestyle to prevent illnesses is better because prevention is better than cure. For instance, when I was working as an RHU (Rural Health Unit) nurse in a small community called San Pablo situated in the province of Pangasinan in the Philippines; we disseminated multivitamins and done vaccinations for children in the area because our government had a program called "Eliminate Diseases by Prevention", so we, as health officials and workers implemented it. It is actually a good campaign because no children in that particular community have had serious children’s diseases. Thus, they became healthier and the public money has been used wisely.

In addition to this, it is no sense using the people's money for those who are already ill because it is expected that they will be at their terminal life. For instance, in the ICU (Intensive Care Unit) of Urdaneta Sacred Heart Hospital where I am currently assigned to a hospital as a duty nurse, we have a terminally ill colon cancer patient, Mrs Corazon Cojuanco. When she is in her final stage and any further medications or treatments will not work in prolonging her life. So, cancer patients who are at their last stage, such as colon, lung or breast, should not be funded anymore because it is useless. It is really better to allocate the money for the promotion of healthy lifestyles.

In conclusion, spending more public money on a healthier lifestyle is better because prevention is always better than treating an already ill patient as well as it is no sense using it because they are already at their terminal stage of their life. Thus, it has proven that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. Thus, improving healthy lifestyles is highly recommended.

Sample 13:

Nature is the mother, origin and root of everything. Everything is part of nature, and the humankind is not an exception for that. Yet, we, mankind, have a distinctive difference with other parts of nature, the capability of thinking or so-called “Rationale”. This ability sometimes leads to cruel actions, for example, neglecting ill or old people. Nowadays, some people engaged in a debate that is involving healthy people and those who are sick and ill. In greater detail, the discussion is on the subject of spending money for normal and healthy people instead of taking care of ill people. In the following, reasons and examples are stated about this debate.

Every person has heard this proverb: “Preventing is cheaper than cure”. This generates a theory which one of its basis is leaving ill people and focusing on future. Actually, it is a rule of nature that weak should be killed. At first sight, it is true but when you look at it from above it is an absolutely wrong rule. A life cycle of a person consists of birth, childhood, youth, growing old and eventually death. Considering the topic of our essay, being old or ill is associated with diseases. It is nature of oldness. On the whole, ill people, whether they are old or not, shouldn’t be evaluated by their health status. History is a great witness supports for this fact, for example, “Steven Hawking”, the great scientist of physics. He could not even move his fingers but contributed to the significant developments in the world.

On the other hand, a person is not just body and physic. Everybody has a soul, memory and feelings. When we intend to forget them and just considering future, thinking with regards to spending and saving money for next generation and future, this origin a great harm to unhealthy people.

To sum up, it can be argued that we humans shouldn’t care just about pleasant and apparently right people and occasions. Ill people are like us. They feel, enjoy and think. They should have behaved well and considered via spending money or paying attention to them.

Sample 14:

Healthy lifestyle and healthy living are two commonly used terms nowadays. With the technological advancement and modern lifestyle, people are diverted from keeping themselves fit and healthy. The issue of promoting health is quite in a vogue. Some people think that more money should be spent on creating awareness among the people, instead of treating the ones who are already ill. The below paragraphs will analyse the problem in detail before coming to an appropriate conclusion.

With the modernization and urbanisation more and more people are exposed to diseases nowadays. People are becoming ill and affected by various debilitating diseases like TB, Diabetes and Cancer. Individual himself cannot be totally blamed for this condition. It is both the government and the rapidly changing lifestyle of the people, responsible for their health problems. It is, therefore, the duty of the authority to look after its people. The government must spend a little amount of money on the health issues created in the country. This can be done in various ways.

Firstly, there should be awareness created among the people about the healthy living. Health care programs, campaigns, seminars etc. should be organised by the authority to inform people about the consequences of an unhealthy lifestyle. Issues concerning proper sanitation, balanced diet, regular exercise should be dealt with. Secondly, health care facilities should be improved; for example, diagnostic facilities like X-ray, MRI should be available to the patient in order to start the treatment as early as possible. Lastly, since each and every person cannot afford the cost of his treatment, those should be taken care of. Moreover, helping ill and poor people in terms of money for the sake of humanity can be the one reason.

To conclude, I neither completely agree nor disagree with the statement that money should solely be spent on promoting health and not on treating people who are ill. In fact, expenditure should be done equally for overcoming both the problems. Treatment should be carried out with the awareness programmes so that spreading of this problem can be prevented further.

Sample 15:

Health is a major concern and hot topic all the time to discuss. Major diseases are increasing, and quality of life is decreasing nowadays. I believe that prevention is better than cure. I strongly agree that governments should spend money and time to promote healthy lifestyles, in order to prevent the diseases than spending money that who are suffering from terminal illness.

Firstly, terminal illness, like cancer, renal disease, delirium, all this cannot be cured can only manage the symptoms experienced by clients. Secondly, how much money we spend on these diseases also only can increase the lifespan and not be able to provide quality of life. However, all this terminal illness can be preventable, if they take care themselves from maintaining healthy habits. Thirdly, to treat and manage these terminal diseases the cost of treatment is very high. However, people use insurance and med save, still not enough that money they need to top-up additionally to take treatment. Many clients they unable to manage them and hospitalised frequently.

Coming to the prevention of diseases, many people were educated in this modern world, so that easy to educate everybody on how to prevent diseases and as well as to promote quality of life. The government should spend the money to advertise on healthy eating habits, management of stress, diseases caused by drinking alcohol and smoking. Many major diseases caused by long-term diseases, for example, diabetes and hypertension. The government should conduct free health camps at least twice a year to screen the people and give the health education how to manage diabetes, hypertension. So that people can manage their health at home and also can prevent major diseases caused by them.

