REVISION NOTE Example • Problem with: the brochure • Company name: (7) Hotel Chains - Letters of the (8) should be bigger. - The information of the (9) should be removed.
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REVISION NOTE
Example
• Problem with: the brochure
• Company name: (7) Central Hotel Chains
- Letters of the (8) address should be bigger.
- The information of the (9) pool should be removed.
- Change the description under the top photo to reception
- Use the picture with the (10) view of the hotel.
- The (11) price(s) should be in red print.
- Translate into (12) Spanish
• Deadline: by the end of (13) July
• Address: No. 9 Green Drive, (14) Cliffton, NY21300
• Telephone number: (15) 903036602