To sum up, many major diseases are caused by poor healthy habits, stress and long-term diseases. So that I strongly agree that government spend the money on advertising on how to prevent illness than cure the terminal illness.

Sample 16:

The state spending on public health has become a widely perpetual concern. Some individuals argue that these already scarce resources should be reserved for the prevention of lifestyle-related illness. In my opinion, the government should focus more on the prevention of illnesses rather than medical treatment.

On the one hand, certain acute diseases, non-preventable regardless of governmental efforts to promote a healthy lifestyle, still need a state budget allocation for medical care. One of the primary duties of the government is to provide publicly funded healthcare to the whole population. Therefore, covering therapeutic and medical costs for those already developing symptoms of acute conditions would be a significant part of that duty, helping mitigate the financial burden associated with those maladies. In other words, a dearth of investment in treatment would be devastating patients’ individual life and wreaking havoc on overall social welfare.

On the other hand, promoting a healthy lifestyle as a prevention strategy is meant to avoid the entire economic burden of chronic diseases, affecting a significant proportion of the population. Those conditions, occurring across different life course stages, share common preventable risk factors relating to unhealthy behaviors, including poor nutrition, inadequate physical activity, and chronic heavy drinking and smoking. If left unchecked, trends in chronic diseases risk factors combined with a growing and aging population will increase the numbers of people living with chronic conditions, later causing the heavy burden of illness in patients, their families, and the community. Therefore, given a scarcity of state budgets for various public services, the government should directly provide information, including health education campaigns, or regulating information, such as limits on advertising and guidelines on food labelings. As a result, positive changes in individual lifestyle would follow, helping them withstand the ravages of time, and saving the state budget for other economically beneficial needs, such as technological investment, education, and infrastructure, rather than spending on treatment.

In conclusion, while allocating its healthcare budget in treatment, the government should promote a healthy lifestyle to avoid preventable chronic diseases due to its economic rationality.

Sample 17:

It is said that taxpayers' money should be used to encourage the prevention of illnesses based on a healthy lifestyle rather than to focus on treating patients. I personally find it hard to disagree with this view.

Admittedly, the government is supposed to provide the general public with free healthcare. The tax revenues that the government receives from its citizens should be allocated for social services, one of which is healthcare. If the government did not take care of ill people, how could they afford medical fees which are becoming more and more costly?

However, what I consider to be more advisable is that governmental money should be spent on the promotion of how to lead a healthy life. Firstly, if all people become fully convinced of the importance of choosing healthy diets involving less meat and more vegetables instead of consuming junk food, they will start to adopt such a healthy lifestyle and, therefore, will be able to avoid a host of health problems. It goes without saying that prevention is better than cure, but the problem is so many people in modern society are significantly affected by the increasing advertising of junk food nearly everywhere, which should be stopped by the government. Secondly, it should be regularly pointed out by the authorities that living a healthy life by working out on a daily basis will result in fewer patients visiting hospitals, thus reducing the amount of money spent on hospitalization and other medical fees. Obviously, this will help alleviate the government's burden of taking care of patients.

All things considered, what I firmly believe is the spending of governmental money should be centered on illness prevention by raising public awareness of regular exercise and healthy eating habits.

Sample 18:

Recently, there is an argument claiming that taxpayers’ money should be spent on promoting a healthy lifestyle rather than curing particular diseases. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and this essay will discuss several compelling reasons to support the position. 

To begin with, leading a heart-healthy lifestyle is a more enjoyable experience in comparison to staying under medical treatment. There are a variety of cooking recipes available for people to prepare the fresh ingredients that contain the nutrients needed for body’s growth. Hence, it has been proven that different cooking methods and presentations will stimulate the appetite, mood and body of the diners more. On the other hand, medicines are harder to take as some might have unpleasant flavors, cause indigestion, or damaging side effects to patients such as physical pains (sore skin, headache) and appearance (loss of hair, skin reactions), which can also impact mental well-beings. Thus, rather than allocating a huge sum of budget on medical treatments, it is a wiser gamble to allocate more investments on finding balanced diets that provide abundant nourishment.

Some might opine that staying fit and healthy is lavish, especially for the underprivileged. They argue that hitting the gym and purchasing optimal diets daily are out of the financial capacity of the majority of the citizens. Despite this, the essay believes that this thought is invalid. There are in fact a multitude of home exercises and nutrients that can be found in a variety of organic ingredients so buyers can opt for the choices that are suitable for one’s specific need and budget. Furthermore, following a healthy way of living helps improve the immune system to decrease the chances of facing deadly diseases. In the long term, the price avoided from certain medical treatments and medicines can amount to a much larger fortune than trying to eat healthy. Consequently, the thinking that curing saves more than pursuing a healthy lifestyle is inaccurate. 

In conclusion, this essay reiterates the statement that instead of tackling the disease when it has occurred, prevention by living healthily is a better way of using public budget. 

Sample 19:

It has been suggested that more public funds should be allocated to encourage the prevention of illness than the treatment of those who are already sick. I disagree with this view and in this essay, I will explain why. 

The main rationale behind the promotion of healthy lifestyles is that it can save resources in the long run. Many diseases can be prevented by an active lifestyle and healthy diet. For instance, the increasing obesity rates result from people’s sedentary lifestyles and poor diets, which is arguably easy to change. However, the fact that the problem is still pervasive stems from a combination of factors ranging from the lack of awareness of a healthy lifestyle to the ubiquitous advertising of unhealthy food. If the government allocates more resources to solve the root causes, not only will a considerable amount of money be saved in the future but the potential miseries of having an illness can also be prevented.   

Nevertheless, I believe the treatment of people who are already sick is of equal importance. Firstly, not all diseases are a product of unhealthy lifestyles. For example, many people live a very healthy life without smoking and refrain from fast food or alcohol but still find themselves diagnosed with cancer. Alternatively, the outbreak of an epidemic such as Covid-19 is not explained by people’s sedentary living. Therefore, it would be immoral not to treat these people when the problem is not their fault. Secondly, given the need to cure them, without the government’s funding, this matter would fall into the hands of only private companies, which might bring about another problem. Pharmaceutical companies are likely to keep high prices for, say, a treatment procedure for a selected high-income (therefore more profitable) segment of the population. However, with governmental investment, patients do not have to worry about such a scenario. 

In conclusion, while the promotion of healthy ways of life is certainly logical, it does not imply the treatment of people who are already sick is not worth investing public money on. Instead, there should be a balance to make sure the whole population benefits from their tax money. 

Sample 20:

In recent years, arguments over public funds on healthcare have mushroomed in many parts of the world. While I am convinced that investment in propaganda campaigns should be the government’s top priority, I believe the provision of medical treatment for patients is also an imperative category.

On the one hand, it is essential to know that raising people’s consciousness of healthy lifestyles is a sustainable solution to reduce the likelihood of having diseases among humans. Specifically, because many chronic diseases, including diabetes and hepatitis, derive from people’s bad living habits, the encouragement in changing lifestyle can bring positive outcomes. For example, people are likely to not be prone to the two mentioned health problems by narrowing down the amount of sugar and alcohol they consume every day. Moreover, those campaigns save not only the government budget but also individuals’ money. Practicing scientific lifestyles with strong disciplines enables people to cut down the expenses on medical insurance and hospital fees. Therefore, the government’s investment in this promotion strategy is pivotal to nourish citizens and their countries’ prosperity.

On the other hand, a passive approach is a precondition to fulfill any promotion of advancing people’s lifestyles. Firstly, providing treatment for people, who are already ill, belongs to morality. Because the purpose of inspiring good living habits is to improve a community’s health, it is contradictory not to cure present patients. Accordingly, the government should prioritize saving those people. Secondly, there are some diseases, which cannot be prevented entirely by the shift in lifestyles, especially heritable ones. In this case, healthy lifestyles are responsible for discouraging the health implications from getting worse, while medical treatment is a prerequisite for saving people. Conversely, the lack of treatment can lead to a pessimistic scenario when people diagnosing hereditary problems are in danger of their lives.

In conclusion, while the necessity of public funds to encourage positive lifestyles is undeniable, treating ill individuals medically is crucial to improve society’s health.

Sample 21:

In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid on the public budget for medical expenditure. There is a school of thought which contends that government should provide more financial support to encourage a healthy lifestyle and in turn prevent serious illness than medical treatment. I completely agree with this contention.

Firstly, healthy daily life is the foundation of individual`s development whereas trauma indicates tragedies to families. Research has shown a significant correlation between cancer rates and unhealthy lifestyles. For instance, cases of lung cancer would have risen had the Australian government not enforced stem legislations and released innumerable public service advertisements. Therefore, investing in illness prevention is much more valuable for citizens to enjoy a life of high quality.

Secondly, from the aspect of economic cost, curing a patient who is suffering from serious illness is far more expensive. The treatment for AIDS exemplifies this precisely. Nowadays, the investment in the medical research and development has been counted in million dollars. Additionally, an overwhelming majority of countries provide enormous subsidies on AIDS diagnosis and medical treatment. Compared to this, the relatively small expenses on educating and advertising healthy lifestyle seems to be worthwhile. Thus, allocating modest government budget to notify the negative results and discourage the dangerous activities can save much expenditure overall.

Henceforth, it can be confidently concluded that prevention is better than cure. The government, levying taxation from people, has the responsibility to protect dwellers from nightmarish diseases and thereby devote to maintain a healthy societal environment.

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Studies have suggested that nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons? And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?

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Sample 1:

In recent years, there has been a growing concern about the increasing amount of time children spend watching television compared to engaging in active or creative activities. This essay will explore the reasons behind this shift in behaviour and propose measures to address this issue.

Several factors can explain why children today spend more time watching TV than in the past. Firstly, the widespread availability and accessibility of television and digital media have significantly expanded the options for entertainment. With the rise of streaming platforms and on-demand content, children have unlimited access to a wide range of programmes and shows at their fingertips. The convenience and variety offered by these platforms make it tempting for children to spend prolonged periods in front of screens.

Secondly, the busy and hectic lifestyle of modern families plays a role in children's increased TV consumption. Parents often have demanding work schedules, leaving limited time for quality family activities or supervision. As a result, children may turn to television as a convenient and easily accessible form of entertainment and companionship.

To address the issue of excessive TV watching among children, several measures can be taken. Firstly, it is crucial to promote a balanced and active lifestyle through education and awareness campaigns. Schools and parents should emphasise the importance of engaging in physical activities, creative pursuits, and social interactions. Encouraging children to participate in sports, arts, and community programmes by parents and teachers can divert their attention away from excessive screen time.

Secondly, parental involvement is crucial in regulating and monitoring children's TV viewing habits. Parents should establish clear guidelines and set reasonable limits on screen time. Creating a designated "screen-free" time during the day, such as meal times or family activities, can encourage alternative forms of engagement and interaction.

To conclude, while it is true that children today spend more time watching television than engaging in active or creative pursuits, this issue can be addressed through a multi-faceted approach. It is essential to recognize the impact of excessive TV watching on children and take proactive measures to ensure a healthy and balanced upbringing.

Sample 2:

Nowadays, television programmes have become the main sources of entertainment and leisure time activity for many children, unlike in the past. In fact, most children are addicted to TV programmes and have no time for meaningful or creative activities. The availability of numerous channels and streaming services, easy access to satellite TV channels, and the lack of proper guidelines for children have risen this phenomenon. Luckily there are ways to address this issue effectively and parents have to take the major role here.

To begin with the causes for children's addiction to TV programmes, it can be said that the availability of various channels, including satellite TV channels, with diverse means of entertainment attracts children to watch TV all day long. Consequently, youngsters become addicted to watching TV and are not interested in innovative, creative and sports activities. For example, both my nephews, who are around 6- and 8-years old, spend their time watching TV rather than taking traditional hobbies or playing outdoors in the evening.

Again, bygone are the days when a small percentage of households in a country owned a television. On the contrary, TVs are ubiquitous, and they are connected to satellite TV channels and streaming services, giving young children access to virtually endless programmes. The easy access to TV channels has also been sparked by the lack of guidelines by parents who are too busy to spend quality time with their children and use TV programmes to keep their children busy.

Effective measures are there to curb this problem. First, parents need to spend more quality time with their children and get engaged in outdoor activities as well as good hobbies to deter children from watching TV all day long and have meaningful leisure activities. Parents should allow children to watch suitable TV programmes for a certain period of time each day, if required watch those programmes together, and set examples for their children by doing creative activities. Consequently, children will be more interested in spending time with their parents and in the process, break their addiction to watching TV.

To conclude, children spend much time watching TV because of the easy access to numerous channels and the lack of zeals and guidelines from parents to do useful things. To address this issue, children must be motivated, guided and accompanied by parents to do useful activities rather than watching just TV.

Sample 3:

There has been a worrying trend that children watch an excessive amount of television and do not engage much in active or creative activities. This trend can be ascribed to a number of reasons, and it must be addressed by definite actions.

Reasons for the trend vary. The primary reason is that children’s television programmes are being broadcast all day with addictive contents, such as vivid and colourful animations. Cartoon Network and Disney Channel with their all-day-long series of animation shows are an evident example of this. Another clear reason is that parents nowadays are busy with their work, so they want children to focus on an activity that does not require much of their attention such as watching television. These two reasons make children spend more time in front of the television screen; this sedentary lifestyle prevents them from participating in active or creative activities.

A number of strong measures must be implemented to tackle the issue. The first solution is limiting the amount of time that a child can watch television. This could be done by activating the parental control mode and setting a fixed operating time limit on their television set. Another feasible solution is that parents must spend more time with their children and together they could engage in outdoor or creative activities. For example, parents could form a family sport team that practices on a regular basis, which may appeal to children more than television.

To conclude, there are obvious reasons why children watch too much television and spend little time on active and creative activities. This negative trend could be tackled by a number of remedies, such as activating the parental control mode on television sets.

Sample 4:

Today children spend more time watching television than at any point in the past. The reason for this is the development of online streaming websites and parents should eschew smartphones to curb this trend towards passivity.

The main reason that many children today spend an outsized amount of time watching television is that it is widely available on streaming websites. YouTube was the earliest, and now the most popular, streaming website for video content. Children are often allowed to watch it on smartphones or iPads. The more recent rise of streaming websites like Netflix and Hulu provides the same experience as television on the internet. Simply put, children spend more time watching because they have the ability to choose whatever show they want, pause it, and binge watch TV shows on a variety of portable devices with limited adult supervision.

In order to discourage children from watching television, parents should not give their children smartphones under any circumstances. This is the first step that responsible parents must undertake. Once children are no longer tempted by phones, it is much easier to get them interested in creative outlets. Parents can sign up their children for art or music lessons. They could encourage them to do art at home and instead of putting a TV in their room, fill it with books and art supplies. Children’s natural curiosity and artistic energy will naturally take over from that point and parents then need only supervise, guide and intervene when called upon.

In conclusion, parents can counterbalance the rise of streaming by banning portable devices and stocking up on art supplies. Unfortunately, it will take a concerted effort from the majority of parents to prevent children without devices from being ostracised socially.

Sample 5:

Research has indicated that children’s screen time has increased, while the time they spend on physical and creative activities is less. This essay discusses possible reasons for this and measures that can be taken to encourage children to do more physical and creative activities.

There are some reasons why children today tend to watch television excessively and spend less time on other activities. The first reason is that many parents feel afraid to let their children play outdoors because of the dangers of heavy traffic and the lack of a safe environment for them to play in, and they are too busy working to spend quality time with them. As a result, they are kept at home for safety and watching television, therefore, becomes the most popular way for them to entertain themselves. Another reason is that the number of television programmes targeting children has drastically increased. As a result, children can effortlessly be attracted by the fascinating characters and catchy music of these programmes and willingly spend hours watching them. 

Some simple measures can be implemented to encourage children to do more physical and creative activities. First of all, parents should spend more time going out and playing sports with their children on the weekend. This is a great opportunity to boost their engagement in outdoor play and help them stay away from watching television. Another measure is that parents should limit their children’s screen time by setting boundaries. For example, setting the rule of offsetting the time watching television with double book reading time can be done to encourage children to read more.

In conclusion, parental nervousness about their children’s safety and the increasing number of TV shows for children are the two main reasons for the rise of children’s screen time. Spending more time playing sports at the weekend with children and limiting their screen time by setting boundaries can be done by parents to encourage their children to do more physical and creative activities.

Sample 6:

Laurence J. Peter has rightly said that ‘Television has changed the child from an irresistible force to an immovable object.’ After coming home from school, children spend a lot of time in watching TV instead of playing outdoor games and pursuing other creative hobbies like in the olden days. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss the causes of this phenomenon and also suggest some ways forward.

The first and foremost cause of this is that due to the satellite TV, this medium is available all the time. So much so, that some channels are exclusively dedicated to children. This has made it very easy for the parents who use TVs as babysitters. Secondly, parents are often busy coping with the demands of today’s fast-paced life, and after returning home from a hectic day at work, they lack the energy to spend quality time with their children. In earlier times, there were very few programs for children and because of slower life, even parents spent time with children.

Furthermore, earlier there were joint families and grandparents were there to look after children and encourage them to play in parks. Nowadays, there are nuclear families and children are left alone which makes them spend time by watching TV. Finally, the cities have become concrete jungles and there is no place for children to play outdoor games. On top of that, the climate changes brought about by global warming make it difficult to pursue outdoor games.

The solutions are simple, but the onus is largely on the parents. They should give quality time to their children and ration their TV viewing hours. Even the time to play video games should be set properly. Outdoor activities should be encouraged, and neighborhood societies should be formed where children can play outdoor games with each other. Parks should be maintained properly so that children have a safe place to play outdoors.

In conclusion, I believe that television and video games, in moderation, can be a good thing. However, excess of everything is bad and therefore I believe parents should set viewing limits to ensure their children do not spend too much time watching TV and pursue other creative activities like they did in the earlier times.

Sample 7:

Nowadays, TV and smart phone have become the main sources of entertainment and spending leisure time for most of the children. In fact, most children are addicted to TV than doing meaningful or creative activities. As far as my opinion is concerned, I strongly believe that the availability of huge number of channels, easy access to satellite TV channels, lack of proper guideline and the lack of ambition in children are the main reasons behind the children’s inactivity and less participation in creative tasks.

It is taken for granted that children watch TV all the time due to the availability of various channels with diverse means of entertainment which appeal to them. Moreover, watching TV has become a permanent habit without which children would get bored and uninterested. Consequently, children will not be enthusiastic in doing anything creative owing to their addiction to TV. For example, my child is 6 years of age. He is used to spending his time on watching TV rather than on creating or making new things. I have been endeavoring to let him be active and do new things, but unfortunately, he always refuses to do so. This is surely because he is accustomed to this habit since his tender age. Again, bygone are the days when a small percentage of households in a country owned TV sets. On the contrary these days a single family owns more than one TV and all of them have satellite connections. Moreover, children these days can watch TV programmes from their smart phones using internet. The easy access to TV channels has made them prone to watch it more.

Another reason which deprives children of doing creative activities or new things is the lack of ambition and encouragement. Unfortunately, most of the parents do not motivate or encourage their children on what children do or intend to do. For example, my niece seems to be a pessimistic child because whenever she does or intends to do anything, her parents neglect her instead of encouraging and appraising her.

However, children can reduce the hours spent on watching TV and utilise those hours in doing creative or active things. If highly encouraged and motivated, children are expected to engage in those useful works and be accustomed to doing creative and effective activities, no matter how difficult or complex those works or activities are. Again, teachers in school should also motivate them to get involved in creative works. Parents should allow children to watch suitable TV programmes for a certain period of time each day and they should also get involved in different activities to set example for their children. Consequently, children will be highly effective and proficient when they become adults, and this surely is attributed to their past useful experience.

To conclude, children spend much time watching TV because of the easy access of numerous channels and the lack of zeal to do useful things. To eradicate this phenomenon, children must be motivated, guided and mentored.

Sample 8:

It is now a norm that children watch an excessive amount of television and do not engage much in active or creative activities. This trend can be ascribed to a number of factors such as the addictive nature of television and the lack of attention from parents. Parents can address this by taking definite actions including setting a strict limit on children’s television time and spending more time with their children on active and creative activities.

Reasons for the trend vary. The primary reason is that children’s television programmes are being broadcast all day with addictive content, such as vivid and colourful animation. Cartoon Network and Disney Channel with their day-long series of animation shows are evident examples of this. Another clear reason is that parents nowadays are busy with their work, so they want children to focus on an activity that does not require much of their attention, such as watching television. These two reasons tend to make children spend more time in front of the television screen instead of participating in active or creative activities.

A number of strong measures should be implemented to tackle the issue. The first solution is limiting the amount of time that a child can watch television. This could be done by activating the parental control mode and setting a fixed operating time limit on their television set.

Another feasible solution is that parents could spend more time with their children engaging in outdoor or creative activities. They could, for example, form a family sport team that practices on a regular basis, which may appeal to children more than television.

In conclusion, children tend to watch too much television because of the appealing content on various channels and the lack of playing time with their parents. They may start to join more active and creative activities once their parents spend more time with them and the parental control mode on television sets is activated.

Sample 9:

Excessive television watching and the lack of engagement in active or creative activities has become a common trend among children. This trend can be attributed to various factors such as the addictive nature of television and the busy schedules of parents. Addressing this issue requires parents to take action by setting limits on television time and spending more quality time with their children engaging in activities.

The addictive nature of television and the captivating content, such as vivid and colourful animation, provided by channels like Cartoon Network and Disney Channel, contribute to the excessive time spent in front of the television screen by children. Additionally, parents, who are often busy with work, tend to prefer activities that do not require much attention from them, such as watching television.

To address this issue, parents can take several measures. Firstly, they can limit their child’s television time by activating parental control mode and setting a fixed operating time limit on their television set. Secondly, parents can engage in outdoor or creative activities with their children, such as forming a family sport team that practices regularly, which could be more appealing to children than television.

In conclusion, the excessive amount of time spent by children in front of television screens and the lack of engagement in active or creative activities can be attributed to the addictive nature of television and the busy schedules of parents. Parents can take effective measures to tackle this issue by setting limits on television time and spending more quality time with their children engaging in activities.

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1 điểm

Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

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Sample 1:

The increasing amount of food waste the world over has become a grave problem that needs to be addressed urgently. While there are a host of reasons contributing to this issue, I believe that there are a great number of feasible solutions to tackle it.

The growing amount of discarded food can be ascribed to the devaluation of food items, which roots from the improving living standards. Nowadays, food is not a rarity but rather something that exists in abundance in many countries, especially in developed ones. The proliferation of consumerism has led to a surplus of foodstuffs, which means that people do not see it as a survival necessity but as a form of entertainment. Old money and new money alike buy food without thinking about its use and their food consumption rate, and as a result, products that are not eaten must be discarded.

To address this problem, definite actions need to be taken. To start with, governments should raise consumer’s awareness on conscious consumption of food items. Citizens should be taught how not to overbuy and overconsume, and instead reuse leftovers or portion their meals accordingly. This could be aided by the use of educational television programs or community campaigns hosted by local authorities and institutions. Secondly, implementing a fine for households which discard food more than the average dumping rate. What the government can do is to introduce a reasonable quota of food waste that each individual can discharge and levy a tax on those who exceed their quota. The accumulated fine can be used to process garbage food.

In conclusion, while there are several reasons behind the waste of food, namely consumer’s depreciation and food surplus, this problem can be alleviated by applying suitable measures like enhancing conscious food consumption awareness and imposing fines on heavy dumpers.

Sample 2:

There has been an ever-increasing trend that people discard an excessive amount of food waste from all corners of the world. This issue can be ascribed to a great number of reasons, and it must be addressed by definite actions.

The reasons for the issue vary. The primary reason is due to the higher standard of living, which results in the depreciation of food regarded as a physiological need in Maslow’s Hierarchy. Another clear reason is that young peoplem who make up for almost half of the world’s population, haven’t been cultivated an appreciation of food from the previous generation. This boils down to the exponential rise in food waste in recent years. These two main reasons have contributed to food loss, which takes place in all parts of the world.

A wide range of strong measures must be implemented to combat food waste. This first solution is that the government can develop some action plans to raise consumers’ awareness of food appreciation and becoming a more conscious consumer and mindful eater. This could be done by getting people involved in global food campaigns such as Think.Eat.Save anti-food waste campaign. In regard to food retailers, they can lend a helping hand by distributing posters or flyers to every single customer when they come across any shopping mall, food supermarket, etc., or sticking posters on the restaurants to encourage customers to use food economically and become a leftovers guru. These mentioned measures can definitely help shape a sustainable future.

To conclude, there are obvious reasons why there is a considerable magnitude of food wasted in much of the world. This negative trend could be tackled by a number of remedies, such as enhancing the public awareness of the significance of using food economically with the help of the government and food retailers.

Sample 3:

In recent years, there has been a concerning trend of people disposing of great amounts of food from virtually every corner of the world. This situation is even more condemnable as millions of poor people still go hungry in the less developed world. In this essay. I will attempt to point out the reasons behind this phenomenon as well as suggest ways for us to put a halt to food waste.

There are more than a handful of factors that cause food to be wasted, and I believe that overconsumption should be top on the list. When the average earnings of those working in developed countries can comfortably put enough food on the table for the whole family, people start to have a tendency to overbuy. Meals are being prepared in abundance and a recent study has shown that 15% of the cooked food in the United States actually end up in the bin once the 'feast' is over. Another reason for the large amount of food wasted, though less noticeable, is the ineffective coordination of packaging. What I meant by that is the forced expiration dates required by the central authorities actually discourage consumers from purchasing perfectly edible foods. Statistics have also revealed that a large proportion of food at the supermarkets never even reaches the end-customers and therefore has to be used for other purposes like feeding the animals or as fertilizers.

To address this problem, raising people's awareness is the key. People should be taught how to shop and cook responsibly. It is not like that there are no incentives for us to do so, as it is an efficient way to increase our savings; however, the tools might still be absent at the moment. Those in power could try to design TV shows highlighting the features of economical and efficient ways to process food, or they could also organize campaigns so that many people could rethink about the foods lying neatly in the cupboards and consider donating. Also, there needs to be a systematic classification of when and how foods go inedible. The current 'bests before' and expiration dates are sure too misleading for the mass to deal with.

In conclusion, there are clear reasons why a significant amount of food is still being wasted as we speak. The most effective solutions, in my opinion, include providing people with the knowledge of how to deal with food as well as change their perspective on the food expirations.

Sample 4:

Global food waste is perceived to be one of the most pressing problems. This essay discusses possible reasons for this and steps that can be taken to address the problem.

There are some reasons why the problem of food wastage is becoming increasingly serious. The first reason is that people’s shopping habits are manipulated by the increasing promotions of food. They tend to buy more food because of bulk buying discounts, but they often are too busy working to consume it all. As a result, households around the world are producing an immense amount of food waste every day. Another reason might be that many restaurants tend to offer large portion sizes as a part of their marketing strategy to attract customers. As a result, many customers cannot finish it all and their leftovers often end up going into the garbage later.

Some simple measures can be implemented to deal with the root causes of the problem. The first measure is that TV programmes about smart shopping can be promoted to educate people about the negative impacts of food promotions. For example, shoppers need to learn that bulk buying discounts are a false economy if much of the food will need to be thrown away. Another solution might be that restaurants should change their way to approach customers by optimizing their menu based on its quality instead of quantity. For example, they can hire a skilled chef to increase the flavor of dishes. Furthermore, governments should require by law for food waste to be given to farms.

In conclusion, people’s bad shopping habits and large portion sizes in restaurants are the main reasons for the increasingly serious problem of global food waste. Promoting TV programmes about smart shopping, marketing food by its flavor instead of quantity, and imposing laws requiring giving food waste to farms can be done to address this issue.

Sample 5:

The escalating issue of food waste, with millions of tons squandered daily worldwide, poses dire consequences for our environment, economy, and food security. Its manifestation and potential remedies are particularly noticeable in Vietnam, which can serve as a microcosm of the global predicament.

Unquestionably, there are multitudes of factors instigating this crisis. Overproduction and over-purchasing, driven by our incessant desire for variety and perfection, result in vast quantities of food being discarded. Concurrently, an inefficient supply chain, characterized by subpar storage and transportation, often leads to spoilage before it reaches consumers. At the household level, a lack of awareness and poor planning exacerbate this predicament, with individuals misunderstanding the implications of sell-by dates and preparing excessive quantities of food.

Fortunately, a myriad of strategies can be employed to mitigate food waste. Enhancing consumer education, particularly in Vietnam where traditional 'wet markets' dominate, could drastically curb over-purchasing. Further investment in the supply chain, focusing on improved refrigeration and transportation, could markedly reduce food spoilage. Simultaneously, legislative measures, such as requiring supermarkets to donate unsold food and relaxing aesthetic standards for produce, can prove highly effective. Lastly, promoting composting can ensure that food waste is converted into nutrient-rich soil.

Addressing food waste presents clear benefits. It carries environmental significance, reducing the methane emissions from decomposing food in landfills, which contributes heavily to climate change. Additionally, it resonates with economic efficiency, reducing the needless waste of resources. Importantly, it holds the potential to improve food security, with the saved food capable of feeding the needy.

However, implementing these solutions may encounter several hurdles. The initial cost, behavioral changes required, and existing regulatory barriers may deter their widespread adoption. Moreover, while these solutions may address symptoms of global hunger, they fail to tackle its root causes like poverty and unequal resource distribution.

In conclusion, while the colossal issue of food waste is complex and multifaceted, a combined approach involving consumer education, supply chain improvements, legislative changes, and composting can bring about significant improvements. As we continue to grapple with this issue, let us not forget that every morsel saved contributes to a more sustainable and equitable world.

Sample 6:

Food wastage has now become a big problem in many parts of the world. There are several factors that are attributable to this situation, and solutions need to be adopted to combat the issue.

Primarily, people have become wealthier than before. Increased personal wealth means that individuals no longer appreciate food, and they tend to throw food away after eating rather than storing it in the fridge for the next meal. Fresh vegetables, meat and fish at the supermarket are now sold at an affordable price for middle-class people, so many of them are willing to discard the food as soon as they satiate their hungry stomach.

Another reason is that the food industry has been developing fast, with a variety of choices and marketing techniques that encourage food spending. Television programs are often interrupted by food advertisements that are digitally altered to trigger the craving for a wide range of delicious food. It is, therefore, not surprising why consumers do not feel the need to preserve the food that they have not eaten for later use.

However, food wastage is not an intractable problem. The simplest measure the government can do is to step up campaigns to raise public awareness with the aim of changing public attitudes to food consumption. The deleterious effects of food waste on the environment should be highlighted via posters and television programs to draw the attention of the public to the problem. Also, a heavy tax ought to be imposed on the food industry, which may cause the price of everyday food to rise and consequently deter people from taking food for granted.

In conclusion, people throw food away after meals because of several reasons, which requires the government to take action to mitigate the problem.

100. Tự luận
1 điểm

In many countries, government spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

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Sample 1:

Recently, an ample amount of governmental investment money is being poured into the amelioration of the Internet supply. This phenomenon has its root from a host of factors, and I would discuss that there are various available ways to allocate this money more effectively.

To begin with, it is understandable why enhancing the quality of the Internet provision has become a key national investment portfolio. Firstly, with the availability of a better Internet connection, an extensive avenue of information is opened up for the inhabitants. Most residents would have omnipresent access to both international and local social news, and it has never been easier for those who live in remote areas to reach a wide range of information at a click of a button. Secondly, an improved Internet supply can facilitate the operation process of governmental companies. With stably-functioning online platforms, corporations today would no longer find it difficult to approach their customers, manage their employees or organise video conferences, which boosts the overall productivity. In the long run, the development of such firms makes a great contribution to the thriving of the national economy.

However, I believe that upgrading internet access is not the best way to allocate government money. The primary reason is that the broadband connection in most countries today is fast enough to satisfy the basic demands of the public. For example, in Vietnam, hardly do individuals have to wait a long time for a web page to load, while online business meetings had even become popular years ago. Therefore, an improvement in the quality of the Internet supply can be deemed not obligatory and urgent. Another justification is that there are several other fields which are being placed under strain and require the capital disbursement to function. To illustrate, a number of state hospitals in the UK have been conducting research on a complete cure for cancer, and it seems that this should be the investment priority.

In final words, all aforementioned standpoints lead me to a concrete inference that it is reasonable of the authorities to spend money bettering the Internet provision, but there are ways to allocate the capital more appropriately.

Sample 2:

A huge proportion of national budget is allocated to providing people with easier access to the Internet. There are several reasons for such spending and, in my view, this is not the most suitable way to use state money.

The government understand how the Internet benefits the lives of their citizens and also the limitation of access to the network in a number of places across their countries. The Internet has proven powerful in dispensing educational services and general knowledge about all aspects of life, not to mention the fact that it could facilitate communication between even continents. There is no arguing why governments pay much heed to the development of the network, just as to boost the overall quality of life for their people. Additionally, perhaps the inaccessibility of the Internet in many areas, especially disadvantaged ones for which mountainous villages in Vietnam could be brought up as a prime example, has the government draw a conclusion to pour their money into improving the Internet.

Much as those analyzed points above, I still believe large financial spending on such a field could, sometimes, be seen as unproductive or even counter-productive. In fact, only half of the world population has Internet connection; and even if the government were able to expand the network, it would be, I believe, hardly reachable for the rest of the world for the time being. The result would not be equivalent to the enormous amount of governmental funding. Instead, there are some other areas that authorities could invest in as a pre-requisite complement before supplying a widespread network. Constructing schools and deploying qualified teachers to areas that are used to the absence of the Internet and are unaware of the benefits it might offer could be more promising.

In conclusion, there are two main explanations for governments’ special attention to improving the Internet access; and I think this is not the most optimal way to spend money.

Sample 3:

With recent technological advancements, today we need a good internet access to get regular work done like paying bills, booking cabs to travel, make reservations, work, do business, attend classes to name a few. Today, people from all age groups are compelled to use the internet as it has become a necessary evil. Therefore, governments of most countries are trying their best to improve internet access so that people can get internet connection smoothly and at an affordable rate. But some people think that spending such huge amounts on enhancing internet access is not the most appropriate use of government money. Especially in countries where there are much bigger issues to be addressed like hunger, health and sanitation. In my opinion, improving the internet is of utmost importance as today computer literacy is essential to get ahead in life, so spending large sums of money is needed to build a robust internet system to improve the lives of the citizens.

Today we need the internet for almost everything. It helps us to stay connected with people in every corner of the globe which in turn facilitates business, exchange of ideas and culture. Nowadays computer literacy enables people to receive better job opportunities, as every business is happening online. If the government doesn’t improve internet access, then many people will not be able to afford the internet which will limit their knowledge, as the internet is the repository of knowledge where people can learn many things. For instance, if the Indian government didn’t spend money on improving internet access, then during the pandemic, life would’ve come to a standstill as young students would not be able to attend online classes, individuals would be sitting at home without jobs, even getting groceries would be inconvenient if the online system wasn’t robust and efficient enough to caters to billions of users.

Therefore, in my opinion, spending large amounts on improving internet access is the appropriate use of the government's money, because sooner or later every country has to revamp their internet connection or else they will be isolated from the rest of the world.

Sample 4:

Today every layman knows what the internet is and most certainly uses it without even understanding its importance in their lives. The government of every country is working and spending huge amounts of taxpayers’ money to improve the internet access so that the internet connection reaches every rural and urban area in the country. Previously only a handful of people had access to the internet as it was expensive and most didn’t understand the use of technology in their lives. But in the current times, internet access has become cheaper and affordable by most as the governments are investing heavily on it to make it efficient and accessible. Today business on the internet flourishes way more than offline businesses and some businesses happen completely online. Today people do not need to travel great distances to meet others, they can have online conferences and save time for all the parties involved. Today even governments of various countries meet online to address international issues.

The Internet is used by children to study and attend online classes. Nowadays people don’t visit the banks as often as they used to, because online banking has made it easier to make transactions. We see the benefits of the internet in every aspect of our lives and the government sees this potential too. Therefore, the government sees the internet as a way to enable overall development as it touches the lives of all people irrespective of class, creed or gender.

In my opinion, this futuristic outlook of governments will help them in the long run to keep up with the technological advancements and upgrade the lifestyle of the citizens living in the country by making internet access affordable and efficient. Hence it is the most appropriate use of the government money.

Sample 5:

In modern times, the world has become a global village where everyone is connected. The internet has been the game changer for many individuals, businesses and countries, as everyone was able to share their uniqueness with others and this paved the way to bigger innovations. The government realized the potential and the power of the internet and started investing heavily to improve the internet access for the people of their respective countries to enable development. Governments of many countries have spent a substantial amount of the taxpayers’ money on building an efficient and high-speed internet connection.

For instance, the Indian government has spent $500 billion in the last two decades on improving internet access and gives its people affordable high-speed internet to facilitate their daily work. Many people are of the opinion that this is not the most appropriate use of the government's money as there are more pressing issues which need to be addressed and taken care of before improving the internet access. I completely agree with this viewpoint, especially when most countries are suffering from poor healthcare facilities, bad road infrastructures, hunger and safety issues.

For example: In India more than 700 million people do not have proper toilets in their houses which leads to poor sanitation and health issues, which is definitely more critical and should be looked into before spending huge amounts on internet access. The government should first use the money available to them to address these pertinent issues and make sure that every individual has their basic needs met. Improving internet access is secondary to these important needs.